安徽省滁州市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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安徽省滁州市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。
写作要点：
1.他适合做志愿者的有利条件
2.做志愿者的好处
3.表达愿望
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考三模）假定你是李华，你校刚刚成立一个中国传统文化社团。你的英国朋友 Tom 在青岛大学留学，他对中国文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信，邀请他来参加活动。
内容包括:
1. 该社团成立的目的；
2. 该社团的活动内容和时间；
3. 邀请他方便时来参加活动。注意:
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考一模）假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：
1．感激之情；
2．礼物寓意；
3．美好祝愿。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everybody,
On this special occasion, I feel much honored
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Thank you very much!
四、告知信/通知
4．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考二模）假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织美国交换生到孔子庙参观，委托你通知相关事宜, 请你写一则书面通知，要点包括:
1 .集合时间和地点;
2.活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏；
3.预先准备:简要了解孔子文化。
注意:
1.可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；
3. 词数:100左右。
参考词汇:1.孔子庙the Confucius Temple 2.木偶戏puppet show
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五、其他应用文
5．（2022·安徽滁州·校考三模）你所在的校园内部浪费现象十分严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
1、现象：水电，粮食；
2、危害：浪费资源；增加经济负担。
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
（2）不要逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺的短文。文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear classmates,
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6．（2022·安徽滁州·滁州市第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tim对中国文化颇感兴趣。今天你给他发送一封E-mail向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛（Chinese Poetry Contest），在信中你希望Tim能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。内容包括：
1. 大赛的目的；
2. 大赛的形式；
3. 大赛的结果和收获；
4. 希望。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
How is everything going
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Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你所在的学校最近在提倡劳动实践活动（labor practice），鼓励学生主动参与家务劳动。请给你的外国笔友Sam写信分享一次自己做家务的经历，内容包括：
1. 过程和感受；
2. 参与家务的意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Sam,
How are you doing
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2021·安徽滁州·天长中学校考三模）假定你是李华，原计划本周六与你校的交换生Peter一起前往你市举办的中国民乐节（Chinese Folk Music Festival），但是你因故不能前往。请你给Peter写封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 解决办法。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、开放性作文
9．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，某国际学校的音乐俱乐部（Music Club）负责人。为了提升同学们的音乐欣赏力并扩大俱乐部的影响力，该俱乐部决定招纳新成员，请你用英语写一则纳新启事，内容包括：
1. 招新时间和地点；
2. 对新成员的要求；
3. 俱乐部的活动。
注意：
1. 字数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）闲暇时，有人去山顶，有人到湖畔。假定你校英文报举行题为“The place I frequent most”的征文比赛，请写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1. 介绍你最常去的地方；
2. 该地方吸引你之处。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The place I frequent most
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试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you. I’m so surprised to hear that you want to give up applying to work as a volunteer for the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games. I’m writing to try to persuade you to continue to participate in it.
You have many advantages. First, you can speak both English and Japanese well, which helps you communicate with people at the Olympic Games easily. In addition, I know you are easy-going and like to help others and this is a good opportunity.
At the same time, you can benefit a lot from it. For example, you can make friends with people from around the world and get to know different cultures. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can take the chance and make every effort to become a good volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一封书信写作。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。
【详解】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。写作要点：1.他适合做志愿者的有利条件；2.做志愿者的好处；3.表达愿望。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m so surprised to hear that you want to give up applying to work as a volunteer for the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games. 宾语从句的运用。First, you can speak both English and Japanese well, which helps you communicate with people at the Olympic Games easily. 定语从句的运用。
2．Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture, and I’m writing to you to take part in the Chinese traditional culture club activities of our school.
The Chinese traditional culture club has just been established, which is aimed to encourage the students to know more Chinese traditional culture and to broaden the students’ horizons by learning and researching. Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese traditional festival, Chinese tea art and so on. All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.
It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together. If you’d like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Tom写一封信。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华，你校刚刚成立一个中国传统文化社团。你的英国朋友 Tom 在青岛大学留学，他对中国文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信，邀请他来参加活动。内容包括：1. 该社团成立的目的；2. 该社团的活动内容和时间；3. 邀请他方便时来参加活动。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：The Chinese traditional culture club has just been established, which is aimed to encourage the students to know more Chinese traditional culture and to broaden the students’ horizons by learning and researching.All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.被动语态的使用，It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. 条件状语从句 等
3．Hi, everybody,
On this special occasion, I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms. King for her excellent work.
