浙江省舟山市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
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浙江省舟山市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考三模）假如你是李华，你之前在网上为你校交换生 Tim 预定了下周六晚上 7：30 的越剧演出，现该演出被宣布取消，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：
1.告知演出取消；
2.后续事项处理；
3.其他活动建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、其他应用文
2．（2022·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校邀请到了专家 Mr. Wang 为爱尔兰访问团做一个关于中国传统文化的讲座。你作为主持人，将专家介绍给爱尔兰朋友，请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎; 2.专家介绍; 3.讲座内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出， 不计入总词数;
Ladies and gentlemen,
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3．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）2022杭州亚运会组委会（Organizing Committee）将举办龙舟比赛分会场徽标（logo）设计征集活动。假定你是志愿者李华，请你为组委会写一则徽标设计征集启事，内容包括：
1. 设计要求；
2. 提交方式；
3. 注意事项。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、开放性作文
4．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）2022年北京冬奥会很“中国”，许多元素向世界展现了中国文化或中国理念。请选取其中一二撰写一篇短文，参加China Daily举办的“China Meets the World”征文比赛。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：吉祥物mascot；二十四节气24 solar terms；一起向未来Together For A Shared Future；雪如意Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center。
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四、读后续写
5．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My twin sister, Mary, and I lived together for eighteen years before we went to college. We’d known each other so much and always enjoyed shared time. We happily sang and danced together, had dinner and went to bed together, and discussed the maths problems and recited the poems together.
But one small thing couldn’t be shared smoothly and that’s the trouble with toothpaste.
Crest(佳洁士)made us give in and demanded to know what we were made of. You see, Mary likes to carefully fold and roll the toothpaste tube. I like to grab it in the middle and squeeze(挤). I might call her folding a bit too careful. She might consider my squeezing careless and rude. This difference in style may seem mild, but it caused the big trouble in the later days.
At first, it was a little joke. I’d squeeze. She’d roll. Ha, ha. I’d squeeze again. She’d roll again. Annoying. I’d squeeze even when I wasn’t brushing my teeth. She’d slip in to roll, roll, roll.
After slipping and squeezing, tip-toeing and rolling for two weeks, it was unavoidable that we finally met face to face in our tiny pink bathroom with our hands on the toothpaste. We actually yelled at each other. I may have even cried. Why was she so obsessive(过分的) Why was I so vindictive(报复性的) Why couldn’t she loosen up Why couldn’t I calm down Were we still talking about the toothpaste
The toothpaste had become more than something to brush our teeth with; it had become a symbol for aspects of our individual personalities that we did not always care to reveal. Maybe I was being a little vindictive. Maybe she was being a bit obsessive. Maybe it really didn’t matter how we dealt with the toothpaste. But maybe it did.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thankfully, we thought of a solution.
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Years later, I had new roommates in college.
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6．（2022·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头请续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once a man was driving down the road when he noticed an elderly lady stood on one of the most deserted sections of the read. Even though the light was not bright in the evening, the man saw that she needed some help. So, he parked his car in front of hers and approached her.
The older woman became concerned because no one had stopped to help her in the past few hours, and saw this guy was approaching her with a smile. She became worried that the man would hurt her because he appeared poor and hungry.
The man could see she was scared and understood how she felt.“I’m here to help you. My name is Bryan Anderson”, he continued addressing bet. Despise her fear, the older woman told him that her car’s tire was flat.
“Ma’am, It’s cold outdoors: why don’t you want inside my warm car while I change the tires,” the man replied. Having said this, the man took his toolbox and began changing the flat tire of the Lady’s car. The man quickly repulsed the tire. The older woman rolled down her car window and started talking to him as he finished.
She introduced herself said she was from a far distant place and was passing through, and expressed her gratitude to him for helping her. After setting aside tools and a flat fire to her automobile，the man simply smiled as he shut the trunk(后备箱).
“How much should I pay you ” asked the elderly lady.
The man had reason for being paid because this was not his job He was assisting her in her time of need. Instead, he told her that if she genuinely wanted to repay him, she should help someone in need the next time she saw one“ And at that time, think of it as payment for this deed of mine” the man added.
On the way back to her destination, the old lady noticed a small cat a few miles down the road. She pulled over and went in to relax and grab a bite before the final leg of her journey.
注意：
1．续写的同数应为150左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，(pregnant怀孕的)
After she was seated, a pregnant waitress brought a towel to wipe her wet hair
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While the waitress was wandering where the lady was. she found a note.
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7．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a little boy, there was nothing I liked better than Sunday afternoons at my grandfather’s farm in western Pennsylvania. Surrounded by miles of winding stonewalls, the house and barn provided endless hours of fun for a city kid like me. I was used to the city’s bright and neat living rooms which always seemed to whisper, “Not to be touched!”
I can still remember one afternoon when I was eight years old. Since my first visit to the farm, I’d wanted more than anything to be allowed to climb the stonewalls surrounding the property. My parents would never approve. The walls were old: some stones were missing, others loose and crumbling (倒塌). Still, my desire to climb across those walls grew so strong that finally, one spring afternoon, I picked up all my courage and entered the living room, where the adults had gathered after Sunday dinner.
