广西玉林市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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广西玉林市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·广西玉林·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Paul正在犹豫是否应该加入他所在学校的乒乓球俱乐部，特发邮件询问你的建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.建议他加入；
2.说明理由；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、申请信
2．（2020·广西玉林·统考二模）假如你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读，你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件，介绍情况并申请批准。内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.请求批准。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、告知信/通知
3．（2021·广西玉林·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生唱中文歌比赛。你的朋友John想参加比赛，请你写信告知他比赛的相关信息，内容包括:
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.报名方式；
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、其他应用文
4．（2022·广西玉林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，下周你校英国友好学校的学生来访，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
5．（2022·广西玉林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike约好了本周六去博物馆，但是由于你临时要参加“美丽市容，从我做起”(Beautiful city, Start from me)的志愿者活动而不能与其同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意；
2.简介志愿者活动；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·广西玉林·统考一模）假定你是李华，最近，你校成功举办了以“最美中国文化”为主题的文艺表演活动。请给你的英国朋友David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动的时间、地点、参加者；
2. 表演的节目；
3. 参加活动的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email saying you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school. In my opinion, you should seize the opportunity.
Since you love ping pong, the club is attractive to you. Besides, in the club, you are likely to make friends with those who also enjoys playing ping pong. More importantly, the club can offer you chances to take part in ping- pong related activities, which help you improve your skills.
I hope you sign up for it soon and that you will enjoy ping pong.
Yours,
Li Hua .
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰好友Paul写封邮件，就是否应该加入他所在学校的乒乓球俱乐部提出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
参加：join in→take part in
高兴的：happy→glad
此外：besides=in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm glad to receive your email saying you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school.
拓展句：I'm glad to receive your email in which says you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you love ping pong, the club is attractive to you. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, in the club, you are likely to make friends with those who also enjoys playing ping pong. (运用了who引导定语从句)
2．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.
The activity will last two hours, from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. next Saturday in the school library. It will begin with a speech about methods of efficient reading. Afterwards, some students will share the benefits from their reading. Finally, lots of newly published books will be recommended. I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.
I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是学生会主席李华，为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读，你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件，介绍情况并申请批准。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点： 1.活动安排；2.活动意义；3.请求批准。
写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：ask for your permission，hold a reading activity，aim at，appeal to more students to adore books，begin with a speech about，share the benefits from their reading，enhance the students’ interest in reading，approve my request，look forward to your reply。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句，其中的that省略掉了；I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了过去分词短语作状语：I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.使用了一些固定词组，如：aim at，appeal to，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear John,
Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday. Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@. In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing. Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
If you need more detailed information, I’d be glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，告知外国朋友John关于学校举办的外国学生唱中文歌比赛的一些具体信息，包括时间，地点，报名方式及歌曲类型等。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分法
总分法指写信目的为主题句，作为总说，然后比赛的相关信息为支持句，作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.报名方式；
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）join in ,tell you some related information,fill in an entry form online ,be fit for, be required to do,the deadline for sign-up
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
2.The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall.
3. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday.
4.Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@.
5.In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing.
6.Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】高分句型1：Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.本句中用到现在分词作原因状语
高分句型2：Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.本句用到that引导的定语从句
4．Dear friends,
It is really a great honor for me to extend our warmest welcome to all of you from England on behalf of our school.
Detailed arrangements have been made for you. First, our headmaster will give you a brief introduction of the history of our school, which is a good chance for you to understand the school. Then our classes are worthy of being attended. Not only will you appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods, but also you will experience traditional Chinese culture. At noon, we would like to invite you to have lunch with our students. Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, aiming to promote our friendship.
I hope your experience in our school will be a wonderful memory.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英文发言稿，为下周你校英国友好学校的学生来访，作为学生代表致欢迎辞。
【详解】1.词汇积累表达：extend→ express
机会：chance→ opportunity
方法：method→ approach
促进：promote→ facilitate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, aiming to promote our friendship.
拓展句：Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, whose aim is to promote our friendship.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First, our headmaster will give you a brief introduction of the history of our school, which is a good chance for you to understand the school.(运用which引导非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope your experience in our school will be a wonderful memory.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
5．Dear Mike,
Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday. Therefore, I’ writing to express my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused all of sudden.