Thanks to Ms. King’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Ms. King, here’s a pen container, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This pen container is made of bamboo, which is evergreen and hollow inside so that in Chinese culture it’s a symbol of being young and modest. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together. Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy!
Thank you very much!
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：1．感激之情；2．礼物寓意；3．美好祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：honored to（荣幸）；express our sincere gratitude（表达诚挚的感谢）；generous（大方的）；be of great importance（重要的）；a symbol of（……的象征）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Thanks to Ms. King’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study.运用了非限定性定语从句；What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
4．Notice
To help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple. I’d like to share with you some details about it.
As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture. Then, we will visit some ancient architecture. After that, we are going to enjoy some puppet shows. You will be greatly impressed with it. Finally, we can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious. By the way, knowing briefly about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.
If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me! Looking forward to seeing you.
The Student Union
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一则书面通知，通知交换生参观孔子庙的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1. 通知的目的
2. 参观孔子庙的相关事宜
1）集合时间和地点
2）活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏
3）预先准备:简要了解孔子文化
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
tell sb. sth./ inform sb. of sth./ plan to do sth./ learn about/ set off/ pay a visit to/ date back to/ set up/ in order to/ have a better understanding of/ be impressed with/ in advance
第三步：连词成句
1. In order to help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple, which dates back to thousands of years ago.
2. I want to share with you some details about it.
3. As planned, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate.
4. Firstly, we will pay a visit to the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.
5. We will visit some ancient architecture, which will leave a deep impression on you.
6. We are going to enjoy some puppet shows.
7. You will be greatly impressed with it.
8. We can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious.
9. By the way, knowing something about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.
10. If you have any questions, please contact me!
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.句中as和where引导非限定性定语从句；If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.句中if引导条件状语从句。文中多种句型和长难句的使用，不仅展示了作者的语言功底，也为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear classmates, may I have your attention, please Now I’d like to make a speech here. Nowadays, there’s countless waste on our campus. For instance, the lights in the classrooms are left on even in the daytime, the water remains running after some students wash their hands and hundreds of kilograms of leftover food can be collected from the table in the school cafeteria after each meal.
My heart aches every time I witness the scene. It is high time to realize its harm as listed below. Firstly, natural resources are limited and some day they will be exhausted. Moreover, waste loads financial burden of our parents. After all, we are consumers rather than money makers.
How to reduce the waste Personally, it is everyone’s business to fight against it. I should start with myself to save everything. Please take the lead in reducing waste.
Surely, with everyone doing his bit, the poor situation will be changed soon! Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。全文以一般现在时和第一人称和第三人称为主。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。全文以一般现在时和第一人称和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1、校园内浪费现象：水电，粮食；2、危害：浪费资源；增加经济负担。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为countless waste、witness the scene、natural resources、financial burden、fight against、take the lead in等，写作时注意演讲稿的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文章里使用了较多的高级词汇，如countless waste、witness the scene、natural resources、financial burden、fight against、take the lead in等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如名词短语引导的时间状语从句My heart aches every time I witness the scene；同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分，如for instance、firstly、moreover、after all等，这些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
6．Dear Tim,
How is everything going Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.
Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school. The competitors from different classes competed with each other. Their performances, including reading poems aloud, reciting poems from memory and answering questions, deeply impressed the audience present. There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest. Finally, the winners were awarded prizes by the headmaster. By attending this activity, we got a good opportunity to enhance our deeper understanding of Chinese poetry and traditional culture.
