四川省泸州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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四川省泸州市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考三模）假如你是李华，在你校体育节来临之际，给学校英文报写一篇短文分享锻炼经历，倡导体育锻炼。内容包括：
1.锻炼经历；
2.给学校加强体育锻炼的建议；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school’s annual Sports Day approaching, I can’t help thinking of my sports experience.
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2．（2020·四川泸州·统考一模）假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 分享收获；
3. 谈谈建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
With the 10th anniversary of Learning English just around the corner, I am writing to.
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Yours
Li Hua
二、申请信
3．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第四中学校考模拟预测）今年五月,雅安将举办2021年国际茶文化节(the International Tea Culture Festival 2021), 现正在招募英语口译志愿者。假如你是李华,请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:
1. 表达申请意愿;
2. 说明胜任理由;
3. 希望申请成功。
参考词汇:interpreter (口译者)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
4．（2023·四川泸州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者，请给他写一封英语邮件，邀请他投稿参展。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 投稿方式；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1 .词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·四川泸州·泸县五中校考模拟预测）学校英语社团即将举办一年一度的中国诗词翻译大赛。假定你是社团主席李华,请你写一个活动通知,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Date: June 21,2020
Notice
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The English Club
6．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考二模）假定你叫李华，你校将举办国际青少年交流活动，邀请你的新西兰笔友Sam参加，请根据以下要点，用英语给他写封邮件：
1. 时间，地点；
2. 交流内容（谈理想未来，参观艺术作品展等）；
3. 期待回复。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：International Youth Exchange Programme 国际青少年交流活动
Dear Sam,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·四川泸州·统考三模）假定你是学生会主席李华，在中国共产党成立100周年来临之际，学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛，题目是 There Would Be No Today's China without the Communist Party of China . 请你给学校外教Peter写封英文邮件，特邀他任评委，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.活动的时间、地点和意义；
3.表达愿望。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
8．（2020·四川泸州·统考三模）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考。最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID-19）疫情受到影响。请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.简述疫情下的备考情况；
3.表达决心和希望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、告知信/通知
9．（2022·四川泸州·统考二模）你校学生会原定在本周三组织一场英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)，但因故有变化，为此，请你写一则通知，内容包括:
1. 告知变化的时间和地点；
2. 简述变化的原因；
3. 表达歉意与愿望。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
六、其他应用文
10．（2022·四川泸州·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。 请以“The Sport I Like Best”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的运动；
2. 该运动对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Sport I Like Best
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11．（2022·四川泸州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办题为“A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇参赛作文，内容包括：
1. 描述事情的起因和过程；
2. 谈谈个人收获和感受。注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class
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12．（2022·四川泸州·统考三模）假定你是高三学生李华，在目前的英语学科备考过程中遇到了一些困难，感到困惑。请给English Learning的编辑写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.你的情况；
3.你的愿望。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2020·四川泸州·四川省泸县第四中学校考三模）假如你是李华，几天前你去万达影院看电影。在观影过程中，你发现了一些问题，请你用英语给影院经理写封信反映如下情况并请及时整改。
1.广告太多
2.影片音质不好
3.出口标示不清晰
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
出口标示:the EXIT signs
Dear Manager,
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Yours faithfully
LiHua
14．（2020·四川泸州·泸县五中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，请你写封邮件告知有关信息。内容包括：
1．很高兴收到来信
2．取得的成就（生活、教育、住宅、交通等）
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．（2020·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考三模）为庆祝6月5日“世界环境保护日”，某英文报社将举行一次英文作文竞赛，呼吁人们保护环境，提出有效的保护措施。请以下面的内容为参考，写一篇文章投稿。
1．回收利用有用物质，掩埋有害物质。
2．废水、废气要净化；
3．植树造林，保护环境；
4．保护海洋，禁止过度捕鱼；
5．充分利用自然资源。
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译
重点词汇词组：garbage environment take some measures
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七、开放性作文
16．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第二中学校联考三模）上周末，你班全体师生组织了一次环绕the City Lake的骑自行车观光活动。请你为班级的英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的； 2.活动过程； 3.个人感受；
注意：1. 题目已给出。
2. 词数100左右；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Cycling Tour
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试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school's annual Sports Day approaching, I can't help thinking of my sports experience. As I entered the senior high school, I had much pressure from study, and my health was worsening. My father pushed me to run in the morning. I kept running and running until it became habitual. Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies.
Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. Above all, students should be given more sports time. For example, our school can organize more after-school activities like basketball match, football match, running and so on.
More physical exercise and we'll enjoy better health, better moods and better academic performance. Let’s participate in more physical exercise!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己的锻炼经历，并向其他同学发出倡议，共同日常锻炼，健康生活。
【详解】1.积累
压力：pressure→stress
因为：since→because
参加：participate in=take part in
对……有益：be beneficial to→be good for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, students should be given more sports time.
