2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮书面表达专题课件：话题5 健康与安全

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书面表达进阶特训
话题5 健康与安全
（2019，2014）
2023年安徽中考英语总复习二轮专题课件
话题分析
分析安徽近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，此类话题在2019年考查过一次：介绍如何保护视力，同时在2014年也考查过一次：要求考生从家庭安全、游泳安全及交通安全三个方面介绍暑假安全规则。
命题角度 全国考情
对健康的看法及如何保持健康 2022内江、2021大连、2021营口、2021湖州、2021梧州、2020阜新
如何保证自身安全 2021吉林、2021重庆B卷、2020黔东南
分析全国近3年中考真题可知，此话题有以下命题角度：
【链接教材】
角度 年级与单元 话题
如何保持 健康 七（上）Unit 6 Do you like bananas？ Food
八（上）Unit 2 How often do you exercise？ Free time activities
八（下）Unit 1 What’s the matter？ Health and first aid
如何保证自身安全 八（下）Unit 1 What’s the matter？ Health and first aid
真题剖析
(2019安徽)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件， 谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1. 经常做户外活动； 2. 很少用电子产品； 3. 坚持做眼保健操； 4. ……
注意:1. 词数80~100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作五步法
第一步：审题
1. 定主题：给笔友Mike介绍保护视力的做法；
2. 定文体：要求写封电子邮件，应为应用文；
3. 定人称：谈论“你”保护视力的做法，应用第一人称；
4. 定时态：谈论保护视力的做法，用一般现在时；
5. 定要点：涵盖所给的三个要点， 且需拓展出其他一些做法。
第二步：列点&第三步：添加+润色
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
开篇：点明主题 得知视力越来越弱，分享方法 I can give you some suggestions. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：提出4条保护视力方面的做法 1. 经常做户外活动 2. 很少用电子产品 1. I often play outside with my classmates. I think it’s good for our body. 2. I seldom use the electricity products, such as computers and mobile phones. 1. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.
2. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
正文：提出4条保护视力方面的做法 3. 坚持做眼保健操 4. 其他做法 3. And at school, doing eye exercises is really good for our eyes. 4. Also, we can eat some healthy food to improve our eyes and body. 3. Doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.
4. I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
续表
结构 第二步：列要点 第三步：添加主干句 润色
结尾：表达祝愿 希望这些方法对你有帮助 I hope these ways can help you. I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
续表
第四步：检查+第五步：誊写
好词佳句
好词速记
【疾病与医疗卫生】
disease/illness painful blind
deaf harmful weak
patient treatment medical
ill smoke
【饮食健康与个人卫生】
a balanced diet
eat healthy food
eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food
form/develop a good eating habit
【安全守则】
safety rule warn
safe dangerous cheat
careful steal notice
avoid peace punish
【意外与急救】
accident sudden burn
wound first aid catch fire
look/watch out be in danger have trouble in
佳句积累
【开头亮句】
1. Here are some suggestions to keep healthy.
2. It is well-known that exercise is important.
【中间好句】
运动的益处
3. Doing sports can make us healthier and stronger.
4. Exercise helps to maintain your healthy lifestyle, and it also keeps your body fit.
对健康的看法
5. As we know, keeping a good mood is good for our health and study.
6. It is true that health is the first step to success.
如何保持健康
7. You’d better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.
8. We need to focus on sleeping habit which possibly affects our daily mental state.
注意自身安全
9. It’s easy to slip and fall on a wet floor. Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after you have a shower or bath.
10. If you are outside, get to an open area as fast as you can. Stay away from buildings and trees.
【出彩尾句】
11. Do please pay attention to these points, keeping a healthy body.
12. In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.
【俗语谚语】
13. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果， 医生远离我。
14. Health is the first wealth.健康是第一财富。
写作自测
假定你是李辉，你们班准备组织一次以“如何健康快乐生活”为主题的演讲活动，并呼吁大家行动起来。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加此次演讲活动。要点如下：
1. 身体健康：健康饮食、适当锻炼、充足睡眠；
2. 心理健康：积极乐观、与人为善、有效沟通；
3. 希望：……（至少一点）。
参考词汇： mental （adj.精神的）； physical （adj.身体的）
注意：1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
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Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
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That’s all. Thank you!
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.