上海市黄浦区四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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上海市黄浦区四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生李明。临近毕业，你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创产品义卖活动，已在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含：
1.提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议；
2.给出你的理由。
校园文创产品义卖活动方案 时间：2022年7月11日（周一）12:00—13:00 地点：学校操场 拟售文创产品：明信片、帽子、书签、笔记本等
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2．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校图书馆正在改造，拟添置打印机、扫描仪和咖啡机这三项设备中的一项，并打算购买一些装饰物品来美化环境，目前学生会在广泛征求意见。假设你是该校学生王佳，请给学生会发封邮件，给出你的建议，内容须包括：
● 你建议图书馆添置的设备及理由（三选一）；
● 你建议图书馆购买的装饰物品及理由（两件）。
3．（2021·上海·统考一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三张华，在某英语报上看到一则报道，说某偏远山区的贫困村庄盛产红茶，但由于交通不便、信息不畅，导致销售不利，影响了村民的收入。现号召广大读者出谋策划。请你写一封信给英语报。在信中，你必须：
1. 就如何帮助该村庄销售茶叶、脱贫致富提出建议；
2. 说明你的理由。
4．（2020·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李明，你校正在进行高三年级的课程微调，准备将周三下午的第四节课设置为“艺术欣赏类课程(artappreciation)”或者“学科拓展类课程(subject expansion)”，现广泛征求高三同学的意见。请发一封邮件至校长信箱（邮件中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名），你的邮件内容需包括：
1. 你建议校方设置以上两类课程中的哪一类；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你希望此类课程包含哪些内容。
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二、其他应用文
5．（2022·上海黄浦·统考一模）假设你是明启中学学生李华，学校正在征求学生对云课堂的感受和建议。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱， 你的邮件内容须包括：
1.详细描述一节云课堂以及你的感受；
2.简单阐述你对云课堂的态度和建议。
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6．（2020·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校学生会正开展主题为“The first job I want to take”的英语征文比赛，请你撰文参加（文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的征文内容需包括：
1.离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；
2.你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。
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三、图画作文
7．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请简单描绘图片内容，并用你生活中的一个经历来具体说明。你的文章必须包括：
1） 对图片的简单描述；
2） 对个人经历的具体描写；
3） 你当时的感受或想法。
四、概要写作
8．（2022·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
The risk of pre-schooling
“Young children learning to read is one of the most important things primary education does. It’s fundamental to children making progress in life,” says Dominic Wyse, a professor of primary education at University College London, in the UK. “While learning literacy is vital to childern, the way we teach it really matters.”
In a 2022 report, he states that English school system’s intense focus on phonics – a method that involves matching the sound of a spoken word or letter, with individual written letters, through a process called “sounding out” – could be failing some children. A reason for this is that the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts. For example, the tests may ask pupils to “sound out” and spell nonsense words, to prevent them from simply guessing, or recognising familiar words. Since nonsense words are not meaningful language, children may find the task difficult and puzzling. It doesn’t end up being meaningful, it ends up being memorising rather than understanding context.
Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools, several studies now show. Early education can however have a positive impact on social development – which in turn feeds into the likelihood of graduation from school and university as well as being associated with lower crime rates. In short, attending preschool can have positive effects on later achievement in life, but not necessary on academic skills.
Too much academic pressure may even cause problems in the long run. A study published in January 2022 suggested that those who attended a preschool with a strong academic emphasis, showed lower academic achievements a few years later, compared to those who had not gained a place.
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9．（2022·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Teamwork Doubles the Strength
Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.
As individuals, we possess diverse talents, strengths, weaknesses and experiences. A team is like a blanket that weaves what each of us possesses, resulting in an end product that is diverse yet similar. As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.
Take Leicester City, for example. It won the Premier League in 2016, to the disbelief of many soccer fans. Leicester City, previously regarded as the underdog in the League, displayed surprisingly impressive teamwork that led to its unbelievable victory in soccer history.
Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame. When work is distributed and each of us in a team specializes in specific tasks, we can expect greater job satisfaction.
And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. Team members learn from more experienced members who may offer deeper insights and perspectives. Newer members may also contribute new and brave ideas. Besides encouraging the sharing of knowledge and experiences, teamwork also develops soft skills like communication and interpersonal skills. We learn to respect differences in working styles and opinions, and develop trust when working with others.
Some may think that working in isolation is more efficient since more time is taken when cooperating with others. For more talented individuals, working alone means being the star of a project — there’s no need to share the success or glory with others. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.
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10．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
How the smartphone affected teens
Some parents might worry about their teens spending so much time on their phones because it represents a complete departure from how they spent their own adolescence. But spending this much time on screens is not just different—in many ways, it’s actually worse.
Spending less time with friends means less time to develop social skills. A 2014 study found that sixth graders who spent just five days at a camp without using screens ended the time better at reading emotions on others’ faces, suggesting that teens’ screen-filled lives might cause their social skills to decline.
In addition, teens using smartphones read books, magazines and newspapers much less than previous generations did as teens: In the annual Monitoring the Future survey, the percentage of high school seniors who read a non-required book or magazine nearly every day dropped from 60 percent in 1980 to only 16 percent in 2015. College teachers tell me that students have more trouble reading longer text passages, and rarely read the required textbooks.
This isn’t to say that teens who use smartphones don’t have a lot going for them. They are physically safer and more tolerant than previous generations were. They also seem to have more realistic expectations than their parents did at the same age. But the smartphone threatens to disturb them before they even get started.
To be clear, moderate smartphone use—up to an hour a day—is not linked to mental health issues. However, most teens are on their phones much more than that.
Somewhat to my surprise, the teens I interviewed said they would rather see their friends in person than communicate with them using their phones. Parents used to worry about their teens spending too much time with their friends—they were a distraction, a bad influence, a waste of time. But it might be just what teens need.
11．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Moustache（胡子） for Cash
“Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries including the UK, US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends, family and colleagues, with the money going to cancer charities.
The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003, when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for cancer, which is seen as distasteful by some males. A year later, the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation, asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts, and raised a massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects. With thanks most likely to social media, Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide, having raised over ￡440 million since 2004. The effects of the fundraising are wide-reaching, which had made a significant discovery in the treatment of cancer.
The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup, or perhaps being raised in a culture of “tough it out”, has led some males to neglect their health, which may mean it could be too late if something potentially deadly did develop. However, Movember is helping to break down the shame of male health by making it more accessible, meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors. They found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaigns just don’t – with a sort of blokey① jokiness.
① blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men , especially men enjoying themselves in a group.
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12．（2021·上海·统考一模）Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Singapore's Information Technology Strategy
Singapore's information technology strategy rests on two major legs. The first leg is world-class basic facilities. Being a city-state, it is relatively easy to connect every home, office and hotel room. Our objective is to provide broad-band everywhere, either wired or wireless. We will make it a readily available utility like water, electricity, gas and telephone. We are well on our way there. We now require, by regulation, every new home to be equipped with broad-band in the same way as it is required to have water and electricity.
