2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮书面表达专题课件：话题2 计划与安排(共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
书面表达进阶特训
话题2 计划与安排
（2013）
2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮专题课件
话题分析
分析安徽近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，此类话题仅在2013年考查过一次：计划如何与父亲度过父亲节。分析全国近3年中考真题可知，
命题角度 全国考情
活动计划与安排 2022聊城、2022武汉、2021陕西、2021金华、2020滨州、2020烟台
此话题有以下命题角度：
【链接教材】
角度 年级与单元 话题
介绍活动计划与安排 七（下）Unit 2 What time do you go to school？ Daily routines
八（上）Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show？ Entertainment
八（上）Unit 9 Can you come to my party？ Invitations
八（上）Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time！ Decision making
介绍新学年计划 八（上）Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science. Life goals
真题剖析
(2013安徽)今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
●表述你与父亲间的情感；
●为父亲制作一张卡片；
●帮助父亲做点事；
●陪父亲散步等。
注意:1. 词数80~100；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear John，
It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Father’s Day I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作五步法
第一步：审题
1. 定主题： 父亲节的计划和安排；
2. 定文体： 电子邮件为应用文；
3. 定时态： 谈论计划以一般将来时为主；
4. 定人称： 第一人称I和第三人称（指代父亲）；
5. 定要点： 涵盖所给出的四个要点， 可适当拓展。
第二步：列点&第三步：添加+润色
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
开篇：点明主题 父亲节是特别的一天（已给出） It’s Father’s Day today. It’ s a special day, isn’t it /
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：表达感情，介绍具体计划 1. 表述在父亲节为父亲做些事情来表达爱 1. My father loves me, and I also love him. So I want to make something on this day. 1. I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：表达感情，介绍具体计划 2. 为父亲制作一张卡片 2. I want to make a card for him to show my love. 2. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：表达感情，介绍具体计划 3. 帮助父亲做点儿事 4. 陪父亲散步等 3. And I do something. 4. I also want to walk with him, so we can talk about many things. 3. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favourite food in the evening.
4. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
结尾：表达期望 希望了解对方的计划（已给出） What’s your plan for Father’s Day I’m looking forward to hearing from you. /
续表
第四步：检查+第五步：誊写
好词佳句
短语必备
活动计划与安排
【计划类】
make a plan be going to do
would like to do make a decision to do
make up one’s mind to do will be held
show you around work as a volunteer
【活动类】
go swimming go camping
go on/have a picnic sing songs together
go for a walk fly kites
go on holiday take a trip
have a good rest and relax
go sightseeing
travel around the world
【愿景类】
give me some advice
get along with animals
an unforgettable experience
dream of doing
in the future
佳句积累
1. We need to come up with a plan for the City Park Clean-up Day. [人教八（下）Unit 2 ]
2. I plan to visit my grandparents in the village this winter holiday.
3. I will feed the chickens on the farm and I believe it will be so much fun.
4. I’m making a plan to work in an old people’s home this summer holiday.
5. My family would like to go to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum.
写作自测
(2022武汉改编)假定你是李辉，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。内容要点如下：
1. 6月30日下午2：00机场见；
2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；
3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；
4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；
5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。
注意:1. 词数80~100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：book （v.预订） directly （adv.直接地） flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing.Here’s the trip plan.
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on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing. What about the
Dear Uncle Bob，
We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m.
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Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hui
Great Wall It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner， we’ll have the delicious food， Beijing roast duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.