吉林省长春市三年（2021-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（有答案）

吉林省长春市三年（2021-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。内容包括：
(1)肯定他的做法；
(2)具体的建议；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·吉林长春·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛，写信征求你的意见。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示支持；
2. 对此项运动的理解；
3. 给出建议。
参考词汇：cross-country running race越野赛
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2021·吉林长春·长春市第二十九中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是一位高中生。iPad已经成为你们中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐，阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容要包括以下要点：
1. 积极因素；
2. 负面影响；
3. 看法建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student, named Li Hua.
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4．（2021·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）高考在即，很多同学出现睡眠问题。请你代表学校英语社团用英文写一封倡议书，呼吁大家健康作息，高质量备考。要点包括：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 倡议内容；
3. 发出呼吁。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
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二、申请信
5．（2022·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英文校刊正招募编辑，请写一封信申请该职位，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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三、邀请信
6．（2022·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是你校英语辩论组的成员。你们小组计划在一个月后举行一次关于“如何看待数字产品（digital devices）”的英语辩论赛。你打算邀请你班的外教Smith先生担任评委。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）辩论赛的时间、地点；
（2）参加此次活动的意义；
（3）期待回复。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2022·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）北京冬奥会圆满闭幕，中国青少年掀起了学滑雪的热潮。假设你校要组建一个滑雪社团，作为校学生会主席，请你代表学校给本校的国际交流生Chris写封邮件发出邀请，
内容包括：
1.活动的目的和意义；
2.报名的时间和方式。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
8．（2022·吉林长春·长春市第十七中学校考模拟预测）假如你是英国运动员 Adam，参加了 2022 年北京冬奥会。期间，志愿者们热情好客、乐于奉献，营造出了和谐、团结、温馨的氛围，你深受感动，特向志愿者服务站写信表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
A special “thanks” goes to all the volunteers for the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Adam
9．（2022·吉林长春·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，听说英国朋友John所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.祝贺获奖；
2.肯定付出；
3.期待见面交流。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、告知信/通知
10．（2023·吉林长春·长春市第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办以“中国航天”为主题的绘画展。请你写一则书面通知征集作品。内容包括：
1.绘画展的目的;
2.作品要求;
3.交稿地点及截止日期。参考词汇：航天 aerospace
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The Students’ Union
六、其他应用文
11．（2022·吉林长春·长春吉大附中实验学校校考模拟预测）假设你是李响，曾在澳洲交换留学一年。你的外教Melinda在暑假想来你的家乡旅游，希望了解你家乡的情况。请你给她回一封电子邮件，介绍你所在的城市“长春”。
要点如下：
1.表达欢迎；
2.介绍城市(地理位置、历史文化或旅游景点)；
3.表达期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Melinda,
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Yours,
Li Xiang
12．（2022·吉林长春·统考一模）随着知识经济的发展，我们的社会越来越需要“全能型人才”。假设你是李华，学校英文社团请你写一封倡议书，主题为“To Be an All-round Student”。
写作要点：1. 提出倡议的背景；2. 倡议的内容；3. 提出呼吁。
参考词汇：all-round talents全能型人才
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式作答。
To Be an All-round Student
Dear boys and girls,
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The English Club
13．（2022·吉林长春·长春市实验中学校考模拟预测）假如你是学校国际部英文网页的负责人，你校下周将举办“难忘母校”绘画作品展。请你根据以下要点写一则观展通知：
1. 具体的时间、地点；
2. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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School International Office
14．（2022·吉林长春·校联考三模）目前,全国很多高中都在课后开展阳光体育活动（Sunshine sports）。请你给校英文报写一篇短文分享你对高中开展阳光体育活动的看法。要点包括：
1.阳光体育的内容（gymnastics, Tai Chi, running exercises 等）;
2.活动的好处；
3.支持开展此活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．（2021·吉林长春·东北师大附中校考模拟预测）百度百科打算创建英文版的百度人物词条，请你结合以下信息，为袁隆平编写词条。
要点如下：
姓名：袁隆平
职业：科学家
出生：1930年， 北京
毕业院校：西南农学院
爱好：听音乐，游泳
生活态度：生活简朴，淡泊名利
主要成就：
（1）提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿
（2）杂交水稻之父
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
西南农学院Southwest Agricultural College；
杂交水稻之父Father of Hybrid Rice
16．（2020·吉林长春·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以A role model to learn from为题，写一篇短文参赛。
1. 榜样的优秀品质；
2. 获得的启示。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
A role model to learn from
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17．（2021·吉林长春·统考三模）上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
参考词汇：红星社区Hongxing Community
My Weekend
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18．（2021·吉林长春·统考二模）假定你是李华，请写信告诉你的英国留学生同学Chris参加学校一年一度的机器人比 赛Robot Battles,今年的比赛因故线上进行，内容包括：
1.时间、参与方式；
2.赛事简介；
3.表达期待。
注意：
1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
七、开放性作文
19．（2022·吉林长春·东北师大附中校考模拟预测）近来，劳动教育被纳入义务教育课程，此举引发了热烈讨论。一些人认为劳动可以促进学生全面发展，另一些人则认为学生忙于功课，劳动占用学习时间。为此，你校校报英语专栏发起征文活动，请你以“Labor Education”为题，简要总结正反两方观点，并提出自己的看法。
注意：1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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八、读后续写
20．（2023·吉林长春·长春市第二中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When my husband Randy died in late fall, deciding what to do with his garden was way down on the list of necessary tasks. During the first few months, I cried with our daughters, planned a memorial, cried with my family, celebrated a quiet Thanksgiving, and panicked over not having bought Christmas presents.
