北京市通州区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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北京市通州区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2022·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 希望批准。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2021·北京通州·潞河中学校考三模）假设你是红星中学校学生李华。校运会将于下周五举行，学生会需要向全校招募30名志愿者。请你给国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 对志愿者的要求；
2. 志愿者工作内容；
3. 报名时间和地点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2021·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将于下个月开展“探索太空”主题活动周。你校交换生Jim对太空科学非常感兴趣，请你给Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 主题活动周的目的；
2. 主题活动周的内容。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2022·北京通州·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim得知由于疫情原因你在居家学习，对你表示关心，想了解你居家的学习、生活及疫情防护情况，请你给Jim回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢他的关心；
2.介绍你自己的情况；
3.建议他做好防护；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：疫情期间 epidemic period
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim要来中国留学，听说手机支付(mobile payment)在中国非常普通，在邮件中向你咨询生活中使用手机支付的情况。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 在哪些情况下可以使用手机支付；
2. 使用手机支付的感受。
要求：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、图画作文
6．（2020·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。记述你和同学们在新冠肺炎疫情期间，参加学校组织的“向奋战在战‘疫’一线的医护人员献爱心”（Show our gratitude and love to the medical staff）活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60.
提示词：新冠肺炎 COVID-19
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers because I love Chinese traditional culture so much that I can devote myself to serving the participants.
First of all, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Besides, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是属于申请信。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱：love→be fond of
致力于：devote→contribute
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
感激：appreciate→grateful
考虑：consider→think over
2.句式拓展
变换句式
原句：I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week.
拓展句：I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity, which will be held next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.( not only…but also引导的倒装句，现在分词作结果状语)
2．Dear Jim,
How is it going Knowing that you are enthusiastic about volunteering job, I can’t wait to tell you some fabulous news. Our school will be holding the annual sports meeting next Friday. Now we are in need of 30 volunteers. I know you work well with others and have a strong sense of responsibility, so why don’t you join us! No prior experience is required of volunteers, but you should have enough time in your schedule.
There is a wide range of volunteer jobs for you to choose from, including conducting registration of all the athletes, taking photographs of memorable moments, writing and broadcasting real-time news reports, assisting the judges in recording the results and dealing with emergencies that may arise. You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise.
If you are interested, please sign up at the Student Union office from 12:30 to 13:30 this Friday. Looking forward to enjoying the sports meeting with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学校学生李华，校运会将于下周五举行，学生会需要向全校招募30名志愿者，你向你国际部朋友写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热衷于，对……充满热情：be enthusiastic about→be full of enthusiasm about
令人难以置信的：fabulous→unbelievable
组织：conduct→organize
帮助：assist→help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise.
拓展句：
You are free to apply for any volunteer job which is based on your own expertise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are enthusiastic about volunteering job, I can’t wait to tell you some fabulous news. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise. (运用了过去分词作定语)
3．Dear Jim,
Knowing that you’re interested in space science, I’m delighted to tell you that a Space Exploration Week will be held in our school next month. Welcome to join in it.
It aims to raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science. In the Space Exploration Week, students will take part in various activities, such as watching science fiction films on the theme, attending a lecture named “Going into Beautiful Space”, reading books about space discovery, visiting an exhibition about vast space and so on.
I believe it will enrich our e and join us! I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给给Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校将于下个月开展“探索太空”主题活动周。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
参加：take part in→participate in
激励：motivate→inspire
参观：visit→look around
2.拓展句式
简单句变复合句
原句：It aims to raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science.
拓展句：It is held so that it can raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you’re interested in space science, I’m delighted to tell you that a Space Exploration Week will be held in our school next month.（that引导宾语从句，knowing为现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
In the Space Exploration Week, students will take part in various activities, such as watching science fiction films on the theme, attending a lecture named “Going into Beautiful Space”, reading books about space discovery, visiting an exhibition about vast space and so on.（动名词短语作宾语）
4．Dear Jim,
Thank you for your concerning about us, and I am more than willing to tell my present life to you.
