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议论文写作
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观点型写作仿写
九台区营城第一高级中学英语组 王凯旋
Homework of yesterday
二.微写作
结合今天reading部分机器人话题,联系生活实际,用一两句英语描述人工智能机器人应用对我们生活的影响。
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文体概述
例文赏析
总结秘诀
小试牛刀
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CONTENTS
目录
文体概述
文体概述
观点表达的文章属于议论文,议论文是高考书面表达常考体裁,文章以议论为主,对客观事物进行评述或议论,以阐明作者的观点与主张,说服别人。议论文在内容上必须有论点、论据和论证三要素。通常有三种类型文章:
第一种. 给出一个现象,要求考生针对这一现象阐述自己的观点。
第二种. 要求论述两个正反对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
第三种. 不同观点列举型。
例文赏析
近来,随着互联网的发展,越来越多的人热衷于网上购物,大家对此态度褒贬不一。你个人不太赞同网上购物,请你就这一话题阐述你的观点。
注意:1. 可以适当增加内容,以使行文连贯。
2. 词数:100~120;
3. 参考词汇:质量—quality;网购—online shopping
Sample:
第二段 ③The reasons are listed as follows④First of all, shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they don't really need.⑤In addition, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision.⑥What's worse, nowadays there are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen.
第一段 ① Recently our class have had a discussion about whether we should shop online. There are two sides of opinions about it. ②There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages.
第三段 ⑦Therefore, I suggest that we think twice and remain rational when shopping online.
introduction
body
conclusion
①引入主题
②阐明观点
③过渡句+
④⑤⑥解释原因
⑥重申自己观点
one possible version:
总结秘诀
观点表述型写作秘诀
观点型写作
Introduction
引言
Body
主体段
Conclusion
结论
引入主题
Recently our class have had a discussion about whether we should...... There are two sides of opinions about it.
阐明观点
...but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages.
First of all,.doing ...is....because..............
理由一
理由二
理由三
In addition,......due to..........
What's worse, nowadays there are.......
重申观点
Therefore, I......
小试牛刀
你们班学生就是否应该开发人工智能机器人展开了讨论,同学们对此观点不一.请你用英语写一篇短文,阐明你的观点并说明原因:
注意:1. 可以适当增加内容,以使行文 连贯。
2. 词数:100~120;
参考词汇:人工智能 artificial intelligence
书面表达
时态?
人称?
一般现在时
一、三人称
分析材料———
你们班学生就是否应该开发人工智能机器人展开了讨论,同学们对此意见不一。
你个人赞同开发机器人,请你根据下列提示,用英语写一篇短文,阐明你的观点
para 1
引入话题
阐明自己观点
para 2说明原因
para 3总结——重申观点
分析材料
①
②
③
Sentence patterns for reference : 1)用于引入话题的:① The topic about whether to ____________________has attracted much attention of the society.②Recently, our class held a heated discussion about whether we should _______________......2)用于表达支持或反对:①As far as I am concerned,I am in favorof the view that __________________ .②From my point of view, I am strongly againstthe thought that __________________.
3)表达各种关系的连词:①表文章结构顺序:Firstly,Secondly,Finally,In the end,What is more,Besides,Moreover,In addition,not only…but (also)②表转折对比关系:However,On the contrary,Although+clause(从句), Some…,while others… ③表 因 果 关 系:Because,Thus,Therefore,As a result ,so…that… ④表 陈 述 事 实:In fact,frankly speaking, ⑤表达自己观点:As far as I am concerned,In my opinion, personally speaking⑥表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary,all in all, ⑦表示强调:Indeed, above all, in fact, especially.
Homework:
1. 完成本篇书面表达的写作
2.写作完成后,发送给你的同桌,根据一下评分表,互评互改。
得分 scores 评价项目items 内容Contents 观点新颖论证清楚Good opinion clear and logical support 组织Organization 条理清楚Well-organized and makesense 语言表达Expreesions 使用得体的词汇和表达Appropriate vocabulary and expressions 卷面Overall appearance
书面美观、工整Legible, comfortable to read
5分:非常符合
4分 :比较符合
3分:基本符合
2分:不太符合
一分:不符合
总分:__________________ 评价人:______________
Thanks.