四川省绵阳市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2022·四川绵阳·四川省绵阳南山中学校考二模)假设你是李华,你的英国网友David来信说他最近因经常感冒而苦恼,请你给他回一封信,包括以下要点:
1、表示关心。
2、提出防感冒的建议(至少两条)。
3、表达祝愿。
注意:1、词数100词左右。
2、可适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours.
Li Hua
2.(2021·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考三模)假定你是李华,你班的交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.进行安慰;
2.分析原因;
3.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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3.(2020·四川绵阳·四川省绵阳南山中学校考三模)假定你是李华,请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件,建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营,报名网站是www.内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.活动内容;
3.报名方式。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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二、邀请信
4.(2021·四川绵阳·统考三模)假定你叫李华。去年的疫情耽误了你的澳洲网友Alex来中国过牛年春节的计划。在给你的邮件中他表达了对此的郁闷并询问你这个春节是怎么度过的。请你用英语给他回信,内容要点如下:
1.表达遗憾和安慰;
2.简述你的牛年春节;
3.邀请他疫情结束之后来中国过年。
注意:
1.词数100左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.(2020·四川绵阳·统考二模)假如你是李华,圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客:他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛,适逢中国春节期间,你 打算邀请他来你家。请给他写e-mail,要点如下:
1. 对前次爽约致歉;
2. 邀请他来你家做客:
3. 盼回复以便作安排。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2020·四川绵阳·统考三模)假如你是某校的高三学生李华,高考后的暑假你打算去澳大利亚旅游,请你用英语给你身在悉尼的网友Justin写信,内容包括以下要点:
1.请他推荐行程安排;
2.邀他同游;
3.问他是否可到机场接机。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Justin,
How are you doing
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
7.(2023·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考三模)假定你是李华,上周末你受本校交换生David邀请一起外出骑行,请你给David发一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;
2.骑行感想;
3.下周末安排。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2022·四川绵阳·盐亭中学校考模拟预测)假如你是小华,上个月刚刚过了18岁生日,觉得自己已经是大人了,于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算,以书信形式同父母谈谈。信的主要内容如下:
1. 对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情;
2. 取得高考好成绩,进入理想的大学。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
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Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
四、告知信/通知
9.(2023·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考模拟预测)你是校英语文学社社长李华,准备召集社团成员开会,讨论如何响应学校拟举行的以“和谐校园”为主题的系列活动。请写一份邮件,通知大家开会,内容包括:
1.会议起因;
2.会议主题;
3.会议时间、地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear All,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
10.(2023·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考模拟预测)为了帮助学生养成良好的学习习惯,你校英文报正在举行“拒绝拖延 (Procrastination)”的征文活动,请你以“How to Overcome Procrastination”为题投稿,内容包括:
1.拖延的影响;
2.克服拖延的方法。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How to Overcome Procrastination
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11.(2023·四川绵阳·统考二模)假设你是李华,上周末去学校周边某社区参加了志愿者活动。请给你校官网英文专栏写一篇短文介绍你们的活动情况,要点包括:
1.活动概况;
2.感悟与收获。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节, 使行文连贯;
4.标题已给出, 不计入总词数。
Many hands make light work
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12.(2022·四川绵阳·统考一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华。今夏以来,多地缺电,所以节约用电非常必要,请你代表学生会在学校英文报上写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.节约用电的必要性;
2.具体的做法及号召。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.文章开头和结尾已经写好。
Dear fellow students,
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The student Union
13.(2022·四川绵阳·统考三模)假设你是李华。你校下期将开设中国传统艺术选修课,请用英文给交换生Mike写封信,内容包括:
1.开课目的:
2.内容及安排;
3.选课建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
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14.(2022·四川绵阳·绵阳中学统考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike准备在他们学校的“China Week”活动上介绍中国papercutting,希望你能给他一些帮助。请就此给Mike写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 对活动表示欣慰;
2. 介绍你所了解的中国剪纸;
3. 邀请他来中国亲自感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
15.(2022·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考模拟预测)假定你是校英文报小记者,上周日,你校学生会带领交换生参观了当地的历史博物馆。请你以 A Visit to the History Museum 为题写一篇新闻报道,要点如下:
1. 参加人员;
2. 活动经过;
3. 活动意义。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the History Museum
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16.(2021·四川绵阳·统考一模)假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,最近在学校里总看到有浪费饭菜的现象。请你给全校同学写一封英文信,倡议大家节约粮食。要点包括:
1.必要性;
2.具体措施;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.词数100字左右;
2.可适当增加细节已使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入词数。
Dear fellow students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2020·四川绵阳·统考二模)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom来信请求你六月高考后通过网络教他学汉语。请你用英语给他回信,内容要点如下:
1. 因高考延期拒绝其请求;
2. 另约定授课时间;
3. 提醒他预防新冠病毒。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
18.(2020·四川绵阳·四川省绵阳南山中学校考三模)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,你校组织了一场关于抗击冠状病毒的校园安全讲座,请你就此写一则通知。内容包括:
1. 讲座的时间、地点;2. 讲座的主要内容;3. 其他注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 标题和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:冠状病毒coronavirus
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19.(2020·四川绵阳·统考一模)今年寒假后各校都未能如期开学,宅家网上学习(learning at home online) 是大家的共同记忆。假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友David也将开始宅家学习,想 分享你这段经历,请电邮告知,主要内容是:
1.上网课的优点;
2.上网课的弊端;
3.你的感悟。
注意:1.词数100左右。首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, David!