As the calendar turned to a new year, the often rainy days and long nights deepened my sorrow. I found myself exhausted at the end of February, both physically and mentally.
Then the daffodils bloomed (开花) in the garden.
Years before, Randy had planted dozens of these lemon-yellow flowers. To him, they served as a reminder of hope, a promise that light and warmth would soon replace cold and dark. Looking at those dauffodils, I thought about how Randy had considered our garden a living work of art, carefully choosing plants so we’d see new blooms every month.
Then I noticed all the weeds that had taken root and spread everywhere. The neglect (疏于打理) showed, for Randy’s illness had lasted a couple of years, a time when he didn’t have energy for yard work the way he had before.
Faced with the neglected garden, I felt overwhelmed in the beginning. My daughters suggested I hire a service to clean everything up. I didn’t respond.
Every time I sat in the garden alone, the memories of the lively garden came flooding, like the numerous scenes in an unforgettable film. Many days Randy came home from work, changed into old clothes, and headed out the door to mow or prune (修剪). Orange dragonflies followed him around the yard as he worked. Honeybees buzzed among the flowers, birds sang beautiful songs, and gentle breezes carried the sweet smell of dirt. No matter how cold or wet it was, the fresh air and physical activity made him energized and refreshed. For Randy, the work was quiet and comforting, which was a relief, as well as a pleasure.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The days grew warmer and lighter, and I started the work myself.
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Weeks later, my daughters returned to visit me.
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21．（2022·吉林长春·长春吉大附中实验学校校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was turning ten in the summer of 1995. On a warm evening while at dinner table, my mom announced we were taking a trip to Niagara Falls when summer vacation started so that we could celebrate my birthday there.
It all sounded incredibly good until mom said we would be driving to Canada. As was often the case, my dad would do all the driving when my mom managed the directions. But dad often took wrong turns along the way and mom would not stop complaining.
It wasn’t all that I didn’t like the car rides. I looked over at my 6-year-old sister, Marlene. She giggled at me and rolled her eyes. Driving in the car meant I’d share the back seat with my sister, who would never stop making noise unless she was asleep.
“Hey, can we take a plane there instead ” I asked between mouthfuls of hamburger and French fries. Sometimes, when dad had a day off from work, we would drive out to Idlewild Airport to watch the planes take off and land. I always hoped that one day I could get to sit in my own seat on one of those planes. It would be so cool to get high up the beautiful sky.
“Sorry honey, maybe next time.” my mother replied as she and my father exchanged glances. I turned to my sister, hoping she would say she wanted to get on a plane too, but she simply stuck her tongue out at me and giggled again.
Don’t they get it I was in desperate need of a plane ride, and I needed something cool to talk about with my friends when we got home. “Sitting in the back seat of the car sucks.” I blurted (脱口而出) out.
“Jay!” My mom shouted. “Watch your mouth!”
“OK, sorry, but I really want to go by plane.”
“This conversation is over.” My dad growled. “Finish your eating and go to your room.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car.
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I was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport.
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22．（2022·吉林长春·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Magen double-checked the words on her spelling test. If she got 100 percent today, she’d win her class’ First-Quarter Spelling Challenge and a brand-new dictionary that came with videos and other cool stuff. Plus, Ms. McCormack had promised to do a handstand (手倒立) if anyone got a perfect score.
