四川省宜宾市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2020·四川宜宾·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校校考三模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说,他和几个同学正在学中国古诗,请你推荐一本有助于学习古诗的书籍。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.书名及作者:Read Poetry&Learn History by Wang Chunyong;
2.推荐理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数:100左右。
2.可以适当增减细节,但不能逐字逐句翻译。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know you are learning classical Chinese poetry.________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2020·四川宜宾·四川省宜宾市第四中学校校考三模)假定你是李华,你的加拿大籍笔友Rex最近因上课注意力不能集中而感到苦恼,来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信,表示安慰,并给出建议。要点如下:
1.写信目的;2.你的建议;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
4.参考词汇:distraction 注意力分散
Dear Rex,
I’m really sorry to hear about your present situation.
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Good luck to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2020·四川宜宾·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校校考三模)假如你是李华,开学后你在你们班作了一个关于暑假学生生活习惯的调查,调查发现大家在暑假期间都有一些不良的生活习惯。请根据下面的要点用英语写一篇短文投稿到校报英语版。
1. 简述常见的不良习惯;
2. 产生的不良影响;
3. 提出建议并呼吁大家培养健康的生活习惯。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s develop a healthy habit
According to a survey among my classmates, many have bad habits in the summer holidays.
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二、申请信
4.(2021·四川宜宾·统考一模)第31届世界大学生夏季运动会将于2022年6月在成都举办,组委会将向全国招募懂英语的志愿者。假定你是新华中学的学生李华,根据以下要点,用英文写一封信,申请做志愿者:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:第31届世界大学生运动会:The 31st Summer Universiade
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2020·四川宜宾·统考二模)假定你是李华, 在疫情期间,你所在社区招募英语自愿者,向外籍人士宣传疫情防控。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:疫情防控 epidemic prevention and control; 冠状肺炎 COVID-19
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
6.(2022·四川宜宾·四川省宜宾市第四中学校校考三模)假定你是校学生会主席李华,学校将举行“职业初体验(Experience Your Future Job)”活动,请你写一封邮件邀请留学生Jack参加,要点如下:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动安排;
3. 其他。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2019·四川宜宾·一模)假如你是李华,你的朋友Jack要来你的家乡参观,请你根据下列要点写一篇电子邮件回复,介绍你的家乡。
1. 自然环境(绿水青山,环境优美);
2. 人文环境(交通便利,生活和谐);
3. 表示欢迎。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 包括所有要点,但不得逐字翻译。
Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my home town.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8.(2020·四川宜宾·四川省宜宾市第四中学校校考三模)假定你是李华,学校每年传统的“英语话剧比赛”因新冠疫情 (Coronavirus epidemic) 改为下周六在线举行,请你写邮件邀请外教Mike在线担任评委,内容包括:
1. 比赛的安排;
2. 比赛的意义;
3. 邀请及感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.(2020·四川宜宾·统考三模)假定你是李华,你校将于5月23日组织一次校外植树劳动体验活动,打算邀请外教James参加。请你写封邀请信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动意义;
4. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 劳动 labor
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
10.(2023·四川宜宾·校考二模)假定你是李华, 正在学习中国武术(martial arts), 请给你的英国朋友Eric写一封Email, 分享有关情况。内容包括:
1. 学习目的;
2. 时间安排;
3. 收获与感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.(2022·四川宜宾·统考一模)10月16日所在周为全国粮食安全宣传周,你校将以“珍惜粮食”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 粮食的重要性;
2. 珍惜粮食的倡议。
3. 参考词汇:全国粮食安全宣传周:National Food Security Publicity Week
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12.(2022·四川宜宾·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校校考模拟预测)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom来信请求你六月高考后通过网络教他学汉语。请你用英语给他回信,内容要点如下:
1. 因高考延期拒绝其请求;
2. 另约定授课时间;
3. 提醒他预防新冠病毒。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13.(2022·四川宜宾·四川省宜宾市第四中学校校考模拟预测)你校正在组织一场响应市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。请以“To be a civilized Student” 为题写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括:1. 创建文明城市简介;2. 你的行动。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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14.(2022·四川宜宾·统考三模)假定你是李华,正值4月23日“世界读书日”期间,你所在的班级开展了一次对学生课外阅读情况的调查,朋友Sam来信想了解此次调查活动。请根据以下要点,用英语写封回信:
1. 调查活动的宗旨;
2. 调查活动的过程;
3. 你的经验分享。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.(2022·四川宜宾·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校校考三模)假定你是李华,你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动(the coming-of-age ceremony)。请给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件,介绍此次活动的相关情况,内容包括:
1.活动安排;
2.活动意义;
3.你的准备。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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16.(2022·四川宜宾·统考二模)假定你是李华,你和留学生Johnson组队报名参加本周末的排球比赛。比赛在即,但自己因故无法参赛。根据以下要点,请你用英语给Johnson写一封邮件:
1.向他致歉;
2.说明原因;