It's sad to know that you'll have to have classes at home.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案:
1.Dear David,
I am so sorry to learn from your letter that your study suffers due to your constant colds. And I’m quite concerned about that and hope you are feeling better now.
I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds. First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well. The better your body functions, the less likely you are to catch a cold. Besides, keep a positive mind and take regular exercise to guarantee a strong body. And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友David回信,对他经常感冒的苦恼表达关心,并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:be concerned about→ worried about
首先:First of all→ To begin with
对……是至关重要的:be vital for→ be essential to
另外:Besides → Additionally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds.
拓展句:I have some suggestions that can prevent you from colds.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses.(运用了时间状语从句的省略)
2.One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't perform well in the contest of "Telling Chinese Stories in English" and that you're feeling down. Actually, as a foreigner, you've tried your best.
Anyhow, you shouldn't lose heart. Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure. As I can see, you weren't well prepared for it as you didn't understand the story well and lacked practice in storytelling.
I think you should spend more time reading more Chinese stories and practise telling Chinese stories with me or your other Chinese friends, I'm sure you will make great progress.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落,要求给他写一封电子邮件表示安慰,帮助分析原因并提出建议。
【详解】词汇积累
感到沮丧:feel down →feel depressed
尽力:try one’s best→ do one’s best
失去信心:lose confidence →lose heart
原因:reason → cause
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure.
拓展句:Instead, you should analyze the cause which leads to your failure.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to hear that you didn't perform well in the contest of "Telling Chinese Stories in English" and that you're feeling down. (运用了that引导的2个并列的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As I can see, you weren't well prepared for it as you didn't understand the story well and lacked practice in storytelling. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
3.Dear Mary,
Knowing that you're crazy about giant pandas, I can't wait to recommend you an interesting and meaningful summer camp - the Panda Breeder Summer Camp.
The camp falls on July 15th and lasts 5 days in Chengdu, Sichuan, where you have been dreaming of travelling. On the first day, all the participants will be given some basic panda-breeding lessons, which will help to better perform the next tasks. Then they are scheduled to spend the following four days visiting baby pandas and breeding them with the help of the zoo keepers. What an amazing experience it will be!
If you would like to apply, please log on the website www. and fill in your personal information. I guarantee you a fabulous time.
Yours,
Li Hua .
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封建议信。
【详解】第一步:明确要求。假定你是李华,请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件,建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营,报名网站是www.内容包括:1.提出建议;2.活动内容;3.报名方式。
第二步:列关键词。
can’t wait;recommend;fall on;dream of;perform;schedule;breed;with the help of;apply;log on;guarantee等等。
第三步:连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句,注意主谓一致,时态语态等语法。
第四步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,如:First、Next等。注意,词数100 左右。书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。高级句型有:Knowing that you're crazy about giant pandas, I can't wait to recommend you an interesting and meaningful summer camp - the Panda Breeder Summer Camp.使用了非谓语动词;The camp falls on July 15th and lasts 5 days in Chengdu, Sichuan, where you have been dreaming of travelling.使用了非限制性定语从句;What an amazing experience it will be!是感叹句式。
4.Dear Alex,
I’m sorry that we couldn’t make it to spend the Spring Festival together as planned. I know you’re upset about it. However, take it easy. I am sharing with you my experience in the New Year.