“I, uh, I want to climb the stonewalls,” I said hesitantly. Everyone looked up. “Can I climb the stonewalls ” Instantly a sound went up from the women in the room. “Oh, no!” they cried in shock. “Fred, you’ll hurt yourself!” I wasn’t too disappointed; the response was just as I’d expected. But before I could leave the room, I was stopped by my grandfather’s booming voice. “Now hold on just a minute,” I heard him say, “Let the boy climb the stone-walls. He has to learn to do things for himself.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Scoot (快走),” he said to me with a wink (眨眨眼), “and come and see me when you get back.”
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Many years have passed since then, and I am now a host of a well-known television program.
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8．（2020·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every night after dinner, my grandparents would turn on TV for the 6 o'clock news. No matter how hard I tried to act the grown-up and watch with them, I would inevitably(不可避免地) get distracted until 6:30 when Wheel of Fortune came on.
My grandma would play along, trying to guess the answers before the players. Her shouts of excitement when she succeeded could be heard across the house.
As I grew older, my love of reading and writing blossomed, and I would join my grandma in yelling out letters. Soon, I was experiencing the thrill of solving the puzzles faster than the contestants(选手) and even my grandma. I was hooked.
Due to constant moving around with my mom and father, I started to spend less time with my grandparents, but our bond remained strong. My grandparents provided me with the stability, love and support that I desperately needed when I grew up. When I was in a bad mood, I would remember those sweet nights.
A few years later, I was living with my grandpa in Chicago. While watching an episode(集) of Wheel of Fortune, we had a wave of nostalgia(怀旧). With application, I didn't think much of it until I received a mail months later, announcing that the Wheel of Fortune casting team would come to Chicago. In order to be considered for an in-person audition(试演), applicants would need to submit a sixty-second video explaining why they wanted to be a contestant.
All my childhood memories of watching the show came flooding back, and I knew I was meant to spin(旋转) the wheel for real. Immediately, I recorded a video and submitted it. A couple of weeks later, I received an e-mail inviting me to audition in person. I was very nervous on the audition day. I couldn't believe I was trying out for ''America's Game''! After two rounds of intense auditioning, with half of the hopefuls letting go after the first round, it was over. All of us applicants were told we would receive a letter in the mail within two weeks if we were selected.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
Paragraph 1:
I ran to the mailbox every day but there was nothing.
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Paragraph 2：
Then one morning while getting ready for work, I checked my mail and let out the loudest scream ever.
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试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Possible Version 1:
Dear Tim,
How's it going I’m writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday, which I booked for you, has been cancelled.
Given that the coronavirus has not been completely contained, the theater has to cancel the performance. The organizer promises to offer a full refund. Besides, an online performance of the opera is available free to audience by clicking the link attached.
In this case, it's advisable to stay at home and read some Chinese classics, which can also bring you closer exposure to Chinese culture.
Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Yours
Li Hua
Possible Version 2:
Dear Tim,
How's everything going I regret to tell you that the Yue Opera performance, originally scheduled at 7:30pm next Saturday, has been cancelled.
According to the announcement made by the organizer, the money will be refunded to us with a letter offering their heartfelt apology.
Now that the show is called off, why not join me to pay a visit to the Art Museum of Yue Opera It's a perfect alternative, which can offer you an up-close look at the history and development of Yue Opera as well.
What do you think of the plan Please write me back at your earliest convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Tim写信，告知他周六晚上7:30的越剧演出被取消的消息、后续安排，以及给他的建议。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.告知演出取消；
2.后续事项处理；
3.其他活动建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
inform sb. of sth./ look for/ cancel/ stay at home/ be exposed to/ be attached to/ be sorry to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. How's everything going
2. I'm writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
3. Considering that the coronavirus has not been completely under control, the theater has to cancel the performance.
4. The organizer promises to offer a full refund.
5. Fortunately, an online performance of the opera is available free to audience by clicking the link attached.
6.In this case, you are advised to stay at home and read some Chinese classics, which can also bring you a closer exposure to Chinese culture.
7. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：I'm writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday, which I booked for you, has been cancelled.中that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
2．Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
Mr. Wang, an expert in the field, has been devoted to Chinese traditional culture and has created his own research system. Today, he will expose us to Confucius, whose ideas and beliefs have long shaped and influenced our lives for thousands of years. Hopefully, it will offer an insight into our unique culture and the beauty behind.
Now let’s follow Mr. Wang and dive into the splendid Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，将为爱尔兰访问团做讲座的专家介绍给爱尔兰朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
思想：idea→thought
影响：influence→affect
提供：offer→provide
灿烂的：splendid→gorgeous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：We’re very honored because we have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.（运用了不定式作原因状语）
【高分句型2】Today, he will expose us to Confucius, whose ideas and beliefs have long shaped and influenced our lives for thousands of years. （运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句）
3．With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue. I sincerely hope that all students can actively participate in designing the logo for this activity.
The design requirements of the logo are as follows: firstly, the theme should be based on the dragon boat race; secondly, it should reflect the spirit of sports; finally, if the design of the logo is combined with the characteristics of our city, that would be better, which will leave a deep impression on visitors. I strongly believe that it will be a good chance to show your talent. If you would like to join us, please send us your design via email. And please keep in mind that the deadline is 30 July 2022.