Three more words to go. N-i-c-e-l-y. Q-u-i-c-k-l-y. H-o-n-e-s-t-y. Wait! She’d spelled honesty, not honestly! She erased ‘-ty’ and wrote ‘-ly’ before handing in her paper. Ms. McCormack graded the papers while the students were at rest.
After a break, Magen hurried into the classroom, sitting in her seat nervously—Ms. McCormack walked to the front of the room and cleared her throat. “Congratulations, Magen! You did it!” Then, as if she were an Olympic gymnast, Ms. McCormack’s feet flipped into the air. The whole class erupted!
Ms. McCormack presented Magen with her prize. A big smile spread across Magen’s face as she read the label on the box: To Magen Carter, for her perfect first-quarter score in spelling.
“Everything OK ” Mom asked as Magen burst through the front door after school.
“Everything’s perfect!” Magen shouted, showing Mom her spelling test and prize.
Mom hugged her. “Well done, Magen”
Magen scooped up (抱起) her cat. “Can you spell nicely, Casper And quickly and honestly, and…” It suddenly occurred to her that she had misspelled the word. Rooted to the spot, Magen reflected on how she could tell the whole class she shouldn’t have earned the prize at all. She dashed into her room and pulled out the test paper. “If I put the missing ‘t’ back in, no one would ever know,” she thought. Recalling the joyful moment, a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.
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The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing to give you some advice.
Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.
Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
就我而言：personally→as far as I’m concerned
选择：choice→option
代表：represent→stand for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman.
拓展句：Qipao, which is a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Jack,
I’m very delighted to know that you are going to take part in the cross-country running race held annually in your school. I’m proud of you and admire you so much.
Long-distance running benefits us a lot. Not only can it build up our body but it can also strengthen our will. Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation,which are essential qualities in our future success.
To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it.Also, there is no doubt that you should take enough nutritious food and valuable instructions from your coach.
Go for it and wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jack准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛，写信征求你的意见，要求考生按照题目要求给他回信，给出适当的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累参加：take part in→ participate in
获得：obtain→ gain/get
基本的：essential→ basic
宝贵的：valuable→ precious/worthwhile
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it.
拓展句：It’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it if you want to make it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation,which are essential qualities in our future success.(运用了动名词作主语，which引导非限定性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Also, there is no doubt that you should take enough nutritious food and valuable instructions from your coach.(运用了固定句型there is no doubt that，that引导同位语从句。)
3．Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it's fashionable for young students to have iPads. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them. Obviously, it's of great help with our studies, especially with our English listening skills.
Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom listening to music with earphones, and some even playing video games, which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.
In my opinion, the classroom is a place to study, and concentration is terribly needed. Therefore, we should make good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons. Meanwhile, schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。写作要点包括：积极因素；负面影响；看法和建议三个方面。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
当今：at the moment→Nowadays
有帮助的：beneficial/helpful→of great help
生气的：cross/mad→annoyed
就我而言：as far as I'm concerned=In my opinion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, the classroom is a place to study, and concentration is terribly needed.
拓展句：In my opinion, the classroom is a place where concentration is terribly needed when it is to study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them.(运用了非谓语动词)
[高分句型2] and some even playing video games, which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear schoolmates，
With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. As a member of English club, I propose we should develop a healthy lifestyle and prepare for exams efficiently.
No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. In order to ease the situation, it is suggested that we should make a regular and reasonable study timetable. Besides, remember to keep away from digital devices before sleep.
Take action now and you won’t regret it. Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
English Club
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就健康作息，高质量备考对大家发出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
靠近：approach→draw near
关注：focus on→concentrate on
建议：suggest→recommend
许多：a lot of→plenty of
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Wish all of you sweet dreams and big success in the coming exams!
拓展句：May you realize sweet dreams and achieve big success in the coming exams!
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the College Entrance Examination approaching, a lot of students have got sleep problems. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] No one can deny the fact that we can’t focus on study in the class when we don’t have enough sleep, which is also harmful to our health. (运用了that引导的同位语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to apply for the job as an editor of our school magazine which I think I’m quite qualified for.
First of all, I am fond of writing and it’s an important part of my life. I read and write on a regular basis. Meanwhile, I’m also responsible for my job and undoubtedly I’ll strive to take every task assigned to me seriously. Furthermore, I’m a fast learner and I’m good at communicating with others, enabling me to be more cooperative and efficient at work.
