广西桂林市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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广西桂林市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·广西桂林·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日 为此, 他发邮件向你打听相关事宜 请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝愿；
2. 推荐餐馆(地址 价格 菜肴等)；
3. 建议预订
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数
Dear Steven,
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Yours
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·广西桂林·统考二模）假定你是红星中学的学生会主席：李华。学校计划在下周五上午9点在报告厅举行关于英国餐桌礼仪的讲座。外教Richard即将结束探亲并于下周一返回中国。请你用英文写一封邮件，邀请他做主讲人，并告知相关情况。内容包括：
（1）提出邀请；
（2）告知讲座的内容、时间及地点；
（3）表达关心与期待。
注意：（1）词数100左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Richard,
I am Li Hua, president of Student Union of Hongxing Middle School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2022·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，下周将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
1. 表达问候；
2. 写信目的；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4．（2022·广西·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry对中国四大名著非常感兴趣，发邮件请你推荐一部进行阅读。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.乐于推荐；
2.推荐一部作品并说明理由：
3.阅读的注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2022·广西桂林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter来信说他的父亲经常腰痛，听说中医疗效不错，特来信向你咨询。请你回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．推荐针灸；
2．简要介绍针灸及其优点；
3．祝愿早日康复。
注意：
1．词数100字左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：针灸acupuncture
Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain.
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
6．（2022·广西桂林·统考一模）假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。内容包括：
1.倡议的原因和目的；
2.具体做法及号召。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章开头和结尾已经写好。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
7．（2021·广西桂林·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“怎样建立好的合作伙伴关系”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1.合作技巧；
2.合作意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
Build a Good Partnership
Hello everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.
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8．（2020·广西桂林·统考三模）假定你是李华。你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触。
注意：1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．（2020·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，最近他发电子邮件说想来你所在的城市体验一下过中秋节。请你用英语给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍你们是怎么过中秋节的；
3. 告知你的打算并征求他的意见。
参考词汇：中秋节Mid-Autumn Festival/Day
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
10．（2020·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，上周你在某国外网站购买了二支录音笔（recording pen），收货后你发现它有很多质量问题。请根据下列提示给客服经理Miss Green发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1.来信目的；
2.产品（录音笔）问题：如音质不清晰、不好操作等；
3.你期待的解决办法：如退款、更换等。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Green,
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I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Steven,
I'm glad to know your birthday is coming and I want to give you my sincere wishes and express “Happy birthday to you”.
In order to have a great birthday, it's necessary for you to find a suitable restaurant. Now, let me share one with you. There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants. More importantly, the dishes of it such as fish, beef and seasonal vegetables are very good. Some of my friends think they are delicious after eating there. Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日 为此，他发邮件向你打听相关事宜 请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：1. 表达祝愿；2. 推荐餐馆(地址 价格 菜肴等)；3. 建议预订
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：give you my sincere wishes（给你我真诚的祝福）；In order to have a great birthday（为了有一个伟大的生日）；a good restaurant near the city library（在市图书馆附近有一家很好的餐馆）；seasonal vegetables（时令蔬菜）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。I'm glad to know your birthday is coming句中使用宾语从句；There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance.句中使用原因状语从句。
2．Dear Richard,
I am Li Hua, president of Student Union of Hongxing Middle School. I am writing to invite you to give a lecture on British table manners for the students in our school.
The lecture will be held at the school lecture hall at 9 a. m. next Friday,which will last about one hour. As the lecturer, you can introduce something about British table manners such as the arrival time, the seating arrangments and the order of dishes. Knowing you are enjoying your stay with your family now,please give them my regards. If you have any trouble or anything you don’t understand, or advice about the lecture, please don’t hesitate to write back to me in time.
I wish you a happy journey back and look forward to your excellent talk.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件邀请外教Richard做英国餐桌礼仪讲座的主讲人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
作演讲：give a lecture→give a speech
举办：hold→take place
介绍：introduce→present
喜欢：enjoy→be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing you are enjoying your stay with your family now, please give them my regards.
