云南省昆明市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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云南省昆明市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2021·云南昆明·统考二模）假如你是李华，你班将于本周五下午课外活动举办“假期劳动分享会”， 请邀请你校交换生Peter参加。内容要点如下：
1. 时间、地点；
2. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·云南昆明·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校本周五下午将举行“舞动青春”文艺活动，同时进行网络直播。请给你的新西兰网友Peter写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 内容安排；
3. 邀请观看。
参考词汇：舞动青春Dance for Youth
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
二、告知信/通知
3．（2021·云南昆明·昆明一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Lucy打算来中国学习中医，发邮件向你询问中医的有关情况，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.简要介绍中医；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2021·云南昆明·统考一模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将发送迎新联欢表演视频给英国某友好学校致以新年问候，请根据以下要点写一封电子邮件说明情况：
1. 表达问候；
2. 介绍视频内容；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·云南昆明·昆明一中校考模拟预测）假如你是高中生李华，你校下个月将举办主题为“When the buying stops, the killing can too.”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加此次活动，内容要点如下：
1.现状；
2.意义；
3.呼吁。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and classmates,
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That's all. Thank you!
6．（2021·云南昆明·统考三模）假定你是李华,你的网友Peter对你校即将举行的高中毕业纪念活动很感兴趣，请给他写封邮件介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.形式;
3.意义。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7．（2021·云南昆明·统考一模）学校校园网站英文栏目开展题为“我心中的美丽乡村”征文活动。请根据以下内容投稿：
1.生态环境；
2.生活条件；
3.精神面貌。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
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8．（2020·云南昆明·云南民族大学附属中学校考三模）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你将在校体育节的开幕式上发言，倡议大家积极 参加体育活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 你的倡议；
2. 活动的重要性。
注意：1) 词数 100 左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2) 可以适当增加细节。
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9．（2020·云南昆明·统考一模）假如你是某英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.征文情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·云南昆明·云南民族大学附属中学校考二模）假如你是学校英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校五月份开展的“班服设计大赛”。内容包括：1.活动目的 2.活动开展情况。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：班服（class uniform）
四、开放性作文
11．（2022·云南昆明·统考模拟预测）你班英语老师请大家以My Favorite Novel为题准备一份发言稿，以便在下次的口语课上分享，内容包括：
1. 书名及作者；
2. 主要内容；
3. 心得体会。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2022·云南昆明·统考一模）春节将至，你校校报英语专栏面向学生征稿，主题为“我帮爸妈做年夜饭（Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner）”，请你根据以下要点写一份稿件：
1. 年夜饭意义；
2. 帮忙内容；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Helping My Parents with Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner
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五、读后续写
13．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The first time we set eyes on “Big Red”, father, mother and I were on our way home. As we passed the Eaton’s department store’s window, we stopped as usual to have a look and do a bit of dreaming.
The beautifully decorated window display held the best toys ever. There were dolls much too pretty to play with. And they all lay beneath a surprisingly fantastic dress. Mother’s eyes were glued to its shining red satin (缎子).
“My goodness,” she whispered. “Look, at that!” Then, mother looked down at her own coat -she had worn the heavy grey wool coat every winter for as long as I could remember. Mom was forever doing chores-washing laundry, tending the pigs and working in the garden-so she always wore housedresses and an apron (围裙) to protect the front. She did have one or two “special” dresses saved for church on Sundays. Also, she managed to make almost all of our clothes. They weren’t fancy, but they were comfortable.
“What a silly dress!” She shook her head. “Who on earth would want such a big dress ” As we continued down the street, mother turned her head for one more look. “My goodness! You’d think they’d display something a person could use!”
Mother’s Day was nearing, and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother, of all people, was not one to spend money on items that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this.” She’d always say. Choosing a gift for Mother’s Day for her was quite hard. When Dad and I asked, she thought carefully then asked for some tea towels, face cloths or a new basin.
On our last trip to town before Mother’s Day, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly shouted in surprise: “Look!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton’s. “That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “Who’d be fool enough to buy such a dress ” Mother questioned, shaking her head. I was almost certain that I noticed a trace of longing (一丝渴望) in her voice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On the morning of Mother’s Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton’s Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper.
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“Oh Frank...” She choked up and couldn’t say a word, tears welling up in her eyes.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
An after-school activity “Labor Experience Sharing” is to be held this Friday afternoon. It’s my pleasure to invite you to join us.
As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom. Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation. Through the activity, not only can we promote communication among classmates, but also we can raise our awareness of labor. If you take part in the activity, you’ll enjoy the friendly atmosphere of our class.