拓展句：Above all, students should be given more sports time, which can help sweat out and reduce stress of study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies. (运用了not only…but also…引导的倒装并列句式)
[高分句型2]Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
2．Dear Editor,
With the 10th anniversary of Learning English just around the corner，I am writing to say thanks to you for your hard work!
As a regular reader, I like Learning English very much，and have benefited a lot. For example, as long as I turn the pages, I can enjoy important national and international news, keeping track of what has happened at home and abroad; also attractive to me are the success stories of great people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world better.
As a young student, I think we should do more reading to enrich our life and study. I suggest your magazine carry more articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope it will become even more popular.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一封书信写作。假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信。
【详解】假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 分享收获；3. 谈谈建议。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。also attractive to me are the success stories of great people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world better. 定语从句的运用。As a young student, I think we should do more reading to enrich our life and study. 宾语从句的运用。
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student from Ya’an. Learning that The International Tea Culture Festival 2021 will be held in Ya’an in July, I really hope to be one of the interpreters for it.
I believe I’m the right person for the job. First of all, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with foreigners with no barriers. Besides, I have participated in some activities to serve as an interpreter , which gains me valuable experience. Furthermore, I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture. So I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
I’d appreciate it if I can get your offer. Thank you very much!
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为2021年国际茶文化节的英语口译志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
希望：hope→wish
此外：besides→what’s more
参加：participate in→take part in
感激：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Furthermore, I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture. So I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
拓展句：Furthermore, because I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture, I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with foreigners with no barriers.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if I can get your offer. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
How is everything going I have some exciting news for you! Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so on. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to 2022@. Deadline for entries is November, 15th, 2022.
If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于一篇应用文。假定你是李华，你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者，请给他写一封英语邮件，邀请他投稿参展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→ competition
开心的：happy → delighted
上交：turn in→ hand in
至多：at most→ no more than
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
拓展句：Photos which are edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”.（运用了过去分词作定语）
【高分句型2】If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
5．Date：June 21,2020
Notice
The annual translation competition on Chinese poetry is going to be held online from June 28 to 30 by our school’s English Club. Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@, and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem. Then based on ten professional judges’ decision，there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing，such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity. Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history, but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English. So what are you waiting for Just begin your translation.
The English Club
【分析】本篇作文属于应用文，要求对学校即将举办的中国诗词翻译大赛写一个活动通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate；be based on；be welcome to; not only…but also…
第三步：连词成句
Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@.
Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner，two second-prize and five third-prize.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity.
Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history，but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：介绍比赛安排；参加比赛的好处；对大家发出邀请。
2.表并列补充关系：then; not only…but also…; such as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如who引导的定语从句：Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@，and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem.此外，合理的使用非谓语也让文章增色不少，比如Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing, such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Sam,
At the first day of next month, our school will organize an activity focusing on International Youth Exchange Programme, which is to be held in the science building. To help you learn more about Chinese culture , I am writing to invite you to take part in this activity. More details about the activity are as follows.
To begin with, there will be a welcome ceremony, which is aimed to welcome exchange students attending the activity. Afterwards, some exchange students chosen as representatives will give a speech on their ambition. Last but not the least, an art exhibition will be arranged, including paper-cutting, which you are interested in. It is a rare chance for you to appreciate such a unique art form. I’m sure it inevitably light your enthusiasm for Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Sam写封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的国际青少年交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in/join in /participate in
了解：understand/ learn about
志向：aspiration/ideal/ambition
不可避免的：unavoidable/ineluctable/inescapable
渴望：long for/be eager for /thirst for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：An art exhibition will be arranged.
拓展句：An art exhibition which consists of many masterpieces of our dear teachers' will be arranged.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
At the first day of next month, our school will organize an activitie focusing on International Youth Exchange Programme, which is to be held in the science building. （运用了现在分词作定语，which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2]
It is a rare chance for you to appreciate such a unique art form. （运用了it作形式主语。）
7．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’Union. I’m writing to invie you to be a judge at our English speech contest, whose topic is There Would Be No Today’ China wihout the Communist Party of China. It will be held in the meeting hall of our school at 8:30 am next Friday. There will be 30 students from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours. The main purpose of the contest is to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Party of China, and express great thanks and deep love.
We are looking forward to your being here as a judge and having a good time.
With best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给学校外教Peter写封英文邮件，邀请他做评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：topic→theme
不同的：different→diverse
参加：take part in→participate in
玩得开心：have a good time→have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There will be 30 students from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours.
拓展句：There will be 30 students who come from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m writing to invie you to be a judge at our English speech contest, whose topic is There Would Be No Today’ China wihout the Communist Party of China.（whose引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
We are looking forward to your being here as a judge and having a good time.（动名词的复合结构作宾语）
8．Dear Tom,
I am grateful for your great concern about me. In my opinion, I am getting on well with my study all the time. During the first two months of fighting againest COVID-19, I kept learning online at home. From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers. Now, I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal. Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively. I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming national examination.
