四川省遂宁市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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四川省遂宁市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·四川遂宁·统考三模）假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
一、祝贺他受到邀请；
二、提出赛前准备建议；
三、愿意提供帮助并表达祝愿。
注意：1、一百词左右：
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国诗词大会：the Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．（2021·四川遂宁·统考二模）假如你是李华，在你校体育节来临之际，给学校英文报写一篇短文分享锻炼经历，倡导体育锻炼。内容包括：
1.锻炼经历；
2.给学校加强体育锻炼的建议；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school’s annual Sports Day approaching, I can’t help thinking of my sports experience.
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二、邀请信
3．（2021·四川遂宁·统考一模）假定你叫李华。你校准备举办中国画展览，请给你校正在学习中国画的英语外教Peter写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 国画展的时间地点，
2. 请他提供作品参展；
3. 参展的好处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；邮件开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How's everything going
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
4．（2022·四川·统考一模）假定你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课程。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐一门传统文化课程；
2.你的推荐理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
四、其他应用文
5．（2022·四川遂宁·射洪中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化常识。现在请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 中国茶文化简介; 2. 饮茶的好处; 3. 邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2021·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tony正在就全球高中生近视情况做调查，其中需要收集中国一个班级的相关信息，故来信请你提供帮助。请按以下要点给他写封回信。
1. 你班近视现状；
2. 原因；
3. 你的看法。
提示词：be (get) short-sighted 近视；myopia / shortsightedness n. 近视
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Tony
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（2021·四川遂宁·统考三模）为了亲近自然，缓解压力，你校高三全体师生到你校附近的西山公园徒步旅行。请根据下列要点为校报写一篇英语短文介绍此次活动。
1. 活动开展的时间，地点。
2. 活动过程。
3. 你的感受。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2020·四川遂宁·统考三模）假设你是遂宁某中学高三学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪管理不善的现状，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，内容包括:
1. 好心情的重要性；
2. 不良情绪产生的原因；
3. 如何调整。
注意:1. 词数120；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We've all experienced positive and negative moods.
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9．（2020·四川遂宁·统考二模）假定你是学生会主席李华。一个英国中学生代表团要来你校作戏剧方面的交流。请你写一篇欢迎词，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 主要活动安排；
3. 你的良好祝愿。
参考词汇：学生会：the Students’ Union。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）建国70年庆典在北京举行，了解到各领域取得的巨大变化，你一定感慨颇多，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1．生活水平改善；
2．国际影响增强；
3．你的感想。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing. In the past 70 years,
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Yours，
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
11．（2022·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）你校今年英语节将举行以“Good books can affect our life”为主题的英语征文活动，倡议大家“多读书、读好书”。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
(1)书籍的重要性;
(2)你喜欢的书籍类型;
(3)读书给你带来的好处。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Good books can affect our life
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12．（2022·四川遂宁·射洪中学统考模拟预测）最近，你校举办了首届环保创意设计大赛，请写一篇报道，发布到你校英文网站上，内容包括：
1.大赛目的；
2.大赛情况；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Mike,
I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
I’d like to give you some advice, which I hope will be of great benefit to you. As far as I know, it is a good idea for you to recite ancient Chinese poetry as many as possible. More importantly, you should try to master the meaning of each poem. What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the background of each poet. I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition.
Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help. Wish you a satisfactory result.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生Mike写信，就对方即将要参加的由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛提出赛前建议，并表示祝贺，同时表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
真诚的：sincere→genuine
给/提供：provide→offer
必要的：necessary→indispensable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the background of each poet.
拓展句：What’s more, it is necessary that you should learn more about the background of each poet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month.（运用了in which引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和部分倒装句）
2．Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school's annual Sports Day approaching, I can't help thinking of my sports experience. As I entered the senior high school, I had much pressure from study, and my health was worsening. My father pushed me to run in the morning. I kept running and running until it became habitual. Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies.
Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. Above all, students should be given more sports time. For example, our school can organize more after-school activities like basketball match, football match, running and so on.
More physical exercise and we'll enjoy better health, better moods and better academic performance. Let’s participate in more physical exercise!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己的锻炼经历，并向其他同学发出倡议，共同日常锻炼，健康生活。
【详解】1.积累
压力：pressure→stress
因为：since→because
参加：participate in=take part in
对……有益：be beneficial to→be good for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, students should be given more sports time.
