浙江省台州市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
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浙江省台州市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2020·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校交换生David有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部（Sunshine Club），向你咨询相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.主要志愿活动；
3.申请方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
2．（2022·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，邀请了即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加你校成人礼。请给领队Mrs. Evans再写一份电子邮件，附上活动具体安排（附件）。你的邮件正文内容包括：
1. 成人礼大致安排；
2. 希望读完附件，提出建议；
3. 期盼到来。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony；附件attachment
3．（2021·浙江台州·台州市书生中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Allen邀请你去参观一个画展，你有事不能前往。
请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、感谢邀请；
2、表达歉意；
3. 说明理由。
注意：
1、词数80左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、推荐信
4．（2022·浙江台州·统考一模）双语短视频系列Amazing China展现了中国的风景名胜、人文地理等，自推出以来广受国内外好评。假定你是李华，请你写一封邮件向你的摄影师朋友Alex分享推介该系列短视频。内容如下：
1.阐明写信目的;
2.陈述推荐理由;
3.期待观后交流。
注意：
1.词数80左右：
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·浙江台州·统考一模）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary对中国民歌很感兴趣，想请你推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.你最喜爱的中国民歌，如《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》(Jasmine)；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：民歌folk song
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
6．（2021·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是校英文报Teens Today的学生主编，本学期该报拟开设专栏“科技与人文”(Technology and Humanity), 向全校同学征集稿件。请你写一封征稿函，内容包括：
1. 稿件要求；
2. 投稿方式；
3. 录用奖励。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
五、读后续写
7．（2022·浙江台州·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sunlight flooded through the window when Tomas was sitting at the kitchen table, struggling with a literary classic. Streamers of clouds drifted by high above in the sky. Not far away, the huge new tower blocks lined the road. The faint sound of cars was dimly heard.
His mother was chopping tomatoes for their dinner as usual. Suddenly she said, ”You know, the thing I miss most is cooking a really hot salsa (辣番茄酱), with fresh peppers straight from the garden.” She sighed. “That’s what I miss most about Merida.”
Tomas looked up from his book in surprise. His mother had never talked like this about their old life before. He studied her now. She looked a little sad, but then she smiled at him and swept the pile of chopped tomatoes into the cooking pot.
“But I’ve already learned a lot about this new country, Tomas,“ she said. ”For a start, I’ve learned that there’s more than one way to make a salsa!" She waved a packet of chili spice powder at him, and they both laughed.
Watching his mother busy in the kitchen preparing dinner, Tomas thought about the insight his mother had given him into her feelings, and he realized that he felt the same way about leaving.
Sure, it had been great for his father to get this good job, but it had also been hard. Tomas missed his old home-especially the sun and the beach. And his mother missed Merida, too. She had loved working in her market garden, selling the fresh vegetables that she had grown herself and then coming home to cook up huge, tasty meals for her family. Tomas’s stomach rumbled at the memories.
He thought about how different things were for them now, living in this large, gray apartment block where there was no garden and no friends dropping by to share their delicious meals.
He sighed. At least they were still able to speak regularly every night after dinner with his grandmother back in Mexico over the computer-Grandmother! Abuela!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly Tomas had an idea.
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A week later, a box arrived from Mexico.
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8．（2022·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold yet sunny Saturday morning in February. Dad’s New Year’s resolution had been to get fit. Mum pushed him out of bed and told him to go jogging by the river. Later, after a nice lie-in, she went downstairs in her dressing gown and found the kids watching TV. She turned it off and said she was going to do something really special for Dad’s birthday. If they overheard anything, just promised to keep it secret.
Jenny looked at Mum with a puzzled expression on her forehead and promised they wouldn’t say anything whatever happened. But Jenny reminded Dad’s birthday was in June and it might be a little too early to get all steamed up about it.
Silent for a moment, Mum said she was not getting everything ready but just wanted to spare enough time for preparation as this year it’s a bigger deal than usual. Dad was going to be 50.
“50! Gosh, that’s half a century,” spluttered Gerry. “I knew he was old, but I didn’t realize he was ancient!”
Indeed, that was why Mum started planning a special party for him. Mum talked with grandma about the plan because her house was the only one in the family that is spacious enough for all friends and relatives. Grandma quite agreed and also started preparing.
“But you know how Dad feels guilty to bother others. You’ve got to admit,” reminded Jenny. Thinking over the special occasion, Mum was continuing with her secret when one evening, Dad was sitting at the dinner table and he suddenly slapped his forehead, “I just realized that I am going to be 50 in June. Let’s just quietly forget about it. I want to mourn (哀悼) the passing of my youth in private.”
“Oh, come on Dad, don’t be such a spoil-sport!” begged the kids, hoping to give mum a hand.
Realizing no more chance to hide the secret, Mum carefully worded her thought and shared her plan of having a little party at grandma’s house. Dad was stunned (震惊的) to no reply.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Frustrated, Mum made a call to grandma.
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Paragraph 2:
They got everything ready as planned when June finally came.
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9．（2021·浙江台州·统考一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
THE PET LAMB
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant’s felt sad because the children loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door. “You see I am here for the lamb,” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother's side, and asked what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie!” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours!” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away. The poor lamb bleated very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Pray tell your boy to stop a moment,” she said in husky (沙哑的) tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to eat.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1: But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
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Para 2: The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
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10．（2021·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The excitement about Thanksgiving was really building. Grandma arrived with a homemade pecan pie. Dad was searching for his electric carving knife. Mama was in the kitchen humming a song. Little baby Lonnie bounced up and down. Dad smelled the air and sighed. My big brother, Slim, who was anything but slim, sneaked off to his room with a slice of the pecan pie. Even our dog Fido was wagging his tail.
Having set a pretty table, Mama looked up, smiling. “Help me carry in the food,” she said. Slim, who had come out of his room by this time, went racing into the kitchen. " I'll get it! I'll get it!” The rest of us piled in behind him, everyone grabbing a dish. Then we watched Dad carry in the biggest, brownest, best-smelling turkey we had ever seen with Mama's hand under the plate, just in case. Together they lowered the turkey to its place at the table.
It was the tradition in our family to think of something for which we were most thankful. We all ran to the table yelling something like “I'm thankful for school being out” or “I'm thankful for pecan pie!” All eyes were on that enormous turkey as we took our seats.