I truly hope that you can take my application into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生学校英文校刊正招募编辑，要求考生写一封信申请该职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
工作：job→work
喜欢：be fond of→ enjoy
与此同时：meanwhile→at the same time
此外：furthermore=in addition=besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Furthermore, I’m a fast learner and I’m good at communicating with others, enabling me to be more cooperative and efficient at work.
拓展句：Furthermore, I’m a fast learner and I’m good at communicating with others, which enables me to be more cooperative and efficient at work.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to apply for the job as an editor of our school magazine which I think I’m quite qualified for. （运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I truly hope that you can take my application into consideration and look forward to your reply. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
6．Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a member of our school’s English debate group. Our group plans to hold an English debate on how to view Digital Devices in one month . So I am writing to invite you to be the judge for the coming debate.
Organised by our school , the debate will be held in the school Conference Hall on May 16th, which will start at 9:00 am and last till 11:00am. Present at the debate will be 2 headmasters of the school and some English teachers and students. I believe the significance of attending the activity will be of great benefit. Not only can you promote the language ability, the ability to respond to emergencies on the spot, but also you can boost your the team spirit and exercise the psychological quality.
I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Smith先生写一封信邀请他担任学校组织的关于“如何看待数字产品（digital devices）”的英语辩论赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大有益处：be of great benefit→be very beneficial
重要性：significance→meaning
当场，在现场：on the spot→on the ground
提高：boost→facilitate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our group plans to hold an English debate on how to view Digital Devices in one month .
拓展句：Our group plans to hold an English debate whose topic is about how to view Digital Devices in one month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Organised by our school , the debate will be held in the school Conference Hall on May 16th, which will start at 9:00 am and last till 11:00am.(使用了分词短语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Not only can you promote the language ability, the ability to respond to emergencies on the spot, but also you can boost your the team spirit and exercise the psychological quality.(使用了部分倒装。)
7．Dear Chris,
After seeing the excellent performances of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic Games, Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing. Therefore, our school is planning to form a ski club, whose aim is to help keen skiers learn skiing. I am writing to invite you to join the ski club.
The club will organize training courses to teach basic and advanced skiing skills. If interested, you can visit our school website and sign up online or come to the Student Union Office at Room 101 to fill out a paper application before next Sunday.
Looking forward to your joining.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际交流生Chris写一封邀请信，邀请他参加滑雪社团。
【详解】1.词汇积累
精彩的：excellent→marvellous
因此：Therefore → Hence/So
组建：form→set up
安排：organize→ arrange
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After seeing the excellent performance of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic Games, Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing.
拓展句：After they saw the excellent performance of athletes in the Beijing Winter Olympic Games, Chinese teenagers set off an upsurge of learning skiing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Therefore, our school is planning to form a ski club, whose aim is to help keen skiers learn skiing.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If interested, you can visit our school website and sign up online or come to the Student Union Office at Room 101 to fill out a paper application before next Sunday.（运用了状语从句的省略）
8．Dear Sir/ Madam,
A special “thanks” goes to all the volunteers for the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care when I took part in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, without which I couldn’t have performed so well.
The very first moment I arrived, I was greeted with your smiling eyes. The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, leaving me everlasting memories. I was also impressed by your hospitality, your devotion and the harmonious atmosphere you created during my stay there.
Thanks again for your kind help and I’m sincerely looking forward to going back to China in the near future. All the best wishes for you!
Yours faithfully,
Adam
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生以英国运动员 Adam的身份，向2022年北京冬奥会志愿者服务站写信表示感谢，感谢志愿者们热情好客、乐于奉献，营造出了和谐、团结、温馨的氛围。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→ appreciation/thankfulness
一……就：the moment → as soon as
真诚地：sincerely → genuinely
体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, leaving me everlasting memories.
拓展句：The comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your considerate company all made me feel at home, which left me everlasting memories.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care when I took part in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, without which I couldn’t have performed so well.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]The very first moment I arrived, I was greeted with your smiling eyes.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句）
9．Dear John,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the basketball competition. As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.
As you told me before, there were serveal outstanding basketball teams competing in this basketball game, and it’s really hard to win this game. However, you made it at last. You and your team members must have made great efforts to practise playing basketball. Your passion for basketball sometimes exceeds my imagination. You deserve to win this prize!
At last, I hope to have a talk with you so that we can exchange our understanding towards basketball. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按要求给英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，祝贺他所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的：delighted→ glad/cheerful
出色的：outstanding→ excellent/remarkable
热情：passion→ enthusiasm
值得：deserve→ be worthy of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, you made it at last. You and your team members must have made great efforts to practice playing basketball.
