黑龙江省哈尔滨市三年(2021-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作(含答案)

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黑龙江省哈尔滨市三年(2021-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考二模)假如你是李平,为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意:词数100字左右。
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考模拟预测)假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到名叫Kelly的中学生发帖寻求帮助。请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。
Kelly on 19 Feb. 2020
Hi, everyone, my grandma smokes and my family come by her home a lot. When we come, she's always smoking. I always go to another room where I can’t smell the smoke, worried about my brother or someone else getting sick from second-hand smoke. What should I do
写作要点:
1.结合亲身经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题;
2.给Kelly提出建议。
要求:
1.词数100左右;
2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;
3.书写清晰工整。
3.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考二模)假定你是李华,校报英语“学生健康”专栏正在以“How to prevent myopia (近视) ”为主题开展征文活 动。请你写一篇文章投稿,谈谈你对如何预防近视的建议(至少两条)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.标题可自拟;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
4.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考三模)假如你是李华,正在国外留学。下个月你所在的社区将举行以中医为主题的社区活动, 目前正在招募志愿者。内容包括:
1.提出申请;
2.介绍自己的优势;
3.期待加入。
注意:1.词汇100左右;
2,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中医 traditional Chinese medicine
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考二模)2022年冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会完满成功, 组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华, 希望能成为其中一员。请用英文给组委会写一封申请信。
内容包括:1个人情况;2自身优势;3服务承诺
注意: 1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
6.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考模拟预测)假如你是校英文报“走近科学(Approaching Science)”专栏编辑李华,该专栏拟刊登介绍神舟十三(Shenzhou XIII)返航情况及意义的文章,请你写一封信向科学社团成员约稿,要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍;
2. 稿件要求(内容、字数等);
3. 截稿日期及投稿邮箱(science@)。
注意:1. 词数为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
Dear Science Club members,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·黑龙江实验中学校考模拟预测)你是我校学生会主席李华,现向外国友人 John Smith 发出邀请,希望他来参加我校六月份举办的科技艺术节开幕式。邀请函封面已给出,请写出里面邀请内容。
内容包括:
1. 开幕式的时间,地点;
2. 艺术节的具体内容
注意:
1. 词数:100 字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:科技艺术节 Tech Art Festival
5 June 2021
Mr. John Smith
14 New Road
Surrey
TWI4 2EH
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Chairman of the Student Union
Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School
四、感谢信/祝贺信
8.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考一模)假定你是李华。近期,你在上海参加了为期两周的以“培养国际视野的新一代”为主题的全国中学生夏令营活动。在培训期间,外教Smith先生就学习技巧和文化拓展等方面给予你很多帮助。回家后,你想给他写一封信,以表达感谢,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾你得到的帮助以及收获;
3.祝福和期待。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
五、推荐信
9.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈师大附中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的朋友Mark计划暑假回国,打算给他妈妈送一份具有中国文化特色的礼物。请你给他发一封邮件,向他推荐礼物,内容包括:
1. 推荐的礼物;
2. 推荐的原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Huh
10.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考模拟预测)假定你是红星中学学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他计划在学校组织一个有关中国传统文化的社团,向你征求建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐具体社团类型;
2. 给出推荐理由;
3. 表达期待与祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
六、告知信/通知
11.(2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考一模)你校将于下个月举办中国经典诵读大赛(Chinese Classics Reciting Contest),你受学生会委托写一则通知。内容包括:
1.活动时间地点;
2.参赛形式;
3.报名截止日期。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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七、其他应用文
12.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,受学生会委托,围绕“热爱劳动”这一主题,请你为学校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参加家庭、学校的各项劳动,养成热爱劳动的好习惯。要点如下:
1.说明劳动的意义;
2.提出倡议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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Students’ Union
13.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈师大附中校考三模)假定你是李华,你校将于下周五组织环境保护志愿活动,请你用英语写一篇倡议书。要点包括:
1. 环境保护的重要性;
2. 生活中有效的环保措施;
3. 倡议学生参加此活动。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Students,
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14.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考三模)假如你是李华,你校将要赠送一批关于中国传统文化的书籍给你的英国朋友Jack就读的学校。请你代表学校给他写一封信,内容要点如下:
1. 赠书的目的;
2. 介绍书籍类型(如节日、食品等);
3. 表示需要与其沟通具体细节。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考二模)假设你是某外国语中学高三学生李华。最近,你发现同学们在上课时有睡觉的现象,请你写一封倡议书,倡议大家规律作息,摒弃不良习惯。要点如下:
1. 提出现象并分析其原因;
2. 说明其危害;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1. 词数120左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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16.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考模拟预测)高中三年的生活接近尾声。回顾过去三年,你和朋友之间一定有很多美好的回忆。请你写一篇文章,介绍你的一位好朋友,要点如下:
1.朋友的外貌、性格等;
