浙江省宁波市三年(2020-2022)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2021·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,与你同班的英国交换生Jeff觉得自己写的汉字特别难看,向你求助。请写一封信帮助他,内容包括:
1.安慰对方;
2.改进书写的建议;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
2.(2022·浙江宁波·统考一模)假定你是李华, 你校摄影倶乐部征集以“中国航天”为主题的短视频, 你打算邀请你校的交换生Thomas一起制作,请给他写一份邮件,内容包括:
1.作品要求;
2.你对作品的设想。
注意:
3.写作词数应为80字左右;
4.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2021·浙江宁波·统考模拟预测)假设你是李华。几天之前已经接受同学Lily的邀请,参加她本周五晚的生日聚会,但因临时有事而不能参加。请你给Lily写一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1.表达自己的歉意;2. 说明不能参加的原因; 3. 再次致歉。
注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
三、告知信/通知
4.(2021·浙江宁波·统考模拟预测)假设你是李华,你本学期参加了中国国画社团,你的英国朋友Wilson想了解你的社团选择情况。请你给他写一封邮件,具体内容如下:
1.选择结果;
2. 社团活动简介;
3.社团活动收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
5.(2022·浙江宁波·统考二模)假定你是李华,你班今天与英国姊妹学校Hampton School在线共上一堂课,介绍各自国家的传统节日。请你就此事给校刊英文栏目写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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6.(2021·浙江宁波·宁波市北仑中学校考三模)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“缓解压力”为主题的心理主题讲座。讲座将于下周五下午3:00至5:00在学校礼堂里举行,由来自北京大学的陈教授主讲,参加学生是高三学生。请你写一篇通知告知所有高三学生。
内容:
1. 讲座相关情况。
2. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.(2021·浙江宁波·统考二模)假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华,你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象,打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR LIFE"的演讲,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.演讲的主题;
2.演讲的原因;
3.你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students!
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Thank you for your listening!
8.(2021·浙江宁波·校联考一模)假定你是李华,上周六澳大利亚学生代表团访问你校,请你为校英语报写一篇报道,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 来访人员; 2. 活动安排;3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:代表团delegation n.
An Exchange Visit
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9.(2020·浙江宁波·校联考二模)假如你是李华,你的笔友Eric 想了解你校学生毕业后如何处理旧书。请你给他写封回信,介绍你校学生会开展的”绿色离校(Be a Green school-leaver)”旧书回收项目。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 旧书处理做法及意义。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.(2020·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考三模)假定你是学生会主席李华。2018年瑞典人发起了一种在慢跑过程中捡拾垃圾的运动,即plogging, 目前这一运动在世界各地广受欢迎,请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书,呼吁全体同学积极参与这项运动。内容包括:
1.介绍plogging;
2.开展plogging的好处
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
词汇:瑞典人 the Swedish
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11.(2020·浙江宁波·统考一模)假设你是李华,你校英语口语社将换届选举,你欲参选社长,请你写一篇英语竞选演讲稿,进行口头竞选演讲。内容包括:
1. 竞选职位;
2. 个人优势;
3. 当选设想。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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12.(2019·浙江宁波·效实中学校考模拟预测)假设你是高三学生李华,你所在的学校将举行“行走马拉松(walkathon)”公益活动,为贫困山区的孩子们筹款。请给你的美国朋友Chris写一封信,询问他是否愿意一起参加。内容包括:
1. 介绍活动的相关内容(例如:时间、长度、参加者等);
2. 你对此项活动的看法;
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意:1. 词数 80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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五、开放性作文
13.(2022·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考三模)假设你是光明中学的学生会主席李华,有一批来自新加坡姊妹学校的中学生来访你校。来访中他们听到了广播站里播放的校歌,他们对此很感兴趣,请你给他们做个简单介绍。内容包括:
1.致欢迎辞;
2.介绍校歌;
3.来访期待。
注意:1.字数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:school anthem
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六、读后续写
14.(2022·浙江宁波·统考一模)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Counting the votes took about five minutes, but it seemed like hours. At last, after three long years, the “PCHS” letters on my uniform would soon be edged with gold cording (金线), identifying me as the important Captain of Polk County High School cheerleaders (啦啦队员), which was quite an accomplishment before I ended my school days in a blaze of glory.
“Girls,” she began, “it is my pleasure to announce that Terry Shaw has been elected Captain of Polk County High School cheerleading team.” A resounding cheer was heard throughout the gym. How could this be I hadn’t missed a practice or a game in three years. Terry couldn’t claim this flawless record.
