北京市门头沟区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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北京市门头沟区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·北京·统考一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在做关于“中学生运动情况”的调查，想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你喜欢的一项运动；
2.这项运动给你带来的益处；
3.关于运动的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
2．（2020·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国好友 Jim 得知美国也发生新冠肺炎，很紧张，发来邮件向你询问应对方法，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 安慰他不要紧张。
2. 建议应对方法。
3. 表达战胜病毒的信心。
注意：1．词数不少于 50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：新冠肺炎：COVID-9
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2022·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件，向他介绍活动情况，内容包括：
1. 介绍科技节的相关信息（时间，活动内容等）；
2. 邀请对方来参加。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
4．（2021·北京门头沟·统考二模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们学校下个月即将举办庆祝建党100周年系列活动，请你给学校的英国交换生Jim写一封信，内容包括：
1.此次系列活动的内容；
2.邀请他参加。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：建党100 周年 the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
5．（2020·北京门头沟·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.庆祝方法；
2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、图画作文
6．（2020·北京门头沟·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2020·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。由于延期开学，你们学校组织了网上授课。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你上网课的过程。
注意：词数不少于 60。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jim,
How is everything going Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours So looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封邮件，向他介绍你的运动情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动；
2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处；
3. 提出关于运动的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise regularly
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite.
3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
4.I have benefited much from playing basketball.
5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days.
6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges.
7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
9.This is my experience and understanding of sports.
10.So looking forward to your sharing.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：In addition
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.（suggest后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气）
2．Dear Jim,
How are things going I am very glad to receive your e-mail. Knowing you are worried about COVID-19 in America, I am writing to tell you not to panic because it can be controlled.
At this special time, you should not go out often. If you go out, you must wear masks. In addition, you should keep good healthy habits.
Don’t be too worried about the disease. I believe, with the joint efforts all over the world, we will finally defeat it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国好友 Jim 得知美国也发生新冠肺炎，很紧张，发来邮件向你询问应对方法，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 安慰他不要紧张。2. 建议应对方法。3. 表达战胜病毒的信心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：glad (高兴的)；be worried about (担心)；COVID-19 (新冠肺炎)；panic (恐慌)；masks (口罩)；in addition(另外)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing you are worried about COVID-19 in America, I am writing to tell you not to panic because it can be controlled.运用原因状语从句；If you go out, you must wear masks.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Jim,
How is everything going
I’m writing to invite you to attend the Science and Technology Festival at our school with me.
It will be held in the school hall next Sunday morning. The opening ceremony starts at 9:00 a.m., and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science. After that, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
I think it’s a good chance for us to broaden our vision and have hands-on experiences. Most importantly, I know you’re very keen on science and curious about the world. I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic experience. And I really hope you can come.
I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件，向他介绍活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
出名的：famous→well-known
不同的：different→diverse
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science. After that, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
拓展句：Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science, after which, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic experience. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think it’s a good chance for us to broaden our vision and have hands-on experiences. (运用了it作形式主语)
4．One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going A series of activities is going to be organized in our school next month in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China. I know you must be interested in it, so I’m writing to invite you to come.
During the celebration, we will have a lot of activities. Firstly, an exhibition will be held in the school gallery to display 100 paper-cutting artworks that depict the history of Party’s development over the past 100 years. And there will be a knowledge competition about the glorious history of the CPC, in which you can learn a lot.
I do hope you can come and join us. If you can come, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校下个月即将举办庆祝建党100周年系列活动，请你给学校的英国交换生Jim写一封信邀请他来参加。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
一系列的：A series of→ All kinds of/ A range of
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be fond of/ be crazy about
展示：show→ exhibit
描绘：depict→ give an account of
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：A series of activities is going to be organized in our school next month in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China.
拓展句：A series of activities to be organized in our school next month is in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, an exhibition will be held in the school gallery to display 100 paper-cutting artworks that depict the history of Party’s development over the past 100 years. （that 引导的定语从句）。
[高分句型2] And there will be a knowledge competition about the glorious history of the CPC, in which you can learn a lot. （in which引导的非限制性定语从句）。
5．Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I will spend Mother’s Day. Now I’m writing to tell you about my plan.
I am planning to give my mom a big surprise on that day. I bought a cook book last week so that I can learn how to cook the dishes my mom loves. I have been working on it for a couple of days and I hope when the day comes, I am well prepared!
I am very nervous because this will be the first time I cook for my mom. What do you think of the plan and what surprise are you going to present to your mom
Write to me soon! I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.庆祝方法；2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Mother’s Day(母亲节)；a big surprise (一个大惊喜)；so that(以便)；the first time (第一次)；think of (考虑)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时、现在进行时、一般将来时、一般过去时和现在完成进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I will spend Mother’s Day.运用了定语从句；I bought a cook book last week so that I can learn how to cook the dishes my mom loves.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Last month, we took part in an activity organized by our grade to sing the same song on the Internet to show our respect to the heroes who fought with COVID-19, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.