拓展句：Beacause I know you are enjoying your stay with your family now, please give them my regards.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture will be held at the school lecture hall at 9 a. m. next Friday, which will last about one hour. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any trouble or anything you don’t understand, or advice about the lecture, please don’t hesitate to write back to me in time.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和祈使句）
3．Dear Jack,
It’s a long time since we last emailed each other. Hope everything goes well with you. I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. I’m writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.
As a developed country, England has much to offer tourists from around the world. I am particularly interested in mountain climbing. I know there are many mountains in your country, but I don’t know which one is worth visiting. I wish you could recommend one to me.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Jack写一封信，请他帮忙推荐一处英国景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice →suggestion
选择：choice →selection
全世界：around the world →across the world
我会很感激的：I’d appreciate it →I’d be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.
拓展句：I am particularly interested in mountain climbing, which can make me relaxed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon. (运用了if 引导的条件状语从句)
4．Dear Terry,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. So, I’m writing to recommend Dream of the Red Chamber to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. With the thriving and declining of four noble families as the background, it tells the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lindaiyu. Vividly depicting the life at that time, the novel reveals the darkness and corruption of the old society as well as the desire for freedom and is of high artistic value.
The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial to your Chinese. Besides, reading this novel will definitely help to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
As you read, you should pay attention to many characters and complex relationships in Dream of Red Chamber. I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading this novel and can share your feelings and opinions with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Terry回复一封电子邮件，向他推荐一本中国四大名著。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述：depict→describe
揭露：reveal→disclose
包含：contain→involve
真诚地：sincerely→truly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China.
拓展句：Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China, which is written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain. Now I'd like to recommend the method of acupuncture to you.
Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a long history of more than two thousand years. This technique has been widely recognized as an effective treatment for a variety of diseases, such as neck pain, back pain and waist pain. What's more, it's a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body. I think your father's symptom will be gone after several treatments.
Hope your father will recover soon. And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国的朋友Peter回复一封电子邮件简要介绍一下针灸。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend → advise
组成部分：component → part
此外：what’s more → besides
治疗：treatment → therapy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What's more, it's a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body.
拓展句：What's more, it's a painless procedure though thin needles was inserted into the body.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a long history of more than two thousand years.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.(运用了状语从句的省略)
6．Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school. There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class. Now, I am calling for everyone’s attention to this matter.
What should be stressed is that health comes first in the long journey to success. As far as I am concerned, we should take the following steps to prepare for Gaokao. First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class. In addition, we’d better make the most of the free time to finish the homework. Last but not least, we should try to form a good habit of going to bed early.
I firmly believe that we will make great progress by balancing our study and rest. So let’s take action now!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
集中：focus on→concentrate on
强调：stress→emphasize
普遍的：common→universal
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.
拓展句：It is a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
7．参考范文
Build a Good Partnership
Hello everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other. We know that two heads are better than one. Teamwork has great power. It can certainly save us time, energy or even trouble.
To be a great partner, you should try to be a good listener. Be open-minded to different opinions and show your respect. A good partnership is based on trust. Try to find your partner's advantages and learn to accept some of his or her weaknesses. Of course, when your partner makes mistakes, point them out in a polite way.
Cooperation can change the world in many ways. It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.
【分析】本篇说面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生以“怎样建立好的合作伙伴关系”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.合作技巧；
2.合作意义。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be of great importance；learn from；try to do sth.；be based on；makes mistakes；point out；in a polite way；not only…but…；communicate with
第三步：连词成句
1.As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.
2.It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other.
3.We know that two heads are better than one.
4.Teamwork has great power.
5.It can certainly save us time. energy or even trouble.
6.To be a great partner, you should try to be a good listener.
7.Be open-minded to different opinions and show your respect.
8.A good partnership is based on trust.
9.Try to find your partner's advantages and learn to accept some of his or her weaknesses.
