贵州贵阳市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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贵州贵阳市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考三模）假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。要点如下：
1. 时间和内容；
2. 活动安排；
3. 需要做的准备。
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：社团club
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2022·贵州贵阳·贵阳六中校考一模）假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝愿；
2. 获奖的意义；
3. 未来的期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．（2021·贵州贵阳·校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：
1. 中医的历史、地位；
2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。
参考词汇：中医 Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)
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三、其他应用文
4．（2022·贵州贵阳·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华, 得知外国笔友Jack对中国美食火锅感兴趣。请根据以下提示, 用英语给他
写一封邮件。
内容包括: 1. 火锅有2000多年的历史;
2. 火锅的制作和吃法;
3. 欢迎Jack来中国品尝火锅。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考一模）假如你是李华，请你按照以下要点给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信。
1.你近期所做的一个决定；
2.做出这个决定的原因；
3.你是如何执行的。
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How is everything going
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳市第九中学校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，将给你的外国朋友Mike写信，谈谈你对感恩的理解。要点如下：
1. 你对感恩的理解，人人都要有感恩之心；
2. 学会感恩，感恩是表达爱的一种方式。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you something about gratitude.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·贵州贵阳·统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信想知道你今年是如何度过春节的。请你根据以下要点给他回信。
1. 政府提倡：就地过年，减少非必要的人员聚集；
2. 你是如何度过春节的；
3. 你的正面感受。
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about how I spent the Spring Festival this year.
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All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生会主席李华，近日你发现部分同学在月考中有作弊这一不良行为，请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，倡议全校同学诚信考试，要点如下：
1. 发现的问题；
2. 考试作弊的危害（损人不利己，违背社会核心价值等）；
3. 号召大家诚信考试。
注意：1. 词数为100左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
9．（2021·贵州贵阳·统考二模）假如你是李华，将在给你的英国笔友Tom的信中讲述一件生活中让你感动的小事。要点如下：
1.感动的事情；2 .你的感悟。
注意：
1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Lately, I have been thinking a lot about the beauty of my life because I experienced something touching. Now, I want to share it with you.
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All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校广播站正招聘英文广播员，你的留学生好友Eric 打算参加竞聘。请给他写一封信，
内容包括:
1.表示支持;
2.陈述理由( 至少两点);
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动（the coming-of-age ceremony）。请给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件，介绍此次活动的相关情况，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.你的准备。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．（2020·贵州贵阳·统考二模）假如你是李华，将向你的外国朋友Tom介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。要点包括：
1. 积极作用；
2. 利用情况；
3. 展望。
注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：休闲广场leisure square
Dear Tom,
How is everything going!
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All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案：
1．Dear Tom,
Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. It will be held in the Pingpang stadium at 2:00 next Saturday afternoon. A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
This lesson is about the basic skills of playing Pingpang. Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. Then he will watch us play it and give directions. This will certainly help us improve our skills.
Please put on your sport suits, bring your bat and come to the stadium on time. We definitely will have a good time together
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
熟练的：skillful→experienced
发表演讲：give a lecture→deliver a lecture
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
拓展句：Mr. Wang, who is a skillful PE teacher in our school, will be the host this time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. (运用了动名词作宾语)
2．Dear Michael,
I’m so happy to hear that you have won the first prize in the essay contest My China Story held by China Daily.
What a pleasant surprise you have given me! Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
I hope you will continue your exploration of China and make even greater achievements in the years to come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝愿；2. 获奖的意义；3. 未来的期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
举办：hold→organise
很好的：brilliant→great
天赋：talent =gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
拓展句：Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, which will bridge the gap between China and the rest of the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world. (运用了现在分词作状语)
3．Dear Tony,
I am more than delighted to hear that you take an intense interest in Chinese culture, especially Traditional Chinese Medicine. The TCM, as an important part of Chinese culture, has been attracting attention from all over the world.
The TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods, long history and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases for more than five thousand years. Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people. Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.
In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care. Hope you can have a better understanding of it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：1. 中医的历史、地位；2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示感谢，并说明自己的状况。第二段，学习内容和方式；锻炼方式；第三段，感想。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be delighted to, take an intense interest in, attract attention, In a word, made great contributions to.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Above all，In a word.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
4．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you’re interested in hot pot, I guess it’s necessary to introduce more about it to you.