拓展句：Above all, students should be given more sports time, which can help sweat out and reduce stress of study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies. (运用了not only…but also…引导的倒装并列句式)
[高分句型2]Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
3．Dear Peter,
How’s everything going
Good news for you! There is going to be a Chinese painting exhibition in our school. The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week. So far, many famous artists have signed up for the exhibition.
I know you have been studying Chinese painting and have painted some. Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply. Therefore, I suggest you provide your paintings for the exhibition. They’ll certainly make the exhibition more attractive. What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语外教Peter写封邮件，邀请他参观学校举办的中国画展览。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 国画展的时间地点；
2. 请他提供作品参展；
3. 参展的好处。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
on the second floor of; is scheduled to do; sign up for; make the exhibition more attractive; improve painting skills; looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week.
2.So far, many famous artists have signed up for the exhibition.
3.Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply.
4.They’ll certainly make the exhibition more attractive.
5.What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.
6.Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week.句中，不定式作后置定语修饰the exhibition，用and并列连词，并列两个句子，表达高级。
[高分句型2]Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply.句中，which引导非限制性定语从句，表述高级。
[高分句型3]What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.句中，which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前一个句子，在从句中作主语，表达高级。
4．Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture. I’m writing to tell you the course of Tai Chi online in detail.
An application called DingTalk acts class temporarily, which is simple and convenient to use. You can download this application, enter the class group, and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provdes the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.
I hope that you will learn more things about Chinese culture and make progress. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给英国笔友Peter推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程：class→lesson
因……而出名：be famous for→be known for
娱乐：relaxation→entertainment
健康：fitness→health
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can download this application, enter the class group, and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
拓展句：Only if you download this application, can you enter the class group and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] An application called DingTalk acts class temporarily, which is simple and convenient to use.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack回一封信，向他介绍中国茶文化常识。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→pleased
在某人的业余时间里：in one’s spare time→in one’s free time
招待：treat→entertainment
爱上，喜欢：fall in love with→take to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition.
拓展句：Chinese tea culture that was started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed.(运用了动名词短语Drinking a cup of tea作主语)
6．Dear Tony,
How is everything going Having known in your letter that you are conducting a survey on the myopia of senior high students around the world, I’d like to write about that of my class in response to your need of related information of one class in China.
We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate. My class consists of 40 students, all of whom are getting short-sighted. 38 students have worn glasses. We really feel it inconvenient to live with myopia! In terms of the reasons, we always study from dawn to dusk, overusing eyes to read or write. In addition, electronic products like computers and cellphones also make a difference. Bad habits of using eyes or unhealthy diet contributes to myopia as well.
The current situation of my class can reflect the common reality of a sharp rise of myopia rate in China and even the world. It’s high time that the eyesight of students urgently needed concerning.
I hope what I share is of use for your survey!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国好友Tony写信，告知关于班级近视现状的相关信息以及形成原因和自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由……组成：consist of=be composed of
面对：be confronted with=be faced with
此外：in addition=what’s more
导致：contribute to=lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate.
拓展句：We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate, which seriously influences our daily life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having known in your letter that you are conducting a survey on the myopia of senior high students around the world, I’d like to write about that of my class in response to your need of related information of one class in China.（现在分词的完成式作状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
My class consists of 40 students, all of whom are getting short-sighted.（whom引导非限制性定语从句）
7．To refresh our mind and reduce pressure from our study and work, students and teachers of senior three took a trip in the West Mountain Park.
At 8:00 a.m., all the students and teachers gathered on the playground and then marched in a line towards the park. We were all in high spirits. We sang, told jokes and chatted as we climbed along the winding walkways, enjoying green trees and blossoming flowers. At around 10:00 a.m., we reached the lawn square at the top of the mountain, where we had a rest, took photos and shared snacks. An hour later, we picked up after ourselves and began to return.
Although my legs were heavy when I returned school, I’m proud that I could have the perseverance to complete the trip. I will carry forward no matter what challenges lie ahead in my study.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就全校高三师生到西山公园徒步旅行一事写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
减少：reduce→decrease
完成：complete→accomplish
坚持不懈：perseverance→insistence
回来：return→come back
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：At 8:00 a.m., all the students and teachers gathered on the playground and then marched in a line towards the park.
拓展句：At 8:00 a.m., having gathered on the playground, all the students and teachers then marched in a line towards the park.
