山西省太原市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）

山西省太原市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2023·山西太原·统考一模）假定你是李华，请你给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.对David目前生病状况的感受；
2.说明锻炼和学习的关系；
3.鼓励他积极锻炼身体。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2021·山西太原·统考三模）假定你是李华，你校将组织百人唐诗英译比赛,请给外教Alice写封邮件，邀请她做评委，内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.比赛介绍；
3.请她提供建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.开头结尾已给出。
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3．（2020·山西太原·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Anna要参加汉字书写大赛，来信向你求助，请给她回信。
内容包括：
1.积极应对；
2.书写建议(握笔姿势，写字风格等)；
3.美好祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、邀请信
4．（2022·山西太原·太原五中校考二模）假定你是李华，负责组织学校下个月将要举行的学生艺术作品展。请给喜爱艺术创作的留学生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他提供作品并按时参展。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 作品要求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．（2021·山西太原·统考二模）你受邀参加一场中外高中生的在线交流，讨论话题为各国高中生的毕业庆祝活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿，介绍你们学校的活动情况。内容包括∶
1.活动内容;
2.活动意义;
3.邀请对方访问你校网站。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2. 开头已为你写好。
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6．（2020·山西太原·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的城市将有一个大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展，请写一封邮件邀请你的朋友Adam同去。内容包括：
1.展出时间和地点；
2. 展出形式与内容；
3. 表达期待。
提示：C0VID-19 （新型冠状病毒肺炎）； pandemic （流行病）
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
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三、其他应用文
7．（2021·山西太原·统考模拟预测）假定你是某农业大学的毕业生，在毕业典礼大会上将发表题为《美丽乡村建设》的演讲。内容包括：
1. 坚定信念；
2. 具体措施；
3. 达到目标。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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8．（2021·山西太原·太原五中校考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike说他们学校最近在开展一项有关外国文化的活动，他希望你能给他介绍一项中国的传统手工艺（handicraft），以便于他在活动上介绍，请就此给Mike写一封邮件。内容如下：
1. 很高兴帮忙；
2. 介绍一项中国的传统手工艺；
3. 希望他有时间来中国亲自了解。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．（2021·山西太原·统考一模）请你写一篇英语作文，描述你参加过的一次户外运动，内容包括：
1．运动过程；
2．你的感受；
3．准备长期坚持。
注意：
1．词数100左右。
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10．（2020·山西太原·太原五中校考三模）假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精 力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1.作业多，没有时间运动。
2.压力大，难以入睡。
3.希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.你可以适当增加细节，以使上下文连贯。
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11．（2020·山西太原·统考三模）假定你是李华，准备与新西兰的朋友Rosy去参观中国园林博物馆。现收到该馆暂时闭馆通知，请写一封信告知她，内容包括：
1. 表示遗憾；
2. 推迟原因；
3. 新的安排。
提示：中国园林博物馆：the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．（2020·山西太原·太原五中校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，准备今年参加高考。得知在疫情期间，你们学校全体高三学生将在学校封闭学习，你的美国朋友Mike来信表示对你的情况非常关心。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 简单介绍学校的住宿和学习环境；
2. 表明自己对封闭管理（enclosed management）的看法；
3. 表达自己决战高考的信心。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、图画作文
13．（2022·山西太原·统考一模）请你根据下面的图片，以“Value Chinese Opera”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1.描述感受；
2.分析意义；
3.提出倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.文章题目已为你写好。
Value Chinese Opera
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五、开放性作文
14．（2022·山西太原·太原十二中统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，今年暑假去打工，参加社会实践活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文：“An Unforgettable Experience”, 发表在校刊上。
工作地点 一家必胜客(Pizza Hut)快餐店
工作时间 四个星期每天7小时
工作情况 当保洁员(cleaner)工作辛苦且枯燥，每天要起早贪黑地工作，差点中途放弃
你的体会 遇到了一此没预料到的困难，认识到了劳动(labor)的意义……
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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15．（2022·山西太原·统考三模）某报英语编辑正在向即将毕业的高三学生征文，请你以“The City I Desire to Visit”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.城市印象；
2.参观原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文题目已为你写好。
The City I Desire to Visit
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16．（2022·山西太原·太原五中校考一模）上周日，你校组织了成人礼（coming-of-age ceremony）植树活动，同学们种下了一片“成人林”。请你为学校报社写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：
1.植树过程；
2.个人感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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17．（2022·山西太原·统考三模）“英语活动周”正在向全校学生征集英语故事，请你以“A Conflict with My Parents”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 分歧的原因；
2. 化解的过程；
3. 得到的启示。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首已为你写好。
A Conflict with My Parents
There is no doubt that teenagers sometimes have conflicts with their parents, and I am no exception.
