2023届高考英语专题复习定语从句在写作中的运用 公开课课件 (共36张PPT)
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定语从句在写作中的运用
Using Attributive Clause
in Writing
I remember
I remember the way that you glance at me yes I remember
I remember when we caught a shooting star yes I remember
I remember all the things that we shared
all the promise we made just you and I
I remember all the laughter we shared
all the wishes we made upon a roof that time
Listen to the music and think about:
Which parts are attributive clauses
Lead-in 导入
第六次周考书面表达节选（范文）
第六次周考书面表达节选（咱班同学）
状语从句
状语从句
定语从句
简单句
Comparison
高中英语写作句式升级清单 改头it和无灵 并列&祈使 非谓语表逻辑 with复合结构
定语从句 主语从句 同位语从句 状语从句
倒装句式 强调句式 省略句式 虚拟句式
概要之简单点 续写之动作链 续写之喜怒哀乐 续写之四面八方
……
1. Review the attributive clause
2. Learn how to use the attributive clause in writing.
3. Improve your confidence in writing by using the attributive clause.
Our Aims
The usage of relative pronouns
The virus outbreak ______ was traced to the Huanan Seafood Market in Wuhan is a disaster.
The virus ______ we know really made thousands of people badly ill in 2020.
Relative pronouns Antecedents person thing functions
s (主语)
o (宾语)
which/that
thing
S
O
Part 1 Review
which/that
which/that
[3]Therefore,millions of people _________concerned about the current epidemic[流行病] and ____________ the epidemic affected were watching live[直播)on the Internet.
Relative pronouns Antecedents person thing functions
s (主语)
o (宾语)
a (定语)
who/that
who/whom/that
whose
person
person
S
O 可省略
thing's/
person's
A
[4]Then one great man ______name contains “zhong” came to rescue. The virus ______ name was Coronavirus really made thousands of people badly ill in 2020.
.
who/that
who/whom/that
whose
whose
The picture was taken on Oct 1st, 1949 our country was founded. That is also the reason we call Oct 1st National Day.
The place the ceremony(仪式) was held was Tien An Men Square.
Relative adverbs Antecedents functions
when Time Adverbial(状)
where Place Adverbial
why Reason Adverbial
when
why
where
The usage of relative adverbs
Fill in the blanks
1．Currently AI is used mostly in the tech industry, ______ it has created efficiency and produced new products and services.
2．Jamaria's school made an announcement that it would hold a baking sale in 2017, ______ was a perfect chance to try out Jamaria's plan.
3．An expert in Chinese character culture has been invited to the campus, ______ major responsibility is to teach students how to use the ancient printing technology.
where
which
whose
Part 2
Fill in the blanks
4．A nurse, ______has worked in the front line for a week, could only give an air hug to her visiting daughter from a safe distance.
5．Researchers at a Massachusetts' university are creating the first robot ______ can constantly change its shape according to the task it has to do.
6．Working as an IT consultant was one of the best and most challenging jobs______I had ever had.
考法训练
who
that
that
单句语法填空
7．Detectives are investigating the company, three of______senior executives have already been under arrest.
8．During the visit, I tasted various delicious local foods, among ______ I liked seafood best.
考法训练
which
whose
1. Do you like the book she spent $10
2. Do you like the book she paid $10
3. Do you like the book she learned a lot
4. Do you like the book she often talks
5. He built a telescope he could study the skies.
6. There is a tall tree outside, stands our teacher.
7. China has a lot of rivers, the second longest ________
is the Yellow River.
8. He paid the boy $10 for washing ten windows,
most _________ hadn’t been cleaned for at least a year.
9. The man ________ I spoke on the phone last night
is very good at wrestling.
on which
for which
from which
about which
through which
under which
of which
of which
to whom
介词+关系代词 练习
Writing exercise
Gu Ailing is a girl. has a dimple on her face.
has a dimple on her face.
who
that
Solution：
1、Find the main clause（确定主句)
2、Find the same person or thing as anticedent(确定先行词）
3、confirm the component of anticedent in the clause(分析先行词在从句中担当的成分)
4、choose the relative word and combine the two sentences(确定关系词)
She
Gu Aling is a girl
例：
Part 3 Sentence combination
She was born in California, America.
She lived there for many years.