Everyone gathered around Terry with congratulations, but I was glued to my seat that only moments before was the springboard to my throne (宝座). She had stolen my thunder and swept my dream right out from under me. Finally, I walked over to Terry on shaky legs and managed a “Good luck, Terry,” in a whisper that barely masked my urge to cry. Terry hugged me close and said, “I wasn’t expecting this, Annie. What a shock.” I didn’t reply her with mean words but deep inside I wanted to do just that.
All the way home, I sobbed. There was no way I was going to stay on a team so blind that they couldn’t see the one most deserving of being named captain. I slammed the front door, stomped up the steps and threw myself onto my bed in a dramatic display of sobs and sighs that eventually gave way to sleep.
The next morning I marched over to my closet and took out my uniform. Once it was in my hands and I held it close to me, I knew I couldn’t quit. Heartbroken as I was, my true love was cheering with my teammates.
How hard it was to go to that first practice after Terry had been named captain. The moment I arrived, Coach Maguire asked me to take three of the new girls and work with them on our basic practice. Terry was assigned three as well.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then Terry asked me if we could gather all the girls and work with them together.
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At the end of the year, the Annual Sports Award Ceremony was held to honor the valuable players and cheerleaders.
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15.(2022·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs — one for Dad, one for Mom, and one for me. In the cellar (地窖), the very last jar of apple jam lay quietly on the shelf, waiting to be turned into an apple pie when Dad came back. Mom sat at one end of the table. I sat in the middle between her and Dad. I tried not to look at Dad’s empty place. Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.
Every night, I lay awake in bed and waited for the train to stop. Waited to hear the creaky (嘎吱作响的) gate Dad’s going to fix when he came home. Waited to hear the sound of his work boots dropping on the step by the kitchen door, and his voice calling, “I’m home!”
Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains Mom made from empty flour sacks (麻布袋).
Every night, Mom came to kiss me good-night — after the train’s gone by. She had been listening, too. “Go to sleep. Your dad will be home soon. Maybe for Thanksgiving.”
Time dragging by, it finally came the day before Thanksgiving. I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my head, whispering, “Maybe tomorrow, maybe tomorrow.”
Early the next morning, the smell of coffee woke me. I ran into the kitchen. There he was! Dad lifted me onto his shoulders and pretended to stagger from my weight. “How’s my boy You’ve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up anymore.”
He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOUR — I knew that word. I tried reading the other: S-U-G-A-R. Dad whistled admiringly and winked at me. Mom and I had been practicing my letters most days. I could see that Mom was pleased with me. “I’m going to bake a pie for your dad’s homecoming dinner. Jimmy, bring me that jar of apple jam from the shelf in the cellar.” Mom smiled at me.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar.
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“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears.
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16.(2022·浙江宁波·统考二模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
My parents do a lot of embarrassing things! Usually, it’s my dad who sings silly songs or tells corny jokes around my friends. But a few weeks ago, it was my mother who played the embarrassing-parent role.
While my mom and I were shopping, we ran into my teacher, who mentioned that the school didn’t have a music teacher to help our class put together a performance for Winter Fair. And, right then and there, my mom said, “I know the perfect song and dance. I’ll teach it to the kids!”
Before I could say “Please don’t”, my mom had agreed to come to my class every morning at 9:30 for a week. Oh, and just to be clear, it’s not as if she’s a professional entertainer. My parents run a small grocery store, and the only singing my mom does is in the shower.
“Um,” I said on our way home, “are you sure this is such a good idea ” “Of course!” she said. “If we want your school Winter Fair to happen, people need to step up and volunteer.” “I know volunteering is important,” I said, “but couldn’t you help out in Tex and Indi’s kindergarten instead ” She laughed, “Don’t be silly. We will have fun!”
“OK, fellas!” my teacher said at 9:28 on Monday. “We’re going to stop silent reading a little early today because a special guest is here to help us with a performance for Winter Fair. Let’s all welcome Arizona’s mother.”
I looked up to discover my mom standing at the front of the room wearing the world’s silliest snowflake hat. “I’m super excited to be here with you!” my mom said, “I’m going to teach you a fun little song-and-dance performance I learned a few years back, when I did some theater in college. Here goes!”
Oh please, oh please, I said over and over in my head, let there be a fire drill, or an assembly, or a power failure, or anything to stop my mom from completely embarrassing herself — and me!!!