To respond to the government’s call, we stayed at home, celebrating the Spring Festival with our family. As usual, we had great reunion meals on New Year’s Eve, pasted red couplets and stayed up to greet the New Year. Instead of visiting our friends and relatives, we played various games and surfed the Internet indoors, though which we had great fun during the pandemic.
Come and join us to welcome the next New Year when the pandemic comes to an end! I’m sure you’ll enjoy your stay here with us. Looking forward to your coming!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给你的澳洲网友Alex写封回信,告诉他你怎么度过疫情期间的这个春节的。
【详解】词汇积累
成功做到……:make it to do…→manage to do…
对……感到难过的/失望的:be upset about →be disappointed at
而不是:instead of→rather than
玩得高兴:have great fun → have a good/ wonderful time → enjoy oneself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We had great reunion meals on New Year’s Eve, pasted red couplets and stayed up to greet the New Year.
拓展句:We had various traditional activities for the New Year, such as enjoying great reunion meals on New Year’s Eve, pasting red couplets and staying up to greet the New Year.
同义句表达
原句:Instead of visiting our friends and relatives, we played various games and surfed the Internet indoors.
同义句:We didn’t visit our friends and relatives. Instead, we played various games and surfed the Internet indoors.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
We stayed at home, celebrating the Spring Festival with our family. (现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型2]
We played various games and surfed the Internet indoors, though which we had great fun during the pandemic. (“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.Dear Jackson,
How’s it going Thank you for inviting me but I’m awfully sorry that I failed to go to enjoy the “hot” Christmas with your family. I had been in hospital for several days when I received your invitation.
Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. How wonderful it is! It’s just during the Chinese Spring Festival. I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.
Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇书信类提纲作文。
【详解】根据题目要求,要求以李华的身份,对圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客致歉,另外得知他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛,适逢中国春节期间,打算邀请他来你家,给他写e-mail。根据文章内容,文章正文可分为三大段:第一段对前次爽约致歉;第二段提出邀请,请他来你家做客;第三段盼回复以便作安排。本文主要时态应为现在时态,注意主谓一致和句段之间的自然衔接。
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. 使用了宾语从句;I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.使用了非限制性定语从句;Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.该句中用so that引导目的状语从句,等等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
6.Dear Justin,
How are you doing
You said you wanted to meet me in yours last letter and I’m very glad to tell you that I’m planning to pay a visit to Australia this summer vacation. Will you meet me at the airport the day I get there
As a local, you must be very familiar with the attractions of your country. So I need your advice on where to go and what to do during my stay in Australia. And I’ll be overjoyed if you can join me in the trip. I’m sure we’ll have a great time together.
Can’t wait to see you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信件,向悉尼的网友咨询去澳大利亚旅游的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:澳大利亚旅游相关:
1.请求推荐行程安排
2.邀请一同旅游
3.询问是否可以接机
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
plan to; local; be familiar with; place of interest; recommend; join; have a good time; look forward to; as soon as possible
第三步:连词成句
1. I plan to visit Australia this summer holiday.
2. You must be familiar with your country as a local citizen.
3. Could you recommend some places of interest to me
4. I sincerely invite you to join me.
5. We will have a good time.
6. Please meet me at the airport when I arrive.
7. Looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,表达地道。作者在范文中使用了较多复合句,如:So I need your advice on where to go and what to do during my stay in Australia.这句话在介词加宾语的结构中运用了宾语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如pay a visit to; can’t wait to; be familiar with等。值得一提的是,作者将要点的书写顺序依照自己的逻辑和习惯作了调整,在首段说明来意后就直接提出了能否接机的请求,显然是在遵照要点的同时,也加进了自己的思考。
7.Dear David,
What an unforgettable ride it was! Now I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for inviting me and propose a plan for next week.
To be frank, what’s really remarkable was people’s active involvement in bicycle riding, from the young pedaling with playmates to well-equipped cyclists racing on paved lanes. Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes. As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生David写邮件,感谢对方上周末邀请外出骑行,告知这次骑行的感想,以及下周末的安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere → genuine
表达:express → convey
坦白地说:To be frank → Frankly speaking
鼓舞:inspire → stimulate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
拓展句:As to our next trip, shall we camp at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes.(运用了强调句,动词不定式作补语,非限制性定语从句和虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits (运用了动名词作宾语,if引导的条件状语从句)
8.Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
I celebrated my 18th birthday last month, which means that I have been already an adult. I am so grateful to you that I don’t know how to express it. First, thank you for providing me with good living environment. Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice.
