天津市河北区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）

天津市河北区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·天津河北·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学高三一班的李津。你的英国笔友Chris发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Chris回复一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
（1）祝贺Chris获奖；
（2）提供深入学习汉语的建议（如：读中文原著，用中文记日记等）；
（3）邀请Chris来中国学习交流。
注意：（1）词数不少于100词；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
孔子学院 Confucius Institute
汉语桥 Chinese Bridge
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2020·天津河北·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。
内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
③ 提出你的建议。注意：① 词数不少于 100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;
③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
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Yours,
Li Jin
二、邀请信
3．（2021·天津河北·统考二模）假设你是晨光中学高三3班的李津。高中生活即将结束，在繁忙的学习之余，校英语社团决定录制毕业纪念视频，邀请你作为学生代表用英语发表毕业感言，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）高中三年的收获；
（2）即将毕业的心情；
（3）你的感谢和决心……
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）可运当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin.
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Thank you.
三、推荐信
4．（2020·天津河北·统考二模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目（学校简介、学习生活）之上，增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目（职业规划、学生风采、校园文化）中挑选一个栏目，给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐，并陈述你的理由。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
公众号 Official WeChat 职业规划Career Planning
学校简介 School Profile 学习生活Study Life
学生风采 Our Students 校园文化Campus Culture
Dear Mr. Zhang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
四、其他应用文
5．（2021·天津河北·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris将要主持校广播站新增的《走进中国》栏目，他给你发来电子邮件，希望你给他简要介绍中国在扶贫方面的情况，以便进行更好的报道。请你根据提示给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）中国约有7亿人摆脱了贫困；
（2）教育、职业培训和技术的引进发挥了重要的作用；
（3）简单谈谈你的感想。
注意：
（1）词数100词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
扶贫 poverty relief
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
6．（2020·天津河北·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语，他得知你校在线开设了中国诗词课程，非常感兴趣并想参加学习，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
主要内容：（1）你校使用钉钉（DingTalk）软件进行在线教学此课程。
（2）使用钉钉（DingTalk）的方法。
（3）在线中国诗词课程的特色。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Lijin
五、开放性作文
7．（2022·天津河北·统考二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。2022年北京冬奥会圆满结束了，苏翊鸣、谷爱凌等中国青少年选手表现优异，夺得多枚金牌。为号召同学们向优秀的同龄人学习，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Growing up along with Olympic Champions”为主题的英语征文活动。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
（1）奥运冠军的共同点（追求梦想，全力以赴，永不言弃等）；
（2）如何做学习或生活中的“冠军”？
注意：
（1）词数不少于100词；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing up along with Olympic Champions
Many teenage champions have stood out in the Beijing Winter Olympics.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Chris,
Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery. Last but not least, how about finding a Chinese language partner with whom you can communicate if you would like to improve your Chinese fluency
Hope my advice is worth taking. Meanwhile, I’d love to invite you to learn and exchange in China one day.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回复邮件，就如何深入学习中文给出建议并表达祝贺，同时邀请对方来中国学习交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：host→hold
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
有助于：contribute to→make for
提升：improve→advance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
拓展句：Since I hear that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery.（运用了in that引导的状语从句）
2．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为提纲类作文。要求给Teens'Spacec杂志主编写一封信。
【详解】本文为提纲作文中的书信体。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens'Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。书信体作文主要包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的内容，第二部分叙述写信的内容，内容主要有：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。最后部分表达自己的期望。注意 词数不少于 100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。语言委婉礼貌。文章中运用了许多较高级的词汇如congratulations on ;be helpful to; of great benefit，以及顺序连词first,... second,...等，使的文章内容脉络清晰，结构明了。文中简单句与复合句相结合，一张一弛，相得益彰。较高级的复合句有“so that...”引导的状语从句it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things...， 由that引导的限制性定语从句I can learn all important things that happened in the world；由which引导的非限制性定语从句Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me和I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place；以及宾语从句I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better等，这体现了作者对英语很好的驾驶能力。
3． Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. High school life is coming to an end, so I will deliver a graduation speech as a student representative .
Three years of high school have achieved a lot. At least we have learned here to care about others, learn to shoulder responsibility and mind to meet the challenge, showing themselves. Looking back on the past, my heart is full of infinite emotion. I remember every effort, every laugh, every drop of loss, every achievement, every expression.
Say "take care" to the teachers who always pay attention to us, and say "take care" to the beautiful campus. We will pack our bags, with the rising sun, full of confidence and dream, and set foot on a new journey.
【分析】本文是一篇发言稿。假设你是晨光中学高三3班的李津。高中生活即将结束，在繁忙的学习之余，校英语社团决定录制毕业纪念视频，邀请你作为学生代表用英语发表毕业感言，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：高中三年的收获；即将毕业的心情；你的感谢和决心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结束：come to an end→put an end→end
关心：care about→be concerned about
充满：be full of→filled with
重视，注意：pay attention to→care for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Looking back on the past, my heart is full of infinite emotion.
