四川省攀枝花市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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四川省攀枝花市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·四川攀枝花·统考一模）假定你是李华。你们学校英语社团准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志English Weekly，向全校师生征询建议。请你给杂志编辑写封信，主要内容如下：
1. 表示赞成；
2. 提出你喜欢的两个栏目；
3. 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：栏目—column
Dear editors,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
二、申请信
2．（2021·四川攀枝花·统考一模）假定你是攀枝花中学学生李华。你从校园网上得知,你校本期新来的美国外教Ms. Fiona需要一名学生助手在生活和工作上提供帮助。请你给她写一封电子邮件申请该职位。主要内容如下：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情；
4.表达期待
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.开头及结尾均已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:助手— assistant
Dear Ms. Fiona,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2022·四川攀枝花·攀枝花市第三高级中学校统考三模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会以后，你的英国笔友John对于体育锻炼产生了浓厚的兴趣，想请你推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐理由；
2. 提醒进行该项运动时的注意事项；
3. 该运动给你自己带来的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
4．（2020·四川攀枝花·统考三模）假定你是李华。你在攀枝花日报上看到一则书法培训课程广告，你在攀枝花学院留学的 外国朋友 John 对中国书法非常感兴趣，于是你给他写封邮件，向他推荐该课程，内容包括：
1、写信原因；
2、培训课程的时间、地点；
3、报名方式及截止日期。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：汉字书法 Chinese Calligraphy
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
5．（2021·四川攀枝花·校考一模）假设你是李华，你的好友Peter将作为交换生来你校学习，他来信询问你们每天学习生活是如何安排的。请给他写封回信，主要内容包括:
1.作息时间; 2.课程设置; 3. 课余生活。
参考词汇:
course (课程)
注意: 1.词数: 100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Peter,
I' m glad that you will come to study in our school as an exchange student.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·四川攀枝花·统考二模）假定你是某国际学校学生会李华, 你校正在开展垃圾分类活动，请你代表学生会用英语写封倡议信，向全校学生发出“垃圾分类，从我做起”的倡议。内容包括：
1.活动的目的和意义。
2.提出倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students Union
7．（2021·四川攀枝花·统考二模）最近，某中学生英文报正在举办主题为“Cellphones on Campus”的征文活动。假定你是攀枝花中学高三学生李华，请你向该报社投稿。主要内容如下：
1. 你校学生使用手机的情况；
2. 学生在校内使用手机的利弊；
3. 你自己的观点。
注意：1.词数：100词左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear editors,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine English Weekly together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can't list more. I really can't wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华。你们学校英语社团准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志English Weekly，向全校师生征询建议。请你给杂志编辑写封信，主要内容如下：1. 表示赞成；2. 提出你喜欢的两个栏目；3. 简要说明理由。句子用一般现在时态。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：start a magazine（创办一份杂志）；That sounds great（那听起来很不错）；agree with you（同意你的观点）；learn English idioms and improve oral English（学习英语习语，提高英语口语）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。句中使用高级句子。I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine English Weekly together.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.句中使用which引导的定语从句；Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.句中since引导原因状语从句。
2．Dear Ms. Fiona,
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
I would be very grateful if you would accept my application. I will certainly be an assistant to your satisfaction. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Ms. Fiona写封邮件，申请成为她在生活和工作上的助手。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时为主，少量使用一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段提出写信背景和写信目的；第二段讲述个人优势和能够给与的帮助；第三段表达期待。
要求：
1. 介绍写信目的；
2. 讲述个人优势和能做的事情
3. 表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for; so…that; communicate with sb.; have difficulty in doing; in time; be familiar with; show sb. around; adapt to; as soon as possible; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
2. First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.
3. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time.
4. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
5.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：first of all,secondly
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.(了解到你需要一个学生助理来帮助你的生活和工作，我写这封信申请这个工作作为你的助理。)
本句使用了“having learned…”现在分词结构作为原因状语，同时，“that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work”为宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.(首先，我的英语很好，可以和你流利地交流。)
本句使用了“so…that”结果状语从句。
[高分句型3]
Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible. (其次，熟悉学校和周围的环境，我可以带你参观学校和周边地区，帮助你熟悉学校和周围的环境，以便尽快融入这里的生活。)
本句中“being familiar with the school and its surroundings”为现在分词形式作状语，“which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible”为非限制性定语从句。
3．Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in physical exercise. In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise. I’m writing to recommend skating to you in your spare time.