We’d be delighted to look forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请交换生Peter参加你班本周五下午举办的课外活动“假期劳动分享会”。
【详解】词汇激活
参加：join→ participate in/attend
安排：scheduled→ arranged
促进：promote→ accelerate/improve
意识：awareness→ sense/consciousness
高兴的：delighted→ glad/pleased
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom. Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation.
拓展句：As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom, which aims to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Through the activity, not only can we promote communication among classmates, but also we can raise our awareness of labor. (使用not only...but also...连接两个并列分句，且第一个分句采用部分倒装句式。)
[高分句型2]If you take part in the activity, you’ll enjoy the friendly atmosphere of our class.(使用if引导条件状语从句。)
2．Dear Peter,
I am glad to tell you that there will be a performance to be held in our school this Friday, whose theme is Dance for Youth.
The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, lasting 2 hours. Live broadcast via the Internet will be on at the same time. The activity aims at showing the students’ positive and optimistic spirit as well as their passion of pursuing dreams. There will be various fully prepared performances, including singing, dancing, instrument playing and so on, which will be a visual feast for all of us.
I do hope you can join us on line to share the happiness together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请新西兰网友Peter在网上观看学校本周五下午举行的“舞动青春”文艺活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→happy
被计划：be scheduled to→be planned to
和：as well as→and
各种各样的：various→varieties of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, lasting 2 hours.
拓展句：The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, which will last 2 hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am glad to tell you that there will be a performance to be held in our school this Friday, whose theme is Dance for Youth.（由whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】There will be various fully prepared performances, including singing, dancing, instrument playing and so on, which will be a visual feast for all of us.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】I do hope you can join us on line to share the happiness together.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Lucy,
I'm so glad to know you're considering coming to China to learn traditional Chinese medicine. Here I'd like to express my warmest welcome!
Having evolved thousands of years, traditional Chinese medicine is now a common and mature healing approach which enjoys high reputation in China. Its fewer side effects and painless treatment drive many people to turn to traditional Chinese medicine when they suffer from diseases. With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners.
I'm convinced that your plan is worth a try and sincerely wish you success in your study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给新西兰好友Lucy回复她询问你中医的有关情况，内容包括：表示欢迎；简要介绍中医；表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：consider→think about
发展：evolve→develop
方法：approach→way
荣誉：reputation→fame
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners.
拓展句：With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners who like Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having evolved thousands of years, traditional Chinese medicine is now a common and mature healing approach which enjoys high reputation in China.(运用了现在分词做状语和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Its fewer side effects and painless treatment drive many people to turn to traditional Chinese medicine when they suffer from diseases. (when引导的状语从句)
4．Dear Sir or Madam,
How’s everything going I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of our school, I’d like to share the video of New Year’s Eve Party launched by our school with you.
The party began with an English poetry reading, presented by both teachers and students. The following were singing, dancing, instrument performance and several skits. At last, our headmaster addressed a speech, wishing all of us a year filled with health and happiness. We shot this video to express our heartfelt New Year’s greeting to you.
I would appreciate it very much if you could share with us how you’ll celebrate the coming New Year at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给英国友人发送迎新联欢表演视频致以新年问候，以电子邮件形式说明情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：launch→hold
短剧：skit → short play
发表演说： address→give
诚挚的：heartfelt→genuine
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The party began with an English poetry reading, presented by both teachers and students.
拓展句：The party began with an English poetry reading, which was presented by both teachers and students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of our school, I’d like to share the video of New Year’s Eve Party launched by our school with you.（运用了非谓语动词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it very much if you could share with us how you’ll celebrate the coming New Year at your earliest convenience.（运用了条件状语从句和宾语从句）
5．Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m privileged to stand here to deliver my speech.
As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously. However, more and more wildlife is faced with extinction, whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built. Even worse, to make profit, hunters are killing wildlife. Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, causing their population to drop increasingly.
It’s high time that we should change our way of life and stop hunting wildlife. If everyone boycotts buying any products made from wildlife, the killing can stop, too. Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to our planet.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：privileged→honoured
建立：build→set up
满足：meet→satisfy
导致：cause→lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, causing their population to drop increasingly.
拓展句：Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, which causes their population to drop increasingly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] However, more and more wildlife is faced with extinction, whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built. (运用了whose引导的定语从句，as引导的状语从句)
6．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation activity, I would like to share the details with you.