With my hard work and teachers' help, I believe I will make a great success in the national examination and be admitted to my dream school—Sichuan University!
Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，说明一下你在新冠病毒疫情影响下的学习情况。
【详解】本次作文要求你写回信给外国朋友Tom，说明一下你在新冠病毒疫情影响下的学习情况。第一，写作时注意准确运用时态。本文在叙述过去疫情期间在家网上学习的情况时要用一般过去时态；在说明现在在校备考的情况时要用一般现在时态；在表达决心和希望时要用一般将来时态。第二，注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，要适当使用过渡词语。第三，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。第四，注意要点要齐全，本文要求写三个要点，请逐一叙述。最后，要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。三种时态把握准确。别外，其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了现在分词作状From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers.和 I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming national examination.此外，be grateful for ; be filled with 和be admitted to等词组运用的恰如气氛，为文章增色添彩。
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9．One possible version:
Notice
The English Speech Contest, which we planned to hold this Wednesday in the lecture hall, has to be put off to next Friday from 9a.m. to 12a.m.on the school playground.
Here are the main reasons. There are many more students entering for the contest than we expected, and most students show great interest and will come to enjoy the activity, so we decide to make a change. As a result, we can make sure the participants have enough time to display their talents and more students can share this contest.
Sorry for any inconvenience it may bring you. Hope you all have a pleasant experience next Friday.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知，通知原定在本周三组织一场英语演讲比赛，因故有变化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定做：decide to do→be determined to do
因此：as a result→as a consequence
才能：talent→gift
愉快的：pleasant→ enjoyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are many more students entering for the contest than we expected…
拓展句：There are many more students who enter for the contest than we expected…
【点睛】【高分句型1】The English Speech Contest, which we planned to hold this Wednesday in the lecture hall, has to be put off to next Friday from 9a.m. to 12a.m.on the school playground.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As a result, we can make sure the participants have enough time to display their talents and more students can share this contest.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
10．参考范文
The Sport I Like Best
Nowadays, more and more people focus on exercise and health, so they are engaged in all kinds of sports. As to me, I like climbing best.
In my opinion, climbing is a good way to keep healthy. Since my childhood, I have been in love of climbing, which has become my favorite by and by. As a result, I am in good condition all the time. Meanwhile, climbing is also a right chance to come close to nature and get relaxed, when I can breathe fresh air, take pictures, make friends and so on. Above all, climbing has taught me how to face a challenge and lead a positive life.
I sincerely want to say thanks to climbing, and hope more people can go in for some meaningful sports to get healthy, relaxed and fun!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Sport I Like Best”为题写一篇短文，参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关注、注重：focus on → concentrate on
参与，从事：be engaged in → be involved in
方法：way → method
喜欢：be in love of→ be fond of
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Nowadays, more and more people focus on exercise and health, so they are engaged in all kinds of sports.
拓展句：Nowadays, as more and more people focus on exercise and health, they are engaged in all kinds of sports.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
In my opinion, climbing is a good way to keep healthy. （运用了动名词作主语以及不定式作后置定语）
【高分句型2】
Since my childhood, I have been in love of climbing, which has become my favorite by and by. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
11．A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class
Among all the unforgettable experiences, there’s one thing that I am proud of most. Whenever thinking of it, I would find myself happier and more confident than ever.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. After a short conversation with her, I knew that her children were far away from her. I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered all my classmates and organized them to visit these old people. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.
Caring for those around us is what I have learnt that day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校将举办题为“A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇参赛作文参加比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……为自豪：be proud of→take pride in
意识到：realize→be aware
突然想起：occur to→strike
拜访：visit→pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：It was on a fine autumn afternoon. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.
拓展句：It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Caring for those around us is what I have learnt that day. （运用了动名词短语作主语，what引导表语从句）
12．Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a student of senior three. I’m going to take part in the College Entrance Examination in June. I have some trouble in learning English. It seems that I have made little progress in English. I hope that you can give me some useful advice.
The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules. Besides, I find it difficult to write good English compositions. My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Could you help me, please
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李华的身份，给English Learning的编辑写一封邮件，谈谈在英语学科备考过程中遇到的一些困难。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
建议：advice→suggestion
此外：Besides→Moreover
最后：eventually→ultimately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules.
