安徽省蚌埠市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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安徽省蚌埠市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠第一中学校考三模）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑（Internet addiction）难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear from you._________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）假定你是李华，一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提供一些校园生活的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends，
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2020·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠第一中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 时间和地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2022·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）假定你是李华，参加了你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动，收获颇多。请你在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文，对组织者表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 活动经历；
2. 感想收获；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．（2019·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校的外教Ms. Green即将回国。你将代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送她礼物。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.介绍赠送的礼物—汉服(Hanfu)；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右，发言稿开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Green,
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四、推荐信
6．（2022·四川攀枝花·攀枝花市第三高级中学校统考三模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会以后，你的英国笔友John对于体育锻炼产生了浓厚的兴趣，想请你推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐理由；
2. 提醒进行该项运动时的注意事项；
3. 该运动给你自己带来的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear John,
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Yours
Li Hua
7．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Tom刚刚高中毕业，他热衷中国文化，想到中国读大学，特征询你的意见。请给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
8．（2021·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠二中校考模拟预测）5月16日是我国第三十一个全国助残日。某英语报社以“关爱残疾人从我做起”为主题，面向中学生进行征文。请你用英语写一篇题为“Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty”的文章向其投稿。内容包括：
1. 助残的必要性；
2. 自己所做的事；
3. 感悟与期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校举行了一次慈善义卖活动。你的新西兰朋友Tom对此很感兴趣，他发来邮件，询问相关情况。请用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.活动情况；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：慈善义卖 charity sale
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）为了庆祝中国共产党成立100周年，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，简介 “脱贫致富”给你家乡带来的变化。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:脱贫致富poverty alleviation
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11．（2020·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校中国功夫俱乐部（Chinese Kung Fu Club）将面向国际学生招收新成员。请你用英语写一篇招募新成员的启事，内容包括：
1.本俱乐部历史；
2.参加本俱乐部的益处；
3.本俱乐部的联系方式（邮箱chinesekungfu@）。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear international students，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
12．（2023·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）观察下列三幅图，写一篇短文向英语报社投稿。
内容要点如下：
1. 图画内容；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 标题自拟；
2. 词数：80词左右；
3. 可以适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。
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七、开放性作文
13．（2022·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）为了引领学生积极乐观地面对高考结果，某英语报社将于6月下旬出版一期专刊，现面向广大高中毕业生征文。请你以“My resolution for the future”为题，写一篇短文向报社投稿，内容包括：
1.简要介绍对高考的态度；
2.描述对未来的期许与打算。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
My resolution for the future
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14．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考一模）在2020东京奥运会（the 2020 Tokyo Olympics）上，中国运动健儿取得了优异的成绩。某中学生英文报社面向中学生征稿，谈谈你的心得体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
八、读后续写
15．（2023·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Raj learns a lesson
Raj is a middle-aged man. Although he was born in a poor family, he was raised well by his father and mother. His father owned a welding (焊接) shop, and used to work for more than 12 hours a day, so that his family could lead a comfortable life.
However, Raj’s father could not earn sufficient money to provide a decent life to his family. Raj was an average student in school, and used to score around 70 percent marks. Raj’s dream was to become a doctor. Since his marks weren’t very high, he could not get the desired course that he wanted to study. Instead, he joined a bachelor’s degree course, completed the course successfully, and got a job in a company.
In order not to depend on Raj, his father continued to work in his shop. After getting a permanent job, Raj’s parents wanted him to marry. He got married to a girl from his native town, and meanwhile was promoted in his job. After a few years, his wife gave birth to beautiful twin boys.
Later, Raj began to earn a handsome salary, and started to live luxuriously. He bought a new house and a new car. Some of the luxuries were really unnecessary. Almost 6 to 7 years later, Raj was neither able to manage all the household expenses, nor pay for the children’s education and other basic necessities.
It so happened that Raj’s father fell sick, and as a result, could not continue his work. He requested Raj to give some money for his treatment and other household expenses. Raj, who was already suffering from financial crisis, not only shouted at his parents but also complained to his parents, “You never give me what I needed and wanted and it took me more than 10 years to get settled. Now, while I am again struggling for money, you are not doing anything to help me, but instead are a burden to me! So, please don’t come to me again.”
His parents were left shocked.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a week, while Raj was on an official tour, he met a small boy aged about 10 years selling toys.
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Raj purchased a few toys from the little boy.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades may go down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon．
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike来信说他最近沉迷于电脑（Internet addiction）难以控制。请给他回信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。全文以一般现在时为主。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文是一封书信，要求考生用英语请给美国的朋友Mike回信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。全文以一般现在时为主。
第2步：组织要点。1. 收到了对方的来信，知悉了困扰对方的问题。2. 告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题。3.建议他戒除网瘾，积极参加各种活动和锻炼身体。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为Internet addiction、waste lots of valuable time、convenient、go down、damage the relationship、get rid of the bad habit、do some physical exercise等。写作时注意书信的惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如be addicted to、addiction、convenient、go down、damage the relationship
等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. 虚拟语气…it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.等。同时文章的一些串联成分，如for example、to make things worse等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
2．Dear friends，
I’ m very glad to learn that you’ re coming to study in our school. On behalf of the Students’ Union，I’ d like to express our warmest welcome to you.