【点睛】[高分句型1] At around 10:00 a.m., we reached the lawn square at the top of the mountain, where we had a rest, took photos and shared snacks. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although my legs were heavy when I returned school, I’m proud that I could have the perseverance to complete the trip. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
8．We've all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.
So, what causes a bad mood There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy.
However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。本篇要求考生就身边同学情绪管理不善的情况写一篇文章，陈述好心情的重要性，不良情绪产生的原因以及如何调整。
【详解】体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 好心情的重要性；
2. 不良情绪产生的原因；
3. 如何调整。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
play a part in/ in a positive mood/ ruin/ a variety of/ fall into/ feel down/ quarrel with sb./ turn to/ be concerned about/ get rid of/ share sth. with sb./ release
第三步：连词成句
1. The emotions we feel have an effect on how we think and behave.
2. People who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life are likely to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.
3. A bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.
4. There are a variety of reasons causing a bad mood.
5. We may fall into a bad mood because of not passing an important test.
6. receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends may cause us feel down.
7. Too much pressure from work also add unhappiness to our life.
8. However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one.
9. In my opinion, exercise is one of the keys to getting rid of a bad mood.
10. Meanwhile, spending time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety.
11. So the next time you're feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave.中how引导宾语从句；So the next time you're feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.中the next time引导时间状语从句。
9．Dear friends,
You are warmly welcome to our school for drama culture exchange.
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am pleased to inform you of the main activities you and we will attend together in the coming days. Firstly, we’d like to invite you to the school drama club, where you can have a deeper understanding of Chinese drama. Secondly, you will enjoy Beijing Opera and other traditional Chinese programs given by our club members. Thirdly, we sincerely invite you to perform some British plays, which I’m sure will be a drama feast for our teachers and students.
Wish you a pleasant stay here! Thanks!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，一个英国中学生代表团要来你校作戏剧方面的交流。写一篇欢迎词。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文；
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 主要活动安排；
3. 你的良好祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be welcome to；on behalf of;inform sb.of sth.；attend；have a deeper understanding of；perform 等等
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am pleased to inform you of the main activities you and we will attend together in the coming days.使用了并列句；Secondly, you will enjoy Beijing Opera and other traditional Chinese programs given by our club members. 使用了过去分词作定语；Thirdly, we sincerely invite you to perform some British plays, which I’m sure will be a drama feast for our teachers and students.使用了which引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing. In the past 70 years, ①great changes have taken place in all kinds of fields, especially the development of economy, which sees the prosperity in China. ②As we can see, more and more tall buildings have been built everywhere and every common person lives a happy life. ③What’s more, the influence of China is growing rapidly, which makes me proud of being a Chinese. ④As a student, I take pride in my motherland. So we should work hard and try our best to make contributions to the development of our country and show our peaceful hopes to the world. I think we can make China greatest among all the countries in the world.
【分析】考查提纲类作文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主。
人称：第一人称
要求：1.生活水平改善；
2．国际影响增强；
3．你的感想。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
come along with; in the past;take place;all kinds of fields; as we can see; lives a happy life; what’s more;be proud of; take pride in;try one’s best; make contributions to.
第三步：连词成句
1. The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing.
2. In the past 70 years, great changes have taken place in all kinds of fields.
3. As we can see, more and more tall buildings have been built everywhere and every common person lives a happy life.
4. What’s more, the influence of China is growing rapidly, which makes me proud of being a Chinese.
5. As a student, I take pride in my motherland.
6. We should work hard and try our best to make contributions to the development of our country and show our peaceful hopes to the world.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。注意要添加适当的连接词使得上下文意思连贯，在使用较简单的单词、句式的同时，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型。
【点睛】该文全面概括了内容要点，文章结构清晰。先说明了中国的巨大变化，其次说明了人民的生活水平提高以及国际影响力增强，最后又说明了自己的感想。另外，本文各个部分衔接自然，as we can see; what’s more等短语的使用，显示出作者能熟 练使用半富的词汇的能力。同时灵活使用了非谓语动词作表语、which引导的定语从句、宾语从句等高级句式。
11．One possible version
Good Books Can Affect Our Life
It is universally acknowledged that books are of vital importance, without which our life would be lonely, monotonous and colorless. Books are to life what water is to fish.
