天津市南开区三年2021年-2023年高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-05写作-2023届高三英语二轮复习(含答案)

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天津市南开区三年(2021-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-05写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·天津南开·统考二模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。最近收到了你的英国朋友Chris的一封电子邮件,得知他已被剑桥大学(the University of Cambridge)录取。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)向Chris表示祝贺;
(2)谈谈你在大学专业(major)选择上的困惑;
(3)向对方征求意见和建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Jin
2.(2022·天津·统考模拟预测)假设你是晨光中学李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召,反对舌尖上的浪费, 本学期你校英语俱乐部开展了主题为“Clear Your Plate”的英语演讲比赛,请你以此为题准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重;
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食;
3. 建议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头已给出, 但不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”.
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3.(2021·天津南开·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报为引导中学生热爱劳动和从事劳动,举办征文活动,题目为“I Work and I Am Happy”。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文。
(1)描述自己的劳动经历;
(2)谈谈自己参加劳动的体会;
(3)就中学生参加劳动提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
4.(2023·天津南开·统考二模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,你的英国朋友Chris在中国学习中文已满两年, 即将回国。请你给他写一封e-mail,邀请他参加为他举办的欢送会,内容包括:
(1) 祝贺他顺利通过考试,他的学习进步很大,为他骄傲;
(2) 感谢他帮助你们学习英语;
(3) 时间:星期六晚六点;
地点:你校餐厅二楼大厅。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party
Dear Chris,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
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Yours,
Li Jin
三、告知信/通知
5.(2023·天津南开·统考一模)假如你是高中生李津,你的英国朋友Johnson得知中国的航天员在空间站对全国的青少年进行“天宫课堂”授课后,对此很感兴趣,在电子邮件中询问详细的信息和你听课的感受。请根据以下要点写一封回信:
1. “天宫课堂”已经播出到了第三课,受到学生们的欢迎;
2. 观看了很多科学实验在零重力条件下的演示;
3. 加深对于理科学习的兴趣,产生了作为一名中国学生的自豪感。
参考词汇:中国空间站China Space Station;零重力zero-gravity;航天员taikonaut
注意 :
1. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不可出现真实的个人信息;
3. 词数不少于100(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Johnson,
In your last e-mail, you mentioned your interest in the “Tiangong Classroom.”
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
6.(2023·天津南开·统考三模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,你的英国朋友Chris听闻你们最近一直在线上学习,故此发邮件询问相关情况。请你给他回一封e-mail,内容包括:
(1)学校采取线上教学的原因;
(2)线上学习的优点(节省往返学校时间,时间安排相对自由等);
(3)线上学习的缺点,希望早日回到学校上课。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:新冠肺炎 COVID-19 线上学习 online learning
Dear Chris,
I am very glad to receive your e-mail asking about our school's recent adoption of online learning.
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Yours,
Li Jin
四、其他应用文
7.(2023·天津南开·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,你校英国外教Chris因疫情隔离无法按时回校。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问近况:
(2)简单介绍学校目前的防疫措施:
(3)表达祝愿并希望他早日回到学校。
注意:(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯:
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
新冠肺炎 COVID-19
隔离 isolate
症状 symptom
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8.(2023·天津南开·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将开展主题为“My favourite traditional Chinese festival”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下提示撰写一篇演讲稿:
(1)你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日;
(2)介绍该节日的特色;
(3)阐述你喜欢该节日的原因(如:意义、感受等)。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to speak here. Today I want to talk about my favorite traditional Chinese festival.
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9.(2022·天津南开·统考一模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,你的英国朋友Chris发来电子邮件很想了解有关你校高三学生体育活动的情况,请你回一封电子邮件进行介绍,内容包括:
(1)你校高三体育课以及课间活动安排情况;
(2)你最喜欢的一项体育活动;
(3)简要说明体育活动对高三学生的意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to have received your email asking about our PE classes and sports activities.