拓展句：You and your team members must have made great efforts to practice playing basketball, so you made it at last.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.(运用how引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】At last, I hope to have a talk with you so that we can exchange our understanding towards basketball.(运用so that引导目的状语从句)
10．One possible version:
NOTICE
To celebrate the inspiring progress Chinese space industry has made, our school is collecting paintings on the relevant topic. Therefore, the theme of this exhilaration is “China Aerospace”. All the students in our school are expected to participate in the activity. The content of the painting is supposed to show the advances in our space industry, including the space station, astronauts, spacecrafts, rockets, satellites, etc. All the paintings should be sent to the Students’ Union by the end of this Friday.
Looking forward to your participation!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则书面通知，征集以“中国航天”为主题的绘画展作品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：therefore→hence
参加：participate in →take part in
进步：advance →progress
相关的：relevant →related
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All the students in our school are expected to participate in the activity.
拓展句：All the students who are studying in our school are expected to participate in the activity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To celebrate the inspiring progress Chinese space industry has made, our school is collecting paintings on the relevant topic.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）
【高分句型2】All the students in our school are expected to participate in the activity.（运用了被动语态）
11．Dear Melinda,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in my hometown and will pay a visit to it in the summer holiday. Here I’d like to tell you something about it.
Changchun City, the capital of Jilin Province, is located in the center of Songliao Plain in Northeast China. Although Changchun is a new city with only about 200 years of history, she is a very influential regional center city in China with high degree openness and advanced science and education now. I am proud of her because she has the characteristics of automobile city, forest city, film city and scientific and technological city.
I’m looking forward to meeting you and I’d like to show you around the city!
Yours,
Li Xiang
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Melinda写一封电子邮件，介绍所在的城市“长春”，并对外教的暑假来访表示欢迎和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in → show interest in
位于，坐落于：be located in → be situated in/lie in
以……感到自豪：be proud of → take pride in
期望：look forward to → expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Changchun City, the capital of Jilin Province, is located in the center of Songliao Plain in Northeast China.
拓展句：Changchun City, which is the capital of Jilin Province, is located in the center of Songliao Plain in Northeast China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Although Changchun is a new city with only about 200 years of history, she is a very influential regional center city in China with high degree openness and advanced science and education now. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】I am proud of her because she has the characteristics of automobile city, forest city, film city and scientific and technological city. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
12．Dear boys and girls,
With the development of knowledge economy, there is an increasing need for all-round talents in modern society. So it is necessary that we should strive to be an all-round senior high school student.
We are supposed to do whatever we can to improve ourselves from all aspects. Firstly, it’s important for us to be physically and mentally healthy, which lays a solid foundation for our study and life. Secondly, we must hold an active attitude towards study, especially paying attention to forming a good learning habit. Furthermore, while studying hard, we should attach great importance to the innovation consciousness and practical ability.
For the benefit of our future development, let’s take immediate action from now on.
The English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于倡议书。要求考生就“To Be an All-round Student”这一主题发出倡议，号召学生要成为全能型人才。
【详解】1.词汇积累
必要的：necessary → essential
提升：improve→promote
养成：form→ develop
此外：furthermore → what’s more/in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the development of knowledge economy, there is an increasing need for all-round talents in modern society.
拓展句：As the knowledge economy develops, there is an increasing need for all-round talents in modern society.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, it’s important for us to be physically and mentally healthy, which lays a solid foundation for our study and life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] We are supposed to do whatever we can to improve ourselves from all aspects. (运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
13．Notice
An exhibition of paintings themed "In Memory of My High School "is around the corner. The works to be displayed are created by the schoolmates and graduates of our school to honour their high school memories. It's a chance to learn about different styles of works and show our gratitude. The exhibition will be held in the school hall from this Thursday to Saturday. It is open from 8 am to 5 pm. Please visit as scheduled: Thursday for Senior 1, Friday for Senior 2 and Saturday for Senior 3. Please keep quiet and stay in order during your visit. And comments are appreciated.
School International Office
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在学校国际部英文网页给下周将举办“难忘母校”绘画作品展写一则通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 具体的时间、地点；
2. 注意事项。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
honour high school memories；a chance to do；learn about different styles of works；show one’s gratitude；show our gratitude；open from……to；as scheduled；keep quiet；stay in order
第三步：连词成句
1、The works to be displayed are created by the schoolmates and graduates of our school to honour their high school memories.
2、It's a chance to learn about different styles of works and show our gratitude.
3、It is open from 8 am to 5 pm.
