安徽省合肥市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）

安徽省合肥市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2022·安徽合肥·合肥市第六中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom即将来你校做交换生，他对中国文化感兴趣，想报名参加你校课后社团，寻求你的建议。请给他回信，内容包括：
1.推荐的社团和理由；
2.参加所推荐社团的准备工作和注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·安徽合肥·合肥一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你校要举办“中华诗词大赛”，你写封邮件请在你市学习汉语的加拿大朋友Jeck参加比赛，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.活动的时间、地点和内容；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．（2020·安徽合肥·统考二模）假定你是李华，正在英国一所国际学校交流学习，该校的校报 SUNSHINE正在征集读者意见，请你给该校报编辑写封信，内容包括：
1. 简要评价；
2. 最喜欢的栏目（如：Stories Behind Culture）并简述理由；
3. 建议增加中国文化的介绍。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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二、申请信
4．（2021·安徽合肥·合肥市第八中学校考三模）假定你是李华,最近你校英文报招募校园兼职记者,你对此很感兴趣,请给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘兼职记者,内容包括:
1.阐述自己的优势；
2.希望报道的话题；
3.期待得到回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3.
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信
5．（2023·安徽合肥·统考一模）假定你是李华。你校开设了乒乓球培训班，请给来自加拿大的交换生Jeff写封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1. 写信目的;
2. 课程安排;
3. 报名方式。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2022·安徽合肥·安徽省肥东县第二中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将举办一次以“冰雪运动进校园（Ice sports into the campus）”为主题的活动。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，邀请你校交换生John参加，内容包括：
1. 活动的时间和地点；
2. 注意事项。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2021·安徽合肥·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Adele很喜欢中国画。你市美术馆将于暑期举行为期两周的“当代画家作品展”，你想邀请她一同前往参观画展。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.介绍画展活动；
3.约定见面时间、地点。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．（2020·安徽合肥·合肥市第六中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你校将举办传统中医中药讲座。请写一封信邀请外教Tom参加。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 讲座的时间和地点；
3. 讲座的目的和主要内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、推荐信
9．（2022·安徽合肥·校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Mr. White要求你班同学推荐英语俱乐部主席，你想自荐。请你给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的理由；
2.你当选后的打算。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2020·安徽合肥·合肥市第五中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括:
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐内容；
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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五、其他应用文
11．（2022·安徽合肥·合肥市第八中学校考模拟预测）高考填报志愿（college application）是人生的一个重要节点，请在自主填报还是在父母的指导下填报中做出选择，并以My Choice为题给学校英文版校刊投稿，内容包括：
1.论述现象；
2.陈述个人看法，并给出理由或建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.不得出现与本人相关的真实信息；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Choice
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12．（2022·安徽合肥·合肥一中校考三模）在疫情影响下，我们的假期生活可能会和以往不同，以Make it a Unique Summer Vacation为题，写一篇演讲稿参加学校的主题英语演讲比赛。内容包括：
1. 疫情对我们熟悉的假期生活带来的影响；
2. 以你今年暑假学习和生活安排为例，提出个人的建议和计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Make it a Unique Summer Vacation
The ongoing COVID-19 epidemic disrupts our summer holiday plans and dreams.
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13．（2022·安徽合肥·合肥一六八中学校考模拟预测）某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening)、烹饪(cooking)、防身术(self-defence)、护理(nursing)。假如你是李华，写信报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容包括：
1. 询问你感兴趣的课程相关内容;
2. 你对该课程的期待;
注意：1. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计人词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 不可以用自己的真实姓名。
Dear Sir /Madam,
I am writing to register for a course about...._
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14．（2022·安徽合肥·统考模拟预测）上周，你和同学参加了学校一年一度的运动会。请你写篇英语文章向《英语园地》杂志投稿，题目自拟，内容包括：
1．运动会简介；
2．你参加的项目和表现；
3．个人感受。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．（2020·安徽合肥·合肥一中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack来信询问国庆节假期你印象最深的事情。请给他回信，要点如下：
1. 观看中华人民共和国成立70周年阅兵式直播；
2. 学做家常菜；
3. 询问他的假期经历。
参考词汇：阅兵式 a military parade
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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16．（2021·安徽合肥·合肥一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Kevin想了解你校最近举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写封邮件，内容 包括：
1.活动时间；
2.活动内容（如:校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；
3.活动意义.