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六、读后续写
18．（2023·山西太原·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Bobby was getting cold sitting out in his backyard in the snow. Bobby didn’t wear boots; or rather, he didn’t own any. The thin sneakers he wore had a few holes in them and they did a poor job of keeping out the cold.
Bobby had been in his backyard for about an hour already. Try as he might, he could not come up with an idea for his mother’s Christmas gift. He shook his head as he thought, “This is useless. Even if I do come up with an idea, I don’t have any money for a gift.”
Wiping tears from his eyes, Bobby started walking down to the street where the shops were.It wasn’t easy being six without a father, especially when he needed a man to talk to.
Bobby walked from shop to shop, looking into each decorated window. Everything seemed so beautiful but so out of reach. It was starting to get dark and Bobby reluctantly turned to walk home when suddenly his eyes caught the glimmer (微光) of the setting sun’s rays reflecting on something on the roadside. He reached down and discovered a shiny dime (10美分硬币).
Never before has anyone felt as wealthy as Bobby did at that moment. As he held his newly-found treasure, warmth spread throughout his entire body and he walked into the first store. His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson told him that he could not buy anything with only a dime.
He saw a flower shop and went inside to wait in line.When the shop owner asked if he could help him, Bobby presented the dime and asked if he could buy one flower for his mother’s Christmas gift.The shop owner looked at Bobby and his offering ten-cent. Then he put his hand on Bobby’s shoulder, saying, “You just wait here and I’ll see what I can do for you.”
The sound of the door closing as the last customer left pulled Bobby back to reality.All alone in the shop, Bobby began to feel alone and afraid.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Eventually the shop owner came out and moved to the counter.
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Paragraph 2：
With the bunch of beautiful roses in his hands, Bobby backed off and then turned and ran. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.
In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.
In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
抱歉：sorry → regrettable
沉溺于：be absorbed in → be addicted to/be indulged in
有助于：contribute to→ benefit
总之：in a word → in short/in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health.
拓展句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise,which is really harmful to your health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. （运用了only引导的倒装句）
【高分句型2】So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
2．Dear Ms. Alice,
How is everything going I am Li Hua, a student of yours. I am writing to invite you to be the judge of a translation competition of Tang poetry.
More than 100 students have signed up and they are supposed to email a translated poem to the organizing committee. After the mass-selection, the top ten candidates shall make it to the final, which is to be held in school lecture hall at 3 pm next Tuesday. They will translate an appointed poem on the spot and recite the translation afterwards. Their performance shall be assessed by both Chinese and foreign judges.
Enclosed is the procedure of the competition and your comments shall be highly valued. We are looking forward to your attendance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Alice写封邮件，邀请她做百人唐诗英译比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
报名：sign up→apply
应该：be supposed to→should
海选：mass-election→auditions
评定：assess=evaluate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They will translate an appointed poem on the spot and recite the translation afterwards. Their performance shall be assessed by both Chinese and foreign judges.
拓展句：They will translate an appointed poem on the spot and recite the translation afterwards, whose performance shall be assessed by both Chinese and foreign judges.
【点睛】[高分句型1] After the mass-selection, the top ten candidates shall make it to the final, which is to be held in school lecture hall at 3 pm next Tuesday. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am Li Hua, a student of yours. (运用了同位语)
3．Dear Anna,
I am so glad to learn that you are going to enter a Chinese character writing competition. But you seem to be a little worried about it and I have some advice for you.