Now, I am a senior three student. The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. I am determined to try my best to pass the competitive exams. I believe I can enter my ideal key university through my efforts.
On the other hand, I want to be an independent man. With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给父母写一封信,对父母表达感激之情并告诉父母你今后的打算。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的:grateful→thankful
首先:first→first of all
建议:advice→suggestion
决定做某事:be determined to do sth.→decide to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
拓展句:As this society develops, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
9.Dear All,
A series of activities based on the topic of Harmonious Campus are going to be held. To response to the school better, we decided that we should hold a meeting. Now I am writing this letter to inform you to attend the meeting.
Starting at 10 a.m., the meeting will be held next Monday in the meeting room of our English literature society. We are going to discuss what kind of activities we will hold and how we should organize them. Every member of our society should attend it on time.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是校英语文学社社长李华,准备召集社团成员开会,讨论如何响应学校拟举行的以“和谐校园”为主题的系列活动。请写一份邮件,通知大家开会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
一系列:a series of → a variety of
主题:topic → theme
响应:respond to → answer to
讨论:discuss →have a discussion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A series of activities based on the topic of Harmonious Campus are going to be held.
拓展句:Varieties of activities, whose themes are related to Harmonious Campus, are going to be held.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To response to the school better, we decided that we should hold a meeting.(运用了to do不定式表目的和that引导的宾语从句以及虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】We are going to discuss what kind of activities we will hold and how we should organize them.(运用了what和how引导的宾语从句)
10.How to Overcome Procrastination
Procrastination, a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt. Because of its negative consequences, it is high time that we overcame it.
The very first step is to reflect on the reasons why you postpone doing things constantly. Only by doing so can you truly begin to change your behavior. It is also a good choice to break big tasks into small manageable ones. This is because when a task is too overwhelming to tackle, procrastination often follows. Besides, keeping yourself motivated by promising yourself a reward might help.
While procrastination may not be conquered overnight, by practicing these methods, you will find it easier to get started on important tasks.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校英文报正在举行“拒绝拖延 (Procrastination)”的征文活动,以“How to Overcome Procrastination”为题投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于:Because of → Due to
推迟:postpone→ put off
选择:choice→option
此外:Besides→ What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Procrastination, a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt.
拓展句:Procrastination, which is a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The very first step is to reflect on the reasons why you postpone doing things constantly.(运用了不定式作表语,why引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】While procrastination may not be conquered overnight, by practicing these methods, you will find it easier to get started on important tasks.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句,动名词作宾语,不定式作宾语)
11.A possible version:
Many hands make light work
Last weekend we went to a community near our school to do some volunteer work. When we got there in the morning, we were warmly welcomed by everybody. Soon we got down to work. Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores. They were glad to see so many young faces around them. The others joined the locals to clean up the neighborhood. We helped sweep the streets and collect rubbish. Soon the whole area took on a new look.
The activity did not last long, but we learned a lot. By joining our hands we can accomplish big things and make the world a better place.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生就上周末去学校周边某社区参加了志愿者活动写一篇短文介绍你们的活动情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
到达:get→arrive
高兴:glad→delighted
收集:collect→gather
参加:join→participate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last weekend we went to a community near our school to do some volunteer work.
拓展句:Last weekend we went to a community near our school where we did some volunteer work.
【点睛】[高分句型1]When we got there in the morning, we were warmly welcomed by everybody.(when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores.(不定式做目的状语)
12.Dear fellow students,
As is known to us, without electricity the society cannot run smoothly. But around us, electricity is often regrettably wasted, in contrast to which many places have been suffering severe power shortage since this summer. So it’s necessary for us to save electricity.
First and foremost,we should make it a habit to save electricity and practice it in our daily life. For example, when leaving the room, we should turn off the lights. Moreover, we should remind more people around us, such as our parents, close relatives and friends, of the importance of saving electricity.
Many hands make light work. Dear fellow students, let’s join in the power saving action, start from ourselves, and act from now on.
