广西柳州市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·广西柳州·柳州市第二中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,为纪念杂交水稻(hybrid rice)之父袁隆平院士(academician),你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议,你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负责人Mary写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.活动目的和意义。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2022·广西柳州·统考模拟预测)假如你是李华,请给你的外国朋友 Tom 写一封信,给他提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。 要点如下:1. 培养兴趣 2. 多阅读 3. 看中文电影
注意:1. 词数100词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,并不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2021·广西柳州·柳州市第二中学校考一模)假定你是李华,你从网上得知学校附近一家英文书店现正在招聘一名周末兼职服务员,请你根据以下要点给留学生好友Tom发送一封邮件:
1.获知消息,告知Tom;
2.建议Tom接受这项工作;
3.Tom拥有的优势。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
4.(2022·广西柳州·鹿寨县鹿寨中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,正在国外留学。下周你所在的社区将举行以中国功夫(Chinese Kung Fu)为主题的社区活动,目前正在招募志愿者。内容包括:
(1)提出申请;
(2)介绍自己的优势;
(3)期待加入。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2020·广西·统考二模)假如你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读,你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件,介绍情况并申请批准。内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.活动意义;
3.请求批准。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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三、邀请信
6.(2022·广西柳州·统考二模)假定你是李华。你想邀请交换生Mike一起去市里新开的图书馆做两天的志愿者,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.服务时间;
2.服务内容;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、推荐信
7.(2022·广西柳州·校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary来信说,她对中国的民间文化很感兴趣并想亲身实地体验,希望你给她推荐一个地方。请你给她回信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.推荐地方并说明理由;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2021·广西柳州·统考一模)假定你是李华。你与外国朋友Sarah经常进行读书交流。你打算给她推荐一本中文书籍,并发封邮件作个介绍。内容包括:
1.书籍简介;
2.推荐理由;(至少两项)
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.书名和作者可用汉语拼音来表达。
Dear Sarah,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、告知信/通知
9.(2022·广西柳州·校考模拟预测)假定你是国际学校高三(1)班班长李华,你所在的城市即将举行一场免费的人工智能展(artificial intelligence exhibition),你决定组织你班学生参加此次展览。请你根据以下内容向你的同学发出一则通知:
1.活动的目的和内容
2.集合时间、地点,返回时间
3.其他注意事项
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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10.(2022·广西柳州·校考模拟预测)假设你是李华,你所在的城市准备筹办一场面向外国学生的线上汉字书写大赛,你的英国朋友Peter发来信件询问有关情况。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.比赛目的;
2.相关安排;
3.期待参与。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.(2022·广西柳州·统考三模)假定你是李华。你参加了学校举办的摄影比赛并获奖。你的外国朋友Jim想了解你参赛的情况。请给他回一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 比赛时间; 2. 你的参赛作品介绍; 3. 比赛结果及感受。
注意∶
1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Li Hua
12.(2021·广西·统考二模)假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生唱中文歌比赛。你的朋友John想参加比赛,请你写信告知他比赛的相关信息,内容包括:
1.比赛的时间和地点;
2.报名方式;
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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六、其他应用文
13.(2023·广西柳州·统考二模)假设你是李华, 你校的校报正在招募学生记者, 请你以校报主编的身份写一份英文启事, 内容包括:
1. 提出需求;
2. 招募条件;
3. 报名方式及截止时间。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已经给出, 不计人总词数。
School Newspaper Reporters Wanted
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School Newspaper Editorial Department
14.(2022·广西柳州·广西壮族自治区柳江中学校考模拟预测)假设你是李华,请你给美国笔友Mason写信,谈谈你对于奥林匹克新格言(motto)“Faster, Higher, Stronger — Together”中“Together”一词的理解。要点包括:
1.体现奥运精神;
2.团结应对挑战(如疫情等);
3.同享共创未来。
注意:1.词数要求:80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mason,
Happy the Year of the Tiger! I can't wait to express my heart-felt appreciation of the new Olympic motto to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2022·广西柳州·柳州高级中学校考模拟预测)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,为响应“创造一个绿水青山的环境”的号召,在植树节 (Tree planting Day) 来临之际,你校三月十九日将在郊区 (suburb) 举行植树活动,请你代表学校起草一份倡议书,号召所有同学积极参加。
要点:1. 植树活动的目的;
2. 时间、地点及提醒;
3. 植树节的意义。
注意:1. 词数不少于100字;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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16.(2021·广西柳州·柳州市第二中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tim对中国文化颇感兴趣。今天你给他发送一封E-mail向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛(Chinese Poetry Contest),在信中你希望Tim能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。内容包括:
