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2018年高考英语提分专练：第9题 书面表达
一、真题演练
1．（2017·新课标Ⅰ卷）书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1）时间和地点；
2）内容：学习唐诗；
3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Leslie
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems in the Tang dynasty which you are interested in together in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems. (106)
Best wishes
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【点评】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。 把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。
【得分要点】格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅。高级表达：不定式短语to better appreciate the poems、过去分词短语some books related to the history of the Tang dynasty to better appreciate the poems.、宾语从句that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.等。经典句式it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and culture of them.
2．（2017·新课标Ⅲ）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1）球队活动；
2）报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm Li Hua, head of our school's Ping-Pong sports team. We're going to recruit new players for our team. The purpose of the team is to enrich our school life and build up our body. We will have training in the afternoon every day and have a contest every Saturday afternoon.
We'll be appreciated it if you can come and join us. Would you come to Room 307 on the third floor in the Students Union and sign your name before Friday this week We are looking forward to seeing you there.
Thank you very much.
Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；半开放性作文
【解析】【点评】这是一封邀请信，根据提示邀请留学生朋友Eric参加校乒乓球队。要求叙述清楚，明白，要写清楚四个方面的内容：
1.邀请Eric参加乒乓球队；
2.邀请的原因；
3.报名的方式和截止日期；
4.希望对方接受邀请。
写作时注意应以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅；试题要用一般现在时；注意要点齐全，句式正确，用词恰当，尽量使用多种语法结构。注意使用过渡性语句以使文章行文连贯流畅。
3．（2017·新课标Ⅱ卷）书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）展览时间、地点；
2）展览内容。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】暂无
【知识点】提纲作文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】
1．审题谋篇
1)审文体：应用文，属于提纲式作文
2)审格式：电子邮件
3)审人称：以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅
4)审时态：一般现在时
5)审要点：注意要点要齐全，包括邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展；展览时间、地点；展览内容。写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯、流畅。
二、写作题
4．（2017高三上·郯城月考）假定你是李华，你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国（Chinese knot），但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins，说明相关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
The reason is that I have got a cold, and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so. But don't worry. I've asked a friend of mine, Hart Meimei, to go there instead. She is good at making Chinese knots. She will go to your apartment at 9:00 this Saturday morning.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots. Wish you a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇道歉信类型的应用文。第一步要致歉：I would like to offer my apology for not being able to...第二步说明原因： The reason is that ...，此时可以适当增加细节。最后再次道歉并作弥补： Please allow me to say sorry again. I have the confidence that you can...语句通顺连贯，表达清晰，是一篇好文。
【点评】本写作是一篇道歉类的电子邮件，因此写作时注意字迹要工整。考生在写作时需要注意要点要全，注意文章的人称是以第一人称为主，时态是一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。
5．（2018高三上·承德期末）假定你是李华。外教Peter计划于本周日组织你校学生进行一场橄榄球比赛，并委托你以学生会名义用英语写一则通知，主要内容包括：
1). 比赛时间和场地；
2). 提前到场以了解规则；
3). 准备运动装备，注意安全。
注意：
1). 词数100左右；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】NOTICE There is a rugby match to be held this Sunday on our school playground. Every student is welcome to watch the match organized by Mr Peter. Students who are interested in rugby can join in the match. And there are some important things everybody should pay attention to. Firstly, any participant should go to the playground on time so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby. Secondly, each player should wear sports clothes and shoes. It will be better if you have a protective helmet. Last but not least, every player should focus on your own safety. Boys and girls, let's move and join together.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇提纲类作文要求考生以李华的身份，代表学生会为外教Peter计划于本周日组织学生进行的橄榄球比赛，写一则通知，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1). 比赛时间和场地；2). 提前到场以了解规则；3). 准备运动装备，注意安全写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Every student is welcome to watch the match organized by Mr Peter. Students who are interested in rugby can join in the match.和And there are some important things everybody should pay attention to运用了定语从句； any participant should go to the playground on time so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby.运用了目的状语从句。
6．（2018高三上·德州期末）假设你是李华，请你给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，邀请他周末到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。内容包括：
1).目的和意义；
2).时间和地点；
3).义务和责任（打扫卫生，维持秩序等）。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Leslie, I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful. The Cultural Center lies in Zhenxing road, opposite Xinhua post office. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. Meanwhile, it's a good chance for you to get exposed to the Chinese culture. We're expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out flyers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life. I do hope you can join us.It will be of great benefit to you.Your early reply is highly appreciated.Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封电子邮件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，在邮件里要写明时间周末，具体的内容邀请他到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。同时还要点明活动的目的和意义。整篇邮件可以使用现在时态，第一人称。写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful.运用了定语从句；Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help.运用了原因状语从句；We can also hand out flyers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable.运用了现在分词作状语；Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life.运用了倒装句。
7．（2018高三上·龙岩期末）你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”（The World Intellectual Property Day）举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”（Science Makes Life Better on Campus）为主题的创意作品展。假定你是李华，请你代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。
内容包括：
1). 目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；
2). 展评时间，地点、内容；
3). 报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1). 词数100左右，内容包括主要要点；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
Yours,
Li Hu
【答案】Dear Henry,
I'm delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.