10.Of course, when your partner makes mistakes, point them out in a polite way.
11.Cooperation can change the world in many ways.
12.It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）
[高分句型2]
It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.（how引导宾语从句）
8．Dear Susan,
I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather. Lots of people are in hospital because of it. Here are some tips I want to offer you.
First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather. Secondly, exercise is a good way to keep you far away from cold. Moreover, eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition. Last but not least, you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold.
I hope my suggestion will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】根据提示信息，文章要求假定你是李华,你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。写作时：1.首先注意时态一般现在时，其次人称使用第二人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段提醒他关注天气变化，及时加衣物；第二段告诉他适当运动，注意饮食；第三段提醒他避免与感冒患者接触。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用可几个高分句型。1. I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather 此句使用了书信表达写信目的的经典句式：I’m writing to….。 2. First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather 此句是and连接的两个并列句。 3. you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold 此句是个定语从句，先行词为patients，关系词是who。
9．Dear David,
I’m delighted to hear that you’re coming to our city to experience the Mid-Autumn Festivals this year. Now, I’d like to share with you some traditional customs of the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important festivals in China. One that day, all of the family members get together by having a big dinner to celebrate it. After dinner people often eat moon cakes. In the evening, weather permitting, many people like to go out to appreciate the beautiful moonlight.
To make your experience more meaningful, I’m going to show you around some places of interest nearby. Besides, I plan to invite you to have local dishes with my family and teach you how to make them. Is it OK with you
Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类文。
【详解】分析题目可知，文章要求写一封介绍信，介绍信的内容需包括对朋友到来的欢迎，介绍自己过中秋节的方式，以及对他到来时的计划和打算。在介绍过节方式时是在陈述一般事实，因此可使用一般现在时，在表述自己的打算和计划时可使用一般将来时。本篇文章的要求较为简单明确，因此可发挥的空间较多，第3个要点：自己的打算则需要进行随意发挥，如带David去城市周围逛逛、一起制作传统食物等等。
文章可采用三段式的结构。在第一段中，要点1关于表示对David的欢迎可用信件固定句式简单带过即可。要点1和要点2中介绍中秋节的过节方式时可具体描写，如和家人一起吃饭、吃月饼、赏月等活动，这两个要点可以在一段中呈现。第二段则介绍自己的打算。第三段则可以使用信件中常用表达：希望能早日收到回信。
【点睛】整篇文章要点明确，分段合理，字数适当，是一篇比较标准的应试作文。文章开头使用了“I’m delighted to hear that…”（很高兴听到……）这常用信件开头表达，可对此句型进行积累。文章还使用了one of the most important festivals（最重要的节日之一），get together（团聚在一起），appreciate the beautiful moonlight（赏月），等高频词汇。增加了文章结构的丰富性，使得文章逻辑更清晰。
10．Dear Miss Green,
I'm writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website last week. There seems to be something wrong with it. First, the voice isn't so clear as you claimed. Second, it's not easy to operate, which caused me much trouble .Third, it often breaks down, while a recording pen at such a price shouldn't have had so many problems.
I'm not satisfied with all these above. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I'll send it back to you as soon as you return the money. If it can't he helped. I wish you could have it repaired or changed
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的投诉信，要求考生给客服经理Miss Green发一封电子邮件，说明购买的二支录音笔的很多质量问题，并提出解决办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宣称：declare →claim
出故障：go wrong →break down
感激：thank→ appreciate
退还：refund →return
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm not satisfied with all these above.