1. 大赛的目的;
2. 大赛的形式;
3. 大赛的结果和收获;
4. 希望。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
How is everything going
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Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2021·广西柳州·统考三模)假定你是李华。国外某高中学生代表团将于4月6日到你们学校进行文化交流活动。请你 代表学校给访问团领队Mark写封英文信,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.接待活动安排;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
18.(2020·广西柳州·统考三模)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom即将作为交换生到你们学校学习一年。他向你询问你们学校开设有哪些课程或活动有助于他了解中国文化。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 对他即将到来表示欢迎;
2. 介绍有助于他了解中国文化的课程或活动;
3. 表达期待和祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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19.(2020·广西柳州·统考一模)假设你叫李华,你校的外籍教师Mr. Brown上周末踢足球时摔伤并住院了。请你代表全班同学,用英文给他写封邮件,要点包括:
1. 询问他的伤情,并打算去看望他;
2. 告诉他不要担心你们的学习;
3. 祝他早日康复。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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七、开放性作文
20.(2022·广西柳州·柳州高级中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华。由于现今疫情(epidemic)的形势仍需要时刻关注,你打算向学校英语社投稿宣传疫情防控,弘扬无私无畏的抗疫精神。宣传内容包括:
1. 疫情现状;
2. 各方为疫情防控做出的努力(如:个人、医护和志愿者、政府管理等);
3. 有信心战胜疫情。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案:
1.Dear Mary,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
The activity is expected to be held in the school auditorium from 3 p.m to 5 p.m this Friday with all the students in our school invited. The movie describes Yuan Longping’s dedication to Chinese Agriculture in a touching and vivid way. By providing a platform for participants to have a better understanding of the whole life of Yuan Long ping, the father of hybrid rice in China, this activity aims to arouse the science research spirits and patriotic feelings of us students. I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence.
Thanks for reading my letter. I hope my proposal will be taken into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,为纪念杂交水稻(hybrid rice)之父袁隆平院士(academician),你校英语俱乐部打算征集相关活动的建议,你建议观看纪录片《袁隆平》。请你给俱乐部负责人Mary写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
纪念:in memory of→in honor of
举行:hold→host
相信:hold a belief→believe
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
拓展句:Since our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that our English Club is collecting some suggestions on the activities in memory of academician Yuan Long ping, I’m writing to recommend watching the documentary Yuan Long ping. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hold a firm belief that the activity will be so educational, impressive and meaningful that our students will develop a strong sense of national pride and self-confidence. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
2.Dear Tom,
As for the good ways to learn Chinese well, my suggestions are as follows.
First and foremost, be interested in what you are learning. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. If you have an interest in something, it’s easier for you to pay attention to it for a long time. In addition, it’s also a good idea to read more Chinese books. This is because you can learn many new words while reading. Last but not least, you can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies as well, which will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.
I hope you can take my advice into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇上面表达属于应用文——建议信的写作。要求考生写一封信,给外国朋友 Tom提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文——建议信
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
人称:第二人称
结构:总分法。先总说自己有建议,再分说具体的建议。最后提出期望。
要求:1.学习汉语有很多方法,表达自己的建议。
2.分说具体建议
1)培养兴趣(develop an interest)
2)多阅读(reading more about Chinese)
3) 看中文电影(watch Chinese movies)
3.期待能考虑我的建议。(hope to take these suggestions into consideration)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
as follows, be interested in, develop an interest in, read more Chinese books, gain much knowledge, improve Chinese, watch Chinese movies, improve listening and speaking skills
第三步:连词成句
My suggestions are as follows.
It’s a good idea to read more Chinese books.
You can learn many new words while reading.
You can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies.
