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中考写作话题——关于购物复习
复习与“购物”话题相关的词汇、短语和重点句型。
掌握分析利弊型的议论文结构,并运用到话题写作中。
学会辩证看待生活中的事物,培养独立思考的品质。
What are Mary and Jenny talking about
Online
Shopping
What do we need to buy things
我们用什么买东西
RMB
dollars
credit cards
Wechat pay
Alipay
phone/computer
Introduction
What can we buy on the Internet
我们可以在网上买什么?
all kinds of , , , ...
clothes
food
services
products
We can buy almost everything on the Internet
with different styles/colors/sizes.
Watch the video carefully
Fill in the blanks with verbs(phrases).
How do we shop online
First, ___________ something.
Then, ___________ it.
At last, you will ___________ it a few days later by post.
First, ___________ something.
Then, ___________ it.
At last, you will ___________ it a few days later by post.
choose
pay for
receive
Introduction
How do we shop online
我们怎样在网上买东西?
First,
Then,
At last,
表示步骤的连接词
What we needn't do
外出
排队
准备现金
打包商品
go out
wait in line
prepare some cash
pack the goods
Brainstorming
Online
shopping
c
方便的
s
安全的
p
流行的
e
容易的
ch
便宜的
d
不同的
h
难的
d
危险的
f
快的
Why
onvenient
afe
opular
asy
eap
ast
angerous
ard
ifferent
What do you think of online shopping
你认为网上买东西怎样?
Advantages
Fill in the blanks with verbs.
What are the advantages 优点
It's convenient because you can at anytime.
save
shop
It takes us less time to shop so it will our time.
We can the prices then money.
compare
save
Online shopping has sBut many people like going out and shopping with friends. They don’t like shopping on the Internet because they can’t see the product or try the clothes on. Also paying over the Internet isn’t always safe.
everal advantages. First, you can shop at any time. The shops are always open. Second, shopping usually takes a lot of time. But to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and a mouse! You can also compare the prices of the same product and spend a
Online shopping also has disadvantages. On the one hand, they can't the products and the quality of them. If someone wants to buy clothes, they can't the clothes . On the other hand, it's not safe to over the Internet. You may be easily. Third, many people will the chance to get along well with their friends.
Disadvantages
What are the disadvantages 缺点
topic sentence 主旨句
see
check
try
on
pay
cheated
miss
Fill in the blanks with verbs or phrases.
Please be 小心
when you shop online.
建起 the correct attitude towards consumption(消费).
想 twice before you buy
something.
Suggestion
参考句型:All in all, I think...We should...I hope...
careful
Think
Set up
How can we be a wise shopper 如何明智网购?
分析利弊型作文结构
Advantages and disadvantages
议论文
一般现在时
论点、论据
论点、论据
We are going back to school!
Writing task
前段时间受到新冠病毒的影响,学生在家“停课不停学”开展了一段时间的线上学习。现在,各年级的学生要分批返校,学生需要准备充足的口罩。你如何看待在网上购买口罩这一行为?
请你以“My view on buying masks on the Internet”为题,分析它的利弊。
内容包括:
1.不同的人对于网上买口罩有不同的看法
2.分析网上购买口罩的优点(至少两点)
3.分析网上购买口罩的缺点(至少两点)
4.你的看法或建议
作文要求:
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
Before writing——审题
前段时间受到新冠病毒的影响,学生在家“停课不停学”开展了一段时间的线上学习。现在,各年级的学生要分批返校,学生需要准备充足的口罩。你如何看待在网上购买口罩这一行为?
请你以“My view on buying masks on the Internet”为题,分析它的利弊。
内容包括:
1.不同的人对于网上买口罩有不同的看法
2.分析网上购买口罩的优点(至少两点)
3.分析网上购买口罩的缺点(至少两点)
4.你的看法或建议
Tips:
1.积累论点的论据
2.运用主旨句、连接词
要点:1. 买口罩的需求;不同看法
2. 论证优点 3. 论证缺点
4.看法和建议
文体:议论文
时态:一般现在时
Advantages
convenient
not dangerous
don't go out
Disadvantages
can't see real masks first
can't check the quality
not safe to pay over the Internet
Before writing——收集论据
My view on buying masks on the Internet.
Because of the COVID-19, we have to prepare some masks before going back to school. It is a new way to ... Different people have different ideas.
Buying masks on the Internet has some advantages. First,...
Second,...
Buying masks on the Internet also has some disadvantages. On the one hand,... On the other hand,...
All in all, I think...I hope...
论证优点
论证缺点
提出建议
简述情况
While writing——谋篇布局
My view on buying masks on the Internet
Because of the COVID-19, we have to prepare some masks before going back to school. It is a new way to buy masks online. Different people have different ideas.
Buying masks on the Internet has some advantages. First, it is safe and convenient for us to buy masks online because we don't need to go out and queue with other shoppers. Second, the shops are open for 24 hours a day, we can buy masks at anytime.
Buying masks on the Internet also has some disadvantages. On the one hand,we can't check the quality of the masks. On the other hand, we may be cheated by some sellers.
All in all, I think buying masks online is a good way. But we should check the information about the masks carefully. I hope you can be a wise shopper.
参考范文
Every coin has two sides
We should be a good thinker.
Summary
Thank you for listening!