In order to make your life here comfortable and convenient， I’ d like to present you some instructions. Firstly， the weather here may be different from that in your country， so please be sure to bring proper clothes. Besides， you should be acquainted with some daily expressions and cultures in Chi-na in advance so that you can communicate with the teachers and native students well.
It’ s my sincere hope that you would enjoy yourselves and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school. And I’ m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。书信体作文一般包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写邮件的原因。第二部分叙述主要内容。主要包括两点：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。最后一部分表达自己期待对方的回复。写作时要注意运用一些较高级的词汇，句式要灵活多样，如果有需要，可适当增加细节。文章最好运用一些顺序连词，以使文章行文要连贯。
【点睛】本文结构合理，要点完整。文章中运用了许多高级词汇如，on behalf of; be different from; be sure to do...; be acquainted with; in advance; acquire a great deal of knowledge ;enjoy yourselves 以及firstly; besides顺序连词等，使得文章一气呵成。同时文章的句式非常灵活，尤其是复合句非常恰当。如宾语从句I’ m very glad to learn that you’ re coming to study in our school; 主语从句It’ s my sincere hope that you would enjoy yourselves and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school；状语从句the weather here may be different from that in your country，so please be sure to bring proper clothes；结果状语从句you should be acquainted with some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance so that you can communicate with the teachers and native students well。文章中运用了动词不定式In order to make your life here comfortable and convenient来做目的状语等，这些让文章显得很有档次。
3．Dear Jack,
I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there. So far as I know, you’re quite interested in Chinese folk songs. Therefore, I’d like to invite you to attend the concert with me and I just have a spare ticket for you. By the way, the concert will begin at 6: 00 pm and it will last three hours or so. If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm. Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school. Please let me know your decision before next Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.时间和地点；3.活动内容。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese Folk Festival (中国民歌节)；in the People’s Theater of our city (在市人民剧院)；So far as I know (据我所知)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用了较多的高级句子。I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there.句中使用了that引导的宾语从句，且句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm.句中使用了if引导条件状语从句；Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school.句中使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very grateful to you for your unselfish work in organizing the activity Reading and Sharing English Classics. I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lot from it.
I have read some English classics and shared my views with other club members, from which I have a better understanding of western culture. In addition, I have a good command of more English knowledge, thus improving my reading and communicative competence. In the meanwhile, I have made many new friends.
In my opinion, it is interesting and meaningful. Hope for more activities of this kind. Thanks again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文对你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动的组织者表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
观点：view →opinion
此外： In addition →Moreover
参加： take part in → join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lot from it.
拓展句：I have taken part in the activity, from which I benefited a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have read some English classics and shared my views with other club members, from which I have a better understanding of western culture.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I have a good command of more English knowledge, thus improving my reading and communicative competence.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)
5．Dear Ms. Green,
I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you. Without your guidance and instruction, we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors. No matter where we go, we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
Thanks again for your help and hope to meet you again in the near future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送外教礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构：三段式
要求：1. 表示感谢。（gratitude）
2. 介绍赠送的礼物—汉服。（gift）
3.表达祝愿。（wishes）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be honored to; extremely; gratitude; made progress; impressed; be fascinated by; a set of; be made of; firmly
第三步：连词成句
1. I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you.
2. we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years.
3. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
4. Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture,
5. we've bought you a set of Hanfu,
6. which is made of silk and comes in different colors.
7. we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be honored to; made progress; be made of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in physical exercise. In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise. I’m writing to recommend skating to you in your spare time.
To begin with, skating can help build up your body. It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. Besides, your sense of balance and flexibility will get improved. You’d better choose a professional coach and a safe stadium. Take care of yourself while exercising. After all, safety always comes first. I hope you can enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一封邮件，向他推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →pleased
对……感兴趣：be interested in →show interest in
空余的：spare →free
此外：Besides →What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
拓展句：As the 2022 winter Olympics was held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope you can enjoy it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
7．Dear Tom,
I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China. I'm writing to recommend Beijing University to you.
Beijing University is one of the top universities in China offering some majors in Chinese culture. There you can choose one to study and communicate with the outstanding students and teachers. Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background. You can better experience the extensive traditional Chinese culture.
I truly hope that you can come to Beijing to start your study and I'm looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
你的新西兰笔友Tom刚刚高中毕业，他热衷中国文化，想到中国读大学，特征询你的意见。请给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
delighted; attend university; recommend; one of; communicate with; be located in; have a profound cultural background; traditional; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China.
