北京市顺义区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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北京市顺义区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·北京顺义·统考二模）假定你是李华，得知你班英国交换生Jenny最近因学习压力大而情绪低落。请给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示关心；2.提出缓解、释放压力的建议。
参考词汇：压力pressure；缓解、释放relieve
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·北京顺义·牛栏山一中校考三模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:
1. 作品内容要求；
2. 提交时间和方式；
3. 表示愿意提供帮助。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、其他应用文
3．（2022·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他将来的生活，也想了解你的职业设想，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你想从事的职业；
2. 选择该职业的原因；
3. 实现该目标的方法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2022·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国学生的寒假生活很感兴趣，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 介绍寒假相关信息；
2. 说明自己的寒假安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中说想了解北京空气质量方面的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 空气变好；
2. 变好原因；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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6．（2020·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校的 体育活动情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 学校的活动项目；
2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因。
注意:1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、图画作文
7．（2020·北京顺义·牛栏山一中校考三模）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。
注意：1. 日记的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Monday, March 10 Fine
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8．（2020·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“感受工匠精神”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，记述你们在北京木制文化传承园活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：北京木制文化传承园Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden 工匠craftsman
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9．（2020·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“快乐送万 家”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jenny,
I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study. Here are some tips for you to relieve it.
First of all, shift your focus. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous. You should think about the progress you’ve made and build your self-confidence. Secondly, take some exercise. A saying goes that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Do some sports, and you'll feel relaxed all over. Last but not least, sleep well. Getting a good night’s sleep, you’ll be recharged and start over easily.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Jenny电子邮件，提供缓解学习压力的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
沮丧：upset→depressed
有帮助的：beneficial→helpful
重新开始：restart = start over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, shift your focus. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous.
拓展句：First of all, shift your focus because paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous. (运用了动名词作主语)
2．Dear George,
How is everything going I have some exciting news for you! China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Liuying@chinadaily.com. Deadline for entries is Oct.15, 2018.
For more information, you can refer to China Daily’s official website.
Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:作品内容要求；提交时间和方式；表示愿意提供帮助。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”,过去分词做后置定语；why not give it a try
句中使用why not do sth.的固定句式；And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation:句中使用含情态动词的被动语态；I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do.此处for是并列连词，表示“原因”； If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.句中if引导条件状语从句。
3．Dear Jim,
Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.
Becoming a journalist has always been my dream. When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel. Over time, I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive. In my opinion, writing ability is very important for a journalist, so I practise it almost every day. In addition, I plan to study journalism at Communication University of Beijing and currently I am preparing for the entrance exam.
How’s your life now Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信，告诉他自己想从事的职业、选择该职业的原因和实现的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
机会：opportunity→chance
有吸引力的：appealing→attractive
现在：at present→currently
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive.
拓展句：I have come to feel that it is the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories that make the job more meaningful and attractive.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2]Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.（运用了现在分词的完成式作状语）
4．Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to introduce Chinese students’ winter vacation to you.
Winter vacation usually starts in January and ends in February. It is the time when the weather in the north is the coldest and the Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival for Chinese people, is celebrated.
This winter vacation will be extremely exciting for a sports fan like me because I will enjoy watching the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. Besides, as a senior three student, I will schedule my study and follow it to make my holiday more rewarding.
What about your recent holiday Do you have anything interesting to share Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国学生的寒假生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：begin→start
重要的：significant→important
极其：most→extremely
收到某人来信：get a letter from→hear from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Do you have anything interesting to share
拓展句：Do you have anything that is interesting to share
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is the time when the weather in the north is the coldest and the Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival for Chinese people, is celebrated. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This winter vacation will be extremely exciting for a sports fan like me because I will enjoy watching the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. (运用了because引导的时间状语从句以及非谓语动词作宾语)
5．Dear Jim,
I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.
It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts. On the one hand, more and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels. On the other hand, our government has taken effective measures to control air pollution such as banning smoking and punishing illegal factories.
To my delight, our efforts count. I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.
I hope my introduction can be of good use for you. If you want to know more, please let me know. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向英国笔友Jim介绍北京空气质量方面的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；
要点：
1. 空气变好；
2. 变好原因；
3. 你的感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be concerned with；air quality；be eager to；due to；be willing to；take public transportations；instead of；take effective measures；air pollution；such as；be of good use；to one’s delight等
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.
2. It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts.
3. More and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels.
4. Our government has taken effective measures to control air pollution such as banning smoking and punishing illegal factories.
