四川省南充市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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四川省南充市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2023·四川南充·统考一模）假定你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”, 向你咨询建议。请你根据提示给他回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 朗诵选材;2. 朗诵技巧;3. 其他注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;；
2. 可以运当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2021·四川南充·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Johnson发来邮件说他最近经常失眠。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达你的关心；
2.就应对失眠提出你的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：失眠：insomnia
Dear Johnson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考三模）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。可以适当添加内容，使文章看起来更加充实，要组成通顺连贯的短文。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Jonah,
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I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours ,
Li Hua
4．（2020·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是高三(1)班班长李华。随着高考的临近，你班一些同学开始紧张焦虑。请你在班级微信群给大家留言，鼓励大家轻松迎考。留言应包括下列要点:
1.症状及影响； 2.合理建议； 3.高考祝愿。
注意: 1.短文应包括全部要点。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.短文中不可出现考生真实信息。4.词数: 100左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
With the entrance examination for college drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
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Best wishes，
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
5．（2021·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是红星中学的李华，你校剪纸俱乐部将举办主题为“中国之美”的剪纸艺术展。请给你校外教Sam写封邮件，邀请他一起参观。邮件要点如下：
1.展览时间（4月6日）、地点（学校会议室）；
2.展览内容……
注意：
1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
How’s everything going
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考二模）假定你是李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请你为此准备一份发言稿，内容包括：
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
三、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2022·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学（Westfield Secondary School）学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写一封信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS寄去由同学们亲手编织的中国结，请对方注意查收。
3.希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语和结语已为你写好。
参考词汇：中国结Chinese knot
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
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Looking forward to your visit after the pandemic.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
8．（2022·四川南充·四川省南充市高坪中学校考模拟预测）假如你是你校学生会主席李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立73周年，你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展，主题为“我心中的祖国”，现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知。
内容包括：1.展览的时间、地点； 2.作品内容；3.截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中华人民共和国 The People’s Republic of China(PRC)
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9．（2022·四川南充·统考三模）假如你是李华，你校在上周举行了“劳动周”活动。你的美国朋友Kevin想了解相关情况，请你给他写封邮件分享此活动，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.你的感受，
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词汇：劳动周Labour Week
Dear Kevin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
10．（2021·四川南充·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，昨天乘公交车时不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说Great Expectations.请你给她发封邮件，包括以下要点：
1. 表达歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 补救措施。
注意：1. 短文应包括所有要点。
2. 可增加适当细节以使行文连贯。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 开头和结语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Judy,
How’s it going these days
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2021·四川南充·统考一模）假定你是李华,你校的校园网“英语大地( English World)”专栏拟登载介绍国外著名旅游景点的文章。请你给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。
要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍（国外著名景点简介)；
2. 稿件长度（不超过800词）；
3. 交稿日期（截止本月底）。
注意：1.词数:100词左；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
12．（2020·四川南充·统考三模）假如你是李华，你远在英国的朋友Smith从网上得知移动支付改变了中国人的生活方式。他想了解一些更详细的移动支付情况，请你根据下面要点提示，给Smith发一封电子邮件。
要点: 1.生活中的具体体现; 2.好处。
要求:词数100左右。
参考词汇:移动支付mobile payment
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考一模）假定你是李华，是你校学生会主席。新冠疫情后国家经济面临一些困难，为保就业，繁荣经济，国家重启地摊经济。对此，你校打算举办“论地摊经济利弊”的辩论活动。请用英语写份通知，内容包括：
1. 举办辩论活动的目的；
2. 辩论的内容：地摊经济的利与弊；
3. 活动时间地点,和报名的方式。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
地摊经济：the stall economy 小摊主：a vendor
路边摊：roadside booths 在人行路上：on some pedestrian streets
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.
Considering that the coming contest is related to New Year, you’d better choose some Chinese poetry with the theme of bidding farewell to the old year and welcoming the new year. When it comes to recitation techniques, you are supposed to speak standard Mandarin and pay attention to using proper pronunciation, stress, intonation and speed. In addition, practice makes perfect. Therefore, you can’t practice too many times in advance. By the way, I have collected some classic poems that feature blessings for the new year and attached them to the mail.