Yes, everything was perfect except for one thing. On that special day, it was Dad who sat at the head of the table and carved the turkey. It was an honor that he had eagerly expected for days. Mama always called Dad a clumsy ox. He frequently tripped (绊倒) over his own two feet, and he could drop just about anything.
We automatically eased back when Dad tested the electric carving knife in the air. Dad went to work on the white meat first with surprisingly few problems. Slice after slice landed neatly on the plate with thick gravy (肉汁)。Dad leaned forward and grabbed the end of the left turkey leg and cut it off, placing it whole on the plate. His oily fingers shone brightly in the light of the chandelier (大吊灯)，and Mama waved her napkin. “I'm all right, Mama,” he said. “I'm all right. ”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
But when Dad pulled back the right turkey leg, it slipped from his oily fingers.
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Paragraph 2:
As Lonnie yelled, we found a turkey leg was missing.
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11．（2020·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Freddie woke up to see it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, the cars, the houses, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.
“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regular morning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.
“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous. I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school buses for the day.”
Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get to school ”
His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”
Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first
“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a few minutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and then sat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It was relaxing, thought Freddie.
After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’t really like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.
“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit It’s good to get some fresh air, and who knows, you might even enjoy yourself.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed outside.
Standing alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good time. Knowing his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, the faster he could go back inside to his video games. He set to work packing up some snow into a large ball.
Moments later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his house up the street. Dion waddledout in his big snow trousers and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.
“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dion laughed.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para l:
Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.
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Para 2:
Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.
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六、概要写作
12．（2021·浙江台州·台州市书生中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
If you are a perfectionist, you are probably familiar with the feeling of wanting to get everything just right. According to researchers, perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical(自责的) if they believe they haven't met these standards. Amanda Ruggeri，writing about perfectionism for BBC Future, explains, "When perfectionists don't succeed, they don't just feel disappointment about how they did. They feel shame about who they are.”
Although many people think seeking excellence as a good thing, researchers have found that on the extreme end, perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health. In an article published in 2016, researchers found that people higher in perfectionism tended to have increases in depression(抑郁) symptoms, which suggests that perfectionism may lead to depression. In other words, although people may think of their perfectionism as something that helps them succeed, it appears that their perfectionism may actually be harmful to their mental health.
Thus, what can someone with perfection tendencies do to change their behavior One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset. Researchers at Stanford University have found that developing a growth mindset is a significant way to help you learn from your failures. Unlike those with fixed mindsets, those with growth mindsets believe they can improve their abilities by learning from their mistakes. Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion(自我同情). The idea behind self-compassion is that you should treat yourself kindly when you make mistakes，remind yourself that mistakes are part of being human, and avoid being consumed by bad emotions.
In fact, psychologists point out that giving up on perfection doesn't mean being less successful. The key is to find ways to give an effort you can be proud of without demanding the impossible of yourself. Instead of struggling for “perfect", struggle for “good enough", which can actually help you develop a healthier way of setting goals for yourself in the long run.
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参考答案：
1．【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad to know your desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Club. As a member, I do regard it worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.
As for major activities, regularly, we are committed to raising funds and donations for those in need. Sometimes we hold events in the local community to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部（Sunshine Club）的交换生David写一封回信，告知相关情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴：happy →glad
想要：want →desire
参加：participate in →be engaged in
认为：think= regard
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sometimes we hold events in the local community to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
拓展句：Sometimes we hold events in the local community，which aims to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a member, I do regard it worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的结构。
[高分句型2] Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me.这句话运用了once引导的条件状语从句。
2．Dear Mrs. Evans,
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood. Attached is our detailed schedule. Please let me know if you have any suggestion.
How expectant that we are to have you with us through these moments. Right here waiting for you all.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给Mrs. Evans写一封邮件，邀请即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加学校成人礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in=take part in
想要做某事：would like to do sth.=want to do sth.
鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school.(so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood.(where引导地点状语从句)
3．Dear Allen,
Thanks for your invitation to the Art Show this Sunday. I’d love to go with you, but much to my regret, I’m not able to make it.
Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it. More importantly, I am supposed to get myself well-furnished for the English speech contest to be held next Monday, because of which I can’t spare any time.
Is it possible for us to fix another time Expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Allen写封信，就你不能应邀去参加画展表达歉意并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
不能：can not→be not able to
准备好：get prepared for→get oneself well-furnished for
忙于：be busy with=be occupied with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it.
拓展句：I have to devote myself exclusively to my homework because I’m occupied with masses of it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] More importantly, I am supposed to get myself well-furnished for the English speech contest to be held next Monday, because of which I can’t spare any time. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
4．One Possible Version:
Dear Alex,
Guess what I’ve got to share Since you’ve always been fascinated by the stunning scenery in China, I’m writing to recommend a short video series, Amazing China.
Ranging from royal palaces to natural sights, the videos impress me most with the coverage of diverse landscapes and iconic attractions. With insightful and detailed narration in elegant English, you will definitely gain an authentic glimpse into Chinese physical and human geography. Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer.
I bet it’s worth viewing. Looking forward to our further exchanges.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。双语短视频系列Amazing China展现了中国的风景名胜、人文地理等，自推出以来广受国内外好评。假定你是李华，请你写一封邮件向你的摄影师朋友Alex分享推介该系列短视频。
【详解】1.词汇积累
既然：since→now that
推荐：recommend→propose
而且：plus→what's more
肯定：definitely→indeed
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer.
拓展句：Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer，which is very attractive to the viewers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you’ve always been fascinated by the stunning scenery in China, I’m writing to recommend a short video series, Amazing China.（运用了since引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Ranging from royal palaces to natural sights, the videos impress me most with the coverage of diverse landscapes and iconic attractions. （运用了现在分词作状语）
5．Dear Mary,
Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. While there are hundreds of popular folk songs, my favorite goes to the song Jasmine. Actually, I've been loving this song since my childhood.
Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades. Whenever feeling depressed, I'll sing or listen to the familiar music, which will brighten me up to face any challenge in life. I like its beautiful lyrics and soft melody, which will make me feel relaxed.
I hope that you'll like it once you hear it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mary写一封邮件，推荐自己最喜欢的歌曲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
反映：reflect→mirror
感兴趣：be interested in→show a keen interest in
必要的：necessary→essential
吸引：attract→appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades.
