内蒙古呼和浩特市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David来信说他在阅读中文名著时感到很吃力,难以坚持,请你给他写封回信,劝他不要放弃。要点如下:
1.阅读中文名著的益处;
2.给出具体建议。
参考词汇:Chinese classics 中文名著
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2.(2023·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假定你是李华,你校为了弘扬中华文化,计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加,内容包括:
1. 大赛举办的目的;
2. 大赛的时间和规则;
3. 你邀请的理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2021·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考模拟预测)上周五你班组织了志愿服务进社区的活动。校英文报邀请你写一篇短文分享这次活动。内容包括:
1. 活动内容;2. 个人感受。
参考词汇:社区community
注意:1. 词数:100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.(2021·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假定你是李华, 你校将举办“我的祖国和我”英语演讲比赛。请给你校外籍教师Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件, 告知他演讲比赛的有关内容, 并邀请他当评委。
要点包括:
1. 比赛的时间和地点;
2. 举办此活动的目的和意义;
3. 诚挚邀请他担任评委。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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With best wishes,
Li Hua
5.(2020·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考二模)假定你是李华,你校的“英语角社团”想邀请你校外教Smith参加本周末的活动。请你给他写封邮件。内容包括:
1. 邀请参加;
2. 主题:京剧(Peking Opera);
活动形式:自由交流;
3. 时间和地点。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2020·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假定你是李华,是红星高中的学生会主席。为让更多的人了解中国优秀传统文化,你校将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition),请给你的外教Mr. Green写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 时间、地点以及参加人员;
2. 文化展的宗旨;
3. 展出内容:相关书籍、照片、绘画、剪纸等。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2020·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假设你是卓越中学学生会主席李华。你们学校将举办一次英语话剧比赛(drama competition),希望你能够邀请附近某大学的外教Ms. Smith来做评委(judge)。请参照以下比赛通知给她发一份邮件。
英语话剧比赛:
主题:人与自然
时间:7月15日下午2:00-5:00
地点:101教室
参赛选手:10名学生
联系人:Li H ua (电话44876655)
注意:1.词数:100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With best wishes,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
8.(2022·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考二模)假定你是李华,上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包,里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 描述事情经过;
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
9.(2023·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友David看到了你所在城市的推介宣传片,很想了解你们现在的生活,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.感谢他的关注;
2.介绍近年来城市的变化;
3.邀请他适时来访。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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参考答案:
1.范文
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you are having some trouble in reading the Chinese classics, I am writing to share my opinions and advice on this topic.
First and foremost, it is of great significance for a Chinese learner to read more books in the original language. By doing so, not only can you appreciate the charm of the language, but you can also broaden your views in understanding the culture and history of China. Additionally, reading Chinese novels will surely contribute to good communication and positive interaction with your Chinese classmates and friends. As for how to solve the challenges in reading the Chinese classics, I do think interest comes first and choosing books suitable to your level is equally important. Don’t lost heart, with a little patience, and you will benefit a lot from reading.
I hope what I have mentioned above can help you and please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因为英国笔友David来信说他在阅读中文名著时感到很吃力,现要求考生给他回信,劝他不要放弃。信件内容包括阅读中文名著的益处以及给出具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:advice→ recommendation
理解:understand →comprehend
解决:solve → settle
重要的:important→ significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First and foremost, it is of great significance for a Chinese learner to read more books in the original language.
拓展句:First and foremost, it is of great significance that a Chinese learner should read more books in the original language.