It will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First and foremost, in addition, last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了多个短语如:as for, as follows, first and foremost, in addition, last but not least等表达,句式变化多样,用到了it作为形式主语的句式,表语从句,非限制性定语从句,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
3.Dear Tom,
Learning from the Internet that an English bookstore near our school is looking for a part-time shop assistant who can work at weekends, I think you are a suitable person for the job.
First of all, taking the job, you’ll have a chance to read books freely and gain more knowledge, which will help you a lot in your study. Secondly, it is better for you to make more friends, with whom you can share your joy and sorrow. In addition, your fluent English and having a good command of English culture make it easy for you to communicate with customers.
Furthermore, there will make an interview on May 20. If it appeals to you, you may as well go and have a try. Should you need any help, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给留学生好友Tom发送一封邮件,建议他周末兼职服务员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找:search for→look for
合适的:appropriate→suitable
吸引:attract→appeal to
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Learning from the Internet that an English bookstore near our school is looking for a part-time shop assistant who can work at weekends, I think you are a suitable person for the job.
拓展句:Since I learned that an English bookstore near our school is looking for a part-time shop assistant who can work at weekends, I think you are a suitable person for the job.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning from the Internet that an English bookstore near our school is looking for a part-time shop assistant who can work at weekends, I think you are a suitable person for the job. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, your fluent English and having a good command of English culture make it easy for you to communicate with customers. (运用了it作形式宾语)
4.Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming community activity themed Chinese Kung Fu, I can’t wait to write to apply for the position.
Born into a Kung Fu family, I have learned a lot about it. Not only can I explain the theory to the people, but also tell the stories behind it. Besides, having great communicative competence and a good command of English has guaranteed a series of my success in volunteering. Last but not least, I have a caring and considerate personality, so I am willing to contribute myself to helping the people in need.
All in all, I’m fully confident that I have the relevant qualifications of serving as a volunteer. If I am considered qualified for being the volunteer, I promise to provide the most pleasant service. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,正在国外留学。下周你所在的社区将举行以中国功夫(Chinese Kung Fu)为主题的社区活动,目前正在招募志愿者。要求写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职位:position→post
提供:provide→offer
令人愉快的:pleasant→enjoyable
能胜任的:qualified→competent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, having great communicative competence and a good command of English has guaranteed a series of my success in volunteering.
拓展句:Besides, I have great communicative competence and a good command of English, which has guaranteed a series of my success in volunteering.
【点睛】[高分句型1] If I am considered qualified for being the volunteer, I promise to provide the most pleasant service. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only can I explain the theory to the people, but also tell the stories behind it. (运用了部分倒装)
5.Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.
The activity will last two hours, from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. next Saturday in the school library. It will begin with a speech about methods of efficient reading. Afterwards, some students will share the benefits from their reading. Finally, lots of newly published books will be recommended. I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.
I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信,假定你是学生会主席李华,为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读,你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件,介绍情况并申请批准。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点: 1.活动安排;2.活动意义;3.请求批准。
写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有:ask for your permission,hold a reading activity,aim at,appeal to more students to adore books,begin with a speech about,share the benefits from their reading,enhance the students’ interest in reading,approve my request,look forward to your reply。
可以使用的衔接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last,Above all。2.表并列补充关系:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,as well as,not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句:I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句,其中的that省略掉了;I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了过去分词短语作状语:I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.使用了一些固定词组,如:aim at,appeal to,look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
6.Dear Mike,
How’s everything going I’m writing to invite you to do voluntary work in the newly-opened library of our city from 8 am to 12 am next Saturday and Sunday.
We can help in many ways. For example, we can help with some daily library routines, including sorting out books, borrowing and lending books, doing some cleaning and so on. Besides, it is our duty to keep the library in order and create excellent reading atmosphere. When new books are brought in, we can also do some recommendation work.
The experience in the library is meaningful, which will certainly enrich your life in China. Would you like to join us Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Mike写一封邮件,邀请他一起去市里新开的图书馆做两天的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
邀请:ask→invite
工作:job→work
帮助:assist→help
责任:responsibility→duty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For example, we can help with some daily library routines, including sorting out books, borrowing and lending books, doing some cleaning and so on.