拓展句：Because it is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules, I have never got satisfying marks.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It seems that I have made little progress in English.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.（运用that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
13．Dear Manager,
I am LiHua. I went to your cinema to see a film the other day. The film was good but I didn’t enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning . It was rather annoying . Second , the sound of the movie was so unclear that I hardly bore it . Third, the EXIT signs couldn’t be seen clearly , which presented potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，几天前去万达影院看电影。在观影过程中，你发现了一些问题，请用英语给影院经理写封信反映情况并请及时整改。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封信，要求考生用英语给影院经理写封信反映观影情况并请及时整改。全文以一般过去时和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.广告太多；2.影片音质不好；3.出口标示不清晰。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为went to the cinema、so many advertisements、annoying\be so unclear\present potential safety hazards\make some improvements
等。写作时注意书信的惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如presented potential safety hazard、get out 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句Third, the EXIT signs couldn’t be seen clearly , which presented potential safety hazards；结果状语从句…the sound of the movie was so unclear that I hardly bore it ；同时文章还使用了一些串联成分，如firstly, second等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
14．Dear Brown,
I’m delighted to know that you are extremely interested in the great achievements made in China. So I am writing to share with you what I know about it.
As is known to all, China is a developing country, which has made much progress in recent years. We take pride in living a better life, having enough fresh water and food. Every child has the right to receive basic education. Our living conditions have greatly improved, as most families have moved into new houses. Cars are entering families quickly, making travel much convenient. Besides, our high speed railway is world-famous, and you can experience its comfort by yourself.
I hope my description above can help you know better about China. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，请你写封邮件告知有关信息。内容包括收到来信感到很高兴和中国改革开放后取得的成就（生活、教育、住宅、交通等）。
【详解】本文为书信体。书信体作文一般分为三个部分。第一部分写信的原因。即你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，你写封邮件告知有关信息。对此表示很高兴收到对方的来信。第二部分主要叙述中国改革开放以来取得的成就，主要是中国在生活、教育、住宅、交通等取得的成就。这一部分是重点。要用到的词组如：make much progress in...（在......取得成就）；receive basic education（接受教育）；living conditions（生活条件）。第三部分期待对方的回信。写作进尽量使句式灵活些，词汇要多变些，叙述时运用连词使文章过渡自然，有条理。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯。文中运用了许多的较高级的词汇如：be delighted to...; be interested in; share... with...; take pride in; have the right to; make much progress in; get sth done等。文中的句式较为灵活多变。定语从句As is known to all, China is a developing country, which has recent years.宾语从句 I’m delighted to know that you are extremely interested in the great achievements made in China和I’m know that you the great achievements made in China以及I am writing to you what I know about it。由as引导的状语从句 Our living conditions have greatly improved, as most families have moved into new houses。非谓语作状语making travel much convenient；having enough fresh water and food及非谓语作后置定语you the great achievements made in China等语法句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
15．Nowadays, pollution is getting worse and worse. The damage to the environment is getting serious. In my opinion, we should take some measures to protect the environment.
To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things. Some garbage can be recycled, while the harmful things should be put in a safe place. Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. We should do our best to take good care of the environment . For example, we should plant trees and stop using disposable chopsticks and stop throwing garbage everywhere. With modern fishing methods, more and more fish are caught. If too many fish are taken from the sea, there will soon be none left. If the river are polluted, we will die from the prison. We should make full use of natural resources, or we will be in great damage very soon.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿信。要求考生写一篇文章呼吁人们保护环境，提出有效的保护措施，给某英文报社将举行一次英文作文竞赛投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累破坏：damage→ harm
严重：serious→ severe
垃圾：garbage→ rubbish/litter
有害的：harmful→ destructive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things.
拓展句：I think we should do the following things so that we can protect the environment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. (由before引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. (由if引导条件状语从句)
16．A Cycling Tour
With the aim to make our life colorful and enjoyable, a cycling tour was organized by our class last Sunday, which turned out to be an unforgettable experience.
As scheduled, we, together with our teachers, set off at 7:30 last Sunday at the school gate, rode orderly all the way, and finally arrived at the City Lake safely. To start with, we held a race down the bicycle path around the lake, which provided us great fun. Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us. What’s more, the teacher took a lot of precious photos of us.
Through this activity, not only did we refresh our minds, but also we fully experienced the pleasure of outdoor sports. Exhausted as we all were, the relaxing and meaningful ride strengthened the bond/relationship/connection among us. What a wonderful cycling tour!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生为班级的英语角写一篇短文，介绍班级全体师生组织了一次环绕the City Lake的骑自行车观光活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable →memorable
出发：set off=set out
首先：to start with=first of all
最终：finally→eventually
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us.