5. I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.
6. I hope my introduction can be of good use for you.
7. If you want to know more, please let me know.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：and；
2.表转折对比关系：On the one hand…On the other hand…；
3.表因果关系：due to；
4.表示条件关系：if；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.使用了由that引导的宾语从句和由and连接的并列句；It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts.使用了it作形式主语和that从句作真正主语；more and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels. 使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句；I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.使用了由and连接的并列句；I hope my introduction can be of good use for you. 使用了省略that的宾语从句；If you want to know more, please let me know.使用了由if引导的状语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：be concerned with；be eager to；due to；be willing to；take public transportations；instead of；take effective measures；such as；to one’s delight等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Jim,
It’s pleasure to receive your email asking me about the physical activities of our school and I’d love to share them with you. We have many different kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, football, volleyball, running, going skiing and so on.
As for me, my favorite sport is running, from which I benefit a lot. First, running is good for my health. Second, I, as you may know, am busy preparing for my college entrance examination. Running can make me relaxed some time. Besides, I like the feeling of running around on the playground, enjoying the sunshine and breathing the fresh air.
How about you I am so curious about your physical activities in Britain. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校的 体育活动情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 学校的活动项目；2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：physical activities (体育活动)；share with(分享)；kinds of (各种各样的)；be busy doing sth.(忙于做某事)；fresh air (新鲜空气)；curious about(好奇)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As for me, my favorite sport is running, from which I benefit a lot.运用非限定性定语从句；Besides, I like the feeling of running around on the playground, enjoying the sunshine and breathing the fresh air.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Monday, March 10 Fine
This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tears. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.
At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment. True friendship won't be weakened by distance. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。同学张强要去国外学习，本篇要求考生根据图片所给的内容写一篇日记。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
根据图片提示，该日记主要包括以下内容
张强发言，表达对友谊的看法
同学们给张强特别的礼物
张强让同学在T恤上签名
大家一起拍照留念
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
hold a meeting/ study abroad/ in the beginning/ everlasting/ move to tears/ present/ sign/ precious/ memorize/ hear-shaped
第三步：连词成句
1. This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.
2. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.
3. We were all moved to tears.
4. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.
5. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.
6. At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.
7. True friendship won't be weakened by distance.
8. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.中who引导的非限制性定语从句。
8．Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.
Early in the morning, the school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest. After that, with the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves. We worked together to make a chair. Besides, we experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.
On the way back, we shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文日记，记述班级同学在北京木制文化传承园活动的全过程。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一人称和第三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时；
要点：
1.描述活动的地点，时间，出行的方式等
2.描述活动的过程；
3.简述感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen；Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden；craftsman；exhibition hall；draw one’s attention；arouse one’s interest；with the help of；couldn’t wait to；work together；Chinese characters；a piece of wood；benefit；on the way；art works等
第三步：连词成句
1. Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.
2. The school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden.
3. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest.
4. With the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves.
5. We experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood.
6. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.
7. We shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group.
8. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Early in the morning；After；
2.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；
3.表因果关系：because；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.使用了由because引导的状语从句和过去分词作定语；On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest. 使用了现在分词作状语和由which引导的非限制性定语从句；It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.使用了结果状语从句；I hope our class can organize more activities like this.使用了省略that的宾语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：draw one’s attention；arouse one’s interest；with the help of；couldn’t wait to；work together；on the way等。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Last week, our school organized an activity named “Happiness to Family”, which turned out to be meaningful and unforgettable.
On Monday morning, I signed up with my classmates as soon as we heard the news. We were very interested in it and had a heated discussion immediately. At last, we decided to sing a song named My Motherland. The next day, we began to make preparations for our performance. Everyone was very serious and hardworking to practice it. Then came the big day. It was time to show our performance. Our efforts paid off, because the audience in the community liked it, giving us a big applause. All of us were very happy and felt proud of ourselves. In the end, we got a prize and we were really excited when we got the souvenirs presented by the community staff there. There was a happy smile on everyone’s face.