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Yours,
Li Jin
10.(2021·天津南开·统考二模)假设你是李津,你的英国朋友Tom对你们学校最近开展的“书香校园”活动很感兴趣,写信向你咨询相关情况。请你用英语给他写一封回信,介绍此次活动的开展情况,内容包括:
(1)开展此次活动的目的;
(2)此次活动的具体内容(例如:二手书市,读书分享会,……);
(3)此次活动反响如何;
(4)你对此次活动的看法。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Scholarly Campus 书香校园;second-hand book fair二手书市
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Jin
11.(2021·天津南开·南开中学校考三模)假设你是晨光中学的李津。你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展以 “Changes in Our Life”为题的征文活动。要求同学们谈一谈这些年来,在生活方 面发生的、使人们受益的变化。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
(1)描述生活上发生的变化(两个方面);
(2)这些变化给人们带来的好处;
(3)相信未来生活更加美好。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
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By Li Jin
12.(2021·天津南开·统考一模)假设你是李津,为即将来天津上大学的外国朋友Albert物色好了房屋。请你给 他发一封邮件告知他相关情况。主要内容包括:
1. 房屋位置:富力花园17楼,交通便利,临近校园;
2. 面积大小:50平米,一室一厅,厨卫齐全;
3. 屋内陈设:家具、空调等;
4. 租金情况:月付人民币1000元或年付人民币11000。
注意1. 词数不少于100;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:富力花园 Fuli Garden
Hello, Albert.
I have good news to tell you that I have found a flat for you in my city.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
五、开放性作文
13.(2022·天津南开·南开中学校考二模)假如你是李津。你校的英语校报最近新开辟了“中国历史上的名人”(A Famous Figure in Chinese History)栏目。现请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。内容包括:
1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的贡献:
3.该人物对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数不少于100字;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Famous Figure in Chinese History
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May 20, 2021
by Li Jin
参考答案:
1.Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science student in high school, so I am supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件,对他被剑桥大学录取一事表示祝贺,并就你在大学专业上的困惑向他征求意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
选择:choose→select
建议:suggestion→advice
观点:opinion→viewpoint
与……有关:(be) related to…=(be) relative to…
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m a science student in high school, so I am supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering.
拓展句:I’m a science student in high school, who is supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. (第一个运用了that引导的表语从句,第二个运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.One possible version:
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”. Recently, people have realized how much food we waste every year. And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
As for me,I think it’s an extremely good idea to follow. And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it. For example,when we go out for dinner, we can just order as much food as we can eat to make sure little will be wasted. Of course, if we really can’t eat up our food, it’s also ok to take it home, so we can eat it later. Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“Clear Your Plate”为题写一篇英文演讲稿来响应“光盘行动”号召,反对舌尖上的浪费。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重;
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食;
3. 建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
call on;join a campaign;eat up;contribute our efforts to;eat up;have a chance to;have any effect;make sure;keep in mind;no matter what;make a difference
第三步:连词成句
1.And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
2.And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it.
3.Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
4.Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:Besides, and
2.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]:And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.(这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]:Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food. (这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]:Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.(这句话运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句)
3.I Work and I Am Happy
As a student, I have few opportunities to work owing to my full schedule. But an activity organized by my school left a deep impression on me. The activity is called Farm Work Program. During the Program, I had to get up early and did assigned farm work with my classmates under the expert guidance of trainers. For example, we helped water the plants and pick up vegetables. We were even taught how to make tofu. With the help of my classmates, I finally made tofu successfully, which brought me great happiness. While working, I realized how hard it was to work with my own hands and how happy it was to enjoy the fruit(s) of my labor.