拓展句：Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us, which was a feast for the eyes.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
To start with, we held a race down the bicycle path around the lake, which provided us great fun.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Through this activity, not only did we refresh our minds, but also we fully experienced the pleasure of outdoor sports.(not only置于句首使用部分倒装)
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一、建议信
1．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考三模）假如你是李华，在你校体育节来临之际，给学校英文报写一篇短文分享锻炼经历，倡导体育锻炼。内容包括：
1.锻炼经历；
2.给学校加强体育锻炼的建议；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school’s annual Sports Day approaching, I can’t help thinking of my sports experience.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2020·四川泸州·统考一模）假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 分享收获；
3. 谈谈建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
With the 10th anniversary of Learning English just around the corner, I am writing to.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
二、申请信
3．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第四中学校考模拟预测）今年五月,雅安将举办2021年国际茶文化节(the International Tea Culture Festival 2021), 现正在招募英语口译志愿者。假如你是李华,请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:
1. 表达申请意愿;
2. 说明胜任理由;
3. 希望申请成功。
参考词汇:interpreter (口译者)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
4．（2023·四川泸州·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者，请给他写一封英语邮件，邀请他投稿参展。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 投稿方式；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1 .词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·四川泸州·泸县五中校考模拟预测）学校英语社团即将举办一年一度的中国诗词翻译大赛。假定你是社团主席李华,请你写一个活动通知,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Date: June 21,2020
Notice
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Club
6．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考二模）假定你叫李华，你校将举办国际青少年交流活动，邀请你的新西兰笔友Sam参加，请根据以下要点，用英语给他写封邮件：
1. 时间，地点；
2. 交流内容（谈理想未来，参观艺术作品展等）；
3. 期待回复。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：International Youth Exchange Programme 国际青少年交流活动
Dear Sam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·四川泸州·统考三模）假定你是学生会主席李华，在中国共产党成立100周年来临之际，学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛，题目是 There Would Be No Today's China without the Communist Party of China . 请你给学校外教Peter写封英文邮件，特邀他任评委，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.活动的时间、地点和意义；
3.表达愿望。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
8．（2020·四川泸州·统考三模）假设你是李华，今年7月即将参加高考。最近，你的笔友Tom写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒（COVID-19）疫情受到影响。请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.简述疫情下的备考情况；
3.表达决心和希望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、告知信/通知
9．（2022·四川泸州·统考二模）你校学生会原定在本周三组织一场英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)，但因故有变化，为此，请你写一则通知，内容包括:
1. 告知变化的时间和地点；
2. 简述变化的原因；
3. 表达歉意与愿望。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
六、其他应用文
10．（2022·四川泸州·统考一模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。 请以“The Sport I Like Best”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的运动；
2. 该运动对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Sport I Like Best
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11．（2022·四川泸州·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办题为“A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇参赛作文，内容包括：
1. 描述事情的起因和过程；
2. 谈谈个人收获和感受。注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class
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12．（2022·四川泸州·统考三模）假定你是高三学生李华，在目前的英语学科备考过程中遇到了一些困难，感到困惑。请给English Learning的编辑写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.你的情况；
3.你的愿望。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2020·四川泸州·四川省泸县第四中学校考三模）假如你是李华，几天前你去万达影院看电影。在观影过程中，你发现了一些问题，请你用英语给影院经理写封信反映如下情况并请及时整改。
1.广告太多
2.影片音质不好
3.出口标示不清晰
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
出口标示:the EXIT signs
Dear Manager,
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Yours faithfully
LiHua
14．（2020·四川泸州·泸县五中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，请你写封邮件告知有关信息。内容包括：
1．很高兴收到来信
2．取得的成就（生活、教育、住宅、交通等）
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．（2020·四川泸州·四川省泸县第一中学校考三模）为庆祝6月5日“世界环境保护日”，某英文报社将举行一次英文作文竞赛，呼吁人们保护环境，提出有效的保护措施。请以下面的内容为参考，写一篇文章投稿。
1．回收利用有用物质，掩埋有害物质。
2．废水、废气要净化；
3．植树造林，保护环境；
4．保护海洋，禁止过度捕鱼；
5．充分利用自然资源。
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译
重点词汇词组：garbage environment take some measures
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七、开放性作文
16．（2022·四川泸州·四川省泸县第二中学校联考三模）上周末，你班全体师生组织了一次环绕the City Lake的骑自行车观光活动。请你为班级的英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的； 2.活动过程； 3.个人感受；
注意：1. 题目已给出。
2. 词数100左右；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Cycling Tour
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参考答案：
1．Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school's annual Sports Day approaching, I can't help thinking of my sports experience. As I entered the senior high school, I had much pressure from study, and my health was worsening. My father pushed me to run in the morning. I kept running and running until it became habitual. Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies.
Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. Above all, students should be given more sports time. For example, our school can organize more after-school activities like basketball match, football match, running and so on.
More physical exercise and we'll enjoy better health, better moods and better academic performance. Let’s participate in more physical exercise!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己的锻炼经历，并向其他同学发出倡议，共同日常锻炼，健康生活。
【详解】1.积累
压力：pressure→stress
因为：since→because
参加：participate in=take part in
对……有益：be beneficial to→be good for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, students should be given more sports time.
拓展句：Above all, students should be given more sports time, which can help sweat out and reduce stress of study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies. (运用了not only…but also…引导的倒装并列句式)
[高分句型2]Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
2．Dear Editor,
With the 10th anniversary of Learning English just around the corner，I am writing to say thanks to you for your hard work!
