天津市滨海新区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层汇编-05写作（含答案）
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天津市滨海新区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层汇编-05写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·天津滨海新·天津市滨海新区塘沽第一中学校考一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。
内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
③ 提出你的建议。注意：① 词数不少于 100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;
③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2020·天津滨海新·统考一模）假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris不久前来中国学习汉语。他给你写邮件，表示对于课堂上使用小组学习（group learning）的方式感到无所适从。Chris希望你能给他提供一些有效的建议。请你根据这一情况给他回信，内容要点如下：
1.分析存在问题的原因；（如：准备不充分；心情紧张……）
2.提出建议；（如：提前预习；查找资料；敢于表达；……）
3.鼓励他不要灰心。
注意：1.词数：不少于120词；
2.信的开头与结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
After reading your e-mail,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
二、申请信
3．（2022·天津滨海新·天津市滨海新区大港油田实验中学校考模拟预测）第19届亚洲奥林匹克运动会将于2023年9月在中国举行，现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是晨光中学的李津，请根据自己的情况写一封英文申请信。
内容包括：
1.写信目的 ；
2.个人优势（如英语好、爱运动、善于交往、乐于助人等）；
3.希望批准。
参考词汇：杭州亚运会 The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2023
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
三、邀请信
4．（2022·天津滨海新·校联考模拟预测）假定你是附山中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为 “What to learn in senior high school”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚、友善；
3.学会......
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
四、推荐信
5．（2021·天津滨海新·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友，孔子学院的学生David对中国的古典文学非常感兴趣，希望你能给他推荐一本书。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.书名及作者；
2.主要内容及影响；
3.推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《西游记》Journey to the West 《水浒传》Water Margin
《红楼梦》Dream of the Red Chamber《诗经》The Book of Songs
《史记》The Historical Records《论语》The Analects of Confucius
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)所推荐书籍不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
(3)适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：
(4)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature.
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·天津滨海新·统考一模）母亲节是一个感谢母亲的节日。假设你是晨光中学的李津。2022年的母亲节过后，你的美国好友Chris通过电子邮件询问母亲节这一天你为你的妈妈都做了些什么。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
(1) 2022年的母亲节你为妈妈做了什么；
(2) 妈妈的反应（如情感、话语表达等）；
(3) 你的感想。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail asking what I did for my mother on this year’s Mother’s Day.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
7．（2020·天津滨海新·校联考三模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，为了提升同学们的环保意识，你校准备于下周六开展“垃圾分类助推活动”，你将代表学校在学校的动员大会上发言，呼吁同学们积极参加活动，并介绍活动的具体安排，内容包括：
1.活动的原因及意义
2.活动当天的具体安排
3.报名方式
注意：
1.词数不少于 100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：垃圾分类 garbage sorting
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to be here to share my opinions on garbage sorting.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
试卷第6页，共6页
试卷第5页，共6页
参考答案：
1．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为提纲类作文。要求给Teens'Spacec杂志主编写一封信。
【详解】本文为提纲作文中的书信体。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens'Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。书信体作文主要包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的内容，第二部分叙述写信的内容，内容主要有：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。最后部分表达自己的期望。注意 词数不少于 100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。语言委婉礼貌。文章中运用了许多较高级的词汇如congratulations on ;be helpful to; of great benefit，以及顺序连词first,... second,...等，使的文章内容脉络清晰，结构明了。文中简单句与复合句相结合，一张一弛，相得益彰。较高级的复合句有“so that...”引导的状语从句it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things...， 由that引导的限制性定语从句I can learn all important things that happened in the world；由which引导的非限制性定语从句Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me和I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place；以及宾语从句I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better等，这体现了作者对英语很好的驾驶能力。
2．Dear Chris,
After reading your e-mail, I can see you are greatly confused with group learning.
It’s common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for the topic to be discussed. Besides, the ability to express yourself in Chinese is another reason which prevents you from voicing your own opinion freely.