Everyone is expected to participate actively.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求写一篇征集启事为即将到来的2022杭州亚运会组委会征集会徽，内容包括1. 设计要求；2.提交方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来临：approaching→coming
特色：characteristics→features
结合：be unified with→be combined with
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句
With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.
拓展句
As the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaches, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.（运用了非谓语动词的独立主格）
【高分句型2】if the design of the logo is combined with the characteristics of our city, that would be better, which will leave a deep impression on visitors.（运用了which引导非限制定定语从句和if引导条件状语从句）
【高分句型3】I strongly believe that it will be a good chance to show your talent.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
4．As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on. Today, I would like to make a brief introduction of the 24 solar terms which embodies the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. The 24 solar terms are divided into 24 to better distinguish the weather characteristics of each solar term, from Spring Begins to Great Cold. They accurately reflect the changes of natural rhythms and play an extremely important role in People's Daily life. The 24 solar terms contain a long cultural connotation and historical accumulation, which is an important part of the long history and culture of the Chinese nation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇征文介绍2022年北京冬奥会所展现的一、两点中国文化或中国理念。
【详解】词汇积累
体现：embody→reflect
准确地：accurately→precisely
重要的：important→significant
包含：contain →include
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on.
拓展句：We all know that the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句以及现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The 24 solar terms contain a long cultural connotation and historical accumulation, which is an important part of the long history and culture of the Chinese nation. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
5．One possible version:
Thankfully, we thought of a solution. It was simple but significant: We bought two tubes of toothpaste—one for me to squeeze and one for her to roll. That made all the difference. The trouble was over. And interestingly, I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. I also had to admit that to roll did keep the tube neater. So why focus on the differences that separate us Instead, why not compromise a little and embrace diversities
Years later, I had new roommates in college. There were always discomforts like “toothpaste wars”. For example, one roommate often stayed up late working, and the typing, typing, typing on the keyboard disturbed our bedtime. Since it mattered more for her to work, we lived in relative harmony with earplugs. So, how can we get along with others By completely agreeing on one thing Or by respecting and handling the differences I would argue the latter.
【导语】本文以人物线索展开，讲述了作者和双胞胎妹妹玛丽一起生活了18年，她们彼此非常了解，一起享受快乐时光，唯独有一件事情让她们之间产生矛盾：挤牙膏问题。玛丽喜欢小心地折叠和卷牙膏管，而作者喜欢从中间抓住并挤压，两周后她们因为这一问题吵架。最终作者意识到要尊重差异。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“谢天谢地，我们想到了一个解决方案。”可知，第一段可描写作者和玛丽想出的解决方案的具体内容，以及处理后的结果。
②由第二段首句内容“几年后，我在大学里有了新室友。”可知，本段应该写作者在大学中也遇到了类似的挤药膏差异，作者和舍友是如何处理这些差异并和谐相处的。
2.续写线索：想出办法——实施具体方案——从中获得启发——和大学舍友遇到类似问题——尊重差异和谐相处
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想出：think of/come up with
②集中在：focus on/concentrate on/center on
③干扰：disturb/interrupt
④友好相处：get along with/get on with
情绪类
①谢天谢地：thankfully/gratefully
②不开心：discomfort/ displeasure
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. So why focus on the differences that separate us （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. For example, one roommate often stayed up late working, and the typing, typing, typing on the keyboard disturbed our bedtime.（运用了现在分词作状语）
6．A Possible Version:
After she was seated, a pregnant waitress brought a towel to wipe her wet hair. The lady noticed that the waitress was in the later stage of her pregnancy but still smiling and working hard in the evening. The elderly lady wondered how someone with so little could be so kind and generous to a stranger until she remembered how Bryan, a stranger, had just helped her. After finishing her meal, the lady paid a hundred dollar bill much higher than her bill amount. The waitress went inside to get change, but when she returned, the old lady had left.
While the waitress was wondering where the lady was, she found a note. She read the note that was written by the old lady: “Thank you for your amazing services. You don’t owe me anything. Someone once helped me without expecting anything in return. If you truly want to repay me, pass on your kindness, and do not let this chain of love end with you.” There were four hundred dollar bills left under the napkin for the waitress. Her eyes were filled with tears. She was in desperate need of financial help with the baby coming soon. With the kindness from a stranger, she knew everything would be fine.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是一位女士的车胎爆胎，深夜中一个陌生人帮她更换轮胎的故事。这位年长的女士想要给他一定的报酬作为感谢，而陌生人说如果真想回报他的话，那就去帮助下一位需要帮助的人，就在去往自己的目的地的途中，将善良传递下去。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她坐好后，一名怀孕的女服务员拿着毛巾擦湿头发。”可知，第一段可描写这位年长的女士见到这位孕晚期的母亲的不容易，想到自己被帮助的场景而去帮助这位孕妈妈。
②由第二段首句内容“当女服务员想知道那位女士在哪里时，她找到了一张便条。”可知，第二段可描写这位孕妈妈见到纸条上的内容以及这位孕妈妈收到别人帮助时的感想。
2.续写线索：车胎爆了——陌生人帮忙替换轮胎——表示感谢——遇到孕妇服务员——帮助孕妈妈——孕妈妈的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想知道：wonder/want to know/have some idea
②传递善良：pass on kindness/deliver goodness
③眼泪涌出：be filled tears/well up with tears/be full of tears
情绪类
①善良而又大方：be so kind and generous to/kind-hearted and decent
②积极乐观：smiling and working hard/be positive /optimistic about everything
【点睛】[高分句型1]. After finishing her meal, the lady paid a hundred dollar bill much higher than her bill amount. （由介词after后跟动名词短语作宾语以及副词比较级结构）
[高分句型2].There were four hundred dollar bills left under the napkin for the waitress. （运用了过去分词短语作定语）
[高分句型3]. She was in desperate need of financial help with the baby coming soon.（运用了with+宾语+宾补结构）
7．参考答案
“Scoot (快走),” he said to me with a wink (眨眨眼), “and come and see me when you get back.” For the next two and a half hours I climbed those old walls and had the time of my life. Later I met with my grandfather to tell him about my adventure. I’ll never forget what he said. “Fred,” he said, grinning, “you made this day a special day just by being yourself. Always remember, there’s only one person in this whole world like you, and I like you exactly as you are.”