3.提出补救的两种方法。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Johnson,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2022·四川宜宾·宜宾市叙州区第一中学校校考二模)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Daniel准备在他们学校组织一个主题为“走进中国(Come Close to China)”的中国文化节,他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素,以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。请你用英文写封回信。
要求:
1.120 字左右;
2.需包括至少两个中国元素,可适当增减细节。
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18.(2021·四川宜宾·校考模拟预测)假定你叫李华,你的新西兰笔友Sam来信询问你在2020新冠疫情防控期间的在家学习生活状况,请根据以下要点,用英语给他写封电子邮件:
1. 学习安排;
2. 锻炼及娱乐方式;
3. 你的感受。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:epidemic prevention and control 疫情防控
Dear Sam,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
19.(2021·四川宜宾·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David来信想了解你校刚举行过的运动会情况,请你用英语给他写封回信,要点包括:
1. 时间及项目;
2. 师生参与情况;
3. 你的感受。
注意: 1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I’m really glad to hear from you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
20.(2020·四川宜宾·校考三模)假如你是李华。你的朋友Tommy是一个手机低头族,无论站着、坐着、走着,他都在低头玩手机。请就此给Tommy写一封信,说服他改掉这个坏习惯。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结尾语已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:过度使用overuse
Dear Tommy,
There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.
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参考答案:
1.Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know you are learning classical Chinese poetry, and I'd like to recommend a book to you. The book entitled Read Poetry & Learn History by Wang Chunyong, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
As is known,China is a great country with a long history and a nation filled with classical Chinese poetry. The poems of the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture, many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of ancient Chinese.And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
So it would be a choice for you.I believe you will understand the poems easily and efficiently.Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】此文为提纲类作文---建议信。
写作步骤如下:第一:审题,抓要点。此题的要点有:1. 背景介绍:你的美国笔友Mike来信说,他和几个同学正在学中国古诗,请你推荐一本有助于学习古诗的书籍。2. 书名及作者:Read Poetry Learn History by Wang Chunyong;
3. 推荐理由:适宜外国读者;学古诗,了解中国历史、文化及古代生活;
4. 表达祝愿。
第二定人称,定时态。第一人称,一般现在时。
第三:列提纲。
亮点:
1.高级句型:I’m glad to do…
I’d like to recommend…
As is known,
many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of ancient Chinese.
2.高级结构:The book, entitled Read Learn History by Wang Chunyong, is suitable for过去分词作定语
a great country with a long history and a nation with classical Chinese poetry.
3.高级词汇:Poetry,recommend, reflect, appreciation ,efficiently
2.Dear Rex,
I’m really sorry to hear about your present situation. But don’t be worried about it too much, for it may happen to us all at this time or another. You can depend on it that there are many ways to help you out.
First, you can turn to your teachers or experienced persons for advice on your problem. I believe they can help you keep focused in class. Besides, lots of distraction is closely linked to lack of good sleep, so you can rearrange your schedule, and make sure you sleep 7 to 8 hours a day, Moreover, try not to push yourself too hard, and spare mare time to relax with something like sports, music and so on.
Good luck to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,你的加拿大籍笔友Rex最近因上课注意力不能集中而感到苦恼,来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信,表示安慰,并给出建议。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.写信目的;2.你的建议;3.表达祝愿。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: focus in专注于,closely linked to同……密切联系。还使用了宾语从句I believe they can help you keep focused in class.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
3.Let’s develop a healthy habit
According to a survey among my classmates, many have had habits in the summer holidays. The most common is staying up late into the night, spending much time chatting on QQ and playing computer games.
As we all know, if we often stay up late at night, we will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrates while studying. Spending too much time on QQ or computer games will do harm to our eyes.
In terms of study and health, we should develop a healthy habit. First, go to bed a hit earlier instead of staying up late. Second, keep a balanced diet to build up our bodies. Third, don’t spend too much time on the Internet. Actually, there are varieties of activities for us to relax ourselves, such as doing sports and listening to music.