The second leg is the education of our entire population in IT (information technology). Like reading, writing and arithmetic, computers are best learnt when we are young. Today's children can click the mouse faster than we can blink. In many countries, children of middle-class families have no difficulty with this new technology. But, without special effort, there is a danger that children of poorer families will miss out on the opportunity to learn IT. Like the piano and violin, one can still learn the computer as an adult. But rarely does one acquire the same facility. The strategy in Singapore is therefore to teach information technology to every child regardless of his family background. The Education Ministry now has a multi-billion dollar programme to provide one computer for every 2 schoolchildren in Singapore from first grade onwards. Every teacher will have a notebook.
Most Singaporeans now understand the importance of IT, if not for themselves, at least for their children and grandchildren. Over 40% of households in Singapore now own PCs. Over one-third of households in Singapore already enjoy access to Internet. What we want is for every Singaporean to be computer literate so that he can function effectively in any bank, factory or restaurant, just as one would expect an employee to be able to read, write and count. An employer in Singapore in the future should not have to worry that his employee does not now how to use a computer or the Internet.
13．（2020·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Does your memory fail as you age
I’m 62 years old. Like many of my friends, I forget names that I used to be able to recall effortlessly. When packing my suitcase for a trip. I walk to the bedroom and by the time I get there, I don’t remember what I came for. And yet my long-term memories are perfect. I remember the names of my third-grade classmates, the first record album I bought, my wedding day.
This is widely understood to be a classic problem of aging. But the problem is not necessarily age-related I’ve been teaching undergraduates for my entire career and I can prove that even 20-year-olds make short-term memory errors — loads of them. They walk into the wrong classroom; they show up to exams without the required No. 2 pencil; they forget something I just said two minutes before. These are similar to the kinds of things 70-year-olds do.
The relevant difference is not age but rather how we describe these events, the stories we tell ourselves about them. Twenty-year-olds don’t think, “Oh dear, this must be early-onset Alzheimer (早老性痴呆症).” They think, “I really need to get more than four hours of sleep.” The 70-year-olds observe these same events and worry about their brain health. This is to say that every error of short-term memory doesn’t necessarily indicate a biological disorder.
So how do we account for our subjective experience that older adults seem to search for words and names with difficulty First, there is a generalized cognitive (认知的) slowing with age-but given a little more time, older adults perform just fine. Second, older adults have to search through more memories than younger adults to find the fact or piece of information they’re looking for. Your brain becomes crowded with memories and information. It’s not that you can’t remember — you can — it’s just that there is so much more information to sort through.
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14．（2020·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Online “friends” – a threat to development
The impact of technology on the nature of our friendships has been a much - debated topic since the dramatic rise of social networks. Advances in mobile technology and social networking websites mean we spend more time online than ever before. It is therefore not surprising that so many psychologists, sociologists, and others are eager to give their thoughts on how this is impacting negatively on our society.
There is one element of social networking that is deeply worrying. We find ourselves in a hyper - connected world where people access social media day and night, excited to make announcements about the tiniest details of their lives. Research is starting to show that this culture is negatively affecting not our friendships but our character. Professor Larry D．Rosen says that young people who overuse social networking sites can become ineffective, and display anti -social behavior in their offline lives. But perhaps an even more disturbing effect is that one of our most basic emotions seems to be disappearing --empathy. This is the emotion that allows us to see the world from our friends’ points of view. Without it, we are far less able to connect and form meaningful adult relationships.
Professor Sherry Turkle suggests that people are no longer comfortable being alone. This is something confirmed by a study where 200 university students were asked to go without social media for 24 hours. Many admitted an addiction to their online social network; most complained that they felt cut off from family and friends. And yet being alone is a time when we self-reflect and get in touch with who we really are. It is only when we do this that we can make meaningful friendships with others.
These potential changes in our characters are rather alarming, so it is clear that we can’t neglect those negative impacts of social networks.
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1．Dear Students’Union
My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School. I’m more than happy to give you some advice on the Campus cultural and creative products charity sale.
First, I think the time of the charity sale should be between 5:00 and 6:00 on Monday, on July 11, 2022, when we will be free. Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each clas, where we will not be exposed to the sun. What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative.
Hope my suggestions can be of great help to you.
Yours
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写一封邮件就将组织的一次校园文创产品义卖活动提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
十分：more than→very
建议：advice→suggestions
只要：as long as→so long as
有空：be free→have free time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School.
拓展句：My name is Li Ming, who is a student of our Qiming Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each class, where we will not be exposed to the sun.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative .(运用了what 引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。)
2．Dear Student Union，
I’m Wang Jia, learning that our school wants to make some improvement in the school library. I am desperate to share some opinions.
When it comes to choosing facilities. I will recommend a coffee pared with adding the typing machine and the scanner, a coffee machine has evident advantages over them. On the one hand, there is a lack of coffee machine. On the other hand, a typing machine and a scanner can be easily accessible to us in our teachers’ office.
In terms of the inner decorations, without any doubt, green plants and paintings from our students and teachers can beautify our reading rooms. For one thing, green plants can provide fresh air. For another, paintings from our students and teachers showing our positive spiritual features, will enhance our artistic appreciation.
I hope you can consider my advice seriously. Thank you for sparing your time for reading my letter.
Yours,
Wang Jia
【分析】本片书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生作为高中生，对于学校图书馆添置设备及购买装饰，提出建议,完成一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
听说：knowing that/hearing that=learning that
想要：be intended to do/mean to do=want to do
设备、设施：equipment→facility
明显的：obvious/palpable→evident
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I will recommend a coffee pared with adding the typing machine and the scanner, a coffee machine has evident advantages over them.
拓展句：I will recommend a coffee machine which has evident advantages, compared with adding the typing machine and the scanner.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, paintings from our students and teachers showing our positive spiritual features, will enhance our artistic appreciation. (运用了现在分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] I hope you can consider my advice seriously. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear editor,
Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event, I feel sorry for them. Due to the inconvenience of transportation and information, it leads to poor sales in black tea and thus affects the income of the villagers. Now there is a call on our readers to give some suggestions. I understand the feeling and feel sympathetic to the villagers, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which will surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market. Besides, in terms of out-of-date information ways, the government should take effective measures to speed up creating information channels so that the villagers can get timely news about the products. In addition, as for the villagers, they should also make their own efforts to improve their knowledge on planting, which is beneficial to them to offer the market excellent and advanced goods.
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I sincerely hope the villagers can move out of poverty soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语报写封信，就报纸上提到的报道：某偏远山区的贫困村庄盛产红茶，但由于交通不便、信息不畅，导致销售不利，影响了村民的收入。谈谈自己的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，本文以一般现在时为主。
结构法：总分法。
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 就如何帮助该村庄销售茶叶、脱贫致富提出建议；
2. 说明你的理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
a remote mountain area，be rich in，encounter an unpleasant event，due to, inconvenience of transportation and information, leads to, affect the income of, build up well-designed transportation, take effective measures, in terms of, speed up, creating information channels, make their own efforts to, be beneficial to
第三步：连词成句
1. Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event.
