05--2023安徽中考英语作文评讲 外卖的利弊(共25张PPT)

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Is it good or bad to order takeout
2023中考作文评讲
Welcome to our school
现在，外卖行业迅速发展，很多人通过外卖点餐。外卖风行，有人点赞，有人拍砖。你班同学就“外卖”这一话题展开了一场辩论赛。以下是你班同学的观点和理由，请你根据表格中的提示写一篇短文，发表在你校英语报上。
Is it good or bad to order takeout
学生们认为 1. save time and effort
2. a wide choice of foods to choose from
3. 至少补充一条……
家长们认为 1. more expensive than cooking meals at home
2. not-so-good food safety
3. 至少补充一条……
你的观点 ……
注意：1.词数90-100词
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Is it good or bad to order takeout
审题
定调
本篇文章属于课标“人与社会”主题范畴中 “社会生活”这一主题。体裁：议论文;
人称：第一 & 三人称; 时态：一般现在时
谋篇
布局
组织
语言
for: Some students think it is good to ……
Against: However, others don’t think so.
Ending : As for me, I am in favor of……
Wrting outline
HOW
1. 正方观点(save time and effort)
2: 反方观点(more expensive than cooking……)
3: 你的观点(……)
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class.__________________________________
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Read and connect
And the opinions are divided into two groups on this topic.
In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in ordering takeout.
开头
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class.__________________________________
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Some students think it is good. (正方观点) Here are the reasons. First of all, ……Besides, ……Additionally,…….
Read and connect
正文
正方
Some students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons. First, ……Second, ……Third,…….
Sample writing
Read and appreciate
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class. And the opinions are divided into two groups on this topic.
Some students think it' s really good to order food online. Here are the reasons. Firstly, it is more convenient and faster than we cook at home, so people can save time and effort to do something more important. Secondly, there is usually a wide choice of foods to choose from, so people can eat whatever they like. Lastly, ordering takeout means avoiding going to the restaurant. That is to say, they don’t need to queue for a long time.
正文
正方
@正文部分(正方观点)--学生佳作
邱莫
小贝
@正文部分(正方观点)--学生佳作
周子涵
@正文部分(正方观点)--学生佳作
刘奥雪
@正文部分(正方观点)--学生佳作
周子航
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class.__________________________________
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However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点) Their reasons are as follow. In the first place, ……What’s worse, ……Most seriously,…….
Read and connect
正文
反方
The other students, however, differ in their opinions on this topic. (反方观点) Their reasons are as follow. First, …What’s worse, …Most seriously,….
Sample writing
Read and appreciate
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class. And the opinions are divided into two groups on this topic.
The other students, however, differ in their opinions on this topic. They think ordering food online is more expensive than cooking meals at home. What’s worse, the food that they order online may not be fresh because some restaurants may have food safety problems. Most seriously, plastic packages are bad for our environment, which will lead to more white pollution.
正文
反方
@正文部分(反方观点)--学生佳作
秦亦卜
@正文部分(反方观点)--学生佳作
邱莫小贝
Read and connect
3 你的观点
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class.__________________________________
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In my opinion, we can order food online sometimes, but for the sake of our health, we’d better cook it by ourselves.
结尾
Read and connect
3 你的观点
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class.__________________________________
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In my opinion, it is fun to order takeout as part of our daily life. But we also need to be aware of that ordering takeout too much can waste our money, affect our health and harm our environment.
结尾
In my opinion, one should order takeout when necessary, but not always. Enjoy the convenience when we need to, but never give up the joy of cooking meals at home.
@结尾部分--学生佳作
李睿希
Nowadays ordering takeout is increasingly popular. Is it good to do it We had a discussion about it in our class. And our opinions are divided into two groups.
Some students think it' s really good to order food online. Here are the reasons. Firstly, it is more convenient and faster than we cook at home, so people can save time and effort to do something more important. Secondly, there is usually a wide choice of foods to choose from, so people can eat whatever they like. Lastly, ordering takeout means avoiding going to the restaurant. That is to say, they don’t need to queue for a long time.
In my view, one should order takeout when necessary, but not always. Enjoy the convenience when we need to, but never give up the joy of cooking meals at home.
The other students, however, differ in their opinions on this topic. They think ordering food online is more expensive than cooking meals at home. What’s worse, the food that they order online may not be fresh because some restaurants may have food safety problems. Most seriously, plastic packages are bad for our environment, which will lead to more white pollution.
本次作文得分情况
初三 13 班
满分1人
19分1分
10分以下4人
12-15分
12人
16-20分
10人
0-4分
0人
5-8分
4人
9-11分
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本次作文得分情况
初三 14 班
满分1人
19分7人
10分以下0人
12-15分
9人
16-20分
18人
0-4分
0人
5-8分
0人
9-11分
2人
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李睿希
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