2. I'm writing to recommend Beijing University to you.
3. Beijing University is one of the top universities in China offering some majors in Chinese culture.
4. There you can choose one to study and communicate with the outstanding students and teachers.
5. Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background.
6. You can better experience the extensive traditional Chinese culture.
7. I truly hope that you can come to Beijing to start your study and I'm looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Moreover
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty
People with disabilities are around us. They actually need more care and help due to their disabilities. However, there is still prejudice against them nowadays. So it is necessary to care for them.
In my daily life, I always respect them but never make fun of them no matter what happens. Besides, whenever I find people with disabilities in need of help, I never hesitate to give them a hand.
Helping disabled people has made not only them but also me happier. I hope every one in our society will get rid of discrimination and take action immediately to care for disabled people. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生用英语写一篇题为“Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty”的文章给英语报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
偏见：prejudice→bias
关心：care for=be concerned with
取笑：make fun of=tease
立刻：immediately=at once
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：People with disabilities are around us. They actually need more care and help due to their disabilities.
拓展句：People with disabilities are around us, who actually need more care and help due to their disabilities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, whenever I find people with disabilities in need of help, I never hesitate to give them a hand. (运用了whenever引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can we create a harmonious world. (运用了部分倒装)
9．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’ m pleased to know that you’ re interested in the charity sale held in our school. I’ m writing to tell you something about it.
The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground. Many items of good quality were sold at the charity sale, such as clothes, books and so on. The money that had been raised was donated to poor students for their education.
We Chinese are renowned in the world for our many virtues, one of which is our generosity to those in need. It’ s our duty to help the poor students. I find it meaningful to organize such a charity sale.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Tom回一封邮件。向他介绍一下学校举行的义卖活动，他对此很感兴趣，来信询问。内容包括：
1.活动情况；2.你的感想。
【详解】词汇积累
赠与：give away→donate
被举行，进行：be held→take place
募集资金：collect money→raise money
著名的：famous/well-known→famed/renowned
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground.
拓展句：The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground,which was attractive and successful.
【点睛】[高分句型1] T The money that had been raised was donated to poor students for their education.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] We Chinese are renowned in the world for our many virtues, one of which is our generosity to those in need. (运用了which引导的非限制定语从句)
10．One possible version ：
In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown thanks to the policy of poverty alleviation.
People used to be too poor to support themselves. The roads and houses were in poor condition However, my hometown now takes on a new look. Piles of buildings line the clean streets. It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad. Now people live a rich and comfortable life.
We owe all these changes to the correct leadership of the Communist Party of China. I strongly believe my hometown will be more and more beautiful.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文参加英语作文比赛，简介 “脱贫致富”给你家乡带来的变化。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 简述“脱贫致富”给家乡带来的变化；
2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
take place; thanks to; used to do; take on; communicate with; owe……to
第三步：连词成句
1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown thanks to the policy of poverty alleviation.
2. People used to be too poor to support themselves.
3. My hometown now takes on a new look. Piles of buildings line the clean streets.
4. It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad.
5. We owe all these changes to the correct leadership of the Communist Party of China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表转折对比关系：However,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad.此句用it作形式主语，让句子结构更加协调。
[高分句型2] I strongly believe my hometown will be more and more beautiful.此句believe后是一个宾语从句，从句的运用使文章更有文采。
11．Dear international students,
Welcome to the Chinese Kung Fu Club! The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students. Many wonderful activities have been organized and arranged in our club.
Participating in our club will benefit you a lot. You can keep fit by performing Kung Fu, during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture. Besides, You can also make a lot of Chinese friends. The training on how to perform Chinese Kung Fu is open and free to all new members.
Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome. Please contact us at chinesekungfu@. Look forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则中国功夫俱乐部招新启示，面向国际学生招收新成员。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 本俱乐部历史；
2. 参加本俱乐部的益处；
3. 本俱乐部的联系方式（邮箱chinesekungfu@）。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
set up；with the purpose of doing sth.；participate in；have a chance to do sth.；be interested in
第三步：连词成句
1. The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students.
2. Participating in our club will benefit you a lot.
3. during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture.
4. Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…,or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome这句话中用了who引导的限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如set up，with the purpose of doing sth.，participate in，be interested in等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．One possible version:
Influence of Global Warming
It can be seen from the pictures that ice in Arctic is disappearing fast and more land are flooded, threatening the survival of polar bears, sea elephants, and finally humans. All of them are crying for help.
Obviously, the pictures are used to show the terrible results of global warming and call on people to take action to save our earth.
Personally, everyone should and can do something like turning off electric appliances in time, travel green and so on. Actually, each one counts and all together make a big difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生观察下列三幅图，写一篇短文向英语报社投稿。内容要点包括：图画内容和个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显而易见地：Obviously→Apparently
可怕的：terrible→awful
呼吁：call on→appeal to
事实上：Actually→In fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All of them are crying for help.