As is known to all, a positive attitude to the competition contributes greatly to excellent performance. Therefore, keep calm and confident before and during the process. Secondly, when writing Chinese characters, employ the correct gesture of holding the pen, which, to some extent, determines the structures of your characters. Thirdly, everybody has his or her own style of writing. It is this personal feature that says a lot about you, thus probably enabling you to stand out among the competitors.
Hopefully the suggestions above will do you some good. And I do believe that, through your constant efforts, you will achieve success eventually. Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为提纲类应用文。
【详解】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给Anna写一封建议信，写作背景: Anna要参加汉字书写大赛，来信向你求助，请给她回信。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括:1. 积极应对；2. 提出2~3个书写建议，如握笔姿势，写字风格等；3.美好祝愿。写作时要根据所给提示，发挥自己的想象力，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时注意准确运用时态、语态。适当使用并列连词，合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如: I am so glad to learn that you are going to enter a Chinese character writing competition.运用了宾语从句; Secondly, when writing Chinese characters, employ the correct gesture of holding the pen, which, to some extent, determines the structures of your characters.运用了非限制性定语从句; Therefore, keep calm and confident before and during the process.运用了祈使句; It is this personal feature that says a lot about you, thus probably enabling you to stand out among the competitors.运用了强调句型。
4．Dear Chris,
An exhibition of students’ art works will be held in our school next month. Knowing that you are fond of creating art works and a frequent visitor to art galleries, I am writing to invite you to attend it.
Before sending me any of your works, you should pay attention to the following points. Firstly, any elegant or magnificent work created by you is preferred. Secondly, you can choose art forms as you please, from simply folding paper to painting contemporary portraits. Additionally, you can also demonstrate your skills vividly live by carving a figure out of stone. If you have any questions about the exhibition, do not hesitate to tell me.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，负责组织学校下个月将要举行的学生艺术作品展。请给喜爱艺术创作的留学生朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他提供作品并按时参展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：be fond of→like
参加：attend→take part in
注意：pay attention to→keep one’s eyes on
此外：additionally→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you can choose art forms as you please, from simply folding paper to painting contemporary portraits.
拓展句：Secondly, you can choose art forms as you please, which includes simply folding paper and painting contemporary portraits.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are fond of creating art works and a frequent visitor to art galleries, I am writing to invite you to attend it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Before sending me any of your works, you should pay attention to the following points. (运用了动名词作宾语)
5．Possible version:
Dear friends,
I am delighted to exchange views about graduation celebration. In my school, the biggest event, no doubt, is the graduation ceremony, which is usually held after College Entrance Examination. The ceremony starts with an address by our principal. Then comes the presenting of the diploma. The highlight is to appreciate a short video recording the past school life, which often moves all the students into tears. The event provides us with an outlet for our pressure from the exam, and it is a special occasion to express our appreciation to the teachers and peers.
For further information about the events, you are welcome to check out our school website, where abundant pictures and videos will surely bring you a visual feast and deepen your understanding about our school culture. I do hope you will enjoy it.
Thank you!
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文发言稿，介绍学校的毕业庆祝活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：start→begin
压力：pressure→stress
感激：appreciation→gratitude
提供：provide sb with sth=offer sb sth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The ceremony starts with an address by our principal.
拓展句：The ceremony starts with an address which is given by our principal.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my school, the biggest event, no doubt, is the graduation ceremony, which is usually held after College Entrance Examination. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Then comes the presenting of the diploma. (运用了完全倒装)
6．Dear Adam，
How is everything going recently A large exhibition about heroes fighting against COVID-19 is scheduled in our city. I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours. During that period, you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses. They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease. All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.
I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive and you will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness. Looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：
审题：邮件 邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分提出邀请，第二部分说明展出时间、地点、内容与形式，第三部分期待他的参加。
要点：
1. 提出邀请：邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展
2．展出时间、地点、形式与内容
①时间、地点：7月12 日下午三点，市博物馆
②内容：抗击新冠肺炎疫情的英雄人物展
③形式：图片或视频
3．期待他的参加
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
exhibition；hero；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by； devotion；selflessness
第三步：连词成句
(1)A large exhibition is scheduled in our city.
(2)I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.
(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.
(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.
(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.
(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.
(8)They are the most courageous people.