She was born in California, America,
she lived for many years.
where
代状语位置用where ,when, why;
例二：
California, America
there
An hour later, I saw a man.
He was running towards me.
An hour later, I saw a man ____________________________
who was running towards me.
Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games, _________________________ .
which made her polular.
Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games.
It made her popular.
Practice 2
Use attributive clause to combine the sentences.
I will never forget the day.
On that day Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.
I will never forget the day, ________________________________________________
on which/when Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.
Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50.
Gu Ailing’s eyes were sparkling with confidence and happiness.
Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50, _____________________________________
whose eyes were sparkling with confidence and happiness.
The training hall is not far from here.
The athletes often does some training there.
The training hall _____________________________________ is not far from here .
where the atheletes often does some training
Round 1：（2021 江苏）
我写信是为了邀请你参加青少年技术发明竞赛。它将于7月8日在博物馆举行。
未充值：
I'm writing to invite you to take part in the technical invention competition for teenagers. It will take place in the museum on July 8th.
大会员：
I'm writing to invite you to participate in the technical invention competition for teenagers, which will take place in the museum
on July 8th.
直击高考：
Part 4
Round 2：（2019 浙江）
假定你是李华，向帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex表示感谢...
未充值：
Thanks for your encouragement. That makes me like English.
大会员：
Thanks for your encouragement, which fuels my enthusiasm for English study. 点燃了我对......的热情
直击高考：
Round 3：介绍活动（多次高考真题）
未充值：
The Music Festival will be held in our school from July 5 to July 7.Dring that time，we will watch many performances.
充值版：
The Music Festival is scheduled to be held in our school，lasting 3 days，during which time we will enjoy a visual feast.
直击高考：
Round 4.(2020山东卷应用文写作)Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, __________________________________________.
(这吸引了每位学生和老师的注意力)
Round 5 (2020山东卷读后续写)He did not forget the help of the family,
_____________ ______________.
(而且他也会尽他所能去帮助那些需要帮助的人)
which drew the attention of every student and teacher
and he also did all to help those
he could (do)
who are in need
直击高考：
Round 6(感谢信)I am writing this letter to express my
heartfelt gratitude to you for _______________________.
(你所提供的帮助)
Round 7 (道歉信)I am terribly sorry
for______________________________.(我造成的任何不便)
Round 8 (申请信)I am writing, on behalf of my classmates ,to apply
for the volunteering job _______________________________.
(你在报纸上刊登的)
the assistance you offered
any inconvenience I have caused
you advertised in the newspaper.
直击高考：
你的假期有什么计划，如做兼职，旅游，做志愿工作等，
并写出相应的好处（用定语从句）
1.I would like to do a part-time job,__________________
__________________________________________________.
2.Traveling is one of my choices,______________________
__________________________________________________.
3.I have a strong desire to do voluntary work,___________
_______________________________________________.
___.
Part 5 续写句子
which can help me accumulate working experience
which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon
which will make a great contribution to the society
Interactive assessment
学生互评环节
1. show your composition 展示作品
2. give simple remarks 给出简短的评语
3. give a score 评分
4. select the best author and the best assessor
评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者
Part 6
定语从句在写作中的运用的评价表
（Writing Assessment）（共10分）
评价内容 Assessment Items 成绩scores
所有要点齐全（4分） all information included
定语从句运用正确（先行词、关系词、结构）（4分) using attributive clauses correctly
书写漂亮，卷面整洁（2分) good handwriting
总分total scores
评语：________________
评卷者：________
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
高一 一班 朱昱
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
__________________________________________.
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
Zhaolin High School is a beautiful school which/that is surrounded by many green trees. This is the place where I will live and study for three years. More importantly, there are a great number of excellent teachers that/who have rich teaching experience. I am a student of Zhaolin High School, which makes me proud. I will never forget the wonderful days when I study hard here.
A possible version 参考范文
你的一位英国朋友想要了解你就读的学校，
请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 我校是一所具有100多年历史的重点学校。
2. 校园环境优美、绿树环绕。
3. 学校设备优良，有图书馆、计算机室和实验室等。
4. 学校有很多经验丰富的优秀教师。
注意：1. 词数100字左右。
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节。
3.能使用定语从句的句子要求使用定语从句
注意：把优秀的作文贴在教室给大家欣赏
Homework
Thank you for your attendance！谢谢观看！
Good-bye!