Many years have passed since then, and I am now a host of a well-known television program. I host the television program Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood seen by millions of children throughout America. There have been changes over the years, but one thing remains the same: my message to children at the end of almost every visit, “There’s only one person in this whole world like you, the kids can count on hearing me say,” and people can like you exactly as you are.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候在乡村的经历，作者小时候很喜欢在祖父的农田上玩耍，并且渴望爬上围绕着农田的石墙，虽然大人们害怕爬上围墙会让作者受伤，但是祖父同意了。作者从自己的经历中悟出一个道理：要做真实的自我。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘快走，’他眨眨眼对我说，‘回来后来看我。’”可知，第一段可描写作者爬上了期许已经的围墙，同时也需描述之后回去见祖父时，祖父对作者的鼓励。
②由第二段首句内容“从那时起，许多年过去了，我现在是一个著名的电视节目的主持人。”可知，第二段可描写在作者的工作生涯中，祖父的话对自己的影响，以及作者如何通过节目影响别人。
2.续写线索：爬围墙——见祖父——鼓励——职业影响——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①.讲述：tell/describe/make a description
②.指望：count on/rely on
③.特别的：special/extraordinary/wonderful
情绪类
①.微笑：grin/laugh/with a big smile resting on one’s face
②.喜欢：like/be greatly fond of
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I’ll never forget what he said. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. I host the television program Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood seen by millions of children throughout America.(使用过去分词后置定语)
8．Paragraph 1:
I ran to the mailbox every day but there was nothing. After one week, I became very frustrated and even thought the mail had been delivered to the wrong department. My grandma came and comforted me, ''Laura, wait patiently.'' Feeling defeated, I replied, ''I wasn't good enough. They didn't want me. '' She said with a confident tone, ''You will be selected and receive the mail. Trust me.'' Though I didn't believe I would receive the mail, I was not so anxious. I calmed down and lived my life as before.
Paragraph 2:
Then one morning while getting ready for work, I checked my mail and let out the loudest scream ever. There it was: a mail from Wheel of Fortune stating that they had a tape date for me. I had to read it several times before I truly believed it. I was going to be a contestant on Wheel of Fortune! I ended up filming my episode a few months later, and the entire experience was amazing. From meeting Pat and Vanna, to spinning the wheel and, most importantly, saying those magical words, ''I'd like to solve the puzzle. '' It was a day I will never forget.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了作者在爷爷奶奶的影响下喜欢上一档名叫Wheel of Fortune的节目。多年后，当回到芝加哥和爷爷一起居住时，作者收到一封信，邀请他参加这个节目的试演。出于对这个节目的喜爱，作者决定录制一个短片尝试。两轮比赛后，节目组请作者回家等通知。
【详解】续写分为两段。
根据第一段的开头“我每天都去邮筒看，但什么都没有”可以接着写：一周后还是没有信件，作者感到沮丧，估计自己可能被淘汰了。但是祖父母安慰她，给她信心，并且让她耐心等待。作者调整心态，回归正常生活。
根据第二段的开头“那天早上我正准备好去上班，检查邮筒时，我大声尖叫起来”可以接着写：作者不敢相信自己收到节目组的来信，并给她安排了录制时间。作者把自己的喜悦同祖父母分享。非常感谢曾经那段陪着他们一起观看节目的日子，让她不仅得到了欢乐还学到了很多知识，得以参加这个全美国人民都喜欢的节目。
用5个以上的关键词加大了写作难度。考生应熟悉关键词，以便在适当时候加以运用。写作完成后，要将关键词下划线。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Though I didn't believe I would receive the mail, I was not so anxious.中though引导让步状语从句；There it was: a mail from Wheel of Fortune stating that they had a tape date for me.中that引导宾语从句。
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一、建议信
1．（2020·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考三模）假如你是李华，你之前在网上为你校交换生 Tim 预定了下周六晚上 7：30 的越剧演出，现该演出被宣布取消，请给他写一封邮件，内容要点如下：
1.告知演出取消；
2.后续事项处理；
3.其他活动建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、其他应用文
2．（2022·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校邀请到了专家 Mr. Wang 为爱尔兰访问团做一个关于中国传统文化的讲座。你作为主持人，将专家介绍给爱尔兰朋友，请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎; 2.专家介绍; 3.讲座内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出， 不计入总词数;
Ladies and gentlemen,
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3．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）2022杭州亚运会组委会（Organizing Committee）将举办龙舟比赛分会场徽标（logo）设计征集活动。假定你是志愿者李华，请你为组委会写一则徽标设计征集启事，内容包括：
1. 设计要求；
2. 提交方式；
3. 注意事项。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、开放性作文
4．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）2022年北京冬奥会很“中国”，许多元素向世界展现了中国文化或中国理念。请选取其中一二撰写一篇短文，参加China Daily举办的“China Meets the World”征文比赛。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：吉祥物mascot；二十四节气24 solar terms；一起向未来Together For A Shared Future；雪如意Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center。
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四、读后续写
5．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My twin sister, Mary, and I lived together for eighteen years before we went to college. We’d known each other so much and always enjoyed shared time. We happily sang and danced together, had dinner and went to bed together, and discussed the maths problems and recited the poems together.