参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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17．（2021·安徽合肥·统考二模）一家学生英文报社正在面向中学生开展以“我爱我班”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍你为班级做的最有意义的一件事，内容包括：
1. 事情起因和背景；
2. 事情过程的介绍；
3. 收获和个人感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得出现与本人相关的真实信息；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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18．（2021·安徽合肥·统考一模）上个周末，你校组织学生参加了一次综合实践活动。你们去了豆腐发源地——安徽省淮南市参观了一家豆腐作坊，并参与制作了一道以豆腐为主料的菜肴。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1.活动简介；
2.个人感受。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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19．（2020·安徽合肥·统考三模）假定你是李华，是校乒乓球社团负责人。你校英国交换生Peter打算学习乒乓球，来信询问你们社团暑期的乒乓球公益培训项目情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1.培训时间和地点；
2.培训内容，如接(receive)发(serve)球，对抗训练等；
3.报名方式。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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20．（2020·安徽合肥·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Allen来信询问你校学生参与劳动实践活动的情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 劳动实践内容（如家务劳动、校园劳动、校外劳动等）及其意义；
2. 你最常参与的劳动实践活动，并谈谈感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、开放性作文
21．（2022·安徽合肥·合肥市第八中学校考模拟预测）假定你是学校研究项目“ Collect used books on campus”的负责人，该项目目前开展顺利且效果良好，请你给校《英语报》写一篇稿件宣传你们的项目，内容包括：
1. 项目的目的和意义；
2. 项目开展的成功经验；
3. 呼吁大家积极参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节。
Collect used books on campus
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22．（2022·安徽合肥·统考二模）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请在天赋、奋斗和热爱中，选一个你认为最有可能带来成功的因素并结合个人经历写篇英语文章参赛，内容包括：
l. 你的选择；
2. 选择的原因；
3. 个人经历。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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七、读后续写
23．（2023·安徽合肥·统考一模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam, Wayne and Tim were three men in their 60s, jamming in the same dusty old garage where they used to play music when they were in high school. They chatted up after ages, remembering the school days when they would take to the stage and play together as a band.
Wayne looked around, wide-eyed. “It’s been more than 40 years since we practised here.”
“Yes! And remember how we promised to keep in touch and play together once a week ” Tim laughed. “Sam, remember our brilliant plans ”
“Ah yes! We thought we were inseparable! Now, look at us! Old and wrinkled, joints hurting, meeting at each other’s grandkids’ weddings… we’re terrible at keeping in touch, except Will, of course. He was always calling and messaging. Where is Will He’s the guy who planned this,” Sam smiled.
Just then, the three men’s phones buzzed (嗡嗡地响), and the message they received made their hearts sink. It was a message from Jenny, Will’s wife. Wayne rushed to his car, and the others followed. A short drive later, the three men knocked on the door of Will’s house and tried to wait patiently.
Jenny looked almost unrecognizably pale and told them that Will was taking a nap. The medicines made him all weak. It moved the three men to tears to see their fourth band member in such poor health.
And that day, they found out the whole story of Will’s illness. Will’s heart condition was serious, and it had been worsening over the past few months. The doctor said only a surgery could help. But it was going to cost at least $15,000. And after all the previous treatments, Will and Jenny didn’t have that kind of money anymore. Jenny said the doctors had given Will 6 months, bursting into helpless tears. The three men comforted her and wiped their own tears. “Money isn’t an issue,” Sam said as an idea came to him.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner.
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Will was finally admitted to hospital three months later.
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24．（2021·安徽合肥·合肥市第八中学校考三模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On May 22, a huge tornado (龙卷风) struck Joplin, Missouri. It destroyed 8,000 tructures and injured more than 1,100 people. At first, many residents, including me, felt hopeless. The world seemed over. Faced with confusion, uncertainty, loss and hopelessness, we looked for any light to lead us out of the darkness.
The home of my parents, who were in their eighties, was severely damaged. Their roof was blown away, and the roof from a nearby school crashed into the front of their house. In seconds, the house they had lived in for years became impossible to live in.
As soon as my parents safely moved, I tried to determine if any of their remaining possessions could be saved. Regrettably, I discovered their roof, before departing for parts unknown, had dropped massive amounts of fiberglass insulation (绝缘材料). This pink material made everything appear to be coated in cotton candy, but the glass fibers within it had ruined most of their furniture and clothing.
My parents had hoped, however, that I might be able to save some of their books and pictures. Unfortunately, every time I tried to remove a photo album from a drawer or a book from a shelf, the non-stop rain wet what I was trying to protect. Between the rain and the glass fibers, it all seemed hopeless.
Trying to fight off hopelessness, I took a minute to stand in what was left of my parents' bedroom. When I looked up through their non-existent roof, I saw gray clouds floating above me, and suddenly everything seemed so strange. Rain coated my upturned face, flooded my eyes, and flowed into my mouth. Overwhelmed (压倒性的), I felt like I was drowning. I needed fresh air, so I ran outside.
