短文复习写作课

课件19张PPT。 第四章 日常活动
--语篇复习与书面表达1.通过谈论自己与他人的日常活动,复习相关语言目标。
2.通过复习有关日常活动的语篇,理解语篇结构，掌握相关话题句和功能句。
3.能运用所学进行有关日常活动的书面表达。
学习目标通过本节课的学习，学生能：What do you usually do in your daily life ?Free talkScott’s dayScott works very long hours. He usually gets up
at 17:00. He brushes his teeth and has a shower. Then he eats his breakfast. What a funny time to eat breakfast! After breakfast he plays his guitar, then he goes to work. To get to work, he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel. The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15. He works all night. People love to listen to him! He gets home at 7:00, and he watches morning TV. He goes to bed at 8:30. Can you think what his job is?
语篇重温Scott works very long hours. Scott works very long hours. He usually gets up
at 17:00. He brushes his teeth and has a shower. Then he eats his breakfast. What a funny time to eat breakfast! After breakfast he plays his guitar, then he goes to work. To get to work, he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel. The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15. He works all night. People love to listen to him! He gets home at 7:00, and he watches morning TV. He goes to bed at 8:30. Can you think what his job is?
短文是按照______顺序书写的。A.时间B.地点Scott works very long hours. He usually gets up
at 17:00. He brushes his teeth and has a shower. Then he eats his breakfast. What a funny time to eat breakfast! After breakfast he plays his guitar, then he goes to work. To get to work, he
takes the number 17 bus to a hotel. The bus usually takes him to work at 19:15. He works all night. People love to listen to him! He gets home at 7:00, and he watches morning TV. He
goes to bed at 8:30. Can you think what his job is?
Circle Scott’s daily activitiesScott works very long hours.1. He usually gets up at 17:00.2. He brushes his teeth and has a shower. Then he eats his breakfast.3. After breakfast he plays his guitar, then he goes to work.4. To get to work, he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.5. He works all night.6. He gets home at 7:00, and he watches morning TV.7. He goes to bed at 8:30.语篇分析activitiestopic(主题句)
sentence
短文是按照时间顺序，运用了___________时态进行描写的。一般现在Scott works very long hours.1. He usually gets up at 17:00.2. He brushes his teeth and has a shower. Then he eats his breakfast.3. After breakfast he plays his guitar, then he goes to work.4. To get to work, he takes the number 17 bus to a hotel.5. He works all night.6. He gets home at 7:00, and he watches morning TV.7. He goes to bed at 8:30.activitiestopic
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Read and summarize短文从哪几方面介绍Scott的日常活动的？How to describe daily activities? Daily activitiesdo chores/do the dishes
sweep the floor/make one’s bed/...get up/get dressed/
take a shower
eat breakfast/lunch/dinner
go to school/work
go home/go to bed/...do homework/read books
have a test/...play sports/play basketball...
play the piano/guitar...
go to the movies/watch TV
listen to music/take sb. for a walk以My day为题目描述自己一天的活动.
要求：1.按时间顺序
2.可以尝试使用关联词

Introduce your day! A层: 完整的描述自己的一天的活动。
B层: 尽量完成口头表达的要求。
语篇再析 There are some differences in school life between the US and China.
Many Chinese students don’t work during their high school years, while the US students like to find a part-time job in their free time. They think there is no difference between jobs. Working is a useful experience for them and they can make money at the same time. Some of them even take one year full-time jobs after they leave high school. Besides, their afternoon classes begin at 1:00 and school is over at 3:00pm.
After school they take part in club activities or play sports. But students in China usually go home and do homework after school.School life in the US and China你能找到关联词吗？whileandBesidesButThere are some differences in school life between the
US and China.put different views together 目前初四学习任务重，压力大。而在学习之余,丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请以“My spare time”为题写一篇作文,谈谈你的业余生活:如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等，并适当表达自己的感受。 注意：
作文词数不少于80词（标题和作文开头以给出，不计入总词数） My spare time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful._________________
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__________________________________________________ a topic composition话题作文书面表达 目前初四学习任务重，压力大。而在学习之余,丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请以“My spare time”为题写一篇作文,谈谈你的业余生活:如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等，并适当表达自己的感受。 注意：
作文词数不少于80词（标题和作文开头以给出，不计入总词数） My spare time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful._________________
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__________________________________________________★ Step 1 审 认真审题，确定话题，圈出关键词，确定时态，结构。书面表达 ★ Step 2 列 列要点，列提纲,形成作文框架。 目前初四学习任务重，压力大。而在学习之余,丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请以“My spare time”为题写一篇作文,谈谈你的业余生活:如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等。并适当提出自己的想法。 1.列要点 ★ Step 2 列 列要点，列提纲,形成作文框架。(1) List daily activities (read books…)+why?
(2) 表达感受，希望…书面表达 1.列要点2.形成作文框架Beginning
开头I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.Body
正文Ending
结尾 ★ Step 2 列 列要点，列提纲,形成作文框架。(1) List daily activities (read books…)+why?(2) 表达感受，希望…济宁市2013年中考书面表达评分标准
一档 12～15分 包含所提供的所有信息，并能根据提示内容适当发挥，内容丰富、具体，逻辑性强；应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有或基本没有(不超过3处)语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。
二档 9～11分包含提供的所有信息，并能根据提示内容有一定的发挥，但内容欠丰富；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务要求，句子较通顺、表达较清楚；有少量语言错误；书写较工整；字数基本符合要求。
三档 5～8分 基本包含所提供的信息，但内容过少或偏离要点，应用的语言结构单一，句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；有一些语言错误；书写不够工整；字数较少不足50。
四档 0～4分未完成所规定的任务；所写内容杂乱，不知所云；句子不通顺，行文不连贯；语言错误过多；书写潦草；几乎难以读懂；字数不足20。范文欣赏 My spare time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.
After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At weekends I often help my parents with the housework. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook.
I enjoy myself in my spare time.
Homework1.完成课上作文，小组内互相纠错，誊写到作文本。
2.总结并熟记描述日常活动的常用短语，句子，并写在作业本上。