2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮书面表达专题课件：话题4 人际交往

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书面表达进阶特训
话题4 人际交往
（2016）
2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮专题课件
话题分析
分析安徽近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，此类话题仅在2016年考查过1次：对他人人际沟通中存在的问题给出建议。
命题角度 全国考情
如何与他人相处 2021大庆、2021东营、2020长沙
针对人际沟通中存在的问题给出建议 2022自贡、2021绵阳、2021淮安、2020常州
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题有以下命题角度：
【链接教材】
角度 年级、单元 话题
谈论与他人在沟通中遇到的问题 七（下）Unit 4 Don’t eat in class. Rules
八（下）Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？ Chores and permission
谈论如何与他人 交流 八（下）Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents？ Interpersonal communication
真题剖析
(2016安徽)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：
1. 大胆自信；
2. 放慢语速；
3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。
参考词汇：自信的 confident 肢体语言 body language
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
注意：1. 词数80～100；
Dear Jack,
How is everything going I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.
your Chinese. I’d like to share my ideas, which I think might help.
First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great important to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so
It’s not necessary to worry
you needn’t be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood more easily. What’s more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作五步法
第一步：审题
1. 定主题：给Jack在汉语交流方面提几点建议；
2. 定人称：第二人称或第三人称；
3. 定文体：要求写封电子邮件，应为应用文；
4. 定时态：提出几点建议，应用一般现在时；
5. 定要点：涵盖已给出的三点建议，可适当拓展细节。
第二步：列点&第三步：添加+润色
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
开篇：点明主题 给Jack在汉语交流方面提几点建议 Don’t worry your Chinese. I’d like to share my ideas. It’s not necessary to worry your Chinese. I’d like to share my ideas, which I think might help.
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：三条建议 1. 大胆自信（brave, confident）； Be brave to speakChinese. Beconfident about yourself. 1.First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great important to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making any mistakes.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：三条建议 2. 放慢语速（speak slowly）； 2. It’s better to speak slowly and clearly. 2. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood more easily.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：三条建议 3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式（drawings, body language）。 3. You can use drawings or body language. 3. What’s more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.
结尾：表达祝愿 祝对方好运 Best wishes! /
续表
第四步：检查+第五步：誊写
好词佳句
短语必备
【方法建议】
read books play sports
go on holiday have a good rest
go sightseeing chat with sb.
talk with sb. talk to each other
get on/along with deal with
take part in with one’s help
take a walk with sb.
【鼓励】
be honest to look forward to
work hard together turn our dream into reality
put your heart into be proud of
佳句积累
1. I can’t get on with my family.[人教八（下）Unit 4]
4. You’ll become more confident if you have the courage to show your abilities.
5. To begin with, we need to be honest with others.
6. I’m always ready to help others when they are in trouble.
2. My best friend and I had a fight. He won’t speak to me.[人教八（下）Unit 4]
3. Remember to express thanks to the people who helped us.
7. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
8. If your opinions are different from your mother’s, you can communicate with her.
9. Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family？[人教八（下）Unit 4 P27]
10. Why don’t you sit down and communicate with your brother？[人教八（下）Unit 4 P27]
11. You can speak out your thought and have a good talk with your mother.
12. I don’t know how to get on well with my new classmates.
13. You’d better talk to your friend, and you can say sorry to him.
14. You can write a letter to talk with your friends.
15. We should always do some group work together with our friends.
16. Last but not least, be a good listener.
17. Only in this way can we get along well with others.
18. Face life with a smile, and face life with a smile. 微笑着面对生活，微笑着面对人生。
19. Don’t forget to smile when you are in a bad mood. 心情不好的时候不要忘记微笑。
写作自测
(2022自贡改编)假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80~100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going
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difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.
I’m sorry to hear that you have
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Yours,
Li Hui
I hope these suggestions can help you.
First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and shortage. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.