定语从句在写作中的运用
Using Attributive Clause
in Writing
I remember
I remember the way that you glance at me yes I remember
I remember when we caught a shooting star yes I remember
I remember all the things that we shared
all the promise we made just you and I
I remember all the laughter we shared
all the wishes we made upon a roof that time
Listen to the music and think about:
Which parts are attributive clauses
Lead-in 导入
第六次周考书面表达节选（范文）
第六次周考书面表达节选（咱班同学）
状语从句
状语从句
定语从句
简单句
Comparison
高中英语写作句式升级清单 改头it和无灵 并列&祈使 非谓语表逻辑 with复合结构
定语从句 主语从句 同位语从句 状语从句
倒装句式 强调句式 省略句式 虚拟句式
概要之简单点 续写之动作链 续写之喜怒哀乐 续写之四面八方
……
1. Review the attributive clause
2. Learn how to use the attributive clause in writing.
3. Improve your confidence in writing by using the attributive clause.
Our Aims
The usage of relative pronouns
The virus outbreak ______ was traced to the Huanan Seafood Market in Wuhan is a disaster.
The virus ______ we know really made thousands of people badly ill in 2020.
Relative pronouns Antecedents person thing functions
s (主语)
o (宾语)
which/that
thing
S
O
Part 1 Review
which/that
which/that
[3]Therefore,millions of people _________concerned about the current epidemic[流行病] and ____________ the epidemic affected were watching live[直播)on the Internet.
Relative pronouns Antecedents person thing functions
s (主语)
o (宾语)
a (定语)
who/that
who/whom/that
whose
person
person
S
O 可省略
thing's/
person's
A
[4]Then one great man ______name contains “zhong” came to rescue. The virus ______ name was Coronavirus really made thousands of people badly ill in 2020.
.
who/that
who/whom/that
whose
whose
The picture was taken on Oct 1st, 1949 our country was founded. That is also the reason we call Oct 1st National Day.
The place the ceremony(仪式) was held was Tien An Men Square.
Relative adverbs Antecedents functions
when Time Adverbial(状)
where Place Adverbial
why Reason Adverbial
when
why
where
The usage of relative adverbs
Fill in the blanks
1．Currently AI is used mostly in the tech industry, ______ it has created efficiency and produced new products and services.
2．Jamaria's school made an announcement that it would hold a baking sale in 2017, ______ was a perfect chance to try out Jamaria's plan.
3．An expert in Chinese character culture has been invited to the campus, ______ major responsibility is to teach students how to use the ancient printing technology.
where
which
whose
Part 2
Fill in the blanks
4．A nurse, ______has worked in the front line for a week, could only give an air hug to her visiting daughter from a safe distance.
5．Researchers at a Massachusetts' university are creating the first robot ______ can constantly change its shape according to the task it has to do.
6．Working as an IT consultant was one of the best and most challenging jobs______I had ever had.
考法训练
who
that
that
单句语法填空
7．Detectives are investigating the company, three of______senior executives have already been under arrest.
8．During the visit, I tasted various delicious local foods, among ______ I liked seafood best.
考法训练
which
whose
1. Do you like the book she spent $10
2. Do you like the book she paid $10
3. Do you like the book she learned a lot
4. Do you like the book she often talks
5. He built a telescope he could study the skies.
6. There is a tall tree outside, stands our teacher.
7. China has a lot of rivers, the second longest ________
is the Yellow River.
8. He paid the boy $10 for washing ten windows,
most _________ hadn’t been cleaned for at least a year.
9. The man ________ I spoke on the phone last night
is very good at wrestling.
on which
for which
from which
about which
through which
under which
of which
of which
to whom
介词+关系代词 练习
Writing exercise
Gu Ailing is a girl. has a dimple on her face.
has a dimple on her face.
who
that
Solution：
1、Find the main clause（确定主句)
2、Find the same person or thing as anticedent(确定先行词）
3、confirm the component of anticedent in the clause(分析先行词在从句中担当的成分)
4、choose the relative word and combine the two sentences(确定关系词)
She
Gu Aling is a girl
例：
Part 3 Sentence combination
She was born in California, America.
She lived there for many years.
She was born in California, America,
she lived for many years.
where
代状语位置用where ,when, why;
例二：
California, America
there
An hour later, I saw a man.