Standing on my parents' front yard in the rain, I could breathe better but I still had an overwhelming sense of hopelessness.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a thin, elderly man appeared at my side.
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I watched him through the rain until I remembered I was supposed to be saving my parents' prized possessions.
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you will study in my school as an exchange student and are eager to sign up for one of our school’s after-school clubs, I would like to recommend the Paper-cutting Club to you. The reasons for my recommendation are as follows.
Firstly, by learning Chinese paper-cutting, not only can you appreciate a wide range of paper cuts, but also you can gain insights into Chinese culture. Besides, there is no doubt that you can experience the delight which cutting out paper cuts on your own brings. As for the preparation for the club, you are supposed to bring a pair of scissors and arrive on time as required.
Hope you will like my recommendation and look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom回信，对于他想报名参加学校课后社团一事提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
欣赏：appreciate→admire
此外：besides→what’s more
高兴：delight→happiness
喜欢：like→ enjoy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The reasons for my recommendation are as follows.
拓展句：The reasons why I recommend it are as follows.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you will study in my school as an exchange student and are eager to sign up for one of our school’s after-school clubs, I would like to recommend the Paper-cutting Club to you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Besides, there is no doubt that you can experience the delight which cutting out paper cuts on your own brings.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
2．Dear Jeck,
How is everything going Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition next month. Knowing that you have been learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese ancient poems, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the competition.
As scheduled, the competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th, lasting three days in the lecture hall of our school. The competition will include three parts. First, participants will compete to recite some famous ancient poems. Second, participants are required to write out some sentences from the poems. Third, some pictures will be shown and participants are required to tell which poem it is.
To make good preparations for the competition, it is advised that apart from reading more about ancient poems, you have to learn more about the story behind the poems, which will help them have a good understanding of them.
I am convinced that the competition will be beneficial to you. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步：
审题：邀请信 邀请朋友Jeck参加你校举办的“中华诗词大赛”
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分活动的时间、地点和内容，
第三部分希望Jeck参加。
要点：
1. 说明写信目的：邀请Jeck参加你校举办的“中华诗词大赛”
2．活动的时间、地点和内容
①时间、地点：7月7日——7月10日在校学术报告厅
②内容：比赛分三部分：背诵古诗词、默写古诗词、看图说出古诗词
③建议：除了阅读古诗词之外，还应了解古诗词背后的故事
3．希望Jeck参加
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
hold an activity；be interested in；participate in；last；participant；compete；require；make preparations for；read about；have a good understanding of ；be beneficial to
第三步：连词成句
(1) Our school will hold an activity
(2) The activity is called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition
(3) You have been learning Chinese.
(4) You are interested in Chinese ancient poems.
(5) I’m writing to invite you to participate in the competition.
(6) The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th.
(7) The competition will last three days in the lecture hall of our school.
(8)The competition will include three parts.
(9) Participant will compete to recite some famous ancient poems.
(10) Participants are required to write out some sentences from the poems.
(11) Some pictures will be shown and participants are required to tell which poem it is.
(12) You have to learn more about the story behind the poems.
(13) It will help them have a good understanding of them.
(14) The competition will be beneficial to you.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
连接下面两个句子，将第二个句子用过去分词做定语表达
(1) Our school will hold an activity
(2) The activity is called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition
→Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition.
连接下面两个句子，将第二个句子用现在分词作状语表达
(6) The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th.
(7) The competition will last three days in the lecture hall of our school.
→The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th, lasting three days in the lecture hall of our school.
连接下面两个句子，将第二个句子用非限制定语从句表达
(13) You have to learn more about the story behind the poems.
(14) It will help them have a good understanding of them.
→You have to learn more about the story behind the poems, which will help them have a good understanding of them.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 hold an activity；be interested in；participate in；make preparations for；have a good understanding of；be beneficial to 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如过去分词作定语Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition next month；it作形式主语句式的运用it is advised that you read more about ancient poems；非限制性定语从句的运用you have to learn more about the story behind the poems, which will help them have a good understanding of them等。
3．Dear editor,
I’m so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper SUNSHINE set up by your school. I think SUNSHINE has many advantages. It’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization and it’s a guide to English learning. My favorite column is Stories Behind Culture. For one thing, I like to read stories with different cultural backgrounds, which can expand my cultural horizons. So it can help me better experience the local culture when I travel abroad. For another, through it I I’ve improved my English reading skills. If only you could introduce something more about Chinese traditional culture in the culture column.