To begin with, skating can help build up your body. It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. Besides, your sense of balance and flexibility will get improved. You’d better choose a professional coach and a safe stadium. Take care of yourself while exercising. After all, safety always comes first. I hope you can enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一封邮件，向他推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →pleased
对……感兴趣：be interested in →show interest in
空余的：spare →free
此外：Besides →What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
拓展句：As the 2022 winter Olympics was held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope you can enjoy it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
4．Dear John,
Knowing you're crazy about Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to inform you that a calligraphy course is to be offered specially to exchange students in our city.
The course is aimed to help foreign students appreciate the beauty of Chinese calligraphy. The teacher has a good knowledge of calligraphy. The class will be held in Panzhihua university town. Besides, with a high level of fluency in English, he has no trouble communicating with foreigners. If you’re interested, please sign up at the No. 1 Renmin Road or on the website before July 15.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华。你在攀枝花日报上看到一则书法培训课程广告，你在攀枝花学院留学的外国朋友 John 对中国书法非常感兴趣，于是你给他写封邮件，向他推荐该课程，内容包括：1、写信原因；2、培训课程的时间、地点；3、报名方式及截止日期。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Chinese Calligraphy (汉字书法)；be crazy about (着迷)；inform (通知)；exchange students (交换生)；have a good knowledge of (精通)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing to inform you that a calligraphy course is to be offered specially to exchange students in our city.运用宾语从句；If you’re interested, please sign up at the No. 1 Renmin Road or on the website before July 15.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Peter,
I'm glad that you will come to study in our school as an exchange student. The daily schedule of Chinese school life is quite different from yours.
In our school, the morning classes are from 8 am to 12 am. Afternoon classes are from 2:30 pm to 5pm. I live in school so I must take the night classes for self-study from 7 pm to 9:30 pm before we go back to our dormitory. Chinese, English, math are the major courses with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc. Most of the morning classes are reserved for the major courses. However, our everyday life is not that boring and tiring. We can take many after-class activities and there are many student organizations and clubs that we can join.
Thank you for your time if you read down here. Hope it helps.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Peter写封信，告诉他学校每天的学习生活是如何安排的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
时间表：schedule→time-table
无聊的：boring→tiresome
令人疲倦的：tiring→exhausting
参加：take→participate in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Chinese, English, math are the major courses with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc. Most of the morning classes are reserved for the major courses.
拓展句：Chinese, English, math are the major courses, most of which are reserved for the major courses, with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We can take many after-class activities and there are many student organizations and clubs that we can join.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Thank you for your time if you read down here. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
6．Dear fellow students,
Currently, a campaign of garbage classification is being launched in our school, which aims to improve our study environment and educate the students on the urgency and necessity of waste sorting.
Given that most of the waste in our school and community usually ends up in the landfill, the campaign makes a lot sense. It helps to keep the trash where it belongs, thus reducing the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection. Additionally, the students’ habits of properly disposing of the garbage will be developed and such habits will be carried into their adult years.
Therefore, as students, we should take responsibility and start from “me” to get the waste sorted. I’ m strongly convinced that only with everyone’s contribution and participation can the campaign work wonders.
Students Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会用英语写封倡议信，向全校学生发出“垃圾分类，从我做起”的倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim to do→be intended to do
减少：reduce→decrease
因此：Therefore→so/thus/hence
参与：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It helps to keep the trash where it belongs, thus reducing the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection.
扩充句：It helps to keep the trash where it belongs so that we can reduce the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Given that most of the waste in our school and community usually ends up in the landfill, the campaign makes a lot sense.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I’ m strongly convinced that only with everyone’s contribution and participation can the campaign work wonders.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7．Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．Many of the students in our school come to school with phones secretly.
Every coin has two sides. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information．The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of．Supposing there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately．There're also some games in the mobile phone．We can relax ourselves by playing them once in a while．On the other hand, we may waste much time. If it rings in class both our teachers and classmates will be distracted.. What's worse, because many students try to buy more expensive mobile phones, they add pressure to their families.
In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. It's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．
Yours truly,
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给向中学生英文报举办的“Cellphones on Campus”的征文投稿。主要内容如下：
1. 你校学生使用手机的情况；
2. 学生在校内使用手机的利弊；
3. 你自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
时代：time→age
利用：use→make the best of/take advantage of
干扰：bother/disturb→distract
偶尔：sometimes→once in a while/occasionally
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.