拓展句：The song has been appealing to us for decades because it reflects the beauty of nature and calls on us to love sweet life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope that you'll like it once you hear it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
6．Dear students,
Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, and collect contributions from all the students.
Submission requirements: First, the content of the work should be in line with the theme of The Times and positive. Second, style and words are not limited. Third, the pursuit of original works, not plagiarism, is our requirement. Finally, you should be sure to write the grade, class and name when submitting the paper. As for the way of submission, the collection of manuscripts shall be sent to the mailbox of the English newspaper of the school.
Excellent articles will be published in the school English newspaper. Students whose articles are published in the school newspaper will be given extra points in the final comprehensive assessment of the semester. All students are welcome to contribute.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封征稿函，向全校同学为专栏“科技与人文”征集稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求：requirement→request
一致：in line with→fit
主题：theme→subject
精彩的：excellent→wonderful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, and collect contributions from all the students.
拓展句：Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, which collect contributions from all the students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Finally, you should be sure to write the grade, class and name when submitting the paper. (运用了when引导的状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] Students whose articles are published in the school newspaper will be given extra points in the final comprehensive assessment of the semester. (运用了whose引导的定语从句)
7．One Possible Version:
Suddenly Tomás had an idea. Why not turn to Abuela for help Seized by the increasing eagerness to contact his grandmother, he wolfed his supper once it was ready. Right after dinner, Tomás raced to the computer before he had even had his favourite dessert, leaving his mother in curiosity. The moment he got through to his grandmother via the video chat, he lowered his voice, whispering, “Abuela, I need your help!” After Tomás poured out his idea, Abuela clapped her hands, promising, “Excellent! You’ll receive what you want!” Beside himself with joy, Tomás waved goodbye to Abuela, expectantly waiting for the package.
A week later, a box arrived from Mexico. Bubbling over with excitement, Tomás invited his mother to open the box together. Unfolding before their eyes were a sealed package of dried habanero peppers and a colorful packet of seeds. “That’s what I miss most! A taste from HOME!”, blurted out his mother, her lips curving into a broad beam and eyes glittering in amazement. Never had Tomás seen his mother so cheerful in weeks. Moments later, his mother was preparing a salsa using the peppers, chopping tomatoes and humming a merry tune. Outside the kitchen window, a big pot containing the seeds gleamed in the sunlight.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Tomas一家因为父亲的工作离开了家乡，Tomas听了母亲说思念家乡的辣椒，想到他们可以每天晚上与祖母通电话，Tomas想到一个办法安慰思乡的母亲的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然Tomas有了一个想法”可知，第一段可描写Tomas与奶奶通电话寻求帮助的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，来自墨西哥的盒子到了。”可知，第二段可描写Tomas和母亲打开盒子后的情景，母亲吃惊而欣喜，非常高兴。
2.续写线索：和奶奶通电话寻求帮助——奶奶欣然接受——打开盒子——母亲惊喜——母亲非常高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
.联系：contact/reach/get in touch with
.冲向电脑：race to the computer/rush to the computer
.倾诉：pour out/speak out/pour forth
情绪类
.好奇：in curiosity/curiously
.开心：with joy/delighted/joyful
.吃惊：in amazement/amazedly/surprisedly/in surprise
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Tomás raced to the computer before he had even had his favourite dessert, leaving his mother in curiosity. (运用了before引导的时间状语从句，和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Never had Tomás seen his mother so cheerful in weeks.（运用了倒装句）
8．One possible version:
Frustrated, Mum made a call to grandma. Sensing Mum’s sorrow, grandma comforted and advised, “Why not just prepare a simple yet special get together ” Slapped awaken by Mum’s new plan, the two kids both burst into deafening cheers and skipped round and round. Together, they brainstormed a list of ideas when suddenly Jenny murmured, “What’s Dad’s resolution for the new year ” Suddenly, it all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.
They got everything ready as planned when June finally came. That morning, when Dad was about to jog as usual, Mum hurried to tell him about their new plan. Seeing the three in sportswear, Dad realized something, and this time he nodded. All the way, the two kids bounced around, laughing and chatting. He, along with Mum, recalled a lot of sweet memories in their youth. Upon arriving at the top, the three just pitched into the picnic in sheer pleasure. With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them reflectively and suddenly realized that it’s no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的爸爸快过50岁生日了，作者的妈妈和奶奶商量着要给爸爸庆祝生日，爸爸却只想把生日忘了，私下悼念逝去的青春，作者和兄弟姐妹们劝爸爸同意庆祝生日，爸爸知道妈妈和奶奶的计划后愣住了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“沮丧的妈妈给奶奶打了个电话。”可知，第一段可描写大家商量改变计划。
②由第二段首句内容“六月终于来了，他们把一切都按计划准备好了。”可知，第二段可描写最终他们是如何替爸爸庆祝生日的。
2.续写线索：奶奶建议——提出想法——一起陪爸爸远足——野餐——爸爸感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想出主意：brainstorm a list of ideas/brainstorm a series of ideas
②达成一致：reach an agreement/come to an agreement
③野餐：pitch into the picnic/go on a picnic
情绪类
①高兴：merrily/happily
②快乐：in sheer pleasure/with delight
【点睛】[高分句型1] Suddenly, it all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.(由关系代词that/which引导的定语从句，省略了关系代词that/which)
[高分句型2]With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them reflectively and suddenly realized that it’s no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family. (由that引导的宾语从句)
9． Para 1: But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. Mrs. Grant could no longer control herself and began to cry. She knew how much the children loved Daisy and how painful it would be for them to lose her. She regretted it. She returned to the house and took out the money she had received from selling Daisy. Then she gave it back to the butcher, saying, “I cannot sell it just now, Sir. Wait until another time. I must try to keep up a little longer.”
Para 2: The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. He shook his head and said, “I’ll take neither the lamb nor the money, Mrs. Grant. Though I am butcher, I have no harder heart than other men. I’ll buy Daisy from you, and give it back to the children.” Daisy was at once set free, and the children gathered round and touched the pet, their hearts filled with joy. Mrs. Grant was grateful. With the kind help of some friends, the poor mother never again found herself so hard pressed as when she tried to sell the children’s pet lamb.