2. Due to the inconvenience of transportation and information, it leads to poor sales in black tea and thus affects the income of the villagers.
3. Now there is a call on our readers to give some suggestions. I understand the feeling and feel sympathetic to the villagers, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
4. As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which will surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market.
5. In terms of out-of-date information ways, the government should take effective measures to speed up creating information channels so that the villagers can get timely news about the products.
6. As for the villagers, they should also make their own efforts to improve their knowledge on planting, which is beneficial to them to offer the market excellent and advanced goods.
7. I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I sincerely hope the villagers can move out of poverty soon.
第四步，连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表顺序关系：to start with
2.表递进补充关系：besides，in addition
3.表示个人观点：as far as I’m concerned
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event. 从报纸上得知，一个偏远山区的小村庄，盛产红茶，遭遇了一件不愉快的事件。having done…,为现在分词作状语; that从句为同位语从句，解释名词news; which之后的为非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2]
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which is surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market. 就我而言，首先，建立一个精心设计的交通系统是个更好的选择，它肯定会给村民们提供足够的便利，只要市场上有需求，村民们就可以把他们的产品送到村外。it为形式主语，指代其后的不定式短语“to build up…”；which引导非限制性定语从句。
4．Dear headmaster,
I am Liming, a student from class one, grade three. I am very glad to hear that our school is planning to set the fourth lesson on Wednesday afternoon as art appreciation or subject expansion. I hope that subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be provided. As is known to all, for high school seniors, the college entrance examination is the top priority, and these courses will help us prepare for it. For example, Appreciation of ancient poetry in sinology is helpful to our Chinese ancient poetry reading and writing, and having a good command of British and American culture can improve our English reading.
In view of the reasons mentioned above, I hope subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be offered. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours truly,
Liming
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是李明，你校正在进行高三年级的课程微调，准备将周三下午的第四节课设置为“艺术欣赏类课程”或者“学科拓展类课程”，现广泛征求高三同学的意见。请发一封邮件至校长信箱（邮件中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名），你的邮件内容需包括：1. 你建议校方设置以上两类课程中的哪一类；2. 你的理由；3. 你希望此类课程包含哪些内容。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； art appreciation（艺术欣赏类课程），subject expansion（学科拓展类课程），sinology（国学），helpful（有帮助的）， British and American culture（英美文化），top priority（头等大事）及college entrance examination（高考）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有such as（例如），prepare for（准备）， in view of (鉴于)，have a good command of（精通、熟练掌握）以及take sth into consideration（将……纳入考虑之中），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, for high school seniors, the college entrance examination is the top priority, and these courses will help us prepare for it.”，宾语从句“I am very glad to hear that our school is planning to set the fourth lesson on Wednesday afternoon as art appreciation or subject expansion.”及“In view of the reasons mentioned above, I hope subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be offered.”，形式宾语“I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.”，非谓语动词“having a good command of British and American culture can improve our English reading.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
5．Dear sir,
Hearing that the school is asking students for their feelings and suggestions on cloud classes. Here are some of my feelings and suggestions.
Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school. Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home. When the course began, I could clearly see the teacher on the computer screen, as well as his carefully prepared courseware for us. I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.
Cloud Classroom provides a good solution for students who cannot be taught face to face by teachers for some reasons. However, cloud classes can’t let students and teachers interact well, and the teacher can’t know whether students learn well. These need to be improved.
I hope these suggestions can help the school improve the cloud classroom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生发送一封邮件至校长信箱，阐述你对云课堂的感受和建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
因此：therefore→as a result
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth.
改善：improve→perfect/better
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school.
拓展句：Because the epidemic broke out, we can’t go to school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．The first job I want to take after graduation from college is a doctor. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, the new coronavirus has brought suffering and misfortune to many people all over the world, which gives me the idea of being a doctor. I hope to contribute to people’s health in the future. Secondly, I am a person who likes to challenge myself. Although it is very hard to study medicine, I like the challenges it brings and make great efforts to study it well. Thirdly, as a doctor, I can eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others, which will bring me a sense of accomplishment.
In summary, being a doctor can realize my dream. I will study hard, enter a good medical university, continue to practice and strive to become an excellent doctor.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇征文。你校学生会正开展主题为“The first job I want to take”的英语征文比赛，请你撰文参加。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；2.你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：The first job I want to take after graduation from college is a doctor. The reasons are as follows. the new coronavirus，contribute to people’s health in the future，challenge myself，make great efforts，eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others，a sense of accomplishment，Being a doctor can realize my dream. study hard，enter a good medical university， strive to become an excellent doctor。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：Firstly, the new coronavirus has brought suffering and misfortune to many people all over the world, which gives me the idea of being a doctor. Thirdly, as a doctor, I can eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others, which will bring me a sense of accomplishment.这两句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；Although it is very hard to study medicine, I like the challenges it brings and make great efforts to study it well. 这句话运用了although引导的让步状语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： as follows，contribute to，make great efforts，realize my dream。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.
To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.
The picture sets me thinking of my experience. While I was in the high school, I was fond of drawing very much. I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.
Now I work in a company and got a well-paid work, but I don't live a happy life. This is not the life that I want to live. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生简单描绘图片内容，并用生活中的一个经历来具体说明。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：图画作文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 对图片的简单描述；
2. 对个人经历的具体描写；
3. 你当时的感受或想法。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a pair of; to one’s astonishment; think of; be fond of; be admitted to; in order to; live up to; give up; realize one’s dream
第三步：连词成句
1. As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.
2. To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.
3. The picture sets me thinking of my experience.
4. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university.
5. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.
6. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.这句话运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句；
[高分句型2] I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；
[高分句型3] Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.这句话运用了虚拟语气。
8．Learning literacy is important for children, and how they learn it counts. A study shows too much phonics learning negatively affects children because passing the tests only requires meaningless pronunciation and spelling instead of understanding. Although pre-schooling does good to the development of society, studies also show too much of it has nothing to do with later academic achievements.
【导语】本文是一篇议论文。文章从英国所做的一项学前儿童的自然拼读实验得出结论：参加强化学前教育的孩子在以后的学习能力上和没有参加学前教育的孩子相差无几，相反太多的学业压力会对孩子未来的学术成就产生消极影响。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①While learning literacy is vital to children, the way we teach it really matters.
②In a 2022 report, Dominic Wyse states that English school system’s intense focus on phonics could be failing some children. Because the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts.
③Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools.
④People who attended a preschool with a strong academic emphasis showed lower academic achievements a few years later.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Though learning literacy is important to children, the way to teach really matters.
There will be many problems in the long run caused by too much academic pressure.
In short, attending preschool which is necessary on academic skills can have positive effects on later achievement in life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]：A reason for this is that the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts. (运用了that引导的表语从句，that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]：Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools, several studies now show.(运用了who引导定语从句)
9．Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons. Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success. Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks. Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential. (58 words)
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，团队合作对任何团队达成目标都很重要，原因有三。第一，凝聚人才，解决问题，激发创新和成功。其次，团队合作可以提高效率和生产力，因为他们分担了工作量，减轻了压力，完成了特定的任务。最后，团队合作增加了经验丰富的成员和新人的学习机会，鼓励分享和最大化团队的潜力。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.