The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th, the World Intellectual Property Day, aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science. Everyone present will feel amazed to see lots of fantastic creative works from us students. I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition. If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件。要求考生以李华的身份代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”为主题的创意作品展。写作要点已经给出，内容包括：目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；展评时间，地点、内容；报名方式及截止日期。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，根据列出的要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本文语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下： I'm delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.运用了定语从句和并列句； I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition.运用了宾语从句；If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.运用了条件状语从句。
8．（2018高三上·沈阳期末）假定你是光明中学的学生李华。你的美国笔友Andrew对中国文化非常感兴趣。请你给他发一封电子邮件，介绍你校寒假期间为外国学生举办的汉语冬令营活动，内容如下:1.活动目的：2.活动时间：3.活动内容：4.报名时间和方式等。
注意：1.词数100左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Andrew, How is everything going Knowing that your are really into Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join the Chinese Winter Camp to be held in our school. The camp, scheduled from Jan 25 to Feb 10, is intended to promote traditional Chinese culture. Foreigners will learn everyday Chinese, attend various parties and lectures about Chinese history and traditional culture. In addition, foreigners will be taken to visit the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good opportunity to be exposed to Chinese-speaking environment. I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it. If you’re interested, please sign up for it before Jan 10 at our school website: Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校寒假期间为外国学生举办的汉语冬令营活动，内容如下:活动目的；活动时间；活动内容；报名时间和方式等。写好此文，需注意三点：1.是电子邮件格式要准确，注意写好开头和结尾。2.是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是汉语冬令营活动。3.要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： foreigners will be taken to visit the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good opportunity to be exposed to Chinese-speaking environment.运用了定语从句； I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it.运用了宾语从句； If you’re interested, please sign up for it before Jan 10 at our school website: 运用了条件状语从句。
9．（2017高三上·大同月考）假定你是希望中学的学生李华，你校的外籍教师Mr Green准备进行一次关于西方文化的主题讲座，他发电子邮件向你询问你最喜欢的话题。请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1)、推荐你最喜欢的两个话题； 2)、简要说明推荐理由； 3)、表达对讲座的期待。
注意：1). 词数100左右；
2).可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3).开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very happy to hear that you will give a lecture on Western Culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Green, I am very happy to hear that you will give a lecture on Western culture. Knowing that you're asking for advice on my favorite topics related to it, I would like to share what I am interested in most. As we all know, Western culture is quite different, especially the history of religion. Therefore, I wonder if you could tell us something about it to enrich our knowledge. What's more, how to follow Western table manners is also a good topic because some of us are going to study abroad after graduation. It is the proper behavior at meals that can help us get along well with foreigners. I am looking forward to your excellent lecture and I am willing to help if you want more information.Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本篇是一篇书信写作，要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师Mr Green写一封回信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写作时适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全内容包括：1、推荐你最喜欢的两个话题；比如想了解the history of religion和 Western table manners 2、简要说明推荐理由； 3、表达对讲座的期待。语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you're asking for advice on my favorite topics related to it, I would like to share what I am interested in most.运用了现在分词作状语以及宾语从句；I wonder if you could tell us something about it to enrich our knowledge.运用了宾语从句；how to follow Western table manners is also a good topic because some of us are going to study abroad after graduation. 运用了原因状语从句；It is the proper behavior at meals that can help us get along well with foreigners.运用了强调句型。
10．（2017高三上·深圳月考）假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1). 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
2). 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
3). 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
注意：
1). 词数100左右；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
【答案】Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友Peter写一封信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容包括：1). 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等；2). 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）；3). 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）。考生需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体。故需要准确表达. ，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. 运用了宾语从句；If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, 运用了条件状语从句；The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences.运用了定语从句。