As I could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is devoted and helpful. And to my satisfaction, I can adapt myself to the new teaching method soon. Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class. Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses. Besides, I also participate in a variety of activities, such as playing ball games and doing voluntary work, from which I not only build up my strength but also gain much social experience. In a word, I am living a rich and colorful life.
Anyway, I still desire to express my thanks to you and sincerely hope you take protective measures to protect yourself against the virus all the time.
Wish you all the best in your enterprise.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim得知由于疫情原因你在居家学习，对你表示关心，想了解你居家的学习、生活及疫情防护情况，请你给Jim回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：return→go back
集中注意力于：concentrate one’s attention on→focus one’s attention on
此外：besides→what’s more
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses.
拓展句：Then after class, I am always so occupied with my schoolwork that I make rapid progress in the academic courses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is as devoted and helpful as you.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
5．Dear Jim,
I'm very excited to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to talk about the use of mobile payment here.
In present China, mobile payment, including Alipay and WeChat, is widely used. Rather than carrying cash or bank cards in their bags, people can simply go out with their smart phones and scan a QR code to pay for a meal, shop in supermarkets or take public transport. People even send ''lucky money'' (also known as ''red packet'') to their families and friends using WeChat.
The application of mobile payment has brought great convenience to our daily life. For one, it saves the time and trouble of giving changes in stores; for another, people needn't worry about bringing their wallets. Once you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can start using mobile payment immediately.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Jim写信，给他介绍手机支付在中国的使用情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 在哪些情况下可以使用手机支付；
2. 使用手机支付的感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be excited to do sth./ talk about/ tell sb. sth./ rather than/ bring convenient to/ worry about/ arrive in/ look forward to/ pay for
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm delighted to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to share something about the use of mobile payment here.
2. In present China, mobile payment, including Alipay and WeChat, is widely used.
3.Instead of carrying cash or bank cards in their bags, people can simply go out with their smart phones and scan a QR code to pay for a meal, shop in supermarkets or take public transport.
4. People even send ''lucky money'' (also known as ''red packet'') to their families and friends using WeChat, which adds to pleasure to everyone.
5. The application of mobile payment has brought great convenience to our daily life.
6. It saves the time and trouble of giving changes in stores.
7. People needn't worry about bringing their wallets.
8. The moment you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can begin using mobile payment immediately.
9. Looking forward to seeing you.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I'm very excited to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to talk about the use of mobile payment here.中that引导宾语从句；Once you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can start using mobile payment immediately.中once引导时间状语从句。
6． Last week, I received a WeChat message from our school, calling on all the senior students to show our gratitude and love to the medical staff who were fighting against COVID-19 in the front line.
Inspired by this idea, my classmates and I decided to make an MV for the doctors and nurses. Due to the epidemic situation, we discussed about the details on WeChat: some of us performed the song, some edited the video and others posted the MV online or on Microblog. To pay our tribute, we named it “Grateful heart”.
To our great surprise, our MV aroused wide attention on Microblog. We received tons of likes, meanwhile, the mv was shared over ten thousand times! Beyond our expectations, we even received messages from front-line medical staff. Doctor Zhang and nurse Zhao saw our video and thanked us for our support. As students, though our contribution is limited in the fight against the virus, we felt extremely proud that our small act could send warm to the staff.