He was running towards me.
An hour later, I saw a man ____________________________
who was running towards me.
Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games, _________________________ .
which made her polular.
Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games.
It made her popular.
Practice 2
Use attributive clause to combine the sentences.
I will never forget the day.
On that day Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.
I will never forget the day, ________________________________________________
on which/when Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.
Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50.
Gu Ailing’s eyes were sparkling with confidence and happiness.
Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50, _____________________________________
whose eyes were sparkling with confidence and happiness.
The training hall is not far from here.
The athletes often does some training there.
The training hall _____________________________________ is not far from here .
where the atheletes often does some training
Round 1：（2021 江苏）
我写信是为了邀请你参加青少年技术发明竞赛。它将于7月8日在博物馆举行。
未充值：
I'm writing to invite you to take part in the technical invention competition for teenagers. It will take place in the museum on July 8th.
大会员：
I'm writing to invite you to participate in the technical invention competition for teenagers, which will take place in the museum
on July 8th.
直击高考：
Part 4
Round 2：（2019 浙江）
假定你是李华，向帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex表示感谢...
未充值：
Thanks for your encouragement. That makes me like English.
大会员：
Thanks for your encouragement, which fuels my enthusiasm for English study. 点燃了我对......的热情
直击高考：
Round 3：介绍活动（多次高考真题）
未充值：
The Music Festival will be held in our school from July 5 to July 7.Dring that time，we will watch many performances.
充值版：
The Music Festival is scheduled to be held in our school，lasting 3 days，during which time we will enjoy a visual feast.
直击高考：
Round 4.(2020山东卷应用文写作)Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, __________________________________________.
(这吸引了每位学生和老师的注意力)
Round 5 (2020山东卷读后续写)He did not forget the help of the family,
_____________ ______________.
(而且他也会尽他所能去帮助那些需要帮助的人)
which drew the attention of every student and teacher
and he also did all to help those
he could (do)
who are in need
直击高考：
Round 6(感谢信)I am writing this letter to express my
heartfelt gratitude to you for _______________________.
(你所提供的帮助)
Round 7 (道歉信)I am terribly sorry
for______________________________.(我造成的任何不便)
Round 8 (申请信)I am writing, on behalf of my classmates ,to apply
for the volunteering job _______________________________.
(你在报纸上刊登的)
the assistance you offered
any inconvenience I have caused
you advertised in the newspaper.
直击高考：
你的假期有什么计划，如做兼职，旅游，做志愿工作等，
并写出相应的好处（用定语从句）
1.I would like to do a part-time job,__________________
__________________________________________________.
2.Traveling is one of my choices,______________________
__________________________________________________.
3.I have a strong desire to do voluntary work,___________
_______________________________________________.
___.
Part 5 续写句子
which can help me accumulate working experience
which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon
which will make a great contribution to the society
Interactive assessment
学生互评环节
1. show your composition 展示作品
2. give simple remarks 给出简短的评语
3. give a score 评分
4. select the best author and the best assessor
评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者
Part 6
定语从句在写作中的运用的评价表
（Writing Assessment）（共10分）
评价内容 Assessment Items 成绩scores
所有要点齐全（4分） all information included
定语从句运用正确（先行词、关系词、结构）（4分) using attributive clauses correctly
书写漂亮，卷面整洁（2分) good handwriting
总分total scores
评语：________________
评卷者：________
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
高一 一班 朱昱
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
__________________________________________.
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
__________________________________________.
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
Task :Write a short passage about our school .
Zhaolin High School is a beautiful school which/that is surrounded by many green trees. This is the place where I will live and study for three years. More importantly, there are a great number of excellent teachers that/who have rich teaching experience. I am a student of Zhaolin High School, which makes me proud. I will never forget the wonderful days when I study hard here.
A possible version 参考范文
你的一位英国朋友想要了解你就读的学校，
请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 我校是一所具有100多年历史的重点学校。
2. 校园环境优美、绿树环绕。
3. 学校设备优良，有图书馆、计算机室和实验室等。
4. 学校有很多经验丰富的优秀教师。
注意：1. 词数100字左右。
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节。
3.能使用定语从句的句子要求使用定语从句
注意：把优秀的作文贴在教室给大家欣赏
Homework
Thank you for your attendance！谢谢观看！
Good-bye!