4、Please visit as scheduled: Thursday for Senior 1, Friday for Senior 2 and Saturday for Senior 3.
5、 Please keep quiet and stay in order during your visit.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：The works to be displayed are created by the schoolmates and graduates of our school to honour their high school memories.这句话介绍了将被展示的作品的来源，the works to be displayed 用不定式作定语表示将来，成分高级。
[高分句型2]：It's a chance to learn about different styles of works and show our gratitude.这句话运用it作形式主语，真正的主语为不定式to learn about different styles of works and show our gratitude.。
[高分句型3]：Please keep quiet and stay in order during your visit.运用并列词and 将keep quiet和stay in order这两个动作并列在一句中。
14．One possible version:
Sunshine sports usually cover gymnastics, Tai Chi, running exercises and so on.
We can benefit a lot from sunshine sports. First of all, sunshine sports can strengthen our body that is the basis of our learning. Good health is not only the guarantee for successful completion of study in school, but also the necessity for hard work after graduation. Secondly, sunshine sports can develop our good habit of exercising. At last, when we do group gymnastics, sunshine sports can improve our teamwork capacity.
Students of senior high school are very busy with our study. We should choose our favorite sports to relax our muscles and reduce the anxiety and burden of our study.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校英文报写一篇短文分享对高中开展阳光体育活动的看法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.阳光体育的内容（gymnastics, Tai Chi, running exercises 等；
2.活动的好处；
3.支持开展此活动。
第二步:列提纲
benefit a lot from; can strengthen our body; develop our good habit of exercising; improve our teamwork capacity; be very busy with our study; reduce the anxiety; burden of our study
第三步：连词成句
1. We can benefit a lot from sunshine sports. First of all, sunshine sports can strengthen our body that is the basis of our learning.
2. Good health is not only the guarantee for successful completion of study in school, but also the necessity for hard work after graduation.
3. Secondly, sunshine sports can develop our good habit of exercising.
4. At last, when we do group gymnastics, sunshine sports can improve our teamwork capacity.
5. Students of senior high school are very busy with our study.
6. We should choose our favorite sports to relax our muscles and reduce the anxiety and burden of our study.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, At last
2.表并列补充关系：Not only…but also
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Good health is not only the guarantee for successful completion of study in school, but also the necessity for hard work after graduation.( Not only…but also引导的两个并列句子)
[高分句型2] At last, when we do group gymnastics, sunshine sports can improve our teamwork capacity.（when引导的时间状语从句）
15．
Yuan Longping is a great scientist who is devoted to agriculture. Born in 1930, Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College. After graduation, finding ways to grow more production rice has been his life goal. Thanks to his research in hybrid rice, we have more tools to increase the rice output and get rid of the world of hunger, for which he is honored as "Father of Hybrid Rice".
Yuan Longping lives a simple life and he cares little about money or being famous. As for hobbies, he enjoys swimming as well as listening to music.
Yuan Longping has made great contributions not only to China, but also to the whole world. Therefore, in my eyes, he is more than a scientist and he is a pioneer for all people.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给袁隆平编写百度百科词条。内容包括：姓名：袁隆平，职业：科学家；出生：1930年， 北京；毕业院校：西南农学院；爱好：听音乐，游泳；生活态度：生活简朴，淡泊名利；主要成就：（1）提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿
（2）杂交水稻之父。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由于：thanks to→owing to
增加：increase→boost
关于：as for→as regards
喜欢：enjoy→like
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Born in 1930, Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.
拓展句：Yuan who was born in1930 graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Yuan Longping is a great scientist who is devoted to agriculture.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Thanks to his research in hybrid rice, we have more tools to increase the rice output and get rid of the world of hunger, for which he is honored as "Father of Hybrid Rice".(运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)
16．A role model to learn from
A role model for me to learn from is Tu Youyou, a researcher in medicine, who has a positive influence on my growth.
I read about her winning the Nobel Prize in a magazine, which was inspiring to me. What impressed me most was that she and the team examined over 2000 old medical texts and 280, 000 plants. Having failed numerous times, they finally succeeded. Later, they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!
I am so moved by her scientific spirit that I am determined to brave the challenges and try different ways to solve my problems. I learn from her that only with devotion and persistence can I overcome difficulties and make a contribution to the society.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以A role model to learn from为题，写一篇短文参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：effect→influence
大量的：plenty of→numerous
感动：touch→move
决心做某事：make up one’s mind= be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Later, they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!
拓展句：Later, what is astonishing is that they even tested on themselves to make sure of safety!
