天津市红桥区四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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天津市红桥区四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国笔友Mike发邮件祝贺2022年北京冬奥会成功举行，并且告诉你说，很多英国人通过奥运更多地了解了中国，希望到中国来看一看；他也计划寒假时到北京旅游。请你写邮件回复Mike，并给他提些建议。要点如下：
(1)注意气候：
(2)注意交通安全：
(3)有关风俗习惯的建议。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2021·天津红桥·统考模拟预测）假设你是晨光中学李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费， 本学期你校英语俱乐部开展了主题为“Clear Your Plate”的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3. 建议。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头已给出, 但不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”.
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二、申请信
3．（2020·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是李津，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教 (tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.参加意图；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数不少于100字；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
三、邀请信
4．（2022·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你计划下周六和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪那里的老人过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给你的外教Lucy写一封电子邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容要点包括：
（1）出发及返回时间；
（2）重阳节的意义；
（3）节日活动安排：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
5．（2021·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是李津，在英国一个月的文化体验活动即将结束时，你准备给接待你的Back夫妇送上你从中国带来的一个有中国文化特色的小礼物并附上一张卡片，卡片内容包括：
1.表达对他们的感谢；
2.对你的小礼物作一个简单说明；
3.邀请 Black夫妇到中国来体验中国传统文化。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Black,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Jin
6．（2020·天津红桥·统考一模）假定你是李津，你校准备举办主题为“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。你的英国留学生朋友Robert在中国已经生活了一段时间，对中国文化很感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他参加演讲比赛，内容包括：
（1）比赛的时间和地点（4月30日下午2:00；学校报告厅）
（2）演讲主题及意义；
（3）比赛注意事项。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
四、其他应用文
7．（2023·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，为配合学校的“科技月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
(1)简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人的功能(至少写出两点)；
(2)说明生活型智能机器人的意义。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：智能机器人 intelligent robot
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By Li Jin
8．（2022·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是某中学高三毕业生李津，你将作为毕业生代表在校园英语节晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲，内容包括：
（1）对获得的帮助表示感谢；
（2）对学弟、学妹的建议；
（3）努力学习，实现人生梦想；
（4）对母校和老师的祝福。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
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Thank you.
9．（2021·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Wendy正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。她请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
1.通常方式：
（1）生日聚会（2）生日礼物（3）生日祝福
2.你认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。
要求：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wendy,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
10．（2020·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是李津，你的英国朋友David给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主要内容包括:
(1)如何抗疫及成效；
(2)你怎么度过及现状；
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2)词数:不少于100词。
参考词汇:疫情 epidemic situation; 新冠肺炎 Covid-19
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email.
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Yours,
Li Jin
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参考答案：
1．Dear Mike,
Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. Since your customs are quite different from ours, I’d like to give you some advice to make your stay here safe and comfortable.
First, it is quite cold here in winter, so you’d better wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, pay special attention to the traffic. In China, we drive on the right compared with the situation in your country. So be sure to keep it in mind when you have got a chance to drive a car. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
Looking forward to seeing you. Hope you will enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友迈克写信，就他寒假要到北京旅游一事给与建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
抑制：contain→hold back
建议：advice→suggestion
牢记：keep in mind→bear in mind
隆重的：ceremonious→formal
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
拓展句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation, whose celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. (否定含义词hardly置于句首，句子使用部分倒装和when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”. Recently, people have realized how much food we waste every year. And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
As for me，I think it’s an extremely good idea to follow. And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it. For example，when we go out for dinner, we can just order as much food as we can eat to make sure little will be wasted. Of course, if we really can’t eat up our food, it’s also ok to take it home, so we can eat it later. Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clear Your Plate”为题写一篇英文演讲稿来响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3. 建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
call on；join a campaign；eat up；contribute our efforts to；eat up；have a chance to；have any effect；make sure;keep in mind；no matter what；make a difference
第三步：连词成句
1.And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
2.And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it.