【点睛】[高分句型1]By doing so, not only can you appreciate the charm of the language, but you can also broaden your views in understanding the culture and history of China. (运用了not only提前放句首引导的部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2] As for how to solve the challenges in reading the Chinese classics, I do think interest comes first and choosing books suitable to your level is equally important.(运用了“疑问词+动词不定式”结构,do对动词think进行强调)
2.Dear George,
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news. In order to promote Chinese culture, our school is going to hold a classical Chinese poetry translation contest. Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English. The deadline is May 28th, and the results will be announced on June 6th. Excellent works will be displayed on the school website. You are crazy about classical Chinese poetry, so it is a great opportunity for you to take part in the contest. If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你校为了弘扬中华文化,计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加,内容包括:1. 大赛举办的目的;2. 大赛的时间和规则;3. 你邀请的理由。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):a piece of good news(一则好消息);in order to (为了);Chinese poetry translation contest (中国古诗英语翻译大赛);be crazy about (着迷于)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English.运用了who引导的定语从句;If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up.运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
3. Last Friday my class went to the nearby community to take part in some voluntary work which lasted from 9:00 a. m. to 4:00 p. m..
There are various forms of voluntary work including picking up the rubbish, providing computer technical support and so on. On that day, we were divided into five groups. I was in group 4 whose assignment was to help the elderly clean their windows and give them some performances. Besides, we also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons.
By participating in such meaningful social activities. not only are my interpersonal skills improved but also I learn when we bring our love to the people in need. our life will be more significant.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,上周五考生所在的班组织了志愿服务进社区的活动。校英文报邀请考生写一篇短文分享这次活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供:provide→ offer
重要的:significant.→ important
有意义的:meaningful→ significative
提高:improve→ promote
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:our life will be more significant.
拓展句:Only in this way will our life be more significant.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was in group 4 whose assignment was to help the elderly clean their windows and give them some performances.(whose引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By participating in such meaningful social activities. not only are my interpersonal skills improved but also I learn when we bring our love to the people in need.(部分倒装句)
4.Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of Student Union. I’m writing to inform you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall next Friday and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
The speech contest, whose theme is “My Motherland and I”, is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility. What’s more, inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给外籍教师Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他当演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段,说明写邮件的原因;第二部分是支持段,说明演讲比赛的具体安排和事宜,第三部分是结尾段,希望对方接受邀请。
要求:
1. 说明写信的原因:邀请外籍教师Mr. Smith当英语演讲比赛的评委
2. 说明演讲比赛的具体事项:
①比赛的时间和地点:下周五,在报告厅举行英语演讲比赛
②举办此活动的目的和意义:激发学生的爱国热情和责任感;让学生表达对祖国的热爱以及对祖国做出贡献的决心
3. 希望对方接受邀请
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
chairman;inform sb.;an English speech contest;in the lecture hall;next Friday;invite sb. to do …;judge;speech contest;theme;be intended to;arouse one’s enthusiasm;a sense of responsibility;be inspired by;motivate;express one’s love for …;determination;make contributions to ;appreciate ;accept invitation
第三步:连词成句
(1) I'm Li Hua, chairman of Student Union.
(2) I’m writing to inform you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall next Friday.
(3) We would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
(4) The speech contest, whose theme is “My Motherland and I”, is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility.
(5) Inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
(6) We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表并列关系:as well as
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The speech contest, whose theme is “My Motherland and I”, is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility.(whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.(过去分词作状语)
[高分句型3]
We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.(it作形式宾语)
5.Dear Smith,
I am delighted to know you are into Peking Opera. Now I’m writing to invite you to our next English Corner, whose topic is Peking Opera.
As an old and noble art form, Peking Opera is considered our national opera. I think it great fun to learn to sing it. We are to meet on Sunday afternoon in the First Lecture Hall of our school, which is very beautiful. We will have a free talk from 3:00 pm to 5: 00 pm. What’s more, I advise you to go to the Internet to look up some information about Peking Opera in advance so that we can better talk to each other.