拓展句：The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of．
【点睛】[高分句型1] The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of． (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．(动词不定式的复合结构作表语)
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一、建议信
1．（2020·四川攀枝花·统考一模）假定你是李华。你们学校英语社团准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志English Weekly，向全校师生征询建议。请你给杂志编辑写封信，主要内容如下：
1. 表示赞成；
2. 提出你喜欢的两个栏目；
3. 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：栏目—column
Dear editors,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
二、申请信
2．（2021·四川攀枝花·统考一模）假定你是攀枝花中学学生李华。你从校园网上得知,你校本期新来的美国外教Ms. Fiona需要一名学生助手在生活和工作上提供帮助。请你给她写一封电子邮件申请该职位。主要内容如下：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情；
4.表达期待
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.开头及结尾均已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:助手— assistant
Dear Ms. Fiona,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2022·四川攀枝花·攀枝花市第三高级中学校统考三模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会以后，你的英国笔友John对于体育锻炼产生了浓厚的兴趣，想请你推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐理由；
2. 提醒进行该项运动时的注意事项；
3. 该运动给你自己带来的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
4．（2020·四川攀枝花·统考三模）假定你是李华。你在攀枝花日报上看到一则书法培训课程广告，你在攀枝花学院留学的 外国朋友 John 对中国书法非常感兴趣，于是你给他写封邮件，向他推荐该课程，内容包括：
1、写信原因；
2、培训课程的时间、地点；
3、报名方式及截止日期。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：汉字书法 Chinese Calligraphy
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
5．（2021·四川攀枝花·校考一模）假设你是李华，你的好友Peter将作为交换生来你校学习，他来信询问你们每天学习生活是如何安排的。请给他写封回信，主要内容包括:
1.作息时间; 2.课程设置; 3. 课余生活。
参考词汇:
course (课程)
注意: 1.词数: 100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Peter,
I' m glad that you will come to study in our school as an exchange student.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·四川攀枝花·统考二模）假定你是某国际学校学生会李华, 你校正在开展垃圾分类活动，请你代表学生会用英语写封倡议信，向全校学生发出“垃圾分类，从我做起”的倡议。内容包括：
1.活动的目的和意义。
2.提出倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students Union
7．（2021·四川攀枝花·统考二模）最近，某中学生英文报正在举办主题为“Cellphones on Campus”的征文活动。假定你是攀枝花中学高三学生李华，请你向该报社投稿。主要内容如下：
1. 你校学生使用手机的情况；
2. 学生在校内使用手机的利弊；
3. 你自己的观点。
注意：1.词数：100词左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear editors,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine English Weekly together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can't list more. I really can't wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华。你们学校英语社团准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志English Weekly，向全校师生征询建议。请你给杂志编辑写封信，主要内容如下：1. 表示赞成；2. 提出你喜欢的两个栏目；3. 简要说明理由。句子用一般现在时态。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：start a magazine（创办一份杂志）；That sounds great（那听起来很不错）；agree with you（同意你的观点）；learn English idioms and improve oral English（学习英语习语，提高英语口语）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。句中使用高级句子。I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine English Weekly together.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.句中使用which引导的定语从句；Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.句中since引导原因状语从句。
2．Dear Ms. Fiona,
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
I would be very grateful if you would accept my application. I will certainly be an assistant to your satisfaction. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Ms. Fiona写封邮件，申请成为她在生活和工作上的助手。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时为主，少量使用一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段提出写信背景和写信目的；第二段讲述个人优势和能够给与的帮助；第三段表达期待。
要求：
1. 介绍写信目的；
2. 讲述个人优势和能做的事情
3. 表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for; so…that; communicate with sb.; have difficulty in doing; in time; be familiar with; show sb. around; adapt to; as soon as possible; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
2. First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.
3. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time.
4. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
5.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：first of all,secondly
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.(了解到你需要一个学生助理来帮助你的生活和工作，我写这封信申请这个工作作为你的助理。)
本句使用了“having learned…”现在分词结构作为原因状语，同时，“that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work”为宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.(首先，我的英语很好，可以和你流利地交流。)
本句使用了“so…that”结果状语从句。
[高分句型3]
Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible. (其次，熟悉学校和周围的环境，我可以带你参观学校和周边地区，帮助你熟悉学校和周围的环境，以便尽快融入这里的生活。)
本句中“being familiar with the school and its surroundings”为现在分词形式作状语，“which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible”为非限制性定语从句。
3．Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in physical exercise. In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise. I’m writing to recommend skating to you in your spare time.