As one of the most famous and favorite dishes in China, hot pot has a history of more than 2000 years. Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table and the pot is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base. When the soup is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. Then it will only take you a little while to enjoy delicious dishes.
Hot pot is a good way to have a feast and relax with friends or relatives. Welcome to China and enjoy hot pot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外国笔友介绍中国美食——火锅。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→well-known
美味的：delicious→tasty
沸腾：boil→simmer
一会儿：a little while→a moment/a minute
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table and the pot is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base.
拓展句：Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table, which is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the soup is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和被动语态）
[高分句型2] Knowing that you’re interested in hot pot, I guess it’s necessary to introduce more about it to you.（运用了现在分词作状语）
5．Dear Tom,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you the decision I have made lately. It is about strengthening my time management in study, to which I have been sticking for about a month. The reason is that I found some difficulties in the efficiency of my study. I spent a lot of time on study, which always made me feel tired and anxious. Therefore, firstly I turned to my teacher and followed his useful advice. Secondly, I rearranged my time of study, exercise and sleep. Now I feel everything is on the track. It’s wise to make this decision.
I wonder if you can give me some suggestions for the time management, and I’m looking forward to knowing something about you.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封信，向他叙述自己近期的一个决定、做出这个决定的原因以及如何执行的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：would like to→want to
加强：strengthen→enhance
向……求助：turn to sb.→ask sb. for help
明智的：wise→clever
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’d like to tell you the decision I have made lately.
拓展句：I’d like to tell you what I decided to do lately.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
It is about strengthening my time management in study, to which I have been sticking for about a month..(运用了介词＋关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
I spent a lot of time on study, which always made me feel tired and anxious. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you something about gratitude.
We all should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world. Parents should get the greatest respect from their children. We all know that it is not easy for our parents to bring up and educate us, so we should always appreciate what they have done for us. What’s more, teachers deserve students’ gratitude for their selfless work. Friends are also very important in everyone’s life because they can share happiness and sorrow with us. Because of friends, our life is filled with laughter and sunshine.
Being thankful is a way to express love. It is an easy and simple movement by saying “Thank you!” or giving a warm hug to the people we love. How do you think of gratitude Please let me know.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写封信，谈谈自己对感恩的见解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感恩：be grateful→be thankful
此外：besides → what’s more
重要的：important→essential
动作：movement→ motion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Parents should get the greatest respect from their children.
拓展句：Parents who give their endless love to their children should get the greatest respect from their children.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We all know that it is not easy for our parents to bring up and educate us, so we should always appreciate what they have done for us.（运用了that和what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Friends are also very important in everyone’s life because they can share happiness and sorrow with us.（运用了because引导的状语从句）
7．Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about how I spent the Spring Festival this year.
This year’s Spring Festival was a special holiday because of the pandemic. The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives in Shandong province.
During the festival, my parents cooked a lot of delicious dishes. Although we couldn’t meet our relatives, we did a “Happy New Year” video via WeChat and sent our best wishes to them. Most importantly, we had a safe holiday. Hope the pandemic will end soon.
In a word, I do think it is a safe means for the Spring Festival this year, because it is good for my family and the society at this special time.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写信，告诉他今年自己是如何度过春节的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提倡：advocate→urge
拜访：pay a visit to→visit
美味的：tasty→delicious
结束：come to an end→end
2.句型拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives in Shandong province.
拓展句：The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives who live in Shandong province.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Although we couldn’t meet our relatives, we did a “Happy New Year” video via WeChat and sent our best wishes to them.使用了although引导让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]
In a word, I do think it is a safe means for the spring festival this year, because it is good for my family and the society at this special time.使用了do对谓语动词think进行强调和because引导的原因状语从句。
8．参考范文
Dear fellow students,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Due to a recent phenomenon that some students cheated in the monthly exams, I’m appealing to a cheating-free campus.
As we know, there are many negative effects of cheating in exams. First of all, cheating in exams is a dishonest behavior, which does harm to the students’ progress. Students cheating in exams cannot reveal their weakness, for which teachers cannot adjust their teaching ways accordingly. Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition and will discourage those who really paid efforts. Finally, cheating in exams goes against the core value — integrity, which is essential to the development of the whole society.
So, why not stop cheating in exams. Be honest and open about who you really are. Let’s make a cheating-free campus and establish an honest academic atmosphere for today and tomorrow.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，倡议全校同学诚信考试，讲述考试作弊的危害。
【详解】词汇积累
考试：exam→test
由于：due to→because of/ owing to
揭露：reveal→ show/indicate/bring out
导致：result in → lead to/cause/give rise to /bring about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition and will discourage those who really paid efforts.