But apparently, my mom was not at all concerned about looking silly. She turned on some background music and started singing and dancing away.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“I can’t believe this is happening” was all I could think.
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My mom turned out to be more than a little OK at performing.
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17.(2021·浙江宁波·统考模拟预测)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Frey grabbed his bat and glove, and raced out of the door towards the Jack’s. Summer vacation just began. The boys planned to play baseball every day, so they could make the team in the following semester.
Jack was waiting outside for Frey. “What are you doing Where's your stuff ” Frey asked, lifting his bat onto his shoulder. Jack shook his head, “I have to clean Mr. Willow's garage before I can go. With his broken arm, he can't do it himself. My mom always volunteers me to help the Willow’s. She thinks they’re kind of old and can’t afford to hire a cleaner.”
To get the work done earlier, Frey offered to help. The boys went down the block to the Willow’s and got started. They found a couple of brooms. Before they swept, they put boxes scattered around the garage floor on shelves. As Jack put a big box on a shelf, it fell off and with it fell an envelope. He picked it up. It wasn't sealed, so he opened it. Out of his surprise, there were several one hundred dollar bills inside.
“You’ve got to see this.” He pulled out the bills and showed Frey, “It just fell down when the box fell. There’s got to be several hundred dollars here.” Jack looked past Frey to the garage door and continued, “Nobody’s here. If we take some, I bet no one will ever know.” Before his voice died away, Jack had already drawn out one bill and stuffed it into his pocket.
Frey frowned and shook his head. “Are you crazy That’s stealing.” Jack ignored him and protested, “Well, I do a lot of chores for them and don’t get paid. It’s not really stealing. It's kind of payment for my hard work. And one hundred will do for a bat and glove in Igo’s Sports Store”. With this, Jack put the rest money back.
Frey was about to grab the money from Jack’s pocket when they heard a voice, “Hello, e in for a chocolate cake! Mrs. Willow made one for you.” Mr. Willow walked into the garage.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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At the sight of Mr. Willow, Jack and Frey froze in shock.
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When they were about to leave, Mr. Willow handed Jack a brand new bat and glove.
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18.(2021·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log(圆木)on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron(拆轮胎的扳手). No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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19.(2021·浙江宁波·宁波市北仑中学校考三模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty and while my friends were on night duty. On one shift, I remember I sensed something just before going off duty at 11am. I had brought the ward sister her morning tea, so I put down the tea tray. The tray rattled and fell through the window. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shook and patients screamed.
I realized that we were in the grips of a tremendous earthquake. I caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened by it. I pushed her under the bed and held the bed in place while I got under it myself. I then pulled a blanket down between us. As soon as it settled, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside, I carried her out and helped her down to the lawn, where several other people now had gathered.
I knew the ward sister was with another patient, so I went back inside the building. When I reached the ward sister, I found her patient couldn’t walk. We made a seat for her by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind. Almost all of the patients had been able to get themselves out of our ward, as far as I knew.
Once our ward was cleared, a doctor called for volunteers to go down to the isolation ward with him to help more people. Another nurse and I went down there. The first thing we saw was a bath in the hallway, We came to the ruined ward. The doctor went in ahead of us through the remains of what had been a doorway. He found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble (碎石). She was still alive so we began to clear the rubble away. Suddenly the aftershock struck. The doctor ordered us to leave. This brave man intended to stay with the trapped nurse and risk his own life.
注意:1. 所叙写的短文词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 叙写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 叙写完成后,用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
We were determined to save the nurse with him together.
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Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building.
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20.(2021·浙江宁波·统考二模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The watch was my grandfather's. He hung it by his bed. The face was marked with elegant Roman numbers and the case was gold. My grandfather got it after his fifty years of faithful service with his firm. I often gazed at it longingly as I sat with my grandfather after school.
The day I told him of my success in the examinations, he was pleased, "You'll be going to the new school next, Will. Remember you'll need plenty of patience. That's the right way. " I nodded when handing him the watch. He gazed at it for some moments, and wound it.
The next morning my mother told me he had died in his sleep and left me his watch. For safety, my mother was to put it away in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it. I protested(抗议)so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it in the kitchen where I could always see it.
The summer soon ended and it was time for me to enter the new school. I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. One of them was a rich fellow whose way of impressing us was to parade his possessions before us. Everything Crawley had was better than ours—until he brought the watch.