If there is any problem, don’t hesitate to contact me. Hope you can take my advice into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国将准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”好友Peter写一封邮件给出建议，其内容包括朗诵选材、朗诵技巧和其他注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
期待：hope→expect
帮助：help→assistance
而且：In addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In addition, practice makes perfect.
拓展句： In addition, it is known to us all that practice makes perfect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．One possible version
Dear Johnson,
I’m sorry to learn that you are suffering from insomnia. It's nothing serious. There are some good ways to deal with this problem.
Firstly, you should handle the stress that causes insomnia. If you relieve your stress, you may get back to a regular sleep schedule. Secondly, why not take a warm bath or soak your feet in warm water before going to bed？It's a great way to relax your body. Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious. A carefree attitude is of great importance to a good sleep.
I hope my suggestions would be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Johnson回一封电子邮件，对他的失眠问题表达关心并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遭受：suffer from=be subjected to
处理：deal with=do with
解决：handle→resolve
回归：get back→return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious. A carefree attitude is of great importance to a good sleep.
拓展句：Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious, which is a carefree attitude of great importance to a good sleep.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to learn that you are suffering from insomnia. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, you should handle the stress that causes insomnia. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
3．Dear Jonah,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. But I really hope you can come and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with me.
The Mid-autumn Festival, a special occasion for family reunion, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year.
It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight. On this day, the moon is said to be its biggest and brightest. It's also a day for special foods like moon cakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：traditional Chinese festivals (中国传统节日)；the Dragon Boat Festival (端午节)；the Mid-autumn Festival (中秋节)；the Spring Festival (春节)；reunion (团聚)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.运用了宾语从句；It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight.运用不定式作表语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear classmates,
With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently. Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite, which has a terrible effect on their study. Therefore, they are all eager to get rid of them.
My suggestions are as follows.First of all, it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination. If you treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations , there is no need to worry too much about it. Besides, in order to concentrate more on our classes , we’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep . Only in this way will we keep energetic. Last but not least ,it is advised that you participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
I do hope that all of us keep confident about the exam. Thus we will achieve great academic performance in the exam. Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份留言。
【详解】第一步：
审题：留言 关于同学的焦虑情绪提出建议
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响，第二部分提出合理建议，第三部分表达对同学的祝愿
要点：
1. 说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响：失眠、没有食欲，对学习影响不好
2．提出合理的建议
①对高考有正确的态度：将高考当成平常的考试
②保持合理的时间安排，保证睡眠充足
③ 参加课后活动，放松自己
3．表达对同学的祝愿 ：高考中取得好成绩，被理想的大学录取
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
the College Entrance Examination；draw near；feel nervous；suffer from；lose appetite；have an effect on；be eager to；attitude towards…；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；achieve great academic performance；be admitted to
第三步：连词成句
(1)With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
(2)Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite.
(3) This has a terrible effect on their study.
(4) They are all eager to get rid of them.
(5) It’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.
(6) You treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations.
(7) There is no need to worry too much about it.
(8) We’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep .
(9) We will keep energetic.
(10) You participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
(12) All of us keep confident about the exam.
(13) We will achieve great academic performance in the exam.
(14) Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities .
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 draw near；suffer from；have an effect on；be eager to；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；be admitted to 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如“with+宾语+宾语补足语”结构的运用With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently；非限制性定语从句的运用 …which has a terrible effect on their study；it作形式主语的运用it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.；倒装句的运用 Only in this way will we keep energetic等。
5．Dear Sam,
How is everything going I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”. The activity is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
Firstly, there will be a paper- cutting competition where students show their skill on how to make a paper- cutting with a piece of ordinary paper. Next, a lecture concerning the theme will be delivered by our art teacher, Mr. Chen, after which you can ask some questions. Finally, you will appreciate a paper- cutting exhibition. Not only can it let students have a further understanding of ancient culture and traditions, but enhance their artistic sense. So meaningful is the activity that you can't miss it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件邀请外教Sam来一起参观学校举行的“中国之美”剪纸艺术展览。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→topic
比赛/竞赛：competition-match
参加：take part in→attend
普通的：ordinary→plain/common
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”. The activity is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
拓展句：I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”and which is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
【点睛】[高分句型1] there will be a paper- cutting competition where students show their skill on how to make a paper- cutting with a piece of ordinary paper. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only can it let students have a further understanding of ancient culture and traditions, but enhance their artistic sense. (运用了部分倒装结构)
6．Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school .