Through this activity, I know bringing happiness to others can also make us happy. I hope our school can organize more activities like this.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“快乐送万家”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：turn out (结果是)；meaningful and unforgettable(有意义和难忘的)；sign up (报名)；as soon as (一……就……)；heated discussion (激烈讨论)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如On Monday morning, I signed up with my classmates as soon as we heard the news.运用时间状语从句；Our efforts paid off, because the audience in the community liked it, giving us a big applause.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2021·北京顺义·统考二模）假定你是李华，得知你班英国交换生Jenny最近因学习压力大而情绪低落。请给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示关心；2.提出缓解、释放压力的建议。
参考词汇：压力pressure；缓解、释放relieve
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2020·北京顺义·牛栏山一中校考三模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:
1. 作品内容要求；
2. 提交时间和方式；
3. 表示愿意提供帮助。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、其他应用文
3．（2022·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他将来的生活，也想了解你的职业设想，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你想从事的职业；
2. 选择该职业的原因；
3. 实现该目标的方法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2022·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim对中国学生的寒假生活很感兴趣，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 介绍寒假相关信息；
2. 说明自己的寒假安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中说想了解北京空气质量方面的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 空气变好；
2. 变好原因；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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6．（2020·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校的 体育活动情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 学校的活动项目；
2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因。
注意:1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、图画作文
7．（2020·北京顺义·牛栏山一中校考三模）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。
注意：1. 日记的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Monday, March 10 Fine
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8．（2020·北京顺义·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“感受工匠精神”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，记述你们在北京木制文化传承园活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：北京木制文化传承园Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden 工匠craftsman
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9．（2020·北京顺义·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“快乐送万 家”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jenny,
I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study. Here are some tips for you to relieve it.
First of all, shift your focus. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous. You should think about the progress you’ve made and build your self-confidence. Secondly, take some exercise. A saying goes that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Do some sports, and you'll feel relaxed all over. Last but not least, sleep well. Getting a good night’s sleep, you’ll be recharged and start over easily.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Jenny电子邮件，提供缓解学习压力的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
沮丧：upset→depressed
有帮助的：beneficial→helpful
重新开始：restart = start over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, shift your focus. Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous.
拓展句：First of all, shift your focus because paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m worried to learn that you are depressed because of the great pressure of recent study. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Paying too much attention to your grades will make you more nervous. (运用了动名词作主语)
2．Dear George,
How is everything going I have some exciting news for you! China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Liuying@chinadaily.com. Deadline for entries is Oct.15, 2018.
For more information, you can refer to China Daily’s official website.
Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：本文是一封书信。你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加中国日报 （China Daily）专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”（Amazing China）手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:作品内容要求；提交时间和方式；表示愿意提供帮助。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”,过去分词做后置定语；why not give it a try
句中使用why not do sth.的固定句式；And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation:句中使用含情态动词的被动语态；I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do.此处for是并列连词，表示“原因”； If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.句中if引导条件状语从句。
3．Dear Jim,
Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.
Becoming a journalist has always been my dream. When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel. Over time, I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive. In my opinion, writing ability is very important for a journalist, so I practise it almost every day. In addition, I plan to study journalism at Communication University of Beijing and currently I am preparing for the entrance exam.
How’s your life now Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信，告诉他自己想从事的职业、选择该职业的原因和实现的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
机会：opportunity→chance
有吸引力的：appealing→attractive
现在：at present→currently
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：I have come to feel that the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories make the job more meaningful and attractive.
拓展句：I have come to feel that it is the responsibilities of revealing facts and spreading inspiring stories that make the job more meaningful and attractive.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I was a child, I thought it was a great job as it offered journalists lots of chances to travel.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2]Having heard about your plan for the future, I’m happy to share mine with you.（运用了现在分词的完成式作状语）
4．Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to introduce Chinese students’ winter vacation to you.
Winter vacation usually starts in January and ends in February. It is the time when the weather in the north is the coldest and the Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival for Chinese people, is celebrated.
This winter vacation will be extremely exciting for a sports fan like me because I will enjoy watching the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. Besides, as a senior three student, I will schedule my study and follow it to make my holiday more rewarding.
What about your recent holiday Do you have anything interesting to share Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，向他介绍中国学生的寒假生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：begin→start
重要的：significant→important
极其：most→extremely
收到某人来信：get a letter from→hear from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Do you have anything interesting to share
拓展句：Do you have anything that is interesting to share
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is the time when the weather in the north is the coldest and the Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival for Chinese people, is celebrated. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This winter vacation will be extremely exciting for a sports fan like me because I will enjoy watching the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. (运用了because引导的时间状语从句以及非谓语动词作宾语)
5．Dear Jim,
I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.
It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts. On the one hand, more and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels. On the other hand, our government has taken effective measures to control air pollution such as banning smoking and punishing illegal factories.
To my delight, our efforts count. I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.
I hope my introduction can be of good use for you. If you want to know more, please let me know. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向英国笔友Jim介绍北京空气质量方面的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；
要点：
1. 空气变好；
2. 变好原因；
3. 你的感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be concerned with；air quality；be eager to；due to；be willing to；take public transportations；instead of；take effective measures；air pollution；such as；be of good use；to one’s delight等
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.
2. It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts.
3. More and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels.
4. Our government has taken effective measures to control air pollution such as banning smoking and punishing illegal factories.