In fact, group learning is a fantastic way to practice your spoken Chinese and improve the ability to think in Chinese. In my opinion, what you are going to do is to be well prepared for the topic. For example, you can collect information about the topic and recite in advance. Additionally, use every chance to speak Chinese, in which way you can improve your oral Chinese quickly. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can’t speak fluent Chinese without opening your mouth.
Your experience reminds me of my process of studying English. Perseverance is very important. Don’t lose hope. I’m here willing to help.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris不久前来中国学习汉语。他给你写邮件，表示对于课堂上使用小组学习（group learning）的方式感到无所适从。Chris希望你能 给他提供一些有效的建议。请你根据这一情况给他回信，内容要点如下：1. 分析存在问题的原因；（如：准备不充分；心情紧张……）；2. 提出建议；（如：提前预习；查找资料；敢于表达；……）；3. 鼓励他不要灰心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be familiar with (熟悉)；well prepared (准备好的)；the ability to do sth.(做某事的能力)；prevent from(阻止)；spoken Chinese(汉语口语)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It’s common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for the topic to be discussed.运用了条件状语从句；In my opinion, what you are going to do is to be well prepared for the topic.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the 19th Asian Games to be held in Hangzhou in September 2023. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I love sports so much that I can devote myself to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封英文申请信，申请成为第19届亚洲奥林匹克运动会的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
消息：news→information
喜欢：love→be fond of
此外：besides→what’s more
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
拓展句：Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which allows me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the 19th Asian Games to be held in Hangzhou in September 2023.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging. First, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates.
Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】这篇书面表达属于演讲稿写作。
【详解】这篇书面表达给予了提纲，属于半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切，让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力，即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。
写作时需注意下列几点：
1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。
注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。
要学会学习，要有符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但要在演讲稿结尾总结或展望未来或表决心。
【点睛】重点词汇语句：Challenging挑战；used to过去时常；In addition 另外；build up 逐步建立；Develop a good habit养成良好的习惯；get actively 积极；involved in 参与； No pains no gains.不劳无获；get along well with ... 与…相处融洽；
高级句型 ：
Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）
...review what had been taught after class. （宾语从句）
I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （宾语从句）...
5．One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature. So, I'm writing to recommend Dream of the Red Chamber to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. With the thriving and declining of four noble families as the background, it tells the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lindaiyu. Vividly depicting the life at that time, the novel reveals the darkness and corruption of the old society as well as the desire for freedom and is of high artistic value. So far, it has been translated into different languages.
The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. Besides, reading this novel will definitely help to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading this novel and can share your feelings and opinions with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友David回复一封电子邮件，向他推荐一本中国的古典文学书籍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述：depict→describe
揭露：reveal→disclose
包含：contain→involve
真诚地：sincerely→truly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China.
拓展句：Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China, which is written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail asking what I did for my mother on this year’s Mother’s Day. As you know, this year, Mother’s Day fell on May 8th, which is just before the University Entrance Exam. So, I decided to do something special for my mum. I made a pretty Mother's Day card with the words “Happy Mother’s day! Thank you for everything you’ve done for me over the years, mom. I’ll love you forever!” in it and gave it to my mother with a hug and kiss. I still remember how bright my mother’s eyes were and how excited she was at my gift.
Besides, under the guidance of my father, I tried baking a fruit cake and preparing a great seafood dinner for my mother, which delighted my mom so much. She expressed her thanks in exciting words, wishing that I would strengthen confidence and perform well in the coming University Entrance Exam.
There are various ways to show appreciation for mothers, but what I want to say is that we should learn to be grateful for everything that our parents bring to us.
Hope that you can share your feelings about Mother’s Day with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回复美国好友Chris一封电子邮件，向Chirs介绍在母亲节这一天考生为妈妈做了哪些事情以及妈妈的反应。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
决定：decide→determine
此外：besides→in addition
感谢：appreciation→thanks/acknowledgement
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So, I decided to do something special for my mum.