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份发言稿，背景是母校为高一学生准备了主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
challenging; efficiently; develop a good habit; be of great importance; benefit; preview; get involved in; review; get along well with; be friendly with; take part in; outdoor activities; be helpful to; build up; enrich; colorful.
第三步：连词成句
In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.
We should learn to learn efficiently.
Developing a good habit is also of importance.
It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.
We should learn how to get along well with others.
In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.
We should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主语。此外Developing a good habit is also of importance.使用了动名词作主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词组，如be of importance, get involved in, get along well with, be friendly with, build up one’s body等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, President of the Student Union of Guang Ming High School. On behalf of my school, I am writing to express our sincere thanks to you.
It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. They are hand-made. Please note to check and hope you like them. In the future, I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation.
Thank you again for the books you generously donated. Looking forward to your visit after the pandemic.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写一封信，对他们捐赠图书的行为表示感谢，并告诉他们邮寄了一些中国结作为礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：represent→on behalf of
表达：convey→express
有用的：useful→helpful
真诚的：heartfelt→sincere
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句： In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. They are hand-made.
拓展句： In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students, which symbolize unity and luck in China.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. （运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）
8．参考答案
Notice
Aimed at celebrating the 73th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition, with the topic Motherland in My Heart, will be held in our school exhibition hall next Friday.
The works submitted should focus on the topic. You can express your great love to our motherland in your works. Additionally, it is a good idea to picture the rapid development of our country, or its promising future. Meanwhile, your determination to study hard so as to make our country more beautiful and prosperous can also be conveyed in your works.
Anyone who is interested in it is supposed to submit your works at the school office before the deadline, this Friday afternoon.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席李华的名义写一则通知，向全校同学征集主题为“我心中的祖国”庆祝中华人民共和国成立73周年的学生书画作品展的作品。内容包括展览的时间、地点；作品内容及截止日期。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关注：pay attention to→focus on
此外：Besides →Additionally
有希望的：hopeful→ promising
表达：express→ convey
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The works submitted should focus on the topic. You can express your great love to our motherland in your works.
拓展句：The works submitted , in which you can express your great love to our motherland, should focus on the topic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at celebrating the 73th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition, with the topic Motherland in My Heart, will be held in our school exhibition hall next Friday.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Anyone who is interested in it is supposed to submit your works at the school office before the deadline, this Friday afternoon.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
9．Dear Kevin,
Hearing that you are interested in the Labour Week held in our school last week, I feel extremely delighted to introduce relevant information about it.
Aimed at arousing students’ awareness of labor, various activities were organized in the Labour Week. With great passion, all the students in our school got involved in various tasks, ranging from planting trees, arranging books in the library to sorting garbage in an eco-friendly way. With our joint efforts, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
Tired as we were, we were all satisfied to see a cleaner environment. In my opinion, not only did I obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but I would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Kevin写一封信，分享上周学校举办的“劳动周”活动，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：delighted→excited
相关的：relevant→related
热情：passion→enthusiasm
环保的：eco-friendly→environmental
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With our joint efforts, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
拓展句：Because we worked together towards the same goal, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at arousing students’ awareness of labor, various activities were organized in the Labour Week.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】In my opinion, not only did I obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but I would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.(运用了not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
10．Dear Jud
How's it going these days I'm really sorry I've lost the English novel Great Expectations you lent me the other day. So I'm dropping this line to express my sincere apologies to you.
The book is definitely excellent and I was so deeply attracted by the fantastic plot that I took it with me no matter where I went until yesterday evening. When I got off the bus, I found it nowhere to be found. I immediately contacted the bus service department, hoping to recover it, but in vain. Considering this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Your forgiveness would be highly appreciated.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hu
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生给好友Judy发邮件，解释自己不小心遗失了Judy借给自己的英文小说。
【详解】1.词汇积累
写信：drop this line→write this letter
极好的：fantastic→wonderful
找回：recover→get back
感激：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Considering this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
拓展句：Because I know this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The book is definitely excellent and I was so deeply attracted by the fantastic plot that I took it with me no matter where I went until yesterday evening.（运用了so…that引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】I immediately contacted the bus service department, hoping to recover it, but in vain.（运用了现在分词作状语）
11．Dear Lucy,
I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.