2.回顾你和朋友交往之间的一件最难忘的故事。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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17.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom特别关注中国政府和人民在脱贫攻坚战中取得的胜利,请你以春节期间到乡下爷爷家过年的经历为例,给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.与过去的贫困对比,介绍现在农村脱贫后的情况;
2.简要说明脱贫成功的原因。
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入字数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
18.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考模拟预测)假设你是李华,最近你校根据学生的兴趣爱好开展了许多课外活动。请你给校英语报“Campus” 栏目投稿,介绍相关情况。内容应包括:
1. 介绍你校的课外活动情况;
2. 介绍你的参与情况;
3. 号召更多的学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
19.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈师大附中校考三模)假设你是李华,你校学生学习压力大,缺乏体育锻炼。请你代表学生会,围绕“Sports and Study”这一主题,在校英文报上发出倡议。内容如下:
1.倡议的原因和目的:
2.倡议的具体内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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Student Union
20.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考三模)假定你是来自美国的留学生李,有感于学校刚刚结束的成人礼(coming -of-age ceremony),请你给爸爸妈妈写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表达自己的感恩之情
2.说明理由
注意:
1.词数100 左右
2.可以适当增加
21.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第一中学校校考三模)假如你是李华,做为交换生刚从美国回来。你的寄宿家长Shameka在邮件中得知你上周参加了一次社区组织的义务劳动,她特别感兴趣。请你给她发一封邮件,内容如下:
1.介绍这次义务劳动;
2.谈谈你的感受;
3.字数120字左右。
参考词汇:义务劳动voluntary labor
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22.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考二模)假如你校将举行100周年校庆作品展,请你以你校英语报刊编辑的身份用英文写一则征集作品的短文,并告知同学们将其原创作品发送到邮箱lh6688@ 。内容包括:
1.作品主题:
2.作品形式:
3.截止日期。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
With the 100th anniversary of our school approaching,
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23.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考三模)假定你是李华,你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看英语戏剧表演。内容包括:
1. 表演内容
2. 表演时间、地点
3. 请准时到场,欢迎对表演提出意见。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:英语戏剧表演English Drama Show
Notice
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八、开放性作文
24.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考一模)假如你是李华,你班下周将举行主题为“What Difficulty or Frustration Means to Me”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点包括:
1.最近遇到的困难或挫折;
2.对困难或挫折的认识与应对方法;
3.对未来的期许。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
What Difficulty or Frustration Means to Me
Hello, everyone!
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That's all. Thank you.
25.(2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考一模)上周三,你和全校同学参加了学校在光明社区组织的以“劳动最光荣”为主题的志愿劳动。现请你为校英文报写一篇短文,介绍具体情况。要点如下:
1. 目的;
2. 过程;
3. 意义。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Working Is Most Beautiful
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26.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,10月27日下午,你校举办了一个二手书市活动,书市吸引了各个年级的同学们踊跃参加,请你为本次书市写一篇英文新闻报道。内容包括:
1.活动目的、时间和地点;
2.活动情况;
3.对本次活动的评价。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露学校名称;
4.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
The Second-hand Book Fair
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27.(2021·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考模拟预测)为庆祝建党 100 周年,你们班上星期四召开了“祖国在我心中”主题班会,请你用英语对班会作报导。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:建党 100 周年 the 100th anniversary of the CPC
九、读后续写
28.(2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨三中校考一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The familiar smell of garlic and onion filled the air as I opened my lunch bag to see what my mom had packed for me. On any other occasion, I would have been delighted to eat my mom’s pan-fried tofu: a Chinese dish that I often ate for dinner. But not today,the day a nice girl had invited me, the new girl at school, to sit with her friends during lunch.
“Charis, over here!”My new friend was waving her arms, trying to get my attention.
As I prepared to walk over to the table, memories of elementary and middle school lunch times resurfaced. I remembered my embarrassment as my friends would hold their noses when I brought homemade Chinese food. I remembered how my embarrassment shifted to anger when I complained about the smell to my mom.
I had argued with my mom that I wanted “normal” food for lunch. I remembered the look on my mom’s face, a mix between disappointment and confusion. But I was determined and she gave in. So for the remainder of middle school, my mom packed odorless(没有气味), non-Chinese food like ham and cheese sandwiches. However, that day, she was in a rush and packed me leftovers from dinner.
As soon as I got to my new lunch table, I tried to hide my lunch bag down under my seat. I sat quietly, trying not to be noticed when Katrina, a new acquaintance, asked where my food was. “I’m not really hungry,” I replied in an insecure voice. But Katrina had already seen me carry my lunch so she spoke out, “Then, I’ll eat it!” The other girls laughed-apparently Katrina was known to be a big eater.