拓展句：so, I determined to do something that was special for my mum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, this year, Mother’s Day fell on May 8th, which is just before the University Entrance Exam.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】She expressed her thanks in exciting words, wishing that I would strengthen confidence and perform well in the coming University Entrance Exam.(运用了现在分词wishing作伴随状语。)
7．Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to be here to share my opinions on garbage sorting.
As we all know, society produces a lot of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries every day. It has become a big headache. How to solve this problem I think rubbish classification is a good way of dealing with it. Because rubbish classification can reduce the amount of rubbish and the rubbish pollution to the environment. What’s more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection. Thus, to raise our awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday.
First of all, from 8 am to 10 am, a lecture on environmental problems and possible solutions will be given by a known environmentalist in the lecture room. Then, two community workers will give useful tips on garbage sorting. At 2 pm, participants will pick up trash and practice garbage sorting on campus.
If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website. You’re welcome to join us!
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，呼吁同学们积极参加活动，并介绍活动的具体安排。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明主题
2.介绍相关情况
1）活动的原因及意义。（reasons and meaning）
2）活动当天的具体安排。（arrangements）
3) 报名方式。（registration）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
such as; rubbish classification; be a good way of doing sth.; raise; awareness; environmental protection; a series of; pick up; be interested in; sign up; join sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. As we all know, society produces a lot of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries every day.
2. I think rubbish classification is a good way of dealing with it.
3. Thus, to raise our awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday.
4. participants will pick up trash and practice garbage sorting on campus.
5. If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website.
6. You’re welcome to join us!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：What’s more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be a good way of doing sth.; pick up; be interested in等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2020·天津滨海新·天津市滨海新区塘沽第一中学校考一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。
内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
③ 提出你的建议。注意：① 词数不少于 100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;
③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2020·天津滨海新·统考一模）假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris不久前来中国学习汉语。他给你写邮件，表示对于课堂上使用小组学习（group learning）的方式感到无所适从。Chris希望你能给他提供一些有效的建议。请你根据这一情况给他回信，内容要点如下：
1.分析存在问题的原因；（如：准备不充分；心情紧张……）
2.提出建议；（如：提前预习；查找资料；敢于表达；……）
3.鼓励他不要灰心。
注意：1.词数：不少于120词；
2.信的开头与结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
After reading your e-mail,
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Yours,
Li Jin
二、申请信
3．（2022·天津滨海新·天津市滨海新区大港油田实验中学校考模拟预测）第19届亚洲奥林匹克运动会将于2023年9月在中国举行，现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是晨光中学的李津，请根据自己的情况写一封英文申请信。
内容包括：
1.写信目的 ；
2.个人优势（如英语好、爱运动、善于交往、乐于助人等）；
3.希望批准。
参考词汇：杭州亚运会 The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2023
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
三、邀请信
4．（2022·天津滨海新·校联考模拟预测）假定你是附山中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为 “What to learn in senior high school”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法、习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚、友善；
3.学会......
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
四、推荐信
5．（2021·天津滨海新·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友，孔子学院的学生David对中国的古典文学非常感兴趣，希望你能给他推荐一本书。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.书名及作者；
2.主要内容及影响；
3.推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《西游记》Journey to the West 《水浒传》Water Margin
《红楼梦》Dream of the Red Chamber《诗经》The Book of Songs
《史记》The Historical Records《论语》The Analects of Confucius
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)所推荐书籍不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
(3)适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：
(4)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature.
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·天津滨海新·统考一模）母亲节是一个感谢母亲的节日。假设你是晨光中学的李津。2022年的母亲节过后，你的美国好友Chris通过电子邮件询问母亲节这一天你为你的妈妈都做了些什么。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
(1) 2022年的母亲节你为妈妈做了什么；
(2) 妈妈的反应（如情感、话语表达等）；
(3) 你的感想。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail asking what I did for my mother on this year’s Mother’s Day.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
7．（2020·天津滨海新·校联考三模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，为了提升同学们的环保意识，你校准备于下周六开展“垃圾分类助推活动”，你将代表学校在学校的动员大会上发言，呼吁同学们积极参加活动，并介绍活动的具体安排，内容包括：
1.活动的原因及意义
2.活动当天的具体安排
3.报名方式
注意：
1.词数不少于 100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：垃圾分类 garbage sorting
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to be here to share my opinions on garbage sorting.