There are a wide variety of books, ranging from science, art, culture to history, among which culture is always my favorite with its novelty and uniqueness. Books on culture have found their way into every aspect of my life. To begin with, book reading enriches my extracurricular life and gives me a sense of fulfillment. Furthermore, I can accumulate abundant knowledge about various cultures without going out. Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons, thus instructing me to view things from different perspectives.
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇以“Good books can affect our life”为主题的英语征文投稿。其内容包括：书籍的重要性、你喜欢的书籍类型和读书给你带来的好处。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
给予：give →offer
此外：Furthermore→In addition
影响：affect→influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons, thus instructing me to view things from different perspectives.
拓展句：Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons , which instructs me to view things from different perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that books are of vital importance, without which our life would be lonely, monotonous and colorless. （运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】There are a wide variety of books, ranging from science, art, culture to history, among which culture is always my favorite with its novelty and uniqueness.（运用了现在分词作状语）
12． Recently, the first Environmental Protection Creative Design Competition took place in our school. The aim of the competition was to generate interest in creative design and raise awareness of environmental protection.
A total of 100 entries were submitted, and 17 of them were short-listed for the final prizes. There were necklaces made of colored paper, small decorations made of waste materials and storage boxes made of old cardboard. The “China Tower” created by a senior student with used plastic tubes took the top prize.
The contest has produced enthusiastic responses from students, many of whom say the event has not only improved their ability to innovate, but also has furthered their understanding of environmental protection.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生就学校举办的首届环保创意设计大赛写一篇报道，发布到学校英文网站上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim→goal
比赛：competition→match
激起：generate→arouse
提交：submit→hand in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A total of 100 entries were submitted, and 17 of them were short-listed for the final prizes.
拓展句：A total of 100 entries were submitted, 17 of which were short-listed for the final prizes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There were necklaces made of colored paper, small decorations made of waste materials and storage boxes made of old cardboard.（运用了过去分词短语作定语）
【高分句型2】The contest has produced enthusiastic responses from students, many of whom say the event has not only improved their ability to innovate, but also has furthered their understanding of environmental protection.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
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一、建议信
1．（2022·四川遂宁·统考三模）假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
一、祝贺他受到邀请；
二、提出赛前准备建议；
三、愿意提供帮助并表达祝愿。
注意：1、一百词左右：
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国诗词大会：the Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．（2021·四川遂宁·统考二模）假如你是李华，在你校体育节来临之际，给学校英文报写一篇短文分享锻炼经历，倡导体育锻炼。内容包括：
1.锻炼经历；
2.给学校加强体育锻炼的建议；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school’s annual Sports Day approaching, I can’t help thinking of my sports experience.
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二、邀请信
3．（2021·四川遂宁·统考一模）假定你叫李华。你校准备举办中国画展览，请给你校正在学习中国画的英语外教Peter写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 国画展的时间地点，
2. 请他提供作品参展；
3. 参展的好处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；邮件开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How's everything going
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
4．（2022·四川·统考一模）假定你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课程。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐一门传统文化课程；
2.你的推荐理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
四、其他应用文
5．（2022·四川遂宁·射洪中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化常识。现在请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 中国茶文化简介; 2. 饮茶的好处; 3. 邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2021·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tony正在就全球高中生近视情况做调查，其中需要收集中国一个班级的相关信息，故来信请你提供帮助。请按以下要点给他写封回信。
1. 你班近视现状；
2. 原因；
3. 你的看法。
提示词：be (get) short-sighted 近视；myopia / shortsightedness n. 近视
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Tony
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（2021·四川遂宁·统考三模）为了亲近自然，缓解压力，你校高三全体师生到你校附近的西山公园徒步旅行。请根据下列要点为校报写一篇英语短文介绍此次活动。
1. 活动开展的时间，地点。
2. 活动过程。
3. 你的感受。
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8．（2020·四川遂宁·统考三模）假设你是遂宁某中学高三学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪管理不善的现状，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，内容包括:
1. 好心情的重要性；
2. 不良情绪产生的原因；
3. 如何调整。
注意:1. 词数120；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We've all experienced positive and negative moods.