【分析】本文是应用文。开学后你在你们班作了一个关于暑假学生生活习惯的调查,调查发现大家在暑假期间都有一些不良的生活习惯如熬夜,花很多时间在QQ上聊天和玩电脑游戏。请根据下面的要点用英语写一篇短文投稿到校报英语版。
主要内容包括:简述常见的不良习惯如熬夜(stay up late into the nigh)上网聊天(spending much time chatting on QQ)和玩电脑游戏( play computer games);不良习惯产生的不良影响如:疲倦和困倦( tired and sleepy),学习时无法集中精力(cannot concentrate)。伤害眼睛(do harm to our eyes)等;提出建议并呼吁大家培养健康的生活习惯。
【详解】本文要求对所作的调查写一篇短文,话题是同学们非常熟悉的假期里面的不良生活习惯。同学们在写作的时候可根据调查结果写一些不良习惯及其所产生的影响。注意全文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主,同时要注意使用恰当的过渡词,以使得上下文逻辑清楚,行文流畅。同学们在文章最后提出呼吁的时候要注意符合自身的身份。
【点睛】该文要点齐全,涵盖了题目的全部要求,并适当地增加了细节,让文章更完整文章条理清晰,恰当使用了高级词汇,如:in terms of, actually, do harm to, instead of, keep a balanced diet, build up, varieties of,以及顺序连词如first,... secondly ;...thirdly...等。同时运用了一些较高级的表达方式,如:如由as引导的定语从句As we all know, if we often stay up late at night, we will feel tired and sleepy during the daytime and cannot concentrates while studying,Spending too much time (动词 -ing形式做主语),while studying (while引导的时间状语从句的省略)等,显示了作者丰富的词汇积累和熟练运用它们的能力。
4.Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. With the coming of the 31st Summer Universiade, I'd like very much to be a volunteer. All we Chinese are hosts for this special event.
Above all, I promise I will endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests and athletes from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Summer Universiade, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给第31届世界大学生夏季运动会组委会写封信,申请做志愿者。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
努力:endeavor→strive
尊贵的:distinguished→honourable
另外:besides→moreover
合格的:qualified→eligible
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.
拓展句:Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, which makes me not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1]What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Summer Universiade, and I am good at it. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
5.Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer with epidemic prevention and control of COVID-19 in our community.
I do believe I'm very qualified for this voluntary work, because I have a good command of oral English. Besides, I am an outgoing, dutiful and hardworking young man. By offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华, 在疫情期间,你所在社区招募英语自愿者,向外籍人士宣传疫情防控。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 表达期待。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):apply for(申请);position(职位);epidemic prevention and control (疫情防控);be qualified for (可胜任……);have a good command of (精通)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如 I do believe I'm very qualified for this voluntary work, because I have a good command of oral English.运用了原因状语从句;By offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
6.Dear Jack,
On behalf of our Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to participate in an activity called “Experience Your Future Job” to be held next Saturday.
Aimed at getting students prepared for their future job hunting, a variety of activities are designed based on real-life situations, where participants are free to try any type of occupations they are curious about. Besides, professionals will assist us during the process so that we can get timely help if needed.
Starting from 2:00 pm, the activity will last for three hours. If you are interested, please go to the playground 20 minutes in advance to get dressed up. I’m looking forward to meeting you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生Jack写信邀请他参加学校将举行的“职业初体验(Experience Your Future Job)”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
种类:type→sort
职业:occupation→profession
此外:besides→moreover
参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Starting from 2:00 pm, the activity will last for three hours.
拓展句:The activity, which will start from 2:00 pm, will last for three hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at getting students prepared for their future job hunting, a variety of activities are designed based on real-life situations, where participants are free to try any type of occupations they are curious about.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you are interested, please go to the playground 20 minutes in advance to get dressed up.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
7.Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my home town. Now, I’d like to tell you something about my hometown—Yibin.
Yibin is located in the south of Sichuan Province, in the intersection of Jinsha River, Min River and Yangtze River. It is a beautiful city with green water and green hills all around it.
Yibin is an important transportation hub of Sichuan Province. High-speed rail, expressways, waterways and airlines are conveniently available to the city. The new airport, about 10km from the city’s downtown area, operates flights to major cities. People who are happily living here are kind and hardworking. They enjoy the convenience brought by modernization.
Hope to see you soon in Yibin.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向朋友介绍自己的家乡并邀请朋友来参观。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信的目的
2.介绍家乡的情况
1)自然环境
2)人文环境
3. 期待朋友的到来
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
pay a visit to, is located in , transportation hub,are available to
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m very glad to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my home town.