(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.
(10) All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.
(11) I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive.
(12) You will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将（4）（5）两句用现在分词作状语，连接下面三个句子成一个句子
(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.
(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.
(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.
→The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours.
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.
(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.
→ You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses.
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(8)They are the most courageous people.
(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.
→They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 exhibition；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by；devotion；selflessness
等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如现在分词作定语的运用 you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic；定语从句的运用They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease；被动句式的运用All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos等。
7．Good morning, everyone!
It is my honor to be here and give a speech on building a beautiful countryside.
First of all, as an agricultural university graduate , I think beautiful countryside can't fall from the sky, which needs you, me and him, starting from small things and starting from now on.
Secondly, we should promote village environment construction, infrastructure construction; leading industry construction to create a more beautiful, more livable, suitable for work, suitable for tourism countryside.
In the new journey, we should encourage ourselves, overcome difficulties, work together for development and build our homeland with one heart and one mind!
Thanks for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇题为《美丽乡村建设》的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first of all→to begin with
促进：promote→accelerate
鼓励：encourage→inspire
建立：build→set up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, we should promote village environment construction, infrastructure construction; leading industry construction to create a more beautiful, more livable, suitable for work, suitable for tourism countryside.
拓展句：Secondly, we should promote village environment construction, infrastructure construction; leading industry construction so that we can create a more beautiful, more livable, suitable for work, suitable for tourism countryside.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
First of all, as an agricultural university graduate , I think beautiful countryside can't fall from the sky, which needs you, me and him, starting from small things and starting from now on.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Secondly, we should promote village environment construction, infrastructure construction; leading industry construction to create a more beautiful, more livable, suitable for work, suitable for tourism countryside.（动词不定式作目的状语）
8．范文：
Dear Mike,
I’m more than delighted to know that you will introduce Chinese traditional handicrafts to your teachers and classmates, and here let me introduce one of them to you.
Clay figure is a sculpture which is formed with hands by using clay as raw material. Painted in different colors, the figures are quite an art work. The shapes of them are various, including vivid animals and lifelike figures. You can ask the craftsmen to create anything you like, even a figure of yourself. Usually these clay figures are spotted in a local fair or at a tourist spot, where you can get one at a very cheap price.
Hope one day you can come to China and get to know more about Chinese colorful handicrafts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Mike写一封邮件，给他介绍一项中国的传统手工艺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
各种各样的：various→miscellaneous
栩栩如生的：lifelike→lively
不同的：different→diverse
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Painted in different colors, the figures are quite an art work. The shapes of them are various, including vivid animals and lifelike figures.
拓展句：Painted in different colors, the figures are quite an art work, the shapes of which are various, including vivid animals and lifelike figures.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Clay figure is a sculpture which is formed with hands by using clay as raw material. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Painted in different colors, the figures are quite an art work. (运用了过去分词作状语)
9．One possible version
A Meaningful Bike Ride
Last weekend, I participated in a bicycle ride organized by our community.
As scheduled, 20 participants started from our neighborhood at 8:00. Wearing helmets and gloves, we rode along Binhe bike lane. Halfway, despite my effort to pedal hard, I still fell behind. In order to accompany and comfort me, others slowed down. After an hour, we arrived at Shanxi Stadium. There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.
Although we were all exhausted, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful, because it not only helped to build up our body, but strengthened the bond between the neighbors. So we reached an agreement that we would regularly ride together in the future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，描述你参加过的一次户外骑行活动。
【详解】词汇积累
参加：participate in→ take part in/be involved in
按照安排：as scheduled →as planned→/It is scheduled …
尽管：despite →in spite of /regardless of
为了……：in order to →with the purpose of /for the purpose of
陪伴某人：accompany →keep pany
2.句式拓展
高分句型的同义表达
(1)There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.
→There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which made everyone present surprised.
→There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, surprising everyone present.
(2)Although we were all exhausted, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful.