Here I really hope SUNSHINE will attract more readers.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，正在英国一所国际学校交流学习，该校的校报 SUNSHINE正在征集读者意见，请你给该校报编辑写封信进行反馈。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 简要评价；2. 最喜欢的栏目（如：Stories Behind Culture）并简述理由；3. 建议增加中国文化的介绍。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper，many advantages，be rich in content，range from economy to civilization，a guide to English learning，My favorite column is Stories Behind Culture.，read stories with different cultural backgrounds，expand my cultural horizons，help me better experience the local culture，travel abroad，improve my English reading skills. If only you could introduce something more about Chinese traditional culture in the culture column. 可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：For one thing, I like to read stories with different cultural backgrounds, which can expand my cultural horizons.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；So it can help me better experience the local culture when I travel abroad.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：be rich in，range from… to…，expand my cultural horizons。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.
I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well. First, I am interested in reading English news in my spare time. Moreover, I am good at English writing. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I'm a crazy fan of football.
I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英文报编辑写一封申请信，应聘兼职记者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.阐述自己的优势；
2.希望报道的话题；
3.期待得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for ；be equipped with；be interested in；in one’s spare time；be good at；as for；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3.
2. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.
3. I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well.
4. First, I am interested in reading English news in my spare time.
5. Moreover, I am good at English writing.
6. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I'm a crazy fan of football.
7. I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter.
8. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
2.表并列补充关系：Moreover
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.(现在分词完成时态having heard作状语)
[高分句型2] I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. (that引导宾语从句)
5．Dear Jeff,
To enrich our school life, a table tennis training class is opened in our school. I’m more than delighted to invite you to come and join us.
As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. There will be one class at 4 pm every Friday with a period of 45 minutes. Besides, the class is suitable for students of different levels. Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25. So don’t miss the deadline!
I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用写一封邀请信，邀请交换生Jeff参加乒乓球培训班，内容包括：写信目的、课程安排和报名方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted → pleased
此外：besides → what’s more
学期：semester→term
不同的：different→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
拓展句：I do hope you can attend the class where you will enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. （运用了省略句和非谓语动词作状语）
6．Dear John,
An activity with the theme of “Ice sports into the campus” will be held on Friday next week in the school gymnasium. I’m writing to invite you to attend it.
Knowing you’re keen on the ice and snow events, I’d like to remind you of the following items. Firstly, wear the right clothes, for skating clothing should be flexible to facilitate movement. Besides, you’d better do warm-up exercises in advance to ensure the safety.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生John写信邀请他参加学校举办的冰雪运动进校园（Ice sports into the campus）活动，内容包括：1. 活动的时间和地点；2. 注意事项。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be keen on→be absorbed in/be interested in
合适的：right→proper
告知某人某事：remind sb. of sth.→inform sb. of sth.
除此以外：besides→what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：An activity with the theme of “Ice sports into the campus” will be held on Friday next week in the school gymnasium.
拓展句：An activity, whose theme of is Ice sports into the campus, will be held on Friday next week in the school gymnasium.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you’re keen on the ice and snow events, I’d like to remind you of the following items.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】I’m writing to invite you to attend it.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
7．Dear Adele,
Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese paintings, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Contemporary Artists Exhibition.
To be exact, the exhibition is to be held in our City Art Gallery on September 5, and it will last for two weeks. Roughly speaking, there are many styles, including landscape painting. The paintings reflect traditional Chinese culture, the theme of which is the harmony between human and nature. There are a large number of works by masters in this field. I am convinced that you will have a pleasant time there.
By the way, we can meet at my school gate at 8：00 am., and then head to the gallery together. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Adele写信，邀请她参加本市美术馆即将举行的“当代画家作品展”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→show great interest in
参加：take part in→participate in
相信：believe→be convinced that
包括：sth. included→including sth.
2.句型拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：To be exact, the exhibition is to be held in our City Art Gallery on September 5, and it will last for two weeks.
拓展句：To be exact, the exhibition is to be held in our City Museum on September 5, which will last for two weeks.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese paintings, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Contemporary Artists Exhibition.句中使用了现在分词作状语，和that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
The paintings reflect traditional Chinese culture, the theme of which is the harmony between human and nature.句中使用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear Tom,
Our school is going to hold a lecture scheduled at 8 pm this Friday in the Students’ Club, the theme of which centers on traditional Chinese medicine. I am writing with the privilege to request for your attendance.
