山西省运城市三年(2020-2022)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·山西运城·统考二模)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Peter想给家人买一些具有中国特色的礼物,特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐礼物(至少两种);
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(2020·山西运城·统考二模)假设你是李华,你校的英国交换生Chris暑假要回国。他想要给他的好朋友买些有中国传统文化特色的礼物,希望你能给他些建议。请给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示荣幸;
2. 你的建议及理由;
3. 购物安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以便行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
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Best regards,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3.(2020·山西运城·校联考三模)假定你是李华, 你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 展出的目的;2. 举办时间;3. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:文物cultural relics
Dear Robert,
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Yours
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4.(2022·山西运城·统考模拟预测)今天下午,你校手工俱乐部(handcraft club)邀请民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作技术。请你写一篇英语日记,内容包括:
1.活动过程;
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
May 15 Sunday
Sunny
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5.(2022·山西运城·校考三模)你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程,包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 你喜爱的课程;
2. 你的心得体会;
3. 对课程的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Hands-on Course
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6.(2022·山西运城·校考模拟预测)假如你是李华,你将于下周参加校读书节 “Books and I” 的英语演讲比赛,请你结合你自身经历写一篇演讲稿。主要内容:
1.简单介绍你阅读经历(如:何时开始,喜欢阅读哪些书目,推荐你最喜欢的一篇读物等);
2.阅读对你的影响。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.使用演讲稿的文体格式;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My dear fellows,
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四、开放性作文
7.(2022·山西运城·校联考模拟预测)作为一名毕业生,请以“Exploring My Future”为题写一篇短文,畅想一下未来的自己,内容如下:
1.将来自己的生活;
2.将来自己的事业;
3.要做的准备。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案:
1.One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Learning that you want to buy some gifts with Chinese characteristics for your family, I'm willing to offer some advice.
Undoubtedly, Bing Dwen Dwen, the mascot of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, is a must. Featuring cute appearance, this mascot shaped like a panda has enjoyed an increasing popularity at home and abroad. Besides, you shouldn’t miss Chinese knots, which carry the meaning of “to unite” and can be used for decoration. In addition, Beijing Opera masks, which can arouse people’s interest in Beijing Opera, are also a great choice.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. If you want me to accompany you to select and buy these gifts, please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向自己的留学生朋友Peter推荐一些具有中国特色的礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
特色:characteristic → feature
此外:in addition → what’s more/besides
毫无疑问地:undoubtedly → without doubt/surely
对……有帮助:be helpful to → be of help to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Featuring cute appearance, this mascot shaped like a panda has enjoyed an increasing popularity at home and abroad.
拓展句:Featuring cute appearance, this mascot which is shaped like a panda has enjoyed an increasing popularity at home and abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, you shouldn’t miss Chinese knots, which carry the meaning of “to unite” and can be used for decoration.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want me to accompany you to select and buy these gifts, please write to me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2.Hi Chris,
I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions, and of course, I’ m willing to help.
When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends, first I think you should know the meanings behind. For example, paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses. And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.
Since we both will be free next Sunday, why don’t you let me accompany you to have a look at Hong Qiao Market on that day We can meet at 9 in the morning at the school gate and go there by subway. Does it sound okay for you Write to me before this Friday, will you
Best regards,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封建议信,帮助其挑选中国礼物。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式
首段:点明主题;
中心段:提建议;
尾段:提供帮助。
第二步:列提纲
Be delighted to; be interested in;be willing to; when it comes to; express your best wishes;
the symbol of family reunion; in the eyes of us Chinese.
第三步:连词成句
I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions.
I’ m willing to help.
When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends.
I think you should know the meanings behind.
Paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses.
Chinese knots can also make a good present.
They are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步: 润色修改
【点睛】本范文思路清晰,条理明确。运用了较丰富的句式,如paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses, 此句运用了if引导的条件状语从句; for引导的原因状语从句And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.Write to me before this Friday, will you 运用了反义疑问句。全篇没有中式英语,行笔流畅,足以见考生的英语功底。
3.Dear Robert,
Our city museum has scheduled a show of Chinese cultural relics. Being fully aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to pay a visit to the show with me.