"I have a better watch than that," I announced, attempting to impress them. "Well, show it to us," Crawley sneered(冷笑)in disbelief. Embarrassed, I promised to bring it to them that afternoon.
Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did. After lunch, as I was too excited to wait for the return bus, I got my bike out of the shed
I rode fast, excitement coursing through me. Then suddenly a puppy ran out into my path. I pulled at my brakes so hard that the bike stopped to a sharp standstill(急停)and I fell over.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I picked myself' up and put a trembling hand into my pocket.
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"That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience, " a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.
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21.(2021·浙江宁波·校联考一模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The Water of Life
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The creeks and streams were long gone back into the earth. It was a dry season that would bankupt several farmers before it was through. Every day, my husband and his brothers would go about the tiring process of trying to get water to the farm. If we didn`t see some rain soon, we would lose everything.
It was on his day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen with my own eyes. I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. He wasn't walking with the usual carefree abandon of a youth but with a serious purpose. I could only see his back. He was obviously walking with a great effort trying to be as still as possible Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again toward the house. I went back to make sandwiches, thinking that whatever task he had been doing was completed.
Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that slow purposeful stride toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking carefully to the woods, and then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked, very careful not to spill the water he held. Maybe two or three tablespoons were held in his tiny hands. I sneaked closer as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He had a much greater purpose. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw an amazing sight. A mother deer with a huge pair of deer horns appeared in front of him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿)lying on the dry ground. I almost screamed to get him away.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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However, Billy walked right up to them.
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I witnessed the most beautiful heart working hand to save a life.
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22.(2020·浙江宁波·校联考二模)阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.
When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “ Carter, where are you going ” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the seat.
I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.
When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loosen the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape (魔法斗篷). With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.
I crawled (缓慢行进) back across eight people (I counted on the way out), never taking my eyes off the screen. I sat down in my seat slowly, then picked up my drink, and swallowed it quickly. But suddenly my brain said, “That’s not coke. That’s lemonade.” I looked down at the cup, just as the girl next to me shouted, “He drank my lemonade!”
“Shhhh!” the people around us said, making quiet complaints.
“Where’s Emmett ” I asked, as if the girl had hidden him under her seat.
“Carter, down here,” Emmett answered in a low voice. He was two rows ahead of me. I was in the wrong row! Everyone was turning around to look at me.
“Here,” I said, handing the girl her drink.
“Eww,” she said. “You have had a drink of it, so you owe me a lemonade.”
“Shhhh!” everyone said again.
“OK, OK,” I said, starting my crawl across eight sets of feet again. Everybody were complaining as I inched out.
“Don’t come back,” the boy on the end said.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.
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I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.
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23.(2020·浙江宁波·镇海中学校考三模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。续写词数为150字左右。
The spot of red was what first caught Randy Heiss’s attention on December 16, 2018. He was hiking the remote land behind his farm in a small town near the U.S.-Mexico border, and there lying on the grass was a balloon. He walked toward it with his dog, thinking he should pick it up and throw it away.
That’s when he noticed the balloon’s string was attached to a piece of paper. “Dayami,” it read on one side, in a child’s writing. Heiss flipped the paper over. On the back he saw a numbered list, all in Spanish. His Spanish wasn’t very good, but he could see it was a Christmas list!
Heiss was charmed. He suspected that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon, something he used to do himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned the letters Heiss had sent, but he wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales, Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million. Based on the wind direction, he was almost sure that was where it came from. Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list. They determined that Dayami, probably a girl, had asked for a doll, a dollhouse, doll clothes and art supplies.
Heiss then posted his search about finding Dayami on Facebook, attaching photos, hoping some of his friends in Nogales might know the girl’s family. A few days passed with no results; Heiss worried that time was running out before Christmas. On December 19, 2018, he decided to send a private Facebook message to Radio Xeny, an AM radio station based in Nogales. To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away and promised him to post his search on the station’s Facebook page immediately.
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The next morning, Heiss awoke to a message from Radio Xeny.
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Dayami’s eyes were wide open with wonder.
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24.(2019·浙江宁波·效实中学校考模拟预测)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The canteen was crowded with summer campers from high schools across the city, all extremely hungry after a day's activities. I spotted an empty place and walked there. Just as I put my tray(餐盘) down, I felt a bump against my hip. The tray dropped on the table and the soup spilt all over my camp shirt and jeans. And I heard a burst of laughter.