2. Yibin is located in the south of Sichuan Province.
3. Yibin is an important transportation hub of Sichuan Province.
4. airlines are conveniently available to the city.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:People who are happily living here are kind and hardworking.。全文思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
8.Dear Mike,
I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.
As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday, which will last for three hours. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers. Furthermore, some short plays will also be included. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English. In addition, you are expected to act as the online judge. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请外教Mike在线担任评委。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信目的
2.告知相关情况
1)比赛安排。(arrangements)
2)比赛的意义。(meaning)
3) 邀请及感谢。(invitation and appreciation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
invite; join…in; as scheduled; including; not only…but also…; act as; grateful; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest
2. As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday
3. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers.
4. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English.
5. you are expected to act as the online judge
6. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如join…in; not only…but also…; act as等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
9.Dear James,
I'd like to invite you to join us for planting trees on 23th, May. In an effort to make our country more beautiful and fight against pollution, we plan to carry out an overwhelming campaign. The Students Union will organize the students to plant trees on Xi Shan. All the students are required to take part in the activity. We will gather on the playground at nine. Please be on time so that we will then take the school bus there together. Don't forget to take 5 or 6 basins with you to water the trees. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we'll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Planting trees can make our environment better and better.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步:明确要求。假定你是李华,你校将于5月23日组织一次校外植树劳动体验活动,打算邀请外教James参加。请你写封邀请信,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 活动内容;3. 活动意义;4. 表达期待。
第二步:列关键词。
invite;effort;carry out;organize;require;take part in;gather;on time等等。
第三步:连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句,注意主谓一致,时态语态等语法。
第四步:连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
注意,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。高级句型有:In an effort to make our country more beautiful and fight against pollution, we plan to carry out an overwhelming campaign.使用了非谓语动词;All the students are required to take part in the activity.使用了被动语态;Planting trees can make our environment better and better.使用了动名词做主语。
10.Dear Eric,
How are you doing Recently I have taken up the Chinese martial arts, which is great fun. Knowing that you are keen on traditional Chinese culture, I think you may be interested in it.
Martial arts, also known as Wushu, is a traditional sport in China. I started practicing it last month in order to build up my body and relieve the stress from study as well. As scheduled, we gather in the school gym to do the sport twice a week. Our coach tells us that Wushu makes people feel a sense of calm, confidence and peace.
The one-month training has benefited me a lot. My health has improved significantly, and I have come to understand the concept of good sportsmanship. Would you like to join me in practicing Wushu Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Eric写信,分享学习中国武术的目的,时间安排,以及感受收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱:be keen on→be fond of
为了:in order to→so as to
减轻压力:relieve stress→release stress
集合:gather→get together
显著地:significantly→greatly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The one-month training has benefited me a lot. My health has improved significantly, and I have come to understand the concept of good sportsmanship.
拓展句:I have benefited a lot from the one-month training, which not only helped me improve my health significantly, but also deepened my understanding about the concept of good sportsmanship.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently I have taken up the Chinese martial arts, which is great fun.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I started practicing it last month in order to build up my body and relieve the stress from study as well.(运用了动词不定式做目的状语)
11. October 16th was named officially by the UN in 1981 as National Food Security Publicity Week. It aims to raise people’s awareness of saving food. Why should we attach great importance to saving food
There is no denying that it takes a lot of efforts to produce food. Thus, we need to value the work of others by not wasting any, which is the social responsibility all of us have to take. Besides, saving food serves as a reminder to keep us aware that there are still many people suffering from starvation on this planet, so, as the privileged ones, it would be shameful if we take food or our good life for granted.
Thus, I’d like to make a sincere appeal that every single one should be aware of our duty to cherish food. If everyone makes a contribution, the world will be a better place to live in.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。10月16日所在周为全国粮食安全宣传周,你校将以“珍惜粮食”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此:thus→hence
此外:besides→what’s more
真诚的:sincere→genuine
责任:duty→responsibility
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:October 16th was named officially by the UN in 1981 as National Food Security Publicity Week. It aims to raise people’s awareness of saving food.
拓展句:October 16th was named officially by the UN in 1981 as National Food Security Publicity Week, which aims to raise people’s awareness of saving food.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thus, we need to value the work of others by not wasting any, which is the social responsibility all of us have to take. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thus, I’d like to make a sincere appeal that every single one should be aware of our duty to cherish food. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
12.Dear Tom,
How’s everything going In your last e-mail you asked if I could spare any time to teach you to learn Chinese through the Internet. Now I’m awfully sorry to tell you that I have to refuse your request.