拓展句：Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition, which will discourage those who really paid efforts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, cheating in exams is a dishonest behavior, which does harm to the students’ progress. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Be honest and open about who you really are. (运用了祈使句)
9．Dear Tom.
Lately, I have been thinking a lot about the beauty of my life because I experienced something touching. Now, I want to share it with you.
This term, I met difficulties in learning math. I put much time and effort on it, but somehow my scores were not becoming better. With Gaokao approaching, I felt so frustrated that I wanted to give up. However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, helping me figure out my problems. What's more, she would write inspiring words in my exercise book when I solved some math problems. I made progress gradually and regained my confidence.
Life is not always satisfying, but it is so lucky to meet a person who helps you in need. Whenever I read the encouraging words, I can feel so moved and warm. Do you have any experience like me
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写信讲述一件生活中让你感动的小事以及感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
分数：scores→ marks/grades
接近：approaching→ arriving
沮丧：frustrated→ dispirited
进步：progress→ improvement
重拾：regain→ rebuild2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, helping me figure out my problems.
拓展句：However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, which helped me figure out my problems.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With Gaokao approaching, I felt so frustrated that I wanted to give up. (使用so...that...引导结果状语从句。)
[高分句型2]What's more, she would write inspiring words in my exercise book when I solved some math problems. (使用when引导时间状语从句。)
10．Dear Eric，
I’m glad to hear you are competing for the position of English announcer on our school radio station. I fully support you and believe you’re qualified for this position.
I know you used to be the announcer of your school radio station before you came to China, which must have helped you accumulate enough experience. Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for. On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular. All these advantages you have will ensure you have a great chance of successfully getting this position.
I’m looking forward to hearing some good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生好友Eric 写封信，对他打算参加竞聘英文广播员表示支持和祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
支持：support=be in favor of
适合：be qualified for=be fit for
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
保证：ensure→guarantee
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for. On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.
拓展句：Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for, on top of which, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I know you used to be the announcer of your school radio station before you came to China, which must have helped you accumulate enough experience. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.(运用了such...that...固定句式)
11．Dear Nancy,
It's great to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
We will hold the coming-of-age ceremony to celebrate our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate". Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers. Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. I’ll prepare to sing a song.
As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件，介绍此次高三举办的成人礼活动（the coming-of-age ceremony）相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为将来时,少量一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.你的准备。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
take place in；make an oath；pass through；show one’s thanks to；prepare to；put on；make great effort；work hard；make some contribution to
第三步：连词成句
1. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
2. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate".
3. Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers.
4 Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing.
5. As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：At first,then, Finally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2]：At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate"这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句。
[高分句型3]：As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
12．Dear Tom,
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about the leisure squares in my city. The citizens benefit a lot from them. On one hand, squares could help people keep fit by doing physical exercises. On the other hand, it is a safe place for emergency.
People are making use of leisure squares in various ways. In the daytime, people tend to do morning exercises in the nearby leisure square. In the evening, kids could have fun with their parents there.
I do believe the leisure square will be not only a gathering place but also a symbol of the city’s culture in the near future.
I hope you can have a chance to visit the leisure squares in my city.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向外国朋友介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 广场情况介绍
1）积极作用
2）利用情况
3）展望
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
leisure square；benefit；exercise；make use of；have fun；have a relax；in the future；have a chance to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you about leisure squares in my city.