拓展句：I'm not satisfied with all these things that I mentioned above.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website last week. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, it's not easy to operate, which caused me much trouble . (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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一、建议信
1．（2020·广西桂林·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日 为此, 他发邮件向你打听相关事宜 请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝愿；
2. 推荐餐馆(地址 价格 菜肴等)；
3. 建议预订
注意:1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数
Dear Steven,
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Yours
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·广西桂林·统考二模）假定你是红星中学的学生会主席：李华。学校计划在下周五上午9点在报告厅举行关于英国餐桌礼仪的讲座。外教Richard即将结束探亲并于下周一返回中国。请你用英文写一封邮件，邀请他做主讲人，并告知相关情况。内容包括：
（1）提出邀请；
（2）告知讲座的内容、时间及地点；
（3）表达关心与期待。
注意：（1）词数100左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Richard,
I am Li Hua, president of Student Union of Hongxing Middle School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2022·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，下周将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
1. 表达问候；
2. 写信目的；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4．（2022·广西·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry对中国四大名著非常感兴趣，发邮件请你推荐一部进行阅读。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.乐于推荐；
2.推荐一部作品并说明理由：
3.阅读的注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2022·广西桂林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter来信说他的父亲经常腰痛，听说中医疗效不错，特来信向你咨询。请你回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．推荐针灸；
2．简要介绍针灸及其优点；
3．祝愿早日康复。
注意：
1．词数100字左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：针灸acupuncture
Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain.
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
6．（2022·广西桂林·统考一模）假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。内容包括：
1.倡议的原因和目的；
2.具体做法及号召。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文章开头和结尾已经写好。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school.
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Li Hua
五、其他应用文
7．（2021·广西桂林·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“怎样建立好的合作伙伴关系”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1.合作技巧；
2.合作意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
Build a Good Partnership
Hello everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.
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8．（2020·广西桂林·统考三模）假定你是李华。你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触。
注意：1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．（2020·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David对中国传统文化非常感兴趣，最近他发电子邮件说想来你所在的城市体验一下过中秋节。请你用英语给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍你们是怎么过中秋节的；
3. 告知你的打算并征求他的意见。
参考词汇：中秋节Mid-Autumn Festival/Day
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
10．（2020·广西桂林·统考一模）假定你是李华，上周你在某国外网站购买了二支录音笔（recording pen），收货后你发现它有很多质量问题。请根据下列提示给客服经理Miss Green发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1.来信目的；
2.产品（录音笔）问题：如音质不清晰、不好操作等；
3.你期待的解决办法：如退款、更换等。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Green,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案：
1．Dear Steven,
I'm glad to know your birthday is coming and I want to give you my sincere wishes and express “Happy birthday to you”.
In order to have a great birthday, it's necessary for you to find a suitable restaurant. Now, let me share one with you. There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants. More importantly, the dishes of it such as fish, beef and seasonal vegetables are very good. Some of my friends think they are delicious after eating there. Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Steven 打算在你市找一家中国餐馆庆祝生日 为此，他发邮件向你打听相关事宜 请你用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：1. 表达祝愿；2. 推荐餐馆(地址 价格 菜肴等)；3. 建议预订
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：give you my sincere wishes（给你我真诚的祝福）；In order to have a great birthday（为了有一个伟大的生日）；a good restaurant near the city library（在市图书馆附近有一家很好的餐馆）；seasonal vegetables（时令蔬菜）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。I'm glad to know your birthday is coming句中使用宾语从句；There is a good restaurant near the city library, the price of which is cheaper compared with many other Chinese restaurants.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Because there are many guests going to the restaurant, I suggest you book it in advance.句中使用原因状语从句。
2．Dear Richard,
I am Li Hua, president of Student Union of Hongxing Middle School. I am writing to invite you to give a lecture on British table manners for the students in our school.
The lecture will be held at the school lecture hall at 9 a. m. next Friday,which will last about one hour. As the lecturer, you can introduce something about British table manners such as the arrival time, the seating arrangments and the order of dishes. Knowing you are enjoying your stay with your family now,please give them my regards. If you have any trouble or anything you don’t understand, or advice about the lecture, please don’t hesitate to write back to me in time.
I wish you a happy journey back and look forward to your excellent talk.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件邀请外教Richard做英国餐桌礼仪讲座的主讲人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
作演讲：give a lecture→give a speech
举办：hold→take place
介绍：introduce→present
喜欢：enjoy→be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing you are enjoying your stay with your family now, please give them my regards.