I didn’t want to be rude to a potentially new friend, so I reluctantly dragged out my lunch bag. The moment I lifted the cover of my lunch container, I could practically taste the garlic and onion.
The girls, piqued(激起好奇心)by the smell in the air, all curiously looked at the oval-shaped container. I expected an “Ew” or a“What is that?”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had expected them to turn away-and turn me away before Katrina grabbed a small piece of tofu and enjoyed it.
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When I arrived home, my mom asked how my day went.
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参考答案:
1.Dear John,
Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.
To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn the latest news from home and abroad. In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school. Lastly, many students don’t have good learning methods, so if you can invite the outstanding students to share their learning experience, your program will come to the attention of students.
I hope my advice will be of help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生写一封建议信。为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
建议:suggestion→advice/propose/recommendation
最新的消息:the latest news→the up-to-date news
方法:method→means/way
而且:in addition→additionally/what’s more/furthermore
2.句式拓展:
同义句转换
原句:In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school.
拓展句:Additionally, it is advisable that ordinary students should be invited to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.(运用了现在分词作原因状语。)
【高分句型2】
To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn the latest news from home and abroad.(运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。)
2.Dear Kelly,
I know exactly how you feel. My mom was a smoker and I couldn't stand smelling the traces of cigarettes in her breath.
In my view, a direct and honest talk counts most. Firstly, not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members’ health but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking. Besides, we worked together to find solutions, such as chewing gums, doing exercise and so on. Eventually she quit altogether!
I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封回帖。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到名叫Kelly的中学生发帖寻求帮助。请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。写作要点:1.结合亲身经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题;2.给Kelly提出建议。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):smoker (吸烟者);stand doing sth.(忍受做某事);cigarettes(香烟);in one’s view(在某人看来);be worried about(担心);offer suggestion(提出建议);addiction to(成瘾);solutions(解决办法);such as(比如);personal experience(个人经历)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Firstly, not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members’ health but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking.运用倒装句;I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.be of +抽象名词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
3.范文
How to prevent myopia
Nowadays, there are more and more children suffering from myopia, which is mainly caused by excessive reading and close work. Over time this leads to permanent nearsightedness, even blindness. Here're some tips for us teenagers to prevent myopia.
First of all, allow the eyes to be rested. For example, after working for about 20 minutes, look away from one to two minutes, or close your eyes for 30 seconds to a minute. As reading when the distance changes continuously is harmful to the eyes, avoid reading books on vehicles. Since appropriate light holds the key to a good vision, always ensure a good light when reading or studying, even on daytime or nighttime. Finally, mind the gap from the eyes to the subjects when reading and writing. Only by doing these can we protect our eyes well.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生谈谈对如何预防近视的建议。
【详解】词汇积累
主要地:mainly→largely
引起:lead to→give rise to
预防:prevent→guard against
确保:ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here're some tips for us teenagers to prevent myopia.
拓展句:Here're some tips that can help us teenagers prevent myopia.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, there are more and more children suffering from myopia, which is mainly caused by excessive reading and close work. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As reading when the distance changes continuously is harmful to the eyes, avoid reading books on vehicles. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
4.Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming community activity themed traditional Chinese medicine, hardly can I wait to apply for the position.
Born into a doctor’s family of it, I have learned a lot about it. Not only can I explain the theory to the people, but also tell the stories behind it. Besides, what qualifies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty in communicating with others.
Additionally, with enthusiasm and responsibility, I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给所在的社区写封申请当志愿者的信件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
申请:apply for/ask for
有......天赋:have a talent/gift for
对......精通:be good at/have a good command of
坚信:firmly believe/ be convincing
合格的:eligible/qualified/worth the name
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: ...hardly can I wait to apply for the position.
.拓展句:... hardly can I wait to apply for the position which I think is of great honor.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming community activity themed traditional Chinese medicine, hardly can I wait to apply for the position.(运用了现在分词做状语和部分倒装)
[高分句型2]
Besides, what qualifies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty in communicating with others.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
5.范文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.
I'm a boy of eighteen years old from, a high school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other advantages. I'm especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others. I'm willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer. Thank you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给冬奥组委会写一封申请信,希望能成为一名志愿者。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1个人情况;
2自身优势;
3服务承诺
第二步:列提纲
spoken English; communicate with foreigners fluently;be fond of sports; be familiar with Beijing; be good at communication; be glad to help others; provide the best service;;be suitable for
第三步:连词成句
1. My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.
2. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
3. What’s more, I have other advantages.
4. I'm especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others.
5. I'm willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games.
6. Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.
7. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表并列补充关系:What is more
2.表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, I think I'm suitable for serving the Games.(运用省略连接词that的宾语从句以及高级短语be suitable for )
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to a volunteer.(运用it作形式宾语)
6.Dear Science Club members,
I’m Li Hua, an editor of the “Approaching Science” column of our school’s English newspaper. I’d like to invite you to write an article for the column.
The “Approaching Science” column, which is highly popular among us students, carries articles about hot science news and fun general knowledge about science. What is the most inspiring lately is the return of Shenzhou XIII. I’d appreciate it if you could write something about it. The content is expected to be about some detailed information on the return of Shenzhou XIII and its significance. 400 words would be fine. In addition, in order to make readers understand, please explain some possible technical terms in your article nicely and simply. You are supposed to submit your article to the mailbox: science@ by June 7.
Looking forward to your excellent work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以校英文报“走进科学”栏目编辑身份写信向科学社团成员约稿,具体包括栏目介绍、稿件要求、截止时间及投稿邮箱。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
非常:highly→ extremely/immensely
有趣的:fun→ interesting
鼓舞人心的:inspiring→ encouraging
详细的:detailed→ in detail
出色的:excellent→ superb
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, in order to make readers understand, please explain some possible technical terms in your article nicely and simply.
拓展句:In addition, please explain some possible technical terms in your article nicely and simply so that readers can understand.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The “Approaching Science” column, which is highly popular among us students, carries articles about hot science news and fun general knowledge about science.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What is the most inspiring lately is the return of Shenzhou XIII.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型3】I’m Li Hua, an editor of the “Approaching Science” column of our school’s English newspaper.(运用了同位语)
7.Dear Mr. Smith,
Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School requests the honour of your presence at the opening of Tech Art Festival on the twelfth of June. The event will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address and then it’s expected to last two hours.
Tech Art will run from the twelfth to the sixteenth of June and will feature the works of over one hundred of our students. Visitors will be able to see and experience a wide variety of artworks from 3D sculptures to artworks made out of phone and computer Parts.
We do hope you are able to join us at this event.
Please reply to confirm your attendance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Chairman of the Student Union
Heilong Jiang Provincial Experimental High School
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生向外国友人 John Smith 发出邀请,希望他来参加学校六月份举办的科技艺术节开幕式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求:request→require
开始:begin→start
各种各样的:a variety of=various
预计:expect→predict
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The event will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address and then it’s expected to last two hours.
拓展句:The event, which is expected to last two hours, will begin at School Hall at 6 pm with a welcome address.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Visitors will be able to see and experience a wide variety of artworks from 3D sculptures to artworks made out of phone and computer Parts. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Tech Art will run from the twelfth to the sixteenth of June, featuring the works of over one hundred of our students. (运用了现在分词作状语)
8.参考例文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help during the two-week summer camp.
During the training courses, you were always willing to help me patiently and give me hints on English learning. It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English. My oral English has improved dramatically since. Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.
My appreciation is beyond words. I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Smith写封邮件,感谢他在夏令营培训期间就学习技巧和文化拓展等方面给予的帮助。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时,少量一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾你得到的帮助以及收获;
3.祝福和期待。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
express sincere gratitude to; be willing to help; encourage sb to do; have a better understanding of; show sb around; in return; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help during the two-week summer camp.
2. During the training courses, you were always willing to help me patiently and give me hints on English learning.
3. Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.
4. I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness.
5. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly, Secondly, In the end(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:Also, and
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English.(强调句)
[高分句型2] Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.(from which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in return for your kindness.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9.Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. I’m writing to give you some advice.
Personally, I think the following two things are a good choice: Qipao and the Chinese knots. Qipao, which is regarded as the symbol of traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am convinced that your mother will look elegant in it and like it very much. Besides, I strongly recommend that you buy the Chinese knots, which are usually hung in the sitting room or cars to represent good luck.
If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask. Please give my best regards to your family and wish you a pleasant vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mark写一封信,向他推荐一份适合送给他妈妈的、具有中国文化特色的礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
礼物:gift→present
建议:advice→suggestion
相信:be convinced→be sure
犹豫:hesitate→hang back
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Personally, I think the following two things are a good choice: Qipao and the Chinese knots.
拓展句:In my opinion, I think Qipao and the Chinese knots are a good choice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,从句中运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
10.Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear you are planning to start a school club at your school. I’m writing to offer some suggestions as you requested in your last letter.
In my opinion, a Chinese painting club would be a good choice. My reasons are as follows. For one thing, Chinese painting is a form of art with a long history, which stands for the civilization of ancient China. For another, the club may appeal to many students, because there is no language barrier when it comes to the appreciation and creation of art.
I hope my advice will be of help to you and I wish you every success in the process of starting and running the club. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封邮件,对于他计划在学校组织一个有关中国传统文化的社团一事提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
在我看来:in my opinion→from the point of my view
代表:stand for→represent
吸引:appeal to→attract
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, a Chinese painting club would be a good choice.