2. They are really beneficial to us citizens.
3. In the morning, we tend to do exercises in the nearby leisure square.
4. In the evening, the families could have fun altogether there.
5. I do believe the leisure square will develop even better in the future.
6. Hope you can come to visit the leisure squares in my city one day.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I do believe the leisure square will be not only a gathering place but also a symbol of the city’s culture in the near future.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句（省略了that）；使用了一些固定词组，如make use of；benefit from等。文中对强调句、not only…but also等各种句式结构信手拈来，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
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一、邀请信
1．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考三模）假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。要点如下：
1. 时间和内容；
2. 活动安排；
3. 需要做的准备。
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：社团club
Dear Tom,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2022·贵州贵阳·贵阳六中校考一模）假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝愿；
2. 获奖的意义；
3. 未来的期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2021·贵州贵阳·校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：
1. 中医的历史、地位；
2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。
参考词汇：中医 Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)
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三、其他应用文
4．（2022·贵州贵阳·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华, 得知外国笔友Jack对中国美食火锅感兴趣。请根据以下提示, 用英语给他
写一封邮件。
内容包括: 1. 火锅有2000多年的历史;
2. 火锅的制作和吃法;
3. 欢迎Jack来中国品尝火锅。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考一模）假如你是李华，请你按照以下要点给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信。
1.你近期所做的一个决定；
2.做出这个决定的原因；
3.你是如何执行的。
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How is everything going
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳市第九中学校联考模拟预测）假如你是李华，将给你的外国朋友Mike写信，谈谈你对感恩的理解。要点如下：
1. 你对感恩的理解，人人都要有感恩之心；
2. 学会感恩，感恩是表达爱的一种方式。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you something about gratitude.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·贵州贵阳·统考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信想知道你今年是如何度过春节的。请你根据以下要点给他回信。
1. 政府提倡：就地过年，减少非必要的人员聚集；
2. 你是如何度过春节的；
3. 你的正面感受。
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about how I spent the Spring Festival this year.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生会主席李华，近日你发现部分同学在月考中有作弊这一不良行为，请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，倡议全校同学诚信考试，要点如下：
1. 发现的问题；
2. 考试作弊的危害（损人不利己，违背社会核心价值等）；
3. 号召大家诚信考试。
注意：1. 词数为100左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
9．（2021·贵州贵阳·统考二模）假如你是李华，将在给你的英国笔友Tom的信中讲述一件生活中让你感动的小事。要点如下：
1.感动的事情；2 .你的感悟。
注意：
1.词数100字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Lately, I have been thinking a lot about the beauty of my life because I experienced something touching. Now, I want to share it with you.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校广播站正招聘英文广播员，你的留学生好友Eric 打算参加竞聘。请给他写一封信，
内容包括:
1.表示支持;
2.陈述理由( 至少两点);
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．（2021·贵州贵阳·贵阳一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动（the coming-of-age ceremony）。请给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件，介绍此次活动的相关情况，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.你的准备。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．（2020·贵州贵阳·统考二模）假如你是李华，将向你的外国朋友Tom介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。要点包括：
1. 积极作用；
2. 利用情况；
3. 展望。
注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：休闲广场leisure square
Dear Tom,
How is everything going!
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All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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1．Dear Tom,
Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. It will be held in the Pingpang stadium at 2:00 next Saturday afternoon. A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
This lesson is about the basic skills of playing Pingpang. Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. Then he will watch us play it and give directions. This will certainly help us improve our skills.
Please put on your sport suits, bring your bat and come to the stadium on time. We definitely will have a good time together
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
熟练的：skillful→experienced
发表演讲：give a lecture→deliver a lecture
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
拓展句：Mr. Wang, who is a skillful PE teacher in our school, will be the host this time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. (运用了动名词作宾语)
2．Dear Michael,
I’m so happy to hear that you have won the first prize in the essay contest My China Story held by China Daily.
What a pleasant surprise you have given me! Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
I hope you will continue your exploration of China and make even greater achievements in the years to come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Story征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝愿；2. 获奖的意义；3. 未来的期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
举办：hold→organise
很好的：brilliant→great
天赋：talent =gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world.
拓展句：Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, which will bridge the gap between China and the rest of the world.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Your winning the prize shows not only your brilliant talent for writing but also your deep understanding of China, which means a great deal to you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Hopefully, you’ll work in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassador, bridging the gap between China and the rest of the world. (运用了现在分词作状语)
3．Dear Tony,
I am more than delighted to hear that you take an intense interest in Chinese culture, especially Traditional Chinese Medicine. The TCM, as an important part of Chinese culture, has been attracting attention from all over the world.
The TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods, long history and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases for more than five thousand years. Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people. Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.
In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care. Hope you can have a better understanding of it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：1. 中医的历史、地位；2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示感谢，并说明自己的状况。第二段，学习内容和方式；锻炼方式；第三段，感想。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be delighted to, take an intense interest in, attract attention, In a word, made great contributions to.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Above all，In a word.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
4．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you’re interested in hot pot, I guess it’s necessary to introduce more about it to you.
As one of the most famous and favorite dishes in China, hot pot has a history of more than 2000 years. Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table and the pot is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base. When the soup is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. Then it will only take you a little while to enjoy delicious dishes.