3.Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
4.Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides, and
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.（这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]：Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food. （这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]：Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.（这句话运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
3．Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.
I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就国际中学生家教组织招聘兼职中文家教的广告写一封申请信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.自我介绍；
2.参加意图；
3.希望获准。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
happened to read；native tongue；a good command of spoken and written English；introduce Chinese culture.
第三步：连词成句
1.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet
2. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it.
3. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
4. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：自我介绍；参加目的；希望获准
2.表示并列补充关系：For me；Besides,；and
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet；如非谓语动词：employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language；如宾语从句：I know that you welcome students from China…..等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is a special day for the elderly in China. We will set out from our school gate at 9 in the morning. Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival. After lunch, we’ll spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, in hopes of making them happy. We are scheduled to be back around 4 in the afternoon. If you are willing to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Lucy写信邀请她在下周六和同学一起前往敬老院陪那里的老人过重阳节，并告知出发及返回时间，节日活动安排，以及重阳节的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出发：set out→depart
老年人：the elderly→senior citizens
怀着……的希望：in hopes of→ in the hope of
预期，计划做：be scheduled to do→be expected to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.
拓展句：The moment we arrive there, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 If you are willing to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.（运用了条件状语从句）
5．Dear Mr. and Mrs. Black,
When the amazing exchange program draws to an end, I realize it wouldn’t have been possible without your love and care. Many thanks for what you have done during my stay and I do believe your kindness and hospitality will stay with me for a very long time.
The small gift is paper-cutting, which people in my hometown are expert at. The vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper undoubtedly are a popular choice for decoration in my country. I chose them as a gift to show my appreciation and as a reminder of my unforgettable time here with you.
I hope you’ll like it and thanks again for everything. Welcome to China to experience different kinds of traditional culture!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在文化体验活动即将结束时，给接待的Back夫妇送上一个小礼物并附上一张卡片。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结束：come to an end→draw to an end
礼物：present→gift
擅长：be good at→be expert at
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper undoubtedly are a popular choice for decoration in my country.
拓展句：There is no doubt that the vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper are a popular choice for decoration in my country.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the amazing exchange program draws to an end, I realize it wouldn’t have been possible without your love and care. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Many thanks for what you have done during my stay and I do believe your kindness and hospitality will stay with me for a very long time. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] The small gift is paper-cutting, which people in my hometown are expert at.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Robert,
I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”. Aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to sign up for it.
The contest will be held on April 30 in the school lecture hall beginning at 2:00 pm, when I hope you’ll be available. Just as the name suggests, the contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that are taking place around us and in our life. Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life in China. Besides, when making the speech, please speak loudly and clearly without referring to your draft.
Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一封邀请函，要求考生写一封信给已在中国生活了一段时间的英国留学生朋友Robert，邀请他参加你校的“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 比赛的时间和地点（4月30日下午2:00；学校报告厅）；
2. 演讲主题及意义；
3. 比赛注意事项。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
I’m writing to tell you that +从句；a Chinese speech contest；(be) aware of sth.；interest in；sign up for；invite sb. to do sth.；be meant to do sth.；focus on sth.；refer to sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”.
2. Aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to sign up for it.
3. Just as the name suggests, the contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that are taking place around us and in our life.
4. Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life in China.
5. Besides, when making the speech, please speak loudly and clearly without referring to your draft.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了多个复合句，如I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”这句话中，既用了that引导的宾语从句，又用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如a Chinese speech contest，interest in，sign up for，focus on sth.，refer to sth.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 Therefore，Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, which can make life more convenient, and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
By Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人，参加校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法：way →approach
此外：What’s more →Moreover
利用：take advantage of →make use of
期望：look forward to →expect
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour.