拓展句:For example, we can help with some daily library routines, which include sorting out books, borrowing and lending books, doing some cleaning and so on.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, it is our duty to keep the library in order and create excellent reading atmosphere. (运用了it作形式主语,非谓语动词不定式作真正主语)
[高分句型2]The experience in the library is meaningful, which will certainly enrich your life in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.Dear Mary,
Knowing that you are keen on Chinese folk culture and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend my hometown Beijing. The reasons are as follows.
With a history of over 3000 years, Beijing is not only the national political center, but also the cultural center. Here you can experience the imperial culture in ancient times and Hutong culture in modern times. As the capital city of China, it’s a world-famous tourist attraction with lots of sights to see, which makes it almost a must for foreigners to visit in China.
Look forward to meeting you in Beijing and I would like to be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Mary回信推荐一个地方,让她亲身实地体验中国的民间文化,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.推荐地方并说明理由;3.表示欢迎。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……喜爱:be keen on→be fond of/be taken with
想要做某事:want to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
旅游景点:tourist attraction→scenic spot
许多:lots of→a number of/a great many
2.句式拓展
使用倒装句
原句:With a history of over 3000 years, Beijing is not only the national political center, but also the cultural center.
拓展句:With a history of over 3000 years, not only is Beijing the national political center, but also it is the cultural center.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese folk culture and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend my hometown Beijing. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As the capital city of China, it’s a world-famous tourist attraction with lots of sights to see, which makes it almost a must for foreigners to visit in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8.Dear Sarah,
How’s everything going I’m extremely grateful for your kindness of sharing your views and thoughts with me after you read new books. Those experiences really enhance my English language skills.
Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I strongly recommend a novel titled Journey to the West, one of the four great classical novels of Chinese literature. Inspired by real historical events, the novel is a thrilling story about a Buddhist monk, the Monkey King and their trusted companions going through amazing adventures while traveling to the Western paradise. Not only is it a novel for entertainment, but it is a book full of philosophy and reflection about life and value. In addition, it mirrors the Chinese spirit such as self-discipline and overcoming difficulties.
Wish you have fun reading it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生发邮件给经常交流读书经验的朋友Sarah,推荐一本中文书,并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累感激:grateful→ appreciative
观点:view→ opinion
增强:enhance→ strengthen
推荐:recommend→ suggest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I strongly recommend a novel titled Journey to the West.
拓展句:I strongly recommend a novel whose title is Journey to the West.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are keen on Chinese culture, I strongly recommend a novel titled Journey to the West, one of the four great classical novels of Chinese literature. (运用that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Inspired by real historical events, the novel is a thrilling story about a Buddhist monk, the Monkey King and their trusted companions going through amazing adventures while traveling to the Western paradise. (运用while引导时间状语从句和状语从句的省略)
9.Notice
In order to learn more about modern science and technology, we are going to join in a free artificial intelligence exhibition which will be held in our city museum. A wide range of exhibits concerning Al will be displayed in this exhibition, such as VR facilities, robots and so on.
We are scheduled to gather at 3 p.m. at the school gate next Wednesday. Our school bus will take us there. We will spend three hours visiting the exhibition and then return at 6 p.m. Please arrive on time and keep quiet when visiting the museum. It would be a good idea if you bring your notebooks and cameras.
Everyone is welcome to participate actively.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知,告知本班同学们自己决定组织大家参加自己所在的城市即将举行的一场免费的人工智能展(artificial intelligence exhibition)。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:join in→participate in
展示:display→show
积极地:actively→positively
关于:concerning→about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to learn more about modern science and technology, we are going to join in a free artificial intelligence exhibition which will be held in our city museum.
拓展句:We are going to join in a free artificial intelligence exhibition which will be held in our city museum so that we can learn more about modern science and technology.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Please arrive on time and keep quiet when visiting the museum.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】It would be a good idea if you bring your notebooks and cameras.(运用了it作形式主语,if从句作真正的主语的结构)
10.Dear Peter,
Knowing that you’re interested in the Chinese Character Writing Competition held by our city online, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
In order to enhance cultural exchanges among international students and help know more about Chinese calligraphy, our city has decided to hold the competition which is scheduled to be held online from June 15 to July 15. Your work should be handed in before July 15 to 123456@. We will invite 5 Chinese experts as judges. The winners will be presented with a Bing Dwen Dwen. Any international student who is interested in the competition can participate in it.