②As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.
③Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame.
④And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons.
Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success.
Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks.
Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success.运用动名词作主语对原文第二段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential.用现在分词作状语对最后两段进行了概括，表达非常高级。
10．Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry. Studies found using smartphones might prevent teens developing social skills and reading abilities. But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems. Actually, teens prefer face-to-face communication with their friends. (58 words)
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，青少年花太多时间在智能手机上影响了他们的发展，引起了父母的担心。研究发现使用智能手机可能会阻碍青少年发展社交技能和阅读能力。但正确使用智能手机的青少年在身体上更安全，更宽容，更现实，适度使用智能手机与心理健康问题没有关系。实际上，青少年更喜欢与朋友面对面的交流。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Some parents might worry about their teens spending so much time on their phones because it represents a complete departure from how they spent their own adolescence.
②A 2014 study found that sixth graders who spent just five days at a camp without using screens ended the time better at reading emotions on others’ faces, suggesting that teens’ screen-filled lives might cause their social skills to decline.
③They are physically safer and more tolerant than previous generations were. They also seem to have more realistic expectations than their parents did at the same age.
④To be clear, moderate smartphone use—up to an hour a day—is not linked to mental health issues.
⑤Somewhat to my surprise, the teens I interviewed said they would rather see their friends in person than communicate with them using their phones.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、5三个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry.
Studies found using smartphones might prevent teens developing social skills and reading abilities.
But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems.
Actually, teens prefer face-to-face communication with their friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry.运用主语部分的复合结构将第一段中青少年玩手机的现象表达了出来，结合谓语affect和宾语development，以及并列句中谓语cause和宾语parents' worry完整地概括出第一段内容。其中动名词的复合结构和并列谓语表达高级。
[高分句型2]：But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems. 用并列连词and连接两个句子对第四、五段进行了概括，言简意赅。
11．Summary writing (the main points):
1. Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.
2. In 2003, two men started Movember. In 2004, the foundation was set up. Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money.
3. Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了“Movember”是一项男人留胡子日，是为了给癌症慈善机构捐款的一年一度的活动。这个活动筹集了大量资金。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①“Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money, with the money going to cancer charities.
②The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003.
③In 2004, the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation.
④Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide.
⑤They use a sort of blokey jokiness to appeal to men.
2.缜密构思
将第1、5两个要点进行重组，将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合。
3.归纳总结
1. Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.
2. In 2003, two men started Movember. In 2004, the foundation was set up. Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money.
3. Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.
【点睛】[高分句型1] ：Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.运用过去分词作定语。
[高分句型2]：Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.运用不定式作定语。
12．Singapore’s information technology strategy depends on two major ways. One is to construct world-class basic facilities by providing broad-band everywhere. The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers. The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了新加坡信息科技战略的两个方面。一方面是通过提供宽带，建立世界级的基础设施；另一方面是对全体人民进行信息技术教育。而且，大多数新加坡人民已经明白了信息技术的重要性。
【详解】1 要点摘录
1) Singapore's information technology strategy rests on two major legs.
2) The first leg is world-class basic facilities.
3) Our objective is to provide broad-band everywhere, either wired or wireless.
4) The second leg is the education of our entire population in IT (information technology).
5) The strategy in Singapore is therefore to teach information technology to every child regardless of his family background.
6) Most Singaporeans now understand the importance of IT.
7) An employer in Singapore in the future should not have to worry that his employee does not now how to use a computer or the Internet.
2.缜密构思
将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点进行整合，将第6、7两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
One is to construct world-class basic facilities by providing broad-band everywhere.
The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers.
The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers.运用让步状语从句，整合了两个句子，对原文第二段进行了概括。其中whatever引导的让步状语从句、动词ing作伴随状语等表达高级。
[高分句型2]：The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.and引导的并列句。
13．The author thinks that short-term memory failure, which both old and young suffer from, isn’t necessarily age-related, though different age groups find different reasons for it. The old seem to have a poorer short-term memory because of natural cognitive slowing and too much information to search for.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述老年人和年轻人都会患有的短期记忆障碍，并不一定与年龄有关。
【详解】符合概要写作的常规思路：
总结文章的中心思想，并且主要说明了老年人短期记忆较差的原因。用到的词汇有：short-term memory failure, because of, search for等；并且用到了非限制性定语从句：The author thinks that short-term memory failure, which both old and young suffer from, isn't necessarily age-related, though different age groups find different reasons for it.使结构更加严谨。
对文章的中心思想分析的透彻，概括全面，结构严谨。
【点睛】首先，该考生对文章理解比较准确，涵盖了全部要点。其次，准确的使用了语法结构和词汇，文中几乎没有语法问题。再次，完全使用自己的语言，语言流畅，结构严谨。并且文章还用到了长难句，显示出很高的英语水平。
14．Researchers say social media has a huge negative impact on us. First, excessive use of social media can cause anti -social behavior and the disappearance of empathy. Besides, social media makes people dislike solitude which can make us reflect on ourselves and touch the real self. In a word, we must pay attention to the negative impact of social media.
【分析】本篇书面表达是概要写作，要求概括研究人员称社交媒体对我们有很大的负面影响，首先，过度使用社交媒体会导致反社会行为和移情的消失。此外，社交媒体使人们不喜欢独处，这会使我们反省自己，接触真实的自我，我们必须重视社交媒体的负面影响。注意词数要求和使用自己的语言。
【详解】1、写之前，需要认真仔细地读几遍原文材料，让理解更深刻。
2、遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要部分的主题、标题、细节进行概括，全面清晰地表明原文信息。
3、给摘要起一个好标题，比如：可以采用文中的主题句。
4、尽量使用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，篇幅控制在原文的三分之一或四分之一长。
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一、建议信
1．（2022·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生李明。临近毕业，你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创产品义卖活动，已在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含：
1.提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议；
2.给出你的理由。
校园文创产品义卖活动方案 时间：2022年7月11日（周一）12:00—13:00 地点：学校操场 拟售文创产品：明信片、帽子、书签、笔记本等
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2．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
学校图书馆正在改造，拟添置打印机、扫描仪和咖啡机这三项设备中的一项，并打算购买一些装饰物品来美化环境，目前学生会在广泛征求意见。假设你是该校学生王佳，请给学生会发封邮件，给出你的建议，内容须包括：
● 你建议图书馆添置的设备及理由（三选一）；
● 你建议图书馆购买的装饰物品及理由（两件）。
3．（2021·上海·统考一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三张华，在某英语报上看到一则报道，说某偏远山区的贫困村庄盛产红茶，但由于交通不便、信息不畅，导致销售不利，影响了村民的收入。现号召广大读者出谋策划。请你写一封信给英语报。在信中，你必须：
1. 就如何帮助该村庄销售茶叶、脱贫致富提出建议；
2. 说明你的理由。
4．（2020·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李明，你校正在进行高三年级的课程微调，准备将周三下午的第四节课设置为“艺术欣赏类课程(artappreciation)”或者“学科拓展类课程(subject expansion)”，现广泛征求高三同学的意见。请发一封邮件至校长信箱（邮件中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名），你的邮件内容需包括：
1. 你建议校方设置以上两类课程中的哪一类；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你希望此类课程包含哪些内容。
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二、其他应用文
5．（2022·上海黄浦·统考一模）假设你是明启中学学生李华，学校正在征求学生对云课堂的感受和建议。请发送一封邮件至校长信箱， 你的邮件内容须包括：
1.详细描述一节云课堂以及你的感受；
2.简单阐述你对云课堂的态度和建议。
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6．（2020·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校学生会正开展主题为“The first job I want to take”的英语征文比赛，请你撰文参加（文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的征文内容需包括：
1.离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；
2.你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。
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三、图画作文
7．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
请简单描绘图片内容，并用你生活中的一个经历来具体说明。你的文章必须包括：
1） 对图片的简单描述；
2） 对个人经历的具体描写；
3） 你当时的感受或想法。
四、概要写作
8．（2022·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
The risk of pre-schooling
“Young children learning to read is one of the most important things primary education does. It’s fundamental to children making progress in life,” says Dominic Wyse, a professor of primary education at University College London, in the UK. “While learning literacy is vital to childern, the way we teach it really matters.”
