观点类作文课件(共20张PPT)

(共20张PPT)
A thousand-hand mother
busy
tired
What is the mother busy with
chores
She is busy with a lot of chores.
Should children do chores at home
No
Yes
In my opinion, children should do chores because...
G1&G2
G3&G4
In my view, children shouldn't do chores because...
(在我看来）
In my view（在我看来）, children should / shouldn't do chores because.... In addition (另外）, …
2. In my view, children should / shouldn't do chores. For one thing(一方面）, …For another（另一方面）,…
4. In my opinion, children should / shouldn't do chores. First of all（首先） , … What’s more（而且）,…
3. In my opinion, children should / shouldn't do chores. On the one hand (一方面）, …On the other hand （另一方面）, …
★ ★ ★ Conjunctions(连接词）can help make our composition(作文）better!
Recently students of Class 9 have a hot discussion about the topic “ whether children should do chores at home”. Different people have different opinions.
不同的人有不同的观点。
should do chores
1. learn how to look after themselves ;
2. develop children’s independence(独立性）;
3. help parents relax;
Girls
The girls think that ____________________________.
children should do chores at home
learn how to look after themselves.
children can
develop children’s independence.
it can help
help parents relax.
First of all,
What’s more,
doing chores can
In addition,
should do chores
1. learn how to look after themselves ;
2. develop children’s independence;
3. help parents relax;
Girls
The girls think that children should do chores at home. First of all, children can learn how to look after themselves. What’s more, it can help develop children’s independence. In addition, doing chores can help parents relax.
opinion(观点)
reasons(原因)
Shouldn’t do chores
1. a waste of time;
2. too much homework;
3. parents’ duty(职责）;
Boys
The boys think ______________________________.
children shouldn’t do chores at home
a waste of time .
doing chores is
too much homework.
children have
parents’ duty
it is
to do chores.
For one thing,
For another,
Besides,
Shouldn’t do chores
1. a waste of time;
2. too much homework;
3. parents’ duty(职责）;
Boys
The boys think children shouldn’t do chores at home. For one thing, doing chores is a waste of time. For another, children have too much homework. Besides, it is parents’ duty to do chores.
opinion(观点)
reasons(原因)
Check the following parts:
1. Structure (结构： beginning --- body --- ending )
2. Contents (内容：opinions and reasons ;
use all of the key words)
3. Conjunctions (连接词）
4. Grammar and spelling ( 语法和拼写）
5. Write clearly（书写清楚）
Should (70%) shouldn’t(30%)
relaxing, fresh air…
not easy to take public transportation… Exciting…
crowded, expensive…
在英语课上, 老师组织了 “ Should children do chores at home”的话题讨论。请根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文，汇报讨论结果，并写出你的看法与理由。
注意：（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并作适当发挥；（2）文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；（3）80—100词，所给的文章开头供选择，不计入词数。
In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic “Should children do chores at home ”. Different students have different opinions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
70% students think that children should do some chores at home. For one thing, ... For another, ... What’s more,…
30% students disagree. They think children shouldn’t do chores . On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ... Besides, …
All in all / In a word / In short （总而言之）, these are our opinions. Can you tell me about your ideas
（结尾）
Check the following parts:
1. Structure (结构： beginning --- body --- ending )
2. Contents (内容：opinions and reasons )
3. Conjunctions (连接词）
4. Grammar and spelling ( 语法和拼写）
5. Write clearly (书写清楚)
作文满分为20分，其中书写2分，作文分为18分，按四档给分。
档次
分值 评分标准
第四档 15～18 描述了所有的信息，内容合理、丰富；用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误；行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰。
第三档 11～14 描述了大部分的信息，内容比较合理；用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误，但不影响理解；行文基本连贯，连接词使用基本恰当，指代基本清晰。
第二档 6～10 描述了小部分信息，内容不合理；有较多的语言错误，一定程度上影响理解；行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰。
第一档 0～5 交白卷或描述的内容与主题无关；有大量语言错误，影响了理解；没有连贯的意识。
项目 分值 评分标准
书 写 0～2 2分：大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁；
1分：大小写、标点有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚可辨认；
0分：大小写、标点错误较多，词数严重不足，书写难以辨认
Finish the composition and try to polish （润色） it.
Try to do some chores.