【点睛】[高分句型1] I read about her winning the Nobel Prize in a magazine, which was inspiring to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am so moved by her scientific spirit that I am determined to brave the challenges and try different ways to solve my problems. (运用了so…that…句式)
17．My Weekend
This weekend witnessed our active participation in the community service.
As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter. Upon arrival, we were divided into small groups and each was responsible for a separate area. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste. It was a rewarding day.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次捡垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
participation in；As scheduled；at the school gate；pick up；Upon arrival；divided into；was responsible for；more than delighted；how to sort out
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1. As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.
2. Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.
3. Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.
4. The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As scheduled, we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community, where we were to pick up litter.句中where引导定语从句。
[高分句型2] Wearing all necessary items, including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the litter visible.现在分词作状语。
[高分句型3] The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.句中使用一般过去时的被动语态。
18．参考范文
Dear Chris,
How are you going I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school. Since you are a skilled robot designer, here comes a chance to show your talent!
Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors. The two — day event is scheduled on 27-28 March and launched online for some reason. Online registration begins now. Don't miss it. More details are available on the school’s website.
Looking forward to the wonderful display of your robot!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信告诉英国留学生同学Chris，介绍参加学校一年一度的机器人比 赛Robot Battles的相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.时间、参与方式；
2.赛事简介；
3.表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
draw near； neither…nor…；be crazy about；provide…for…；be available；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school.
2.Since you are a skilled robot designer, here comes a chance to show your talent!
3. Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors.
4.The two — day event is scheduled on 27-28 March and launched online for some reason.
5. Online registration begins now. Don't miss it.
6. More details are available on the school’s website.
7. Looking forward to the wonderful display of your robot!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：Although +clause(从句)
4.表因果关系：Since
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school.(that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors. (although引导让步状语从句，because引导原因状语从句)
19． Labor Education
Currently, labor education has been increasingly attached great importance to, but different students have different opinions about it. Some students think labor can promote their all-round development, while others think that they are busy with homework and that it is a waste of time if they do labor. So is it necessary for students to do it
In my opinion, time spent in laboring will be rewarding. Doing labor can promote students to develop practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation of good quality. Besides, students who always do labor are more willing to take their own responsibilities either at home or at school.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文，要求考生以“Labor Education”为题，简要总结正反两方观点，并提出自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进：promote→facilitate
有必要的：necessary→essential
在我看来：In my opinion→From my point of view
此外：Besides→In addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, time spent in laboring will be rewarding.
拓展句：In my opinion, time that is spent in laboring will be rewarding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some students think labor can promote their all-round development, while others think that they are busy with homework and that it is a waste of time if they do labor. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的状语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, students who always do labor are more willing to take their own responsibilities either at home or at school. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
20． The days grew warmer and lighter, and I started the work myself. I realized I need to take care of the garden just like what Randy did before. Randy used to treat the garden as a living work of art. If he were alive, he wouldn’t be happy to see the garden in a mess. Therefore, I needed to take care of the garden just like what Randy did. I started weeding, watering and looking after the daffodils. It seemed like to me working in the garden was a way to commemorate Randy.
Weeks later, my daughters returned to visit me. She was very surprised at what she saw. Orange dragonflies were flying around the yard. Honeybees buzzed among the flowers and birds sang beautiful songs. She used to be worried I would be in a bad mood. But now she realized everything was in a good order. Seeing this, she said it looks as if her father was always with us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了丈夫去世后，作者身心俱疲，一直的伤心难过，无法从失去丈夫的痛苦当中走出来，作者多次回忆起丈夫在花园里劳作的场景，作者意识到要保留这份回忆，把花园照看好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“天气越来越暖和，越来越风和日丽，我自己也开始干活了。”可知，第一段可描写作者决定把花园照看好，在花园劳作。
②由第二段首句内容“几周后，我的女儿们回来看我。”可知，第二段可描写女儿看到作者打理好花园的惊讶之情。
2.续写线索：一蹶不振——照看花园——井井有条——女儿回家——吃惊——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①照顾：take care of /look after/ attend to
②.纪念：commemorate/ in memory of
情绪类
①.担心的：worried / concerned
②.惊讶的：surprised /astonished
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She was very surprised at what she saw.（由连接词what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. If he were alive, he wouldn’t be happy to see the garden in a mess.（if引导的虚拟条件句运用了虚拟语气）
21．We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car. Reluctant as I was, I helped stuff the car truck full of suitcases. There I was stuck in the back seat with no hope of having great tales of adventure for my friends and little expectation of celebrating my birthday with style. After what seemed like a lifetime, I felt extremely bored as Marlene fell asleep beside me. Rolling down the window, I caught a glimpse of a large plane flying overhead. How I wished I were on that plane! At that moment, I noticed my father made a turn off the highway and drove past a sign that read “Airport Parking”. I couldn’t believe my eyes. We were heading right into the airport.