But one small thing couldn’t be shared smoothly and that’s the trouble with toothpaste.
Crest(佳洁士)made us give in and demanded to know what we were made of. You see, Mary likes to carefully fold and roll the toothpaste tube. I like to grab it in the middle and squeeze(挤). I might call her folding a bit too careful. She might consider my squeezing careless and rude. This difference in style may seem mild, but it caused the big trouble in the later days.
At first, it was a little joke. I’d squeeze. She’d roll. Ha, ha. I’d squeeze again. She’d roll again. Annoying. I’d squeeze even when I wasn’t brushing my teeth. She’d slip in to roll, roll, roll.
After slipping and squeezing, tip-toeing and rolling for two weeks, it was unavoidable that we finally met face to face in our tiny pink bathroom with our hands on the toothpaste. We actually yelled at each other. I may have even cried. Why was she so obsessive(过分的) Why was I so vindictive(报复性的) Why couldn’t she loosen up Why couldn’t I calm down Were we still talking about the toothpaste
The toothpaste had become more than something to brush our teeth with; it had become a symbol for aspects of our individual personalities that we did not always care to reveal. Maybe I was being a little vindictive. Maybe she was being a bit obsessive. Maybe it really didn’t matter how we dealt with the toothpaste. But maybe it did.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thankfully, we thought of a solution.
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Years later, I had new roommates in college.
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6．（2022·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头请续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once a man was driving down the road when he noticed an elderly lady stood on one of the most deserted sections of the read. Even though the light was not bright in the evening, the man saw that she needed some help. So, he parked his car in front of hers and approached her.
The older woman became concerned because no one had stopped to help her in the past few hours, and saw this guy was approaching her with a smile. She became worried that the man would hurt her because he appeared poor and hungry.
The man could see she was scared and understood how she felt.“I’m here to help you. My name is Bryan Anderson”, he continued addressing bet. Despise her fear, the older woman told him that her car’s tire was flat.
“Ma’am, It’s cold outdoors: why don’t you want inside my warm car while I change the tires,” the man replied. Having said this, the man took his toolbox and began changing the flat tire of the Lady’s car. The man quickly repulsed the tire. The older woman rolled down her car window and started talking to him as he finished.
She introduced herself said she was from a far distant place and was passing through, and expressed her gratitude to him for helping her. After setting aside tools and a flat fire to her automobile，the man simply smiled as he shut the trunk(后备箱).
“How much should I pay you ” asked the elderly lady.
The man had reason for being paid because this was not his job He was assisting her in her time of need. Instead, he told her that if she genuinely wanted to repay him, she should help someone in need the next time she saw one“ And at that time, think of it as payment for this deed of mine” the man added.
On the way back to her destination, the old lady noticed a small cat a few miles down the road. She pulled over and went in to relax and grab a bite before the final leg of her journey.
注意：
1．续写的同数应为150左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答，(pregnant怀孕的)
After she was seated, a pregnant waitress brought a towel to wipe her wet hair
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While the waitress was wandering where the lady was. she found a note.
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7．（2023·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a little boy, there was nothing I liked better than Sunday afternoons at my grandfather’s farm in western Pennsylvania. Surrounded by miles of winding stonewalls, the house and barn provided endless hours of fun for a city kid like me. I was used to the city’s bright and neat living rooms which always seemed to whisper, “Not to be touched!”
I can still remember one afternoon when I was eight years old. Since my first visit to the farm, I’d wanted more than anything to be allowed to climb the stonewalls surrounding the property. My parents would never approve. The walls were old: some stones were missing, others loose and crumbling (倒塌). Still, my desire to climb across those walls grew so strong that finally, one spring afternoon, I picked up all my courage and entered the living room, where the adults had gathered after Sunday dinner.