拓展句：Beacause I know you are enjoying your stay with your family now, please give them my regards.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture will be held at the school lecture hall at 9 a. m. next Friday, which will last about one hour. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any trouble or anything you don’t understand, or advice about the lecture, please don’t hesitate to write back to me in time.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和祈使句）
3．Dear Jack,
It’s a long time since we last emailed each other. Hope everything goes well with you. I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. I’m writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.
As a developed country, England has much to offer tourists from around the world. I am particularly interested in mountain climbing. I know there are many mountains in your country, but I don’t know which one is worth visiting. I wish you could recommend one to me.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Jack写一封信，请他帮忙推荐一处英国景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice →suggestion
选择：choice →selection
全世界：around the world →across the world
我会很感激的：I’d appreciate it →I’d be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.
拓展句：I am particularly interested in mountain climbing, which can make me relaxed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon. (运用了if 引导的条件状语从句)
4．Dear Terry,
I’m so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. So, I’m writing to recommend Dream of the Red Chamber to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. With the thriving and declining of four noble families as the background, it tells the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lindaiyu. Vividly depicting the life at that time, the novel reveals the darkness and corruption of the old society as well as the desire for freedom and is of high artistic value.
The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial to your Chinese. Besides, reading this novel will definitely help to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
As you read, you should pay attention to many characters and complex relationships in Dream of Red Chamber. I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading this novel and can share your feelings and opinions with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Terry回复一封电子邮件，向他推荐一本中国四大名著。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述：depict→describe
揭露：reveal→disclose
包含：contain→involve
真诚地：sincerely→truly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China.
拓展句：Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China, which is written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Peter,
I'm so sorry to hear that your father has been suffering from waist pain. Now I'd like to recommend the method of acupuncture to you.
Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a long history of more than two thousand years. This technique has been widely recognized as an effective treatment for a variety of diseases, such as neck pain, back pain and waist pain. What's more, it's a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body. I think your father's symptom will be gone after several treatments.
Hope your father will recover soon. And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国的朋友Peter回复一封电子邮件简要介绍一下针灸。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend → advise
组成部分：component → part
此外：what’s more → besides
治疗：treatment → therapy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What's more, it's a painless procedure with thin needles inserted into the body.
拓展句：What's more, it's a painless procedure though thin needles was inserted into the body.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Acupuncture is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which has a long history of more than two thousand years.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 And don't hesitate to contact me if necessary.(运用了状语从句的省略)
6．Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school. There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class. Now, I am calling for everyone’s attention to this matter.
What should be stressed is that health comes first in the long journey to success. As far as I am concerned, we should take the following steps to prepare for Gaokao. First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class. In addition, we’d better make the most of the free time to finish the homework. Last but not least, we should try to form a good habit of going to bed early.
I firmly believe that we will make great progress by balancing our study and rest. So let’s take action now!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
集中：focus on→concentrate on
强调：stress→emphasize
普遍的：common→universal
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.
拓展句：It is a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
7．参考范文
Build a Good Partnership
Hello everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other. We know that two heads are better than one. Teamwork has great power. It can certainly save us time, energy or even trouble.
To be a great partner, you should try to be a good listener. Be open-minded to different opinions and show your respect. A good partnership is based on trust. Try to find your partner's advantages and learn to accept some of his or her weaknesses. Of course, when your partner makes mistakes, point them out in a polite way.
Cooperation can change the world in many ways. It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.
【分析】本篇说面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生以“怎样建立好的合作伙伴关系”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.合作技巧；
2.合作意义。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be of great importance；learn from；try to do sth.；be based on；makes mistakes；point out；in a polite way；not only…but…；communicate with
第三步：连词成句
1.As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.
2.It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other.
3.We know that two heads are better than one.
4.Teamwork has great power.
5.It can certainly save us time. energy or even trouble.
6.To be a great partner, you should try to be a good listener.