11．（2018高三上·绵阳月考）假设你是李华，你班开展主题为“不忘初心，方得始终”的演讲比赛。请你就以下要点，结合自身的经历写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的理解。
要点：1.你的“初心”；2.选择此“初心”的原因或意义；3.如何实现。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。
附“不忘初心”的两种翻译：
1）remain true to our original aspirations
2）never forget why we started
Dear classmates,
It is my honor to be here and share with you my idea on this topic.
Thank you!
【答案】Dear classmates,It is my honor to be here and share with you my idea on this topic. President Xi delivered a speech with a topic “Never forget why we started, and we can accomplish our mission.” While reading it, I keep thinking about my original aspiration—to learn all the necessary knowledge and skills to study in my dream university. With knowledge and skills acquired in such a university, I will play a more active and visible role in contributing to my country, making it better. I know there's still a long way to go before realizing my aspiration. But I will follow my teachers' Instructions, and never give up when confronted with discouraging setbacks and obstacles. I hope we can remain true to our original aspirations to get what we want in the end.
Thank you!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求假设你是李华，你班开展主题为“不忘初心，方得始终”的演讲比赛。请你就以下要点，结合自身的经历写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的理解。注意演讲稿的格式和用语。要点：1.你的“初心”；2.选择此“初心”的原因或意义；3.如何实现。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：While reading it, I keep thinking about my original aspiration—to learn all the necessary knowledge and skills to study in my dream university.运用了分词作状语； I hope we can remain true to our original aspirations to get what we want in the end.运用了宾语从句。
12．（2018高三上·临川月考）假如你是李华，上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院（orphanage）开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。
要点：1）时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)
2）孤儿院孩子们的反应；
3）简短评论。
要求：1）词数100左右
2）可合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children's bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children's lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文报道。上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。要点：时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)；孤儿院孩子们的反应；简短评论。根据所给提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.考查介词与动名词一起构成状语；When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. 运用了时间状语从句。
13．（2017高三上·青岛期中）第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。
要求：1.热情、有礼；2. 熟悉中国传统文化；3. 英语口语流利。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按上面的要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
生词：“ 一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Bell and Road Forum for international Cooperation
注意：1). 词数100左右：
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3). 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不算入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam， Thank you for reading my letter．As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming，I'd like very much to be a volunteer． All our citizens are looking forward to this special event．First of all，I promise I will，with great passion，try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely．Besides，I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture，which enables me to spread our splendid culture．What's more，I'm good at English and Chinese，which will play an important role in communication during the forum． To sum up，I believe I can be a qualified volunteer．I will try my best if I'm accepted．Yours，Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给组委会写一封应聘信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容：第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。要注意应聘信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.热情、有礼；2. 熟悉中国传统文化；3. 英语口语流利。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本文提出的理由充分，语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下：I promise I will，with great passion，try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely．运用不定式作目的状语；I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture，which enables me to spread our splendid culture．和I'm good at English and Chinese，which will play an important role in communication during the forum．运用了非限制性定语从句；I will try my best if I'm accepted．运用了条件状语从句。
14．（2017高三上·巴彦淖尔期中）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席，你想参选。请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。要点如下：
1). 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；
2). 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；
3). 表达当选的愿望。
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 主席president 竞选 run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
Thank you.