【分析】本文以宠物羊为线索展开，讲述了Grant太太由于丈夫去世，生活困难，为买生活必需品，卖掉几乎所有财产之后，最后不得不把宠物羊卖给屠夫。在卖羊的时候，孩子们哀求不要卖掉宠物羊。Grant太太的遭遇感动了屠夫，屠夫帮助Grant太太度过生活难关的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是她解释得越多，她的孩子们就越强烈地乞求留下Daisy。”可知，第一段可描写在孩子们的哀求下，Grant太太后悔了，要留下宠物羊，把钱还给屠夫。
②由第二段首句内容“屠夫一直在观察这一切，他的心被感动了。”可知，第二段可描写屠夫看到后，既没有要钱也没有要羊，帮助Grant太太度过生活难关。
2.续写线索：后悔——还钱——感动——拒绝收钱——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.归还：give it back/return it
②.拒绝：shake his head/refuse politely
情绪类
①.后悔：regret/be full of remorse
②.感谢：show her gratitude/be grateful/thank
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She returned to the house and took out the money she had received from selling Daisy. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句以及动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2]. Daisy was at once set free, and the children gathered round and touched the pet, their hearts filled with joy. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
10．But when Dad pulled back the right turkey leg, it slipped from his oily fingers. “You clumsy ox!” Mom yelled, and she quickly grabbed and picked up the leg. Baba looked at the chandelier and looked annoyed. We all laughed, and Fido started barking in circles on the ground. Anyway, our Thanksgiving dinner is here.
As Lonnie yelled, we found a turkey leg was missing. Where’s the drumstick We felt very strange. Lonnie kept calling and looking at us, pointing under the table. We looked under the table and saw Fido munching on a big turkey leg. When he was found, he stared back at us, unrepentant. Mom said: “So Fido wants to have a delicious Thanksgiving, too.” Fido barked at us, as if confirming my mother’s words. We all laughed. It was so much fun.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和家人一起度过的一次快乐的感恩节。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但当爸爸把他的右火鸡腿拉开时，它从他油腻的手指上滑了下来。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈嗔怪了爸爸，爸爸觉得很羞赧。
②由第二段首句内容“朗尼大喊，我们发现一只火鸡腿不见了。”可知，第二段可描写大家发现火鸡腿不见了，发现狗狗在吃鸡腿。
2.续写线索：嗔怪——懊恼——欢乐——发现鸡腿——回应——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：yell/shout
②开始：start/begin
③发现：find/discover
情绪类
①懊恼：annoyed/upset
②大笑：laugh/guffaw
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lonnie kept calling and looking at us, pointing under the table. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Fido barked at us, as if confirming my mother’s words. (运用了as if引导的状语从句的省略)
11．Para l:
Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, would you ” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid base and lifting a heavy snowball on top of it. Dion found some stones for buttons, and Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. Finally, the snowman was finishes! Then, they both had a good time. Suddenly, Dion said, “Hey, I know what we can do next!” He told Freddie his idea and Freddie grinned.
Para 2:
Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, his mother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in ” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Still excited, he asked his mother if he could go to the park with Dion and go sledding down the hill. Knowing Freddie would rather enjoy himself outside, his mother agreed without hesitation. “Snow day are the best” Freddie yelled as he ran off to play with his friend.
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是读后续写。
【详解】前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连日积雪而停课时，Freddie激动不已，心想着终于可以宅在家里打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议他出门去堆个雪人，呼吸下新鲜空气。Freddie不情愿地来到院子，堆了个大雪球，同学Dion突然出现，兴奋地想要成为Freddie的同伴，同时表示喜欢雪天带来的快乐。
在给的第一段开头“Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.”中“happy”一词可以想象两人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快乐场景；同时第二段开头“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈现了Freddie的情感及态度变化。而“idea”一词可以推测两人在堆完雪人后有了进一步的想法，而这个想法也一定和户外玩雪所带来的快乐相关。
【高分句型一】As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. 当Dion找了一些石头做纽扣时，Freddie就把几根断了的树枝插进身体里做胳膊。运用时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】His mother agreed without hesitation because she knew Freddie enjoyed himself outside. 他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外面玩得很开心。运用原因状语从句。
12．According to researchers, perfectionism, which means people pursue perfection excessively, may contribute to poor mental health. By forming a growth mindset to see mistakes as learning opportunities, and replacing self-criticism with self-compassion, it's possible to overcome perfectionism. What you need to keep in mind is that perfection isn't equal to success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself.
【分析】本文是一篇议论文,介绍了完美主义的相关内容。文章首先提出完美主义的特点,然后指出完美主义对人的消极影响,接着提出有完美倾向的人应该做些什么来改变他们的行为,最后指出放弃完美并不意味着不那么功,关键是要想办法付出你可以为之自豪的努力,而不是要求自己完成不可能的事。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①According to researchers, perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical(自责的) if they believe they haven't met these standards.Perfectionism means people pursue perfection excessively /unrealistically.
②Perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health
③One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset.Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion(自我同情).
④Giving up on perfection doesn't mean being less successful, so try your best to struggle for “good enough" without demanding the impossible of yourself.
2.缜密构思
将1、2要点整合，将3、4要点重组。
3.遣词造句
Perfectionism means people pursue perfection excessively /unrealistically.
Perfectionism may actually contribute to/be linked to poor mental health.
By forming/ developing)growth mindset to see mistakes as learning opportunities, and replacing self-criticism with self-compassion, it's possible to overcome perfectionism.
Perfection isn't' equal to/ doesn’t mean success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself.