The activity is scheduled to take place in our school on June 9. To begin with, there will be a ceremony congratulating all of us on our graduation from high school. Student representatives will express our gratitude to the teachers' efforts, parents’ support and peers' help. What's more, a variety of activities will be involved, including taking photos, recording videos, writing graduation wishes, giving away souvenirs and so on. The activity will surely help us reflect on the three years' school life as well as look forward to a better journey in the future.
Could you tell us about your graduation activity
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给网友Peter写一封邮件介绍你校即将举行的高中毕业纪念活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划好的：scheduled→arranged举办：take place→ hold
代表：representative→ delegate
传达：express→deliver
大量：a variety of →a quantity of
回顾：reflect on→ review
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To begin with, there will be a ceremony congratulating all of us on our graduation from high school.
拓展句：To begin with, there will be a ceremony that will congratulate all of us on our graduation from high school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation activity, I would like to share the details with you.(使用现在分词作状语的高级表达。)
[高分句型2]The activity will surely help us reflect on the three years' school life as well as look forward to a better journey in the future.(使用as well as连接两个并列宾语。)
7．The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the village takes on a nice look, with neat paths and furnished houses. The roads leading to all directions are broad and clean. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“我心中的美丽乡村”为题写一篇文章向学校校园网站英文栏目投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 生态环境；
2. 生活条件；
3. 精神面貌。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
live a(n)…life; (be) surrounded by; lead to; have easy access to do sth.; be convenient for sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
2. Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the village takes on a nice look, with neat paths and furnished houses.
3. The roads leading to all directions are broad and clean.
4. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.
5. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：In addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.用了where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.用了“It is +被强调部分+ that…”强调句型结构。
8．Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honour to stand here to share with you the importance of doing sports. And I sincerely invite all of you to take physical exercise.
Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life. By taking exercise regularly, we can build up our health and strength. A strong body can help protect us from diseases. And in return, it helps us with our study efficiency. What’s more, team sports like basketball can teach us how to work with others. Team spirits will be of great importance to us in our future jobs.So, let’s make exercise part of our life.
That’s all. Thank you.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章要求写一篇校体育节的开幕式上发言稿，倡议大家积极参加体育活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示问候
2.说明你的倡议内容
3.解释活动的重要性
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
It’s a great honour to do；share with；invite sb. to do sth.；at least；live a healthy life；in return；take exercise；build up；protect sb. from…；help sb. with sth.；what’s more
第三步：连词成句
1. It’s a great honour to stand here to share with you the importance of doing sports.
2. I sincerely invite all of you to take physical exercise.
3. Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life.
4. By taking exercise regularly, we can build up our health and strength.
5. A strong body can help protect us from diseases.
6. And in return, it helps us with our study efficiency.
7. Team sports like basketball can teach us how to work with others.
8. Team spirits will be of great importance to us in our future jobs.
9. let’s make exercise part of our life.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life.中that引导宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9． This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals. The purpose of this activity is to raise students’ awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
The activity attracted a number of students. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are different styles of essays, including novels, poems, and letters. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生报道本校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写作背景及征文目的（an essay contest; the purpose of）
2.征文情况介绍
1）参与人数（attract a number of students）
2）征文体裁及内容（different styles of essays；express concern for；put forward measures）
3.征文效果（have come to realize）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hold an essay; the purpose of; raise sb’s awareness of doing; a total of; express the concern for; put forward; come to realize; the importance of
第三步：连词成句
1. The purpose of this activity is to raise students’ awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
2. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.
3. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
4. The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals.这句话运用了whose引导定语从句修饰先行词an essay contest。
A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.这句话运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如hold an essay; the purpose of; raise sb’s awareness of doing; a total of; express the concern for; put forward; come to realize; the importance of等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10． With the purpose of cultivating students’ creativity and encouraging us to find and appreciate the beauty in our school life, a class uniform design competition was held in May.
The competition caught a great number of students’ and parents’ attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are various styles of class uniform. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some were designed to reflect their class mottos. According to online voting, the work comes from Class 6, Senior 1 has gained the most popularity for its unique design.
The activity has become a real hit in our campus and encouraged more students to show their talents bravely.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是学校英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校五月份开展的“班服设计大赛”。内容包括：1.活动目的 2.活动开展情况。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：with the purpose of (为了……)；encourage us to do（鼓励某人做某事）；catch one’s attention（吸引某人的注意力）；a great number of (许多)；class uniform (班服)；submit(提交)；inspiration (灵感)；According to （根据）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如A total of 40 works were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11．A possible version
My Favorite Novel
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to introduce my favorite book — Around the World in Eighty Days, which was written by Jules Verne, an outstanding French writer.