【答案】Good afternoon, my dear friends, My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the president of the English Club. Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students. In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president. Thank you.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇演讲稿，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇竞选演讲稿，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1). 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；2). 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；3). 表达当选的愿望。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. 运用了原因状语从句；If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students.运用了条件状语从句；I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president.运用了宾语从句和祈使句。
15．（2017高三上·故城期中）假定你是李华，是新华中学学生会主席，你校将举行校文化节，学校安排你写一封电子邮件，邀请外籍教授Black先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。
要点：1).讲座时间：2017年11月20日早上9点到11点；
2).讲座地点：报告厅；
3).联系方式：englishtec@。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Professor Black, I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students' Union of Xinhua Middle School.Our school will have a culture festival and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China,which will begin at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on Nov.20th,2017 in the lecture hall. As an expert in international culture,you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences,so we hope you could help us clear some cultural confusion.Could you please contact us at englishtec@ if you could come to our culture festival We are looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件，要求考生以李华的身份，邀请外籍教授Black先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。要求考生认真阅读提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Our school will have a culture festival and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China,which will begin at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on Nov.20th,2017 in the lecture hall.运用了定语从句；you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences,so we hope you could help us clear some cultural confusion.运用了并列句和宾语从句；Could you please contact us at englishtec@ if you could come to our culture festival 运用了条件状语从句。
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2018年高考英语提分专练：第9题 书面表达
一、真题演练
1．（2017·新课标Ⅰ卷）书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1）时间和地点；
2）内容：学习唐诗；
3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．（2017·新课标Ⅲ）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1）球队活动；
2）报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．（2017·新课标Ⅱ卷）书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）展览时间、地点；
2）展览内容。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
二、写作题
4．（2017高三上·郯城月考）假定你是李华，你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国（Chinese knot），但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins，说明相关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2018高三上·承德期末）假定你是李华。外教Peter计划于本周日组织你校学生进行一场橄榄球比赛，并委托你以学生会名义用英语写一则通知，主要内容包括：
1). 比赛时间和场地；
2). 提前到场以了解规则；
3). 准备运动装备，注意安全。
注意：
1). 词数100左右；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．（2018高三上·德州期末）假设你是李华，请你给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，邀请他周末到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。内容包括：
1).目的和意义；
2).时间和地点；
3).义务和责任（打扫卫生，维持秩序等）。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．（2018高三上·龙岩期末）你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”（The World Intellectual Property Day）举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”（Science Makes Life Better on Campus）为主题的创意作品展。假定你是李华，请你代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。
内容包括：
1). 目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；
2). 展评时间，地点、内容；
3). 报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1). 词数100左右，内容包括主要要点；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
Yours,
Li Hu
8．（2018高三上·沈阳期末）假定你是光明中学的学生李华。你的美国笔友Andrew对中国文化非常感兴趣。请你给他发一封电子邮件，介绍你校寒假期间为外国学生举办的汉语冬令营活动，内容如下:1.活动目的：2.活动时间：3.活动内容：4.报名时间和方式等。
注意：1.词数100左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．（2017高三上·大同月考）假定你是希望中学的学生李华，你校的外籍教师Mr Green准备进行一次关于西方文化的主题讲座，他发电子邮件向你询问你最喜欢的话题。请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1)、推荐你最喜欢的两个话题； 2)、简要说明推荐理由； 3)、表达对讲座的期待。
注意：1). 词数100左右；
2).可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3).开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very happy to hear that you will give a lecture on Western Culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2017高三上·深圳月考）假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1). 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等
2). 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
3). 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
注意：
1). 词数100左右；
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
11．（2018高三上·绵阳月考）假设你是李华，你班开展主题为“不忘初心，方得始终”的演讲比赛。请你就以下要点，结合自身的经历写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的理解。
要点：1.你的“初心”；2.选择此“初心”的原因或意义；3.如何实现。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。
附“不忘初心”的两种翻译：
1）remain true to our original aspirations
2）never forget why we started
Dear classmates,
It is my honor to be here and share with you my idea on this topic.