As China is one of the first countries to have medical culture, traditional Chinese medicine has come down as a complicated medical science with a history of more than 5,000 years. In comparison with Western method, Chinese medicine adopts a far different approach and has raised great attention and interest worldwide due to the amazing effects. The lecture is intended to provide you with some basic knowledge of medical theory, diagnostic methods, prescriptions and cures concerning traditional Chinese medicine. You will also be exposed to some wide-spread stories praising the experienced and notable doctors in ancient China.
This is surely a good chance for you to know more ways of preserving good health. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请外教Tom参加学校将举办的传统中医中药讲座。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段表达邀请的意图。第二段写明活动的时间、地点、内容及注意事项。第三段再次表达非常希望对方能够参加或者出席的愿望及希望得到对方的早日答复。
要求： 1. 写信目的；
2. 讲座的时间和地点；
3. 讲座的目的和主要内容。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
traditional Chinese medicine；request for your attendance；in comparison with；raise great attention and interest worldwide；be intended to; provide sb with sth; be exposed to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing with the privilege to request for your attendance.
2. As China is one of the first countries to have medical culture, traditional Chinese medicine has come down as a complicated medical science with a history of more than 5,000 years.
3. In comparison with Western method, Chinese medicine adopts a far different approach and has raised great attention and interest worldwide due to the amazing effects.
4. You will also be exposed to some wide-spread stories praising the experienced and notable doctors in ancient China.
5. This is surely a good chance for you to know more ways of preserving good health.
6. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用了较多的高级句子。如：Our school is going to hold a lecture scheduled at 8 pm this Friday in the Students’ Club, the theme of which centers on traditional Chinese medicine. 这句话中使用了过去分词短语作后置定语，还使用了定语从句。还有，In comparison with Western method, Chinese medicine adopts a far different approach and has raised great attention and interest worldwide due to the amazing effects. 这句话中应用了两个短语“in comparison with” 和“due to” 来作句子的状语。显示出了作者高的英语水平。
9．Dear Mr. White,
I’m writing to recommend myself as the chairman of the English Club. I’m firmly convinced that I have some strong qualities for this position. First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches. In addition, I often help my classmates study English, so I have won great popularity among them.
If I succeed in being elected, I will spend lots of time organizing after-school activities for the students. Meanwhile, I also will try my best to communicate with the members and never mind doing extra work for them. I consider myself to be the suitable one for the chairman. I hope you can take my recommendation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Mr. White要求同学推荐英语俱乐部主席，要求考生写电子邮件自荐。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满自信：confident→be full of confidence
此外：besides → what’s more/ In addition
相信：believe→I ’m convinced that
考虑：consider→ take something into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English. I do well in making speeches.
拓展句：First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m firmly convinced that I have some strong qualities for this position.（运用了that引导的从句）
【高分句型2】First of all, I’m full of confidence and have a good command of English, which make me do well in making speeches. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are coming to China for the summer vacation, I am more than excited to say “Warm welcome” and can’t wait to meet you at the airport with my open arms!
To make your trip more worthwhile, I’d like to make some recommendations. To begin with, I suggest you start your holiday in Beijing, a top priority for any traveller to China because you can fully experience the charm of Chinese history and civilization there. Besides, the high speed train, which is fast, safe and comfortable, is a transportation means you can’t miss. When doing shopping, you are recommended to use mobile payments like Wechat Pay or Ali Pay due to the great convenience they offer.
Hopefully, you will find your trip rewarding and have a great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括: 1.表示欢迎；2.推荐内容；3.你的祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：can’t wait to do sth.; to begin with; due to; have a great time等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing that you are coming to China for the summer vacation, I am more than excited to say “Warm welcome” and can’t wait to meet you at the airport with my open arms!使用了现在分词做状语; Besides, the high speed train, which is fast, safe and comfortable, is a transportation means you can’t miss.使用了引导定语从句；When doing shopping, you are recommended to use mobile payments like Wechat Pay or Ali Pay due to the great convenience they offer.使用了状语从句的省略。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11． Every year, as soon as the College Entrance Exam in China comes to an end, both the high school graduates and their parents devote themselves to the process of college application. The two parties have their preferences, but usually they find it hard to reach an agreement.
Frankly, the phenomenon is quite understandable. Students make their choices usually based on their interests in majors, cities and so on, while parents take into consideration the reputation of the college and the students’ future careers.
But personally speaking, it is I instead of my parents that should make the final decision, as it is my college life and I am old enough to take the responsibility. My parents can be involved, giving their advice and expressing their expectations or concerns, yet I should play the decisive role.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。高考填报志愿（college application）是人生的一个重要节点，请在自主填报还是在父母的指导下填报中做出选择，并以My Choice为题给学校英文版校刊投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
结果：come to an end→finish
投入：devote oneself to→commit oneself to
困难的：hard→difficult
就我而言：personally speaking→as far as I'm concerned
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：The two parties have their preferences, but usually they find it hard to reach an agreement.