As you know, I’ve been waiting for a chance to devote myself to raising public awareness of environmental protection. Consequently, when the opportunity to volunteer came, I seized it without hesitation. On that day, all the volunteers will put up posters about how to lead a low-carbon lifestyle and pick up the trash along the roads, which will take a whole day. Considering that, I am afraid that I won't keep my word. It is possible for us to fixed another date when you are available.
Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike写信，告诉他你因参加“美丽市容，从我做起”志愿者活动而不能按时和他同去博物馆而表达歉意，并另行约定去博物馆的时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：terribly→ awfully
突然：all of a sudden→suddenly
机会：opportunity→ chance
安排：fix→arrange
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.
拓展句：I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday because I have signed up for a voluntary activity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology. （运用了how引导的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
6．Dear David,
Recently, an activity called “The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture” was held in our school hall. All the students in my school took part in it.
The performers prepared for the performance for about two weeks. 66 students recited Di Zi Gui, which helped us know what children in ancient times were taught in school. Then 30 students showed different types of clothes that were popular in the Han Dynasty. Then came the kung fu show, which was the most popular. The last program was that a group of students played some classic dramas and music. This activity provided a chance for us students to learn more about classic Chinese culture,
What about activities in your school Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，最近，你校成功举办了以“最美中国文化”为主题的文艺表演活动。请给你的英国朋友David写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 活动的时间、地点、参加者；2. 表演的节目；3. 参加活动的感受。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture (最美中国文化)，hold (举办)，school hall (学校大厅)，performance (表演)，provide a chance for us students (为我们学生提供了一个机会)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词Recently, an activity called “The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture” was held in our school hall.非限定性定语从句及宾语从句The performers prepared for the performance for about two weeks. 66 students recited Di Zi Gui, which helped us know what children in ancient times were taught in school.倒装句型Then came the kung fu show, which was the most popular.表语从句The last program was that a group of students played some classic dramas and music.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2021·广西玉林·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Paul正在犹豫是否应该加入他所在学校的乒乓球俱乐部，特发邮件询问你的建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.建议他加入；
2.说明理由；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、申请信
2．（2020·广西玉林·统考二模）假如你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读，你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件，介绍情况并申请批准。内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.请求批准。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、告知信/通知
3．（2021·广西玉林·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生唱中文歌比赛。你的朋友John想参加比赛，请你写信告知他比赛的相关信息，内容包括:
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.报名方式；
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、其他应用文
4．（2022·广西玉林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，下周你校英国友好学校的学生来访，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
5．（2022·广西玉林·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike约好了本周六去博物馆，但是由于你临时要参加“美丽市容，从我做起”(Beautiful city, Start from me)的志愿者活动而不能与其同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意；
2.简介志愿者活动；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·广西玉林·统考一模）假定你是李华，最近，你校成功举办了以“最美中国文化”为主题的文艺表演活动。请给你的英国朋友David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动的时间、地点、参加者；
2. 表演的节目；
3. 参加活动的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email saying you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school. In my opinion, you should seize the opportunity.
Since you love ping pong, the club is attractive to you. Besides, in the club, you are likely to make friends with those who also enjoys playing ping pong. More importantly, the club can offer you chances to take part in ping- pong related activities, which help you improve your skills.
I hope you sign up for it soon and that you will enjoy ping pong.
Yours,
Li Hua .
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰好友Paul写封邮件，就是否应该加入他所在学校的乒乓球俱乐部提出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
参加：join in→take part in
高兴的：happy→glad
此外：besides=in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm glad to receive your email saying you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school.
拓展句：I'm glad to receive your email in which says you are hesitant about joining the ping-pong club in your school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you love ping pong, the club is attractive to you. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, in the club, you are likely to make friends with those who also enjoys playing ping pong. (运用了who引导定语从句)
2．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.
The activity will last two hours, from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. next Saturday in the school library. It will begin with a speech about methods of efficient reading. Afterwards, some students will share the benefits from their reading. Finally, lots of newly published books will be recommended. I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.