Many interesting articles from foreign friends have been published in the "English World" column of the website, making it very popular among students. In order to broaden our horizons, this column will carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad. You are interested in travelling, so would you please write an article about one of the famous tourist attractions in your country 800 words or so would be fine. I am wondering if I could get your article before December 31.
Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合学校的校园网“英语大地( English World)”专栏拟登载介绍国外著名旅游景点的文章的消息，给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 栏目介绍（国外著名景点简介)；
2. 稿件长度（不超过800词）；
3. 交稿日期（截止本月底）。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write an article for our school website, broaden horizon, carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad, famous tourist attractions ,look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.
2.In order to broaden our horizons, this column will carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad.
3.You are interested in travelling, so would you please write an article about one of the famous tourist attractions in your country
4.I am wondering if I could get your article before December 31.
5.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.（if引导的为宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Many interesting articles from foreign friends have been published in the "English World" column of the website, making it very popular among students. （“making it very popular among students”为现在分词做状语）
12．Dear Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student in China. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China, I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.
As you know, Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China. On the one hand, its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble. On the other hand, Mobile Payment is widely used in our dailylife, like paying bills, booking tickets and so on. In a word, Mobile Payment is used in nearly everything and has really changed our life.
I will be very happy if my introduction can make you have a clear idea of Mobile Payment.
Kind regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇是应用文，通过回复邮件方式向好友描述移动支付在生活中的具体体现和好处。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分总
总分总指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，最后一段再进行总结升华，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明自己乐意提供帮助
2.具体阐述移动支付在生活中的好处
1) 产生好处的具体例子1 (example 1)
2）产生好处的具体例子2 (example 2)
3) 总结升华在其他方面的影响。 (conclusion)
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be eager to; a brief introduction; tendency; On the one hand… On the other hand;
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China,
2. I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.
3. Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：On the one hand… On the other hand; In a word,
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如“its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble.” 这句话运用了非限制性定语从句，同时it在这里做形式宾语，真正的宾语是to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash。 固定搭配运用了如 be eager to; a brief introduction等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Notice
To boost the local economy, cities around China encourage and support the stall economy hit hard by the novel corona virus outbreak
. A debate on the advantages and disadvantages of the stall economy will take place next Saturday. During the activity, participants ar
e supposed to show the views clearly that they can either support or oppose the stall economy, roadside booths running by venders on
some pedestrian streets. The debate will last from 8am to 10am in the Students Hall next Saturday. If you are interested in it, please e
mail to studentsunion567@ before next Thursday. Looking forward to your participation.
Students' Union
June. 9, 2020
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生就举办“论地摊经济利弊”的辩论活动。写一份通知。
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作：通知。本文内容要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容要点包含：1. 举办辩论活动的目的；2. 辩论的内容：地摊经济的利与弊；3. 活动时间地点,和报名的方式。考生写作时需注意三点：一是通知的格式要准确；二是要详略得当。本文要点已经给出，结合要点可知，对本次活动的具体安排：地摊经济的利与弊，要重点去描述。三要注意适当地增加细节, 对活动的描述可以适当的展开，展开的内容要和主题有关系，切勿天马行空，胡乱发展；四要恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。作为通知，时态用一般现在时，介绍本次活动的具体安排时要用一般将来时。
【点睛】本文层次清晰,行文连贯,要点齐全,言简意赅,目的明确,达到了书面表达的要求。还使用一些连词, 让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句,使文章更加生动而流畅,这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下: To boost the local economy, cities around China encourage and support the stall economy hit hard by the novel corona virus outbreak.运用了不定式做目的状语；During the activity, participants are supposed to show the views clearly that they can either support or oppose the stall economy, roadside booths running by venders on some pedestrian streets.运用了同位语从句。
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一、建议信
1．（2023·四川南充·统考一模）假定你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”, 向你咨询建议。请你根据提示给他回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 朗诵选材;2. 朗诵技巧;3. 其他注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;；
