专题07 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（浙江专用）（含答案）

2023浙江中考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟真题特快专递
第五期
专题07 书面表达
一、材料作文
1．（2023·浙江温州·统考一模）假如你是Daming，你的同学Betty和Tony毕业后即将回国。学校向同学们征集Leavers’ Party的设计方案。请你完善你们小组以“中国风”为主题（Chinese-themed）的方案内容，写一篇英文短文，在学校英语拓展课上分享方案内容及设计理由。
注意：
1. 词数约110词；
2. 文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。
Our Party Plan Activities: Chinese Kungfu, Beijing Opera, ________ Food: Tea, jiaozi, ________ Gifts: ________
参考词汇：Chinese knots中国结；Chinese calligraphy书法Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share our Chinese-themed Plan with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share our Chinese-Themed Plan with you.
We will prepare some Chinese traditional food, such as Chinese Longjing tea, jiaozi and Zongzi. Sharing our Chinese food with our foreign friends is a good way to leave them a deep impression of our country.
We are also going to have some activities. Chinese Kungfu and Beijing Opera are amazing to the world. Students from these two clubs will make a great performance for us. Another program is that students will write Chinese words like “Fu” on red paper. “Fu” shows our best luck to our foreign friends.
We plan to prepare Chinese fans as gifts which are really meaningful. Hongbao is another good choice. They’ll be very happy to receive them.
Do you like our plan Your advice is welcome.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括方案内容和设计理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍将要准备的食物；
第二步，介绍将要举办的活动；
第三步，最后是叙述准备的礼物。
[亮点词汇]
① such as 例如
② share sth with sb 和某人分享某物
③ plan to do sth 计划做某事
[高分句型]
① Sharing our Chinese food with our foreign friends is a good way to leave them a deep impression of our country.（动名词作主语，动词不定式作后置定语）
② We plan to prepare Chinese fans as gifts which are really meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
2．（2023·浙江杭州·统考一模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数 80 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
俗语说：一寸光阴一寸金。你校英语社团将举办 “Save Time, Enjoy Life”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇英语短文，介绍在日常生活中你是如何珍惜时间的，并阐述你对节约时间的看法。
要求：
1.短文应包括两个要点（如何珍惜时间和对节约时间的看法），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：90~110。
参考词汇：cherish(珍惜)，efficiency(效率)，wealth, valuable
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【答案】例文
Save Time, Enjoy Life
As the saying goes: Time is money. Time never goes back. We should cherish time and make full use of it.
When I am studying, I usually arrange the time reasonably. On weekdays, I usually finish homework in advance. Therefore, I can have more time to read and do other activities. I always do my homework carefully to avoid making mistakes. So I save time to correct these mistakes. In class, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes. I follow what the teachers say so that I can save time to join in other clubs.
From now on, we should cherish the time, study hard and be a useful person to the society in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在日常生活中你是如何珍惜时间的；
第二步，介绍对节约时间的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of充分利用
②in advance提前
③join in加入
[高分句型]
①When I am studying, I usually arrange the time reasonably.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I follow what the teachers say so that I can save time to join in other clubs.（so that引导目的状语从句）
3．（2023·浙江衢州·统考一模）校学生会策划了主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍该活动的内容、益处并给出相关建议。
要点提示如下：
WALK FOR TREES
Activities Benefits（益处）
●walk for 10 kilometers ●raise money to plant more trees ●… ●be good for health ●…
Suggestions
●wear comfortable shoes ●…
注意：
1. 短文必须包含表中所有信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数：80~100；
4. 短文首句仅供参考选择使用，不计入总词数。
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
On May 6th, we will have an activity called Walk for Trees.
During the activities, we will walk for 10 kilometers and raise money to plant more trees. Walking is good for our health and will strengthen our endurance. It is really a good chance to make us better understand environmental protection and keep fit.