"Can’t you look where you are going, you clumsy fool!" I shouted, glaring at the troublemaker, a tall boy with wild hair.
"Sorry! Can't help laughing! You look so funny!" said the boy, bending over with laughter. I was too annoyed to respond and just walked away to change my clothes.
The next morning, we were all assembled for roll call(点名), when I saw the same boy come running out of the dorm, his unbuttoned shirt flying behind him. Before he could slide into place, he was spotted by the Camp Commandant. As a punishment for being late, he was made to do a hundred pushups. As I walked past him later, I let out a loud laugh, saying "Sorry. I can't help laughing. You look so funny."
So the war of words continued in the following three days with the wild-haired boy, whose name, I found out, was Ben.
A mountain hike(远足) marked the last day of the camp. On the way back, I found myself left far behind my team. Soon, they were out of sight. The camp site was a long way away and I was getting anxious as evening fell. I risked taking a shortcut(近路) clung to the mountain side, but suddenly, I tripped off the path and slid right down the slope(斜坡).
Fortunately, my fall was stopped by a bunch of bamboo. I saw I was about ten meters below the track. There was no way I could climb up the slope as evidently I had my ankle broken. After making several vain attempts, I waited hopelessly. It got dark and I became afraid.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Then, I saw a faint light, and heard a voice calling out my name.
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The next day, as we were boarding the buses which would take us back to our own homes, Ben came up to me.
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七、概要写作
25.(2021·浙江宁波·统考模拟预测)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
One problem upsets the business of selling clothes online-predicting how a garment will fit without trying it on. Enter the body-measurement suit from Start Today, a Japanese firm that runs the Zozotown platform on which clothing companies from around the world sell their products,as well as its own private brand, Zozo.
In the past years Stan Today has distributed to just over one million Japanese customers,free of charge,its “Zozosuit”, a skin-tight, full-body suit covered in around 350 fiducial markers, small objects that can be used as a point of reference for measurements. Shoppers slip on the suit and slowly rotate as their smartphone takes photos.
The firm uses the images to create a 3D of their body, which it can use to offer a range of customized services. At the most basic level, when customers choose an item from one of the 6.400 brands listed on Zozotown, the platform uses the Zozosuit data lo recommend the right size.
A first,more high tech version of the suit proved too expensive. But its latest version costs the company only V1.000( $ 9) a piece. Besides, the fashion industry has not yet adapted to meet the needs of a generation accustomed to buying everything online, to their specifications and ai their convenience. But the firm offers exactly that.
How the suit gels on is crucial for Start Today s future. The Zozotown platform is the giant of online fashion retail in Japan. It created and dominates the market for online clothing sales. Analysts predict it may be reaching peaks, because customized services could attract more customers. But observers are more cautious about whether the suit can help Start Today on its other path to growth:expanding abroad. Since July customers in 72 countries have been able to request a body-measurement suit to help them buy clothes from the Zozo label. An attempt a few years ago to take the Zozotown platform into China and South Korea (before it came up with the body-measurement suit) failed. For now at least the suit is a unique service.
26.(2020·浙江宁波·统考一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It is quite reasonable to blame traffic jams, the cost of gas and the great speed of modern life, but manners on the road are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men would become fierce tigers behind the wheel. It is all right to have a tiger in a cage, but to have one in the driver's seat is another matter.
Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense. It takes the most cool-headed drivers great patience to give up the desire to beat back when forced to face rude driving. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards reducing the possibility of quarrelling and fighting. A friendly nod or a wave of thanks in answer to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of good will and becomes so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such behaviors of politeness are by no means enough. Many drivers nowadays don't even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it.
However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who waves a child crossing the street at a wrong place into the path of oncoming cars that may not be able to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to. An experienced driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if drivers learnt to correctly join in traffic stream without causing total blockages that give rise to unpleasant feelings. Unfortunately, modern drivers can't even learn to drive, let alone master the roadmanship. Years ago, experts warned us that the fast increase of the car ownership would demand more give-and-takefrom all road users. It is high time for all of us to take this message to heart.
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参考答案:
1.Dear Jeff,
I’m extremely sorry to learn that you are in a difficult situation and you are upset about how to improve your handwriting. There are a few techniques you can use to make your handwriting more smooth and graceful.