2. 可以运当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2021·四川南充·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Johnson发来邮件说他最近经常失眠。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达你的关心；
2.就应对失眠提出你的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：失眠：insomnia
Dear Johnson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考三模）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。可以适当添加内容，使文章看起来更加充实，要组成通顺连贯的短文。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Jonah,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours ,
Li Hua
4．（2020·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是高三(1)班班长李华。随着高考的临近，你班一些同学开始紧张焦虑。请你在班级微信群给大家留言，鼓励大家轻松迎考。留言应包括下列要点:
1.症状及影响； 2.合理建议； 3.高考祝愿。
注意: 1.短文应包括全部要点。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.短文中不可出现考生真实信息。4.词数: 100左右开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
With the entrance examination for college drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
5．（2021·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是红星中学的李华，你校剪纸俱乐部将举办主题为“中国之美”的剪纸艺术展。请给你校外教Sam写封邮件，邀请他一起参观。邮件要点如下：
1.展览时间（4月6日）、地点（学校会议室）；
2.展览内容……
注意：
1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
How’s everything going
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考二模）假定你是李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请你为此准备一份发言稿，内容包括：
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
三、感谢信/祝贺信
7．（2022·四川南充·统考二模）假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学（Westfield Secondary School）学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写一封信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS寄去由同学们亲手编织的中国结，请对方注意查收。
3.希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语和结语已为你写好。
参考词汇：中国结Chinese knot
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your visit after the pandemic.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
8．（2022·四川南充·四川省南充市高坪中学校考模拟预测）假如你是你校学生会主席李华，为庆祝中华人民共和国成立73周年，你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展，主题为“我心中的祖国”，现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知。
内容包括：1.展览的时间、地点； 2.作品内容；3.截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中华人民共和国 The People’s Republic of China(PRC)
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9．（2022·四川南充·统考三模）假如你是李华，你校在上周举行了“劳动周”活动。你的美国朋友Kevin想了解相关情况，请你给他写封邮件分享此活动，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.你的感受，
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词汇：劳动周Labour Week
Dear Kevin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
10．（2021·四川南充·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，昨天乘公交车时不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说Great Expectations.请你给她发封邮件，包括以下要点：
1. 表达歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 补救措施。
注意：1. 短文应包括所有要点。
2. 可增加适当细节以使行文连贯。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 开头和结语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Judy,
How’s it going these days
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2021·四川南充·统考一模）假定你是李华,你校的校园网“英语大地( English World)”专栏拟登载介绍国外著名旅游景点的文章。请你给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。
要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍（国外著名景点简介)；
2. 稿件长度（不超过800词）；
3. 交稿日期（截止本月底）。
注意：1.词数:100词左；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy
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Li Hua
12．（2020·四川南充·统考三模）假如你是李华，你远在英国的朋友Smith从网上得知移动支付改变了中国人的生活方式。他想了解一些更详细的移动支付情况，请你根据下面要点提示，给Smith发一封电子邮件。
要点: 1.生活中的具体体现; 2.好处。
要求:词数100左右。
参考词汇:移动支付mobile payment
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．（2020·四川南充·阆中中学校考一模）假定你是李华，是你校学生会主席。新冠疫情后国家经济面临一些困难，为保就业，繁荣经济，国家重启地摊经济。对此，你校打算举办“论地摊经济利弊”的辩论活动。请用英语写份通知，内容包括：
1. 举办辩论活动的目的；
2. 辩论的内容：地摊经济的利与弊；
3. 活动时间地点,和报名的方式。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
地摊经济：the stall economy 小摊主：a vendor
路边摊：roadside booths 在人行路上：on some pedestrian streets
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1．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.
Considering that the coming contest is related to New Year, you’d better choose some Chinese poetry with the theme of bidding farewell to the old year and welcoming the new year. When it comes to recitation techniques, you are supposed to speak standard Mandarin and pay attention to using proper pronunciation, stress, intonation and speed. In addition, practice makes perfect. Therefore, you can’t practice too many times in advance. By the way, I have collected some classic poems that feature blessings for the new year and attached them to the mail.
If there is any problem, don’t hesitate to contact me. Hope you can take my advice into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国将准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”好友Peter写一封邮件给出建议，其内容包括朗诵选材、朗诵技巧和其他注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
期待：hope→expect
帮助：help→assistance
而且：In addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In addition, practice makes perfect.
拓展句： In addition, it is known to us all that practice makes perfect.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．One possible version
Dear Johnson,
I’m sorry to learn that you are suffering from insomnia. It's nothing serious. There are some good ways to deal with this problem.