In order to have a good experience, you should wear comfortable shoes. Or your feet will hurt badly and you will not finish the 10 kilometers’ walk. What’s more, you should prepare some water and not eat too much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍主题为“Walk for Trees”的十公里徒步活动注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍活动内容和徒步的好处；第三段给出该次活动的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．（2023·浙江杭州·模拟预测）学校里常常有一些受人喜欢的风云学生，请以The Most Popular Student in School为题，描述你求学过程中一位受欢迎的同学，并举例说明他/她为何受欢迎。
1.要点：1）他/她是谁；
2）他/她有什么品质；
3）他/她做过什么特别的事情。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和真实师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
The Most Popular Student in School
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【答案】例文
The Most Popular Student in School
Hello, everyone. This is Li Ning. He is one of the most popular students in our school. Let me tell you more about him.
Li Ning is in Grade 8. He has a good sense of humor and often tells jokes to make us happy. He is helpful and is ready to help people. Last week, he gave his seat to an old man on the bus. He is good at playing badminton and often practises it hard. Physics is his favourite subject. Li Ning likes travelling and making friends. This summer holiday, he visited many places of interest with friends and learnt a lot about different cultures. He is crazy about DIY and spends much time decorating his house. Li Ning hopes to be a social worker to help more people.
In a word, Li Ning is the most popular student in our school.
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求根据提供的信息，介绍你认为最受欢迎的学生的身份、品质和做过特别的事情，要包含所有提示要点，并作适当发挥。
写作指导：本文使用第三人称介绍李宁，介绍时要做到一般现在时和一般过去时结合使用，保证所有要点都包含，并做到语法和单词拼写正确。
二、电子邮件
5．（2023·浙江温州·校联考一模）假设你是李华，你所在的班级计划本周六去南戏书房开展“文化探索”研学活动。你们决定邀请对温州戏曲文化非常感兴趣的外教Mike一同前往。请你根据南戏书房的宣传简介写一封电子邮件，向他说明活动内容并发出邀请。
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：110词左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you that our class are going to Nanxi City Study to learn about the opera culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to tell you that our class are going to Nanxi City Study to learn about the opera culture. Learning that you are a fan of Chinese opera, we do hope you can join us!
On Saturday, we will leave at 1 o’clock in the afternoon and come back at about 3 o’clock. When we arrive at Nanxi City Study, we will gather in a big room and the teacher there will introduce the basic knowledge about Nanxi to us. In this way, we can have a better and deeper understanding about the opera. Then, with the guidance of the teacher, we will learn some basic skills, such as how to use the props. After that, all of us can choose to wear special costumes and act the opera directly. Later that afternoon, we can join in another popular activity. Everyone not only makes a special Lianpu, but also can win some prizes there.
I believe you will have a good time there. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍邮件写作目的；
第二步，介绍日程安排；
第三步， 书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①basic 基础的
②directly直接地
③with the guidance of 在……指导下
[高分句型]
①When we arrive at Nanxi City Study, we will gather in a big room and the teacher there will introduce the basic knowledge about Nanxi to us. （时间状语从句）
②In this way, we can have a better and deeper understanding about the opera.（形容词比较级）
③Everyone not only makes a special Lianpu, but also can win some prizes there.（并列复合句）
6．（2023·浙江杭州·统考一模）假如你是 Li Hua，阅读你朋友 Tony 从美国发来的电子邮件, 并根据要求进行回复。
注意：
1）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2）不得涉及真实人名、校名和地名；
3）词数 80 左右。
To: Li Hua
From: Tony
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going We haven’t seen each other since we met last. I’m a little worried these days. As you know, I’ve been learning Chinese for two years, but I’ m not good at it. First, I can’t understand people when they speak Chinese. Second, I’m afraid to speak Chinese because of my poor pronunciation. Besides, my Chinese handwriting is terrible. Can you give me some advice Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Tony
Dear Tony,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to learn Chinese well. Here’s some advice for you. Firstly, I think it’s important to take Chinese classes. You’ll find it helpful. What’s more, you could improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies. It is also a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. You’ll learn more Chinese words by doing that. If possible, you can even make some Chinese friends. They will be pleased to help you and it’s a good chance for you to improve your Chinese pronunciation. Finally, You can buy a Chinese calligraphy exercise book.
Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：应用文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：文章要求根据电子邮件的内容进行回复，因此回复的电子邮件要紧扣提出的问题，不能有遗漏，在此基础上可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先是简单地问候语以及感谢来信；
第二步：具体分析Tony在学习汉语过程中遇到的问题，并给出具体的解决办法；
第三步：总结语。表达期待收到来信。
[亮点词汇]
①take Chinese classes上汉语课
②what’s more而且
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①It is also a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. （It句型）
②Learning is a lifelong journey.（动名词作主语）
7．（2022·浙江金华·统考一模）三年初中生活很快就要结束，崭新的高中生活即将到来。假设你是Li Hua，你的美国好友David想了解你的暑假安排，请根据下表给David写一封Email。
内容要点 参考词汇
Study *get ready for *do some reading *...
Life *do some sports *take a part-time job *get close to the nature
Wishes *...
注意：1.文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3.词数：80~100词；
4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. I’m looking forward to making it meaningful. Now I’d like to share my ideas with you.
I plan to do plenty of interesting and colorful things. First, I will keep learning to get ready for my high school. And I will read many books. We know reading makes a full man. In my daily life, I would like to do some sports, and I want to take a part-time job. In addition, I hope to go hiking and get close to the nature.
In short, I hope I can have a happy and meaningful summer holiday. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干表格中给出的提示描述自己的暑假安排，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从学习、生活等方面具体介绍自己的暑期安排；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
8．（2022·浙江杭州·统考一模）假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping,How’s it going these days I’m having a great time in Shanghai for the two-month exchange program. It’s a great place to visit and there’s just so much to see and do here. Last night I went to a Chinese music concert. I prefer quiet and traditional music, so the concert suited me just fine. Do you like music What kind of music do you like best Tomorrow evening my host family is taking me to their little daughter’s birthday party, but I am not sure what I am expected to do before the party. Should I prepare a gift or anything If so, what can I choose as the gift What else could I do to make the party more interesting I am looking forward to your reply. All the best, Lucy
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【答案】例文:
Dear Lucy,
It’s good to hear from you. Everything goes well with me here. I’m so glad to hear that you are having a great time in Shanghai, and have already enjoyed a wonderful Chinese music concert there. I like music, too. I like classical music best because it can make me happy and relaxed.
As for the birthday gift, I think some home-made snacks or a piece of art work made by yourself will be a good choice. Also, if you can perform a talent show like singing a song or playing a magic trick during the party, I think your host family will appreciate it. I’m sure you and your host family will have a really unforgettable birthday party.
Write to me soon.
All the best,
Li Ping
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——电子邮件的写作。在写作时应根据笔友Lucy邮件内容进行回复，回复内容包括：自己的近况如何；简述露西在上海听音乐会的事情；自己喜欢的音乐；最重要的对露西要送的生日礼物提出建议；最后是祝愿。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
9．（2023·浙江杭州·统考一模）假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自交换生Sam的邮件，并根据问题给出回复。词数80词左右。
From: Sam
Hi Li Hua,
How are you I’m very excited because it’s nearly time for my visit to your country. My bag is ready, so I’ll see you soon!
What’s the weather like in your country at the moment It’s very cold and wet here.
I’d like to bring a present for your family, to thank them for being my host family. Do you have any ideas It can’t be too big because it has to go in my bag.
See you soon.
Sam
To: Sam
Hi Sam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
To: Sam
Hi Sam,
I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to china next week. I hope to see you soon.