→Exhausted as we all were, the ride turned out to be enjoyable and meaningful.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Wearing helmets and gloves, we rode along Binhe bike lane. (现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
There some cyclists showed us their amazingly cool riding skills, which surprised everyone present.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
Because it not only helped to build up our body, but strengthened the bond between the neighbors.( not only…but also引导的并列句式)
10．Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求你向你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信，因为写信的要点已给出，所以属于提纲性作文。根据提示可知，本文要点如下: 1.作业多，没有时间运动。2.压力大，难以入睡。3.希望得到Kate的帮助。本文需要使用第一人称，一般现在时进行写作。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam（忙着为高考做准备）；hard to concentrate on my study（很难集中精力在学习上）；ask you for help（寻求你的帮助）；hardly have time to take sports（几乎没有锻炼的时间）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study.句中it作形式宾语；I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot.句中which引导限制性定语从句；I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.句中so...that引导结果状语从句；the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down.句中使用because引导的原因状语从句；What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.句中what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句完美结合；另外，Recently, but unfortunately，First, Moreover, Faced with等的运用为文章增色添彩。
11．Dear Rosy,
How are things going with you I'm pretty sorry to say that there is a new notification that the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture will close until further notice. It is a pity that we won't be able to visit it as planned.
The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated, which means we will have the opportunity to witness a new face of it in the near future. In spite of this, we can still make some other plans. For example, the Summer Palace is a good alternative, which is sure to leave an equally deep impression on us.
What do you suggest we should do together I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给新西兰的朋友Rosy，通知她中国园林博物馆暂时闭馆，及其它相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表示遗憾；
2. 推迟原因；
3. 新的安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture；temporary closing；need to be done；in spite of；leave a deep impression on sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm pretty sorry to say that there is a new notification that the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture will close until further notice.
2. The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated,
3. In spite of this, we can still make some other plans.
4. which is sure to leave an equally deep impression on us.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It is a pity that we won't be able to visit it as planned这句话中用了that引导的主语从句（It作形式主语），如The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated, which means we will have the opportunity to witness a new face of it in the near future. 这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和表语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如temporary closing，need to be done，leave a deep impression on sb.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．Dear Mike,
I am so glad to receive your letter in which you inquired about my life after school reopened. I am writing to tell you about it.
We live in dormitories, each of which should include no more than four students. With a maximum of 30 students in a class, our classmates stay in two separate classrooms while having classes. Regarding the present situation, our school has implemented the enclosed management, which I think is the most effective way to protect our health and offers us a chance to focus our mind completely on study. Since time is limited, I am determined to call forth all my energy to win in the forthcoming National College Entrance Examination.
Thank you for your concern. All my beset wishes for you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向笔友讲述疫情期间在校封闭学习的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段表达写信目的；第二段介绍学校住宿情况和学习环境；第三段表达看法和决心。
要求：1. 表达写信目的（I am writing to tell you about it.）
2. 介绍学习情况和学习环境
1）学校住宿情况（live in dormitories）
2）学习环境（a maximum of 30 students in a class; two separate classrooms）
3.表达看法和决心（the enclosed management; the most effective way to protect our health and offers us a chance to focus our mind completely on study; all forth all my energy to win in the forthcoming National College Entrance Examination）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be glad to do; inquire about; no more than; stay in; offer sb. a chance to do; focus on; be determined to do; call forth all one’s energy to do
第三步：连词成句
1. I am so glad to receive your letter in which you inquired about my life after school reopened.
2. We live in dormitories, each of which should include no more than four students.
3. With a maximum of 30 students in a class, our classmates stay in two separate classrooms while having classes.
4. Regarding the present situation, our school has implemented the enclosed management, which I think is the most effective way to protect our health and offers us a chance to focus our mind completely on study.
5. Since time is limited, I am determined to call forth all my energy to win in the forthcoming National College Entrance Examination.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
I am so glad to receive your letter in which you inquired about my life after school reopened.( 我很高兴收到你的来信，你在信中询问了我开学后的生活。)这句话运用了which引导的定语从句。
Regarding the present situation, our school has implemented the enclosed management, which I think is the most effective way to protect our health and offers us a chance to focus our mind completely on study.( 针对目前的情况，我们学校已经实行了封闭式管理，我认为这是最有效的保护我们健康的方式，给我们提供了一个集中精力学习的机会。)本句使用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
Since time is limited, I am determined to call forth all my energy to win in the forthcoming National College Entrance Examination.( 由于时间有限，我决心在即将到来的高考中发挥我所有的能量。)本句使用since引导原因状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be glad to do; inquire about; no more than; stay in; offer sb. a chance to do; focus on; be determined to do; call forth all one’s energy to do等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Value Chinese Opera
The other day, CCTV 11 broadcast a drama program performed by the old, middle and young artists. In the show, they all showed their superb skills, leaving a deep impression on me.