Firstly, you should handle the stress that causes insomnia. If you relieve your stress, you may get back to a regular sleep schedule. Secondly, why not take a warm bath or soak your feet in warm water before going to bed？It's a great way to relax your body. Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious. A carefree attitude is of great importance to a good sleep.
I hope my suggestions would be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Johnson回一封电子邮件，对他的失眠问题表达关心并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遭受：suffer from=be subjected to
处理：deal with=do with
解决：handle→resolve
回归：get back→return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious. A carefree attitude is of great importance to a good sleep.
拓展句：Finally, take it easy and don't be too anxious, which is a carefree attitude of great importance to a good sleep.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to learn that you are suffering from insomnia. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, you should handle the stress that causes insomnia. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
3．Dear Jonah,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. But I really hope you can come and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with me.
The Mid-autumn Festival, a special occasion for family reunion, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year.
It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight. On this day, the moon is said to be its biggest and brightest. It's also a day for special foods like moon cakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah来信说，想利用自己的年假来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中，你建议他来过哪个节？请你回复邮件并说明推荐理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：traditional Chinese festivals (中国传统节日)；the Dragon Boat Festival (端午节)；the Mid-autumn Festival (中秋节)；the Spring Festival (春节)；reunion (团聚)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.运用了宾语从句；It is to celebrate the harvest and to enjoy the beautiful moonlight.运用不定式作表语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear classmates,
With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently. Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite, which has a terrible effect on their study. Therefore, they are all eager to get rid of them.
My suggestions are as follows.First of all, it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination. If you treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations , there is no need to worry too much about it. Besides, in order to concentrate more on our classes , we’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep . Only in this way will we keep energetic. Last but not least ,it is advised that you participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
I do hope that all of us keep confident about the exam. Thus we will achieve great academic performance in the exam. Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份留言。
【详解】第一步：
审题：留言 关于同学的焦虑情绪提出建议
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响，第二部分提出合理建议，第三部分表达对同学的祝愿
要点：
1. 说明同学中焦虑的症状和影响：失眠、没有食欲，对学习影响不好
2．提出合理的建议
①对高考有正确的态度：将高考当成平常的考试
②保持合理的时间安排，保证睡眠充足
③ 参加课后活动，放松自己
3．表达对同学的祝愿 ：高考中取得好成绩，被理想的大学录取
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
the College Entrance Examination；draw near；feel nervous；suffer from；lose appetite；have an effect on；be eager to；attitude towards…；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；achieve great academic performance；be admitted to
第三步：连词成句
(1)With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently.
(2)Some suffer from lack of sleep, and others lose their appetite.
(3) This has a terrible effect on their study.
(4) They are all eager to get rid of them.
(5) It’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.
(6) You treat the College Entrance Examination as one of your normal examinations.
(7) There is no need to worry too much about it.
(8) We’d better keep a proper timetable to make sure that we have abundant sleep .
(9) We will keep energetic.
(10) You participate in a variety of after-school activities to relax yourself.
(12) All of us keep confident about the exam.
(13) We will achieve great academic performance in the exam.
(14) Wish all of you could be admitted to your ideal universities .
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 draw near；suffer from；have an effect on；be eager to；treat…as；concentrate on；have abundant sleep；keep energetic；participate in；relax oneself；be confident about；be admitted to 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如“with+宾语+宾语补足语”结构的运用With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us feel nervous recently；非限制性定语从句的运用 …which has a terrible effect on their study；it作形式主语的运用it’s important for us to have a good attitude towards the examination.；倒装句的运用 Only in this way will we keep energetic等。
5．Dear Sam,
How is everything going I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”. The activity is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
Firstly, there will be a paper- cutting competition where students show their skill on how to make a paper- cutting with a piece of ordinary paper. Next, a lecture concerning the theme will be delivered by our art teacher, Mr. Chen, after which you can ask some questions. Finally, you will appreciate a paper- cutting exhibition. Not only can it let students have a further understanding of ancient culture and traditions, but enhance their artistic sense. So meaningful is the activity that you can't miss it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件邀请外教Sam来一起参观学校举行的“中国之美”剪纸艺术展览。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→topic
比赛/竞赛：competition-match
参加：take part in→attend
普通的：ordinary→plain/common
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”. The activity is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
拓展句：I'm writing to invite you to take part in an activity about paper- cutting whose theme is “The beauty of China”and which is going to be held on April 6 in our school lecture hall.