On Monday, our teacher informed us of the news that we would sing the same song online “Let the world full of love”, which should be sent to Mrs. Wang before February 26th. Hearing that, I became very excited because I wanted to express my admiration to the heroes fighting with the disease. Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to show our respect to the heroes.
The next few days, I searched the song on the Internet and found how to sing it well. Having learnt the melody and the lyrics, I began to record it. So difficult was it to record it that I tried many times and eventually I made it and uploaded it in time to Mrs. Wang.
Hardly had Mrs. Wang collected all the songs when she began to combine them into one and sent it on the internet. As we heard the song sung by all the students in our grade, I was deeply moved, thinking of the touching moments when different people contributed their strength to helping each other.
I posted the activity on the WeChat Moments and it was not long before that I received many praises and likes. I felt that we were living in the same world which was full of love. With the joint efforts, we could conquer all the challenges and make our world better.
【分析】这是一篇图画类作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：take part in(参加)；on the Internet (在网上)；fight with (与……战斗)；meaningful and memorable (有意义和难忘的)；inform of (通知)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和过去完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to show our respect to the heroes.运用了让步状语从句；Hardly had Mrs. Wang collected all the songs when she began to combine them into one and sent it on the internet.运用了倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Last week, school delayed because of fighting with COVID-19, we were asked to learn online, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.
Last Monday, our teacher informed us of the news that we would delay school and learn online. Hearing that, I determined to learn hard on my own. Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to be more independent.
The next morning, hardly had I turned on the computer when our teacher began the broadcast. So clearly did he explain the lesson that I nearly felt we were in class as usual, in which we discussed and gave presentations.
Tired as I was after fixing my eyes on the screen for nearly 6 hours, I set down to do my homework. When I had questions, I asked my teachers for help and received timely help.
Having finished all the homework, I took pictures and uploaded them to the internet, hoping to receive the comments as soon as possible. After some time, I got the message from my teacher, who praised me for my excellent performance and gave detailed guidance.
Despite the difficulties we faced when we were having the classes online, I felt it valuable to do like this to fight with the disease with the people all over the country, even all over the world. Only by working together could we not only acquire the knowledge we should master but also defeat the disease.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。由于延期开学，你们学校组织了网上授课。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你上网课的过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：because of (因为)；inform of(通知)；on one’s own (独自)；stay in regard as(视为)；as soon as possible (尽快)；detailed guidance(详细的指导)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Last week, school delayed because of fighting with COVID-19, we were asked to learn online, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.运用非限定性定语从句；Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to be more independent.运用了让步状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2021·北京·统考一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在做关于“中学生运动情况”的调查，想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你喜欢的一项运动；
2.这项运动给你带来的益处；
3.关于运动的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
2．（2020·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国好友 Jim 得知美国也发生新冠肺炎，很紧张，发来邮件向你询问应对方法，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 安慰他不要紧张。
2. 建议应对方法。
3. 表达战胜病毒的信心。
注意：1．词数不少于 50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：新冠肺炎：COVID-9
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2022·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件，向他介绍活动情况，内容包括：
1. 介绍科技节的相关信息（时间，活动内容等）；
2. 邀请对方来参加。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
4．（2021·北京门头沟·统考二模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们学校下个月即将举办庆祝建党100周年系列活动，请你给学校的英国交换生Jim写一封信，内容包括：
1.此次系列活动的内容；
2.邀请他参加。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：建党100 周年 the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
5．（2020·北京门头沟·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.庆祝方法；
2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、图画作文
6．（2020·北京门头沟·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
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7．（2020·北京门头沟·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。由于延期开学，你们学校组织了网上授课。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你上网课的过程。
注意：词数不少于 60。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jim,
How is everything going Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours So looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封邮件，向他介绍你的运动情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动；
2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处；
3. 提出关于运动的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise regularly
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite.
3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
4.I have benefited much from playing basketball.
5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days.
6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges.
7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
9.This is my experience and understanding of sports.
10.So looking forward to your sharing.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：In addition
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.（suggest后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气）
2．Dear Jim,
How are things going I am very glad to receive your e-mail. Knowing you are worried about COVID-19 in America, I am writing to tell you not to panic because it can be controlled.
At this special time, you should not go out often. If you go out, you must wear masks. In addition, you should keep good healthy habits.
Don’t be too worried about the disease. I believe, with the joint efforts all over the world, we will finally defeat it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国好友 Jim 得知美国也发生新冠肺炎，很紧张，发来邮件向你询问应对方法，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 安慰他不要紧张。2. 建议应对方法。3. 表达战胜病毒的信心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：glad (高兴的)；be worried about (担心)；COVID-19 (新冠肺炎)；panic (恐慌)；masks (口罩)；in addition(另外)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing you are worried about COVID-19 in America, I am writing to tell you not to panic because it can be controlled.运用原因状语从句；If you go out, you must wear masks.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Jim,
How is everything going
I’m writing to invite you to attend the Science and Technology Festival at our school with me.
It will be held in the school hall next Sunday morning. The opening ceremony starts at 9:00 a.m., and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science. After that, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
I think it’s a good chance for us to broaden our vision and have hands-on experiences. Most importantly, I know you’re very keen on science and curious about the world. I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic experience. And I really hope you can come.