In a 2022 report, he states that English school system’s intense focus on phonics – a method that involves matching the sound of a spoken word or letter, with individual written letters, through a process called “sounding out” – could be failing some children. A reason for this is that the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts. For example, the tests may ask pupils to “sound out” and spell nonsense words, to prevent them from simply guessing, or recognising familiar words. Since nonsense words are not meaningful language, children may find the task difficult and puzzling. It doesn’t end up being meaningful, it ends up being memorising rather than understanding context.
Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools, several studies now show. Early education can however have a positive impact on social development – which in turn feeds into the likelihood of graduation from school and university as well as being associated with lower crime rates. In short, attending preschool can have positive effects on later achievement in life, but not necessary on academic skills.
Too much academic pressure may even cause problems in the long run. A study published in January 2022 suggested that those who attended a preschool with a strong academic emphasis, showed lower academic achievements a few years later, compared to those who had not gained a place.
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9．（2022·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Teamwork Doubles the Strength
Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.
As individuals, we possess diverse talents, strengths, weaknesses and experiences. A team is like a blanket that weaves what each of us possesses, resulting in an end product that is diverse yet similar. As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.
Take Leicester City, for example. It won the Premier League in 2016, to the disbelief of many soccer fans. Leicester City, previously regarded as the underdog in the League, displayed surprisingly impressive teamwork that led to its unbelievable victory in soccer history.
Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame. When work is distributed and each of us in a team specializes in specific tasks, we can expect greater job satisfaction.
And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. Team members learn from more experienced members who may offer deeper insights and perspectives. Newer members may also contribute new and brave ideas. Besides encouraging the sharing of knowledge and experiences, teamwork also develops soft skills like communication and interpersonal skills. We learn to respect differences in working styles and opinions, and develop trust when working with others.
Some may think that working in isolation is more efficient since more time is taken when cooperating with others. For more talented individuals, working alone means being the star of a project — there’s no need to share the success or glory with others. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.
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10．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
How the smartphone affected teens
Some parents might worry about their teens spending so much time on their phones because it represents a complete departure from how they spent their own adolescence. But spending this much time on screens is not just different—in many ways, it’s actually worse.
Spending less time with friends means less time to develop social skills. A 2014 study found that sixth graders who spent just five days at a camp without using screens ended the time better at reading emotions on others’ faces, suggesting that teens’ screen-filled lives might cause their social skills to decline.
In addition, teens using smartphones read books, magazines and newspapers much less than previous generations did as teens: In the annual Monitoring the Future survey, the percentage of high school seniors who read a non-required book or magazine nearly every day dropped from 60 percent in 1980 to only 16 percent in 2015. College teachers tell me that students have more trouble reading longer text passages, and rarely read the required textbooks.
This isn’t to say that teens who use smartphones don’t have a lot going for them. They are physically safer and more tolerant than previous generations were. They also seem to have more realistic expectations than their parents did at the same age. But the smartphone threatens to disturb them before they even get started.
To be clear, moderate smartphone use—up to an hour a day—is not linked to mental health issues. However, most teens are on their phones much more than that.
Somewhat to my surprise, the teens I interviewed said they would rather see their friends in person than communicate with them using their phones. Parents used to worry about their teens spending too much time with their friends—they were a distraction, a bad influence, a waste of time. But it might be just what teens need.
11．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Moustache（胡子） for Cash
“Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries including the UK, US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends, family and colleagues, with the money going to cancer charities.
The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003, when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for cancer, which is seen as distasteful by some males. A year later, the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation, asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts, and raised a massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects. With thanks most likely to social media, Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide, having raised over ￡440 million since 2004. The effects of the fundraising are wide-reaching, which had made a significant discovery in the treatment of cancer.
The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup, or perhaps being raised in a culture of “tough it out”, has led some males to neglect their health, which may mean it could be too late if something potentially deadly did develop. However, Movember is helping to break down the shame of male health by making it more accessible, meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors. They found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaigns just don’t – with a sort of blokey① jokiness.
① blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men , especially men enjoying themselves in a group.
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12．（2021·上海·统考一模）Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Singapore's Information Technology Strategy
Singapore's information technology strategy rests on two major legs. The first leg is world-class basic facilities. Being a city-state, it is relatively easy to connect every home, office and hotel room. Our objective is to provide broad-band everywhere, either wired or wireless. We will make it a readily available utility like water, electricity, gas and telephone. We are well on our way there. We now require, by regulation, every new home to be equipped with broad-band in the same way as it is required to have water and electricity.
The second leg is the education of our entire population in IT (information technology). Like reading, writing and arithmetic, computers are best learnt when we are young. Today's children can click the mouse faster than we can blink. In many countries, children of middle-class families have no difficulty with this new technology. But, without special effort, there is a danger that children of poorer families will miss out on the opportunity to learn IT. Like the piano and violin, one can still learn the computer as an adult. But rarely does one acquire the same facility. The strategy in Singapore is therefore to teach information technology to every child regardless of his family background. The Education Ministry now has a multi-billion dollar programme to provide one computer for every 2 schoolchildren in Singapore from first grade onwards. Every teacher will have a notebook.
Most Singaporeans now understand the importance of IT, if not for themselves, at least for their children and grandchildren. Over 40% of households in Singapore now own PCs. Over one-third of households in Singapore already enjoy access to Internet. What we want is for every Singaporean to be computer literate so that he can function effectively in any bank, factory or restaurant, just as one would expect an employee to be able to read, write and count. An employer in Singapore in the future should not have to worry that his employee does not now how to use a computer or the Internet.