拓展句：All of them are crying for help, which look miserable.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It can be seen from the pictures that ice in Arctic is disappearing fast and more land are flooded, threatening the survival of polar bears, sea elephants, and finally humans. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] Obviously, the pictures are used to show the terrible results of global warming and call on people to take action to save our earth.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
13．One possible version:
My resolution for the future
The college entrance examination is very important for everyone in our country, but I don’t think it can decide my future. Therefore, even if I fail in it, I won’t stop pursuing my dream.
I’ll always remain honest, because honesty is a virtue, which can help me live in harmony with others. In addition, whatever I do in the future, I’ll make great efforts to achieve my goals.
Simply put, be honest and hardworking, and not only can I live a colorful and meaningful life but also I can make contributions to my country.
【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生以“My resolution for the future”为题，写一篇短文向报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：be very important→be of great importance
此外：in addition→besides
实现：achieve→accomplish
简言之：simply put→in a nutshell
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：The college entrance examination is very important for everyone in our country, but I don’t think it can decide my future.
拓展句：The college entrance examination is of great importance for everyone in our country, which I don’t think can decide my future though.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, even if I fail in it, I won’t stop pursuing my dream.（运用了even if引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2]I’ll always remain honest, because honesty is a virtue, which can help me live in harmony with others.（运用了because引导原因状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]In addition, whatever I do in the future, I’ll make great efforts to achieve my goals.（运用了whatever引导让步状语从句）
14．Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. We Chinese people are all proud of them.
As is known to us all, there are many hardships behind success. The Chinese athletes have been training hard all year round and overcome difficulty after difficulty. I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland.
As a student, I’ll follow their example, work hard to improve my study and try to make contributions to our country in the future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封征稿启事，谈谈对于中国运动健儿取得了优异成绩的心得体会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
会议：meeting→conference
以……为骄傲：take pride in→be proud of
出色的：wonderful→excellent
留下深刻印象：impress→leave a great impression on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a student, I’ll follow their example, work hard to improve my study and try to make contributions to our country in the future.
拓展句：As a student, I’ll follow their example and work hard to improve my study because I try to make contributions to our country in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland. (运用了强调句)
15． After a week, while on an official tour, he met a small boy aged about 10 years selling toys. The boy requested Raj to buy something. Raj asked the boy why he was selling toys instead of studying. The boy replied, “My father met with an accident a year ago and he lost one hand. He cannot work now. My mother works as a maid in a few houses. I have no choice but to help my parents by selling these toys. I go to school in the morning, and sell toys in the evenings. I work for 3 hours a day and study at night!”
Raj purchased a few toys from the little boy. He thought about what the boy had said. He realized that he had been wrong in the way he treated his parents. He had learnt a lesson from the small boy. At a very small age, this boy was helping his parents, but Raj, in order to meet the demands of his luxurious lifestyle, had ignored his parents. Raj decided to make an apology to them the moment he got back home.
【导语】本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述Raj在贫穷的家庭长大，自己工作结婚生子之后，过上了富足的生活。但是因为太奢侈，导致他很快进入了负债状态。而同时，他的父亲因为生病也向他经济求助，导致他很生气。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一周后，在一次出差旅行中，他遇到一个10岁左右的小男孩在卖玩具。”可知，第一段可描写Raj了解到的小男孩的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“Raj从小男孩那里买了一些玩具。”可知，第二段可描写Raj从小男孩身上意识到自己对待父母的行为是错误的。
2.续写线索：遇到小男孩——了解情况——敬佩小男孩——意识到自己的错误——向父母道歉
3.词汇激活
行为类
①请求：request/ask
②学习：study/learn
③回答：replied/answer
情绪类
①不对的：wrong/incorrect
②道歉：make an apology/apologize
【点睛】【高分句型1】Raj asked the boy why he was selling toys instead of studying.（由why引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】He thought about what the boy had said.（由what引导的宾语从句）
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一、建议信
1．（2020·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠第一中学校考三模）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑（Internet addiction）难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear from you._________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）假定你是李华，一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.提供一些校园生活的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2020·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠第一中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 时间和地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2022·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）假定你是李华，参加了你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动，收获颇多。请你在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文，对组织者表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 活动经历；
2. 感想收获；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．（2019·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校的外教Ms. Green即将回国。你将代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送她礼物。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.介绍赠送的礼物—汉服(Hanfu)；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右，发言稿开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Green,