Hot pot is a good way to have a feast and relax with friends or relatives. Welcome to China and enjoy hot pot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外国笔友介绍中国美食——火锅。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→well-known
美味的：delicious→tasty
沸腾：boil→simmer
一会儿：a little while→a moment/a minute
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table and the pot is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base.
拓展句：Usually, we put a metal hot pot in the middle of table, which is filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the soup is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和被动语态）
[高分句型2] Knowing that you’re interested in hot pot, I guess it’s necessary to introduce more about it to you.（运用了现在分词作状语）
5．Dear Tom,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you the decision I have made lately. It is about strengthening my time management in study, to which I have been sticking for about a month. The reason is that I found some difficulties in the efficiency of my study. I spent a lot of time on study, which always made me feel tired and anxious. Therefore, firstly I turned to my teacher and followed his useful advice. Secondly, I rearranged my time of study, exercise and sleep. Now I feel everything is on the track. It’s wise to make this decision.
I wonder if you can give me some suggestions for the time management, and I’m looking forward to knowing something about you.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封信，向他叙述自己近期的一个决定、做出这个决定的原因以及如何执行的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：would like to→want to
加强：strengthen→enhance
向……求助：turn to sb.→ask sb. for help
明智的：wise→clever
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’d like to tell you the decision I have made lately.
拓展句：I’d like to tell you what I decided to do lately.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
It is about strengthening my time management in study, to which I have been sticking for about a month..(运用了介词＋关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
I spent a lot of time on study, which always made me feel tired and anxious. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you something about gratitude.
We all should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world. Parents should get the greatest respect from their children. We all know that it is not easy for our parents to bring up and educate us, so we should always appreciate what they have done for us. What’s more, teachers deserve students’ gratitude for their selfless work. Friends are also very important in everyone’s life because they can share happiness and sorrow with us. Because of friends, our life is filled with laughter and sunshine.
Being thankful is a way to express love. It is an easy and simple movement by saying “Thank you!” or giving a warm hug to the people we love. How do you think of gratitude Please let me know.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写封信，谈谈自己对感恩的见解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感恩：be grateful→be thankful
此外：besides → what’s more
重要的：important→essential
动作：movement→ motion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Parents should get the greatest respect from their children.
拓展句：Parents who give their endless love to their children should get the greatest respect from their children.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We all know that it is not easy for our parents to bring up and educate us, so we should always appreciate what they have done for us.（运用了that和what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Friends are also very important in everyone’s life because they can share happiness and sorrow with us.（运用了because引导的状语从句）
7．Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about how I spent the Spring Festival this year.
This year’s Spring Festival was a special holiday because of the pandemic. The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives in Shandong province.
During the festival, my parents cooked a lot of delicious dishes. Although we couldn’t meet our relatives, we did a “Happy New Year” video via WeChat and sent our best wishes to them. Most importantly, we had a safe holiday. Hope the pandemic will end soon.
In a word, I do think it is a safe means for the Spring Festival this year, because it is good for my family and the society at this special time.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写信，告诉他今年自己是如何度过春节的。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提倡：advocate→urge
拜访：pay a visit to→visit
美味的：tasty→delicious
结束：come to an end→end
2.句型拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives in Shandong province.
拓展句：The government urged us to celebrate it locally to avoid infection, so we didn’t visit my grandparents and relatives who live in Shandong province.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Although we couldn’t meet our relatives, we did a “Happy New Year” video via WeChat and sent our best wishes to them.使用了although引导让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]
In a word, I do think it is a safe means for the spring festival this year, because it is good for my family and the society at this special time.使用了do对谓语动词think进行强调和because引导的原因状语从句。
8．参考范文
Dear fellow students,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Due to a recent phenomenon that some students cheated in the monthly exams, I’m appealing to a cheating-free campus.
As we know, there are many negative effects of cheating in exams. First of all, cheating in exams is a dishonest behavior, which does harm to the students’ progress. Students cheating in exams cannot reveal their weakness, for which teachers cannot adjust their teaching ways accordingly. Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition and will discourage those who really paid efforts. Finally, cheating in exams goes against the core value — integrity, which is essential to the development of the whole society.
So, why not stop cheating in exams. Be honest and open about who you really are. Let’s make a cheating-free campus and establish an honest academic atmosphere for today and tomorrow.