【点睛】[高分句型1] there will be a paper- cutting competition where students show their skill on how to make a paper- cutting with a piece of ordinary paper. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only can it let students have a further understanding of ancient culture and traditions, but enhance their artistic sense. (运用了部分倒装结构)
6．Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school .
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份发言稿，背景是母校为高一学生准备了主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
challenging; efficiently; develop a good habit; be of great importance; benefit; preview; get involved in; review; get along well with; be friendly with; take part in; outdoor activities; be helpful to; build up; enrich; colorful.
第三步：连词成句
In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.
We should learn to learn efficiently.
Developing a good habit is also of importance.
It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.
We should learn how to get along well with others.
In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.
We should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主语。此外Developing a good habit is also of importance.使用了动名词作主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词组，如be of importance, get involved in, get along well with, be friendly with, build up one’s body等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, President of the Student Union of Guang Ming High School. On behalf of my school, I am writing to express our sincere thanks to you.
It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. They are hand-made. Please note to check and hope you like them. In the future, I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation.
Thank you again for the books you generously donated. Looking forward to your visit after the pandemic.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写一封信，对他们捐赠图书的行为表示感谢，并告诉他们邮寄了一些中国结作为礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：represent→on behalf of
表达：convey→express
有用的：useful→helpful
真诚的：heartfelt→sincere
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句： In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. They are hand-made.
拓展句： In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students, which symbolize unity and luck in China.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. （运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）
8．参考答案
Notice
Aimed at celebrating the 73th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition, with the topic Motherland in My Heart, will be held in our school exhibition hall next Friday.
The works submitted should focus on the topic. You can express your great love to our motherland in your works. Additionally, it is a good idea to picture the rapid development of our country, or its promising future. Meanwhile, your determination to study hard so as to make our country more beautiful and prosperous can also be conveyed in your works.
Anyone who is interested in it is supposed to submit your works at the school office before the deadline, this Friday afternoon.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席李华的名义写一则通知，向全校同学征集主题为“我心中的祖国”庆祝中华人民共和国成立73周年的学生书画作品展的作品。内容包括展览的时间、地点；作品内容及截止日期。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关注：pay attention to→focus on
此外：Besides →Additionally
有希望的：hopeful→ promising
表达：express→ convey
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The works submitted should focus on the topic. You can express your great love to our motherland in your works.
拓展句：The works submitted , in which you can express your great love to our motherland, should focus on the topic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at celebrating the 73th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition, with the topic Motherland in My Heart, will be held in our school exhibition hall next Friday.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Anyone who is interested in it is supposed to submit your works at the school office before the deadline, this Friday afternoon.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
9．Dear Kevin,
Hearing that you are interested in the Labour Week held in our school last week, I feel extremely delighted to introduce relevant information about it.
Aimed at arousing students’ awareness of labor, various activities were organized in the Labour Week. With great passion, all the students in our school got involved in various tasks, ranging from planting trees, arranging books in the library to sorting garbage in an eco-friendly way. With our joint efforts, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
Tired as we were, we were all satisfied to see a cleaner environment. In my opinion, not only did I obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but I would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Kevin写一封信，分享上周学校举办的“劳动周”活动，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：delighted→excited
相关的：relevant→related
热情：passion→enthusiasm
环保的：eco-friendly→environmental
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With our joint efforts, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
拓展句：Because we worked together towards the same goal, the camps soon took on a new look, becoming cleaner and more fascinating.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at arousing students’ awareness of labor, various activities were organized in the Labour Week.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】In my opinion, not only did I obtain a brand-new insight into the meaning of labor, but I would cherish the fruits of others’ labor.(运用了not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
10．Dear Jud
How's it going these days I'm really sorry I've lost the English novel Great Expectations you lent me the other day. So I'm dropping this line to express my sincere apologies to you.