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9．（2020·四川遂宁·统考二模）假定你是学生会主席李华。一个英国中学生代表团要来你校作戏剧方面的交流。请你写一篇欢迎词，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 主要活动安排；
3. 你的良好祝愿。
参考词汇：学生会：the Students’ Union。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）建国70年庆典在北京举行，了解到各领域取得的巨大变化，你一定感慨颇多，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1．生活水平改善；
2．国际影响增强；
3．你的感想。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing. In the past 70 years,
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Yours，
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
11．（2022·四川遂宁·统考模拟预测）你校今年英语节将举行以“Good books can affect our life”为主题的英语征文活动，倡议大家“多读书、读好书”。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
(1)书籍的重要性;
(2)你喜欢的书籍类型;
(3)读书给你带来的好处。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Good books can affect our life
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12．（2022·四川遂宁·射洪中学统考模拟预测）最近，你校举办了首届环保创意设计大赛，请写一篇报道，发布到你校英文网站上，内容包括：
1.大赛目的；
2.大赛情况；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Mike,
I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
I’d like to give you some advice, which I hope will be of great benefit to you. As far as I know, it is a good idea for you to recite ancient Chinese poetry as many as possible. More importantly, you should try to master the meaning of each poem. What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the background of each poet. I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition.
Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help. Wish you a satisfactory result.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生Mike写信，就对方即将要参加的由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛提出赛前建议，并表示祝贺，同时表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
真诚的：sincere→genuine
给/提供：provide→offer
必要的：necessary→indispensable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the background of each poet.
拓展句：What’s more, it is necessary that you should learn more about the background of each poet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month.（运用了in which引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和部分倒装句）
2．Participating in More Physical Exercise
With our school's annual Sports Day approaching, I can't help thinking of my sports experience. As I entered the senior high school, I had much pressure from study, and my health was worsening. My father pushed me to run in the morning. I kept running and running until it became habitual. Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies.
Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. Above all, students should be given more sports time. For example, our school can organize more after-school activities like basketball match, football match, running and so on.
More physical exercise and we'll enjoy better health, better moods and better academic performance. Let’s participate in more physical exercise!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己的锻炼经历，并向其他同学发出倡议，共同日常锻炼，健康生活。
【详解】1.积累
压力：pressure→stress
因为：since→because
参加：participate in=take part in
对……有益：be beneficial to→be good for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, students should be given more sports time.
拓展句：Above all, students should be given more sports time, which can help sweat out and reduce stress of study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only has morning running bettered my health, it has also built up my strong character, thus improving my studies. (运用了not only…but also…引导的倒装并列句式)
[高分句型2]Since physical exercise is extremely beneficial to our health, I suggest that our school should provide more sports space and more sports facilities for students. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
3．Dear Peter,
How’s everything going
Good news for you! There is going to be a Chinese painting exhibition in our school. The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week. So far, many famous artists have signed up for the exhibition.
I know you have been studying Chinese painting and have painted some. Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply. Therefore, I suggest you provide your paintings for the exhibition. They’ll certainly make the exhibition more attractive. What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语外教Peter写封邮件，邀请他参观学校举办的中国画展览。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 国画展的时间地点；
2. 请他提供作品参展；
3. 参展的好处。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
on the second floor of; is scheduled to do; sign up for; make the exhibition more attractive; improve painting skills; looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week.
2.So far, many famous artists have signed up for the exhibition.
3.Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply.
4.They’ll certainly make the exhibition more attractive.
5.What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.
6.Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What is more
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week.句中，不定式作后置定语修饰the exhibition，用and并列连词，并列两个句子，表达高级。
[高分句型2]Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply.句中，which引导非限制性定语从句，表述高级。
[高分句型3]What’s more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.句中，which引导非限制性定语从句，指代前一个句子，在从句中作主语，表达高级。
4．Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture. I’m writing to tell you the course of Tai Chi online in detail.
An application called DingTalk acts class temporarily, which is simple and convenient to use. You can download this application, enter the class group, and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provdes the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives.
I hope that you will learn more things about Chinese culture and make progress. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给英国笔友Peter推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程：class→lesson
因……而出名：be famous for→be known for
娱乐：relaxation→entertainment
健康：fitness→health
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can download this application, enter the class group, and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
拓展句：Only if you download this application, can you enter the class group and find the live telecaster to learn the class online.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese culture.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] An application called DingTalk acts class temporarily, which is simple and convenient to use.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack回一封信，向他介绍中国茶文化常识。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→pleased
在某人的业余时间里：in one’s spare time→in one’s free time
招待：treat→entertainment
爱上，喜欢：fall in love with→take to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition.
拓展句：Chinese tea culture that was started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed.(运用了动名词短语Drinking a cup of tea作主语)
6．Dear Tony,
How is everything going Having known in your letter that you are conducting a survey on the myopia of senior high students around the world, I’d like to write about that of my class in response to your need of related information of one class in China.