【点睛】[高分句型1]： According to researchers, perfectionism, which means people pursue perfection excessively, may contribute to poor mental health. 运用非限制性定语从句把第一段和第二段进行了概括。运用了pursue和contribute to等高级词汇。
[高分句型2]： What you need to keep in mind is that perfection isn't equal to success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself. 句子使用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
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一、申请信
1．（2020·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校交换生David有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部（Sunshine Club），向你咨询相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.主要志愿活动；
3.申请方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
2．（2022·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，邀请了即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加你校成人礼。请给领队Mrs. Evans再写一份电子邮件，附上活动具体安排（附件）。你的邮件正文内容包括：
1. 成人礼大致安排；
2. 希望读完附件，提出建议；
3. 期盼到来。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony；附件attachment
3．（2021·浙江台州·台州市书生中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Allen邀请你去参观一个画展，你有事不能前往。
请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1、感谢邀请；
2、表达歉意；
3. 说明理由。
注意：
1、词数80左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、推荐信
4．（2022·浙江台州·统考一模）双语短视频系列Amazing China展现了中国的风景名胜、人文地理等，自推出以来广受国内外好评。假定你是李华，请你写一封邮件向你的摄影师朋友Alex分享推介该系列短视频。内容如下：
1.阐明写信目的;
2.陈述推荐理由;
3.期待观后交流。
注意：
1.词数80左右：
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·浙江台州·统考一模）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary对中国民歌很感兴趣，想请你推荐你最喜欢的歌曲。请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.你最喜爱的中国民歌，如《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》(Jasmine)；
2.推荐的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：民歌folk song
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
6．（2021·浙江台州·统考二模）假定你是校英文报Teens Today的学生主编，本学期该报拟开设专栏“科技与人文”(Technology and Humanity), 向全校同学征集稿件。请你写一封征稿函，内容包括：
1. 稿件要求；
2. 投稿方式；
3. 录用奖励。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
五、读后续写
7．（2022·浙江台州·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sunlight flooded through the window when Tomas was sitting at the kitchen table, struggling with a literary classic. Streamers of clouds drifted by high above in the sky. Not far away, the huge new tower blocks lined the road. The faint sound of cars was dimly heard.
His mother was chopping tomatoes for their dinner as usual. Suddenly she said, ”You know, the thing I miss most is cooking a really hot salsa (辣番茄酱), with fresh peppers straight from the garden.” She sighed. “That’s what I miss most about Merida.”
Tomas looked up from his book in surprise. His mother had never talked like this about their old life before. He studied her now. She looked a little sad, but then she smiled at him and swept the pile of chopped tomatoes into the cooking pot.
“But I’ve already learned a lot about this new country, Tomas,“ she said. ”For a start, I’ve learned that there’s more than one way to make a salsa!" She waved a packet of chili spice powder at him, and they both laughed.
Watching his mother busy in the kitchen preparing dinner, Tomas thought about the insight his mother had given him into her feelings, and he realized that he felt the same way about leaving.
Sure, it had been great for his father to get this good job, but it had also been hard. Tomas missed his old home-especially the sun and the beach. And his mother missed Merida, too. She had loved working in her market garden, selling the fresh vegetables that she had grown herself and then coming home to cook up huge, tasty meals for her family. Tomas’s stomach rumbled at the memories.
He thought about how different things were for them now, living in this large, gray apartment block where there was no garden and no friends dropping by to share their delicious meals.
He sighed. At least they were still able to speak regularly every night after dinner with his grandmother back in Mexico over the computer-Grandmother! Abuela!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly Tomas had an idea.
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A week later, a box arrived from Mexico.
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8．（2022·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold yet sunny Saturday morning in February. Dad’s New Year’s resolution had been to get fit. Mum pushed him out of bed and told him to go jogging by the river. Later, after a nice lie-in, she went downstairs in her dressing gown and found the kids watching TV. She turned it off and said she was going to do something really special for Dad’s birthday. If they overheard anything, just promised to keep it secret.
Jenny looked at Mum with a puzzled expression on her forehead and promised they wouldn’t say anything whatever happened. But Jenny reminded Dad’s birthday was in June and it might be a little too early to get all steamed up about it.
Silent for a moment, Mum said she was not getting everything ready but just wanted to spare enough time for preparation as this year it’s a bigger deal than usual. Dad was going to be 50.
“50! Gosh, that’s half a century,” spluttered Gerry. “I knew he was old, but I didn’t realize he was ancient!”
Indeed, that was why Mum started planning a special party for him. Mum talked with grandma about the plan because her house was the only one in the family that is spacious enough for all friends and relatives. Grandma quite agreed and also started preparing.
“But you know how Dad feels guilty to bother others. You’ve got to admit,” reminded Jenny. Thinking over the special occasion, Mum was continuing with her secret when one evening, Dad was sitting at the dinner table and he suddenly slapped his forehead, “I just realized that I am going to be 50 in June. Let’s just quietly forget about it. I want to mourn (哀悼) the passing of my youth in private.”
“Oh, come on Dad, don’t be such a spoil-sport!” begged the kids, hoping to give mum a hand.
Realizing no more chance to hide the secret, Mum carefully worded her thought and shared her plan of having a little party at grandma’s house. Dad was stunned (震惊的) to no reply.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Frustrated, Mum made a call to grandma.
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Paragraph 2:
They got everything ready as planned when June finally came.
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9．（2021·浙江台州·统考一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
THE PET LAMB
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant’s felt sad because the children loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door. “You see I am here for the lamb,” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother's side, and asked what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie!” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours!” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away. The poor lamb bleated very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Pray tell your boy to stop a moment,” she said in husky (沙哑的) tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to eat.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1: But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
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Para 2: The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
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10．（2021·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The excitement about Thanksgiving was really building. Grandma arrived with a homemade pecan pie. Dad was searching for his electric carving knife. Mama was in the kitchen humming a song. Little baby Lonnie bounced up and down. Dad smelled the air and sighed. My big brother, Slim, who was anything but slim, sneaked off to his room with a slice of the pecan pie. Even our dog Fido was wagging his tail.
Having set a pretty table, Mama looked up, smiling. “Help me carry in the food,” she said. Slim, who had come out of his room by this time, went racing into the kitchen. " I'll get it! I'll get it!” The rest of us piled in behind him, everyone grabbing a dish. Then we watched Dad carry in the biggest, brownest, best-smelling turkey we had ever seen with Mama's hand under the plate, just in case. Together they lowered the turkey to its place at the table.
It was the tradition in our family to think of something for which we were most thankful. We all ran to the table yelling something like “I'm thankful for school being out” or “I'm thankful for pecan pie!” All eyes were on that enormous turkey as we took our seats.
Yes, everything was perfect except for one thing. On that special day, it was Dad who sat at the head of the table and carved the turkey. It was an honor that he had eagerly expected for days. Mama always called Dad a clumsy ox. He frequently tripped (绊倒) over his own two feet, and he could drop just about anything.