The Student Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，倡议全校同学诚信考试，讲述考试作弊的危害。
【详解】词汇积累
考试：exam→test
由于：due to→because of/ owing to
揭露：reveal→ show/indicate/bring out
导致：result in → lead to/cause/give rise to /bring about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition and will discourage those who really paid efforts.
拓展句：Secondly, cheating in exams can result in an unfair competition, which will discourage those who really paid efforts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, cheating in exams is a dishonest behavior, which does harm to the students’ progress. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Be honest and open about who you really are. (运用了祈使句)
9．Dear Tom.
Lately, I have been thinking a lot about the beauty of my life because I experienced something touching. Now, I want to share it with you.
This term, I met difficulties in learning math. I put much time and effort on it, but somehow my scores were not becoming better. With Gaokao approaching, I felt so frustrated that I wanted to give up. However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, helping me figure out my problems. What's more, she would write inspiring words in my exercise book when I solved some math problems. I made progress gradually and regained my confidence.
Life is not always satisfying, but it is so lucky to meet a person who helps you in need. Whenever I read the encouraging words, I can feel so moved and warm. Do you have any experience like me
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写信讲述一件生活中让你感动的小事以及感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
分数：scores→ marks/grades
接近：approaching→ arriving
沮丧：frustrated→ dispirited
进步：progress→ improvement
重拾：regain→ rebuild2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, helping me figure out my problems.
拓展句：However, my math teacher noticed it and patiently made a long talk with me, which helped me figure out my problems.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With Gaokao approaching, I felt so frustrated that I wanted to give up. (使用so...that...引导结果状语从句。)
[高分句型2]What's more, she would write inspiring words in my exercise book when I solved some math problems. (使用when引导时间状语从句。)
10．Dear Eric，
I’m glad to hear you are competing for the position of English announcer on our school radio station. I fully support you and believe you’re qualified for this position.
I know you used to be the announcer of your school radio station before you came to China, which must have helped you accumulate enough experience. Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for. On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular. All these advantages you have will ensure you have a great chance of successfully getting this position.
I’m looking forward to hearing some good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生好友Eric 写封信，对他打算参加竞聘英文广播员表示支持和祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
支持：support=be in favor of
适合：be qualified for=be fit for
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
保证：ensure→guarantee
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for. On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.
拓展句：Moreover, your great sense of humor is what the station is looking for, on top of which, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I know you used to be the announcer of your school radio station before you came to China, which must have helped you accumulate enough experience. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] On top of that, you’re such a responsible student with excellent spoken English that your broadcasting will surely be popular.(运用了such...that...固定句式)
11．Dear Nancy,
It's great to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
We will hold the coming-of-age ceremony to celebrate our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate". Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers. Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. I’ll prepare to sing a song.
As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件，介绍此次高三举办的成人礼活动（the coming-of-age ceremony）相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为将来时,少量一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.活动安排；
2.活动意义；
3.你的准备。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
take place in；make an oath；pass through；show one’s thanks to；prepare to；put on；make great effort；work hard；make some contribution to
第三步：连词成句
1. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
2. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate".
3. Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers.
4 Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing.
5. As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：At first,then, Finally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2]：At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate"这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句。
[高分句型3]：As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
12．Dear Tom,
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about the leisure squares in my city. The citizens benefit a lot from them. On one hand, squares could help people keep fit by doing physical exercises. On the other hand, it is a safe place for emergency.
People are making use of leisure squares in various ways. In the daytime, people tend to do morning exercises in the nearby leisure square. In the evening, kids could have fun with their parents there.
I do believe the leisure square will be not only a gathering place but also a symbol of the city’s culture in the near future.
I hope you can have a chance to visit the leisure squares in my city.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向外国朋友介绍你所在城市的休闲广场的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 广场情况介绍
1）积极作用
2）利用情况
3）展望
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
leisure square；benefit；exercise；make use of；have fun；have a relax；in the future；have a chance to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you about leisure squares in my city.
2. They are really beneficial to us citizens.
3. In the morning, we tend to do exercises in the nearby leisure square.
4. In the evening, the families could have fun altogether there.
5. I do believe the leisure square will develop even better in the future.
6. Hope you can come to visit the leisure squares in my city one day.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I do believe the leisure square will be not only a gathering place but also a symbol of the city’s culture in the near future.这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句（省略了that）；使用了一些固定词组，如make use of；benefit from等。文中对强调句、not only…but also等各种句式结构信手拈来，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
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