The show, meant to promote our awareness of our history and arouse our pride in our deep-rooted culture, will take place three days away, on July 5th, lasting a whole week. Exhibited at the show will be a collection of cultural and historic relics, which reflect people's life and social development at the time.
I'll feel privileged to be your guide during the visit. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华, 你所在城市的博物馆即将开展“近代文物展”。你想邀请你校的外籍教师Robert一起参观。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:1. 展出的目的;2. 举办时间;3. 活动内容。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):cultural relics(文物);be aware of(意识到);keen interest (强烈的兴趣);pay a visit (参观);take place (举行)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Being fully aware of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to pay a visit to the show with me.非谓语动词的运用;Exhibited at the show will be a collection of cultural and historic relics, which reflect people's life and social development at the time.运用了非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
4.One possible version:
May 15 Sunday
Sunny
This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lantern-making activity, where a famous folk artist was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand. He first told us the history and origin of lanterns, and the various materials forming them. After that, he showed us the basic steps and skills of lantern making. Then came the time for us to have a try. Under the guidance of the artist, all of us finished our works successfully.
Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have also deepened my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. I’ve come to realize why Shuey Rhon Rhon lantern figure is so popular worldwide.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校手工俱乐部邀请民间艺人传授灯笼制作技术活动写一篇日记,描述活动过程和自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办、发起:hold→launch
演示:show→demonstrate
完成:finish→complete
意识到:realize→be aware of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After that, he showed us the basic steps and skills of lantern making.
拓展句:After that, he showed us the basic steps and skills we use to make lanterns.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This afternoon, our handcraft club held a lantern-making activity, where a famous folk artist was invited to teach us how to make lanterns by hand.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through this activity, not only have I improved my handcraft skills, but I have also deepened my understanding of the symbolic meanings of lanterns. (运用了not only开头的部分倒装)
5.My Favorite Hands-on Course
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students’ well-designed works and display their creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的劳动实践课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程:lesson→course
获得:gain→obtain
影响:influence→effect
展示:show→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
拓展句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, which ranged from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.My dear fellows,
Good morning! My name is Li Hua. It is my great honor to share with you my reading experience.
I’ve been in love with reading since primary school. Reading is a necessity in my life. I read almost every day and have a wide range of book choices. Of them, I am most interested in science fictions. Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea is my favorite, which tells a story of a wonderful adventure under the sea.
I think that reading has a lot of positive effects on me, for it can broaden my horizon and improve my creativity.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿,介绍一下自己的读书经历,最喜欢的书籍以及阅读对自己的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
几乎:almost → nearly
对……感兴趣:be interested in → be keen on
精彩的:wonderful → brilliant
拓宽:broaden→ widen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’ve been in love with reading since primary school. Reading is a necessity in my life.
拓展句:I’ve been in love with reading since primary school, which is a necessity in my life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea is my favorite, which tells a story of a wonderful adventure under the sea.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I think that reading has a lot of positive effects on me for it can broaden my horizon and improve my creativity. (that引导的宾语从句)
7. Exploring My Future
I often imagine what my future life will be like. I do strongly hope that my life will be smooth and delightful. I have a lot of hobbies and there is no doubt that my life will be colorful in the future. Playing musical instruments and travelling in my spare time will surely enrich my life and broaden my horizons. As for my work, I dream of being an engineer because I am studying science at present. Additionally, I have a strong desire to devote myself to the development and construction of our country by using my professional knowledge.
In order to make my dream come true, equipping myself with sufficient knowledge is really important. I am sure my future self will be grateful for the hard work I’m doing now.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以“Exploring My Future”为题写一篇短文,畅想一下未来的自己,内容如下:1.将来自己的生活;2.将来自己的事业;3.要做的准备。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
希望:hope→wish
令人愉快的:delightful→enjoyable
另外:additionally→moreover
肯定的:sure→certain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to make my dream come true, equipping myself with sufficient knowledge is really important.
拓展句:In order to make my dream come true, it is really important that I equip myself with sufficient knowledge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I often imagine what my future life will be like. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I have a lot of hobbies and there is no doubt that my life will be colorful in the future. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
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