I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将举办科技节。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件，向他介绍活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
出名的：famous→well-known
不同的：different→diverse
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science. After that, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
拓展句：Then a famous scientist will give a lecture on science, after which, participants can enjoy the exhibition about the development of high-technology and try to do different experiments in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic experience. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think it’s a good chance for us to broaden our vision and have hands-on experiences. (运用了it作形式主语)
4．One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going A series of activities is going to be organized in our school next month in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China. I know you must be interested in it, so I’m writing to invite you to come.
During the celebration, we will have a lot of activities. Firstly, an exhibition will be held in the school gallery to display 100 paper-cutting artworks that depict the history of Party’s development over the past 100 years. And there will be a knowledge competition about the glorious history of the CPC, in which you can learn a lot.
I do hope you can come and join us. If you can come, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校下个月即将举办庆祝建党100周年系列活动，请你给学校的英国交换生Jim写一封信邀请他来参加。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
一系列的：A series of→ All kinds of/ A range of
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be fond of/ be crazy about
展示：show→ exhibit
描绘：depict→ give an account of
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：A series of activities is going to be organized in our school next month in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China.
拓展句：A series of activities to be organized in our school next month is in celebration of the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Party of China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, an exhibition will be held in the school gallery to display 100 paper-cutting artworks that depict the history of Party’s development over the past 100 years. （that 引导的定语从句）。
[高分句型2] And there will be a knowledge competition about the glorious history of the CPC, in which you can learn a lot. （in which引导的非限制性定语从句）。
5．Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I will spend Mother’s Day. Now I’m writing to tell you about my plan.
I am planning to give my mom a big surprise on that day. I bought a cook book last week so that I can learn how to cook the dishes my mom loves. I have been working on it for a couple of days and I hope when the day comes, I am well prepared!
I am very nervous because this will be the first time I cook for my mom. What do you think of the plan and what surprise are you going to present to your mom
Write to me soon! I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.庆祝方法；2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Mother’s Day(母亲节)；a big surprise (一个大惊喜)；so that(以便)；the first time (第一次)；think of (考虑)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时、现在进行时、一般将来时、一般过去时和现在完成进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I will spend Mother’s Day.运用了定语从句；I bought a cook book last week so that I can learn how to cook the dishes my mom loves.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Last month, we took part in an activity organized by our grade to sing the same song on the Internet to show our respect to the heroes who fought with COVID-19, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.
On Monday, our teacher informed us of the news that we would sing the same song online “Let the world full of love”, which should be sent to Mrs. Wang before February 26th. Hearing that, I became very excited because I wanted to express my admiration to the heroes fighting with the disease. Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to show our respect to the heroes.
The next few days, I searched the song on the Internet and found how to sing it well. Having learnt the melody and the lyrics, I began to record it. So difficult was it to record it that I tried many times and eventually I made it and uploaded it in time to Mrs. Wang.
Hardly had Mrs. Wang collected all the songs when she began to combine them into one and sent it on the internet. As we heard the song sung by all the students in our grade, I was deeply moved, thinking of the touching moments when different people contributed their strength to helping each other.
I posted the activity on the WeChat Moments and it was not long before that I received many praises and likes. I felt that we were living in the same world which was full of love. With the joint efforts, we could conquer all the challenges and make our world better.
【分析】这是一篇图画类作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：take part in(参加)；on the Internet (在网上)；fight with (与……战斗)；meaningful and memorable (有意义和难忘的)；inform of (通知)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和过去完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to show our respect to the heroes.运用了让步状语从句；Hardly had Mrs. Wang collected all the songs when she began to combine them into one and sent it on the internet.运用了倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Last week, school delayed because of fighting with COVID-19, we were asked to learn online, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.
Last Monday, our teacher informed us of the news that we would delay school and learn online. Hearing that, I determined to learn hard on my own. Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to be more independent.
The next morning, hardly had I turned on the computer when our teacher began the broadcast. So clearly did he explain the lesson that I nearly felt we were in class as usual, in which we discussed and gave presentations.
Tired as I was after fixing my eyes on the screen for nearly 6 hours, I set down to do my homework. When I had questions, I asked my teachers for help and received timely help.
Having finished all the homework, I took pictures and uploaded them to the internet, hoping to receive the comments as soon as possible. After some time, I got the message from my teacher, who praised me for my excellent performance and gave detailed guidance.
Despite the difficulties we faced when we were having the classes online, I felt it valuable to do like this to fight with the disease with the people all over the country, even all over the world. Only by working together could we not only acquire the knowledge we should master but also defeat the disease.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。由于延期开学，你们学校组织了网上授课。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你上网课的过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：because of (因为)；inform of(通知)；on one’s own (独自)；stay in regard as(视为)；as soon as possible (尽快)；detailed guidance(详细的指导)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Last week, school delayed because of fighting with COVID-19, we were asked to learn online, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.运用非限定性定语从句；Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to be more independent.运用了让步状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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