Hoping you sign up for it and you'll surely benefit a lot from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Peter回信告知线上汉字书写大赛的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→take an interest in/be taken with/be keen on
举办: hold→host
参加:participate in→take part in
报名:sign up for → enter for
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In order to enhance cultural exchanges among international students and help know more about Chinese calligraphy, our city has decided to hold the competition which is scheduled to be held online from June 15 to July 15.
拓展句:Our city has decided to hold the online competition from June 15 to July 15,which aims to enhance cultural exchanges among international students and help know more about Chinese calligraphy
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re interested in the Chinese Character Writing Competition held by our city online, I’m writing to tell you something about it.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In order to enhance cultural exchanges among international students and help know more about Chinese calligraphy, our city has decided to hold the competition which is scheduled to be held online from June 15 to July 15. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
11.Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m more than happy to share with you my experience in our school photography competition.
The competition started on March 18th and lasted for one week. As a photography enthusiast, I also submitted my works Lovely Pandas, in which a panda family are playing happily on the grass. I want to show that animals can live in harmony with humans. The result came out last Friday. To my great excitement, I won the first prize! Through the competition, I have become more and more confident in my photography technique.
It’s really fun to record the beauty of our life with cameras. You can have a try if you are interested.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
想要做某事:want to do sth.=would like to do sth.
技巧:technique→skill
有趣的:fun→interesting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m more than happy to share with you my experience in our school photography competition.
拓展句:I’m more than happy to share with you my experience in our school photography competition, which is undoubtedly wonderful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As a photography enthusiast, I also submitted my works Lovely Pandas, in which a panda family are playing happily on the grass.(in which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
I want to show that animals can live in harmony with humans.(that引导宾语从句)
12.Dear John,
Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday. Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@. In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing. Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
If you need more detailed information, I’d be glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,告知外国朋友John关于学校举办的外国学生唱中文歌比赛的一些具体信息,包括时间,地点,报名方式及歌曲类型等。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构:总分法
总分法指写信目的为主题句,作为总说,然后比赛的相关信息为支持句,作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.比赛的时间和地点;
2.报名方式;
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)join in ,tell you some related information,fill in an entry form online ,be fit for, be required to do,the deadline for sign-up
第三步:连词成句
1.Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
2.The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall.
3. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday.
4.Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@.
5.In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing.
6.Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
2.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】高分句型1:Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.本句中用到现在分词作原因状语
高分句型2:Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.本句用到that引导的定语从句
13.In order to better and faster cover all aspects of what happens inside and outside the school, now our school newspaper is recruiting student journalists.
Our recruitment criteria are as follows. First of all, we need to have a good sense of news, to be able to keenly capture and observe the things happening inside and outside the school. Second, quickly prepare the next question based on the interviewer's answer and be flexible.
If you're interested in our recruitment, please submit your application form to Newspaper Club@ before December.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校的校报正在招募学生记者这一情况,以校报主编的身份写一份英文启事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了:In order to→ With the aim to
首先:First of all→ In the first place
报道:cover→ report
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ be keen to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, quickly prepare the next question based on the interviewer's answer and be flexible.
拓展句:Second, quickly prepare the next question, which is based on the interviewer's answer and be flexible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, we need to have a good sense of news, to be able to keenly capture and observe the things happening inside and outside the school.(运用了动词不定式to do作目的状语。)
【高分句型2】If you're interested in our recruitment, please submit your application form to Newspaper Club@ before December.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句。)
14.Dear Mason,
Happy the Year of the Tiger! I can’t wait to express my heart-felt appreciation of the new Olympic motto to you. The newly added word “Together” is primarily consistent with the core values of the Olympics, especially the spirit of cooperation. It also hopes to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the emphasized one of which is the urgency of joint efforts in the future. Current COVID-19 brings all mankind a global challenge, so only by standing together in solidarity can we go faster, aim higher and become stronger.