“I, uh, I want to climb the stonewalls,” I said hesitantly. Everyone looked up. “Can I climb the stonewalls ” Instantly a sound went up from the women in the room. “Oh, no!” they cried in shock. “Fred, you’ll hurt yourself!” I wasn’t too disappointed; the response was just as I’d expected. But before I could leave the room, I was stopped by my grandfather’s booming voice. “Now hold on just a minute,” I heard him say, “Let the boy climb the stone-walls. He has to learn to do things for himself.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Scoot (快走),” he said to me with a wink (眨眨眼), “and come and see me when you get back.”
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Many years have passed since then, and I am now a host of a well-known television program.
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8．（2020·浙江舟山·舟山中学校考三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every night after dinner, my grandparents would turn on TV for the 6 o'clock news. No matter how hard I tried to act the grown-up and watch with them, I would inevitably(不可避免地) get distracted until 6:30 when Wheel of Fortune came on.
My grandma would play along, trying to guess the answers before the players. Her shouts of excitement when she succeeded could be heard across the house.
As I grew older, my love of reading and writing blossomed, and I would join my grandma in yelling out letters. Soon, I was experiencing the thrill of solving the puzzles faster than the contestants(选手) and even my grandma. I was hooked.
Due to constant moving around with my mom and father, I started to spend less time with my grandparents, but our bond remained strong. My grandparents provided me with the stability, love and support that I desperately needed when I grew up. When I was in a bad mood, I would remember those sweet nights.
A few years later, I was living with my grandpa in Chicago. While watching an episode(集) of Wheel of Fortune, we had a wave of nostalgia(怀旧). With application, I didn't think much of it until I received a mail months later, announcing that the Wheel of Fortune casting team would come to Chicago. In order to be considered for an in-person audition(试演), applicants would need to submit a sixty-second video explaining why they wanted to be a contestant.
All my childhood memories of watching the show came flooding back, and I knew I was meant to spin(旋转) the wheel for real. Immediately, I recorded a video and submitted it. A couple of weeks later, I received an e-mail inviting me to audition in person. I was very nervous on the audition day. I couldn't believe I was trying out for ''America's Game''! After two rounds of intense auditioning, with half of the hopefuls letting go after the first round, it was over. All of us applicants were told we would receive a letter in the mail within two weeks if we were selected.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
Paragraph 1:
I ran to the mailbox every day but there was nothing.
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Paragraph 2：
Then one morning while getting ready for work, I checked my mail and let out the loudest scream ever.
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参考答案：
1．Possible Version 1:
Dear Tim,
How's it going I’m writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday, which I booked for you, has been cancelled.
Given that the coronavirus has not been completely contained, the theater has to cancel the performance. The organizer promises to offer a full refund. Besides, an online performance of the opera is available free to audience by clicking the link attached.
In this case, it's advisable to stay at home and read some Chinese classics, which can also bring you closer exposure to Chinese culture.
Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Yours
Li Hua
Possible Version 2:
Dear Tim,
How's everything going I regret to tell you that the Yue Opera performance, originally scheduled at 7:30pm next Saturday, has been cancelled.
According to the announcement made by the organizer, the money will be refunded to us with a letter offering their heartfelt apology.
Now that the show is called off, why not join me to pay a visit to the Art Museum of Yue Opera It's a perfect alternative, which can offer you an up-close look at the history and development of Yue Opera as well.
What do you think of the plan Please write me back at your earliest convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给交换生Tim写信，告知他周六晚上7:30的越剧演出被取消的消息、后续安排，以及给他的建议。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.告知演出取消；
2.后续事项处理；
3.其他活动建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
inform sb. of sth./ look for/ cancel/ stay at home/ be exposed to/ be attached to/ be sorry to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. How's everything going
2. I'm writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.
3. Considering that the coronavirus has not been completely under control, the theater has to cancel the performance.
4. The organizer promises to offer a full refund.
5. Fortunately, an online performance of the opera is available free to audience by clicking the link attached.
6.In this case, you are advised to stay at home and read some Chinese classics, which can also bring you a closer exposure to Chinese culture.
7. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：I'm writing to inform you that the Yue Opera at 7:30pm next Saturday, which I booked for you, has been cancelled.中that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
2．Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
Mr. Wang, an expert in the field, has been devoted to Chinese traditional culture and has created his own research system. Today, he will expose us to Confucius, whose ideas and beliefs have long shaped and influenced our lives for thousands of years. Hopefully, it will offer an insight into our unique culture and the beauty behind.
Now let’s follow Mr. Wang and dive into the splendid Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，将为爱尔兰访问团做讲座的专家介绍给爱尔兰朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
思想：idea→thought
影响：influence→affect
提供：offer→provide
灿烂的：splendid→gorgeous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：We’re very honored because we have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We’re very honored to have Mr. Wang here to deliver a lecture about Chinese traditional culture.（运用了不定式作原因状语）
【高分句型2】Today, he will expose us to Confucius, whose ideas and beliefs have long shaped and influenced our lives for thousands of years. （运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句）
3．With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue. I sincerely hope that all students can actively participate in designing the logo for this activity.
The design requirements of the logo are as follows: firstly, the theme should be based on the dragon boat race; secondly, it should reflect the spirit of sports; finally, if the design of the logo is combined with the characteristics of our city, that would be better, which will leave a deep impression on visitors. I strongly believe that it will be a good chance to show your talent. If you would like to join us, please send us your design via email. And please keep in mind that the deadline is 30 July 2022.