Hope you can visit China and experience the charm of Chinese poetry. Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对中国文化颇感兴趣的英国笔友Tim发送邮件，向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛，希望他能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。
【详解】1.词汇积累着迷：fascinated→ captivated
鼓励：encourage→ hearten
吸引：attract→ appeal to
参加：attend→ take part in/participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
拓展句：The contest, whose aim was to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.(运用that引导宾语从空)
【高分句型2】There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest.(运用that引导同位语从句)
7．Dear Sam,
How are you doing
Lately, our school has advocated labor practices, which aims at encouraging students to take part in doing housework actively. I think it’s a good idea. This Saturday, I did some housework. First, I swept the floor and swabbed the floor. Next, I wetted the towel to wipe the table, and started rubbing it back and forth on the table. Although doing chores is tiring, I think it is valuable and interesting. And I think it’s good for us to do some housework. Not only can it share our parents’ work, but also it can make us more independent. How about you
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，分享自己做家务的经历。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给外国笔友Sam写信分享一次自己做家务的经历。信的开头和结尾已给出。中间写一段即可。内容包括：1.简单介绍学校的劳动实践活动；2.做家务的过程和感受；3.参与家务的意义。
第二步：列关键词。如：encourage sb. to sth.，take part in，back and forth， it’s good for us to do sth.等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：First、Next等。注意，词数100左右。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。高级句型有：非限制性定语从句：Lately, our school has advocated labor practices, which aims at encouraging students to take part in doing housework actively. Although 引导的让步状语从句：Although doing chores is tiring, I think it is valuable and interesting.否定词位于句首的倒装句：Not only can it share our parents’ work, but also it can make us more independent.
8．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to the Chinese Folk Music Festival to be held in our city with you this Saturday. Please accept my sincere apology.
Actually, I really want to go with you. However, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
To make up for my absence, I'm wondering if you would like to go there with Zhang Ming, who is into Chinese folk music and knows much about it. If it's OK with you, please let me know by this Thursday and I will make the arrangement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给 Peter写封道歉信，为不能按计划本周六陪他一起前往中国民乐节而道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的：genuine/honest→sincere
照顾：take care of/attend to→look after
因为：because→since
忙于：be busy with→be occupied with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Actually, I really want to go with you. However, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
拓展句：Although I really want to go with you, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to the Chinese Folk Music Festival to be held in our city with you this Saturday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句；动词不定式的被动语态to be held作Festival后置定语)
[高分句型2] I'm wondering if you would like to go there with Zhang Ming, who is into Chinese folk music and knows much about it. (运用了if引导的宾语从句；who引导非限制性定语从句)
9．A possible version:
Members Wanted
Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom Whoever is fond of music and willing to get involved in music creation and performance is preferable in our club. Once admitted, you'll have the opportunities to experience various activities, ranging from lectures on music theory to high-level concerts. To provide a platform for every member to show their talent, a yearly performance will also be held.
What are you waiting for Join us and enjoy music!
Music Club
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 某国际学校的音乐俱乐部为了提升同学们的音乐欣赏力并扩大俱乐部的影响力，决定招纳新成员，要求考生用英语写一则纳新启事。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提升：promote→improve
欣赏：appreciate→enjoy
旨在：aimed at→in order to do sth
提供：supply→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom.
拓展句：Our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom, whose aim is to promote students’ ability to appreciate music and expand its influence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom.（运用了过去分词短语作目的状语）
[高分句型2] Whoever is fond of music and willing to get involved in music creation and performance is preferable in our club.（运用了whoever引导主语从句）
[高分句型3] Once admitted, you'll have the opportunities to experience various activities, ranging from lectures on music theory to high-level concerts.（运用了现在分词短语作定语）
[高分句型4] To provide a platform for every member to show their talent, a yearly performance will also be held.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
10．One possible version:
The place I frequent most
Besides home and school, the place I frequent most in my spare time is the library in my neighborhood. Surrounded with trees, the library is a five-story building. In addition to a collection of over 100, 000 books, it sometimes holds art exhibitions.
Every time I step into the library, I’m greeted with an atmosphere of peace. The seats there are comfortable, so reading is a delight. Sometimes, I come across some words of wisdom which inspire me, enlighten me, and impress me. The library is a perfect place where I can find relaxation. A visit to it always refreshes me and gives me strength to face problems bravely in my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The place I frequent most”为题，介绍你最常去的地方及该地方吸引你之处，写一篇短文参加征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→organize
走进：step into→walk into
有时：sometimes→at times
激励：inspire→encourage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The seats there are comfortable, so reading is a delight.
拓展句：The seats there are comfortable, which makes reading a delight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sometimes, I come across some words of wisdom which inspire me, enlighten me, and impress me. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The library is a perfect place where I can find relaxation. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
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一、申请信
1．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。
写作要点：
1.他适合做志愿者的有利条件
2.做志愿者的好处
3.表达愿望
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考三模）假定你是李华，你校刚刚成立一个中国传统文化社团。你的英国朋友 Tom 在青岛大学留学，他对中国文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信，邀请他来参加活动。
内容包括:
1. 该社团成立的目的；
2. 该社团的活动内容和时间；
3. 邀请他方便时来参加活动。注意:
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考一模）假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：
1．感激之情；
2．礼物寓意；
3．美好祝愿。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everybody,
On this special occasion, I feel much honored
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Thank you very much!
