Learning to write

课件20张PPT。Learning to write --------HelenMagic show!Meihu Stadium
April 5th-April 8th
Starts: 6:30pm
120￥ each
50 ￥ under 1.2mkeep your eyes open! I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician.because CCTV Spring Festival GalaEveryone was surpriseddid magic shows wellHe did magic shows so well that everyone
was really surprised.so…that…(春晚）He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised.He took the ring out of an egg.People cheered for him.whenas soon asafterbecauseworked hard, so
because
so…that…
after
beforewon many prizesAfter he worked hard, he won many prizes.
After working hard, he won many prizes.
Before he won many prizes, he worked hard.
Before winning many prizes, he worked hard. By train hard, perform successfully so
so that
in order thatLiu Qian trained hard so he performed successfully.
Liu Qian trained hard so that he could perform successfully.
Liu Qian trained hard in order that he could perform successfully.not like, fish, healthyalthough
but
however,
Although fish is healthy food, he doesn’t like it.not…until…
since was(not) famous,
enter Spring Festival Gala, in 2009 He was not famous until he entered Spring Festival in 2009.
He has been famous since he entered Spring Festival Gala in 2009.Compare the articles ABWhich article do you think is better? Why? Liu Qin was 7 years old. He fell in love with magic. He graduated from the university, then he became a magician. He doesn’t have a teacher to teach him, but he works very hard. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. Everyone knows it is the biggest challenge for a magician. When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician. complex sentence(复合句） JackLiu Qian ‘s pen palTalk ShowHis parents died in a car accident.He likes watching Liu Qian’s magic shows.On weekends he is busy. He does his
homework and takes lessons.He is too stressed out because of the exams.BirthdayMarch. 12th, 1998He was born on March. 12th, 1998.The boy’s name is Jack. Jack used to have a happy family. Unluckily, his parents died in a car accident. He was 10 years old. However, he doesn’t give up himself. He works very hard. He gets good grades. He likes watching Liu Qian’s magic shows to relax himself. He is a top student. He has a big problem these days. He is too stressed out. The important exam is coming. Jack used to have a happy family. Unluckily, his parents died in a car accident. He was 10 years old. However, he doesn’t give up himself. He works very hard. He gets good grades. He likes watching Liu Qian’s magic shows to relax himself. He is a top student. He has a big problem these days. He is too stressed out. The important exam is coming.▼when▼so▼that▼Although▼becausebecause, although, when, so…thatDear Jack,
I know you have many problems. You have much homework. You have to sleep late. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. You study hard. Your English is not good.
Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? You don’t waste time. You can finish your homework quickly. Second, you’d better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Liu QianDear Jack,
I know you have many problems. You have so much homework that you have to stay up. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. Although you study hard, you are not good at English.
Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? If you make full use of every minute, you will finish your homework quickly.
Second, you’d better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident.
I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Liu Qian充分利用Writing strategy : proper conjunctions (适当的连词) Other ways :good phrases（词组）How can we make the articles more
fluent (流畅的）and more beautiful?wonderful sentence patterns（句型）Writing Show假如你是Jack, 写信给刘谦，感谢他的建议，
并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心。你的变化包括：
1. 按时完成作业，睡眠每天8小时…
2. 学习努力…取得好成绩…
3. 自信，不紧张…Dear Liu Qin,
Thanks for your last letter. Your advice is really helpful.
I have changed a lot. Now…
The exam is coming soon. Actually I am not worried at all. I believe I will do a good job after working hard.
Yours,
JackDon’t forget to show us wonderful sentences!Sample I have changed a lot. Now, I finish my homework on time and hardly stay up late at night . Because I sleep 8 hours every day, I am energetic in class. Also, I make full use of every minute. I study so hard that I can get good grades. To tell you the truth, I am pretty confident now and don’t feel nervous at all.
What’s more, I often watch your shows when I feel tired. How wonderful your shows are!