From my perspective, we cannot always participate in such programs, but we can help our parents do some housework. For example, we can help wash dishes after dinner, or we can wash our socks and so on. Remember that few things can make us happier than seeing the results of our hard work.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章要求写一篇题目为“I Work and I Am Happy”的征文。
【详解】本文应该分为三大部分。首先,要描述自己的劳动经历,在该部分中,应该用过去时态。应具体叙述你做了什么。其次,要谈谈自己参加劳动的体会。该部分应该叙述劳动给你带来的快乐以及劳动的艰辛,从而体会到一切得来不易之类的感悟。最后,要就中学生参加劳动提出建议。例如,中学生应该参加什么样的劳动,什么时间参加等。
【点睛】所给范文条理清楚,内容充实,要点齐全。长短句交叉使用,适当使用了一些较好的词汇和短语。例如:被动语态(The activity is called Farm Work Program);非谓语动词(organized by my school);定语从句(which brought me great happiness);宾语从句(how hard it was to work with my own hands and how happy it was to enjoy the fruit(s) of my labor); leave a deep impression on sb.;under the guidance of等,为文章增色不少。
4.Dear Chris,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. And knowing you are leaving soon, we will hold a farewell party for you this Saturday evening. Besides, we are all delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So this Saturday evening, a farewell party for you will be held on the second floor of the school dining hill. Could you come by 6: 00 pm. My classmates and I sincerely hope that you will come and see you then.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封e-mail,邀请他参加为他举办的欢送会,内容包括:(1) 祝贺他顺利通过考试,他的学习进步很大,为他骄傲;(2) 感谢他帮助你们学习英语;(3) 时间:星期六晚六点;地点:你校餐厅二楼大厅。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办:hold→host
另外:besides→moreover
高兴的:delighted→happy
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:And knowing you are leaving soon, we will hold a farewell party for you this Saturday evening.
拓展句:Because we know you are leaving soon, we will hold a farewell party for you this Saturday evening.
【点睛】[高分句型1] All you have gained is the result of your hard work. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that)
[高分句型2] My classmates and I sincerely hope that you will come and see you then.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5.Dear Johnson,
In your last e-mail, you mentioned your interest in the “Tiangong Classroom.” Now I am writing to tell you the details of the “Tiangong Classroom” and my feelings.
The “Tiangong Classroom” was conducted by taikonaut on the space station for teenagers across the country. The “Tiangong Classroom” has been broadcast to the third lesson, which is very popular with students. In the “Tiangong Classroom”, we watched many scientific experiments that were demonstrated in zero-gravity conditions. After watching the “Tiangong Classroom”, students’ interest in science learning was strengthened, and they had a sense of pride as a Chinese student.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Johnson写封电子邮件,告诉他“天宫课堂”的一些详细信息和你听课的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进行:conduct→carry out
受欢迎的:popular→welcome
加强:strengthen→reinforce
自豪感:a sense of pride→a feeling of pride
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After watching “Tiangong Classroom”, students’ interest in science learning is strengthened, and they have a sense of pride as a Chinese student.
拓展句:After they watched “Tiangong Classroom”, students’ interest in science learning was strengthened, and they had a sense of pride as a Chinese student.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The “Tiangong Classroom” has been broadcast to the third lesson, which is very popular with students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In the “Tiangong Classroom”, we watched many scientific experiments that were demonstrated in zero-gravity conditions. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
6.Dear Chris,
I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about our online learning. I am now writing back to you with some details.
Due to the severe COVID-19 pandemic, the school decided to give online courses to ensure students’ health and academic performance. The advantages of online learning are that it saves time for commuting to school and is relatively free in time arrangement. However, online learning also has disadvantages. For example, it’s bad for our eyes. It is not easy to communicate with teachers. Students don’t feel free to ask the teacher questions.
I hope to go back to school as soon as possible.
Yours
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回一封e-mail,告知他你线上学习的相关情况,内容包括:(1)学校采取线上教学的原因;(2)线上学习的优点(节省往返学校时间,时间安排相对自由等);(3)线上学习的缺点,希望早日回到学校上课。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
严重的:severe→serious
保证:ensure→guarantee
然而:however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Due to the severe COVID-19 pandemic, the school decided to give online courses to ensure students’ health and academic performance.
拓展句:Due to the severe COVID-19 pandemic, the school decided to give online courses, the purpose of which was to ensure students’ health and academic performance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about our online learning. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The advantages of online learning are that it saves time for commuting to school and is relatively free in time arrangement. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
7.Dear Chris,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been isolated on account of COVID-19. I’m wondering whether everything is going well with you.
With a rapid spread of the virus, schools have been taking various preventive measures and our school is no exception. Every day we take our temperature twice and report the result to the school. Whoever has a symptom like fever will be provided with some medical care immediately. What’s more, teachers often remind us to open the windows to let in fresh air. Everyone is asked not to go to crowded places or large gatherings. In my opinion, the most effective way to protect ourselves is to exercise more to keep our body strong and healthy.