The College Entrance Examination has been decided to be delayed to July 7-9. Therefore, I’ll be preparing for it in June. I wonder if it is convenient for you between July 18 and August 20.
As is well-known, the covid-19 has been spreading fast to nearly every corner of the world. I really hope you try your best to protect yourselves against the terrible virus.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom来信请求你六月高考后通过网络教他学汉语。请你用英语给他回信,内容要点如下:1. 因高考延期拒绝其请求;2. 另约定授课时间;3. 提醒他预防新冠病毒。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):spare time (抽时间);awfully sorry (非常抱歉);The College Entrance Examination (高考);be prepare for (为……做准备)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如In your last e-mail you asked if I could spare any time to teach you to learn Chinese through the Internet.运用了if引导的宾语从句;The College Entrance Examination has been decided to be delayed to July 7-9.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
13.To be a civilized Student
In order to establish a national civilized City, the local government has launched a campaign and called on all the citizens to actively participate. Here are some do’s and don’ts for a senior high school student like me.
Civilization is one of the core values. I must firmly remember and practice the 24-word core values. I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. Be siting and walking on the zebra crossing. Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food, making it a lifelong habit.
In a word, I will go all out to behave properly and to be a civilized student.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英语写一篇短文参加市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。
【详解】词汇积累
建立:build →establish
发动:start→launch
要求:ask→require
总而言之:To sum up= In a word
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:I must firmly remember and practice the 24-word core values.
拓展句:What I must firmly remember and practice are the 24-word core values.
合并简单句
原句:Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food, making it a lifelong habit.
拓展句:Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food and make it a lifelong habit.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food, making it a lifelong habit. (运用了现在分词作状语)
14.Dear Sam,
On April 23rd, the World Reading Day, our class conducted a survey of students’ extracurricular reading. I am writing to tell you about it.
The survey is aimed at finding out whether students read books outside the classroom. Meanwhile, through this activity, we hope students can develop the habit of reading. During the survey, we asked students to fill in a questionnaire which contains some questions about reading. Then, students were required to share their reading experience. After that, the teacher gave us a conclusion about how to read after class.
I believe that reading makes a wise man, so we should read more often. Through this activity, all of us know the importance of reading.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给朋友Sam写信介绍你班开展的一次对学生课外阅读情况的调查。内容包括:调查活动的宗旨;调查活动的过程;你的经验分享。
【详解】1.词汇积累
同时:meanwhile→at the same time
养成……的习惯:develop thehabit of→form the habit of
包含:contain→include
要求:require→ask
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On April 23rd, the World Reading Day, our class conducted a survey of students’ extracurricular reading.
拓展句:On April 23rd which is the World Reading Day, our class conducted a survey of students’ extracurricular reading.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The survey is aimed at finding out whether students read books outside the classroom. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] During the survey, we asked students to fill in a questionnaire which contains some questions about reading. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
15.Dear Nancy,
It's great to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
We will hold the coming-of-age ceremony to celebrate our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate". Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers. Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. I’ll prepare to sing a song.
As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你的英国朋友Nancy写封邮件,介绍此次高三举办的成人礼活动(the coming-of-age ceremony)相关情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为将来时,少量一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.活动安排;
2.活动意义;
3.你的准备。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
take place in;make an oath;pass through;show one’s thanks to;prepare to;put on;make great effort;work hard;make some contribution to
第三步:连词成句
1. Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.
2. At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate".
3. Then we’ll show our thanks to our parents and teachers.
4 Finally we’ll put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing.
5. As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:At first,then, Finally
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]:Now I’d like to tell you something that will take place in my school.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2]:At first we will make an oath that we should take more responsibilities and pass through the "Adult Gate"这句话运用了that引导的同位语从句。
[高分句型3]:As grown-ups, we just will make great effort work hard and improve ourself, hoping to make some contribution to the development our society in the future.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
16.Dear Johnson,
I am sorry to tell you that I can’t take part in the volleyball game with you this weekend.
This morning I got a stomachache after drinking some milk which was not fresh, and even now I’m still feeling weak. My doctor suggested that I avoid too much exercise and have a good rest. So I can’t play the game with you.