拓展句:I think that a Chinese painting club would be a good choice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For one thing, Chinese painting is a form of art with a long history, which stands for the civilization of ancient China.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For another, the club may appeal to many students, because there is no language barrier when it comes to the appreciation and creation of art.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
11. Notice
In order to promote the traditional Chinese culture and encourage students read more Chinese classics, the Student Union is to hold a Chinese Classics Reciting Contest in the lecture hall on the afternoon of April 10.
It is a great opportunity to show your talents. You are expected to recite Chinese classics individually or in a group. Teachers and experts will be invited to be the judges. The top three winners will be awarded.
Those who are interested in the competition please sign up at Room 501 of the Art Building by February 25. Join us and have fun.
The Students’ Union
February 15, 2023
【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校将于下个月举办中国经典诵读大赛(Chinese Classics Reciting Contest),你受学生会委托写一则通知。内容包括:1.活动时间地点;2.参赛形式;3.报名截止日期。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→host
机会:opportunity→chance
天赋:talent→gift
对……感兴趣:be interested in→be keen on
2.举行拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to promote the traditional Chinese culture and encourage students read more Chinese classics, the Student Union is to hold a Chinese Classics Reciting Contest in the lecture hall on the afternoon of April 10.
拓展句: The Student Union is to hold a Chinese Classics Reciting Contest in the lecture hall on the afternoon of April 10, whose aim is to promote the traditional Chinese culture and encourage students read more Chinese classics.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Those who are interested in the competition please sign up at Room 501 of the Art Building by February 25.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It is a great opportunity to show your talents.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
12.Dear fellow students,
As we all know, hard work is the traditional virtue of Chinese nation. As students, we should inherit the virtue, which means that we should actively participate in all kinds of work at home and school and get into the habit of loving labor.
It is good for us to do some labor at home and school. At first, we can keep healthy and strong when we do some labor. Besides, doing some housework at home can share your parents’ work. Meanwhile, if you do more labor in school, you will set a good example for your classmates.
Since doing some labor has so many advantages, let’s take action.
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参加家庭、学校的各项劳动,养成热爱劳动的好习惯。要点如下:说明劳动的意义;提出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
各种各样的:all kinds of→a variety of
此外:besides→in addition
好处:advantages→benefits
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, doing some housework at home can share your parents’ work.
拓展句:Besides, doing some housework at home can share your parents’ work, which can make them happy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As students, we should inherit the virtue, which means that we should actively participate in all kinds of work at home and school and get into the habit of loving labor.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] At first, we can keep healthy and strong when we do some labor. (运用了when引导的状语从句)
13.Dear students,
Recently, environmental protection has become a crucial issue, which draws much attention of the public. Next Friday our school will hold an activity about environmental protection.
One effective method recommended is to transform the way of travelling around. Make public vehicles your prior choice of transportation. It not only exerts positive effects on the environment, but also gives you much convenience. Furthermore, saving electricity as well as water is another small action which makes a great difference. It reduces the waste of resources, contributing to the sustainability of the society. Last but not least, try to use environment-friendly shopping bags when purchasing in the market in order to avoid plastic pollution.
Living a low-carbon life can be beneficial to the society, so join in this activity and take action from now on to make the world a better place.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇倡议书,倡议学生参加环境保护志愿活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定性的:crucial →critical
活动:activity → movement
而且:Furthermore →Moreover
导致:contribute to→ lead to
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:Next Friday our school will hold an activity about environmental protection.
拓展句:There will be an activity about environmental protection in our school next Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, environmental protection has become a crucial issue, which draws much attention of the public.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Living a low-carbon life can be beneficial to the society, so join in this activity and take action from now on to make the world a better place.(运用了动名词作主语和不定式作目的状语)
14.Dear Jack,
How is everything going In order to make the students in your school have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture, our school is going to donate a large number of books to your school.
As is known to all, we have a rich traditional culture that covers a diversity of topics. Therefore, we have been carefully choosing books that are most typical and cater for us teenagers. After heated discussions, we have agreed that books about traditional Chinese festivals, food and costumes are likely to be what you show great interest in.
There are many detailed information that we need to discuss about the donation, such as the time and way to deliver the books. So I hope you can write me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给英国朋友Jack就读的学校赠送一批关于中国传统文化的书籍的相关细节写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:known →famous
丰富的: rich → abundant
各种各样的:a diversity of → various/a variety of
满足:cater for→satisfy/meet
喜欢:be fond of→ enjoy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Knowing you are fond of seeing films, I want to invite you to go to the movies this weekend.
