安徽省六安市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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安徽省六安市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假设你是第一中学的高三学生李华，你们城市将在下月举办运动会，招募中学生志愿者。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信：
内容要点：1. 介绍个人情况；2. 个人优势；3. 表达期望。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假如你是李华，你在网上看到一个为加拿大学生提供食宿的招聘广告，你想申请，请写一封自荐信。内容要点：
1. 学英语六年了，能够流利地说英语了；
2. 自己是热心肠，喜欢帮助别人；
3. 家人说地道的普通话。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考二模）假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”，邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下：
1. 活动开始时间；
2. 活动内容；
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
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4．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：
内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；
2. 简述未能参加的原因；
3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Smith,
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Yours truly,
Lihua
三、推荐信
5．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Peter 想提高中文水平，进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源 (resource)。内容包括：
1. 学习资源：报纸、杂志及其他途径；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
四、其他应用文
6．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）你校正在举行“健康卫生月”的活动。请你就“近视”这一话题写一篇短文，向校刊的英语角投稿。内容包括：
1. 学生近视的现状；
2. 可采取的预防措施；
3. 希望和祝福。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：eyesight n.视力 near/short-sighted adj.近视的
A recent survey has revealed that
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7．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）你刚刚得知你的英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 表示安慰。
2. 向其提供建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：奥密克戎Omicron 感染 infection 隔离 quarantine
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8．（2021·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周你校为了响应国家“拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食”的号召，开展了“光盘行动”主题活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道，要点包括；
1.活动内容； 2.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：光盘行动Clean Plate Campaign
9．（2021·安徽六安·六安一中校考模拟预测）你市正在组织首届高中生英语作文比赛。请以你向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括；
1. 职业简介；
2. 向往该职业的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
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10．（2021·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你和同学们参加了班级在植树节（3月12日）组织的植树活动，请根据以下提示给你的新西兰笔友Tom 写一封信，告诉他你的经历，并希望所有人都能为保护环境做贡献。写作要点：
1. 活动的相关信息
2. 集合时间和地点：上午9点，学校门口
3. 植树地点：在南溪河附近
4. 活动内容：植树150棵
（2）你的感受和今后（在环保方面）打算。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Martin给你发来电子邮件，请你帮忙购买一些口罩(mask)。请给他回复，内容包括：
1.已经买到，明天寄出;
2.提醒勤洗手、不聚集等;
3.问候与祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考一模）假定你是李华，是重点中学的一名高三学生。请你用英语给你的美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他描述你的高三生活。内容包括：
1.你的高三学习生活；
2.你理想的大学。
注意：
1词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad to hear from you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．（2020·安徽六安·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tim是中国功夫（kung fu）的爱好者。你得知今年八月你所在的城市将举办一次国际功夫比赛。请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加。要点包括：
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.比赛的目的；
3.参加比赛的益处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
How is everything going
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I will accompany you during the competition. I am looking forward to hearing from you;
Yours,
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
14．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）上周日，你校组织学生到南溪社区进行了义务劳动（voluntary labour）。请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.你的感悟。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from No. I Middle School. I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer of our city sports meeting to be held next month. Here come my advantages.
To begin with, I love sports and playing sports has been an important part of my life. What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. More importantly, I consider it a good chance to serve our society and develop my ability. I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是第一中学的高三学生李华，你们城市将在下月举办运动会，招募中学生志愿者。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信：
内容要点：1. 介绍个人情况；2. 个人优势；3. 表达期望。
第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，介绍个人情况。第二段，个人优势。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend myself，friendly and patient，get along well with，serve our society and develop my ability，give me a chance.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: so 引导的并列句What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. if引导的条件状语从句I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides, what’s more, finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: so 引导的并列句What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. if引导的条件状语从句I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2．Dear Sir or Madam,
I read in your paper the notice about providing accommodation for Canadian students who want to learn Chinese in China. I hope that I can get the chance.
Here are my reasons for applying. Firstly, I have been learning English for about six years, and I can communicate with English speakers fluently. Secondly, I’m a warm-hearted person. I like making new friends and helping others. Thirdly, all my family speak standard Chinese, which can help the students learn Chinese well. And both my parents have agreed to provide services since we have a big house.