Thank you!
12．（2018高三上·临川月考）假如你是李华，上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院（orphanage）开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。
要点：1）时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)
2）孤儿院孩子们的反应；
3）简短评论。
要求：1）词数100左右
2）可合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
13．（2017高三上·青岛期中）第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。
要求：1.热情、有礼；2. 熟悉中国传统文化；3. 英语口语流利。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按上面的要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
生词：“ 一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Bell and Road Forum for international Cooperation
注意：1). 词数100左右：
2). 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3). 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不算入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2017高三上·巴彦淖尔期中）假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届主席，你想参选。请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。要点如下：
1). 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；
2). 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；
3). 表达当选的愿望。
注意:词数100左右;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 主席president 竞选 run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
Thank you.
15．（2017高三上·故城期中）假定你是李华，是新华中学学生会主席，你校将举行校文化节，学校安排你写一封电子邮件，邀请外籍教授Black先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。
要点：1).讲座时间：2017年11月20日早上9点到11点；
2).讲座地点：报告厅；
3).联系方式：englishtec@。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Leslie
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems in the Tang dynasty which you are interested in together in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems. (106)
Best wishes
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【点评】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。 把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。
【得分要点】格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅。高级表达：不定式短语to better appreciate the poems、过去分词短语some books related to the history of the Tang dynasty to better appreciate the poems.、宾语从句that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.等。经典句式it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and culture of them.
2．【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm Li Hua, head of our school's Ping-Pong sports team. We're going to recruit new players for our team. The purpose of the team is to enrich our school life and build up our body. We will have training in the afternoon every day and have a contest every Saturday afternoon.
We'll be appreciated it if you can come and join us. Would you come to Room 307 on the third floor in the Students Union and sign your name before Friday this week We are looking forward to seeing you there.
Thank you very much.
Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；半开放性作文
【解析】【点评】这是一封邀请信，根据提示邀请留学生朋友Eric参加校乒乓球队。要求叙述清楚，明白，要写清楚四个方面的内容：
1.邀请Eric参加乒乓球队；
2.邀请的原因；
3.报名的方式和截止日期；
4.希望对方接受邀请。
写作时注意应以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅；试题要用一般现在时；注意要点齐全，句式正确，用词恰当，尽量使用多种语法结构。注意使用过渡性语句以使文章行文连贯流畅。
3．【答案】暂无
【知识点】提纲作文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】
1．审题谋篇
1)审文体：应用文，属于提纲式作文
2)审格式：电子邮件
3)审人称：以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅
4)审时态：一般现在时
5)审要点：注意要点要齐全，包括邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展；展览时间、地点；展览内容。写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯、流畅。
4．【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
The reason is that I have got a cold, and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so. But don't worry. I've asked a friend of mine, Hart Meimei, to go there instead. She is good at making Chinese knots. She will go to your apartment at 9:00 this Saturday morning.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots. Wish you a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇道歉信类型的应用文。第一步要致歉：I would like to offer my apology for not being able to...第二步说明原因： The reason is that ...，此时可以适当增加细节。最后再次道歉并作弥补： Please allow me to say sorry again. I have the confidence that you can...语句通顺连贯，表达清晰，是一篇好文。
【点评】本写作是一篇道歉类的电子邮件，因此写作时注意字迹要工整。考生在写作时需要注意要点要全，注意文章的人称是以第一人称为主，时态是一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。
5．【答案】NOTICE There is a rugby match to be held this Sunday on our school playground. Every student is welcome to watch the match organized by Mr Peter. Students who are interested in rugby can join in the match. And there are some important things everybody should pay attention to. Firstly, any participant should go to the playground on time so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby. Secondly, each player should wear sports clothes and shoes. It will be better if you have a protective helmet. Last but not least, every player should focus on your own safety. Boys and girls, let's move and join together.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇提纲类作文要求考生以李华的身份，代表学生会为外教Peter计划于本周日组织学生进行的橄榄球比赛，写一则通知，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1). 比赛时间和场地；2). 提前到场以了解规则；3). 准备运动装备，注意安全写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Every student is welcome to watch the match organized by Mr Peter. Students who are interested in rugby can join in the match.和And there are some important things everybody should pay attention to运用了定语从句； any participant should go to the playground on time so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby.运用了目的状语从句。
6．【答案】Dear Leslie, I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful. The Cultural Center lies in Zhenxing road, opposite Xinhua post office. Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. Meanwhile, it's a good chance for you to get exposed to the Chinese culture. We're expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out flyers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life. I do hope you can join us.It will be of great benefit to you.Your early reply is highly appreciated.Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封电子邮件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，在邮件里要写明时间周末，具体的内容邀请他到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。同时还要点明活动的目的和意义。整篇邮件可以使用现在时态，第一人称。写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： I'm writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful.运用了定语从句；Since it's newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help.运用了原因状语从句；We can also hand out flyers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable.运用了现在分词作状语；Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life.运用了倒装句。
7．【答案】Dear Henry,
I'm delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.