I was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport. “We were planning this as a birthday present for you all along,” Mom explained, “despite your impolite language the other night, Happy birthday, sweetheart !” My Dad also wished me a happy birthday as he bent down to kiss my head while Marlene threw her arms around me, winking and giggling heartily. Overwhelmed with emotions, I looked at the boarding pass in my hands, finally waking up to the fact that my dream of taking a flight indeed came true. Yet what touched me most was the great 1ove, patience and tolerance from my family. It was my best birthday ever!
【导语】本文是一片读后续写。讲述的是在作者十岁的时候，妈妈计划要去Niagara Falls旅行给他庆祝生日。但是作者不愿意自驾出行，因为他有一个梦想，就是乘飞机去旅行，不愿意听到驾车出行时妈妈的唠叨和与调皮的妹妹共享后排座位。在去出行的那一天，母亲却给作者一个很大的惊喜，成为作者印象最深的一次生日。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“两天后的星期六早上，我们开车出发了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的不情愿，对自己乘飞机出行变的绝望，情绪的低落，以及自己妹妹的调皮。结合第二段的提示内容，可以描写作者见到了机场上的飞机并发现正开车朝着机场方向前进。
②由第二段首句内容“我被告知要等到我们在机场托运行李时再说。”可知，第二段可描写作者母亲解密不告诉作者真相的原因，以及一家人如何祝愿作者生日快乐，同时描写作者对这次生日的感受。
2.续写线索：计划出游庆生——梦想乘飞机出行——驱车出游——发现驾车去机场——庆生方式解密——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①被困：be stuck in /be trapped in/be caught in
②瞥见：catch a glimpse of/catch sight of
③拥抱：throw one’s arms around sb./give sb. a hug/be greeted with hug
情绪类
①无聊：feel extremely bored/become very dull
②感动：touched/moved/affected
【点睛】[高分句型1] After what seemed like a lifetime, I felt extremely bored as Marlene fell asleep beside me.（由连接词what引导的宾语从句作after的宾语）
[高分句型2] My Dad also wished me a happy birthday as he bent down to kiss my head while Marlene threw her arms around me, winking and giggling heartily.（由as引导的状语从句和现在分词做伴随状语）
[高分句型3] Yet what touched me most was the great 1ove, patience and tolerance from my family.（what引导的主语从句）
22． Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room. “Where’s your spelling test paper, sweetheart ” Mom asked, gazing at her eagerly. Magen took out the paper and handed it unwillingly to her mom. When Mom spotted “honesly”, Mom frowned, “Probably you don’t deserve the prize.”After thinking for a while, she soon understood what she should do.
The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office. Hands slightly trembling, Magen gave Ms. McCormack her test paper and the dictionary. Magen confessed her spelling mistake in the test, a pink flush spreading over her cheeks. “I see.” Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face. Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word “perfect” and wrote “honest” instead before handing the prize back to Magen. Magen’s jaw dropped. Ms. McCormack grinned. “For honesty.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Magen在拼写测试中得了100分，赢得班级第一季度的拼写挑战，以及一本附有视频和其他很酷东西的全新词典。她的老师麦科马克还为她表演了倒立，她开心的回到家，却发现自己试卷上的诚实的单词拼写错误，思考该怎么办。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈意识到Magen有点不对劲，便敲了敲门，走进了她的房间。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现了Magen的拼写错误，并告诉Magen不应该得到这个奖品。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，Magen早早来到学校，推开麦科马克办公室的门。”可知，第二段Magen向她的老师承认拼写错误，归还词典，麦科马克因为Magen的诚实又把词典给了Magen。
2.续写线索：妈妈发现拼写错误——觉得Magen不应该得到奖品——回应妈妈诚实的表现——向老师承认错误——老师因为Magen诚实奖励词典
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.凝视：gaze at/peer at/stare at
②.拿出：take out/fetch out
③.承认：confess/admit
情绪类
①.感到羞愧的：a pink flush spreading over her cheeks/feel shamefaced
②.惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She soon understood what she should do. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句作understood的宾语)
[高分句型2]. Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face. (由even though引导让步状语从句)
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