As a regular reader, I like Learning English very much，and have benefited a lot. For example, as long as I turn the pages, I can enjoy important national and international news, keeping track of what has happened at home and abroad; also attractive to me are the success stories of great people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world better.
As a young student, I think we should do more reading to enrich our life and study. I suggest your magazine carry more articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope it will become even more popular.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一封书信写作。假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信。
【详解】假定你是李华，在你所喜欢的Learning English杂志创刊十周年之际，请给主编写封信，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 分享收获；3. 谈谈建议。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。also attractive to me are the success stories of great people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world better. 定语从句的运用。As a young student, I think we should do more reading to enrich our life and study. 宾语从句的运用。
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student from Ya’an. Learning that The International Tea Culture Festival 2021 will be held in Ya’an in July, I really hope to be one of the interpreters for it.
I believe I’m the right person for the job. First of all, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with foreigners with no barriers. Besides, I have participated in some activities to serve as an interpreter , which gains me valuable experience. Furthermore, I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture. So I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
I’d appreciate it if I can get your offer. Thank you very much!
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为2021年国际茶文化节的英语口译志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
希望：hope→wish
此外：besides→what’s more
参加：participate in→take part in
感激：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Furthermore, I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture. So I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
拓展句：Furthermore, because I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture, I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I have a good command of English, which allows me to communicate with foreigners with no barriers.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if I can get your offer. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
How is everything going I have some exciting news for you! Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so on. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to 2022@. Deadline for entries is November, 15th, 2022.
If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于一篇应用文。假定你是李华，你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者，请给他写一封英语邮件，邀请他投稿参展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→ competition
开心的：happy → delighted
上交：turn in→ hand in
至多：at most→ no more than
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
拓展句：Photos which are edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”.（运用了过去分词作定语）
【高分句型2】If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
5．Date：June 21,2020
Notice
The annual translation competition on Chinese poetry is going to be held online from June 28 to 30 by our school’s English Club. Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@, and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem. Then based on ten professional judges’ decision，there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing，such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity. Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history, but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English. So what are you waiting for Just begin your translation.
The English Club
【分析】本篇作文属于应用文，要求对学校即将举办的中国诗词翻译大赛写一个活动通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate；be based on；be welcome to; not only…but also…
第三步：连词成句
Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@.
Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner，two second-prize and five third-prize.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity.
Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history，but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：介绍比赛安排；参加比赛的好处；对大家发出邀请。
2.表并列补充关系：then; not only…but also…; such as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如who引导的定语从句：Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@，and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem.此外，合理的使用非谓语也让文章增色不少，比如Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing, such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Sam,
At the first day of next month, our school will organize an activity focusing on International Youth Exchange Programme, which is to be held in the science building. To help you learn more about Chinese culture , I am writing to invite you to take part in this activity. More details about the activity are as follows.
To begin with, there will be a welcome ceremony, which is aimed to welcome exchange students attending the activity. Afterwards, some exchange students chosen as representatives will give a speech on their ambition. Last but not the least, an art exhibition will be arranged, including paper-cutting, which you are interested in. It is a rare chance for you to appreciate such a unique art form. I’m sure it inevitably light your enthusiasm for Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Sam写封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的国际青少年交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in/join in /participate in
了解：understand/ learn about
志向：aspiration/ideal/ambition
不可避免的：unavoidable/ineluctable/inescapable
渴望：long for/be eager for /thirst for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：An art exhibition will be arranged.
拓展句：An art exhibition which consists of many masterpieces of our dear teachers' will be arranged.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
At the first day of next month, our school will organize an activitie focusing on International Youth Exchange Programme, which is to be held in the science building. （运用了现在分词作定语，which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2]
It is a rare chance for you to appreciate such a unique art form. （运用了it作形式主语。）
7．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’Union. I’m writing to invie you to be a judge at our English speech contest, whose topic is There Would Be No Today’ China wihout the Communist Party of China. It will be held in the meeting hall of our school at 8:30 am next Friday. There will be 30 students from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours. The main purpose of the contest is to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Party of China, and express great thanks and deep love.
We are looking forward to your being here as a judge and having a good time.
With best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给学校外教Peter写封英文邮件，邀请他做评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：topic→theme
不同的：different→diverse
参加：take part in→participate in
玩得开心：have a good time→have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There will be 30 students from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours.
拓展句：There will be 30 students who come from different classes in our school taking part in the contest, so it will last about 3 hours.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m writing to invie you to be a judge at our English speech contest, whose topic is There Would Be No Today’ China wihout the Communist Party of China.（whose引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
We are looking forward to your being here as a judge and having a good time.（动名词的复合结构作宾语）
8．Dear Tom,
I am grateful for your great concern about me. In my opinion, I am getting on well with my study all the time. During the first two months of fighting againest COVID-19, I kept learning online at home. From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers. Now, I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal. Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively. I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming national examination.