If we’re honored to get the chance, we will do everything we can to provide a good learning and living environment for the students.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。写一封自荐信，申请为加拿大学生提供食宿的机会。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，写一封自荐信，申请为加拿大学生提供食宿的机会，并介绍自己的相关信息和特点。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：accommodation, warm-hearted, be honored to等。
第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段说明写信的目的；第二段介绍个人的优势；第三段再次表达自己想要申请成功的愿望。
第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，布局工整。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式。
who引导的定语从句：…for Canadian students who want to learn Chinese in China.
which引导的非限制性定语从句：…, all my family speak standard Chinese, which can help the students learn Chinese well.
since引导的原因状语从句：both my parents have agreed to provide services since we have a big house.
3．One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给负责“中国文化周”项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对邀请表示感谢；
2.询问活动开始时间；
3.询问活动内容；
4.询问学生住宿安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.（which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.（it作形式主语）
4．Dear Smith,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I couldn’t join in the English corner organized by English weekly last week. That day, my sister would be sent to university. When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university. There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.
Now she's doing well in her university. But I am dying to have another chance to attend an English corner to improve my spoken English. At the same time, I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you. I hope you can accept my apology.
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；2. 简述未能参加的原因；3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； accompany（陪伴），attend（参加），English corner（英语角），organize（组织）， opportunity（机会）及apology（道歉）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有join in（参加），accompany sb to somewhere（陪伴某人去某地），be dying to do (渴望做某事)以及leave a good impression on sb（给某人留下一个好印象），而且还使用了状语从句“When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university.”，宾语从句“I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you.”及“I hope you can accept my apology.”，同位语从句“There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
5．One possible version：
Dear Peter，
I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture. It’s my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. You can benefit a lot from them.
I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.说明写信理由； 2. 推荐学习资源并说明推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be eager to，know more about Chinese culture，some popular newspapers and magazines，such as，feel bored，benefit a lot from, have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.
2. Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.
3. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.
4. You can benefit a lot from them.
5．I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题,同时注意适当使用复合句进行句式升级。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词，如：Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.这句话运用了动名词做主语，还运用了非限制性定语从句。so...that引导的结果状语从句The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6． A recent survey has revealed that roughly 3 out of 4 high school students wear glasses. The figure is so disturbing that we have to come up with some effective measures to tackle the problem.
For students, it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying. Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended. For schools, facilities are expected to improve to provide students with an eye-friendly environment. Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.
We hope that with all these effective measures, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“近视”这一话题写一篇短文，向校刊的英语角投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大约：roughly→approximately
引起烦恼的：disturbing→annoying
解决：tackle→deal with
此外：Besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.
拓展句：Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students that it is important to improve eye health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The figure is so disturbing that we have to come up with some effective measures to tackle the problem.（由so…that引导的结果状语从句，不定式短语作后置定语）
【高分句型2】We hope that with all these effective measures, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.（由that引导的宾语从句）
7．Dear Jim,
I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to adapt to the change because we may suffer the epidemic for a long time. My advice is as follows.
To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood. Equally importantly, you should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise. If possible, you’d better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health.
Hope my suggestions will be of help for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于劝慰信。英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。要求考生给其写信表示安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
失落的：down → distressed
首先：at first → to start with
而不是：rather than → instead of
益处：beneficial → of benefit
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood.
拓展句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless because progress in study will improve your mood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If possible, you’d better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．In response to the national call against food waste, our school launched the Clean Plate Campaign last week.
Food loss and waste exist and millions of people are still hungry. Various school activities were carried out for this reason. Young volunteers put up posters and signs promoting food saving on campus to increase awareness of respecting food labor and valuing food among students. Also, class meetings were held to make a change in the students’ attitude and encourage them to become eco-pioneers.
Through the campaign, we have become more aware that there is no excuse for wasting food. To save food is a traditional virtue in China, which we should never forget.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就学校开展的“光盘行动”主题活动写一篇报道，谈谈活动内容和感受。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in response to; carry out; put up; increase awareness of; make a change; encourage sb. to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. In response to the national call against food waste, our school launched the Clean Plate Campaign last week.
2. Various school activities were carried out for this reason.
3. Young volunteers put up posters and signs promoting food saving on campus to increase awareness of respecting food labor and valuing food among students.
4. Also, class meetings were held to make a change in the students’ attitude and encourage them to become eco-pioneers.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Also
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Through the campaign, we have become more aware that there is no excuse for wasting food. 用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] To save food is a traditional virtue in China, which we should never forget. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．One possible version:
My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example. Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students. I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参加首届高中生英语作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职业：career→ profession
因为：due to→ because of
受欢迎：be well-received by→ be popular with
下决心做某事：decide to do sth.→ made up one’s mind to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example.