To begin with, I think it's important that the models you imitate are not only written beautifully but correctly and neatly. You can also join the calligraphy club in our school, which is intended for foreign calligraphy lovers. With the help of teachers with advanced skills, you will definitely improve your handwriting swiftly. Handwriting is never an easy task, but takes painstaking efforts and patience. I believe you’ll make great progress sooner or later.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生请写一封信帮助与你同班的英国交换生Jeff,为他解答如何提高汉字书写。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
沮丧的:sad →upset
提高:enhance →improve
首先:Firstly →To begin with
参加:participate in →join
2.句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句:With the help of teachers with advanced skills, you will definitely improve your handwriting swiftly.
拓展句:It is with the help of a highly skilled teacher that your handwriting is sure to improve rapidly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You can also join the calligraphy club in our school, which is intended for foreign calligraphy lovers.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] I’m extremely sorry to learn that you are in a difficult situation and you are upset about how to improve your handwriting.这句话运用了宾语从句。
2.Dear Thomas,
Learning that you show great interest in photography, I’m writing to invite you to shoot a short video.
The theme of the video is “China Aerospace”. It is supposed to last about 15 minutes. I hope the video can vividly show the development of China’s space industry,which can help the students to gain a better understanding of China’s space development and meanwhile deepen their love for China.
I’m looking forward to your participation and do wish us a success!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。你校摄影倶乐部征集以“中国航天”为主题的短视频,要求考生李华给本校的交换生Thomas写一份邮件,邀请其一起制作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题:subject→ theme
盼望:hope → look forward to
应该:should →be supposed to
感兴趣:be interested in→ show interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The theme of the video is “China Aerospace”. It is supposed to last about 15 minutes.
拓展句:The theme of the video is “China Aerospace”, which is supposed to last about 15 minutes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope the video can vividly show the development of China’s space industry, which can help the students to gain a better understanding of China’s space development and meanwhile deepen their love for China.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Learning that you show great interest in photography, I’m writing to invite you to shoot a short video.(运用了现在分词作状语)
3.Dear Lily,
Unable to attend your birthday party on Friday, I am writing to extend my sincere apology to you.
The reason why I have to be absent is that my brother who has been abroad for a whole year will come back at 18: 00 this Friday. Since my parents happen not to be available because of work, I’ll pick him up at the airport and then keep him company for some time, when it will definitely be too late for your party.
Sincerely, I apologize once again for what is also a great pity for me. Happy Birthday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给同学Lily写封道歉信,说明不能参加同学生日聚会的原因并表示歉意。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总法
总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,最后再总结呼应主题,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 表达自己的歉意;
2. 说明不能参加的原因;
3. 再次致歉。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
apology to sb.; come back; because of; pick up; be late for; a great pity.
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to extend my sincere apology to you.
2. The reason why I have to be absent is that my brother who has been abroad for a whole year will come back at 18: 00 this Friday.
3. My parents happen not to be available because of work.
4. I’ll pick him up at the airport and then keep him company for some time, when it will definitely be too late for your party.
5. I apologize once again for what is also a great pity for me. Happy Birthday.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表因果关系:Since
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since my parents happen not to be available because of work, I’ll pick him up at the airport and then keep him company for some time, when it will definitely be too late for your party. 此复合句中有由Since引导的原因状语从句,使行文结构紧凑并显得很有文采。
[高分句型2] I apologize once again for what is also a great pity for me.此句中有what引导的宾语从句。
4.Dear Wilson,
Knowing that you are interested in my choice of clubs,I’m writing to tell you that I have joined Chinese Painting Club.
I’m totally attracted to the club, because various activities are provided regularly, including training for green hands, painting outdoors and visiting art exhibitions. By joining the club, not only can I acquire basic painting skills, but also form a circle of friends with similar hobbies. Additionally, appreciating the traditional Chinese paintings offers me chances to deepen my insight into our unique culture.
Do you have similar clubs Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Wilson写封信,告知你的社团选择情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
完全地:totally→completely
获得:acquire→obtain
另外:additionally→moreover
提供:offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, appreciating the traditional Chinese paintings offers me chances to deepen my insight into our unique culture.
拓展句:Additionally, appreciating the traditional Chinese paintings offers me chances which can deepen my insight into our unique culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in my choice of clubs, I’m writing to tell you that I have joined Chinese Painting Club. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By joining the club, not only can I acquire basic painting skills, but also form a circle of friends with similar hobbies. (运用了部分倒装句)
5.To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK, introducing our traditional festivals to each other.