We automatically eased back when Dad tested the electric carving knife in the air. Dad went to work on the white meat first with surprisingly few problems. Slice after slice landed neatly on the plate with thick gravy (肉汁)。Dad leaned forward and grabbed the end of the left turkey leg and cut it off, placing it whole on the plate. His oily fingers shone brightly in the light of the chandelier (大吊灯)，and Mama waved her napkin. “I'm all right, Mama,” he said. “I'm all right. ”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
But when Dad pulled back the right turkey leg, it slipped from his oily fingers.
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Paragraph 2:
As Lonnie yelled, we found a turkey leg was missing.
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11．（2020·浙江台州·统考二模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Freddie woke up to see it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, the cars, the houses, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.
“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regular morning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.
“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous. I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school buses for the day.”
Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get to school ”
His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”
Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first
“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a few minutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and then sat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It was relaxing, thought Freddie.
After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’t really like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.
“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit It’s good to get some fresh air, and who knows, you might even enjoy yourself.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed outside.
Standing alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good time. Knowing his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, the faster he could go back inside to his video games. He set to work packing up some snow into a large ball.
Moments later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his house up the street. Dion waddledout in his big snow trousers and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.
“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dion laughed.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para l:
Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.
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Para 2:
Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.
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六、概要写作
12．（2021·浙江台州·台州市书生中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
If you are a perfectionist, you are probably familiar with the feeling of wanting to get everything just right. According to researchers, perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical(自责的) if they believe they haven't met these standards. Amanda Ruggeri，writing about perfectionism for BBC Future, explains, "When perfectionists don't succeed, they don't just feel disappointment about how they did. They feel shame about who they are.”
Although many people think seeking excellence as a good thing, researchers have found that on the extreme end, perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health. In an article published in 2016, researchers found that people higher in perfectionism tended to have increases in depression(抑郁) symptoms, which suggests that perfectionism may lead to depression. In other words, although people may think of their perfectionism as something that helps them succeed, it appears that their perfectionism may actually be harmful to their mental health.
Thus, what can someone with perfection tendencies do to change their behavior One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset. Researchers at Stanford University have found that developing a growth mindset is a significant way to help you learn from your failures. Unlike those with fixed mindsets, those with growth mindsets believe they can improve their abilities by learning from their mistakes. Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion(自我同情). The idea behind self-compassion is that you should treat yourself kindly when you make mistakes，remind yourself that mistakes are part of being human, and avoid being consumed by bad emotions.
In fact, psychologists point out that giving up on perfection doesn't mean being less successful. The key is to find ways to give an effort you can be proud of without demanding the impossible of yourself. Instead of struggling for “perfect", struggle for “good enough", which can actually help you develop a healthier way of setting goals for yourself in the long run.
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参考答案：
1．【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad to know your desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Club. As a member, I do regard it worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.
As for major activities, regularly, we are committed to raising funds and donations for those in need. Sometimes we hold events in the local community to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校有意加入学校阳光志愿者倶乐部（Sunshine Club）的交换生David写一封回信，告知相关情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴：happy →glad
想要：want →desire
参加：participate in →be engaged in
认为：think= regard
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sometimes we hold events in the local community to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
拓展句：Sometimes we hold events in the local community，which aims to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a member, I do regard it worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I’m writing to give you my full support.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的结构。
[高分句型2] Once you have decided, please fill in the application form attached and send it to me.这句话运用了once引导的条件状语从句。
2．Dear Mrs. Evans,
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood. Attached is our detailed schedule. Please let me know if you have any suggestion.
How expectant that we are to have you with us through these moments. Right here waiting for you all.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给Mrs. Evans写一封邮件，邀请即将来访的新西兰学生交流团参加学校成人礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in=take part in
想要做某事：would like to do sth.=want to do sth.
鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to share with you our plan ahead of time briefly, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school.(so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
For this most awaited ceremony, we’ve arranged enlightening activities, like an inspiring speech, a video from parents with their best wishes, and best of all, a unique ritual where we’ll make an oath of being responsible into adulthood.(where引导地点状语从句)
3．Dear Allen,
Thanks for your invitation to the Art Show this Sunday. I’d love to go with you, but much to my regret, I’m not able to make it.
Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it. More importantly, I am supposed to get myself well-furnished for the English speech contest to be held next Monday, because of which I can’t spare any time.
Is it possible for us to fix another time Expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Allen写封信，就你不能应邀去参加画展表达歉意并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
不能：can not→be not able to
准备好：get prepared for→get oneself well-furnished for
忙于：be busy with=be occupied with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it.
拓展句：I have to devote myself exclusively to my homework because I’m occupied with masses of it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Occupied with masses of homework, I have to devote myself exclusively to it. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] More importantly, I am supposed to get myself well-furnished for the English speech contest to be held next Monday, because of which I can’t spare any time. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
4．One Possible Version:
Dear Alex,
Guess what I’ve got to share Since you’ve always been fascinated by the stunning scenery in China, I’m writing to recommend a short video series, Amazing China.
Ranging from royal palaces to natural sights, the videos impress me most with the coverage of diverse landscapes and iconic attractions. With insightful and detailed narration in elegant English, you will definitely gain an authentic glimpse into Chinese physical and human geography. Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer.
I bet it’s worth viewing. Looking forward to our further exchanges.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。双语短视频系列Amazing China展现了中国的风景名胜、人文地理等，自推出以来广受国内外好评。假定你是李华，请你写一封邮件向你的摄影师朋友Alex分享推介该系列短视频。
【详解】1.词汇积累
既然：since→now that
推荐：recommend→propose
而且：plus→what's more
肯定：definitely→indeed
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer.
拓展句：Plus, its tuneful music and eye-catching pictures can be an inspiration for you, a photographer，which is very attractive to the viewers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you’ve always been fascinated by the stunning scenery in China, I’m writing to recommend a short video series, Amazing China.（运用了since引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Ranging from royal palaces to natural sights, the videos impress me most with the coverage of diverse landscapes and iconic attractions. （运用了现在分词作状语）
5．Dear Mary,
Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. While there are hundreds of popular folk songs, my favorite goes to the song Jasmine. Actually, I've been loving this song since my childhood.
Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades. Whenever feeling depressed, I'll sing or listen to the familiar music, which will brighten me up to face any challenge in life. I like its beautiful lyrics and soft melody, which will make me feel relaxed.