拓展句：Although the two parties have their preferences, they usually find it hard to reach an agreement.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Every year, as soon as the College Entrance Exam in China comes to an end, both the high school graduates and their parents devote themselves to the process of college application. (运用了时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] But personally speaking, it is I instead of my parents that should make the final decision, as it is my college life and I am old enough to take the responsibility. (运用了原因状语从句)
12． Make it a Unique Summer Vacation
The ongoing COVID-19 epidemic disrupts our summer holiday plans and dreams. Most of us always prefer to go on a trip during the summer vacation. But now in order to prevent the spread of the virus, we should stay in our city rather than go out for travelling.
When we stay at home, we can read some books and learn something. Since my oral English is not so good, I will watch some English movies and practice my oral English. Besides, doing exercise is very important. I will get up early and go for a walk every day. More importantly, helping our parents do housework is also a good plan.
We should do our best to prevent the spread of the virus while we can enjoy ourselves.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Make it a Unique Summer Vacation为题，写一篇演讲稿参加学校的主题英语演讲比赛。内容包括：疫情对我们熟悉的假期生活带来的影响；以考生今年暑假学习和生活安排为例，提出个人的建议和计划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阻止：prevent→stop
此外：Besides→In addition
重要的：important→of importance
尽我们最大努力：do our best→try our best
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, doing exercise is very important.
拓展句：Besides, doing exercise is very important, which can make us healthy and strong.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since my oral English is not so good, I will watch some English movies and practice my oral English. (运用了since引导的状语从句)
[高分句型2] We should do our best to prevent the spread of the virus while we can enjoy ourselves.(运用了while引导的状语从句)
13．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to register for a course about gardening. I have been interested in flowers and grasses since l was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing, I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. Besides, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more.
At the same time, I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university. For another, after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivating the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and attract many more foreigners to visit our country. I will be grateful if you can accept my application.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。现要求考生写信报名参加某海外学校举办英语夏令营中一门课程的学习。其中内容包括询问你感兴趣的课程相关内容以及对该课程的期待。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
特别地：especially→ particularly
喜欢：like →be fond of
帮助：help →aid
珍惜： treasure →cherish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to register for a course about gardening.
拓展句：I am writing to register for the gardening course which is provided in your summer camp.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】For one thing, I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. （运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
14．An Unforgettable Sports Meeting
Last Friday, our school held an annual sports meeting. There were some events in the sports meeting, such as high jump, long jump, running race and so on.
I like running, so I took part in a 5,000-meter race. Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous at first. At the sound of the starting signal, all the runners begin to run like the wind. I tried my best to keep up with them. Finally, with strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line, which made me so happy.
Tired as I was, I felt very excited. I believe that as long as we spare no effort to do something, we are more likely to succeed.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你上周参加的学校一年一度的运动会向《英语园地》杂志投稿，内容包括：运动会简介；你参加的项目和表现；个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
等等：and so on→and the like
参加：take part in→participate in
赶上：keep up with→catch up with
最后：finally→at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Friday, our school held an annual sports meeting.
拓展句：Last Friday, our school held an annual sports meeting which lasted three days.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Finally, with strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line, which made me so happy. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Tired as I was, I felt very excited. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装)
15．Dear Jack,
I’m pleased to receive your letter. Now I’m writing to tell you what impressed me most during Chinese National Day.
The first thing that comes to mind is the military parade held on the Tian’anmen Square on 1st October to mark the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China. You know I’m a military fan, so I watched the live broadcast that day, which was a great chance for me to appreciate my motherland’s great achievement! Besides, I learned to cook from my mother. If possible, why not come to have a taste I can even teach you how to make some Chinese dishes.
What about your holiday Has something interesting happened
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Jack回信，说明国庆节假期印象最深的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
高兴的：delighted→pleased
此外：in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, I learned to cook from my mother.
拓展句：Besides, I learned to cook from my mother, which was interesting and meaningful.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Now I’m writing to tell you what impressed me most during Chinese National Day. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The first thing that comes to mind is the military parade held on the Tian’anmen Square on 1st October to mark the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China. (运用了that引导定语从句)
16．Dear Kevin,
I feel extremely delighted to tell you that our school held some relevant activities during the Labour Week.