The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th, the World Intellectual Property Day, aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science. Everyone present will feel amazed to see lots of fantastic creative works from us students. I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition. If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件。要求考生以李华的身份代表学校学生会写封邮件，邀请美国交换生Henry参与你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”为主题的创意作品展。写作要点已经给出，内容包括：目的：尊重知识、崇尚科学；展评时间，地点、内容；报名方式及截止日期。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，根据列出的要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本文语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下： I'm delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.运用了定语从句和并列句； I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition.运用了宾语从句；If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.运用了条件状语从句。
8．【答案】Dear Andrew, How is everything going Knowing that your are really into Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join the Chinese Winter Camp to be held in our school. The camp, scheduled from Jan 25 to Feb 10, is intended to promote traditional Chinese culture. Foreigners will learn everyday Chinese, attend various parties and lectures about Chinese history and traditional culture. In addition, foreigners will be taken to visit the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good opportunity to be exposed to Chinese-speaking environment. I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it. If you’re interested, please sign up for it before Jan 10 at our school website: Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校寒假期间为外国学生举办的汉语冬令营活动，内容如下:活动目的；活动时间；活动内容；报名时间和方式等。写好此文，需注意三点：1.是电子邮件格式要准确，注意写好开头和结尾。2.是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是汉语冬令营活动。3.要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： foreigners will be taken to visit the local museums and tourist attractions, which offers a good opportunity to be exposed to Chinese-speaking environment.运用了定语从句； I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it.运用了宾语从句； If you’re interested, please sign up for it before Jan 10 at our school website: 运用了条件状语从句。
9．【答案】Dear Mr Green, I am very happy to hear that you will give a lecture on Western culture. Knowing that you're asking for advice on my favorite topics related to it, I would like to share what I am interested in most. As we all know, Western culture is quite different, especially the history of religion. Therefore, I wonder if you could tell us something about it to enrich our knowledge. What's more, how to follow Western table manners is also a good topic because some of us are going to study abroad after graduation. It is the proper behavior at meals that can help us get along well with foreigners. I am looking forward to your excellent lecture and I am willing to help if you want more information.Yours,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本篇是一篇书信写作，要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师Mr Green写一封回信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写作时适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全内容包括：1、推荐你最喜欢的两个话题；比如想了解the history of religion和 Western table manners 2、简要说明推荐理由； 3、表达对讲座的期待。语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you're asking for advice on my favorite topics related to it, I would like to share what I am interested in most.运用了现在分词作状语以及宾语从句；I wonder if you could tell us something about it to enrich our knowledge.运用了宾语从句；how to follow Western table manners is also a good topic because some of us are going to study abroad after graduation. 运用了原因状语从句；It is the proper behavior at meals that can help us get along well with foreigners.运用了强调句型。
10．【答案】Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友Peter写一封信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容包括：1). 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等；2). 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）；3). 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）。考生需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体。故需要准确表达. ，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. 运用了宾语从句；If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, 运用了条件状语从句；The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences.运用了定语从句。
11．【答案】Dear classmates,It is my honor to be here and share with you my idea on this topic. President Xi delivered a speech with a topic “Never forget why we started, and we can accomplish our mission.” While reading it, I keep thinking about my original aspiration—to learn all the necessary knowledge and skills to study in my dream university. With knowledge and skills acquired in such a university, I will play a more active and visible role in contributing to my country, making it better. I know there's still a long way to go before realizing my aspiration. But I will follow my teachers' Instructions, and never give up when confronted with discouraging setbacks and obstacles. I hope we can remain true to our original aspirations to get what we want in the end.