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇看图作文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。
【详解】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。记述你和同学们在新冠肺炎疫情期间，参加学校组织的“向奋战在战‘疫’一线的医护人员献爱心”（Show our gratitude and love to the medical staff）活动的全过程。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时进行写作。一定要看懂图片内容，准确表述图片描述的内容，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于对图片内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Last week, I received a WeChat message from our school, calling on all the senior students to show our gratitude and love to the medical staff who were fighting against COVID-19 in the front line.定语从句的运用。As students, though our contribution is limited in the fight against the virus, we felt extremely proud that our small act could send warm to the staff. 宾语从句的运用。
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一、申请信
1．（2022·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 希望批准。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2021·北京通州·潞河中学校考三模）假设你是红星中学校学生李华。校运会将于下周五举行，学生会需要向全校招募30名志愿者。请你给国际部好友Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 对志愿者的要求；
2. 志愿者工作内容；
3. 报名时间和地点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2021·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将于下个月开展“探索太空”主题活动周。你校交换生Jim对太空科学非常感兴趣，请你给Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 主题活动周的目的；
2. 主题活动周的内容。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2022·北京通州·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim得知由于疫情原因你在居家学习，对你表示关心，想了解你居家的学习、生活及疫情防护情况，请你给Jim回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢他的关心；
2.介绍你自己的情况；
3.建议他做好防护；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：疫情期间 epidemic period
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim要来中国留学，听说手机支付(mobile payment)在中国非常普通，在邮件中向你咨询生活中使用手机支付的情况。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 在哪些情况下可以使用手机支付；
2. 使用手机支付的感受。
要求：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、图画作文
6．（2020·北京通州·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。记述你和同学们在新冠肺炎疫情期间，参加学校组织的“向奋战在战‘疫’一线的医护人员献爱心”（Show our gratitude and love to the medical staff）活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60.
提示词：新冠肺炎 COVID-19
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers because I love Chinese traditional culture so much that I can devote myself to serving the participants.
First of all, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Besides, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是属于申请信。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱：love→be fond of
致力于：devote→contribute
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
感激：appreciate→grateful
考虑：consider→think over
2.句式拓展
变换句式
原句：I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity to be held next week.
拓展句：I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the “Chinese traditional culture into the campus” activity, which will be held next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.( not only…but also引导的倒装句，现在分词作结果状语)
2．Dear Jim,
How is it going Knowing that you are enthusiastic about volunteering job, I can’t wait to tell you some fabulous news. Our school will be holding the annual sports meeting next Friday. Now we are in need of 30 volunteers. I know you work well with others and have a strong sense of responsibility, so why don’t you join us! No prior experience is required of volunteers, but you should have enough time in your schedule.
There is a wide range of volunteer jobs for you to choose from, including conducting registration of all the athletes, taking photographs of memorable moments, writing and broadcasting real-time news reports, assisting the judges in recording the results and dealing with emergencies that may arise. You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise.
If you are interested, please sign up at the Student Union office from 12:30 to 13:30 this Friday. Looking forward to enjoying the sports meeting with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学校学生李华，校运会将于下周五举行，学生会需要向全校招募30名志愿者，你向你国际部朋友写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热衷于，对……充满热情：be enthusiastic about→be full of enthusiasm about
令人难以置信的：fabulous→unbelievable
组织：conduct→organize
帮助：assist→help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise.
拓展句：
You are free to apply for any volunteer job which is based on your own expertise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are enthusiastic about volunteering job, I can’t wait to tell you some fabulous news. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] You are free to apply for any volunteer job based on your own expertise. (运用了过去分词作定语)
3．Dear Jim,
Knowing that you’re interested in space science, I’m delighted to tell you that a Space Exploration Week will be held in our school next month. Welcome to join in it.
It aims to raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science. In the Space Exploration Week, students will take part in various activities, such as watching science fiction films on the theme, attending a lecture named “Going into Beautiful Space”, reading books about space discovery, visiting an exhibition about vast space and so on.
I believe it will enrich our e and join us! I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给给Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校将于下个月开展“探索太空”主题活动周。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
参加：take part in→participate in
激励：motivate→inspire
参观：visit→look around
2.拓展句式
简单句变复合句
原句：It aims to raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science.
拓展句：It is held so that it can raise the students’ awareness of exploring space and motivate students to love science.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you’re interested in space science, I’m delighted to tell you that a Space Exploration Week will be held in our school next month.（that引导宾语从句，knowing为现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
In the Space Exploration Week, students will take part in various activities, such as watching science fiction films on the theme, attending a lecture named “Going into Beautiful Space”, reading books about space discovery, visiting an exhibition about vast space and so on.（动名词短语作宾语）
4．Dear Jim,
Thank you for your concerning about us, and I am more than willing to tell my present life to you.