I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是学生会主席李华，为了鼓励更多学生爱上阅读，你校学生会打算举行一次读书活动。请你给外籍校长 Mr Smith写一封邮件，介绍情况并申请批准。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点： 1.活动安排；2.活动意义；3.请求批准。
写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：ask for your permission，hold a reading activity，aim at，appeal to more students to adore books，begin with a speech about，share the benefits from their reading，enhance the students’ interest in reading，approve my request，look forward to your reply。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m sure this activity will enhance the students’ interest in reading.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句，其中的that省略掉了；I would be very grateful if you would approve my request. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了过去分词短语作状语：I’m writing to ask for your permission to hold a reading activity, aimed at appealing to more students to adore books.使用了一些固定词组，如：aim at，appeal to，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear John,
Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday. Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@. In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing. Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
If you need more detailed information, I’d be glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，告知外国朋友John关于学校举办的外国学生唱中文歌比赛的一些具体信息，包括时间，地点，报名方式及歌曲类型等。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分法
总分法指写信目的为主题句，作为总说，然后比赛的相关信息为支持句，作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.报名方式；
3.可选择的歌曲类型。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）join in ,tell you some related information,fill in an entry form online ,be fit for, be required to do,the deadline for sign-up
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.
2.The contest will begin at 8:30 next Sunday morning in the school hall.
3. The deadline for sign-up is this Friday.
4.Every participant is required to fill in an entry form online and email it to singingcontest@.
5.In the contest, the contestant will have five minutes to sing.
6.Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】高分句型1：Knowing that you want to join in the Chinese singing contest to be held in our school, I’m writing to tell you some related information.本句中用到现在分词作原因状语
高分句型2：Those Chinese folk songs or popular songs that convey love to China and its people are fit for the contest.本句用到that引导的定语从句
4．Dear friends,
It is really a great honor for me to extend our warmest welcome to all of you from England on behalf of our school.
Detailed arrangements have been made for you. First, our headmaster will give you a brief introduction of the history of our school, which is a good chance for you to understand the school. Then our classes are worthy of being attended. Not only will you appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods, but also you will experience traditional Chinese culture. At noon, we would like to invite you to have lunch with our students. Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, aiming to promote our friendship.
I hope your experience in our school will be a wonderful memory.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英文发言稿，为下周你校英国友好学校的学生来访，作为学生代表致欢迎辞。
【详解】1.词汇积累表达：extend→ express
机会：chance→ opportunity
方法：method→ approach
促进：promote→ facilitate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, aiming to promote our friendship.
拓展句：Finally, we will have a basketball match in the afternoon, whose aim is to promote our friendship.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First, our headmaster will give you a brief introduction of the history of our school, which is a good chance for you to understand the school.(运用which引导非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope your experience in our school will be a wonderful memory.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
5．Dear Mike,
Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday. Therefore, I’ writing to express my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused all of sudden.
As you know, I’ve been waiting for a chance to devote myself to raising public awareness of environmental protection. Consequently, when the opportunity to volunteer came, I seized it without hesitation. On that day, all the volunteers will put up posters about how to lead a low-carbon lifestyle and pick up the trash along the roads, which will take a whole day. Considering that, I am afraid that I won't keep my word. It is possible for us to fixed another date when you are available.
Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike写信，告诉他你因参加“美丽市容，从我做起”志愿者活动而不能按时和他同去博物馆而表达歉意，并另行约定去博物馆的时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：terribly→ awfully
突然：all of a sudden→suddenly
机会：opportunity→ chance
安排：fix→arrange
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.
拓展句：I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday because I have signed up for a voluntary activity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology. （运用了how引导的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
6．Dear David,
Recently, an activity called “The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture” was held in our school hall. All the students in my school took part in it.
The performers prepared for the performance for about two weeks. 66 students recited Di Zi Gui, which helped us know what children in ancient times were taught in school. Then 30 students showed different types of clothes that were popular in the Han Dynasty. Then came the kung fu show, which was the most popular. The last program was that a group of students played some classic dramas and music. This activity provided a chance for us students to learn more about classic Chinese culture,
What about activities in your school Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，最近，你校成功举办了以“最美中国文化”为主题的文艺表演活动。请给你的英国朋友David写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 活动的时间、地点、参加者；2. 表演的节目；3. 参加活动的感受。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture (最美中国文化)，hold (举办)，school hall (学校大厅)，performance (表演)，provide a chance for us students (为我们学生提供了一个机会)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词Recently, an activity called “The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture” was held in our school hall.非限定性定语从句及宾语从句The performers prepared for the performance for about two weeks. 66 students recited Di Zi Gui, which helped us know what children in ancient times were taught in school.倒装句型Then came the kung fu show, which was the most popular.表语从句The last program was that a group of students played some classic dramas and music.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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