13．（2020·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Does your memory fail as you age
I’m 62 years old. Like many of my friends, I forget names that I used to be able to recall effortlessly. When packing my suitcase for a trip. I walk to the bedroom and by the time I get there, I don’t remember what I came for. And yet my long-term memories are perfect. I remember the names of my third-grade classmates, the first record album I bought, my wedding day.
This is widely understood to be a classic problem of aging. But the problem is not necessarily age-related I’ve been teaching undergraduates for my entire career and I can prove that even 20-year-olds make short-term memory errors — loads of them. They walk into the wrong classroom; they show up to exams without the required No. 2 pencil; they forget something I just said two minutes before. These are similar to the kinds of things 70-year-olds do.
The relevant difference is not age but rather how we describe these events, the stories we tell ourselves about them. Twenty-year-olds don’t think, “Oh dear, this must be early-onset Alzheimer (早老性痴呆症).” They think, “I really need to get more than four hours of sleep.” The 70-year-olds observe these same events and worry about their brain health. This is to say that every error of short-term memory doesn’t necessarily indicate a biological disorder.
So how do we account for our subjective experience that older adults seem to search for words and names with difficulty First, there is a generalized cognitive (认知的) slowing with age-but given a little more time, older adults perform just fine. Second, older adults have to search through more memories than younger adults to find the fact or piece of information they’re looking for. Your brain becomes crowded with memories and information. It’s not that you can’t remember — you can — it’s just that there is so much more information to sort through.
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14．（2020·上海黄浦·统考一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Online “friends” – a threat to development
The impact of technology on the nature of our friendships has been a much - debated topic since the dramatic rise of social networks. Advances in mobile technology and social networking websites mean we spend more time online than ever before. It is therefore not surprising that so many psychologists, sociologists, and others are eager to give their thoughts on how this is impacting negatively on our society.
There is one element of social networking that is deeply worrying. We find ourselves in a hyper - connected world where people access social media day and night, excited to make announcements about the tiniest details of their lives. Research is starting to show that this culture is negatively affecting not our friendships but our character. Professor Larry D．Rosen says that young people who overuse social networking sites can become ineffective, and display anti -social behavior in their offline lives. But perhaps an even more disturbing effect is that one of our most basic emotions seems to be disappearing --empathy. This is the emotion that allows us to see the world from our friends’ points of view. Without it, we are far less able to connect and form meaningful adult relationships.
Professor Sherry Turkle suggests that people are no longer comfortable being alone. This is something confirmed by a study where 200 university students were asked to go without social media for 24 hours. Many admitted an addiction to their online social network; most complained that they felt cut off from family and friends. And yet being alone is a time when we self-reflect and get in touch with who we really are. It is only when we do this that we can make meaningful friendships with others.
These potential changes in our characters are rather alarming, so it is clear that we can’t neglect those negative impacts of social networks.
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1．Dear Students’Union
My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School. I’m more than happy to give you some advice on the Campus cultural and creative products charity sale.
First, I think the time of the charity sale should be between 5:00 and 6:00 on Monday, on July 11, 2022, when we will be free. Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each clas, where we will not be exposed to the sun. What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative.
Hope my suggestions can be of great help to you.
Yours
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写一封邮件就将组织的一次校园文创产品义卖活动提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
十分：more than→very
建议：advice→suggestions
只要：as long as→so long as
有空：be free→have free time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Ming, a student of our Qiming Middle School.
拓展句：My name is Li Ming, who is a student of our Qiming Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, the place of the charity sale should be in each class, where we will not be exposed to the sun.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】What’s the most important is that we can sell anything as long as they are cultural and creative .(运用了what 引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。)
2．Dear Student Union，
I’m Wang Jia, learning that our school wants to make some improvement in the school library. I am desperate to share some opinions.
When it comes to choosing facilities. I will recommend a coffee pared with adding the typing machine and the scanner, a coffee machine has evident advantages over them. On the one hand, there is a lack of coffee machine. On the other hand, a typing machine and a scanner can be easily accessible to us in our teachers’ office.
In terms of the inner decorations, without any doubt, green plants and paintings from our students and teachers can beautify our reading rooms. For one thing, green plants can provide fresh air. For another, paintings from our students and teachers showing our positive spiritual features, will enhance our artistic appreciation.
I hope you can consider my advice seriously. Thank you for sparing your time for reading my letter.
Yours,
Wang Jia
【分析】本片书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生作为高中生，对于学校图书馆添置设备及购买装饰，提出建议,完成一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
听说：knowing that/hearing that=learning that
想要：be intended to do/mean to do=want to do
设备、设施：equipment→facility
明显的：obvious/palpable→evident
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I will recommend a coffee pared with adding the typing machine and the scanner, a coffee machine has evident advantages over them.
拓展句：I will recommend a coffee machine which has evident advantages, compared with adding the typing machine and the scanner.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, paintings from our students and teachers showing our positive spiritual features, will enhance our artistic appreciation. (运用了现在分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] I hope you can consider my advice seriously. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear editor,
Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event, I feel sorry for them. Due to the inconvenience of transportation and information, it leads to poor sales in black tea and thus affects the income of the villagers. Now there is a call on our readers to give some suggestions. I understand the feeling and feel sympathetic to the villagers, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which will surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market. Besides, in terms of out-of-date information ways, the government should take effective measures to speed up creating information channels so that the villagers can get timely news about the products. In addition, as for the villagers, they should also make their own efforts to improve their knowledge on planting, which is beneficial to them to offer the market excellent and advanced goods.
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I sincerely hope the villagers can move out of poverty soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语报写封信，就报纸上提到的报道：某偏远山区的贫困村庄盛产红茶，但由于交通不便、信息不畅，导致销售不利，影响了村民的收入。谈谈自己的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，本文以一般现在时为主。
结构法：总分法。
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 就如何帮助该村庄销售茶叶、脱贫致富提出建议；
2. 说明你的理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
a remote mountain area，be rich in，encounter an unpleasant event，due to, inconvenience of transportation and information, leads to, affect the income of, build up well-designed transportation, take effective measures, in terms of, speed up, creating information channels, make their own efforts to, be beneficial to
第三步：连词成句
1. Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event.
2. Due to the inconvenience of transportation and information, it leads to poor sales in black tea and thus affects the income of the villagers.
3. Now there is a call on our readers to give some suggestions. I understand the feeling and feel sympathetic to the villagers, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
4. As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which will surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market.
5. In terms of out-of-date information ways, the government should take effective measures to speed up creating information channels so that the villagers can get timely news about the products.
6. As for the villagers, they should also make their own efforts to improve their knowledge on planting, which is beneficial to them to offer the market excellent and advanced goods.