拓展句:Because I know you are fond of seeing films, I want to invite you to go to the movies this weekend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, we have a rich traditional culture that covers a diversity of topics.(运用了as引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】After heated discussions, we have agreed that books about traditional Chinese festivals, food and costumes are likely to be what you show great interest in.(运用了that引导宾语从句以及what引导的表语从句)
15.Dear fellow students,
Recently, it has been common that many of us keep drifting away or even fall asleep in class. I think the main reason is that many students stay up late for various reasons, such as unfinished assignments, drinking too much coffee or being addicted to digital devices. Lack of sleep has several side effects. It not only reduces our learning efficiency, but also weakens our immune system. Our health will be harmed seriously, and so it is with our sleep and energy cycles.
Adjust our schedule, take physical exercise, rest regularly, keep away from digital devices before sleep, and make better use of our time in class. All of these contribute to a healthy life and high efficiency in study.
Let’s take action from now on.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生就同学们在上课时有睡觉的现象写一封倡议书,倡议大家规律作息,摒弃不良习惯。
【详解】1.词汇积累
近来:recently→lately
各种各样的:various→a variety of
……也一样:so it is with→it is the same with
好好利用:make better use of→make full use of/make the best of
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:It not only reduces our learning efficiency, but also weakens our immune system.
拓展句:Not only does it reduce our learning efficiency, but it also weakens our immune system.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, it has been common that many of us keep drifting away or even fall asleep in class. (运用it担当形式主语,真正的主语为that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】I think the main reason is that many students stay up late for various reasons, such as unfinished assignments, drinking too much coffee or being addicted to digital devices. (运用了宾语从句和表语从句)
16.Friendship plays an important role in my unforgettable high school life. Lucy, one of my close friends, is an energetic girl of medium height with a pair of big eyes, which are always full of warmth. She is outgoing and easy to get along with, making her so popular among our class.
It was her kindness and enthusiasm that left me a deep impression on our first day in high school. Unfamiliar with the new class, I had my lunch alone in the corner of our classroom. Lucy happened to see that and she came over, introducing herself with a big smile. She accompanied me all through the lunch, chatting and laughing, which brightened my uneasy first day.
Although I’m going to part from my dear friend, our friendship will last forever.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生回顾过去三年与朋友之间的美好回忆,介绍一位好朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:important→significant
精力充沛的:energetic→ full of energy
充满:be full of→ be filled with
独自的:alone→ unaccompanied
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:She is outgoing and easy to get along with, making her so popular among our class.
拓展句:She is so outgoing and easy to get along with that she is so popular among our class.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lucy, one of my close friends, is an energetic girl of medium height with a pair of big eyes, which are always full of warmth. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was her kindness and enthusiasm that left me a deep impression on our first day in high school. (运用了强调句型)
[高分句型3] She accompanied me all through the lunch, chatting and laughing, which brightened my uneasy first day.(运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
17.Dear Tom,
I am highly grateful for your concern about my country santi-poverty, which is considered a
wonder.I happened to spend the Spring Festival living in my grandpa’s home, which is surrounded
with mountains. In the past the people there were so poor that it was not easy to get enough food
to feed themselves, let alone beautiful clothing and spacious buildings. Some teens were forced to
drop out of schoolto go out working in cities.
Now with the help of the government and all the people from the rich areas, all of them have
gotten out of absolute poverty. Every family lives in newly-built flats, even some of them
owning cars. Children can enjoy free education, and the elderly are provided with free access
to free health care.
I hope you can visit our country and feel the great changes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国笔友Tom 一封邮件,讲述中国政府和人民在脱贫攻坚战中取得的胜利。
【详解】词汇积累
喂养:feed→raise
宽敞的:spacious→roomy
拥有:own→possess
免费的:free→without charge
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:
Now with the help of the government and all the people from the rich areas, all of them have gotten out of absolute poverty.
拓展句:Now with the help of the government and all the people from the rich areas, people have become rich, all of whom have gotten out of absolute poverty.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am highly grateful for your concern about my country santi-poverty, which is considered a wonder. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]In the past the people there were so poor that it was not easy to get enough food to feed themselves, let alone beautiful clothing and spacious buildings. (运用了so…that引导的状语语从句)
18.Nowadays after-class activities are becoming increasingly popular in our school, which enrich our life so greatly that many students take part in these activities.
A variety of after-class activities, such as martial arts and Chinese calligraphy, are being held in our school, among which the English radio program is my favourite. I believe through this activity I can not only make some new friends but also become more confident and improve my spoken English, thus helping me achieve success---to be an English news announcer in the future. So far, I have made great progress.
In a word, these activities can bring us joy and get us relaxed. So I hope more students can join in these activities.
【分析】这是一篇说明文。要求考生给学校英语报“Campus”栏目投稿,介绍学校最近开展的课外活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
各种各样的:different kinds of→a variety of
英语口语:oral English→spoken English
实现:accomplish→achieve
快乐:pleasure→joy
2.句型拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句:In a word, these activities can bring us joy and get us relaxed.