四、告知信/通知
4．（2020·安徽滁州·校联考二模）假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织美国交换生到孔子庙参观，委托你通知相关事宜, 请你写一则书面通知，要点包括:
1 .集合时间和地点;
2.活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏；
3.预先准备:简要了解孔子文化。
注意:
1.可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；
3. 词数:100左右。
参考词汇:1.孔子庙the Confucius Temple 2.木偶戏puppet show
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五、其他应用文
5．（2022·安徽滁州·校考三模）你所在的校园内部浪费现象十分严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
1、现象：水电，粮食；
2、危害：浪费资源；增加经济负担。
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
（2）不要逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺的短文。文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear classmates,
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6．（2022·安徽滁州·滁州市第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tim对中国文化颇感兴趣。今天你给他发送一封E-mail向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛（Chinese Poetry Contest），在信中你希望Tim能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。内容包括：
1. 大赛的目的；
2. 大赛的形式；
3. 大赛的结果和收获；
4. 希望。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
How is everything going
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Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你所在的学校最近在提倡劳动实践活动（labor practice），鼓励学生主动参与家务劳动。请给你的外国笔友Sam写信分享一次自己做家务的经历，内容包括：
1. 过程和感受；
2. 参与家务的意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Sam,
How are you doing
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2021·安徽滁州·天长中学校考三模）假定你是李华，原计划本周六与你校的交换生Peter一起前往你市举办的中国民乐节（Chinese Folk Music Festival），但是你因故不能前往。请你给Peter写封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 解决办法。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、开放性作文
9．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，某国际学校的音乐俱乐部（Music Club）负责人。为了提升同学们的音乐欣赏力并扩大俱乐部的影响力，该俱乐部决定招纳新成员，请你用英语写一则纳新启事，内容包括：
1. 招新时间和地点；
2. 对新成员的要求；
3. 俱乐部的活动。
注意：
1. 字数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2022·安徽滁州·校考模拟预测）闲暇时，有人去山顶，有人到湖畔。假定你校英文报举行题为“The place I frequent most”的征文比赛，请写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1. 介绍你最常去的地方；
2. 该地方吸引你之处。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The place I frequent most
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you. I’m so surprised to hear that you want to give up applying to work as a volunteer for the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games. I’m writing to try to persuade you to continue to participate in it.
You have many advantages. First, you can speak both English and Japanese well, which helps you communicate with people at the Olympic Games easily. In addition, I know you are easy-going and like to help others and this is a good opportunity.
At the same time, you can benefit a lot from it. For example, you can make friends with people from around the world and get to know different cultures. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can take the chance and make every effort to become a good volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一封书信写作。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。
【详解】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你来信说他想放弃申请成为2020年东京（Tokyo）奥运会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃，继续参加这次活动。写作要点：1.他适合做志愿者的有利条件；2.做志愿者的好处；3.表达愿望。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m so surprised to hear that you want to give up applying to work as a volunteer for the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games. 宾语从句的运用。First, you can speak both English and Japanese well, which helps you communicate with people at the Olympic Games easily. 定语从句的运用。
2．Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture, and I’m writing to you to take part in the Chinese traditional culture club activities of our school.
The Chinese traditional culture club has just been established, which is aimed to encourage the students to know more Chinese traditional culture and to broaden the students’ horizons by learning and researching. Since the day it was set up, many interesting and meaningful activities have been held, like Chinese poems, calligraphy, Chinese traditional festival, Chinese tea art and so on. All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.
It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together. If you’d like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Tom写一封信。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华，你校刚刚成立一个中国传统文化社团。你的英国朋友 Tom 在青岛大学留学，他对中国文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信，邀请他来参加活动。内容包括：1. 该社团成立的目的；2. 该社团的活动内容和时间；3. 邀请他方便时来参加活动。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：The Chinese traditional culture club has just been established, which is aimed to encourage the students to know more Chinese traditional culture and to broaden the students’ horizons by learning and researching.All the activities are held at weekends or on holidays.被动语态的使用，It will be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us. 条件状语从句 等
3．Hi, everybody,
On this special occasion, I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms. King for her excellent work.