In the end, I wish you and your family a new year filled with prosperity, joy and contentment. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mason写信,谈谈你对于奥林匹克新格言(motto)“Faster, Higher, Stronger — Together”中“Together”一词的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
欣赏:appreciation→admiration
当前的:current→present
最后:in the end→at last
满足:contentment→satisfaction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句:In the end, I wish you and your family a new year filled with prosperity, joy and contentment.
拓展句:In the end, I wish you and your family a new year which is filled with prosperity, joy and contentment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It also hopes to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the emphasized one of which is the urgency of joint efforts in the future.(运用了which引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Current COVID-19 brings all mankind a global challenge, so only by standing together in solidarity can we go faster, aim higher and become stronger. (运用了only+方式状语位于句首,主句使用部分倒装)
15.Dear boys and girls,
March 12th is Tree Planting Day. To answer the call of creating a good environment with clear water and green mountains, our school will hold a tree-planting activity as Tree Planting Day draws near. I am writing to call on all of you to take an active part in it.
As scheduled, we will meet at the school gate at 9:00am on March 19th. Since we’ll cycle to suburb and plant trees there, you’d better wear casual clothes and comfortable shoes. It would be so much better if you could bring some necessary tools. Besides, we’ll have a picnic after the activity. Thus, whoever participates is expected to bring their lunch and share it.
By Joining in the activity, not only can we relax ourselves and relieve our study stress, but also we can get close to nature and protect our environment. Your active participation will be appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇属于应用文。假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,在植树节来临之际,号召所有同学积极参加。
【详解】1. 词语积累
临近:draw near→approach
参加:take part in→participate in
此外:besides→what’s more
因此:thus→therefore
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Since we’ll cycle to suburb and plant trees there, you’d better wear casual clothes and comfortable shoes.
拓展句:Since we’ll cycle to suburb and plant trees there, nothing is better than casual clothes and comfortable shoes.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thus, whoever participates is expected to bring their lunch and share it. (运用了whoever引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] By Joining in the activity, not only can we relax ourselves and relieve our study stress, but also we can get close to nature and protect our environment. (运用了部分倒装)
16.Dear Tim,
How is everything going Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.
Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school. The competitors from different classes competed with each other. Their performances, including reading poems aloud, reciting poems from memory and answering questions, deeply impressed the audience present. There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest. Finally, the winners were awarded prizes by the headmaster. By attending this activity, we got a good opportunity to enhance our deeper understanding of Chinese poetry and traditional culture.
Hope you can visit China and experience the charm of Chinese poetry. Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对中国文化颇感兴趣的英国笔友Tim发送邮件,向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛,希望他能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。
【详解】1.词汇积累着迷:fascinated→ captivated
鼓励:encourage→ hearten
吸引:attract→ appeal to
参加:attend→ take part in/participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
拓展句:The contest, whose aim was to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.(运用that引导宾语从空)
【高分句型2】There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest.(运用that引导同位语从句)
17.Dear Mark,
Welcome your visit to our school for cultural exchange on April 6. I’m writing to inform you of our arrangements.
The cultural exchange is scheduled for 8:00 am. To begin with, a lecture about the historic culture of our city will be given by our schoolmaster. After that, our traditional Wushu team will show you Chinese Kongfu, which is full of power and skills. In the afternoon, a live art show is arranged for you, including performing Chinese calligraphy, painting, paper-cutting and so on. You’re expected to join us and try them by yourselves.
That’s all for our arrangements. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生代表学校给访问团领队Mark写封英文信,欢迎他们来到学校进行文化交流活动。
【详解】第一步:
审题体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法 总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示欢迎;
2.接待活动安排;
3.表达期待。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
inform sb. of sth.;be scheduled for;to begin with;show sb. sth.;be full of;and so on;be expected to do;by oneself;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.Welcome your visit to our school for cultural exchange on April 6.
2.I’m writing to inform you of our arrangements.
3.The cultural exchange is scheduled for 8:00 am.
4.To begin with, a lecture about the historic culture of our city will be given by our schoolmaster.
5.After that, our traditional Wushu team will show you Chinese Kongfu, which is full of power and skills.
6.In the afternoon, a live art show is arranged for you, including performing Chinese calligraphy, painting, paper-cutting and so on.
7.You’re expected to join us and try them by yourselves.
8.That’s all for our arrangements.