The book is definitely excellent and I was so deeply attracted by the fantastic plot that I took it with me no matter where I went until yesterday evening. When I got off the bus, I found it nowhere to be found. I immediately contacted the bus service department, hoping to recover it, but in vain. Considering this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Your forgiveness would be highly appreciated.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hu
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生给好友Judy发邮件，解释自己不小心遗失了Judy借给自己的英文小说。
【详解】1.词汇积累
写信：drop this line→write this letter
极好的：fantastic→wonderful
找回：recover→get back
感激：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Considering this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
拓展句：Because I know this is your favorite book, I have bought one for you as compensation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The book is definitely excellent and I was so deeply attracted by the fantastic plot that I took it with me no matter where I went until yesterday evening.（运用了so…that引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】I immediately contacted the bus service department, hoping to recover it, but in vain.（运用了现在分词作状语）
11．Dear Lucy,
I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.
Many interesting articles from foreign friends have been published in the "English World" column of the website, making it very popular among students. In order to broaden our horizons, this column will carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad. You are interested in travelling, so would you please write an article about one of the famous tourist attractions in your country 800 words or so would be fine. I am wondering if I could get your article before December 31.
Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合学校的校园网“英语大地( English World)”专栏拟登载介绍国外著名旅游景点的文章的消息，给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 栏目介绍（国外著名景点简介)；
2. 稿件长度（不超过800词）；
3. 交稿日期（截止本月底）。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write an article for our school website, broaden horizon, carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad, famous tourist attractions ,look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.
2.In order to broaden our horizons, this column will carry some articles about famous tourist attractions abroad.
3.You are interested in travelling, so would you please write an article about one of the famous tourist attractions in your country
4.I am wondering if I could get your article before December 31.
5.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to see if you would like to write an article for our school website.（if引导的为宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Many interesting articles from foreign friends have been published in the "English World" column of the website, making it very popular among students. （“making it very popular among students”为现在分词做状语）
12．Dear Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student in China. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China, I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.
As you know, Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China. On the one hand, its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble. On the other hand, Mobile Payment is widely used in our dailylife, like paying bills, booking tickets and so on. In a word, Mobile Payment is used in nearly everything and has really changed our life.
I will be very happy if my introduction can make you have a clear idea of Mobile Payment.
Kind regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇是应用文，通过回复邮件方式向好友描述移动支付在生活中的具体体现和好处。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分总
总分总指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，最后一段再进行总结升华，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明自己乐意提供帮助
2.具体阐述移动支付在生活中的好处
1) 产生好处的具体例子1 (example 1)
2）产生好处的具体例子2 (example 2)
3) 总结升华在其他方面的影响。 (conclusion)
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be eager to; a brief introduction; tendency; On the one hand… On the other hand;
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China,
2. I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.
3. Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：On the one hand… On the other hand; In a word,
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如“its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble.” 这句话运用了非限制性定语从句，同时it在这里做形式宾语，真正的宾语是to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash。 固定搭配运用了如 be eager to; a brief introduction等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Notice
To boost the local economy, cities around China encourage and support the stall economy hit hard by the novel corona virus outbreak
. A debate on the advantages and disadvantages of the stall economy will take place next Saturday. During the activity, participants ar
e supposed to show the views clearly that they can either support or oppose the stall economy, roadside booths running by venders on
some pedestrian streets. The debate will last from 8am to 10am in the Students Hall next Saturday. If you are interested in it, please e
mail to studentsunion567@ before next Thursday. Looking forward to your participation.
Students' Union
June. 9, 2020
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生就举办“论地摊经济利弊”的辩论活动。写一份通知。
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作：通知。本文内容要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。内容要点包含：1. 举办辩论活动的目的；2. 辩论的内容：地摊经济的利与弊；3. 活动时间地点,和报名的方式。考生写作时需注意三点：一是通知的格式要准确；二是要详略得当。本文要点已经给出，结合要点可知，对本次活动的具体安排：地摊经济的利与弊，要重点去描述。三要注意适当地增加细节, 对活动的描述可以适当的展开，展开的内容要和主题有关系，切勿天马行空，胡乱发展；四要恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。作为通知，时态用一般现在时，介绍本次活动的具体安排时要用一般将来时。
【点睛】本文层次清晰,行文连贯,要点齐全,言简意赅,目的明确,达到了书面表达的要求。还使用一些连词, 让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句,使文章更加生动而流畅,这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下: To boost the local economy, cities around China encourage and support the stall economy hit hard by the novel corona virus outbreak.运用了不定式做目的状语；During the activity, participants are supposed to show the views clearly that they can either support or oppose the stall economy, roadside booths running by venders on some pedestrian streets.运用了同位语从句。
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