We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate. My class consists of 40 students, all of whom are getting short-sighted. 38 students have worn glasses. We really feel it inconvenient to live with myopia! In terms of the reasons, we always study from dawn to dusk, overusing eyes to read or write. In addition, electronic products like computers and cellphones also make a difference. Bad habits of using eyes or unhealthy diet contributes to myopia as well.
The current situation of my class can reflect the common reality of a sharp rise of myopia rate in China and even the world. It’s high time that the eyesight of students urgently needed concerning.
I hope what I share is of use for your survey!
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国好友Tony写信，告知关于班级近视现状的相关信息以及形成原因和自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由……组成：consist of=be composed of
面对：be confronted with=be faced with
此外：in addition=what’s more
导致：contribute to=lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate.
拓展句：We are confronted with a sharp rise of myopia rate, which seriously influences our daily life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having known in your letter that you are conducting a survey on the myopia of senior high students around the world, I’d like to write about that of my class in response to your need of related information of one class in China.（现在分词的完成式作状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
My class consists of 40 students, all of whom are getting short-sighted.（whom引导非限制性定语从句）
7．To refresh our mind and reduce pressure from our study and work, students and teachers of senior three took a trip in the West Mountain Park.
At 8:00 a.m., all the students and teachers gathered on the playground and then marched in a line towards the park. We were all in high spirits. We sang, told jokes and chatted as we climbed along the winding walkways, enjoying green trees and blossoming flowers. At around 10:00 a.m., we reached the lawn square at the top of the mountain, where we had a rest, took photos and shared snacks. An hour later, we picked up after ourselves and began to return.
Although my legs were heavy when I returned school, I’m proud that I could have the perseverance to complete the trip. I will carry forward no matter what challenges lie ahead in my study.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就全校高三师生到西山公园徒步旅行一事写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
减少：reduce→decrease
完成：complete→accomplish
坚持不懈：perseverance→insistence
回来：return→come back
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：At 8:00 a.m., all the students and teachers gathered on the playground and then marched in a line towards the park.
拓展句：At 8:00 a.m., having gathered on the playground, all the students and teachers then marched in a line towards the park.
【点睛】[高分句型1] At around 10:00 a.m., we reached the lawn square at the top of the mountain, where we had a rest, took photos and shared snacks. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although my legs were heavy when I returned school, I’m proud that I could have the perseverance to complete the trip. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
8．We've all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.
So, what causes a bad mood There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy.
However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。本篇要求考生就身边同学情绪管理不善的情况写一篇文章，陈述好心情的重要性，不良情绪产生的原因以及如何调整。
【详解】体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 好心情的重要性；
2. 不良情绪产生的原因；
3. 如何调整。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
play a part in/ in a positive mood/ ruin/ a variety of/ fall into/ feel down/ quarrel with sb./ turn to/ be concerned about/ get rid of/ share sth. with sb./ release
第三步：连词成句
1. The emotions we feel have an effect on how we think and behave.
2. People who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life are likely to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.
3. A bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.
4. There are a variety of reasons causing a bad mood.
5. We may fall into a bad mood because of not passing an important test.
6. receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends may cause us feel down.
7. Too much pressure from work also add unhappiness to our life.
8. However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one.
9. In my opinion, exercise is one of the keys to getting rid of a bad mood.
10. Meanwhile, spending time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety.
11. So the next time you're feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave.中how引导宾语从句；So the next time you're feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.中the next time引导时间状语从句。
9．Dear friends,
You are warmly welcome to our school for drama culture exchange.
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am pleased to inform you of the main activities you and we will attend together in the coming days. Firstly, we’d like to invite you to the school drama club, where you can have a deeper understanding of Chinese drama. Secondly, you will enjoy Beijing Opera and other traditional Chinese programs given by our club members. Thirdly, we sincerely invite you to perform some British plays, which I’m sure will be a drama feast for our teachers and students.