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Thank you!
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参考答案：
1．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为提纲类作文。要求给Teens'Spacec杂志主编写一封信。
【详解】本文为提纲作文中的书信体。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens'Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。书信体作文主要包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的内容，第二部分叙述写信的内容，内容主要有：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。最后部分表达自己的期望。注意 词数不少于 100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。语言委婉礼貌。文章中运用了许多较高级的词汇如congratulations on ;be helpful to; of great benefit，以及顺序连词first,... second,...等，使的文章内容脉络清晰，结构明了。文中简单句与复合句相结合，一张一弛，相得益彰。较高级的复合句有“so that...”引导的状语从句it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things...， 由that引导的限制性定语从句I can learn all important things that happened in the world；由which引导的非限制性定语从句Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me和I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place；以及宾语从句I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better等，这体现了作者对英语很好的驾驶能力。
2．Dear Chris,
After reading your e-mail, I can see you are greatly confused with group learning.
It’s common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for the topic to be discussed. Besides, the ability to express yourself in Chinese is another reason which prevents you from voicing your own opinion freely.
In fact, group learning is a fantastic way to practice your spoken Chinese and improve the ability to think in Chinese. In my opinion, what you are going to do is to be well prepared for the topic. For example, you can collect information about the topic and recite in advance. Additionally, use every chance to speak Chinese, in which way you can improve your oral Chinese quickly. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can’t speak fluent Chinese without opening your mouth.
Your experience reminds me of my process of studying English. Perseverance is very important. Don’t lose hope. I’m here willing to help.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris不久前来中国学习汉语。他给你写邮件，表示对于课堂上使用小组学习（group learning）的方式感到无所适从。Chris希望你能 给他提供一些有效的建议。请你根据这一情况给他回信，内容要点如下：1. 分析存在问题的原因；（如：准备不充分；心情紧张……）；2. 提出建议；（如：提前预习；查找资料；敢于表达；……）；3. 鼓励他不要灰心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be familiar with (熟悉)；well prepared (准备好的)；the ability to do sth.(做某事的能力)；prevent from(阻止)；spoken Chinese(汉语口语)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It’s common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for the topic to be discussed.运用了条件状语从句；In my opinion, what you are going to do is to be well prepared for the topic.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the 19th Asian Games to be held in Hangzhou in September 2023. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I love sports so much that I can devote myself to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封英文申请信，申请成为第19届亚洲奥林匹克运动会的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
消息：news→information
喜欢：love→be fond of
此外：besides→what’s more
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, allowing me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
拓展句：Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which allows me to communicate with strangers without difficulty.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the 19th Asian Games to be held in Hangzhou in September 2023.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging. First, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates.
Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】这篇书面表达属于演讲稿写作。
【详解】这篇书面表达给予了提纲，属于半自由半开放类。与学生实际生活十分贴切，让学生有话可说，但要得高分必须有深度的思想以及就话题语言灵活运用能力，即要能在清晰的框架内在语言和内容方面写出自己的特色。
写作时需注意下列几点：
1. 应该使用第一人称。全文以现在以及将来范畴的时态为主，当然不排斥用过去时态。按提纲提示清晰分段，不能缺少要点（学会学习：方法，习惯等；学会做人：真诚；友善；学会其他）。
注意语言逻辑性和思维想象力。多用些语际衔接性词语（first of all ，besides ，on the one hand 等）。
要学会学习，要有符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态度等；要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学会自我管理等。然后，根据要点思考可用哪些表达法：the best way of .../ an acceptable thing is .../get into a habit of .../be active in..../go over.../behave well/it is kind of .../be involved in...等；根据提纲，连成句子，清晰分段。可用firstly.../in addition.../last but not the least等。最后，虽然试卷给出了演讲开头，但要在演讲稿结尾总结或展望未来或表决心。
【点睛】重点词汇语句：Challenging挑战；used to过去时常；In addition 另外；build up 逐步建立；Develop a good habit养成良好的习惯；get actively 积极；involved in 参与； No pains no gains.不劳无获；get along well with ... 与…相处融洽；
高级句型 ：
Developing a good habit is also of importance. （动名词短语作主语）
...review what had been taught after class. （宾语从句）
I am sure that with great efforts, you will... （宾语从句）...