拓展句：Besides, it is because of the power of an example that I want to be a teacher.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. （运用了由since连接的时间状语从句和because连接的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3] Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.（运用了由although连接的让步状语从句）
10．Dear Tom,
Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature and beautify the environment on March 12. We gathered at the school gate at 9 in the morning, then took a bus to the Nanxi River nearby, which is 5 kilometers away from our school. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. Finally we planted 150 trees.
Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect our environment. We will contribute more to environmental protection.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Tom 写一封信，介绍你和同学们参加的班级在植树节（3月12日）组织的植树活动。
【详解】词汇积累
乘公共汽车：take a bus →by bus
开始：begin → start
立即：immediately → at once
最终：finally →eventually/at last/in the end
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On arrival, we began to work immediately.
拓展句：As soon as we arrived, we began to work immediately.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature and beautify the environment on March 12. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. (运用了现在分词作状语)
11．Dear Martin,
I learned from your email that you are in need of masks. I’m writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.
Here are some tips for you to protect yourself from the virus. First of all, you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places. When you’re out, be sure to wear a mask. In addition, remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.
I hope you and your family are doing fine there. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给外国笔友Martin，信中要包含：告诉他口罩已到会明天寄出，预防传染的提示和你的问候。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 已经买到，明天寄出；
2. 提醒勤洗手、不聚集等；
3. 问候与祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in need of；protect sb. from sth.；be supposed to；avoid doing sth.；What’s more
第三步：连词成句
1. I learned from your email that you are in need of masks.
2. Here are some tips for you to protect yourself from the virus.
3. you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places.
4. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I’m writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.，在这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如in need of，protect sb. from sth.，be supposed to，avoid doing sth.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 First of all，In addition和What’s more。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. I am writing to tell you something about my life of Senior 3.
As you know, I am a student in a key class of a key high school in our city. All the students in my class work very hard to get high scores in the coming College Entrance Examination. Thus, most of us are suffering from heavy pressure. But we strike a balance between work and rest and help each other. Tired as I am, I will do my best to improve my grades. Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. I would like to realize my dream by working hard.
Is your life of Senior 3 busy and stressful
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。给美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他介绍你的高三生活以及理想的大学。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文需用第一人称。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a key high school, College Entrance Examination, suffer from, a balance between…and…, realize one’s dream等。
第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段主要说明收到对方来信很高兴，并乐意介绍自己的高三生活；第二段介绍高三的生活和理想的大学；第三段提出自己的疑问表达自己想要了解对方的愿望。
第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如： Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如write to ; suffer from; do my best to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Dear Tim,
How is everything going I’m writing to tell you that the 15th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Nanjing from August 20th to 24th at Olympic Gymnasium.
As we know, kung fu is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad. This event aims to further expand the influence of kung fu worldwide. The organizers hope people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.
I know you are a kung fu amateur. Are you interested in taking part in the event You will be able to appreciate high-level kung fu performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world. You can also improve your techniques.
I will accompany you during the competition. I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，询问你的美国朋友Tim是否想参加国际功夫比赛。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有： as we know， become popular at home and abroad， aim to ，be interested in ，take part in ，be able to ，communicate with 。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易造句写文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： I’m writing to tell you that the 15th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Nanjing from August 20th to 24th at Olympic Gymnasium. 和The organizers hope (that) people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.这两句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：as we know，aim to，take part in，communicate with。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
14． Last Friday my class participated in the voluntary labour practice held in our school vegetable base.
At dawn, we cycled to the Nanxi community. On arrival, we were shown around by our teacher and then assigned different tasks. Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them. Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement.