As I could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is devoted and helpful. And to my satisfaction, I can adapt myself to the new teaching method soon. Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class. Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses. Besides, I also participate in a variety of activities, such as playing ball games and doing voluntary work, from which I not only build up my strength but also gain much social experience. In a word, I am living a rich and colorful life.
Anyway, I still desire to express my thanks to you and sincerely hope you take protective measures to protect yourself against the virus all the time.
Wish you all the best in your enterprise.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim得知由于疫情原因你在居家学习，对你表示关心，想了解你居家的学习、生活及疫情防护情况，请你给Jim回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：return→go back
集中注意力于：concentrate one’s attention on→focus one’s attention on
此外：besides→what’s more
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then after class, I am always occupied with my schoolwork and make rapid progress in the academic courses.
拓展句：Then after class, I am always so occupied with my schoolwork that I make rapid progress in the academic courses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I could not return to our school because of the Covid-19, we have a substitute teacher, who is as devoted and helpful as you.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Every day, I concentrate my attention on what is taught in class.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
5．Dear Jim,
I'm very excited to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to talk about the use of mobile payment here.
In present China, mobile payment, including Alipay and WeChat, is widely used. Rather than carrying cash or bank cards in their bags, people can simply go out with their smart phones and scan a QR code to pay for a meal, shop in supermarkets or take public transport. People even send ''lucky money'' (also known as ''red packet'') to their families and friends using WeChat.
The application of mobile payment has brought great convenience to our daily life. For one, it saves the time and trouble of giving changes in stores; for another, people needn't worry about bringing their wallets. Once you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can start using mobile payment immediately.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Jim写信，给他介绍手机支付在中国的使用情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 在哪些情况下可以使用手机支付；
2. 使用手机支付的感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be excited to do sth./ talk about/ tell sb. sth./ rather than/ bring convenient to/ worry about/ arrive in/ look forward to/ pay for
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm delighted to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to share something about the use of mobile payment here.
2. In present China, mobile payment, including Alipay and WeChat, is widely used.
3.Instead of carrying cash or bank cards in their bags, people can simply go out with their smart phones and scan a QR code to pay for a meal, shop in supermarkets or take public transport.
4. People even send ''lucky money'' (also known as ''red packet'') to their families and friends using WeChat, which adds to pleasure to everyone.
5. The application of mobile payment has brought great convenience to our daily life.
6. It saves the time and trouble of giving changes in stores.
7. People needn't worry about bringing their wallets.
8. The moment you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can begin using mobile payment immediately.
9. Looking forward to seeing you.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I'm very excited to hear that you are coming to study in China and I'm happy to talk about the use of mobile payment here.中that引导宾语从句；Once you've arrived in China, I'll help you link a bank card to your phone and you can start using mobile payment immediately.中once引导时间状语从句。
6． Last week, I received a WeChat message from our school, calling on all the senior students to show our gratitude and love to the medical staff who were fighting against COVID-19 in the front line.
Inspired by this idea, my classmates and I decided to make an MV for the doctors and nurses. Due to the epidemic situation, we discussed about the details on WeChat: some of us performed the song, some edited the video and others posted the MV online or on Microblog. To pay our tribute, we named it “Grateful heart”.
To our great surprise, our MV aroused wide attention on Microblog. We received tons of likes, meanwhile, the mv was shared over ten thousand times! Beyond our expectations, we even received messages from front-line medical staff. Doctor Zhang and nurse Zhao saw our video and thanked us for our support. As students, though our contribution is limited in the fight against the virus, we felt extremely proud that our small act could send warm to the staff.
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇看图作文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。
【详解】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇短文，向“英语园地”投稿。记述你和同学们在新冠肺炎疫情期间，参加学校组织的“向奋战在战‘疫’一线的医护人员献爱心”（Show our gratitude and love to the medical staff）活动的全过程。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时进行写作。一定要看懂图片内容，准确表述图片描述的内容，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于对图片内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Last week, I received a WeChat message from our school, calling on all the senior students to show our gratitude and love to the medical staff who were fighting against COVID-19 in the front line.定语从句的运用。As students, though our contribution is limited in the fight against the virus, we felt extremely proud that our small act could send warm to the staff. 宾语从句的运用。
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