7. I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I sincerely hope the villagers can move out of poverty soon.
第四步，连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表顺序关系：to start with
2.表递进补充关系：besides，in addition
3.表示个人观点：as far as I’m concerned
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having read the news from the English Paper that a small village, lying in a remote mountain area, which is rich in black tea, is encountering an unpleasant event. 从报纸上得知，一个偏远山区的小村庄，盛产红茶，遭遇了一件不愉快的事件。having done…,为现在分词作状语; that从句为同位语从句，解释名词news; which之后的为非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2]
As far as I’m concerned, to start with, it’s a better choice to build up well-designed transportation, which is surely provide the villagers with enough convenience to deliver their products outside of the village so long as they are asked in the market. 就我而言，首先，建立一个精心设计的交通系统是个更好的选择，它肯定会给村民们提供足够的便利，只要市场上有需求，村民们就可以把他们的产品送到村外。it为形式主语，指代其后的不定式短语“to build up…”；which引导非限制性定语从句。
4．Dear headmaster,
I am Liming, a student from class one, grade three. I am very glad to hear that our school is planning to set the fourth lesson on Wednesday afternoon as art appreciation or subject expansion. I hope that subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be provided. As is known to all, for high school seniors, the college entrance examination is the top priority, and these courses will help us prepare for it. For example, Appreciation of ancient poetry in sinology is helpful to our Chinese ancient poetry reading and writing, and having a good command of British and American culture can improve our English reading.
In view of the reasons mentioned above, I hope subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be offered. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours truly,
Liming
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是李明，你校正在进行高三年级的课程微调，准备将周三下午的第四节课设置为“艺术欣赏类课程”或者“学科拓展类课程”，现广泛征求高三同学的意见。请发一封邮件至校长信箱（邮件中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名），你的邮件内容需包括：1. 你建议校方设置以上两类课程中的哪一类；2. 你的理由；3. 你希望此类课程包含哪些内容。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； art appreciation（艺术欣赏类课程），subject expansion（学科拓展类课程），sinology（国学），helpful（有帮助的）， British and American culture（英美文化），top priority（头等大事）及college entrance examination（高考）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有such as（例如），prepare for（准备）， in view of (鉴于)，have a good command of（精通、熟练掌握）以及take sth into consideration（将……纳入考虑之中），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, for high school seniors, the college entrance examination is the top priority, and these courses will help us prepare for it.”，宾语从句“I am very glad to hear that our school is planning to set the fourth lesson on Wednesday afternoon as art appreciation or subject expansion.”及“In view of the reasons mentioned above, I hope subject expansion courses such as sinology and British and American culture can be offered.”，形式宾语“I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.”，非谓语动词“having a good command of British and American culture can improve our English reading.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
5．Dear sir,
Hearing that the school is asking students for their feelings and suggestions on cloud classes. Here are some of my feelings and suggestions.
Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school. Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home. When the course began, I could clearly see the teacher on the computer screen, as well as his carefully prepared courseware for us. I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.
Cloud Classroom provides a good solution for students who cannot be taught face to face by teachers for some reasons. However, cloud classes can’t let students and teachers interact well, and the teacher can’t know whether students learn well. These need to be improved.
I hope these suggestions can help the school improve the cloud classroom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生发送一封邮件至校长信箱，阐述你对云课堂的感受和建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
因此：therefore→as a result
提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth.
改善：improve→perfect/better
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Because of the epidemic, we can’t go to school.
拓展句：Because the epidemic broke out, we can’t go to school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, the school provides students with cloud classes, so that we can not miss our studies even at home.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]I can hear the voice of the teacher very clearly through the headset, which is a feeling I can’t feel in the classroom.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．The first job I want to take after graduation from college is a doctor. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, the new coronavirus has brought suffering and misfortune to many people all over the world, which gives me the idea of being a doctor. I hope to contribute to people’s health in the future. Secondly, I am a person who likes to challenge myself. Although it is very hard to study medicine, I like the challenges it brings and make great efforts to study it well. Thirdly, as a doctor, I can eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others, which will bring me a sense of accomplishment.
In summary, being a doctor can realize my dream. I will study hard, enter a good medical university, continue to practice and strive to become an excellent doctor.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇征文。你校学生会正开展主题为“The first job I want to take”的英语征文比赛，请你撰文参加。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；2.你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：The first job I want to take after graduation from college is a doctor. The reasons are as follows. the new coronavirus，contribute to people’s health in the future，challenge myself，make great efforts，eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others，a sense of accomplishment，Being a doctor can realize my dream. study hard，enter a good medical university， strive to become an excellent doctor。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：Firstly, the new coronavirus has brought suffering and misfortune to many people all over the world, which gives me the idea of being a doctor. Thirdly, as a doctor, I can eliminate the pain and relieve the discomfort of others, which will bring me a sense of accomplishment.这两句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；Although it is very hard to study medicine, I like the challenges it brings and make great efforts to study it well. 这句话运用了although引导的让步状语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： as follows，contribute to，make great efforts，realize my dream。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.
To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.
The picture sets me thinking of my experience. While I was in the high school, I was fond of drawing very much. I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.
Now I work in a company and got a well-paid work, but I don't live a happy life. This is not the life that I want to live. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生简单描绘图片内容，并用生活中的一个经历来具体说明。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：图画作文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 对图片的简单描述；
2. 对个人经历的具体描写；
3. 你当时的感受或想法。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a pair of; to one’s astonishment; think of; be fond of; be admitted to; in order to; live up to; give up; realize one’s dream
第三步：连词成句
1. As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.
2. To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.
3. The picture sets me thinking of my experience.
4. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university.
5. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.
6. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.这句话运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句；
[高分句型2] I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；
[高分句型3] Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.这句话运用了虚拟语气。
8．Learning literacy is important for children, and how they learn it counts. A study shows too much phonics learning negatively affects children because passing the tests only requires meaningless pronunciation and spelling instead of understanding. Although pre-schooling does good to the development of society, studies also show too much of it has nothing to do with later academic achievements.
【导语】本文是一篇议论文。文章从英国所做的一项学前儿童的自然拼读实验得出结论：参加强化学前教育的孩子在以后的学习能力上和没有参加学前教育的孩子相差无几，相反太多的学业压力会对孩子未来的学术成就产生消极影响。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①While learning literacy is vital to children, the way we teach it really matters.
②In a 2022 report, Dominic Wyse states that English school system’s intense focus on phonics could be failing some children. Because the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts.
③Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools.
④People who attended a preschool with a strong academic emphasis showed lower academic achievements a few years later.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Though learning literacy is important to children, the way to teach really matters.
There will be many problems in the long run caused by too much academic pressure.
In short, attending preschool which is necessary on academic skills can have positive effects on later achievement in life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]：A reason for this is that the tests used to assess that early learning may have little to do with the skills actually needed to read and enjoy books or other meaningful texts. (运用了that引导的表语从句，that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]：Children who attend intensive preschools do not have higher academic abilities in later grades than those who did not attend such preschools, several studies now show.(运用了who引导定语从句)
9．Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons. Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success. Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks. Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential. (58 words)
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，团队合作对任何团队达成目标都很重要，原因有三。第一，凝聚人才，解决问题，激发创新和成功。其次，团队合作可以提高效率和生产力，因为他们分担了工作量，减轻了压力，完成了特定的任务。最后，团队合作增加了经验丰富的成员和新人的学习机会，鼓励分享和最大化团队的潜力。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Teamwork is really important for any class or team to achieve its goals and objectives. Let me give you three reasons why teamwork is advantageous.