Everyone is expected to participate actively.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求写一篇征集启事为即将到来的2022杭州亚运会组委会征集会徽，内容包括1. 设计要求；2.提交方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来临：approaching→coming
特色：characteristics→features
结合：be unified with→be combined with
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句
With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.
拓展句
As the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaches, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games approaching, we will hold a dragon boat race in Hangzhou venue.（运用了非谓语动词的独立主格）
【高分句型2】if the design of the logo is combined with the characteristics of our city, that would be better, which will leave a deep impression on visitors.（运用了which引导非限制定定语从句和if引导条件状语从句）
【高分句型3】I strongly believe that it will be a good chance to show your talent.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
4．As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on. Today, I would like to make a brief introduction of the 24 solar terms which embodies the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. The 24 solar terms are divided into 24 to better distinguish the weather characteristics of each solar term, from Spring Begins to Great Cold. They accurately reflect the changes of natural rhythms and play an extremely important role in People's Daily life. The 24 solar terms contain a long cultural connotation and historical accumulation, which is an important part of the long history and culture of the Chinese nation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇征文介绍2022年北京冬奥会所展现的一、两点中国文化或中国理念。
【详解】词汇积累
体现：embody→reflect
准确地：accurately→precisely
重要的：important→significant
包含：contain →include
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on.
拓展句：We all know that the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games is a great success, showing the world Chinese culture or Chinese concepts such as the 24 solar terms, unique mascots, Snow Ruyi — the National Ski Jumping Center, Together For A Shared Future and so on. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句以及现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The 24 solar terms contain a long cultural connotation and historical accumulation, which is an important part of the long history and culture of the Chinese nation. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
5．One possible version:
Thankfully, we thought of a solution. It was simple but significant: We bought two tubes of toothpaste—one for me to squeeze and one for her to roll. That made all the difference. The trouble was over. And interestingly, I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. I also had to admit that to roll did keep the tube neater. So why focus on the differences that separate us Instead, why not compromise a little and embrace diversities
Years later, I had new roommates in college. There were always discomforts like “toothpaste wars”. For example, one roommate often stayed up late working, and the typing, typing, typing on the keyboard disturbed our bedtime. Since it mattered more for her to work, we lived in relative harmony with earplugs. So, how can we get along with others By completely agreeing on one thing Or by respecting and handling the differences I would argue the latter.
【导语】本文以人物线索展开，讲述了作者和双胞胎妹妹玛丽一起生活了18年，她们彼此非常了解，一起享受快乐时光，唯独有一件事情让她们之间产生矛盾：挤牙膏问题。玛丽喜欢小心地折叠和卷牙膏管，而作者喜欢从中间抓住并挤压，两周后她们因为这一问题吵架。最终作者意识到要尊重差异。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“谢天谢地，我们想到了一个解决方案。”可知，第一段可描写作者和玛丽想出的解决方案的具体内容，以及处理后的结果。
②由第二段首句内容“几年后，我在大学里有了新室友。”可知，本段应该写作者在大学中也遇到了类似的挤药膏差异，作者和舍友是如何处理这些差异并和谐相处的。
2.续写线索：想出办法——实施具体方案——从中获得启发——和大学舍友遇到类似问题——尊重差异和谐相处
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想出：think of/come up with
②集中在：focus on/concentrate on/center on
③干扰：disturb/interrupt
④友好相处：get along with/get on with
情绪类
①谢天谢地：thankfully/gratefully
②不开心：discomfort/ displeasure
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. So why focus on the differences that separate us （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. For example, one roommate often stayed up late working, and the typing, typing, typing on the keyboard disturbed our bedtime.（运用了现在分词作状语）
6．A Possible Version:
After she was seated, a pregnant waitress brought a towel to wipe her wet hair. The lady noticed that the waitress was in the later stage of her pregnancy but still smiling and working hard in the evening. The elderly lady wondered how someone with so little could be so kind and generous to a stranger until she remembered how Bryan, a stranger, had just helped her. After finishing her meal, the lady paid a hundred dollar bill much higher than her bill amount. The waitress went inside to get change, but when she returned, the old lady had left.