拓展句：Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which people can be freed from heavy labour.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
8．One possible version:
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. Above all, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “ no pains, no gains. ”
Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以毕业生代表的身份在校园英语节晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：want→would like
感谢：thanks→appreciation
建议：suggestion→advice
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
拓展句：As a senior three student, I have much that I want to share with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. (运用了宾语从句和原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】JAbove all, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. (运用了for引导的原因状语从句)
9．One possible version:
Dear Wendy,
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Wendy写一封邮件，介绍中国学生过生日的方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 通常方式：（1）生日聚会（2）生日礼物（3）生日祝福
2.你认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
celebrate their birthdays,the most common way,hold a birthday party,get together, have fun,receive nice gifts and good wishes,prepare a special dinner or a cake,buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal,express thanks to, in return for
第三步：连词成句
1.Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing.
2.On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.
3.Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
4.Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways.
5.We can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day.
6.In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. （运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. （运用了原因状语从句）
10．Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked me to share with you how China is fighting Covid-19 and what I’m doing in the epidemic situation. Let me tell you something.
Since the outbreak of Covid-19 in Wuhan in December, 2019, Chinese people including doctors, nurses and scientists have acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it. They are real heroes. Now initial results have been achieved against the epidemic.
As a high school senior, I stay home during the outbreak. On the one hand, I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers. Besides, I take exercise at home every day to keep healthy. Happily, we graduates have now returned to school. We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon.
Thank you for your concern.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李津，你的英国朋友David给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主要内容包括：(1)如何抗疫及成效；(2)你怎么度过及现状；(3)你的感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：epidemic situation (疫情)；Covid-19 (新冠肺炎)；share with (分享)；outbreak (爆发)；spared no effort to(不遗余力地)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如On the one hand, I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers.非谓语动词的运用；We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2022·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国笔友Mike发邮件祝贺2022年北京冬奥会成功举行，并且告诉你说，很多英国人通过奥运更多地了解了中国，希望到中国来看一看；他也计划寒假时到北京旅游。请你写邮件回复Mike，并给他提些建议。要点如下：
(1)注意气候：
(2)注意交通安全：
(3)有关风俗习惯的建议。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2021·天津红桥·统考模拟预测）假设你是晨光中学李津。为了响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费， 本学期你校英语俱乐部开展了主题为“Clear Your Plate”的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3. 建议。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头已给出, 但不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、申请信
3．（2020·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是李津，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教 (tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.参加意图；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数不少于100字；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
三、邀请信
4．（2022·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你计划下周六和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪那里的老人过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给你的外教Lucy写一封电子邮件，邀请她一同前往，内容要点包括：
（1）出发及返回时间；
（2）重阳节的意义；
（3）节日活动安排：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
5．（2021·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是李津，在英国一个月的文化体验活动即将结束时，你准备给接待你的Back夫妇送上你从中国带来的一个有中国文化特色的小礼物并附上一张卡片，卡片内容包括：
1.表达对他们的感谢；
2.对你的小礼物作一个简单说明；
3.邀请 Black夫妇到中国来体验中国传统文化。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Black,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Jin
6．（2020·天津红桥·统考一模）假定你是李津，你校准备举办主题为“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。你的英国留学生朋友Robert在中国已经生活了一段时间，对中国文化很感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他参加演讲比赛，内容包括：
（1）比赛的时间和地点（4月30日下午2:00；学校报告厅）
（2）演讲主题及意义；
（3）比赛注意事项。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
四、其他应用文
7．（2023·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，为配合学校的“科技月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
(1)简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人的功能(至少写出两点)；
(2)说明生活型智能机器人的意义。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：智能机器人 intelligent robot
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By Li Jin
8．（2022·天津红桥·统考二模）假设你是某中学高三毕业生李津，你将作为毕业生代表在校园英语节晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲，内容包括：
（1）对获得的帮助表示感谢；
（2）对学弟、学妹的建议；
（3）努力学习，实现人生梦想；
（4）对母校和老师的祝福。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
9．（2021·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Wendy正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。她请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
1.通常方式：
（1）生日聚会（2）生日礼物（3）生日祝福
2.你认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。
要求：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wendy,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
10．（2020·天津红桥·统考一模）假设你是李津，你的英国朋友David给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主要内容包括:
(1)如何抗疫及成效；
(2)你怎么度过及现状；
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2)词数:不少于100词。
参考词汇:疫情 epidemic situation; 新冠肺炎 Covid-19
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
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1．Dear Mike,
Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. Since your customs are quite different from ours, I’d like to give you some advice to make your stay here safe and comfortable.