The meaningful activity offered us a chance to learn about farming. Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。上周日，你校组织学生到南溪社区进行了义务劳动（voluntary labour）。请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①参加：participate in→take part in
②指导：instruction→guidance
③快乐：pleasure→happiness
④机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
拓展句：After the teacher gave us patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement. (运用了非谓语动词作状语和which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor. (运用了让步状语从句的省略)
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一、申请信
1．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假设你是第一中学的高三学生李华，你们城市将在下月举办运动会，招募中学生志愿者。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信：
内容要点：1. 介绍个人情况；2. 个人优势；3. 表达期望。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假如你是李华，你在网上看到一个为加拿大学生提供食宿的招聘广告，你想申请，请写一封自荐信。内容要点：
1. 学英语六年了，能够流利地说英语了；
2. 自己是热心肠，喜欢帮助别人；
3. 家人说地道的普通话。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考二模）假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”，邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下：
1. 活动开始时间；
2. 活动内容；
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考一模）假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：
内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；
2. 简述未能参加的原因；
3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Lihua
三、推荐信
5．（2020·安徽六安·六安一中校考三模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Peter 想提高中文水平，进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源 (resource)。内容包括：
1. 学习资源：报纸、杂志及其他途径；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
四、其他应用文
6．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）你校正在举行“健康卫生月”的活动。请你就“近视”这一话题写一篇短文，向校刊的英语角投稿。内容包括：
1. 学生近视的现状；
2. 可采取的预防措施；
3. 希望和祝福。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：eyesight n.视力 near/short-sighted adj.近视的
A recent survey has revealed that
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7．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）你刚刚得知你的英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 表示安慰。
2. 向其提供建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：奥密克戎Omicron 感染 infection 隔离 quarantine
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8．（2021·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周你校为了响应国家“拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食”的号召，开展了“光盘行动”主题活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道，要点包括；
1.活动内容； 2.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：光盘行动Clean Plate Campaign
9．（2021·安徽六安·六安一中校考模拟预测）你市正在组织首届高中生英语作文比赛。请以你向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括；
1. 职业简介；
2. 向往该职业的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
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10．（2021·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你和同学们参加了班级在植树节（3月12日）组织的植树活动，请根据以下提示给你的新西兰笔友Tom 写一封信，告诉他你的经历，并希望所有人都能为保护环境做贡献。写作要点：
1. 活动的相关信息
2. 集合时间和地点：上午9点，学校门口
3. 植树地点：在南溪河附近
4. 活动内容：植树150棵
（2）你的感受和今后（在环保方面）打算。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Martin给你发来电子邮件，请你帮忙购买一些口罩(mask)。请给他回复，内容包括：
1.已经买到，明天寄出;
2.提醒勤洗手、不聚集等;
3.问候与祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2020·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考一模）假定你是李华，是重点中学的一名高三学生。请你用英语给你的美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他描述你的高三生活。内容包括：
1.你的高三学习生活；
2.你理想的大学。
注意：
1词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad to hear from you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．（2020·安徽六安·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tim是中国功夫（kung fu）的爱好者。你得知今年八月你所在的城市将举办一次国际功夫比赛。请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加。要点包括：
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.比赛的目的；
3.参加比赛的益处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
How is everything going
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I will accompany you during the competition. I am looking forward to hearing from you;
Yours,
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
14．（2022·安徽六安·安徽省舒城中学校考模拟预测）上周日，你校组织学生到南溪社区进行了义务劳动（voluntary labour）。请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.劳动过程；
3.你的感悟。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from No. I Middle School. I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer of our city sports meeting to be held next month. Here come my advantages.
To begin with, I love sports and playing sports has been an important part of my life. What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. More importantly, I consider it a good chance to serve our society and develop my ability. I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是第一中学的高三学生李华，你们城市将在下月举办运动会，招募中学生志愿者。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信：
内容要点：1. 介绍个人情况；2. 个人优势；3. 表达期望。
第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，介绍个人情况。第二段，个人优势。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend myself，friendly and patient，get along well with，serve our society and develop my ability，give me a chance.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: so 引导的并列句What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. if引导的条件状语从句I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides, what’s more, finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: so 引导的并列句What’s more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. if引导的条件状语从句I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2．Dear Sir or Madam,
I read in your paper the notice about providing accommodation for Canadian students who want to learn Chinese in China. I hope that I can get the chance.
Here are my reasons for applying. Firstly, I have been learning English for about six years, and I can communicate with English speakers fluently. Secondly, I’m a warm-hearted person. I like making new friends and helping others. Thirdly, all my family speak standard Chinese, which can help the students learn Chinese well. And both my parents have agreed to provide services since we have a big house.
If we’re honored to get the chance, we will do everything we can to provide a good learning and living environment for the students.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。写一封自荐信，申请为加拿大学生提供食宿的机会。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，写一封自荐信，申请为加拿大学生提供食宿的机会，并介绍自己的相关信息和特点。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：accommodation, warm-hearted, be honored to等。
第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段说明写信的目的；第二段介绍个人的优势；第三段再次表达自己想要申请成功的愿望。
第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，布局工整。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式。
who引导的定语从句：…for Canadian students who want to learn Chinese in China.
which引导的非限制性定语从句：…, all my family speak standard Chinese, which can help the students learn Chinese well.
since引导的原因状语从句：both my parents have agreed to provide services since we have a big house.