The Labour Week started on June 10th and lasted for five days, when we held various activities. To beautify our school, we planted trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, it's a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. There was also a labor knowledge competition.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, we learnt to cherish and respect the fruits of peoples work.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国朋友Kevin写封邮件告诉他你校最近举行的“劳动周”相关活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：be happy to=feel delighted to
各种各样的：various → a variety of
此外：moreover →in addition
迷人：charming →fascinating.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed..
拓展句：As for the significance, we can not only benefit a lot undoubtedly but also can develop our awareness of labour.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Labour Week started on June 10th and last for five days, when we held various activities.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
[高分句型2] Moreover, it's a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
17．I Love My Class
It was last summer holiday and only two days left before the new term. I missed my friends and class so much that I decided to take a look at our classroom first. When I opened the door of the classroom, I was astonished at the mess. Dust covered desks, chairs and the floor; spider webs hung on the ceiling. I couldn’t ignore it and decided to clean it myself. I grabbed a broom to sweep the spider webs first and the floor second which made me exhausted. The cleaning of the desks and chairs with wet rags was much easier but it took more time. After nearly 2 hours’ hard work, the classroom was bright and clean again. Two days later, the surprise on the faces of my classmates and my teacher made me proud, but I would never tell them who did this.
I love my class and I am willing to do everything for it.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于征文稿。要求向英文报投稿介绍你为班级做的最有意义的一件事。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：征文稿
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
要求：
1. 事情起因和背景；
2. 事情过程的介绍；
3. 收获和个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
take a look at; was astonished at; ignore; made me exhausted; bright and clean; the surprise on the faces;
第三步：连词成句
1. It was last summer holiday and only two days left before the new term.
2. I missed my friends and class so much that I decided to take a look at our classroom first.
3. When I opened the door of the classroom, I was astonished at the mess.
4. I grabbed a broom to sweep the spider webs first and the floor second which made me exhausted.
5. Two days later, the surprise on the faces of my classmates and my teacher made me proud, but I would never tell them who did this.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I missed my friends and class so much that I decided to take a look at our classroom first.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]When I opened the door of the classroom, I was astonished at the mess.(when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3]I grabbed a broom to sweep the spider webs first and the floor second which made me exhausted.（which引导定语从句）
18．Last Saturday, our school organized students to take part in a comprehensive practical activity.
At 8 am, we gathered at the school gate and then took ourschool bus to go to a local factory, the birthplace of Tufu, which lies in Huainan, Anhui Province. Upon arriving, we were shown around the factory and learned about the modern method of Tufu-making. Exploring the factory, we all admired the skills of the workers and took pride in the combination of traditional techniques and modern technology. Additonally, we were invited to make a dish made up of Tufu mainly.
Tired as I was, I found this trip rewarding. I learnt a lot of knowledge that I can’t get from the book.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍学校组织学生参加的一次综合实践活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.活动简介；
2.个人感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
gather; take school bus;lie in; show around; learn about, admire the skills, take pride in, combination of traditional techniques and modern technology, make a dish, made up of
第三步：连词成句
1.Last Saturday, our school organized students to take part in a comprehensive practical activity.
2.At 8am,we gathered at the school gate and then took ourschool bus to go to a local factory, the birthplace of Tufu, which lies in Huainan, Anhui Province.
3.Upon arriving, we were shown around the factory and learned about the modern method of Tufu-making.
4.Exploring the factory, we all admired the skills of the workers and took pride in the combination of traditional techniques and modern technology.
5.We were invited to make a dish made up of Tufu mainly.
6. I found this trip rewarding.
7.I learnt a lot of knowledge that I can't get from the book.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Additonally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]At 8am,we gathered at the school gate and then took ourschool bus to go to a local factory, the birthplace of Tufu, which lies in Huainan, Anhui Province.（句中the birthplace of Tufu为a local factory的同位语；运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Exploring the factory, we all admired the skills of the workers and took pride in the combination of traditional techniques and modern technology.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3]Tired as I was, I found this trip rewarding.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）
19．Dear Peter,
I am glad to know you want to learn table-tennis, and that you will attend the training class offered by our school during this summer vacation. The following is what you are supposed to know.
The training class, which is held in our school hall, is free of charge, and will begin on June the first, lasting two weeks, ending on June 14th. We have invited some experienced teachers, and they will teach you how to play table tennis, such as receiving and serving the ball. Of course, some special skills are also included. When you are familiar with it, we will arrange some competitive games for you as practice, which must be very interesting and will improve your skill. The number of the members is limited, so you’d better sign up on our homepage as soon as possible.