5．One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature. So, I'm writing to recommend Dream of the Red Chamber to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. With the thriving and declining of four noble families as the background, it tells the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lindaiyu. Vividly depicting the life at that time, the novel reveals the darkness and corruption of the old society as well as the desire for freedom and is of high artistic value. So far, it has been translated into different languages.
The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. Besides, reading this novel will definitely help to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading this novel and can share your feelings and opinions with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友David回复一封电子邮件，向他推荐一本中国的古典文学书籍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述：depict→describe
揭露：reveal→disclose
包含：contain→involve
真诚地：sincerely→truly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China.
拓展句：Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China, which is written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail asking what I did for my mother on this year’s Mother’s Day. As you know, this year, Mother’s Day fell on May 8th, which is just before the University Entrance Exam. So, I decided to do something special for my mum. I made a pretty Mother's Day card with the words “Happy Mother’s day! Thank you for everything you’ve done for me over the years, mom. I’ll love you forever!” in it and gave it to my mother with a hug and kiss. I still remember how bright my mother’s eyes were and how excited she was at my gift.
Besides, under the guidance of my father, I tried baking a fruit cake and preparing a great seafood dinner for my mother, which delighted my mom so much. She expressed her thanks in exciting words, wishing that I would strengthen confidence and perform well in the coming University Entrance Exam.
There are various ways to show appreciation for mothers, but what I want to say is that we should learn to be grateful for everything that our parents bring to us.
Hope that you can share your feelings about Mother’s Day with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生回复美国好友Chris一封电子邮件，向Chirs介绍在母亲节这一天考生为妈妈做了哪些事情以及妈妈的反应。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
决定：decide→determine
此外：besides→in addition
感谢：appreciation→thanks/acknowledgement
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So, I decided to do something special for my mum.
拓展句：so, I determined to do something that was special for my mum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, this year, Mother’s Day fell on May 8th, which is just before the University Entrance Exam.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】She expressed her thanks in exciting words, wishing that I would strengthen confidence and perform well in the coming University Entrance Exam.(运用了现在分词wishing作伴随状语。)
7．Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to be here to share my opinions on garbage sorting.
As we all know, society produces a lot of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries every day. It has become a big headache. How to solve this problem I think rubbish classification is a good way of dealing with it. Because rubbish classification can reduce the amount of rubbish and the rubbish pollution to the environment. What’s more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection. Thus, to raise our awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday.
First of all, from 8 am to 10 am, a lecture on environmental problems and possible solutions will be given by a known environmentalist in the lecture room. Then, two community workers will give useful tips on garbage sorting. At 2 pm, participants will pick up trash and practice garbage sorting on campus.
If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website. You’re welcome to join us!
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，呼吁同学们积极参加活动，并介绍活动的具体安排。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明主题
2.介绍相关情况
1）活动的原因及意义。（reasons and meaning）
2）活动当天的具体安排。（arrangements）
3) 报名方式。（registration）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
such as; rubbish classification; be a good way of doing sth.; raise; awareness; environmental protection; a series of; pick up; be interested in; sign up; join sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. As we all know, society produces a lot of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries every day.
2. I think rubbish classification is a good way of dealing with it.
3. Thus, to raise our awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday.
4. participants will pick up trash and practice garbage sorting on campus.
5. If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website.
6. You’re welcome to join us!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：What’s more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be a good way of doing sth.; pick up; be interested in等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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