②As team members exchange thoughts and experiences, there can be more efficiency and effectiveness at problem-solving. This pooling of talents can also lead to greater innovation and success.
③Next, teamwork helps to increase efficiency and productivity as members share the workload. It reduces the stress on each of us and ensures the completion of tasks within the regulated time frame.
④And finally, working in a team multiplies learning opportunities. But, the loss of cooperativity that only team effort can generate may also prevent the team from reaching its fullest potential.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Teamwork is important for any group to reach its goals for three reasons.
Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success.
Secondly, teamwork enhances efficiency and productivity due to shared workload, reduced stress and specific tasks.
Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, pooling talents helps to solve problems and motivate innovation and success.运用动名词作主语对原文第二段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Finally, teamwork multiplies learning opportunities for both experienced members and newer ones, encouraging sharing and maximizing team’s potential.用现在分词作状语对最后两段进行了概括，表达非常高级。
10．Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry. Studies found using smartphones might prevent teens developing social skills and reading abilities. But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems. Actually, teens prefer face-to-face communication with their friends. (58 words)
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，青少年花太多时间在智能手机上影响了他们的发展，引起了父母的担心。研究发现使用智能手机可能会阻碍青少年发展社交技能和阅读能力。但正确使用智能手机的青少年在身体上更安全，更宽容，更现实，适度使用智能手机与心理健康问题没有关系。实际上，青少年更喜欢与朋友面对面的交流。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Some parents might worry about their teens spending so much time on their phones because it represents a complete departure from how they spent their own adolescence.
②A 2014 study found that sixth graders who spent just five days at a camp without using screens ended the time better at reading emotions on others’ faces, suggesting that teens’ screen-filled lives might cause their social skills to decline.
③They are physically safer and more tolerant than previous generations were. They also seem to have more realistic expectations than their parents did at the same age.
④To be clear, moderate smartphone use—up to an hour a day—is not linked to mental health issues.
⑤Somewhat to my surprise, the teens I interviewed said they would rather see their friends in person than communicate with them using their phones.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、5三个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry.
Studies found using smartphones might prevent teens developing social skills and reading abilities.
But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems.
Actually, teens prefer face-to-face communication with their friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Teens’ spending too much time on smartphones affected their development and caused parents' worry.运用主语部分的复合结构将第一段中青少年玩手机的现象表达了出来，结合谓语affect和宾语development，以及并列句中谓语cause和宾语parents' worry完整地概括出第一段内容。其中动名词的复合结构和并列谓语表达高级。
[高分句型2]：But teens using smartphones properly are physically safer, more tolerant and realistic, and moderate smartphone use has no connection with mental health problems. 用并列连词and连接两个句子对第四、五段进行了概括，言简意赅。
11．Summary writing (the main points):
1. Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.
2. In 2003, two men started Movember. In 2004, the foundation was set up. Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money.
3. Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了“Movember”是一项男人留胡子日，是为了给癌症慈善机构捐款的一年一度的活动。这个活动筹集了大量资金。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①“Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money, with the money going to cancer charities.
②The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003.
③In 2004, the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation.
④Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide.
⑤They use a sort of blokey jokiness to appeal to men.
2.缜密构思
将第1、5两个要点进行重组，将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合。
3.归纳总结
1. Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.
2. In 2003, two men started Movember. In 2004, the foundation was set up. Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money.
3. Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.
【点睛】[高分句型1] ：Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.运用过去分词作定语。
[高分句型2]：Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness.运用不定式作定语。
12．Singapore’s information technology strategy depends on two major ways. One is to construct world-class basic facilities by providing broad-band everywhere. The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers. The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了新加坡信息科技战略的两个方面。一方面是通过提供宽带，建立世界级的基础设施；另一方面是对全体人民进行信息技术教育。而且，大多数新加坡人民已经明白了信息技术的重要性。
【详解】1 要点摘录
1) Singapore's information technology strategy rests on two major legs.
2) The first leg is world-class basic facilities.
3) Our objective is to provide broad-band everywhere, either wired or wireless.
4) The second leg is the education of our entire population in IT (information technology).
5) The strategy in Singapore is therefore to teach information technology to every child regardless of his family background.
6) Most Singaporeans now understand the importance of IT.
7) An employer in Singapore in the future should not have to worry that his employee does not now how to use a computer or the Internet.
2.缜密构思
将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点进行整合，将第6、7两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
One is to construct world-class basic facilities by providing broad-band everywhere.
The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers.
The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The other is to teach each child information technology whatever his family background is, providing computers to students and teachers.运用让步状语从句，整合了两个句子，对原文第二段进行了概括。其中whatever引导的让步状语从句、动词ing作伴随状语等表达高级。
[高分句型2]：The strategy has aroused the recognition of most Singaporeans and the employers will hopefully have computer literate employees.and引导的并列句。
13．The author thinks that short-term memory failure, which both old and young suffer from, isn’t necessarily age-related, though different age groups find different reasons for it. The old seem to have a poorer short-term memory because of natural cognitive slowing and too much information to search for.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述老年人和年轻人都会患有的短期记忆障碍，并不一定与年龄有关。
【详解】符合概要写作的常规思路：
总结文章的中心思想，并且主要说明了老年人短期记忆较差的原因。用到的词汇有：short-term memory failure, because of, search for等；并且用到了非限制性定语从句：The author thinks that short-term memory failure, which both old and young suffer from, isn't necessarily age-related, though different age groups find different reasons for it.使结构更加严谨。
对文章的中心思想分析的透彻，概括全面，结构严谨。
【点睛】首先，该考生对文章理解比较准确，涵盖了全部要点。其次，准确的使用了语法结构和词汇，文中几乎没有语法问题。再次，完全使用自己的语言，语言流畅，结构严谨。并且文章还用到了长难句，显示出很高的英语水平。
14．Researchers say social media has a huge negative impact on us. First, excessive use of social media can cause anti -social behavior and the disappearance of empathy. Besides, social media makes people dislike solitude which can make us reflect on ourselves and touch the real self. In a word, we must pay attention to the negative impact of social media.
【分析】本篇书面表达是概要写作，要求概括研究人员称社交媒体对我们有很大的负面影响，首先，过度使用社交媒体会导致反社会行为和移情的消失。此外，社交媒体使人们不喜欢独处，这会使我们反省自己，接触真实的自我，我们必须重视社交媒体的负面影响。注意词数要求和使用自己的语言。
【详解】1、写之前，需要认真仔细地读几遍原文材料，让理解更深刻。
2、遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要部分的主题、标题、细节进行概括，全面清晰地表明原文信息。
3、给摘要起一个好标题，比如：可以采用文中的主题句。
4、尽量使用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，篇幅控制在原文的三分之一或四分之一长。
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