With my hard work and teachers' help, I believe I will make a great success in the national examination and be admitted to my dream school—Sichuan University!
Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，说明一下你在新冠病毒疫情影响下的学习情况。
【详解】本次作文要求你写回信给外国朋友Tom，说明一下你在新冠病毒疫情影响下的学习情况。第一，写作时注意准确运用时态。本文在叙述过去疫情期间在家网上学习的情况时要用一般过去时态；在说明现在在校备考的情况时要用一般现在时态；在表达决心和希望时要用一般将来时态。第二，注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，要适当使用过渡词语。第三，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。第四，注意要点要齐全，本文要求写三个要点，请逐一叙述。最后，要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。三种时态把握准确。别外，其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了现在分词作状From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers.和 I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming national examination.此外，be grateful for ; be filled with 和be admitted to等词组运用的恰如气氛，为文章增色添彩。
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9．One possible version:
Notice
The English Speech Contest, which we planned to hold this Wednesday in the lecture hall, has to be put off to next Friday from 9a.m. to 12a.m.on the school playground.
Here are the main reasons. There are many more students entering for the contest than we expected, and most students show great interest and will come to enjoy the activity, so we decide to make a change. As a result, we can make sure the participants have enough time to display their talents and more students can share this contest.
Sorry for any inconvenience it may bring you. Hope you all have a pleasant experience next Friday.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知，通知原定在本周三组织一场英语演讲比赛，因故有变化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定做：decide to do→be determined to do
因此：as a result→as a consequence
才能：talent→gift
愉快的：pleasant→ enjoyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are many more students entering for the contest than we expected…
拓展句：There are many more students who enter for the contest than we expected…
【点睛】【高分句型1】The English Speech Contest, which we planned to hold this Wednesday in the lecture hall, has to be put off to next Friday from 9a.m. to 12a.m.on the school playground.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As a result, we can make sure the participants have enough time to display their talents and more students can share this contest.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
10．参考范文
The Sport I Like Best
Nowadays, more and more people focus on exercise and health, so they are engaged in all kinds of sports. As to me, I like climbing best.
In my opinion, climbing is a good way to keep healthy. Since my childhood, I have been in love of climbing, which has become my favorite by and by. As a result, I am in good condition all the time. Meanwhile, climbing is also a right chance to come close to nature and get relaxed, when I can breathe fresh air, take pictures, make friends and so on. Above all, climbing has taught me how to face a challenge and lead a positive life.
I sincerely want to say thanks to climbing, and hope more people can go in for some meaningful sports to get healthy, relaxed and fun!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Sport I Like Best”为题写一篇短文，参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关注、注重：focus on → concentrate on
参与，从事：be engaged in → be involved in
方法：way → method
喜欢：be in love of→ be fond of
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Nowadays, more and more people focus on exercise and health, so they are engaged in all kinds of sports.
拓展句：Nowadays, as more and more people focus on exercise and health, they are engaged in all kinds of sports.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
In my opinion, climbing is a good way to keep healthy. （运用了动名词作主语以及不定式作后置定语）
【高分句型2】
Since my childhood, I have been in love of climbing, which has become my favorite by and by. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
11．A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class
Among all the unforgettable experiences, there’s one thing that I am proud of most. Whenever thinking of it, I would find myself happier and more confident than ever.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. After a short conversation with her, I knew that her children were far away from her. I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered all my classmates and organized them to visit these old people. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.
Caring for those around us is what I have learnt that day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校将举办题为“A Meaningful Thing I Did for My Class”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇参赛作文参加比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……为自豪：be proud of→take pride in
意识到：realize→be aware
突然想起：occur to→strike
拜访：visit→pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：It was on a fine autumn afternoon. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.
拓展句：It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Caring for those around us is what I have learnt that day. （运用了动名词短语作主语，what引导表语从句）
12．Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a student of senior three. I’m going to take part in the College Entrance Examination in June. I have some trouble in learning English. It seems that I have made little progress in English. I hope that you can give me some useful advice.
The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules. Besides, I find it difficult to write good English compositions. My English teacher is always explaining the language points in class and I can hardly take them down. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Could you help me, please
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李华的身份，给English Learning的编辑写一封邮件，谈谈在英语学科备考过程中遇到的一些困难。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
建议：advice→suggestion
此外：Besides→Moreover
最后：eventually→ultimately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have never got satisfying marks. It is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules.