3．One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给负责“中国文化周”项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对邀请表示感谢；
2.询问活动开始时间；
3.询问活动内容；
4.询问学生住宿安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.（which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.（it作形式主语）
4．Dear Smith,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I couldn’t join in the English corner organized by English weekly last week. That day, my sister would be sent to university. When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university. There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.
Now she's doing well in her university. But I am dying to have another chance to attend an English corner to improve my spoken English. At the same time, I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you. I hope you can accept my apology.
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是李华，某报社英语编辑Mr. Smith邀请你参加英语周报（English weekly）报社组织的一个活动， 请你根据下列内容，写一篇小短文：内容要点：1. 未能参加英语角；2. 简述未能参加的原因；3. 对未来再次参加英语角活动的渴望。时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； accompany（陪伴），attend（参加），English corner（英语角），organize（组织）， opportunity（机会）及apology（道歉）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有join in（参加），accompany sb to somewhere（陪伴某人去某地），be dying to do (渴望做某事)以及leave a good impression on sb（给某人留下一个好印象），而且还使用了状语从句“When I heard the good news, I was really happy, so I accompanied her to her university.”，宾语从句“I believe if I have a chance next time, I’ll attend your English corner and leave a good impression on you.”及“I hope you can accept my apology.”，同位语从句“There was no doubt that I lost such a good opportunity to attend it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
5．One possible version：
Dear Peter，
I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture. It’s my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. You can benefit a lot from them.
I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.说明写信理由； 2. 推荐学习资源并说明推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be eager to，know more about Chinese culture，some popular newspapers and magazines，such as，feel bored，benefit a lot from, have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.
2. Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.
3. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.
4. You can benefit a lot from them.
5．I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题,同时注意适当使用复合句进行句式升级。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词，如：Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.这句话运用了动名词做主语，还运用了非限制性定语从句。so...that引导的结果状语从句The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6． A recent survey has revealed that roughly 3 out of 4 high school students wear glasses. The figure is so disturbing that we have to come up with some effective measures to tackle the problem.
For students, it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying. Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended. For schools, facilities are expected to improve to provide students with an eye-friendly environment. Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.
We hope that with all these effective measures, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“近视”这一话题写一篇短文，向校刊的英语角投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大约：roughly→approximately
引起烦恼的：disturbing→annoying
解决：tackle→deal with
此外：Besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.
拓展句：Besides, schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students that it is important to improve eye health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The figure is so disturbing that we have to come up with some effective measures to tackle the problem.（由so…that引导的结果状语从句，不定式短语作后置定语）
【高分句型2】We hope that with all these effective measures, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.（由that引导的宾语从句）
7．Dear Jim,
I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to adapt to the change because we may suffer the epidemic for a long time. My advice is as follows.
To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood. Equally importantly, you should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise. If possible, you’d better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health.
Hope my suggestions will be of help for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于劝慰信。英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。要求考生给其写信表示安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
失落的：down → distressed
首先：at first → to start with
而不是：rather than → instead of
益处：beneficial → of benefit
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood.
拓展句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless because progress in study will improve your mood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If possible, you’d better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．In response to the national call against food waste, our school launched the Clean Plate Campaign last week.
Food loss and waste exist and millions of people are still hungry. Various school activities were carried out for this reason. Young volunteers put up posters and signs promoting food saving on campus to increase awareness of respecting food labor and valuing food among students. Also, class meetings were held to make a change in the students’ attitude and encourage them to become eco-pioneers.
Through the campaign, we have become more aware that there is no excuse for wasting food. To save food is a traditional virtue in China, which we should never forget.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就学校开展的“光盘行动”主题活动写一篇报道，谈谈活动内容和感受。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in response to; carry out; put up; increase awareness of; make a change; encourage sb. to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. In response to the national call against food waste, our school launched the Clean Plate Campaign last week.
2. Various school activities were carried out for this reason.
3. Young volunteers put up posters and signs promoting food saving on campus to increase awareness of respecting food labor and valuing food among students.
4. Also, class meetings were held to make a change in the students’ attitude and encourage them to become eco-pioneers.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Also
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Through the campaign, we have become more aware that there is no excuse for wasting food. 用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] To save food is a traditional virtue in China, which we should never forget. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．One possible version:
My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example. Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students. I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参加首届高中生英语作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职业：career→ profession
因为：due to→ because of
受欢迎：be well-received by→ be popular with
下决心做某事：decide to do sth.→ made up one’s mind to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example.