Opera is one of the traditional treasures of China, and also an important carrier of Chinese traditional culture. The stories told in operas convey the ideals and aspirations of people, and the patriotism, excellent character and traditional virtues they embody are the precious spiritual wealth of the Chinese nation.
However, nowadays few people really understand and appreciate opera, especially the young. Therefore, I hope we can pay more attention to it, thus inheriting and carrying forward the treasure.
【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生以“Value Chinese Opera”为题，并结合图片内容写一篇短文，描述自己的感受，戏曲的意义并提出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：significant→important
传递，表达：express→convey
体现：reflect→embody
珍贵的：invaluable→precious
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：In the show, they all showed their superb skills, leaving a deep impression on me.
拓展句：In the show, they all showed their superb skills, which left a deep impression on me.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In the show, they all showed their superb skills, leaving a deep impression on me.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]The stories told in operas convey the ideals and aspirations of people, and the patriotism, excellent character and traditional virtues they embody are the precious spiritual wealth of the Chinese nation.（运用了过去分词作定语，和省略关系代词which/that的定语从句）
14．One possible version:
An Unforgettable Experience
During the summer holiday this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a Pizza Hut fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for four weeks. The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck to it with determination. Every day I set off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.
Although I met with a lot of difficulties in the work, it helped me understand what labor means better. I think it is really a successful experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据表格提示，以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有意义的：meaningful→significant
困难的：hard→tough
几乎：nearly→almost
最终：Finally→Eventually
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：During the summer holiday this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a Pizza Hut fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner.
拓展句： During the summer holiday this year, I got a job at a Pizza Hut fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner because I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和so…that…引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Although I met with a lot of difficulties in the work, it helped me understand what labor means better.（运用了Although引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
15． The City I Desire to Visit
The city I desire to visit is Beijing. As we all know, Beijing is our capital. There are many famous universities and many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Old Summer Palace and so on. Besides, it is also an international city where you can see so many foreigners from all over the world.
The reason why I want to visit Beijing is that I want to climb the Great Wall. By climbing it, I can feel its greatness. Moreover, it is an ancient city where walking along the streets I can feel a strong sense of culture.
Really I hope one day I can visit Beijing.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作为，要求考生以“The City I Desire to Visit”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括：城市印象；参观原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望：desire→long
等等：and so on→and the like
出名的：famous→well-known
世界各地：all over the world→all around the world
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By climbing it, I can feel its greatness.
拓展句：when I climb it, I can feel its greatness.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, it is also an international city where you can see so many foreigners from all over the world.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The reason why I want to visit Beijing is that I want to climb the Great Wall. (运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型3]Moreover, it is an ancient city where walking along the streets I can feel a strong sense of culture.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
16．One possible version:
Last Sunday, a tree planting activity for our coming-of-age ceremony was held, in which our whole school participated.
We set off at 6:00 a.m., and it took us around two hours to drive from the school. Upon arrival, what came into sight were different varieties of young trees. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for digging holes, and the other planting young trees. On our faces poured sweat together with heartfelt smiles and all of us spend a meaningful and pleasant weekend.
Seeing the lines of trees, we have a better understanding of how hard the work is and how precious the trees are. Therefore, we should treasure the trees planted and make efforts to better our world.
【导语】本篇书面表达为开放性作文。学校组织了成人礼（coming-of-age ceremony）植树活动，同学们种下了一片“成人林”。要求学生为学校报社写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
参加：participate→take part
种类：variety→kind
理解：have a better understanding of→have a deeper insight into
珍贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展：
原句：We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for digging holes, and the other planting young trees.