拓展句：When I look back on the past, my heart is full of infinite emotion.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Looking back on the past, my heart is full of infinite emotion.句中现在分词作时间状语。
[高分句型2 ] Say "take care" to the teachers who always pay attention to us, and say "take care" to the beautiful campus.句中使用who引导的定语从句。
4．Dear Mr. Zhang,
Delighted to know a new column will be added in our English Club’s Official WeChat Accounts, I’m writing to offer my recommendation to you.
Among the three columns “Career Planning”, “Our Students” and “Campus Culture”, I would like to choose “Career Planning” to be the one to be added, based on the original two columns “School Profile” and “Study Life”. I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs. This may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness so that we can figure out our goals. To me, it’s much more meaningful than “Our Students” or “Campus Culture”.
I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目（学校简介、学习生活）之上,增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目（职业规划、学生风采、校园文化）中挑选一个栏目，给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐，并陈述你的理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Official WeChat(公众号)；Career Planning (职业规划)；School Profile(学校简介)；Study Life(学习生活)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs.运用宾语从句；I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．One possible version：
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you! Knowing that you are interested in our anti-poverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions. By now, about 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies. Education, professional training as well as technology introduction have played an important role in the process. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project. Now, the whole family lives a life of happiness without worrying about food and clothing.
From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous and make her people gain more contentment and happiness. I hope the information will be helpful and I’d like you to come to China in the near future.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国笔友Chris将要主持校广播站新增的《走进中国》栏目，他给你发来电子邮件，希望你给他简要介绍中国在扶贫方面的情况，以便进行更好的报道。请你根据提示给他回一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
（1）中国约有7亿人摆脱了贫困；
（2）教育、职业培训和技术的引进发挥了重要的作用；
（3）简单谈谈你的感想。
第二步:列提纲
hear from；are interested in；give you a brief account of；Thanks to；witnessed great improvement；as well as；played an important role in；As a matter of fact；is bound to；be helpful；in the near future
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in our anti-poverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.
2. Thanks to the poverty relief policy, the past few years have witnessed great improvement in people’s living conditions.
3. By now, about 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.
4. As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project.
5.From my perspective, I’m amazed at and proud of the great achievement brought about by poverty relief work, which is bound to make China more harmonious and prosperous and make her people gain more contentment and happiness.
6. I hope the information will be helpful and I’d like you to come to China in the near future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in our anti-poverty project at the national scale, I’m willing to give you a brief account of its current development.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] As a matter of fact, my uncle, whose family is in a remote and poor area, has benefited from the project.（句中使用whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] By now, about 700 million people have been lifted out of poverty, which shows the efficiency and practicality of its strategies.（句中使用现在完成时的被动语态和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．Dear Chris,
I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese culture. The course of Chinese poetry online attracted most of students in our school and aroused our passion for traditional Chinese culture.
Now let me tell you this course in detail. As we know, we are living in a high-tech era, an application called DingTalk acts as class temporarily. The using methods are simple and convenient. First, download this application and enter the class group. Next, click the button of “class online” and find the live telecast to learn the class online.
The course of Chinese poetry online has many advantages. Not only can you play it again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say. Besides, the teacher could put more interesting examples without worrying about time of class because we can speed up the class or skip the chapter we don’t need. I hope what I say can be helpful for you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向朋友介绍中国诗词课程的相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 在线中国诗词课程使用钉钉软件进行教学。
2. 使用钉钉的方法。
3. 在线中国诗词课程的特色。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
the course of Chinese poetry online；traditional Chinese culture；as we know；advantage；convenient；look forward
第三步：连词成句
1. We take the course of Chinese poetry online.
2. It help us learn many things about traditional Chinese culture.
3. Let me tell you how to use DingTalk.
4. The course of Chinese poetry online has many advantages.
5. Hope these things that I say can help you.
6. Look forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了高级句子，如：Not only can you play it again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say这句话运用了not only…but also的句型，并使用了倒装。另外，这篇书面表达要求补充的内容较多，本文补充加入的细节部分，表达清晰到位，条理清楚，给人良好的阅读体验。
7．Many teenage champions have stood out in the Beijing Winter Olympics. Their self-made accomplishments are an incredible source of inspiration for anyone who aspires to fulfillment in life.
The stories coming out of the champions have much in common. First, they go all out to be excellent, which is the universal quality that will pay off in the long-term. Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride. In the course of the pursuit of our dreams, we also need goal to keep us moving forward as well as the resilience to deal with tress and failure.
A journey of 1,000 miles begins with one step. I have every ground to believe persistence and the longing for excellence will help us teenagers win through.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英语社团组织的以“Growing up along with Olympic Champions”为主题的英语征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
突出、杰出：stand out→excelent
放弃：give up→quit
处理：deal with→cope with
坚持：persistence→insistence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride.
拓展句：Besides, when they are faced with one failure after another, they never give up, taking every setback in stride.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their self-made accomplishments are an incredible source of inspiration for anyone who aspires to fulfillment in life.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】First, they go all out to be excellent, which is the universal quality that will pay off in the long-term. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）
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