Thank you!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求假设你是李华，你班开展主题为“不忘初心，方得始终”的演讲比赛。请你就以下要点，结合自身的经历写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的理解。注意演讲稿的格式和用语。要点：1.你的“初心”；2.选择此“初心”的原因或意义；3.如何实现。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：While reading it, I keep thinking about my original aspiration—to learn all the necessary knowledge and skills to study in my dream university.运用了分词作状语； I hope we can remain true to our original aspirations to get what we want in the end.运用了宾语从句。
12．【答案】Last weekend, we went to the local orphanage to do some voluntary work. On the way, we bought books and toys with the money donated by our classmates. Upon our arrival, we handed out all the gifts to the children, then we patiently taught them to sing songs. Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.
When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. Seeing the children's bright smiles, all of us considered the visit to be well worthwhile. We have made an effort to bring sunshine to the children's lives, and were really happy to be able to help them.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文报道。上周末，你和同学们去当地一家孤儿院开展志愿者活动。请根据下列要点写一篇英语报道。要点：时间、地点、人物及活动（赠送书籍、玩具等)；孤儿院孩子们的反应；简短评论。根据所给提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Before leaving, we received pictures drawn by them as souvenirs of the visit.考查介词与动名词一起构成状语；When we were about to leave, the children waved their hands and thanked us for our kindness. 运用了时间状语从句。
13．【答案】Dear Sir or Madam， Thank you for reading my letter．As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming，I'd like very much to be a volunteer． All our citizens are looking forward to this special event．First of all，I promise I will，with great passion，try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely．Besides，I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture，which enables me to spread our splendid culture．What's more，I'm good at English and Chinese，which will play an important role in communication during the forum． To sum up，I believe I can be a qualified volunteer．I will try my best if I'm accepted．Yours，Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给组委会写一封应聘信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容：第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。要注意应聘信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.热情、有礼；2. 熟悉中国传统文化；3. 英语口语流利。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本文提出的理由充分，语气中肯礼貌。段落层次清晰，行文连贯，要点齐全，言简意赅，目的明确，较具有说服力。还使用一些连词，让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句，使文章更加生动而流畅，这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下：I promise I will，with great passion，try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely．运用不定式作目的状语；I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture，which enables me to spread our splendid culture．和I'm good at English and Chinese，which will play an important role in communication during the forum．运用了非限制性定语从句；I will try my best if I'm accepted．运用了条件状语从句。
14．【答案】Good afternoon, my dear friends, My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the president of the English Club. Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students. In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president. Thank you.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇演讲稿，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇竞选演讲稿，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1). 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；2). 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；3). 表达当选的愿望。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. 运用了原因状语从句；If I am lucky enough to be the president, I will try my best to serve my fellow students.运用了条件状语从句；I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good president.运用了宾语从句和祈使句。
15．【答案】Dear Professor Black, I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students' Union of Xinhua Middle School.Our school will have a culture festival and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China,which will begin at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on Nov.20th,2017 in the lecture hall. As an expert in international culture,you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences,so we hope you could help us clear some cultural confusion.Could you please contact us at englishtec@ if you could come to our culture festival We are looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件，要求考生以李华的身份，邀请外籍教授Black先生做关于中美文化差异的讲座。要求考生认真阅读提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Our school will have a culture festival and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China,which will begin at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on Nov.20th,2017 in the lecture hall.运用了定语从句；you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences,so we hope you could help us clear some cultural confusion.运用了并列句和宾语从句；Could you please contact us at englishtec@ if you could come to our culture festival 运用了条件状语从句。
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