We started by presenting the origin, significance and celebration ways of the Spring Festival with pictures and videos. Afterwards, students from Hampton School described their traditional festival, Guy Fawkes Night. In the next session, we asked questions and exchanged opinions in a relaxing atmosphere.
This online class was well received. Wang Ming, one of my classmates, said, “It provides a meaningful platform to promote our culture and get a glimpse of the UK.”
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就你班今天与英国姊妹学校Hampton School在线共上一堂课,介绍各自国家的传统节日这件事给校刊英文栏目写一篇报道。内容包括:1. 活动目的;2. 活动过程;3. 活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
增强:enhance→strengthen
接下来的:next→following
观点:opinion→viewpoint
提供:provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK, introducing our traditional festivals to each other.
拓展句:To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with Hampton School, which is our sister school in the UK, introducing our traditional festivals to each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK, introducing our traditional festivals to each other. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】We started by presenting the origin, significance and celebration ways of the Spring Festival with pictures and videos. (运用了动名词作宾语)
6.Notice
In order to help the students cope with pressure properly, our school will invite Dr. Chen from Peking University to give a lecture on it in the school hall. All the students of Senior Three are required to attend it. Dr. Chen will introduce some effective ways of handling pressure through some activities. It will last two hours from 3 p. m. to 5 p. m. next Friday.
Please take your notebook with you and keep quiet during the lecture. After the lecture, anyone with questions can communicate with the professor individually. Please get your questions ready.
All the students are required to be present on time. Please don’t be late.
Student Union
May 20
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇通知给所有高三学生,介绍关于学校举办的以“缓解压力”为主题的心理主题讲座。讲座将于下周五下午3:00至5:00在学校礼堂里举行,由来自北京大学的陈教授主讲,参加学生是高三学生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
应对:deal with→cope with/handle
演讲:speech→lecture
交流:talk with→communicate with
单独地:separately→individually
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:All the students of Senior Three are required to attend it. Dr. Chen will introduce some effective ways of handling pressure through some activities.
拓展句:All the students of Senior Three are required to attend the lecture, in which Dr. Chen will introduce some effective ways of handling pressure through some activities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to help the students cope with pressure properly, our school will invite Dr. Chen from Peking University to give a lecture on it in the school hall. (运用了in order to help作目的状语;省略to的不定式cope with作宾语补足语;动词不定式to give作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2] Dr. Chen will introduce some effective ways of handling pressure through some activities. (运用了动名词handling作宾语)
7.One possible version:
Good morning. respected teachers and dear fellow students!
I feel so honored/privileged to deliver a speech themed at food for life. The past years have witnessed the severeness of food crisis worldwide. However, some of us haven't attached great importance to the issue. Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
Facing the stern reality, I think it's high time that we stopped it. Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately. Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇题为“"FOOD FOR LIFE"”的演讲稿,号召同学们珍惜粮食。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲:maker a speech=deliver a speech
重视:pay attention to=attached great importance to
严峻的:serious → severe
行动:take action= go into action
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
拓展句:It is especially in canteen that Food waste is still a common sight.
【点睛】[高分句型1]:Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately.这句话运用了倒装句。
[高分句型2]:Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.这句话运用了强调句。
8. An Exchange Visit
Last Saturday, a delegation of Australian students visited our school.
During the visit, a series of activities was arranged. Upon arrival, the Australian friends were warmly welcomed and shown around our campus before visiting the school history museum, helping them gain a deeper insight into our school's development. In the afternoon, they attended a calligraphy class, savoring the charm of Chinese characters. The highlight was an evening gala where students from both countries impressed the audience with their wonderful performances.
The visit is such a success that our mutual understanding is enhanced and our friendship is strengthened. (97 words)
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校英语报写一篇报道,介绍上周六澳大利亚学生代表团访问学校情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1.来访人员;
2.活动安排;
3.活动意义。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a series of;show around;gain a deeper insight into;savor the charm of
第三步:连词成句
1.Last Saturday, a delegation of Australian students visited our school.
2.During the visit, a series of activities was arranged.
3.Upon arrival, the Australian friends were warmly welcomed and shown around our campus before visiting the school history museum, helping them gain a deeper insight into our school's development.
4. In the afternoon, they attended a calligraphy class, savoring the charm of Chinese characters.
5.The highlight was an evening gala where students from both countries impressed the audience with their wonderful performances.