To begin with, skating can help build up your body. It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. Besides, your sense of balance and flexibility will get improved. You’d better choose a professional coach and a safe stadium. Take care of yourself while exercising. After all, safety always comes first. I hope you can enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一封邮件，向他推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →pleased
对……感兴趣：be interested in →show interest in
空余的：spare →free
此外：Besides →What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
拓展句：As the 2022 winter Olympics was held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope you can enjoy it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
4．Dear John,
Knowing you're crazy about Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to inform you that a calligraphy course is to be offered specially to exchange students in our city.
The course is aimed to help foreign students appreciate the beauty of Chinese calligraphy. The teacher has a good knowledge of calligraphy. The class will be held in Panzhihua university town. Besides, with a high level of fluency in English, he has no trouble communicating with foreigners. If you’re interested, please sign up at the No. 1 Renmin Road or on the website before July 15.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华。你在攀枝花日报上看到一则书法培训课程广告，你在攀枝花学院留学的外国朋友 John 对中国书法非常感兴趣，于是你给他写封邮件，向他推荐该课程，内容包括：1、写信原因；2、培训课程的时间、地点；3、报名方式及截止日期。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Chinese Calligraphy (汉字书法)；be crazy about (着迷)；inform (通知)；exchange students (交换生)；have a good knowledge of (精通)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing to inform you that a calligraphy course is to be offered specially to exchange students in our city.运用宾语从句；If you’re interested, please sign up at the No. 1 Renmin Road or on the website before July 15.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Peter,
I'm glad that you will come to study in our school as an exchange student. The daily schedule of Chinese school life is quite different from yours.
In our school, the morning classes are from 8 am to 12 am. Afternoon classes are from 2:30 pm to 5pm. I live in school so I must take the night classes for self-study from 7 pm to 9:30 pm before we go back to our dormitory. Chinese, English, math are the major courses with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc. Most of the morning classes are reserved for the major courses. However, our everyday life is not that boring and tiring. We can take many after-class activities and there are many student organizations and clubs that we can join.
Thank you for your time if you read down here. Hope it helps.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Peter写封信，告诉他学校每天的学习生活是如何安排的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
时间表：schedule→time-table
无聊的：boring→tiresome
令人疲倦的：tiring→exhausting
参加：take→participate in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Chinese, English, math are the major courses with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc. Most of the morning classes are reserved for the major courses.
拓展句：Chinese, English, math are the major courses, most of which are reserved for the major courses, with minor courses like science, social sciences, music, art, PE, etc.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We can take many after-class activities and there are many student organizations and clubs that we can join.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Thank you for your time if you read down here. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
6．Dear fellow students,
Currently, a campaign of garbage classification is being launched in our school, which aims to improve our study environment and educate the students on the urgency and necessity of waste sorting.
Given that most of the waste in our school and community usually ends up in the landfill, the campaign makes a lot sense. It helps to keep the trash where it belongs, thus reducing the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection. Additionally, the students’ habits of properly disposing of the garbage will be developed and such habits will be carried into their adult years.
Therefore, as students, we should take responsibility and start from “me” to get the waste sorted. I’ m strongly convinced that only with everyone’s contribution and participation can the campaign work wonders.
Students Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会用英语写封倡议信，向全校学生发出“垃圾分类，从我做起”的倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim to do→be intended to do
减少：reduce→decrease
因此：Therefore→so/thus/hence
参与：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It helps to keep the trash where it belongs, thus reducing the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection.
扩充句：It helps to keep the trash where it belongs so that we can reduce the amount of money spent on garbage services and even litter collection.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Given that most of the waste in our school and community usually ends up in the landfill, the campaign makes a lot sense.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I’ m strongly convinced that only with everyone’s contribution and participation can the campaign work wonders.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7．Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．Many of the students in our school come to school with phones secretly.
Every coin has two sides. As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information．The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of．Supposing there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately．There're also some games in the mobile phone．We can relax ourselves by playing them once in a while．On the other hand, we may waste much time. If it rings in class both our teachers and classmates will be distracted.. What's worse, because many students try to buy more expensive mobile phones, they add pressure to their families.
In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school. It's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．
Yours truly,
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给向中学生英文报举办的“Cellphones on Campus”的征文投稿。主要内容如下：
1. 你校学生使用手机的情况；
2. 学生在校内使用手机的利弊；
3. 你自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
时代：time→age
利用：use→make the best of/take advantage of
干扰：bother/disturb→distract
偶尔：sometimes→once in a while/occasionally
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.
拓展句：The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of．
【点睛】[高分句型1] The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, which we ought to make the best use of． (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．(动词不定式的复合结构作表语)
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