拓展句：We were divided into two groups, with one group responsible for digging holes and the other planting young trees.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Last Sunday, a tree planting activity for our coming-of-age ceremony was held, in which our whole school participated.（运用了介词+ which引导非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】
Upon arrival, what came into sight were different varieties of young trees.（运用了what引导主语从句。）
17．One possible version:
A Conflict with My Parents
There is no doubt that teenagers sometimes have conflicts with their parents, and I am no exception.
Three years ago, I joined the school basketball club but my parents told me to quit, arguing that my time should be spent nowhere but in studying. This really angered me and we quarrelled violently. Frustrated, I turned to my headteacher and he offered me many insights. Inspired by him, I conversed with my parents sincerely, and we straightened the matter out. I promised to strike a balance between study and play and they permitted me to pursue my hobby. Eventually, basketball did not affect my study. Instead, it enabled me to better manage my time.
From this conflict, I’ve learned that acting on impulse will do nobody good. We should put ourselves on an equal footing with our parents and try to reach a compromise between what they want and what we want.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。“英语活动周”正在向全校学生征集英语故事，要求学生以“A Conflict with My Parents”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
激烈地：violently→vehemently
见解：insight→understanding
最终：eventually→ultimately/finally
允许：permit→allow
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句：Eventually, basketball did not affect my study. Instead, it enabled me to better manage my time.
拓展句：Eventually, basketball did not affect my study, but enabling me to better manage my time.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Three years ago, I joined the school basketball club but my parents told me to quit, arguing that my time should be spent nowhere but in studying.（运用了现在分词作状语。）
[高分句型2]
Frustrated, I turned to my headteacher and he offered me many insights.（运用了形容词作状语。）
18．One possible version:
Eventually the shop owner came out and moved to the counter. There, before Bobby’s eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape. Bobby’s heart sank as the owner placed them gently into a long white box. “That will be ten cents, young man.” the shop owner said, reaching out his hand for the dime. Slowly, Bobby moved his hand to give the man his dime. “Could this be true ” he wondered.
With the bunch of beautiful roses in his hands, Bobby backed off and then turned and ran. Within minutes, he was at home, still breathless. “Look, Mother, what have I got for you ” Bobby called out in the backyard. Mother came out from inside the house. She could hardly believe her eyes upon seeing the beautiful flowers in front of her. “Merry Christmas!” Bobby said and began to tell her everything he had experienced in the flower shop. Tearfully, Mother hugged her son in her arms. Standing in the bitter cold air, they somehow didn’t feel cold at all.
【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了在寒冷的圣诞节前，一个贫穷的孩子Bobby想为妈妈买一件圣诞礼物，但是他没有钱。他在街上偶然捡到了一个10美分的硬币。于是他尝试用这10美分硬币给妈妈买礼物。在一家花店，他拿出10美分硬币，跟店主说他想给妈妈买一朵花作为圣诞礼物。店主让他稍等一下。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后，店主出来了，走到柜台前。”可知，第一段可描写店主给了Bobby一大束美丽的玫瑰花，但是只收了他10美分硬币。Bobby感到很疑惑，不敢相信是真的。
②由第二段首句内容“Bobby手里拿着一束美丽的玫瑰，向后退去，然后转身跑开了。”可知，第二段可描写Bobby回到家，将礼物给妈妈，并告诉了妈妈在花店的经历。店主的善举让他们在寒冷的冬天感到了温暖。
2.续写线索：店主给Bobby一大束花——Bobby感到疑惑——回家将礼物给妈妈——告诉妈妈在花店的经历——在寒冬，他们感到了温暖
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喘不过气起来：breathless / out of breath
②她一看到那些美丽的花：on seeing the beautiful flowers / as soon as she saw the beautiful flowers / the moment she saw the beautiful flowers
情绪类
①难以相信：can hardly believe / be unbelievable
②含泪地：tearfully / with tears in one’s eyes
【点睛】[高分句型1] There, before Bobby’s eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape.（句型There lie…；“with +宾语+过去分词作宾语补足语”结构）
[高分句型2] The shop owner said, reaching out his hand for the dime.（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] Within minutes, he was at home, still breathless.（形容词作状语）
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