Thanks to Ms. King’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Ms. King, here’s a pen container, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This pen container is made of bamboo, which is evergreen and hollow inside so that in Chinese culture it’s a symbol of being young and modest. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together. Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy!
Thank you very much!
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：1．感激之情；2．礼物寓意；3．美好祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：honored to（荣幸）；express our sincere gratitude（表达诚挚的感谢）；generous（大方的）；be of great importance（重要的）；a symbol of（……的象征）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Thanks to Ms. King’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study.运用了非限定性定语从句；What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
4．Notice
To help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple. I’d like to share with you some details about it.
As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture. Then, we will visit some ancient architecture. After that, we are going to enjoy some puppet shows. You will be greatly impressed with it. Finally, we can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious. By the way, knowing briefly about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.
If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me! Looking forward to seeing you.
The Student Union
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一则书面通知，通知交换生参观孔子庙的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分
要求：
1. 通知的目的
2. 参观孔子庙的相关事宜
1）集合时间和地点
2）活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏
3）预先准备:简要了解孔子文化
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
tell sb. sth./ inform sb. of sth./ plan to do sth./ learn about/ set off/ pay a visit to/ date back to/ set up/ in order to/ have a better understanding of/ be impressed with/ in advance
第三步：连词成句
1. In order to help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple, which dates back to thousands of years ago.
2. I want to share with you some details about it.
3. As planned, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate.
4. Firstly, we will pay a visit to the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.
5. We will visit some ancient architecture, which will leave a deep impression on you.
6. We are going to enjoy some puppet shows.
7. You will be greatly impressed with it.
8. We can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious.
9. By the way, knowing something about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.
10. If you have any questions, please contact me!
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.句中as和where引导非限定性定语从句；If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.句中if引导条件状语从句。文中多种句型和长难句的使用，不仅展示了作者的语言功底，也为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear classmates, may I have your attention, please Now I’d like to make a speech here. Nowadays, there’s countless waste on our campus. For instance, the lights in the classrooms are left on even in the daytime, the water remains running after some students wash their hands and hundreds of kilograms of leftover food can be collected from the table in the school cafeteria after each meal.
My heart aches every time I witness the scene. It is high time to realize its harm as listed below. Firstly, natural resources are limited and some day they will be exhausted. Moreover, waste loads financial burden of our parents. After all, we are consumers rather than money makers.
How to reduce the waste Personally, it is everyone’s business to fight against it. I should start with myself to save everything. Please take the lead in reducing waste.
Surely, with everyone doing his bit, the poor situation will be changed soon! Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。全文以一般现在时和第一人称和第三人称为主。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。全文以一般现在时和第一人称和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1、校园内浪费现象：水电，粮食；2、危害：浪费资源；增加经济负担。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为countless waste、witness the scene、natural resources、financial burden、fight against、take the lead in等，写作时注意演讲稿的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文章里使用了较多的高级词汇，如countless waste、witness the scene、natural resources、financial burden、fight against、take the lead in等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如名词短语引导的时间状语从句My heart aches every time I witness the scene；同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分，如for instance、firstly、moreover、after all等，这些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
6．Dear Tim,
How is everything going Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.
Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school. The competitors from different classes competed with each other. Their performances, including reading poems aloud, reciting poems from memory and answering questions, deeply impressed the audience present. There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest. Finally, the winners were awarded prizes by the headmaster. By attending this activity, we got a good opportunity to enhance our deeper understanding of Chinese poetry and traditional culture.