拓展句:In a word, not only can these activities bring us joy but also get us relaxed.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Nowadays after-class activities are becoming increasingly popular in our school, which enrich our life so greatly that many students take part in these activities.(句中使用which引导非限制性定语从句,和so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
A variety of after-class activities, such as martial arts and Chinese calligraphy, are being held in our school, among which the English radio program is my favourite. (句中使用which引导非限制性定语从句)
19.One possible version:
Dear friends,
Nowadays, more and more students devote all the spare time to studying due to heavy school work and lack physical exercise, which has a bad impact on our health. In order to promote our awareness of health and relieve us of the stress, we had better do as follows.
First, running in the early morning will make a big difference. Not only does it build up our body but also enables our brain to function well. Additionally, taking an active part in various sports ranging from playing basketball to kicking shuttlecock will both make us stronger and more energetic. Most importantly, we should take an active part in the morning exercise and P.E classes, where we can exercise ourselves under direction.
As we know, we have nothing without health. So let’s take action from now on, for ourselves, for our country!
Student Union
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生围绕“Sports and Study”这一主题,在校英文报上倡议大家要在学习之余,加强体育锻炼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于:because of→due to
为了:so as to→in order to
起作用:work→ function
此外:moreover=additionally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, taking an active part in various sports ranging from playing basketball to kicking shuttlecock will both make us stronger and more energetic.
拓展句:Additionally, taking an active part in various sports which range from playing basketball to kicking shuttlecock will both make us stronger and more energetic.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, more and more students devote all the spare time to studying due to heavy school work and lack physical exercise, which has a bad impact on our health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only does it build up our body but also enables our brain to function well. (not only位于句首,句子用部分倒装结构)
20.Dear Mum and Dad,
Today, the coming-of-age ceremony in our school reminds me that I’m an adult now and I cannot help expressing my thanks to both of you.
Thanks for your unconditional love all these years. Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need help, you are always there to support me and encourage me. Thanks for your undying patience and teaching that have made me a better person. You are and you will always be the most important persons in my life.
Thanks again for your love and support, forever!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给爸爸妈妈写一封电子邮件,表达自己的感恩之情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提醒:remind sb. of/suggest/give sb. an indication
情不自禁:cannot control one's feeling/let onself go/in slite of oneself
遇到困难:encounter/come across/meet difficulty
支持:support/stand by/ give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thanks for your unconditional love all these years.
拓展句:Thanks for your unconditional love all these years, which gives me lots of encouragement and inspiration, and I will cherish forever.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Today, the coming-of-age ceremony in our school reminds me that I’m an adult now and I cannot help expressing my thanks to both of you.(运用了宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need help, you are always there to support me and encourage me.(运用了wherever引导的让步状语从句)
21.版本 1:
Dear Shameka,
Glad to tell you about the voluntary labour I took part in at our community last weekend.
For the purpose of creating a healthy environment at the time of pandemic, our community arranged a time last weekend for voluntary labour at the nearby nursing home. People of different ages and status joined each other cleaning rooms, washing clothes and pasteurizing(消 毒)whatever might hide bacteria or viruses. In order to get those who prefer to stay indoors out to get comfortable in the sunshine, some young kids creatively put on a performance in the yard, filling the nursing home with joy and laughter.
To participate in voluntary work is not only a kind act, but also makes good sense , for it both helps the old and educates the young.
Yours,
Li Hua
版本 2:
Dear Shameka,
Delighted to know that you are interested in our voluntary work last weekend and here are what we did.
We went to the nursing home to help clean the environment, which is helpful to keep the old away from the virus at the time pandemic. Many people from our community participated in it, some cleaning the room, others washing clothes. I volunteered to do the windows. It might be the hardest job for the day, but I finished it perfectly. Hours passed, our joyous effort paid off. The whole nursing home looked shiny clean and smiles crawled on everyone's face.
Voluntary job is necessary on the part of both the old in need, and those who need to help. Anyway, I believe all work and no pay is a way to joy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给寄宿家长Shameka发一封邮件,介绍上周参加的一次社区组织的义务劳动。
【详解】词汇积累
参加:take part in/participate in→join in
附近的:nearby→neighbouring
欢乐:joy→happiness
工作:work→job
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I volunteered to do the windows. It might be the hardest job for the day, but I finished it perfectly.
拓展句:I volunteered to do the windows, which might be the hardest job for the day, but I finished it perfectly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We went to the nursing home to help clean the environment, which is helpful to keep the old away from the virus at the time pandemic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In order to get those who prefer to stay indoors out to get comfortable in the sunshine, some young kids creatively put on a performance in the yard, filling the nursing home with joy and laughter.(动词不定式做目的状语以及现在分词作状语)
22.With the 100th anniversary of our school approaching, we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor. We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday.