7.Be open-minded to different opinions and show your respect.
8.A good partnership is based on trust.
9.Try to find your partner's advantages and learn to accept some of his or her weaknesses.
10.Of course, when your partner makes mistakes, point them out in a polite way.
11.Cooperation can change the world in many ways.
12.It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It's a good way for us to improve our understanding and learn from each other.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）
[高分句型2]
It is not only about oneself, but about how people communicate with one another.（how引导宾语从句）
8．Dear Susan,
I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather. Lots of people are in hospital because of it. Here are some tips I want to offer you.
First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather. Secondly, exercise is a good way to keep you far away from cold. Moreover, eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition. Last but not least, you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold.
I hope my suggestion will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】根据提示信息，文章要求假定你是李华,你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒。你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒。写作时：1.首先注意时态一般现在时，其次人称使用第二人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为三大段;第一段提醒他关注天气变化，及时加衣物；第二段告诉他适当运动，注意饮食；第三段提醒他避免与感冒患者接触。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用可几个高分句型。1. I’m writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather 此句使用了书信表达写信目的的经典句式：I’m writing to….。 2. First of all, you’d better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather 此句是and连接的两个并列句。 3. you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold 此句是个定语从句，先行词为patients，关系词是who。
9．Dear David,
I’m delighted to hear that you’re coming to our city to experience the Mid-Autumn Festivals this year. Now, I’d like to share with you some traditional customs of the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important festivals in China. One that day, all of the family members get together by having a big dinner to celebrate it. After dinner people often eat moon cakes. In the evening, weather permitting, many people like to go out to appreciate the beautiful moonlight.
To make your experience more meaningful, I’m going to show you around some places of interest nearby. Besides, I plan to invite you to have local dishes with my family and teach you how to make them. Is it OK with you
Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类文。
【详解】分析题目可知，文章要求写一封介绍信，介绍信的内容需包括对朋友到来的欢迎，介绍自己过中秋节的方式，以及对他到来时的计划和打算。在介绍过节方式时是在陈述一般事实，因此可使用一般现在时，在表述自己的打算和计划时可使用一般将来时。本篇文章的要求较为简单明确，因此可发挥的空间较多，第3个要点：自己的打算则需要进行随意发挥，如带David去城市周围逛逛、一起制作传统食物等等。
文章可采用三段式的结构。在第一段中，要点1关于表示对David的欢迎可用信件固定句式简单带过即可。要点1和要点2中介绍中秋节的过节方式时可具体描写，如和家人一起吃饭、吃月饼、赏月等活动，这两个要点可以在一段中呈现。第二段则介绍自己的打算。第三段则可以使用信件中常用表达：希望能早日收到回信。
【点睛】整篇文章要点明确，分段合理，字数适当，是一篇比较标准的应试作文。文章开头使用了“I’m delighted to hear that…”（很高兴听到……）这常用信件开头表达，可对此句型进行积累。文章还使用了one of the most important festivals（最重要的节日之一），get together（团聚在一起），appreciate the beautiful moonlight（赏月），等高频词汇。增加了文章结构的丰富性，使得文章逻辑更清晰。
10．Dear Miss Green,
I'm writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website last week. There seems to be something wrong with it. First, the voice isn't so clear as you claimed. Second, it's not easy to operate, which caused me much trouble .Third, it often breaks down, while a recording pen at such a price shouldn't have had so many problems.
I'm not satisfied with all these above. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I'll send it back to you as soon as you return the money. If it can't he helped. I wish you could have it repaired or changed
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的投诉信，要求考生给客服经理Miss Green发一封电子邮件，说明购买的二支录音笔的很多质量问题，并提出解决办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宣称：declare →claim
出故障：go wrong →break down
感激：thank→ appreciate
退还：refund →return
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm not satisfied with all these above.
拓展句：I'm not satisfied with all these things that I mentioned above.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website last week. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, it's not easy to operate, which caused me much trouble . (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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