It is a science fiction about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his club mates, claiming that he can travel around the world within eighty days. After overcoming lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end. I am deeply impressed by the writer’s vivid description and his deep passion for exploration of the world.
Only by reading this novel have I fully understood it is bravery and courage that contribute to our success and inspire us to move forward constantly.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以My Favorite Novel为题准备一份发言稿，分享内容包括书名及作者，主要内容以及心得体会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①杰出的：outstanding→excellent
②克服：overcome→conquer
③困难：difficulty→hardship
④描述：description→account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After overcoming lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end.
拓展句：After he had overcome lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】It is a science fiction about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his club mates, claiming that he can travel around the world within eighty days.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Only by reading this novel have I fully understood it is bravery and courage that contribute to our success and inspire us to move forward constantly.(运用了倒装句，宾语从句、强调句，动词不定式作宾语补足语)
12． Helping My Parents with Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner
With the Spring Festival approaching, every family is busy preparing the Lunar New Year's Eve dinner. As a member, I am excited to help my parents make full preparations.
The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time for people to say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation. As scheduled, what I need to do first is to make a traditional and typical food list for the dinner. Together with my parents, I will buy the food materials in the early morning and help them with the cooking as well as setting the table in the late afternoon. After enjoying the meal, I can help set off the fireworks
The big dinner promises a new start. I can't wait to offer my help.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。要求考生投稿给校报，讲述如何帮助父母准备年夜饭以及它的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
接近：approach → draw near
兴奋的：excited → feverish
团聚：reunion → gathering
告别：say goodbye → farewell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time for people to say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation.
拓展句：The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time when people say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the Spring Festival approaching, every family is busy preparing the Lunar New Year's Eve dinner.（运用了with复合结构：with+名词+非谓语动词在句中作状语）
【高分句型2】As scheduled, what I need to do first is to make a traditional and typical food list for the dinner.（运用了what引起的主语从句）
13．On the morning of Mother’s Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton’s Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper. “Oh Frank,” she praised, “just what I wanted!” Dad was sitting in his rocker, a huge grin on his face.“Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas,” he laughed. “Go ahead, open it up and make sure there are no chips.” Mother quietly opened the box to find a big white dishpan— overflowing with deep red satin that spilled out across her lap. With her hands trembling, she touched the elegant material of Big Red.
“Oh Frank...” She choked up and couldn’t say a word, tears welling up in her eyes. Her face was as bright as the star that twinkled on our tree in the corner of the small room. “You shouldn’t have …” came her faint attempt at scolding. “Oh now, never mind that!” Dad said. “Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helping her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders. I watched in surprise, attracted by the beauty of my mother I had never noticed before. “You look beautiful,” my dad whispered to my mom— and she surely did!
【导语】本文大红裙子线索展开，讲述了作者的母亲勤俭持家，每天忙着家务，穿着也不讲究，母亲节的时候也没有买过像样的衣服，她从不会把钱花在不实用的东西上，一天回家的路上，母亲在商店的橱窗看到一件“大红裙子”目不转睛地看着，但嘴里却说着各种不喜欢的话，在母亲节的前天去镇上，母亲发现“大红裙子”不见了，母亲有些失落。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在母亲节的早晨，母亲得到了一个大盒子，盒子的包装纸上写着“伊顿最好的盆。””可知，第一段可描写母亲打开大盒子礼物前后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容““哦，弗兰克……”她哽咽着说不出一句话，泪水在眼眶里涌出。”可知，第二段可描写母亲见到“大红裙子的惊喜，以及接下来做了些什么”。
2.续写线索：见到礼品盒的平淡——打开后的惊喜——父亲的表现——母亲试穿——父亲对母亲的赞美
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.赞美：praise/speak highly of
②.大笑：laugh/burst into laughter
③.责怪：scold/blame/
情绪类
①.平静：quietly/in silence/calmly
②.惊讶：in surprise/surprisingly/in shock
【点睛】[高分句型1].With her hands trembling, she touched the elegant material of Big Red.（运用了with复合结构）
[高分句型2].“Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helping her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
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一、邀请信
1．（2021·云南昆明·统考二模）假如你是李华，你班将于本周五下午课外活动举办“假期劳动分享会”， 请邀请你校交换生Peter参加。内容要点如下：
1. 时间、地点；
2. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2022·云南昆明·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校本周五下午将举行“舞动青春”文艺活动，同时进行网络直播。请给你的新西兰网友Peter写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 内容安排；
3. 邀请观看。
参考词汇：舞动青春Dance for Youth
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
二、告知信/通知
3．（2021·云南昆明·昆明一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Lucy打算来中国学习中医，发邮件向你询问中医的有关情况，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.简要介绍中医；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2021·云南昆明·统考一模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将发送迎新联欢表演视频给英国某友好学校致以新年问候，请根据以下要点写一封电子邮件说明情况：
1. 表达问候；
2. 介绍视频内容；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·云南昆明·昆明一中校考模拟预测）假如你是高中生李华，你校下个月将举办主题为“When the buying stops, the killing can too.”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加此次活动，内容要点如下：
1.现状；
2.意义；
3.呼吁。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and classmates,
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That's all. Thank you!