First, it is quite cold here in winter, so you’d better wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, pay special attention to the traffic. In China, we drive on the right compared with the situation in your country. So be sure to keep it in mind when you have got a chance to drive a car. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
Looking forward to seeing you. Hope you will enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友迈克写信，就他寒假要到北京旅游一事给与建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
抑制：contain→hold back
建议：advice→suggestion
牢记：keep in mind→bear in mind
隆重的：ceremonious→formal
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
拓展句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation, whose celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. (否定含义词hardly置于句首，句子使用部分倒装和when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about “Clear Your Plate”. Recently, people have realized how much food we waste every year. And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
As for me，I think it’s an extremely good idea to follow. And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it. For example，when we go out for dinner, we can just order as much food as we can eat to make sure little will be wasted. Of course, if we really can’t eat up our food, it’s also ok to take it home, so we can eat it later. Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clear Your Plate”为题写一篇英文演讲稿来响应“光盘行动”号召，反对舌尖上的浪费。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 同学们平时食堂就餐时浪费严重；
2. 呼吁同学们节约粮食；
3. 建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
call on；join a campaign；eat up；contribute our efforts to；eat up；have a chance to；have any effect；make sure;keep in mind；no matter what；make a difference
第三步：连词成句
1.And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.
2.And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it.
3.Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food.
4.Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides, and
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：And everyone is called on to join a campaign, called “Clear Your Plate”, which requires people to eat up all our food.（这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]：Besides, once we have a chance to have meals with other people, who don’t realize the importance, we can explain the purpose of the campaign and convince them not to waste food. （这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]：Some may question whether the campaign have any effect, but, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.（这句话运用了no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
3．Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.
I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就国际中学生家教组织招聘兼职中文家教的广告写一封申请信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.自我介绍；
2.参加意图；
3.希望获准。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
happened to read；native tongue；a good command of spoken and written English；introduce Chinese culture.
第三步：连词成句
1.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet
2. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it.
3. Besides, I've been learning English for 12 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
4. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：自我介绍；参加目的；希望获准
2.表示并列补充关系：For me；Besides,；and
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet；如非谓语动词：employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language；如宾语从句：I know that you welcome students from China…..等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is a special day for the elderly in China. We will set out from our school gate at 9 in the morning. Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival. After lunch, we’ll spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, in hopes of making them happy. We are scheduled to be back around 4 in the afternoon. If you are willing to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Lucy写信邀请她在下周六和同学一起前往敬老院陪那里的老人过重阳节，并告知出发及返回时间，节日活动安排，以及重阳节的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出发：set out→depart
老年人：the elderly→senior citizens
怀着……的希望：in hopes of→ in the hope of
预期，计划做：be scheduled to do→be expected to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.
拓展句：The moment we arrive there, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Upon arrival, we’ll make dumplings and cakes, which are traditional food for the festival.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 If you are willing to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.（运用了条件状语从句）
5．Dear Mr. and Mrs. Black,
When the amazing exchange program draws to an end, I realize it wouldn’t have been possible without your love and care. Many thanks for what you have done during my stay and I do believe your kindness and hospitality will stay with me for a very long time.
The small gift is paper-cutting, which people in my hometown are expert at. The vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper undoubtedly are a popular choice for decoration in my country. I chose them as a gift to show my appreciation and as a reminder of my unforgettable time here with you.
I hope you’ll like it and thanks again for everything. Welcome to China to experience different kinds of traditional culture!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在文化体验活动即将结束时，给接待的Back夫妇送上一个小礼物并附上一张卡片。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结束：come to an end→draw to an end
礼物：present→gift
擅长：be good at→be expert at
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper undoubtedly are a popular choice for decoration in my country.