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四、推荐信
6．（2022·四川攀枝花·攀枝花市第三高级中学校统考三模）假定你是李华，2022年北京冬奥会以后，你的英国笔友John对于体育锻炼产生了浓厚的兴趣，想请你推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐理由；
2. 提醒进行该项运动时的注意事项；
3. 该运动给你自己带来的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear John,
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Yours
Li Hua
7．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Tom刚刚高中毕业，他热衷中国文化，想到中国读大学，特征询你的意见。请给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
8．（2021·安徽蚌埠·蚌埠二中校考模拟预测）5月16日是我国第三十一个全国助残日。某英语报社以“关爱残疾人从我做起”为主题，面向中学生进行征文。请你用英语写一篇题为“Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty”的文章向其投稿。内容包括：
1. 助残的必要性；
2. 自己所做的事；
3. 感悟与期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校举行了一次慈善义卖活动。你的新西兰朋友Tom对此很感兴趣，他发来邮件，询问相关情况。请用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.活动情况；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：慈善义卖 charity sale
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考三模）为了庆祝中国共产党成立100周年，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，简介 “脱贫致富”给你家乡带来的变化。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:脱贫致富poverty alleviation
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11．（2020·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校中国功夫俱乐部（Chinese Kung Fu Club）将面向国际学生招收新成员。请你用英语写一篇招募新成员的启事，内容包括：
1.本俱乐部历史；
2.参加本俱乐部的益处；
3.本俱乐部的联系方式（邮箱chinesekungfu@）。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear international students，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
12．（2023·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）观察下列三幅图，写一篇短文向英语报社投稿。
内容要点如下：
1. 图画内容；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 标题自拟；
2. 词数：80词左右；
3. 可以适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。
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七、开放性作文
13．（2022·安徽蚌埠·统考模拟预测）为了引领学生积极乐观地面对高考结果，某英语报社将于6月下旬出版一期专刊，现面向广大高中毕业生征文。请你以“My resolution for the future”为题，写一篇短文向报社投稿，内容包括：
1.简要介绍对高考的态度；
2.描述对未来的期许与打算。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
My resolution for the future
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14．（2021·安徽蚌埠·统考一模）在2020东京奥运会（the 2020 Tokyo Olympics）上，中国运动健儿取得了优异的成绩。某中学生英文报社面向中学生征稿，谈谈你的心得体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
八、读后续写
15．（2023·安徽蚌埠·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Raj learns a lesson
Raj is a middle-aged man. Although he was born in a poor family, he was raised well by his father and mother. His father owned a welding (焊接) shop, and used to work for more than 12 hours a day, so that his family could lead a comfortable life.
However, Raj’s father could not earn sufficient money to provide a decent life to his family. Raj was an average student in school, and used to score around 70 percent marks. Raj’s dream was to become a doctor. Since his marks weren’t very high, he could not get the desired course that he wanted to study. Instead, he joined a bachelor’s degree course, completed the course successfully, and got a job in a company.
In order not to depend on Raj, his father continued to work in his shop. After getting a permanent job, Raj’s parents wanted him to marry. He got married to a girl from his native town, and meanwhile was promoted in his job. After a few years, his wife gave birth to beautiful twin boys.
Later, Raj began to earn a handsome salary, and started to live luxuriously. He bought a new house and a new car. Some of the luxuries were really unnecessary. Almost 6 to 7 years later, Raj was neither able to manage all the household expenses, nor pay for the children’s education and other basic necessities.
It so happened that Raj’s father fell sick, and as a result, could not continue his work. He requested Raj to give some money for his treatment and other household expenses. Raj, who was already suffering from financial crisis, not only shouted at his parents but also complained to his parents, “You never give me what I needed and wanted and it took me more than 10 years to get settled. Now, while I am again struggling for money, you are not doing anything to help me, but instead are a burden to me! So, please don’t come to me again.”
His parents were left shocked.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a week, while Raj was on an official tour, he met a small boy aged about 10 years selling toys.
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Raj purchased a few toys from the little boy.
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1．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades may go down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon．
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike来信说他最近沉迷于电脑（Internet addiction）难以控制。请给他回信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。全文以一般现在时为主。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文是一封书信，要求考生用英语请给美国的朋友Mike回信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题，并提出一些建议。全文以一般现在时为主。
第2步：组织要点。1. 收到了对方的来信，知悉了困扰对方的问题。2. 告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人产生矛盾等问题。3.建议他戒除网瘾，积极参加各种活动和锻炼身体。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为Internet addiction、waste lots of valuable time、convenient、go down、damage the relationship、get rid of the bad habit、do some physical exercise等。写作时注意书信的惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如be addicted to、addiction、convenient、go down、damage the relationship
等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. 虚拟语气…it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.等。同时文章的一些串联成分，如for example、to make things worse等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
2．Dear friends，
I’ m very glad to learn that you’ re coming to study in our school. On behalf of the Students’ Union，I’ d like to express our warmest welcome to you.