We all miss you very much, hoping that you take good care of yourself and come back to school safely. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国外教Chris写电子邮件,询问对方近况,介绍学校目前的防疫措施,并希望对方早日回到学校。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为:on account of→because of
各种各样的:various→varieties of
立刻:immediately→at once
照顾:take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What’s more, teachers often remind us to open the windows to let in fresh air.
拓展句:What’s more, teachers often remind us that we should open the windows to let in fresh air.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m wondering whether everything is going well with you. (运用了whether引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Whoever has a symptom like fever will be provided with some medical care immediately. (运用了whoever引导主语从句)
8.Hello, everyone! It's my honor to speak here. Today I want to talk about my favorite traditional Chinese festival. As is known to all, China is famous for its rich and varied traditional festivals, among which I am fond of the Spring Festival best.
The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days. There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. To begin with, houses cleaned and decorated, delicious snacks stored and couplets posted on the doors, all that people feel is a festive atmosphere. What matters most is that all family members will return to their hometowns for a traditional family reunion and have a big dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival. People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year: During the next fifteen days, people pay a visit to relatives and friends, giving each other their best wishes. In addition, there are also many other customs such as dragon dances and lion dances.
While celebrating the Spring Festival, families can not only reunite but also experience and enjoy traditional Chinese culture. That's why I like it best.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以主题“My favourite traditional Chinese festival”写一篇演讲稿介绍最喜欢的一个中国传统节日。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→noted
多种多样的:varied→diverse
重要的:significant→crucial
传统的:traditional→conventional
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.
拓展句:People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12, after which we set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, China is famous for its rich and varied traditional festivals, among which I am fond of the Spring Festival best. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. (运用了现在分词作后置定语)
9.Dear Chris,
I’m glad to have received your email asking about our PE classes and sports activities. I am writing to share some details with you.
Every week, we have two PE classes, in which our school offers us opportunities to do a variety of sports. We play basketball, run for exercise, and take part in all kinds of sports competitions. Furthermore, we benefit a lot from Sunshine Sports during the 30-minute break. At school, we are having fun, and learning teamwork and sports spirit.
We senior three students are busy with our study. Therefore, we should choose our favorite sports to relax our muscles and reduce the anxiety and burden of our study. I believe good health is not only the guarantee of successful completion of studies in school, but also the necessity for hard work after graduation. Of all the sports, I like badminton best, which helps me to keep fit and build perseverance.
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Chris回一封邮件,介绍本校高三学生体育活动的情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时以及少量现在进行时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1.介绍你校高三体育课以及课间活动安排情况;
2.介绍你最喜欢的一项体育活动;
3.简要说明体育活动对高三学生的意义。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a variety of;run for ;take part in ; all kinds of;have fun;be busy with; keep fit;look forward to ;hear from
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to share some details with you.
2. Every week, we have two PE classes, in which our school offers us opportunities to do a variety of sports.
3. We play basketball, run for exercise, and take part in all kinds of sports competitions.
4. Furthermore, we benefit a lot from Sunshine Sports during the 30-minute break.
5. At school, we are having fun, and learning teamwork and sports spirit.
6. We senior three students are busy with our study.
7. Therefore, we should choose our favorite sports to relax our muscles and reduce the anxiety and burden of our study.
8. I believe good health is not only the guarantee of successful completion of studies in school, but also the necessity for hard work after graduation.
9. Of all the sports, I like badminton best, which helps me to keep fit and build perseverance.
10. Looking forward to hearing from you again.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:Furthermore, not only…but (also)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Every week, we have two PE classes, in which our school offers us opportunities to do a variety of sports.(in which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Therefore, we should choose our favorite sports to relax our muscles and reduce the anxiety and burden of our study.(动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型3] Of all the sports, I like badminton best, which helps me to keep fit and build perseverance.(which引导定语从句)
10.Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school. I’m eager to tell you something about it.
Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books. We have conducted several activities, such as having class meetings about books, holding the second-hand book fair, sharing reading experience and so on. Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students reading books all over the campus.