拓展句：Besides, it is because of the power of an example that I want to be a teacher.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. （运用了由since连接的时间状语从句和because连接的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3] Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.（运用了由although连接的让步状语从句）
10．Dear Tom,
Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature and beautify the environment on March 12. We gathered at the school gate at 9 in the morning, then took a bus to the Nanxi River nearby, which is 5 kilometers away from our school. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. Finally we planted 150 trees.
Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect our environment. We will contribute more to environmental protection.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰笔友Tom 写一封信，介绍你和同学们参加的班级在植树节（3月12日）组织的植树活动。
【详解】词汇积累
乘公共汽车：take a bus →by bus
开始：begin → start
立即：immediately → at once
最终：finally →eventually/at last/in the end
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On arrival, we began to work immediately.
拓展句：As soon as we arrived, we began to work immediately.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature and beautify the environment on March 12. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. (运用了现在分词作状语)
11．Dear Martin,
I learned from your email that you are in need of masks. I’m writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.
Here are some tips for you to protect yourself from the virus. First of all, you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places. When you’re out, be sure to wear a mask. In addition, remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.
I hope you and your family are doing fine there. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给外国笔友Martin，信中要包含：告诉他口罩已到会明天寄出，预防传染的提示和你的问候。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 已经买到，明天寄出；
2. 提醒勤洗手、不聚集等；
3. 问候与祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
in need of；protect sb. from sth.；be supposed to；avoid doing sth.；What’s more
第三步：连词成句
1. I learned from your email that you are in need of masks.
2. Here are some tips for you to protect yourself from the virus.
3. you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places.
4. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I’m writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.，在这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如in need of，protect sb. from sth.，be supposed to，avoid doing sth.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 First of all，In addition和What’s more。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
12．Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. I am writing to tell you something about my life of Senior 3.
As you know, I am a student in a key class of a key high school in our city. All the students in my class work very hard to get high scores in the coming College Entrance Examination. Thus, most of us are suffering from heavy pressure. But we strike a balance between work and rest and help each other. Tired as I am, I will do my best to improve my grades. Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. I would like to realize my dream by working hard.
Is your life of Senior 3 busy and stressful
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。给美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他介绍你的高三生活以及理想的大学。
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文需用第一人称。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a key high school, College Entrance Examination, suffer from, a balance between…and…, realize one’s dream等。
第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段主要说明收到对方来信很高兴，并乐意介绍自己的高三生活；第二段介绍高三的生活和理想的大学；第三段提出自己的疑问表达自己想要了解对方的愿望。
第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如： Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如write to ; suffer from; do my best to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
13．Dear Tim,
How is everything going I’m writing to tell you that the 15th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Nanjing from August 20th to 24th at Olympic Gymnasium.
As we know, kung fu is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad. This event aims to further expand the influence of kung fu worldwide. The organizers hope people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.
I know you are a kung fu amateur. Are you interested in taking part in the event You will be able to appreciate high-level kung fu performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world. You can also improve your techniques.
I will accompany you during the competition. I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，询问你的美国朋友Tim是否想参加国际功夫比赛。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有： as we know， become popular at home and abroad， aim to ，be interested in ，take part in ，be able to ，communicate with 。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易造句写文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： I’m writing to tell you that the 15th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Nanjing from August 20th to 24th at Olympic Gymnasium. 和The organizers hope (that) people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.这两句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：as we know，aim to，take part in，communicate with。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
14． Last Friday my class participated in the voluntary labour practice held in our school vegetable base.
At dawn, we cycled to the Nanxi community. On arrival, we were shown around by our teacher and then assigned different tasks. Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them. Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement.
The meaningful activity offered us a chance to learn about farming. Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。上周日，你校组织学生到南溪社区进行了义务劳动（voluntary labour）。请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①参加：participate in→take part in
②指导：instruction→guidance
③快乐：pleasure→happiness
④机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Under the teacher’s patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
拓展句：After the teacher gave us patient instructions, we turned over the soil, weeded, planted vegetables like tomatoes and eggplants and watered them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking at lines of young green vegetables, the teacher cheerfully said we’d enjoy our self-grown vegetables soon, which filled us with a sense of achievement. (运用了非谓语动词作状语和which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Though tired, I did feel the pleasure and value of labor. (运用了让步状语从句的省略)
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