The student’s Union
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生代表学生会在学校英文报上写一封倡议书,倡导大家节约用电。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
平稳地,流畅地:smoothly → steadily
必需的:necessary → essential
日常的:daily → workday
加入:join in → take part in
2. 句式拓展
句式转换
原句:As is known to us, without electricity the society cannot run smoothly.
拓展句:What is known to us is that without electricity the society cannot run smoothly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
First and foremost, we should make it a habit to save electricity and practice it in our daily life. (运用了it作形式宾语)
【高分句型2】
For example, when leaving the room, we should turn off the lights.(运用了状语从句的省略)
13.Dear mike,
In order to help the students have a better understanding of the Chinese culture, our school will introduce four new elective courses next term, which are Guqin, Chinese chess, calligraphy and Chinese painting respectively. They are scheduled on very Friday evening from 7 to 9 o'clock. You can only choose one and have to stick to it throughout the term. I am sure they will be great fun. For further information, please log on our school website. I strongly suggest you do some research about them ahead of time and pick the one you are most interested in.
Best wishes and I am looking forward to your coming and joining us next term!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Mike写信,给他介绍学校下学期即将开设的中国传统艺术选修课。
【详解】1.词汇积累
引入:bring in→introduce
坚持:hold on to→stick to
建议:advise→suggest
提前:in advance→ahead of time
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You can only choose one and have to stick to it throughout the term.
拓展句:You can only choose one, which you have to stick to throughout the term.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In order to help the students have a better understanding of the Chinese culture, our school will introduce four new elective courses next term, which are Guqin, Chinese chess, calligraphy and Chinese painting respectively. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I strongly suggest you do some research about them ahead of time and pick the one you are most interested in.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句)
14.Dear Mike,
I’m more than delighted to know that your school will have a “China Week” and you’ll introduce Chinese papercutting to your teachers and classmates. Here is what I know about this ancient art of China.
Papercutting is an extraordinary art, which uses scissors to cut paper into beautiful shapes. They can be anything from flowers, animals to historical figures. The main bright color of red can provide a merry atmosphere, so they are found in wedding ceremonies and festivals, posted on windows, doors, walls and even mirrors. This art has a long history, reflecting the wisdom of Chinese people.
Hope one day you can come to China and get to know more about Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mike写信,给他介绍中国剪纸,并邀请他来中国。
【详解】1.高兴的:delighted→glad
非凡的:extraordinary→marvelous
人物:figure→character
愉快的:merry→pleasant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原文:They can be anything from flowers, animals to historical figures.
拓展句:They can be anything that is from flowers, animals to historical figures.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is what I know about this ancient art of China.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Papercutting is an extraordinary art, which uses scissors to cut paper into beautiful shapes.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
15.A Visit to the History Museum
Last Sunday, the members of student union showed exchange students studying in our school around the local History Museum.
They gathered at the school gate at 9:00 am, and then rode a bus to the museum, where they watched videos about local history and admired the treasures from different periods. The exchange students were amazed at the ancient objects displayed and deeply impressed by the members’ vivid description.
The visit was a great success. Not only did it help the exchange students learn more about China, but it also helped promote friendship between Chinese students and exchange students.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道,要求考生以A Visit to the History Museum为题,报道你校学生会带领交换生参观了当地的历史博物馆的事情。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
展览:exhibit→display
生动的:picturesque→vivid
增进:strengthen→promote
对……感到惊讶:be surprised at→be amazed at
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Sunday, the members of student union showed exchange students studying in our school around the local History Museum.
拓展句:Last Sunday, the members of student union showed exchange students who is studying in our school around the local History Museum.
【点睛】[高分句型1] They gathered at the school gate at 9:00 am, and then rode a bus to the museum, where they watched videos about local history and admired the treasures from different periods. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did it help the exchange students learn more about China, but it also helped promote friendship between Chinese students and exchange students.(运用了部分倒装句)
16.Dear fellow students,
Recently, some students are usually seen wasting food. I am writing to call on everyone to participate in the activity of saving food.
Saving food is of vital significance. It is not easy for farmers to produce our food, and we should cherish every grain of it. Besides, the COVID-19 is still here and we shouldn't be too optimistic about our food supply. And this is what we can do: When eating at the school, buy no more than you can have. When eating out, take your leftovers back home.