As for me, I’m more than happy to join in the activity. Not only does it arouse students’ interest in reading, but it also cultivates students’ love for knowledge and, more importantly, for life. I’m sure it will bring benefits for students.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封回信:假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack对你们学校最近开展的“书香校园”活动很感兴趣,写信向你咨询相关情况。请你用英语给他一封回信,介绍此次活动的开展情况,内容包括: 1. 开展此次活动的目的;2. 此次活动的具体内容(例如:二手书市,读书分享会,……);3. 此次活动反响如何;4. 你对此次活动的看法。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; Scholarly Campus(书香校园),second-hand book fair(二手书市),aim(目的),encourage(鼓励), conduct(组织),well-received(受到欢迎的),concept(概念),arouse(引起),knowledge(知识)及benefit(益处)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】本文内容完整,层次分明,结构紧凑,表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be interested in(对……感兴趣),be eager to do(渴望做),with the aim of (其目的是),such as(例如),more than(多于、不只是)以及join in(参加),而且还使用了宾语从句I’m glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school.”及“I’m sure it will bring benefits for students.,状语从句Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well-received that you can find students reading books all over the campus.,倒装句Not only does it arouse students’ interest in reading, but it also cultivates students’ love for knowledge,非谓语动词Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books.全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
11.Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.As for the modern network technology, I think we have experienced it. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.As for the mode of transportation, with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel, Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.
These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.
I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生谈一谈这些年来,在生活方面发生的、使人们受益的变化。
【详解】第一步:审题
类别:提纲类
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.描述生活上发生的变化(两个方面);
2. 表明变化给人们带来的好处;
3.表达相信未来生活更加美好之情。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Change; take place; modern network technology; transportation mode; As for; experience; shop online; keep abreast of; at home and abroad; living standard; pay more attention to; Shared bikes; environmental protection;
第三步:连词成句
1. Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.
2. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.
3. with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel.
4. Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.
5. These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.
6. It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.
7. I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组,如take place,keep abreast of,at home and abroad等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
12.Hello, Albert.
I have good news to tell you that I have found a flat for you in my city. The flat is on the 17th floor in
Fuli Garden, which is not far away from the university you will study in. There are lots of basic facilities nearby, such as the banks, stores, restaurants, and so on. In a word, it's very convenient for your life.
The whole flat covers about 50 square meters with a living room, a bedroom, a kitchen, a bathroom and a balcony, which I think can satisfy your fundamental needs. It's also equipped with a refrigerator, a TV set, a washing machine, an air conditioner and the high-speed WiFi.
As to the rent, it can be paid per month (1,000 RMB) or per year (11,000 RMB). If you are interested in it, please e-mail me as soon as possible.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件,告知即将来天津上大学的外国朋友Albert,他帮忙租到的房子的详细情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:告知房屋的详细情况
1)房屋的位置。(location of the flat)
2)周围的环境。(surroundings of the flat)
3) 房屋内容的设施。(facilities in the flat)
4) 房屋的价钱。(price of the flat)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
far away from; facilities; In a word; be convenient for; fundamental needs; be equipped with; as soon as possible.;look forward to;
第三步:连词成句
1. Fuli Garden is not far away from the university.
2. There are lots of basic facilities nearby.
3. In a word, it's very convenient for your life.
4. I think it can satisfy your fundamental needs.
5. It's also equipped with a refrigerator.
6. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:Fuli Garden, which is not far away from the university you will study in. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;如:If you are interested in it, please e-mail me as soon as possible. 这句话运用了If引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
13.A Famous Figure in Chinese History
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He was the first person that opened his eyes to see the world in modern China and he, in his book,HaiguoTuzhi(Maps and Records of the World)introduced modern technologies and ideas to China,which opened our eyes to the world. At the same time, he actively asked the Qing government to carry out reform focusing on the reform of the economic field. In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
May 20, 2021
by Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇说明文,考生所在学校的英语校报最近新开辟了 “中国历史上的名人”(A Famous Figure in Chinese History)栏目。现请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一位考生喜欢的中国历史人物。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
与此同时:at the same time→in the meantime
集中:focus on→concentrate on
事实上:in fact→as a matter of fact
实施:implement→carry out
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
拓展句:In fact,it is he that inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] He actively asked the Qing government to carry out reform focusing on the reform of the economic field(现在分词作定语)
[高分句型2] He was the first person that opened his eyes to see the world in modern China and he, in his book,HaiguoTuzhi(Maps and Records of the World)introduced modern technologies and ideas to China,which opened our eyes to the world.(that引导的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)