6．（2021·云南昆明·统考三模）假定你是李华,你的网友Peter对你校即将举行的高中毕业纪念活动很感兴趣，请给他写封邮件介绍此次活动,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.形式;
3.意义。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7．（2021·云南昆明·统考一模）学校校园网站英文栏目开展题为“我心中的美丽乡村”征文活动。请根据以下内容投稿：
1.生态环境；
2.生活条件；
3.精神面貌。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
The Charming Village in My Eyes
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8．（2020·云南昆明·云南民族大学附属中学校考三模）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你将在校体育节的开幕式上发言，倡议大家积极 参加体育活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 你的倡议；
2. 活动的重要性。
注意：1) 词数 100 左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2) 可以适当增加细节。
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9．（2020·云南昆明·统考一模）假如你是某英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.征文情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·云南昆明·云南民族大学附属中学校考二模）假如你是学校英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校五月份开展的“班服设计大赛”。内容包括：1.活动目的 2.活动开展情况。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：班服（class uniform）
四、开放性作文
11．（2022·云南昆明·统考模拟预测）你班英语老师请大家以My Favorite Novel为题准备一份发言稿，以便在下次的口语课上分享，内容包括：
1. 书名及作者；
2. 主要内容；
3. 心得体会。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．（2022·云南昆明·统考一模）春节将至，你校校报英语专栏面向学生征稿，主题为“我帮爸妈做年夜饭（Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner）”，请你根据以下要点写一份稿件：
1. 年夜饭意义；
2. 帮忙内容；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Helping My Parents with Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner
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五、读后续写
13．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The first time we set eyes on “Big Red”, father, mother and I were on our way home. As we passed the Eaton’s department store’s window, we stopped as usual to have a look and do a bit of dreaming.
The beautifully decorated window display held the best toys ever. There were dolls much too pretty to play with. And they all lay beneath a surprisingly fantastic dress. Mother’s eyes were glued to its shining red satin (缎子).
“My goodness,” she whispered. “Look, at that!” Then, mother looked down at her own coat -she had worn the heavy grey wool coat every winter for as long as I could remember. Mom was forever doing chores-washing laundry, tending the pigs and working in the garden-so she always wore housedresses and an apron (围裙) to protect the front. She did have one or two “special” dresses saved for church on Sundays. Also, she managed to make almost all of our clothes. They weren’t fancy, but they were comfortable.
“What a silly dress!” She shook her head. “Who on earth would want such a big dress ” As we continued down the street, mother turned her head for one more look. “My goodness! You’d think they’d display something a person could use!”
Mother’s Day was nearing, and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother, of all people, was not one to spend money on items that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this.” She’d always say. Choosing a gift for Mother’s Day for her was quite hard. When Dad and I asked, she thought carefully then asked for some tea towels, face cloths or a new basin.
On our last trip to town before Mother’s Day, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly shouted in surprise: “Look!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton’s. “That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “Who’d be fool enough to buy such a dress ” Mother questioned, shaking her head. I was almost certain that I noticed a trace of longing (一丝渴望) in her voice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On the morning of Mother’s Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton’s Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper.
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“Oh Frank...” She choked up and couldn’t say a word, tears welling up in her eyes.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
An after-school activity “Labor Experience Sharing” is to be held this Friday afternoon. It’s my pleasure to invite you to join us.
As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom. Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation. Through the activity, not only can we promote communication among classmates, but also we can raise our awareness of labor. If you take part in the activity, you’ll enjoy the friendly atmosphere of our class.
We’d be delighted to look forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请交换生Peter参加你班本周五下午举办的课外活动“假期劳动分享会”。
【详解】词汇激活
参加：join→ participate in/attend
安排：scheduled→ arranged
促进：promote→ accelerate/improve
意识：awareness→ sense/consciousness
高兴的：delighted→ glad/pleased
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom. Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation.