While the waitress was wondering where the lady was, she found a note. She read the note that was written by the old lady: “Thank you for your amazing services. You don’t owe me anything. Someone once helped me without expecting anything in return. If you truly want to repay me, pass on your kindness, and do not let this chain of love end with you.” There were four hundred dollar bills left under the napkin for the waitress. Her eyes were filled with tears. She was in desperate need of financial help with the baby coming soon. With the kindness from a stranger, she knew everything would be fine.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是一位女士的车胎爆胎，深夜中一个陌生人帮她更换轮胎的故事。这位年长的女士想要给他一定的报酬作为感谢，而陌生人说如果真想回报他的话，那就去帮助下一位需要帮助的人，就在去往自己的目的地的途中，将善良传递下去。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她坐好后，一名怀孕的女服务员拿着毛巾擦湿头发。”可知，第一段可描写这位年长的女士见到这位孕晚期的母亲的不容易，想到自己被帮助的场景而去帮助这位孕妈妈。
②由第二段首句内容“当女服务员想知道那位女士在哪里时，她找到了一张便条。”可知，第二段可描写这位孕妈妈见到纸条上的内容以及这位孕妈妈收到别人帮助时的感想。
2.续写线索：车胎爆了——陌生人帮忙替换轮胎——表示感谢——遇到孕妇服务员——帮助孕妈妈——孕妈妈的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想知道：wonder/want to know/have some idea
②传递善良：pass on kindness/deliver goodness
③眼泪涌出：be filled tears/well up with tears/be full of tears
情绪类
①善良而又大方：be so kind and generous to/kind-hearted and decent
②积极乐观：smiling and working hard/be positive /optimistic about everything
【点睛】[高分句型1]. After finishing her meal, the lady paid a hundred dollar bill much higher than her bill amount. （由介词after后跟动名词短语作宾语以及副词比较级结构）
[高分句型2].There were four hundred dollar bills left under the napkin for the waitress. （运用了过去分词短语作定语）
[高分句型3]. She was in desperate need of financial help with the baby coming soon.（运用了with+宾语+宾补结构）
7．参考答案
“Scoot (快走),” he said to me with a wink (眨眨眼), “and come and see me when you get back.” For the next two and a half hours I climbed those old walls and had the time of my life. Later I met with my grandfather to tell him about my adventure. I’ll never forget what he said. “Fred,” he said, grinning, “you made this day a special day just by being yourself. Always remember, there’s only one person in this whole world like you, and I like you exactly as you are.”
Many years have passed since then, and I am now a host of a well-known television program. I host the television program Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood seen by millions of children throughout America. There have been changes over the years, but one thing remains the same: my message to children at the end of almost every visit, “There’s only one person in this whole world like you, the kids can count on hearing me say,” and people can like you exactly as you are.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候在乡村的经历，作者小时候很喜欢在祖父的农田上玩耍，并且渴望爬上围绕着农田的石墙，虽然大人们害怕爬上围墙会让作者受伤，但是祖父同意了。作者从自己的经历中悟出一个道理：要做真实的自我。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘快走，’他眨眨眼对我说，‘回来后来看我。’”可知，第一段可描写作者爬上了期许已经的围墙，同时也需描述之后回去见祖父时，祖父对作者的鼓励。
②由第二段首句内容“从那时起，许多年过去了，我现在是一个著名的电视节目的主持人。”可知，第二段可描写在作者的工作生涯中，祖父的话对自己的影响，以及作者如何通过节目影响别人。
2.续写线索：爬围墙——见祖父——鼓励——职业影响——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①.讲述：tell/describe/make a description
②.指望：count on/rely on
③.特别的：special/extraordinary/wonderful
情绪类
①.微笑：grin/laugh/with a big smile resting on one’s face
②.喜欢：like/be greatly fond of
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I’ll never forget what he said. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. I host the television program Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood seen by millions of children throughout America.(使用过去分词后置定语)
8．Paragraph 1:
I ran to the mailbox every day but there was nothing. After one week, I became very frustrated and even thought the mail had been delivered to the wrong department. My grandma came and comforted me, ''Laura, wait patiently.'' Feeling defeated, I replied, ''I wasn't good enough. They didn't want me. '' She said with a confident tone, ''You will be selected and receive the mail. Trust me.'' Though I didn't believe I would receive the mail, I was not so anxious. I calmed down and lived my life as before.
Paragraph 2:
Then one morning while getting ready for work, I checked my mail and let out the loudest scream ever. There it was: a mail from Wheel of Fortune stating that they had a tape date for me. I had to read it several times before I truly believed it. I was going to be a contestant on Wheel of Fortune! I ended up filming my episode a few months later, and the entire experience was amazing. From meeting Pat and Vanna, to spinning the wheel and, most importantly, saying those magical words, ''I'd like to solve the puzzle. '' It was a day I will never forget.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了作者在爷爷奶奶的影响下喜欢上一档名叫Wheel of Fortune的节目。多年后，当回到芝加哥和爷爷一起居住时，作者收到一封信，邀请他参加这个节目的试演。出于对这个节目的喜爱，作者决定录制一个短片尝试。两轮比赛后，节目组请作者回家等通知。
【详解】续写分为两段。
根据第一段的开头“我每天都去邮筒看，但什么都没有”可以接着写：一周后还是没有信件，作者感到沮丧，估计自己可能被淘汰了。但是祖父母安慰她，给她信心，并且让她耐心等待。作者调整心态，回归正常生活。
根据第二段的开头“那天早上我正准备好去上班，检查邮筒时，我大声尖叫起来”可以接着写：作者不敢相信自己收到节目组的来信，并给她安排了录制时间。作者把自己的喜悦同祖父母分享。非常感谢曾经那段陪着他们一起观看节目的日子，让她不仅得到了欢乐还学到了很多知识，得以参加这个全美国人民都喜欢的节目。
用5个以上的关键词加大了写作难度。考生应熟悉关键词，以便在适当时候加以运用。写作完成后，要将关键词下划线。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Though I didn't believe I would receive the mail, I was not so anxious.中though引导让步状语从句；There it was: a mail from Wheel of Fortune stating that they had a tape date for me.中that引导宾语从句。
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