拓展句：Because it is a hard job for me to remember and use grammatical rules, I have never got satisfying marks.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It seems that I have made little progress in English.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in English, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.（运用that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
13．Dear Manager,
I am LiHua. I went to your cinema to see a film the other day. The film was good but I didn’t enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning . It was rather annoying . Second , the sound of the movie was so unclear that I hardly bore it . Third, the EXIT signs couldn’t be seen clearly , which presented potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，几天前去万达影院看电影。在观影过程中，你发现了一些问题，请用英语给影院经理写封信反映情况并请及时整改。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封信，要求考生用英语给影院经理写封信反映观影情况并请及时整改。全文以一般过去时和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.广告太多；2.影片音质不好；3.出口标示不清晰。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为went to the cinema、so many advertisements、annoying\be so unclear\present potential safety hazards\make some improvements
等。写作时注意书信的惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如presented potential safety hazard、get out 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句Third, the EXIT signs couldn’t be seen clearly , which presented potential safety hazards；结果状语从句…the sound of the movie was so unclear that I hardly bore it ；同时文章还使用了一些串联成分，如firstly, second等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
14．Dear Brown,
I’m delighted to know that you are extremely interested in the great achievements made in China. So I am writing to share with you what I know about it.
As is known to all, China is a developing country, which has made much progress in recent years. We take pride in living a better life, having enough fresh water and food. Every child has the right to receive basic education. Our living conditions have greatly improved, as most families have moved into new houses. Cars are entering families quickly, making travel much convenient. Besides, our high speed railway is world-famous, and you can experience its comfort by yourself.
I hope my description above can help you know better about China. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，请你写封邮件告知有关信息。内容包括收到来信感到很高兴和中国改革开放后取得的成就（生活、教育、住宅、交通等）。
【详解】本文为书信体。书信体作文一般分为三个部分。第一部分写信的原因。即你的美国朋友Brown来信询问中国改革开放以来取得的成就，你写封邮件告知有关信息。对此表示很高兴收到对方的来信。第二部分主要叙述中国改革开放以来取得的成就，主要是中国在生活、教育、住宅、交通等取得的成就。这一部分是重点。要用到的词组如：make much progress in...（在......取得成就）；receive basic education（接受教育）；living conditions（生活条件）。第三部分期待对方的回信。写作进尽量使句式灵活些，词汇要多变些，叙述时运用连词使文章过渡自然，有条理。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯。文中运用了许多的较高级的词汇如：be delighted to...; be interested in; share... with...; take pride in; have the right to; make much progress in; get sth done等。文中的句式较为灵活多变。定语从句As is known to all, China is a developing country, which has recent years.宾语从句 I’m delighted to know that you are extremely interested in the great achievements made in China和I’m know that you the great achievements made in China以及I am writing to you what I know about it。由as引导的状语从句 Our living conditions have greatly improved, as most families have moved into new houses。非谓语作状语making travel much convenient；having enough fresh water and food及非谓语作后置定语you the great achievements made in China等语法句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
15．Nowadays, pollution is getting worse and worse. The damage to the environment is getting serious. In my opinion, we should take some measures to protect the environment.
To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things. Some garbage can be recycled, while the harmful things should be put in a safe place. Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. We should do our best to take good care of the environment . For example, we should plant trees and stop using disposable chopsticks and stop throwing garbage everywhere. With modern fishing methods, more and more fish are caught. If too many fish are taken from the sea, there will soon be none left. If the river are polluted, we will die from the prison. We should make full use of natural resources, or we will be in great damage very soon.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿信。要求考生写一篇文章呼吁人们保护环境，提出有效的保护措施，给某英文报社将举行一次英文作文竞赛投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累破坏：damage→ harm
严重：serious→ severe
垃圾：garbage→ rubbish/litter
有害的：harmful→ destructive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things.
拓展句：I think we should do the following things so that we can protect the environment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. (由before引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. (由if引导条件状语从句)
16．A Cycling Tour
With the aim to make our life colorful and enjoyable, a cycling tour was organized by our class last Sunday, which turned out to be an unforgettable experience.
As scheduled, we, together with our teachers, set off at 7:30 last Sunday at the school gate, rode orderly all the way, and finally arrived at the City Lake safely. To start with, we held a race down the bicycle path around the lake, which provided us great fun. Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us. What’s more, the teacher took a lot of precious photos of us.
Through this activity, not only did we refresh our minds, but also we fully experienced the pleasure of outdoor sports. Exhausted as we all were, the relaxing and meaningful ride strengthened the bond/relationship/connection among us. What a wonderful cycling tour!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生为班级的英语角写一篇短文，介绍班级全体师生组织了一次环绕the City Lake的骑自行车观光活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable →memorable
出发：set off=set out
首先：to start with=first of all
最终：finally→eventually
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us.
拓展句：Then we slowly rode to appreciate the fascinating scenery around us, which was a feast for the eyes.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
To start with, we held a race down the bicycle path around the lake, which provided us great fun.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Through this activity, not only did we refresh our minds, but also we fully experienced the pleasure of outdoor sports.(not only置于句首使用部分倒装)
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