In order to make your life here comfortable and convenient， I’ d like to present you some instructions. Firstly， the weather here may be different from that in your country， so please be sure to bring proper clothes. Besides， you should be acquainted with some daily expressions and cultures in Chi-na in advance so that you can communicate with the teachers and native students well.
It’ s my sincere hope that you would enjoy yourselves and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school. And I’ m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。书信体作文一般包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写邮件的原因。第二部分叙述主要内容。主要包括两点：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。最后一部分表达自己期待对方的回复。写作时要注意运用一些较高级的词汇，句式要灵活多样，如果有需要，可适当增加细节。文章最好运用一些顺序连词，以使文章行文要连贯。
【点睛】本文结构合理，要点完整。文章中运用了许多高级词汇如，on behalf of; be different from; be sure to do...; be acquainted with; in advance; acquire a great deal of knowledge ;enjoy yourselves 以及firstly; besides顺序连词等，使得文章一气呵成。同时文章的句式非常灵活，尤其是复合句非常恰当。如宾语从句I’ m very glad to learn that you’ re coming to study in our school; 主语从句It’ s my sincere hope that you would enjoy yourselves and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school；状语从句the weather here may be different from that in your country，so please be sure to bring proper clothes；结果状语从句you should be acquainted with some daily expressions and cultures in China in advance so that you can communicate with the teachers and native students well。文章中运用了动词不定式In order to make your life here comfortable and convenient来做目的状语等，这些让文章显得很有档次。
3．Dear Jack,
I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there. So far as I know, you’re quite interested in Chinese folk songs. Therefore, I’d like to invite you to attend the concert with me and I just have a spare ticket for you. By the way, the concert will begin at 6: 00 pm and it will last three hours or so. If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm. Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school. Please let me know your decision before next Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你校即将举办“中国民歌节”。请你写封信邀请你的好友Jack参加，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.时间和地点；3.活动内容。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese Folk Festival (中国民歌节)；in the People’s Theater of our city (在市人民剧院)；So far as I know (据我所知)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用了较多的高级句子。I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese Folk Festival will be held in the People’s Theater of our city next Saturday evening and that a large number of famous Chinese folk song singers will show up and sing there.句中使用了that引导的宾语从句，且句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；If you’d like to go, I’ll meet you right outside our school gate at 5: 30 pm.句中使用了if引导条件状语从句；Then we’ll walk to the People’s Theater together because it’s quite near to our school.句中使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very grateful to you for your unselfish work in organizing the activity Reading and Sharing English Classics. I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lot from it.
I have read some English classics and shared my views with other club members, from which I have a better understanding of western culture. In addition, I have a good command of more English knowledge, thus improving my reading and communicative competence. In the meanwhile, I have made many new friends.
In my opinion, it is interesting and meaningful. Hope for more activities of this kind. Thanks again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文对你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动的组织者表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
观点：view →opinion
此外： In addition →Moreover
参加： take part in → join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lot from it.
拓展句：I have taken part in the activity, from which I benefited a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have read some English classics and shared my views with other club members, from which I have a better understanding of western culture.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I have a good command of more English knowledge, thus improving my reading and communicative competence.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)
5．Dear Ms. Green,
I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you. Without your guidance and instruction, we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors. No matter where we go, we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
Thanks again for your help and hope to meet you again in the near future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送外教礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构：三段式
要求：1. 表示感谢。（gratitude）
2. 介绍赠送的礼物—汉服。（gift）
3.表达祝愿。（wishes）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be honored to; extremely; gratitude; made progress; impressed; be fascinated by; a set of; be made of; firmly
第三步：连词成句
1. I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you.
2. we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years.
3. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
4. Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture,
5. we've bought you a set of Hanfu,
6. which is made of silk and comes in different colors.
7. we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be honored to; made progress; be made of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in physical exercise. In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise. I’m writing to recommend skating to you in your spare time.
To begin with, skating can help build up your body. It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. Besides, your sense of balance and flexibility will get improved. You’d better choose a professional coach and a safe stadium. Take care of yourself while exercising. After all, safety always comes first. I hope you can enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一封邮件，向他推荐一项适合高中生在业余时间里进行的体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →pleased
对……感兴趣：be interested in →show interest in
空余的：spare →free
此外：Besides →What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In view of the 2022Winter Olympics held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
拓展句：As the 2022 winter Olympics was held in Beijing, the craze for winter sports is on the rise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It can also remove stress and tension and keep you relaxed, which contributes to your physical and mental health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I hope you can enjoy it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
7．Dear Tom,
I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China. I'm writing to recommend Beijing University to you.
Beijing University is one of the top universities in China offering some majors in Chinese culture. There you can choose one to study and communicate with the outstanding students and teachers. Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background. You can better experience the extensive traditional Chinese culture.