9.Looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序:to begin with
表并列补充关系: including
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to inform you of our arrangements.(动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2]After that, our traditional Wushu team will show you Chinese Kongfu, which is full of power and skills. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
18.Dear Tom,
I’m more than delighted to know you’ll study with us. I can't wait to see you. Now let me introduce some of our courses which will surely help deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
First of all, I may suggest Chinese calligraphy, for each character tells a story with culture. While practicing writing them, you can not only appreciate the beauty of calligraphy but also cultivate your mind. Another course I’d recommend to you is Beijing Opera. It offers you an access to Chinese opera history and the main characters of this traditional Chinese theatre.
Best wishes to you! Looking forward to your early arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom即将作为交换生到你们学校学习一年。他向你询问你们学校开设有哪些课程或活动有助于他了解中国文化。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:1. 对他即将到来表示欢迎;2. 介绍有助于他了解中国文化的课程或活动;3. 表达期待和祝愿。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):more than delighted(非常高兴);can’t wait to (等不及);deepen (加深);Chinese calligraphy (中国书法);Beijing Opera (京剧)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Now let me introduce some of our courses which will surely help deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.运用了定语从句;While practicing writing them, you can not only appreciate the beauty of calligraphy but also cultivate your mind.运用了省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
19.Dear Mr. Brown,
It was such a shock to hear that you were badly injured while playing football last weekend. Are you feeling any better now
Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon. What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days! Nevertheless, there is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons. Last but not least, if there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact us.
I do expect your quick recovery. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向外籍教师Mr. Brown慰问并表达祝愿。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:以第一、二人称为主
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总法
要点:
1. 询问他的伤情,并打算去看望他;
2. 告诉他不要担心你们的学习;
3. 祝他早日康复。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
badly injured;play football;last weekend;feel well;be concerned about;on behalf of;a few;there is no need to do;worry about;spare no efforts to do;make up for;offer to help;hesitate to do等
第三步:连词成句
1. It was such a shock to hear that you were badly injured while playing football last weekend.
2. Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon.
3. What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days!
4. There is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons.
5. If there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact us.
6. I do expect your quick recovery.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
Nevertheless;Last but not least;if;while等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型,如:It was such a shock to hear that you were badly injured while playing football last weekend.使用了that引导的宾语从句和while引导的状语从句;Concerned about your present situation, I’m going to see you on behalf of the whole class on this Tuesday afternoon.使用了非谓语动词;What a pity that you can’t teach us for a few days!使用了What a pity that…固定句式;There is no need to worry about our study since we’ll spare no efforts to make up for the lost lessons.使用了There is no need to…固定句式和since引导的状语从句;If there is anything we can offer to help, please don’t hesitate to contact us.使用了if引导的状语从句和祈使句;I do expect your quick recovery.使用了强调等;还使用了一些固定短语,如:be concerned about;on behalf of;a few;worry about;spare no efforts to do;make up for;hesitate to do等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
20.As is known to all, due to the outbreak of the epidemic, people focus close attention to the serious situation as well as the effective prevention, which reflects the selfless and fearless spirit of our nation.
Above all, what is highly advocated is that individuals are supposed to wear the mask staying in public places, so as to better guarantee our safety. In addition, it is the devotion of medical personnel and participation of volunteers that help us overcome the difficulties and deserve admiration. Most importantly, only by observing the strict management of government can we get through this tough period eventually.
All in all, keep on struggling against the epidemic bravely. I’m firmly convinced that we are bound to achieve the victory with our joint efforts.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻稿。要求考生结合当前疫情形势向学校英语社投稿宣传疫情防控,弘扬无私无畏的抗疫精神。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于:due to→because of
应该:be supposed to→should
严重的:serious→severe
为了:so as to→in order to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All in all, keep on struggling against the epidemic bravely.
拓展句:All in all, I hold the belief that we should keep on struggling against the epidemic bravely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, due to the outbreak of the epidemic, people focus close attention to the serious situation as well as the effective prevention, which reflects the selfless and fearless spirit of our nation. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Above all, what is highly advocated is that individuals are supposed to wear the mask staying in public places, so as to better guarantee our safety. (运用了what引导主语从句)
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