I hope that you'll like it once you hear it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mary写一封邮件，推荐自己最喜欢的歌曲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
反映：reflect→mirror
感兴趣：be interested in→show a keen interest in
必要的：necessary→essential
吸引：attract→appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Reflecting the beauty of nature and calling on us to love sweet life, the song has been appealing to us for decades.
拓展句：The song has been appealing to us for decades because it reflects the beauty of nature and calls on us to love sweet life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Pride and excitement swelled in my mind upon knowing that you show a keen interest in Chinese folk songs, which make up an essential part of Chinese culture. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope that you'll like it once you hear it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
6．Dear students,
Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, and collect contributions from all the students.
Submission requirements: First, the content of the work should be in line with the theme of The Times and positive. Second, style and words are not limited. Third, the pursuit of original works, not plagiarism, is our requirement. Finally, you should be sure to write the grade, class and name when submitting the paper. As for the way of submission, the collection of manuscripts shall be sent to the mailbox of the English newspaper of the school.
Excellent articles will be published in the school English newspaper. Students whose articles are published in the school newspaper will be given extra points in the final comprehensive assessment of the semester. All students are welcome to contribute.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封征稿函，向全校同学为专栏“科技与人文”征集稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求：requirement→request
一致：in line with→fit
主题：theme→subject
精彩的：excellent→wonderful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, and collect contributions from all the students.
拓展句：Teens Today, the English newspaper of our school, is going to open a column on “Technology and Humanity” this semester, which collect contributions from all the students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Finally, you should be sure to write the grade, class and name when submitting the paper. (运用了when引导的状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] Students whose articles are published in the school newspaper will be given extra points in the final comprehensive assessment of the semester. (运用了whose引导的定语从句)
7．One Possible Version:
Suddenly Tomás had an idea. Why not turn to Abuela for help Seized by the increasing eagerness to contact his grandmother, he wolfed his supper once it was ready. Right after dinner, Tomás raced to the computer before he had even had his favourite dessert, leaving his mother in curiosity. The moment he got through to his grandmother via the video chat, he lowered his voice, whispering, “Abuela, I need your help!” After Tomás poured out his idea, Abuela clapped her hands, promising, “Excellent! You’ll receive what you want!” Beside himself with joy, Tomás waved goodbye to Abuela, expectantly waiting for the package.
A week later, a box arrived from Mexico. Bubbling over with excitement, Tomás invited his mother to open the box together. Unfolding before their eyes were a sealed package of dried habanero peppers and a colorful packet of seeds. “That’s what I miss most! A taste from HOME!”, blurted out his mother, her lips curving into a broad beam and eyes glittering in amazement. Never had Tomás seen his mother so cheerful in weeks. Moments later, his mother was preparing a salsa using the peppers, chopping tomatoes and humming a merry tune. Outside the kitchen window, a big pot containing the seeds gleamed in the sunlight.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Tomas一家因为父亲的工作离开了家乡，Tomas听了母亲说思念家乡的辣椒，想到他们可以每天晚上与祖母通电话，Tomas想到一个办法安慰思乡的母亲的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然Tomas有了一个想法”可知，第一段可描写Tomas与奶奶通电话寻求帮助的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，来自墨西哥的盒子到了。”可知，第二段可描写Tomas和母亲打开盒子后的情景，母亲吃惊而欣喜，非常高兴。
2.续写线索：和奶奶通电话寻求帮助——奶奶欣然接受——打开盒子——母亲惊喜——母亲非常高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
.联系：contact/reach/get in touch with
.冲向电脑：race to the computer/rush to the computer
.倾诉：pour out/speak out/pour forth
情绪类
.好奇：in curiosity/curiously
.开心：with joy/delighted/joyful
.吃惊：in amazement/amazedly/surprisedly/in surprise
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Tomás raced to the computer before he had even had his favourite dessert, leaving his mother in curiosity. (运用了before引导的时间状语从句，和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Never had Tomás seen his mother so cheerful in weeks.（运用了倒装句）
8．One possible version:
Frustrated, Mum made a call to grandma. Sensing Mum’s sorrow, grandma comforted and advised, “Why not just prepare a simple yet special get together ” Slapped awaken by Mum’s new plan, the two kids both burst into deafening cheers and skipped round and round. Together, they brainstormed a list of ideas when suddenly Jenny murmured, “What’s Dad’s resolution for the new year ” Suddenly, it all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.
They got everything ready as planned when June finally came. That morning, when Dad was about to jog as usual, Mum hurried to tell him about their new plan. Seeing the three in sportswear, Dad realized something, and this time he nodded. All the way, the two kids bounced around, laughing and chatting. He, along with Mum, recalled a lot of sweet memories in their youth. Upon arriving at the top, the three just pitched into the picnic in sheer pleasure. With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them reflectively and suddenly realized that it’s no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的爸爸快过50岁生日了，作者的妈妈和奶奶商量着要给爸爸庆祝生日，爸爸却只想把生日忘了，私下悼念逝去的青春，作者和兄弟姐妹们劝爸爸同意庆祝生日，爸爸知道妈妈和奶奶的计划后愣住了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“沮丧的妈妈给奶奶打了个电话。”可知，第一段可描写大家商量改变计划。
②由第二段首句内容“六月终于来了，他们把一切都按计划准备好了。”可知，第二段可描写最终他们是如何替爸爸庆祝生日的。
2.续写线索：奶奶建议——提出想法——一起陪爸爸远足——野餐——爸爸感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想出主意：brainstorm a list of ideas/brainstorm a series of ideas
②达成一致：reach an agreement/come to an agreement
③野餐：pitch into the picnic/go on a picnic
情绪类
①高兴：merrily/happily
②快乐：in sheer pleasure/with delight
【点睛】[高分句型1] Suddenly, it all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.(由关系代词that/which引导的定语从句，省略了关系代词that/which)
[高分句型2]With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them reflectively and suddenly realized that it’s no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family. (由that引导的宾语从句)
9． Para 1: But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. Mrs. Grant could no longer control herself and began to cry. She knew how much the children loved Daisy and how painful it would be for them to lose her. She regretted it. She returned to the house and took out the money she had received from selling Daisy. Then she gave it back to the butcher, saying, “I cannot sell it just now, Sir. Wait until another time. I must try to keep up a little longer.”