We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you. Besides, you can write Chinese poems, sharing your sweet experiences of school life. Paintings are also preferred. Whatever your works are, they will show your talents on such a special occasion. More importantly, it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life.
Please send in your works before January 30th to the mailbox, lh6688@ .
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生校英语报刊编辑的身份用英文写一则征集作品的短文,目的是为了举行100周年校庆作品展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
给……留下深刻印象:leave a deep impression on sb.→be stuck with
天赋:talent→gift
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the 100th anniversary of our school approaching, we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor.
拓展句:As the 100th anniversary of our school approaches, we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you.(which引导定语从句)
23. Notice
In order to enrich our campus life and enhance our English level, the Students Union plans to hold English Drama Show in the Science Hall at 3p.m. next Friday. The members of English Drama Club will perform the highlights of Macbeth and King Lear, which are the masterpieces of Shakespeare as well as the treasure of English literature. This is a chance to appreciate the classics and pay tribute to literary giants. All students are welcome to join us. Please be punctual and your advice or suggestions will be highly appreciated.
Let's explore the world of art and literature together! Looking forward to your active participation.
【分析】本文为应用文。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看英语戏剧表演。内容包括:表演内容;表演时间、地点;最后要请大家准时到场,并欢迎对表演提出意见。
【详解】本文为通知。第一部分为通知的目的。如本文为请大家观看英语戏剧表演;第二部分通知的内容。如本文包括表演内容;表演时间、地点等。第三部分即注意事项。请大家准时到场,并欢迎对表演提出意见。本文为通知,其主要特点是用词尽可能简洁明了,句子不要太复杂。通常只需要用一段话讲清其内容即可。通知的开头和结尾通常都有一定的固定的套语。时态以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态,简单句。
【点睛】本文内容完整,文章自然、流畅,恰当使用一些高级词汇如,如enrich our campus life; enhance our English level; as well as; This is a chance to do...; pay tribute to; be punctual; explore the world of art and literature等。文章主动与被动结合,句式以简单句为主,即使是复合句也是较为简单的复合句,如动词不定式作目的状语,如In order to enrich our campus life and enhance our English level;由which引导的非限制性定语从句which are the masterpieces of Shakespeare as well as the treasure of English literature;祈使句如Let's explore the world of art and literature together等这些较高级词汇以及句式的运用,使文章清晰易懂,有条理,增加了文章的档次。
24.What Difficulty or Frustration Means to Me
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to make a speech here. Honestly speaking, I performed badly in the latest exams. Sad as I was, I’ve come to understand that the frustration is an opportunity for me.
Personally, frustration contributes to further success. To begin with, frustration is a mirror of my problems, and the relevant knowledge and skills I’m short of stand out. Thus, a schedule to solve them forms shortly. The more advances I’ve made, the fewer problems I’ll be confronted with. Consequently, I’ll move on with a sense of achievement and tremendous confidence.
In short, frustration is well received to me. I hope a hit is waiting for me there.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇英语演讲比赛的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
糟糕地:badly→terribly
首先:to begin with→first of all
相关的:relevant→concerned
极大的:tremendous→great
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thus, a schedule to solve them forms shortly.
拓展句:Thus, a schedule to solve them forms shortly, which can do a lot of good to me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sad as I was, I’ve come to understand that the frustration is an opportunity for me.(运用了as引起的倒装句式)
【高分句型2】The more advances I’ve made, the fewer problems I'll be confronted with.(运用了the+比较级,the+比较级的句式)
25.参考例文:
Working Is Most Beautiful
To advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution, our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday.
Each class worked as a group and undertook different tasks such as weeding the flower beds, painting the walls, cleaning the windows in the neighborhoods, and so on. Besides, some students helped the disabled do some repairs, making them live comfortably. Everyone in the community spoke highly of us.
In the course of voluntary work we students experienced much and understood more. Making contributions to society and volunteering to serve the people can benefit us and inspire us to serve our country heart and soul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生为校英文报写一篇短文,介绍你和全校同学参加的学校在光明社区组织的以“劳动最光荣”为主题的志愿劳动的具体情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
承担:undertake→bear
另外:besides→moreover
过程:course→process
高度评价:speak highly of→think highly of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution, our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday.
拓展句:Our school organized all the students to help in Guangming Community last Wednesday, whose purpose was to advocate the spirit of social service and voluntary contribution.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, some students helped the disabled do some repairs, making them live comfortably.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Making contributions to society and volunteering to serve the people can benefit us and inspire us to serve our country heart and soul.(运用了动名词作主语)
26.参考例文:
The Second-hand Book Fair
Aimed at providing a platform where students ca