If you have any problem please contact with me. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给Peter写信，向他介绍你所在社团暑期乒乓球培训的相关情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.培训时间和地点；
2.培训内容，如接(receive)发(serve)球，对抗训练等；
3.报名方式。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ sign up/ be interested in/ be supposed to so sth./ be familiar with/ look forward to/ attend/ take part in
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to know you want to learn table-tennis, and that you will attend the training class offered by our school during this summer vacation.
2. The following is what you are supposed to know.
3. The training class, which is held in our school hall, is free of charge, and will begin on June the first, lasting two weeks, ending on June 14th.
4. We have invited some experienced teachers, and they will teach you how to play table tennis, such as receiving and serving the ball.
5. Of course, some special skills are also included.
6.When you are familiar with it, we will arrange some competitive games for you as practice, which must be very interesting and will improve your skill.
7. The number of the members is limited, so you’d better sign up on our homepage as soon as possible.
8. If you have any problem please contact with me.
9. Looking forward to your coming.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：The training class, which is held in our school hall, is free of charge, and will begin on June the first, lasting two weeks, ending on June 14th. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；I am glad to know you want to learn table-tennis, and that you will attend the training class offered by our school during this summer vacation. 中that引导宾语从句。
20．Dear Mr. Allen,
Through the community volunteer service as a group, we are inspired to find a bright spot in the voluntary labor that can make us receive education and feel something, and guide us to understand the society and feel the society. In the nursing home, we talked with the old man as much as we could and tried our best to make him feel warm. We also help the staff to clean the nursing home together. And that kind of pride is not something you can feel in school. Our school regards the society as a place of practice, and lets us participate in the society, which has some enlightenment from the practice of voluntary labor.
Public welfare labor is selfless labor, but also cultivate our enthusiasm about public works.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Allen来信询问你校学生参与劳动实践活动的情况.请给他回信，内容包括：1 .劳动实践内容（如家务劳动、校园劳动、校外劳动等）及其意义；2.你最常参与的劳动实践活动，并谈谈感受。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Through the community volunteer service as a group(作为一个团体通过社区志愿者服务)；guide us to understand the society and feel the society(引导我们了解社会，感受社会)；lets us participate in the society(让我们参与社会)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。we are inspired to find a bright spot in the voluntary labor that can make us receive education and feel something,句中使用定语从句；lets us participate in the society, which has some enlightenment from the practice of voluntary labor.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；Take part in the sense of glory of voluntary labor, shape their own good mind.使用祈使句。
21．Collect used books on campus
Over the past months, I have been participating in a school project of collecting used books on campus, which runs smoothly and proves effective.
The aim of the project is to donate books to a primary school in a small village. Meanwhile, it’s also intended to protect the environment by recycling old books. The success of this project lies in a thorough survey beforehand and a detailed plan. Meanwhile, a series of activities have been held to arouse students’ interest in participation.
I hope more students will join us and more people will benefit from the project in the following days.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生就学校研究项目“ Collect used books on campus”的情况，给校《英语报》写一篇稿件宣传该项目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：aim → purpose
打算：be intended to→ be meant to/be designed to
同时：meanwhile → meantime/at the same time
提前：beforehand→ in advance/ahead of time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, a series of activities have been held to arouse students’ interest in participation.
拓展句：Meanwhile, a series of activities which are to arouse students’ interest in participation have been held.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Over the past months, I have been participating in a school project of collecting used books on campus, which runs smoothly and proves effective.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope more students will join us and more people will benefit from the project in the following days.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
22．Which factor leads to success, talent, struggle or enthusiasm In my viewpoint, struggle leads to success.
As the old saying goes, no pain, no gain. We will get nothing but only waste our life if we only daydream instead of struggling. Those who are lazy and sloppy to their work will never succeed.
Last year, I was chosen to participate in the sports meeting. Because I’m not good at sport, I felt anxious. I didn’t want to live up to others’ expectations. Through struggling with exercise, I got the third place in race walking.
We should be aware of that we should keep struggling. Only in this way, can we succeed!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在天赋、奋斗和热爱中，选一个你认为最有可能带来成功的因素并结合个人经历写篇英语文章参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：viewpoint→opinion
导致：lead to→result in
参加：participate in→take part in
意识到：be aware of→be conscious of
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：Through struggling with exercise, I got the third place in race walking.
拓展句：It was through struggling with exercise that I got the third place in race walking.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the old saying goes, no pain, no gain. (运用了As引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Those who are lazy and sloppy to their work will never succeed. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
23．The next day the three men brought their instruments to the busy street corner. They set up the sound, a stand with the band name “Playing for Will” and a big stack of flyers to hand out. The men stood the