I am convinced that, with our joint efforts, the phenomenon of wasting food will disappear.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。
【详解】第一步:明确要求。本篇书面表达要求假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,最近在学校里总看到有浪费饭菜的现象。请你给全校同学写一封英文信,倡议大家节约粮食。要点包括:1.必要性;2.具体措施;3.发出倡议。
第二步:列关键词。如:call on(号召),participate in(参与),be of vital significance(非常重要),be optimistic about(对......乐观),more than(多余)等。
第三步:连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句,注意主谓一致,时态语态等语法。本篇主要采用一般现在时。
第四步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅,语言优美,内容全面,符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有:名词性从句的运用:And this is what we can do:非谓语动词的运用:When eating at the school, buy no more than you can have. When eating out, take your leftovers back home.
17.Dear Tom,
How’s everything going In your last e-mail you asked if I could spare any time to teach you to learn Chinese through the Internet. Now I’m awfully sorry to tell you that I have to refuse your request.
The College Entrance Examination has been decided to be delayed to July 7-9. Therefore, I’ll be preparing for it in June. I wonder if it is convenient for you between July 18 and August 20.
As is well-known, the covid-19 has been spreading fast to nearly every corner of the world. I really hope you try your best to protect yourselves against the terrible virus.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom来信请求你六月高考后通过网络教他学汉语。请你用英语给他回信,内容要点如下:1. 因高考延期拒绝其请求;2. 另约定授课时间;3. 提醒他预防新冠病毒。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):spare time (抽时间);awfully sorry (非常抱歉);The College Entrance Examination (高考);be prepare for (为……做准备)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如In your last e-mail you asked if I could spare any time to teach you to learn Chinese through the Internet.运用了if引导的宾语从句;The College Entrance Examination has been decided to be delayed to July 7-9.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
18.NOTICE
A lecture on how to fight against novel coronavirus will be held in the school hall at 3:30 this Friday afternoon and it will last two hours. Everyone is welcome to attend the lecture.
The lecture mainly involves 2 aspects, the first of which is about how the virus spreads and its effects on people. Meanwhile, there are experts’ suggestions on how to protect yourselves against the virus, including ways to wash your hands thoroughly and appropriate exercise to build up your body. I think you will benefit a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of novel coronavirus.
If you are interested in the lecture, please enter the school hall ahead of time and keep quiet during the lecture.
The Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一则通知。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一则通知;假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,你校组织了一场关于抗击冠状病毒的校园安全讲座,请你就此写一则通知。内容包括:1. 讲座的时间、地点;2. 讲座的主要内容;3. 其他注意事项。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:lecture (讲座),fight against (对抗),novel coronavirus (新型冠状病毒),benefit from (从……中受益),the Students’ Union (学生会)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如将来时的被动语态A lecture on how to fight against novel coronavirus will be held in the school hall at 3:30 this Friday afternoon and it will last two hours.非限定性定语从句The lecture mainly involves 2 aspects, the first of which is about how the virus spreads and its effects on people.宾语从句I think you will benefit a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of novel coronavirus.条件状语从句If you are interested in the lecture, please enter the school hall ahead of time and keep quiet during the lecture.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
19.Hello, David!
It’s sad to know that you’ll have to have classes at home.
Owing to the outbreak of the disease, we had to have online courses at home instead of attending school after the winter holiday. Actually it is not that bad. Online courses break through the limitation of time and space, providing us with great convenience to study. But it also has some disadvantages, one of which is its bad effects on our eyesight.
All in all, very coin has two sides, and the key is to use it properly. As far as I am concerned, if you can make full use of every possible means appropriately to study, it won’t matter whether you study online or in the classroom.
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封电子邮件:今年寒假后各校都未能如期开学,宅家网上学习(learning at home online) 是大家的共同记忆。假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友David也将开始宅家学习,想 分享你这段经历,请电邮告知,主要内容是:1.上网课的优点;
2.上网课的弊端;3.你的感悟。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; outbreak(爆发),online courses(在线课程),limitation(限制),convenience(便利), effect(影响),appropriately(恰当地)及eyesight(视力)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有owing to(由于),instead of(代替),break through (打破),provide sb with sth(为某人提供某物),make full use of(充分利用),all in all(总而言之)以及as I am concerned(就我个人而言),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“But it also has some disadvantages, one of which is its bad effects on our eyesight.”,状语从句“As far as I am concerned, if you can make full use of every possible means appropriately to study, it won’t matter whether you study online or in the classroom.”,非谓语动词“Online courses break through the limitation of time and space, providing us with great convenience to study.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
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