I truly hope that you can come to Beijing to start your study and I'm looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
你的新西兰笔友Tom刚刚高中毕业，他热衷中国文化，想到中国读大学，特征询你的意见。请给他写一封电子邮件，推荐一所大学，并给出相关理由。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
delighted; attend university; recommend; one of; communicate with; be located in; have a profound cultural background; traditional; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China.
2. I'm writing to recommend Beijing University to you.
3. Beijing University is one of the top universities in China offering some majors in Chinese culture.
4. There you can choose one to study and communicate with the outstanding students and teachers.
5. Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background.
6. You can better experience the extensive traditional Chinese culture.
7. I truly hope that you can come to Beijing to start your study and I'm looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Moreover
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm so delighted to have received your email, telling me that you intend to attend university in China. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Moreover, it is located in Beijing, the capital of several dynasties, which has a profound cultural background. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
8．Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty
People with disabilities are around us. They actually need more care and help due to their disabilities. However, there is still prejudice against them nowadays. So it is necessary to care for them.
In my daily life, I always respect them but never make fun of them no matter what happens. Besides, whenever I find people with disabilities in need of help, I never hesitate to give them a hand.
Helping disabled people has made not only them but also me happier. I hope every one in our society will get rid of discrimination and take action immediately to care for disabled people. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生用英语写一篇题为“Caring for Disabled People Is Our Duty”的文章给英语报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
偏见：prejudice→bias
关心：care for=be concerned with
取笑：make fun of=tease
立刻：immediately=at once
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：People with disabilities are around us. They actually need more care and help due to their disabilities.
拓展句：People with disabilities are around us, who actually need more care and help due to their disabilities.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, whenever I find people with disabilities in need of help, I never hesitate to give them a hand. (运用了whenever引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can we create a harmonious world. (运用了部分倒装)
9．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’ m pleased to know that you’ re interested in the charity sale held in our school. I’ m writing to tell you something about it.
The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground. Many items of good quality were sold at the charity sale, such as clothes, books and so on. The money that had been raised was donated to poor students for their education.
We Chinese are renowned in the world for our many virtues, one of which is our generosity to those in need. It’ s our duty to help the poor students. I find it meaningful to organize such a charity sale.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Tom回一封邮件。向他介绍一下学校举行的义卖活动，他对此很感兴趣，来信询问。内容包括：
1.活动情况；2.你的感想。
【详解】词汇积累
赠与：give away→donate
被举行，进行：be held→take place
募集资金：collect money→raise money
著名的：famous/well-known→famed/renowned
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground.
拓展句：The activity was held on March 20, 2021 on the sports ground,which was attractive and successful.
【点睛】[高分句型1] T The money that had been raised was donated to poor students for their education.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] We Chinese are renowned in the world for our many virtues, one of which is our generosity to those in need. (运用了which引导的非限制定语从句)
10．One possible version ：
In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown thanks to the policy of poverty alleviation.
People used to be too poor to support themselves. The roads and houses were in poor condition However, my hometown now takes on a new look. Piles of buildings line the clean streets. It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad. Now people live a rich and comfortable life.
We owe all these changes to the correct leadership of the Communist Party of China. I strongly believe my hometown will be more and more beautiful.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文参加英语作文比赛，简介 “脱贫致富”给你家乡带来的变化。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 简述“脱贫致富”给家乡带来的变化；
2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
take place; thanks to; used to do; take on; communicate with; owe……to
第三步：连词成句
1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown thanks to the policy of poverty alleviation.
2. People used to be too poor to support themselves.
3. My hometown now takes on a new look. Piles of buildings line the clean streets.
4. It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad.
5. We owe all these changes to the correct leadership of the Communist Party of China.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表转折对比关系：However,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's convenient to communicate and trade with other parts of China and even abroad.此句用it作形式主语，让句子结构更加协调。
[高分句型2] I strongly believe my hometown will be more and more beautiful.此句believe后是一个宾语从句，从句的运用使文章更有文采。
11．Dear international students,
Welcome to the Chinese Kung Fu Club! The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students. Many wonderful activities have been organized and arranged in our club.
Participating in our club will benefit you a lot. You can keep fit by performing Kung Fu, during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture. Besides, You can also make a lot of Chinese friends. The training on how to perform Chinese Kung Fu is open and free to all new members.
Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome. Please contact us at chinesekungfu@. Look forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则中国功夫俱乐部招新启示，面向国际学生招收新成员。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 本俱乐部历史；
2. 参加本俱乐部的益处；
3. 本俱乐部的联系方式（邮箱chinesekungfu@）。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
set up；with the purpose of doing sth.；participate in；have a chance to do sth.；be interested in
第三步：连词成句
1. The club was set up 3 years ago with the purpose of serving all the students.
2. Participating in our club will benefit you a lot.
3. during which you can have a chance to appreciate the great charm of Chinese Kung Fu culture.
4. Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…,or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Anyone who is interested in Chinese Kung Fu is welcome这句话中用了who引导的限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如set up，with the purpose of doing sth.，participate in，be interested in等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．One possible version:
Influence of Global Warming
It can be seen from the pictures that ice in Arctic is disappearing fast and more land are flooded, threatening the survival of polar bears, sea elephants, and finally humans. All of them are crying for help.
Obviously, the pictures are used to show the terrible results of global warming and call on people to take action to save our earth.
Personally, everyone should and can do something like turning off electric appliances in time, travel green and so on. Actually, each one counts and all together make a big difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生观察下列三幅图，写一篇短文向英语报社投稿。内容要点包括：图画内容和个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显而易见地：Obviously→Apparently
可怕的：terrible→awful
呼吁：call on→appeal to
事实上：Actually→In fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All of them are crying for help.
拓展句：All of them are crying for help, which look miserable.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It can be seen from the pictures that ice in Arctic is disappearing fast and more land are flooded, threatening the survival of polar bears, sea elephants, and finally humans. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] Obviously, the pictures are used to show the terrible results of global warming and call on people to take action to save our earth.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
13．One possible version:
My resolution for the future
The college entrance examination is very important for everyone in our country, but I don’t think it can decide my future. Therefore, even if I fail in it, I won’t stop pursuing my dream.
I’ll always remain honest, because honesty is a virtue, which can help me live in harmony with others. In addition, whatever I do in the future, I’ll make great efforts to achieve my goals.
Simply put, be honest and hardworking, and not only can I live a colorful and meaningful life but also I can make contributions to my country.
【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生以“My resolution for the future”为题，写一篇短文向报社投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：be very important→be of great importance
此外：in addition→besides
实现：achieve→accomplish
简言之：simply put→in a nutshell
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：The college entrance examination is very important for everyone in our country, but I don’t think it can decide my future.
拓展句：The college entrance examination is of great importance for everyone in our country, which I don’t think can decide my future though.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Therefore, even if I fail in it, I won’t stop pursuing my dream.（运用了even if引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2]I’ll always remain honest, because honesty is a virtue, which can help me live in harmony with others.（运用了because引导原因状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]In addition, whatever I do in the future, I’ll make great efforts to achieve my goals.（运用了whatever引导让步状语从句）
14．Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. We Chinese people are all proud of them.
As is known to us all, there are many hardships behind success. The Chinese athletes have been training hard all year round and overcome difficulty after difficulty. I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland.
As a student, I’ll follow their example, work hard to improve my study and try to make contributions to our country in the future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封征稿启事，谈谈对于中国运动健儿取得了优异成绩的心得体会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
会议：meeting→conference
以……为骄傲：take pride in→be proud of
出色的：wonderful→excellent
留下深刻印象：impress→leave a great impression on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a student, I’ll follow their example, work hard to improve my study and try to make contributions to our country in the future.
拓展句：As a student, I’ll follow their example and work hard to improve my study because I try to make contributions to our country in the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Team China has concluded all competitions at the 2020 Tokyo Olympics with excellent performance, which has left a great impression on the whole world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I think it is their diligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for our motherland. (运用了强调句)
15． After a week, while on an official tour, he met a small boy aged about 10 years selling toys. The boy requested Raj to buy something. Raj asked the boy why he was selling toys instead of studying. The boy replied, “My father met with an accident a year ago and he lost one hand. He cannot work now. My mother works as a maid in a few houses. I have no choice but to help my parents by selling these toys. I go to school in the morning, and sell toys in the evenings. I work for 3 hours a day and study at night!”
Raj purchased a few toys from the little boy. He thought about what the boy had said. He realized that he had been wrong in the way he treated his parents. He had learnt a lesson from the small boy. At a very small age, this boy was helping his parents, but Raj, in order to meet the demands of his luxurious lifestyle, had ignored his parents. Raj decided to make an apology to them the moment he got back home.
【导语】本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述Raj在贫穷的家庭长大，自己工作结婚生子之后，过上了富足的生活。但是因为太奢侈，导致他很快进入了负债状态。而同时，他的父亲因为生病也向他经济求助，导致他很生气。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一周后，在一次出差旅行中，他遇到一个10岁左右的小男孩在卖玩具。”可知，第一段可描写Raj了解到的小男孩的情况。
②由第二段首句内容“Raj从小男孩那里买了一些玩具。”可知，第二段可描写Raj从小男孩身上意识到自己对待父母的行为是错误的。
2.续写线索：遇到小男孩——了解情况——敬佩小男孩——意识到自己的错误——向父母道歉
3.词汇激活
行为类
①请求：request/ask
②学习：study/learn
③回答：replied/answer
情绪类
①不对的：wrong/incorrect
②道歉：make an apology/apologize
【点睛】【高分句型1】Raj asked the boy why he was selling toys instead of studying.（由why引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】He thought about what the boy had said.（由what引导的宾语从句）
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