拓展句：As scheduled, the activity begins at 4 p.m. in our classroom, which aims to enrich the students’ school life and develop the good habit of labor, our class will share the stories and feelings of labor experiences during the past vacation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Through the activity, not only can we promote communication among classmates, but also we can raise our awareness of labor. (使用not only...but also...连接两个并列分句，且第一个分句采用部分倒装句式。)
[高分句型2]If you take part in the activity, you’ll enjoy the friendly atmosphere of our class.(使用if引导条件状语从句。)
2．Dear Peter,
I am glad to tell you that there will be a performance to be held in our school this Friday, whose theme is Dance for Youth.
The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, lasting 2 hours. Live broadcast via the Internet will be on at the same time. The activity aims at showing the students’ positive and optimistic spirit as well as their passion of pursuing dreams. There will be various fully prepared performances, including singing, dancing, instrument playing and so on, which will be a visual feast for all of us.
I do hope you can join us on line to share the happiness together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请新西兰网友Peter在网上观看学校本周五下午举行的“舞动青春”文艺活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→happy
被计划：be scheduled to→be planned to
和：as well as→and
各种各样的：various→varieties of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, lasting 2 hours.
拓展句：The performance is scheduled to take place in our school hall from 15:00 to 17:00, which will last 2 hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am glad to tell you that there will be a performance to be held in our school this Friday, whose theme is Dance for Youth.（由whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】There will be various fully prepared performances, including singing, dancing, instrument playing and so on, which will be a visual feast for all of us.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】I do hope you can join us on line to share the happiness together.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Lucy,
I'm so glad to know you're considering coming to China to learn traditional Chinese medicine. Here I'd like to express my warmest welcome!
Having evolved thousands of years, traditional Chinese medicine is now a common and mature healing approach which enjoys high reputation in China. Its fewer side effects and painless treatment drive many people to turn to traditional Chinese medicine when they suffer from diseases. With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners.
I'm convinced that your plan is worth a try and sincerely wish you success in your study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给新西兰好友Lucy回复她询问你中医的有关情况，内容包括：表示欢迎；简要介绍中医；表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：consider→think about
发展：evolve→develop
方法：approach→way
荣誉：reputation→fame
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners.
拓展句：With the worldwide spread of traditional Chinese medicine, it is now growing in popularity with foreigners who like Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having evolved thousands of years, traditional Chinese medicine is now a common and mature healing approach which enjoys high reputation in China.(运用了现在分词做状语和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Its fewer side effects and painless treatment drive many people to turn to traditional Chinese medicine when they suffer from diseases. (when引导的状语从句)
4．Dear Sir or Madam,
How’s everything going I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of our school, I’d like to share the video of New Year’s Eve Party launched by our school with you.
The party began with an English poetry reading, presented by both teachers and students. The following were singing, dancing, instrument performance and several skits. At last, our headmaster addressed a speech, wishing all of us a year filled with health and happiness. We shot this video to express our heartfelt New Year’s greeting to you.
I would appreciate it very much if you could share with us how you’ll celebrate the coming New Year at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校给英国友人发送迎新联欢表演视频致以新年问候，以电子邮件形式说明情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：launch→hold
短剧：skit → short play
发表演说： address→give
诚挚的：heartfelt→genuine
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The party began with an English poetry reading, presented by both teachers and students.
拓展句：The party began with an English poetry reading, which was presented by both teachers and students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of our school, I’d like to share the video of New Year’s Eve Party launched by our school with you.（运用了非谓语动词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it very much if you could share with us how you’ll celebrate the coming New Year at your earliest convenience.（运用了条件状语从句和宾语从句）
5．Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m privileged to stand here to deliver my speech.
As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously. However, more and more wildlife is faced with extinction, whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built. Even worse, to make profit, hunters are killing wildlife. Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, causing their population to drop increasingly.
It’s high time that we should change our way of life and stop hunting wildlife. If everyone boycotts buying any products made from wildlife, the killing can stop, too. Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to our planet.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：privileged→honoured
建立：build→set up
满足：meet→satisfy
导致：cause→lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, causing their population to drop increasingly.
拓展句：Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers’ need, which causes their population to drop increasingly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, our planet is our beautiful home, where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] However, more and more wildlife is faced with extinction, whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built. (运用了whose引导的定语从句，as引导的状语从句)
6．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation activity, I would like to share the details with you.
The activity is scheduled to take place in our school on June 9. To begin with, there will be a ceremony congratulating all of us on our graduation from high school. Student representatives will express our gratitude to the teachers' efforts, parents’ support and peers' help. What's more, a variety of activities will be involved, including taking photos, recording videos, writing graduation wishes, giving away souvenirs and so on. The activity will surely help us reflect on the three years' school life as well as look forward to a better journey in the future.