5. I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.
6. I hope my introduction can be of good use for you.
7. If you want to know more, please let me know.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：and；
2.表转折对比关系：On the one hand…On the other hand…；
3.表因果关系：due to；
4.表示条件关系：if；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：I’m glad that you’re concerned with the air quality in Beijing and I’m eager to tell you some details.使用了由that引导的宾语从句和由and连接的并列句；It’s obvious that the air quality in Beijing is getting better and better due to our concerted efforts.使用了it作形式主语和that从句作真正主语；more and more Chinese are willing to take public transportations instead of private cars, which can reduce the burning of fuels. 使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句；I really appreciate the cleaner air nowadays and I’m confident about a brighter future of air quality in Beijing.使用了由and连接的并列句；I hope my introduction can be of good use for you. 使用了省略that的宾语从句；If you want to know more, please let me know.使用了由if引导的状语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：be concerned with；be eager to；due to；be willing to；take public transportations；instead of；take effective measures；such as；to one’s delight等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Jim,
It’s pleasure to receive your email asking me about the physical activities of our school and I’d love to share them with you. We have many different kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, football, volleyball, running, going skiing and so on.
As for me, my favorite sport is running, from which I benefit a lot. First, running is good for my health. Second, I, as you may know, am busy preparing for my college entrance examination. Running can make me relaxed some time. Besides, I like the feeling of running around on the playground, enjoying the sunshine and breathing the fresh air.
How about you I am so curious about your physical activities in Britain. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校的 体育活动情况，请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 学校的活动项目；2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：physical activities (体育活动)；share with(分享)；kinds of (各种各样的)；be busy doing sth.(忙于做某事)；fresh air (新鲜空气)；curious about(好奇)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As for me, my favorite sport is running, from which I benefit a lot.运用非限定性定语从句；Besides, I like the feeling of running around on the playground, enjoying the sunshine and breathing the fresh air.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Monday, March 10 Fine
This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tears. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.
At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment. True friendship won't be weakened by distance. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。同学张强要去国外学习，本篇要求考生根据图片所给的内容写一篇日记。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
根据图片提示，该日记主要包括以下内容
张强发言，表达对友谊的看法
同学们给张强特别的礼物
张强让同学在T恤上签名
大家一起拍照留念
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
hold a meeting/ study abroad/ in the beginning/ everlasting/ move to tears/ present/ sign/ precious/ memorize/ hear-shaped
第三步：连词成句
1. This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.
2. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.
3. We were all moved to tears.
4. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.
5. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.
6. At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.
7. True friendship won't be weakened by distance.
8. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.中who引导的非限制性定语从句。
8．Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.
Early in the morning, the school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest. After that, with the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves. We worked together to make a chair. Besides, we experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.
On the way back, we shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文日记，记述班级同学在北京木制文化传承园活动的全过程。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一人称和第三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时；
要点：
1.描述活动的地点，时间，出行的方式等
2.描述活动的过程；
3.简述感受。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen；Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden；craftsman；exhibition hall；draw one’s attention；arouse one’s interest；with the help of；couldn’t wait to；work together；Chinese characters；a piece of wood；benefit；on the way；art works等
第三步：连词成句
1. Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.
2. The school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden.
3. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest.
4. With the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves.
5. We experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood.
6. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.
7. We shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group.
8. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Early in the morning；After；
2.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；
3.表因果关系：because；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.使用了由because引导的状语从句和过去分词作定语；On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest. 使用了现在分词作状语和由which引导的非限制性定语从句；It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.使用了结果状语从句；I hope our class can organize more activities like this.使用了省略that的宾语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：draw one’s attention；arouse one’s interest；with the help of；couldn’t wait to；work together；on the way等。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Last week, our school organized an activity named “Happiness to Family”, which turned out to be meaningful and unforgettable.
On Monday morning, I signed up with my classmates as soon as we heard the news. We were very interested in it and had a heated discussion immediately. At last, we decided to sing a song named My Motherland. The next day, we began to make preparations for our performance. Everyone was very serious and hardworking to practice it. Then came the big day. It was time to show our performance. Our efforts paid off, because the audience in the community liked it, giving us a big applause. All of us were very happy and felt proud of ourselves. In the end, we got a prize and we were really excited when we got the souvenirs presented by the community staff there. There was a happy smile on everyone’s face.
Through this activity, I know bringing happiness to others can also make us happy. I hope our school can organize more activities like this.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“快乐送万家”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：turn out (结果是)；meaningful and unforgettable(有意义和难忘的)；sign up (报名)；as soon as (一……就……)；heated discussion (激烈讨论)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如On Monday morning, I signed up with my classmates as soon as we heard the news.运用时间状语从句；Our efforts paid off, because the audience in the community liked it, giving us a big applause.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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