Para 2: The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. He shook his head and said, “I’ll take neither the lamb nor the money, Mrs. Grant. Though I am butcher, I have no harder heart than other men. I’ll buy Daisy from you, and give it back to the children.” Daisy was at once set free, and the children gathered round and touched the pet, their hearts filled with joy. Mrs. Grant was grateful. With the kind help of some friends, the poor mother never again found herself so hard pressed as when she tried to sell the children’s pet lamb.
【分析】本文以宠物羊为线索展开，讲述了Grant太太由于丈夫去世，生活困难，为买生活必需品，卖掉几乎所有财产之后，最后不得不把宠物羊卖给屠夫。在卖羊的时候，孩子们哀求不要卖掉宠物羊。Grant太太的遭遇感动了屠夫，屠夫帮助Grant太太度过生活难关的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是她解释得越多，她的孩子们就越强烈地乞求留下Daisy。”可知，第一段可描写在孩子们的哀求下，Grant太太后悔了，要留下宠物羊，把钱还给屠夫。
②由第二段首句内容“屠夫一直在观察这一切，他的心被感动了。”可知，第二段可描写屠夫看到后，既没有要钱也没有要羊，帮助Grant太太度过生活难关。
2.续写线索：后悔——还钱——感动——拒绝收钱——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.归还：give it back/return it
②.拒绝：shake his head/refuse politely
情绪类
①.后悔：regret/be full of remorse
②.感谢：show her gratitude/be grateful/thank
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She returned to the house and took out the money she had received from selling Daisy. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句以及动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2]. Daisy was at once set free, and the children gathered round and touched the pet, their hearts filled with joy. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
10．But when Dad pulled back the right turkey leg, it slipped from his oily fingers. “You clumsy ox!” Mom yelled, and she quickly grabbed and picked up the leg. Baba looked at the chandelier and looked annoyed. We all laughed, and Fido started barking in circles on the ground. Anyway, our Thanksgiving dinner is here.
As Lonnie yelled, we found a turkey leg was missing. Where’s the drumstick We felt very strange. Lonnie kept calling and looking at us, pointing under the table. We looked under the table and saw Fido munching on a big turkey leg. When he was found, he stared back at us, unrepentant. Mom said: “So Fido wants to have a delicious Thanksgiving, too.” Fido barked at us, as if confirming my mother’s words. We all laughed. It was so much fun.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和家人一起度过的一次快乐的感恩节。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但当爸爸把他的右火鸡腿拉开时，它从他油腻的手指上滑了下来。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈嗔怪了爸爸，爸爸觉得很羞赧。
②由第二段首句内容“朗尼大喊，我们发现一只火鸡腿不见了。”可知，第二段可描写大家发现火鸡腿不见了，发现狗狗在吃鸡腿。
2.续写线索：嗔怪——懊恼——欢乐——发现鸡腿——回应——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：yell/shout
②开始：start/begin
③发现：find/discover
情绪类
①懊恼：annoyed/upset
②大笑：laugh/guffaw
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lonnie kept calling and looking at us, pointing under the table. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Fido barked at us, as if confirming my mother’s words. (运用了as if引导的状语从句的省略)
11．Para l:
Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, would you ” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid base and lifting a heavy snowball on top of it. Dion found some stones for buttons, and Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. Finally, the snowman was finishes! Then, they both had a good time. Suddenly, Dion said, “Hey, I know what we can do next!” He told Freddie his idea and Freddie grinned.
Para 2:
Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, his mother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in ” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Still excited, he asked his mother if he could go to the park with Dion and go sledding down the hill. Knowing Freddie would rather enjoy himself outside, his mother agreed without hesitation. “Snow day are the best” Freddie yelled as he ran off to play with his friend.
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是读后续写。
【详解】前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连日积雪而停课时，Freddie激动不已，心想着终于可以宅在家里打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议他出门去堆个雪人，呼吸下新鲜空气。Freddie不情愿地来到院子，堆了个大雪球，同学Dion突然出现，兴奋地想要成为Freddie的同伴，同时表示喜欢雪天带来的快乐。
在给的第一段开头“Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.”中“happy”一词可以想象两人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快乐场景；同时第二段开头“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈现了Freddie的情感及态度变化。而“idea”一词可以推测两人在堆完雪人后有了进一步的想法，而这个想法也一定和户外玩雪所带来的快乐相关。
【高分句型一】As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. 当Dion找了一些石头做纽扣时，Freddie就把几根断了的树枝插进身体里做胳膊。运用时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】His mother agreed without hesitation because she knew Freddie enjoyed himself outside. 他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外面玩得很开心。运用原因状语从句。
12．According to researchers, perfectionism, which means people pursue perfection excessively, may contribute to poor mental health. By forming a growth mindset to see mistakes as learning opportunities, and replacing self-criticism with self-compassion, it's possible to overcome perfectionism. What you need to keep in mind is that perfection isn't equal to success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself.
【分析】本文是一篇议论文,介绍了完美主义的相关内容。文章首先提出完美主义的特点,然后指出完美主义对人的消极影响,接着提出有完美倾向的人应该做些什么来改变他们的行为,最后指出放弃完美并不意味着不那么功,关键是要想办法付出你可以为之自豪的努力,而不是要求自己完成不可能的事。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①According to researchers, perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical(自责的) if they believe they haven't met these standards.Perfectionism means people pursue perfection excessively /unrealistically.
②Perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health
③One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset.Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion(自我同情).
④Giving up on perfection doesn't mean being less successful, so try your best to struggle for “good enough" without demanding the impossible of yourself.
2.缜密构思
将1、2要点整合，将3、4要点重组。
3.遣词造句
Perfectionism means people pursue perfection excessively /unrealistically.
Perfectionism may actually contribute to/be linked to poor mental health.
By forming/ developing)growth mindset to see mistakes as learning opportunities, and replacing self-criticism with self-compassion, it's possible to overcome perfectionism.
Perfection isn't' equal to/ doesn’t mean success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself.
【点睛】[高分句型1]： According to researchers, perfectionism, which means people pursue perfection excessively, may contribute to poor mental health. 运用非限制性定语从句把第一段和第二段进行了概括。运用了pursue和contribute to等高级词汇。
[高分句型2]： What you need to keep in mind is that perfection isn't equal to success, so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself. 句子使用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
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