Nowadays, the weather in my country is pretty nice. It’s quite warm in spring and we have a mild climate. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Speaking of the gift, all of family members are interested in your country, and we really hope to know it better from the point of you. Really anything that is connected with your country and a bit special should be good, such as the collection of coins from your state or a large book of scene photography of the most places of interest in your country.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以李华的名义，阅读交换生Sam的邮件，并根据问题给出回复。
2.写作指导：阅读交换生Sam的邮件，写作时，首先对Sam马上要来中国表示欢迎，接着介绍中国目前天气的情况，介绍的时候用一般现在时态；最后谈到礼物的问题。写作时，句子书写要符合英文表达习惯，做到语句通顺、上下文连贯。
10．（2022·浙江杭州·统考一模）假如你是Li Mei，请阅读你校交换生May的邮件，并根据邮件内容给予回复。
Dear Li Mei,
We haven’t seen each other for a long time. Nowadays I’m so worried because I still can’t follow the teachers in class. And I feel bored during the weekends. How to improve my Chinese How to spend my free time on weekends Do you have any good advice Please tell me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
May
要求：
1.邮件必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3.词数80—100。
Dear May,
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Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】例文
Dear May,
I’m glad to hear from you. As for you, I think you shouldn’t worry about Chinese so much. It’s a good way to learn Chinese by listening to your teacher carefully in online classes. Taking notes is very important for learning a foreign language. If you don’t understand something, you are supposed to ask me or the teacher for help as soon as possible. And I believe your Chinese will be improved.
You can take up a hobby on the weekend, such as playing basketball. Because sports is not only good for your body but also for your mind. Of course, reading more books is also a perfect way to spend your weekends.
I hope my advice can help you!
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是围绕邮件中提到的几个问题进行写作，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第二人称为主。第一段主要针对如何提高汉语提出建议；第二段建议周末可以做什么活动；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰；同时，注意合理拓展，逻辑顺畅。
三、书信作文
11．（2022·浙江宁波·统考二模）假设你是来自地球旅行的外星人，你惊讶地发现很多地球人在破坏自己的家园，令你庆幸的是也有很多人在竭力保护地球。请根据以下的信息向一家杂志社写一篇关于地球之行的文章。
注意：
（1）可以适当增加内容，要求意思、语句连贯；
（2）词数：100个左右（短文开头已给出，可以选择使用，不计入总词数）。
people on the earth:
（1）cut down many trees
（2）pour dirty water into the river
（3）eat many kinds of animals
（4）be volunteers to plant trees and help protect animals
（5）in their daily life
Dear Editor,
I’m Dolly from Pandora(潘多拉星球). Last week I paid a visit to the earth.
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【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I’m Dolly from Pandora(潘多拉星球). Last week I paid a visit to the earth. But I was surprised to find that many people on the earth are destroying their own homes. For example, they cut down many trees, pour dirty water into rivers and eat many kinds of animals. At the same time, I am glad that there are many people trying to protect the earth. Some people become volunteers to plant trees and help protect animals. In addition, there are a lot of people to save water in daily life. Besides, some people go to work by bike instead of by car.
I believe the earth will become better and better with the efforts of these people.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看到有人在破坏地球，也有很多人在保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述破坏地球和保护地球的行为；
第三步，最后表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②at the same time同时
③in addition此外
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
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12．（2023·浙江温州·校考一模）假如你是李华，你的学生朋友Tina暑期要回英国，想准备几件有中国特色的礼物。她上网查找后发邮件向你寻求建议。请结合以下搜索结果，写一封回信，推荐一些你认为有中国特色的礼物，并说明推荐理由。
参考词汇：mascot吉祥物，unity团结
要求：
①结合上图，至少推荐两种礼物并说明理由，可适当拓展：
②文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
③文本长度：110词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tina,
Glad to hear from you. You said you wanted to choose some special Chinese gifts.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tina,
Glad to hear from you. You said you wanted to choose some special Chinese gifts. I think I can give you some advice.
From my point of view, a cheongsam is a good choice for women such as your mum or your aunt. Cheongsam, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. There are many different styles with different designs and pictures. I’m sure they will be glad to have one.
On the other hand, I advise you to buy some Chinese knots. The Chinese knot, which is a symbol of unity, is very popular with Chinese and is usually hung in the sitting rooms or in the cars. They are not only beautiful decorations, but also can bring good luck to those who you love.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，给Tina写一封回信，推荐一些有中国特色的礼物，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二、三段分别介绍旗袍和中国结两种礼物；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。试卷第1页，共3页