Would you like to join us Please do let me know.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请外教Smith参加本周末“英语角社团”的活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 邀请参加;
2. 主题:京剧(Peking Opera);
活动形式:自由交流;
3. 时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be delighted to;invite sb. to somewhere;have a free talk;advise sb. to do sth.;look up;in advance
第三步:连词成句
1. I am delighted to know you are into Peking Opera.
2. Now I’m writing to invite you to our next English Corner,
3. We will have a free talk from 3:00 pm to 5: 00 pm.
4. I advise you to go to the Internet to look up some information about Peking Opera in advance so that we can better talk to each other.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如which is very beautiful这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,如so that we can better talk to each other这句话中用了so that引导的目的状语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如be delighted to,invite sb. to somewhere,advise sb. to do sth.,in advance等,为文章增色不少;并注意了句子的衔接,如What’s more。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
6.Dear Mr. Green,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of HongXing High School. I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3pm. to 5pm.
To enable more people to learn about the traditional Chinese culture, all the teachers, students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome to participate. At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.
If you’re interested, please come and appreciate it. I’ll be more than glad to offer any help.
Please reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华,是红星高中的学生会主席。为让更多的人了解中国优秀传统文化,你校将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition),请给你的外教Mr. Green写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 时间、地点以及参加人员;
2. 文化展的宗旨;
3. 展出内容:相关书籍、照片、绘画、剪纸等。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如time,place,content, Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition 等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态应为一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如动词不定式 I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3pm. to 5pm. through which引导的定语从句 At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
7.Dear Ms. Smith,
This is Li Hua, president of the Students' Union of Zhuoyue Middle School, located just near the university where you are teaching. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.
You see, to promote students' interest in learning English, we've planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom 101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.
We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:一般性应用文——书信(邮件)。
格式:格式是书信,要写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,还要有结尾语。
要点:要包括以下要点——邀请附近某大学的外教Ms. Smith来做比赛的评委;比赛是英语话剧比赛;主题:人与自然;时间:7月15日下午2:00-5:00;地点:101教室;参赛选手:10名学生;联系人:Li Hua (电话44876655)。
结构:总分总法
第二步:列提纲(重点短语和词汇)
Locate, honor ,judge, promote, hold an English drama competition, theme ,participants ,attend honor , instruction, at your convenience.
第三步:连词成句
I am the president of the Students' Union of Zhuoyue Middle School.
It locates just near the university where you are teaching.
I like to know if you want to be the judge in our coming competition.
We've planned to hold an English drama competition,.
Its theme is Man and Nature.
It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th lasting three hours.
There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom 101.
All the students of our school will be attending it.
You can call me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience.
第四步:连句成篇
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文格式正确,完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点,应用了很多的语法结构和词汇:宾语从句:I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition. 状语从句:We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. 非谓语动词和定语从句:This is Li Hua, president of the Students' Union of Zhuoyue Middle School, located just near the university where you are teaching.…to promote students' interest in learning English, we've planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature.文章中两处honor的使用,表达邀请更具诚意,at your convenience的使用,更符合邀请信的口吻,第一句中非谓语动词的使用避免了使用两个从句,不致使句子显得冗长,也使整篇文章的句法结构富于变化,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
8.Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 描述事情经过;
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
thank sb. for,leave sth. on the playground,owing to,worried,at a loss,inform that…,beyond description
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition (供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but (供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
9.Dear David,
I’d like to express my appreciation to you for your concern about my city.
Tremendous changes have taken place in my city over the past few years. Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams. Varieties of flowers and trees are also planted along the roads. Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly. Not only do they beautify the city but also improve the quality of people’s life. More importantly, with the advanced technology, people can enjoy all the comfort and convenience of the city, adding a great deal to people’s happiness.
You can’t imagine the city taking on a completely fresh look. I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给大卫写信感谢他对于你所在城市的关注,介绍近年来城市的变化和邀请他适时来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累
巨大的:tremendous→ great
提升:improve→ promote
另外:additionally→ in addition
各种各样的:varieties of→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly.
拓展句:Additionally, there are more parks which people can use to take a walk and exercise regularly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.(运用了省略that的宾语从句作动词hope的宾语)
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