04--2023安徽中考英语一模作文评讲ipads, coming into the classroom(共23张PPT)

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ipads, coming into the classroom
2023中考作文评讲
2023 中 考 作 文
近日， “ipad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论，你们学校的English Newsletter正在以ipads, coming into the classroom 为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文.
学生们认为 1. 不需要背沉重的书包去上学
2. 很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3. ……
家长们认为 1. 影响孩子视力
2. 增加家庭负担
你的观点 1. ……
2. ……
注意：4.词数90词
5.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称
They don’t have to take heavy bags to school.
With ipads widely used, they show great interest in study.
add to the burden of the family
cause poor eyesight
Personally, …. For one thing… For another…
ipads, coming into the classroom
审题
定调
本篇文章属于课标“人与社会”主题范畴中 “生活与学习”这一主题。体裁：议论文;
人称：第三人称; 时态：一般现在时
谋篇
布局
组织
语言
Beginning: Some students think that ……
Main body: While parents agree that ……
Ending : As for me / In my view / Personally
Wrting outline
HOW
学生观点：不需要背沉重的书包; 很新鲜,学习更感兴趣
家长观点：影响孩子视力；增加家庭负担
你的观点：1…… 2……
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Read and connect
学生们认为 1. 不需要背沉重的书包去上学
2. 很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3. ……
It’s welcomed by most students.
And the opinions are divided. Most students think it is good.
Most students hold the view that it’s good to use ipads in the classroom.
@第一部分--学生观点
@第一部分--学生观点
Compared with heavy schoolbags, most
students think ipads are convenient and easy to carry.
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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学生们 认为 1. 不需要背沉重的书包去上学
2. 很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3. ……
And the opinions are divided. Most students think it is so nice that
they don’t have to carry heavy bags to school any more because of ipads, which they think is good for their backs.
Also, studying with ipads is a new method for students, so it may make them become interested in study.
Additionally, when they meet problems, using ipad can make it easier to communicate with their teachers and ask them for help.
Sample writing
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
And the opinions are pared with heavy schoolbags, most students think it is so convenient that they don’t have to carry heavy schoolbags to school any more because of ipads, which they think is good for their backs. Also, studying with ipads is a new method for students, so it may make them become interested in study. Additionally, when they meet problems, using ipad can make it easier to communicate with their teachers and ask them for help.
Read and appreciate
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Read and connect
But parents don’t think so. Here are the reasons:
家长们认为 1. 影响孩子视力
2. 增加家庭负担
However, it worries parents.
Parents, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
家长们认为 1. 影响孩子视力
2. 增加家庭负担
But parents don’t think so. Here are the reasons:
For one thing, they are so worried that using ipads for a long time will cause poor eyesight.
For another, some poor families can’t afford to buy ipads because of its high price, which adds to the burden of the family. /
, which puts a great burden on the family.
@第二部分--家长观点
太棒了
@第二部分--家长观点
太棒了
@第二部分--家长观点
太棒了
Sample writing
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
But parents don’t think so. Here are the reasons : For one thing, they are so worried that using ipads for a long time will cause poor eyesight.
For another, some poor families can’t afford to buy ipads because of its high price, which adds to the burden of the family.
Read and appreciate
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
你的观点 1. ……
2. ……
In my view, I’d like to say 观点1 / 2 is…. For one thing…For another…
Personally, there are many advantages to use iPads in classrooms.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of using ipads into the classroom into full play and reduce the disadvatages to the minimum at the same time
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
你的观点 1. ……
2. ……
In my view, there are many advantages to use iPads in classrooms. For one thing, we can read and search for information on the Internet at any time. For another, it is easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
@第三部分--个人观点
太棒了
@第三部分--个人观点
太棒了
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Sample writing
Can you use an ipad in the classroom The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
And the opinions are pared with heavy schoolbags, most students think it is so convenient that they don’t have to carry heavy schoolbags to school any more because of ipads, which they think is good for their backs. Also, studying with ipads is a new method for students, so it may make them become interested in study. Additionally, when they meet problems, using ipad can make it easier to communicate with their teachers and ask them for help.
But parents don’t think so. Here are the reasons : They are so worried that using ipads for a long time will cause poor eyesight and influence their study. To be honest / What is worse, some poor families can’t afford to buy ipads because of its high price, which adds to the burden of the family.
In my view, there are many advantages to use iPads in classrooms. For one thing, we can read and search for information on the Internet at any time. For another, it is easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
Read and appreciate