Hope you can visit China and experience the charm of Chinese poetry. Looking forward to seeing you early.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对中国文化颇感兴趣的英国笔友Tim发送邮件，向他介绍你校刚刚成功举办的一场中文诗词大赛，希望他能来中国体验一下中文诗词的魅力。
【详解】1.词汇积累着迷：fascinated→ captivated
鼓励：encourage→ hearten
吸引：attract→ appeal to
参加：attend→ take part in/participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, the contest attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
拓展句：The contest, whose aim was to encourage students to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are fascinated with Chinese culture, I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Poetry Contest successfully held in our school today.(运用that引导宾语从空)
【高分句型2】There was no doubt that all of them made good preparations for the contest.(运用that引导同位语从句)
7．Dear Sam,
How are you doing
Lately, our school has advocated labor practices, which aims at encouraging students to take part in doing housework actively. I think it’s a good idea. This Saturday, I did some housework. First, I swept the floor and swabbed the floor. Next, I wetted the towel to wipe the table, and started rubbing it back and forth on the table. Although doing chores is tiring, I think it is valuable and interesting. And I think it’s good for us to do some housework. Not only can it share our parents’ work, but also it can make us more independent. How about you
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，分享自己做家务的经历。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给外国笔友Sam写信分享一次自己做家务的经历。信的开头和结尾已给出。中间写一段即可。内容包括：1.简单介绍学校的劳动实践活动；2.做家务的过程和感受；3.参与家务的意义。
第二步：列关键词。如：encourage sb. to sth.，take part in，back and forth， it’s good for us to do sth.等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：First、Next等。注意，词数100左右。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。高级句型有：非限制性定语从句：Lately, our school has advocated labor practices, which aims at encouraging students to take part in doing housework actively. Although 引导的让步状语从句：Although doing chores is tiring, I think it is valuable and interesting.否定词位于句首的倒装句：Not only can it share our parents’ work, but also it can make us more independent.
8．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to the Chinese Folk Music Festival to be held in our city with you this Saturday. Please accept my sincere apology.
Actually, I really want to go with you. However, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
To make up for my absence, I'm wondering if you would like to go there with Zhang Ming, who is into Chinese folk music and knows much about it. If it's OK with you, please let me know by this Thursday and I will make the arrangement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给 Peter写封道歉信，为不能按计划本周六陪他一起前往中国民乐节而道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的：genuine/honest→sincere
照顾：take care of/attend to→look after
因为：because→since
忙于：be busy with→be occupied with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Actually, I really want to go with you. However, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
拓展句：Although I really want to go with you, I have to look after my little sister at home that day since my parents will be occupied with their work.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to the Chinese Folk Music Festival to be held in our city with you this Saturday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句；动词不定式的被动语态to be held作Festival后置定语)
[高分句型2] I'm wondering if you would like to go there with Zhang Ming, who is into Chinese folk music and knows much about it. (运用了if引导的宾语从句；who引导非限制性定语从句)
9．A possible version:
Members Wanted
Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom Whoever is fond of music and willing to get involved in music creation and performance is preferable in our club. Once admitted, you'll have the opportunities to experience various activities, ranging from lectures on music theory to high-level concerts. To provide a platform for every member to show their talent, a yearly performance will also be held.
What are you waiting for Join us and enjoy music!
Music Club
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 某国际学校的音乐俱乐部为了提升同学们的音乐欣赏力并扩大俱乐部的影响力，决定招纳新成员，要求考生用英语写一则纳新启事。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提升：promote→improve
欣赏：appreciate→enjoy
旨在：aimed at→in order to do sth
提供：supply→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom.
拓展句：Our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom, whose aim is to promote students’ ability to appreciate music and expand its influence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Aimed at promoting students' ability to appreciate music and expand its influence, our Music Club is intended to recruit new members this Friday after school in the music classroom.（运用了过去分词短语作目的状语）
[高分句型2] Whoever is fond of music and willing to get involved in music creation and performance is preferable in our club.（运用了whoever引导主语从句）
[高分句型3] Once admitted, you'll have the opportunities to experience various activities, ranging from lectures on music theory to high-level concerts.（运用了现在分词短语作定语）
[高分句型4] To provide a platform for every member to show their talent, a yearly performance will also be held.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
10．One possible version:
The place I frequent most
Besides home and school, the place I frequent most in my spare time is the library in my neighborhood. Surrounded with trees, the library is a five-story building. In addition to a collection of over 100, 000 books, it sometimes holds art exhibitions.
Every time I step into the library, I’m greeted with an atmosphere of peace. The seats there are comfortable, so reading is a delight. Sometimes, I come across some words of wisdom which inspire me, enlighten me, and impress me. The library is a perfect place where I can find relaxation. A visit to it always refreshes me and gives me strength to face problems bravely in my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The place I frequent most”为题，介绍你最常去的地方及该地方吸引你之处，写一篇短文参加征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→organize
走进：step into→walk into
有时：sometimes→at times
激励：inspire→encourage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The seats there are comfortable, so reading is a delight.
拓展句：The seats there are comfortable, which makes reading a delight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sometimes, I come across some words of wisdom which inspire me, enlighten me, and impress me. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The library is a perfect place where I can find relaxation. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
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