But if you agree, I can invite another classmate who plays volleyball very well to join you. Or I can take part in the volleyball game with you next time. Please consider my suggestion seriously! Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“不能和留学生Johnson一起参加本周末的排球比赛”一事,写一封道歉信,讲明原因和提出补救方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
建议:suggest→recommend
同意:agree→consent
考虑某事:consider sth.→take sth. into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:So I can’t play the game with you.
拓展句:So I can’t play the game with you, which I feel very sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This morning I got a stomachache after drinking some milk which was not fresh, and even now I’m still feeling weak. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】My doctor suggested that I avoid too much exercise and have a good rest. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】But if you agree, I can invite another classmate who plays volleyball very well to join you. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
17.Dear Daniel,
I'm more than delighted to know that you are launching a Chinese culture festival, with the theme of “Come close to China”,aiming to introduce your peers to a thriving China.
From my perspective, the activities may range from a Chinese calligraphy competition to an exhibition of paper cutting, and martial
arts. Besides, it would be more desirable if students there could be given a chance to appreciate Beijing Opera. With a history of nea
rly 200 years, it's a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Daniel写一封回信,帮他策划一下中国文化节活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素,以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
要求:120 字左右;
2.需包括至少两个中国元素,可适当增减细节。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be delighted to; launch a Chinese culture festival; the theme of; aim to; peer; a thriving China; perspective; range from; calligraphy; an exhibition of; paper cutting; martial arts; desirable; appreciate; With a history of; a form of; be considered as; quintessence
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m more than delighted to know that you are launching a Chinese culture festival, with the theme of “Come close to China”,aiming to introduce your peers to a thriving China.
2.From my perspective, the activities may range from a Chinese calligraphy competition to an exhibition of paper cutting, and martial arts.
3.Besides, it would be more desirable if students there could be given a chance to appreciate Beijing Opera.
4.With a history of nearly 200 years, it's a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:With a history of nearly 200 years, it’s a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;使用了一些固定词组,如be delighted to; the theme of; an exhibition of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
18.Dear Sam,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked me to share with you how I studied at home during the 2020 epidemic prevention and control. Here are my experiences.
Since the outbreak of novel coronavirus pneumonia in Wuhan in December 2019, I had been staying at home. On the one hand, I paid close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news or surfing the Internet; on the other hand I insisted on studying. Not only did I read classics, but also I had online courses given by my teachers. Besides, I took exercise every day to keep healthy and played games with my little brother to relax myself. Faced with the disaster, many people including doctors, nurses and scientists acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it. They were real heroes.
Hope my experience will be helpful to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给新西兰笔友Sam写封信,介绍你在2020新冠疫情防控期间的在家学习生活状况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
爆发:burst→outbreak
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
高兴的:happy→glad
此外:in addition=besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Faced with the disaster, many people including doctors, nurses and scientists acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it. They were real heroes.
拓展句:Faced with the disaster, many people including doctors, nurses and scientists acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it, who i thought were real heroes.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the one hand, I paid close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news or surfing the Internet; on the other hand I insisted on studying. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Not only did I read classics, but also I had online courses given by my teachers. (运用了部分倒装)
19.Dear David,
I’m really glad to hear from you. I’m very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.
The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students’ school life. There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball. Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.
As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day. Sports game is a good opportunity to show ourselves.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给David写封信,告诉他学校刚举行的运动会的一些情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分法
要求:
1. 时间及项目;
2. 师生参与情况;
3. 你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
hear from; take great interest in; aim at; choose; be in healthy condition; do great benefits to; opportunity
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m really glad to hear from you.
2. I’m very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.
3. The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students’ school life.
4. There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball.
5. Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.
6. As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day.
7. Sports game is a good opportunity to show ourselves.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.运用that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball.运用which引导非限制性定语从句。
20.There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception. I’m writing to persuade you to get out of this habit.
There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life. However, being addicted to cell phones does a lot of harm to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life. Besides, on your way home or to school , with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps , you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.
Therefore, I sincerely wish you to give up your bad habit and use your cell phone wisely .
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,考生的朋友Tommy是一个手机低头族,无论站着、坐着、走着,他都在低头玩手机。请就此给Tommy写一封信,说服他改掉这个坏习惯。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
你的朋友Tommy是一个手机低头族,无论站着、坐着、走着,他都在低头玩手机。请就此给Tommy写一封信,说服他改掉这个坏习惯。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
1.There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are.
2.There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life.
3.First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases.
4. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life.
5.Besides, on your way home or to school , with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps , you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序: First, Second
2.表并列补充关系: Besides
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life.同位语从句
[高分句型2] Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life.which引导的非限制性定语从句
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