Wish you a pleasant stay here! Thanks!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，一个英国中学生代表团要来你校作戏剧方面的交流。写一篇欢迎词。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文；
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 主要活动安排；
3. 你的良好祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be welcome to；on behalf of;inform sb.of sth.；attend；have a deeper understanding of；perform 等等
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am pleased to inform you of the main activities you and we will attend together in the coming days.使用了并列句；Secondly, you will enjoy Beijing Opera and other traditional Chinese programs given by our club members. 使用了过去分词作定语；Thirdly, we sincerely invite you to perform some British plays, which I’m sure will be a drama feast for our teachers and students.使用了which引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing. In the past 70 years, ①great changes have taken place in all kinds of fields, especially the development of economy, which sees the prosperity in China. ②As we can see, more and more tall buildings have been built everywhere and every common person lives a happy life. ③What’s more, the influence of China is growing rapidly, which makes me proud of being a Chinese. ④As a student, I take pride in my motherland. So we should work hard and try our best to make contributions to the development of our country and show our peaceful hopes to the world. I think we can make China greatest among all the countries in the world.
【分析】考查提纲类作文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主。
人称：第一人称
要求：1.生活水平改善；
2．国际影响增强；
3．你的感想。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
come along with; in the past;take place;all kinds of fields; as we can see; lives a happy life; what’s more;be proud of; take pride in;try one’s best; make contributions to.
第三步：连词成句
1. The 70th National Day is coming along with the splendid celebration in Beijing.
2. In the past 70 years, great changes have taken place in all kinds of fields.
3. As we can see, more and more tall buildings have been built everywhere and every common person lives a happy life.
4. What’s more, the influence of China is growing rapidly, which makes me proud of being a Chinese.
5. As a student, I take pride in my motherland.
6. We should work hard and try our best to make contributions to the development of our country and show our peaceful hopes to the world.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。注意要添加适当的连接词使得上下文意思连贯，在使用较简单的单词、句式的同时，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型。
【点睛】该文全面概括了内容要点，文章结构清晰。先说明了中国的巨大变化，其次说明了人民的生活水平提高以及国际影响力增强，最后又说明了自己的感想。另外，本文各个部分衔接自然，as we can see; what’s more等短语的使用，显示出作者能熟 练使用半富的词汇的能力。同时灵活使用了非谓语动词作表语、which引导的定语从句、宾语从句等高级句式。
11．One possible version
Good Books Can Affect Our Life
It is universally acknowledged that books are of vital importance, without which our life would be lonely, monotonous and colorless. Books are to life what water is to fish.
There are a wide variety of books, ranging from science, art, culture to history, among which culture is always my favorite with its novelty and uniqueness. Books on culture have found their way into every aspect of my life. To begin with, book reading enriches my extracurricular life and gives me a sense of fulfillment. Furthermore, I can accumulate abundant knowledge about various cultures without going out. Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons, thus instructing me to view things from different perspectives.
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇以“Good books can affect our life”为主题的英语征文投稿。其内容包括：书籍的重要性、你喜欢的书籍类型和读书给你带来的好处。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
给予：give →offer
此外：Furthermore→In addition
影响：affect→influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons, thus instructing me to view things from different perspectives.
拓展句：Finally, roaming in the ocean of knowledge and making a comparison between different cultures can broaden my horizons , which instructs me to view things from different perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that books are of vital importance, without which our life would be lonely, monotonous and colorless. （运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】There are a wide variety of books, ranging from science, art, culture to history, among which culture is always my favorite with its novelty and uniqueness.（运用了现在分词作状语）
12． Recently, the first Environmental Protection Creative Design Competition took place in our school. The aim of the competition was to generate interest in creative design and raise awareness of environmental protection.
A total of 100 entries were submitted, and 17 of them were short-listed for the final prizes. There were necklaces made of colored paper, small decorations made of waste materials and storage boxes made of old cardboard. The “China Tower” created by a senior student with used plastic tubes took the top prize.
The contest has produced enthusiastic responses from students, many of whom say the event has not only improved their ability to innovate, but also has furthered their understanding of environmental protection.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生就学校举办的首届环保创意设计大赛写一篇报道，发布到学校英文网站上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim→goal
比赛：competition→match
激起：generate→arouse
提交：submit→hand in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A total of 100 entries were submitted, and 17 of them were short-listed for the final prizes.
拓展句：A total of 100 entries were submitted, 17 of which were short-listed for the final prizes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There were necklaces made of colored paper, small decorations made of waste materials and storage boxes made of old cardboard.（运用了过去分词短语作定语）
【高分句型2】The contest has produced enthusiastic responses from students, many of whom say the event has not only improved their ability to innovate, but also has furthered their understanding of environmental protection.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
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