拓展句：There is no doubt that the vivid pictures cut out from common colorful paper are a popular choice for decoration in my country.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the amazing exchange program draws to an end, I realize it wouldn’t have been possible without your love and care. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Many thanks for what you have done during my stay and I do believe your kindness and hospitality will stay with me for a very long time. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] The small gift is paper-cutting, which people in my hometown are expert at.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Robert,
I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”. Aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to sign up for it.
The contest will be held on April 30 in the school lecture hall beginning at 2:00 pm, when I hope you’ll be available. Just as the name suggests, the contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that are taking place around us and in our life. Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life in China. Besides, when making the speech, please speak loudly and clearly without referring to your draft.
Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。这是一封邀请函，要求考生写一封信给已在中国生活了一段时间的英国留学生朋友Robert，邀请他参加你校的“我眼中的中国”的汉语演讲比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 比赛的时间和地点（4月30日下午2:00；学校报告厅）；
2. 演讲主题及意义；
3. 比赛注意事项。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
I’m writing to tell you that +从句；a Chinese speech contest；(be) aware of sth.；interest in；sign up for；invite sb. to do sth.；be meant to do sth.；focus on sth.；refer to sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”.
2. Aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to sign up for it.
3. Just as the name suggests, the contest is meant to promote our awareness of the changes that are taking place around us and in our life.
4. Therefore, your speech should focus on what impresses you most about your life in China.
5. Besides, when making the speech, please speak loudly and clearly without referring to your draft.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了多个复合句，如I’m writing to tell you that our school has scheduled a Chinese speech contest, whose theme is “China in My Eyes”这句话中，既用了that引导的宾语从句，又用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如a Chinese speech contest，interest in，sign up for，focus on sth.，refer to sth.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 Therefore，Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, which can make life more convenient, and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
By Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人，参加校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法：way →approach
此外：What’s more →Moreover
利用：take advantage of →make use of
期望：look forward to →expect
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows. As a result, people can be freed from heavy labour.
拓展句：Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which people can be freed from heavy labour.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
8．One possible version:
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. Above all, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “ no pains, no gains. ”
Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以毕业生代表的身份在校园英语节晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：want→would like
感谢：thanks→appreciation
建议：suggestion→advice
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a senior three student, I have much to share with you.
拓展句：As a senior three student, I have much that I want to share with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man. (运用了宾语从句和原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】JAbove all, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. (运用了for引导的原因状语从句)
9．One possible version:
Dear Wendy,
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Wendy写一封邮件，介绍中国学生过生日的方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 通常方式：（1）生日聚会（2）生日礼物（3）生日祝福
2.你认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
celebrate their birthdays,the most common way,hold a birthday party,get together, have fun,receive nice gifts and good wishes,prepare a special dinner or a cake,buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal,express thanks to, in return for
第三步：连词成句
1.Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing.
2.On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.
3.Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
4.Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways.
5.We can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day.
6.In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. （运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. （运用了原因状语从句）
10．Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked me to share with you how China is fighting Covid-19 and what I’m doing in the epidemic situation. Let me tell you something.
Since the outbreak of Covid-19 in Wuhan in December, 2019, Chinese people including doctors, nurses and scientists have acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it. They are real heroes. Now initial results have been achieved against the epidemic.
As a high school senior, I stay home during the outbreak. On the one hand, I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers. Besides, I take exercise at home every day to keep healthy. Happily, we graduates have now returned to school. We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon.
Thank you for your concern.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李津，你的英国朋友David给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主要内容包括：(1)如何抗疫及成效；(2)你怎么度过及现状；(3)你的感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：epidemic situation (疫情)；Covid-19 (新冠肺炎)；share with (分享)；outbreak (爆发)；spared no effort to(不遗余力地)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如On the one hand, I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers.非谓语动词的运用；We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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