Could you tell us about your graduation activity
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给网友Peter写一封邮件介绍你校即将举行的高中毕业纪念活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划好的：scheduled→arranged举办：take place→ hold
代表：representative→ delegate
传达：express→deliver
大量：a variety of →a quantity of
回顾：reflect on→ review
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To begin with, there will be a ceremony congratulating all of us on our graduation from high school.
拓展句：To begin with, there will be a ceremony that will congratulate all of us on our graduation from high school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation activity, I would like to share the details with you.(使用现在分词作状语的高级表达。)
[高分句型2]The activity will surely help us reflect on the three years' school life as well as look forward to a better journey in the future.(使用as well as连接两个并列宾语。)
7．The Charming Village in My Eyes
The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the village takes on a nice look, with neat paths and furnished houses. The roads leading to all directions are broad and clean. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives. It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.
This is the beautiful picture of the village in my mind.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“我心中的美丽乡村”为题写一篇文章向学校校园网站英文栏目投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 生态环境；
2. 生活条件；
3. 精神面貌。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
live a(n)…life; (be) surrounded by; lead to; have easy access to do sth.; be convenient for sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.
2. Surrounded by green mountains and beautiful lakes, the village takes on a nice look, with neat paths and furnished houses.
3. The roads leading to all directions are broad and clean.
4. In addition, villagers have easy access to clean water and the Internet.
5. It is convenient for them to sell their products through various platforms online, thus improving their lives.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：In addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The charming village in my eyes is a place where people are living a peaceful, happy and healthy life.用了where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] It is the harmonious environment and the colorful life that make everyone optimistic and in high spirits.用了“It is +被强调部分+ that…”强调句型结构。
8．Hello, everyone!
It’s a great honour to stand here to share with you the importance of doing sports. And I sincerely invite all of you to take physical exercise.
Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life. By taking exercise regularly, we can build up our health and strength. A strong body can help protect us from diseases. And in return, it helps us with our study efficiency. What’s more, team sports like basketball can teach us how to work with others. Team spirits will be of great importance to us in our future jobs.So, let’s make exercise part of our life.
That’s all. Thank you.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章要求写一篇校体育节的开幕式上发言稿，倡议大家积极参加体育活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示问候
2.说明你的倡议内容
3.解释活动的重要性
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
It’s a great honour to do；share with；invite sb. to do sth.；at least；live a healthy life；in return；take exercise；build up；protect sb. from…；help sb. with sth.；what’s more
第三步：连词成句
1. It’s a great honour to stand here to share with you the importance of doing sports.
2. I sincerely invite all of you to take physical exercise.
3. Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life.
4. By taking exercise regularly, we can build up our health and strength.
5. A strong body can help protect us from diseases.
6. And in return, it helps us with our study efficiency.
7. Team sports like basketball can teach us how to work with others.
8. Team spirits will be of great importance to us in our future jobs.
9. let’s make exercise part of our life.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Our school advocates that we should play sports for at least one hour a day to live a healthy life.中that引导宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9． This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals. The purpose of this activity is to raise students’ awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
The activity attracted a number of students. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are different styles of essays, including novels, poems, and letters. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生报道本校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.写作背景及征文目的（an essay contest; the purpose of）
2.征文情况介绍
1）参与人数（attract a number of students）
2）征文体裁及内容（different styles of essays；express concern for；put forward measures）
3.征文效果（have come to realize）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hold an essay; the purpose of; raise sb’s awareness of doing; a total of; express the concern for; put forward; come to realize; the importance of
第三步：连词成句
1. The purpose of this activity is to raise students’ awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
2. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.
3. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
4. The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals.这句话运用了whose引导定语从句修饰先行词an essay contest。
A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.这句话运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如hold an essay; the purpose of; raise sb’s awareness of doing; a total of; express the concern for; put forward; come to realize; the importance of等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10． With the purpose of cultivating students’ creativity and encouraging us to find and appreciate the beauty in our school life, a class uniform design competition was held in May.
The competition caught a great number of students’ and parents’ attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are various styles of class uniform. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some were designed to reflect their class mottos. According to online voting, the work comes from Class 6, Senior 1 has gained the most popularity for its unique design.
The activity has become a real hit in our campus and encouraged more students to show their talents bravely.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是学校英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校五月份开展的“班服设计大赛”。内容包括：1.活动目的 2.活动开展情况。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：with the purpose of (为了……)；encourage us to do（鼓励某人做某事）；catch one’s attention（吸引某人的注意力）；a great number of (许多)；class uniform (班服)；submit(提交)；inspiration (灵感)；According to （根据）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如A total of 40 works were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11．A possible version
My Favorite Novel
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to introduce my favorite book — Around the World in Eighty Days, which was written by Jules Verne, an outstanding French writer.