6.The visit is such a success that our mutual understanding is enhanced and our friendship is strengthened.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the afternoon, they attended a calligraphy class, savoring the charm of Chinese characters. (现在分词savoring作状语)
[高分句型2] The highlight was an evening gala where students from both countries impressed the audience with their wonderful performances.(where引导定语从句)
[高分句型3] The visit is such a success that our mutual understanding is enhanced and our friendship is strengthened. ( such…that引导结果状语从句)
9.Dear Eric,
I’m writing to answer your questions about our ways to deal with used books.
A book recycling project, carried out by the Student Union, calls on senior three students to be a green school-leaver. They are encouraged to donate their books by leaving them in the boxes outside their classrooms, which not only helps deal with their used books properly but promotes their awareness of environmental protection. Since 2010, the project has been well received, for it has greatly cut down waste and spread the idea of green life.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封回信,为笔友Eric介绍旧书回收项目。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信目的
2.介绍相关情况
1)做法。(what to do)
2)意义。(meaning)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
deal with; carry out; call on; not only…but; awareness of environmental protection; cut down; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m writing to answer your questions about our ways to deal with used books.
2.carried out by the Student Union,
3.calls on senior three students to be a green school-leaver.
4.which not only helps deal with their used books properly but promotes their awareness of environmental protection.
5. for it has greatly cut down waste and spread the idea of green life.
6. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:They are encouraged to donate their books by leaving them in the boxes outside their classrooms, which not only helps deal with their used books properly but promotes their awareness of environmental protection.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;for引导的原因状语从句Since 2010, the project has been well received, for it has greatly cut down waste and spread the idea of green life.也使用了一些固定词组,如deal with; carry out; cut down等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
10.Dear friends,
Plogging is a new fitness trend which combines jogging with picking up litter. Since it was created in Sweden, it has swept across the world.
Plogging has many advantages. To begin with, with some bending and arm strength required to hold all the garbage while plogging, you will work out more efficiently than just jogging. Secondly, plogging is suitable for all ages. You just need to carry a garbage bag as well as a pair of gloves. Furthermore, there is no doubt that plogging will lead to a cleaner environment and a better world to live in. In short, not only does plogging benefit health but it will also bring about great changes to our environment.
Let's take action from now on and do our bits.
Students' Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作——倡议书,呼吁全体同学积极参与plogging这个活动。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封倡议书;假设你是学生会主席Li Hua,你需要以学生会的名义写一封号召大家积极参与plogging活动的倡议书,除题目中提到的该活动在世界各地广泛受欢迎之外,对于该活动的其他介绍较少,因此需要学生补充相关要点,如:参加plogging时的衣着、所需工具、这个活动的最终意义等。学生言之有理即可。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:pick up(捡起……),sweep across(席卷……),be suitable for(适用于……),furthermore(此外)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)连词成句,需注意这是一篇倡议书,时态上使用一般现在时即可,同时要在文章结尾时发出对大家的倡议:即大家可以行动起来,一起保护环境。
第4步:连句成文,可使用连词对文章进行润色,注意不要全用简单句,适当使用复合句,如定语从句Plogging is a new fitness trend which combines jogging with picking up litter.,以及“To begin with, Secondly, Furthermore”首先、其次、另外表示逻辑关系的连词等,同时还可以使用“there is no doubt that…”(毫无疑问的是……);”,“not only…but…”(不但……而且)等高频词组及句型,全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。
【点睛】整篇文章要点明确,分段合理,字数适当,是一篇比较标准的应试作文。文章开篇点题,使用which引导的定语从句对文章主题进行了解释说明。可对此句型进行积累。还使用了“To begin with, Secondly, Furthermore”首先、其次、另外表示逻辑关系的连词。文章还使用了is suitable for(适用于……),as well as(也;还;又),there is no doubt that(毫无疑问的是……),lead to(导致……)等高频词组及句型。同时还使用了not only放在句首的倒装句,增加了文章结构的丰富性,使得文章逻辑更清晰。
11.Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I am here to run for the president of our Oral English Club.
I’m confident that I am qualified for this job because I am outgoing, and skilled at organizing different kinds of activities. Besides, I can speak English fluently. If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will organize more activities like English Corner and English Speech Contest, to provide a platform for us to improve our English oral skills. I sincerely hope you will vote for me.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是演讲稿。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你校英语口语社将换届选举,你欲参选社长,请你写一篇英语竞选演讲稿,进行口头竞选演讲。内容包括:1. 竞选职位;2. 个人优势;3. 当选设想。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):spare time (抽时间);awfully so