It is a science fiction about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his club mates, claiming that he can travel around the world within eighty days. After overcoming lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end. I am deeply impressed by the writer’s vivid description and his deep passion for exploration of the world.
Only by reading this novel have I fully understood it is bravery and courage that contribute to our success and inspire us to move forward constantly.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以My Favorite Novel为题准备一份发言稿，分享内容包括书名及作者，主要内容以及心得体会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①杰出的：outstanding→excellent
②克服：overcome→conquer
③困难：difficulty→hardship
④描述：description→account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After overcoming lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end.
拓展句：After he had overcome lots of difficulties and challenges, he achieves his goal in the end.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】It is a science fiction about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his club mates, claiming that he can travel around the world within eighty days.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Only by reading this novel have I fully understood it is bravery and courage that contribute to our success and inspire us to move forward constantly.(运用了倒装句，宾语从句、强调句，动词不定式作宾语补足语)
12． Helping My Parents with Lunar New Year's Eve Dinner
With the Spring Festival approaching, every family is busy preparing the Lunar New Year's Eve dinner. As a member, I am excited to help my parents make full preparations.
The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time for people to say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation. As scheduled, what I need to do first is to make a traditional and typical food list for the dinner. Together with my parents, I will buy the food materials in the early morning and help them with the cooking as well as setting the table in the late afternoon. After enjoying the meal, I can help set off the fireworks
The big dinner promises a new start. I can't wait to offer my help.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。要求考生投稿给校报，讲述如何帮助父母准备年夜饭以及它的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
接近：approach → draw near
兴奋的：excited → feverish
团聚：reunion → gathering
告别：say goodbye → farewell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time for people to say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation.
拓展句：The New Year's Eve dinner is a reunion time when people say goodbye to the old and welcome the new year with full expectation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the Spring Festival approaching, every family is busy preparing the Lunar New Year's Eve dinner.（运用了with复合结构：with+名词+非谓语动词在句中作状语）
【高分句型2】As scheduled, what I need to do first is to make a traditional and typical food list for the dinner.（运用了what引起的主语从句）
13．On the morning of Mother’s Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton’s Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper. “Oh Frank,” she praised, “just what I wanted!” Dad was sitting in his rocker, a huge grin on his face.“Only a fool wouldn’t give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Christmas,” he laughed. “Go ahead, open it up and make sure there are no chips.” Mother quietly opened the box to find a big white dishpan— overflowing with deep red satin that spilled out across her lap. With her hands trembling, she touched the elegant material of Big Red.
“Oh Frank...” She choked up and couldn’t say a word, tears welling up in her eyes. Her face was as bright as the star that twinkled on our tree in the corner of the small room. “You shouldn’t have …” came her faint attempt at scolding. “Oh now, never mind that!” Dad said. “Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helping her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders. I watched in surprise, attracted by the beauty of my mother I had never noticed before. “You look beautiful,” my dad whispered to my mom— and she surely did!
【导语】本文大红裙子线索展开，讲述了作者的母亲勤俭持家，每天忙着家务，穿着也不讲究，母亲节的时候也没有买过像样的衣服，她从不会把钱花在不实用的东西上，一天回家的路上，母亲在商店的橱窗看到一件“大红裙子”目不转睛地看着，但嘴里却说着各种不喜欢的话，在母亲节的前天去镇上，母亲发现“大红裙子”不见了，母亲有些失落。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在母亲节的早晨，母亲得到了一个大盒子，盒子的包装纸上写着“伊顿最好的盆。””可知，第一段可描写母亲打开大盒子礼物前后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容““哦，弗兰克……”她哽咽着说不出一句话，泪水在眼眶里涌出。”可知，第二段可描写母亲见到“大红裙子的惊喜，以及接下来做了些什么”。
2.续写线索：见到礼品盒的平淡——打开后的惊喜——父亲的表现——母亲试穿——父亲对母亲的赞美
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.赞美：praise/speak highly of
②.大笑：laugh/burst into laughter
③.责怪：scold/blame/
情绪类
①.平静：quietly/in silence/calmly
②.惊讶：in surprise/surprisingly/in shock
【点睛】[高分句型1].With her hands trembling, she touched the elegant material of Big Red.（运用了with复合结构）
[高分句型2].“Let’s see if it fits,” he laughed, helping her slip the marvelous dress over her shoulders.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
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