河南省安阳市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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河南省安阳市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1．（2021·河南安阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，在伦敦做交换生。你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1．接受邀请；
2．对演讲效果的期望；
3．商谈具体事宜。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2021·河南安阳·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary给你送了一个生日礼物，你非常喜欢。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 对礼物的喜爱；
2. 对她的感激。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2023·河南安阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，你班交换生Mark对河南的民俗文化很感兴趣，希望你给他推荐一个地方。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐地方并说明理由；
2．表示愿意帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
4．（2022·河南安阳·校联考模拟预测）高考结束后，每位同学都有书籍和文具要处理。请你以学校学生会的名义写一个告示，向高三同学们募集二手书籍和文具，内容包括：
1.募集活动原因和物品；
2.募集方式。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Dear Fellow Students,
Every year, the Students Union collects items to donate to worthy charities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We really hope you think about donating, and we appreciate your kindness in helping the children living in need get their much needed school supplies.
Sincerely,
The Students Union
5．（2022·河南安阳·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件分享此次活动。内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历；
2.分享个人收获；
3.希望保持联系。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·河南安阳·安阳市第二中学统考二模）你校英文报正在举办有奖征文活动，主题是“My Winter Vacation”，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.介绍你的寒假生活；
2.谈论你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Winter Vacation
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2021·河南安阳·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校活动中心举行了一场新年音乐会。请给你校英语角写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 参演人员；
2. 音乐会介绍；
3. 活动的意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右，
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2020·河南安阳·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国网友Jack写信询问你为什么喜欢在闲暇时间读书。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你的读书经历；
2. 你从读书中获得的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Write to tell me what you usually do in your spare time.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、开放性作文
9．（2022·河南安阳·统考模拟预测）上周日你校组织学生参观了市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请你在博客上用英语写一篇博文，分享此次活动。内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 活动内容（听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步）；
3. 个人感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：科技馆Science and Technology Museum
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．Dear Linda,
I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation．
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it．
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．So we'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you．
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学生会主席Linda写一封邮件，内容是就你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲做出答复。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．接受邀请；
2．对演讲效果的期望；
3．商谈具体事宜。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
give a speech；be delighted to do sth.；more than；be able to；want to do；had better do；have a discussion about；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation．
2.It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．
3.I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it．
4.I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．
5.We'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you．
6.Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表因果关系： So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．（what引导宾语从句，they want to know为省略了that的定语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear Mary,
It was a privilege to receive such a beautiful bouquet that you sent me this morning. The gift brightened up my day. I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet. I simply love the white and pink lilies along with the carnations.
Thank you again for the gift and I feel honored to be remembered on my birthday with such bright and cheerful shades of flowers. It shows that you value the friendship between us. Thank you for remembering me and making my day so beautiful with these flowers.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Mary写一封邮件对她送的生日礼物表示喜爱，对她表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
使某人很开心：brighten up one's day=make one’s day
感谢：appreciate→thank
令人开心的：cheerful→pleasant
珍惜：value→cherish
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet.
拓展句：I appreciate it that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was a privilege to receive such a beautiful bouquet that you sent me this morning. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3．Dear Mark,
Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
The reasons are as follows. Shaolin Temple is probably the most famous temple in China, not only because of its long history and its role in Chinese Buddhism, Shaolin Temple Pagoda, but also because of its martial arts or Wushu.
Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Mark写封邮件，给他推荐一个了解河南民俗文化的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能：probably→possibly
著名的：famous→well-known
热衷于：be keen on→be enthusiastic about
亲自：in person→in the flesh
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
拓展句：I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou,as I know that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．Dear Fellow Students,
Every year, the Students Union collects items to donate to worthy charities. It aims to help children who do not have enough money to afford books and stationery products in poor regions. Through the event, lots of books and other materials can be collected to improve the poor conditions. That makes children can have more resources to get knowledge.
Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products sponsored by the Students Union. All of us can attend the event. The location of the event is in the schoolyard, hoping that you are actively involved in the donation activity. All the materials to be collected will be sent to the poor areas as soon as possible.
We really hope you can think about donating, and we appreciate your kindness in helping the children living in need get their much needed school supplies.
Sincerely,
The Students Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学校学生会的名义写一个告示，向高三同学们募集二手书籍和文具。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help →aid
足够的：enough →adequate
参加：attend →take part in
许多：lots of →a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products sponsored by the Students Union.
拓展句：Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products which is sponsored by the Students Union.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It aims to help children who do not have enough money to afford books and stationery products in poor regions. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The location of the event is in the schoolyard, , hoping that you are actively involved in the donation activity. (运用了现在分词作状语和宾语从句)
5．Dear Kevin,
How is everything going these days I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
To broaden their horizons and enrich school life, many a student in our school was involved in the activity entitled Annual Arts Festival. During the five days, all the works of calligraphy, photography and paintings created by the students and the teachers were on display. Handwork like the paper-cutting and kite-making attracted everyone deeply. Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot.
In short, I really had a good time during the activity. Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! Do you have similar activities in your school
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件，介绍上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide →offer
展览：on display →exhibit
玩得愉快：have a good time →enjoy oneself
机会：opportunity →chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
拓展句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity which was held in our school last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot. (运用了介词from +which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! (运用了部分倒装结构)
6． My Winter Vacation
This winter vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparents. Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework. After that, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age. What made all this more interesting and impressive was that we all communicated in English when skiing. All of us were in high spirits and tried to express ourselves clearly. From time to time, we would burst into laughter. We really had a good time. At the same time, our oral English got greatly improved. As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.” We all said we would speak English as much as possible in our daily life in the future.
It was really an unforgettable and meaningful holiday.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。你校英文报正在举办有奖征文活动，主题是“My Winter Vacation”，请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回去：go back to→return
有趣的：interesting→amusing
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework. After that, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age.
拓展句：Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework, after which, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What made all this more interesting and impressive was that we all communicated in English when skiing. (运用了主语从句)
[高分句型2] This winter vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparents. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
7．One possible version:
A Concert
In order to enrich the life of teachers and students, as well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival, our school held a concert in the performance center today. Outstanding students with musical talent were recommended by each class and they put on a wonderful performance. The atmosphere at the concert was warm and exciting. The performers played various musical instruments and sang sweet songs. The concert was warmly welcomed by teachers and students, providing them with a valuable opportunity to relax. It also made more students fall in love with music, which will probably make their school life more pleasant.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校英语角写一篇短文介绍你校活动中心举行的一场新年音乐会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
也：and →as well as
展示：show →put on
愉快：happy →pleasant
爱上：love = fall in love with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The concert was warmly welcomed by teachers and students, providing them with a valuable opportunity to relax.
拓展句：It’s the concert which provides them with a valuable opportunity to relax that was warmly welcomed by teachers and students,
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to enrich the life of teachers and students, as well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival, our school held a concert in the performance center today.这句话运用了不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型2]It also made more students fall in love with music, which will probably make their school life more pleasant.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear Jack,
Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time. When I was young, my parents bought me a lot of books. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow White, and so on. Ever since then, reading has become an important part of my life. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living. I got to know about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other people’s stories through their biographies. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.
Write to tell me what you usually do in your spare time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，对美国网友Jack提出的关于读书的问题作出回答，包括读书经历和读书的益处。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.读书经历描述（When I was young; Three Little Pigs, Snow White）
2.读书益处描述
1）带来乐趣和缓解压力（gives me a lot of fun; releases me from the pressures of modern living）
2）了解世界（know about other countries and their cultures and customs）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
make friends with; give sb. a lot fun; release sb. from; know about; as well as; in short; not only…but also
第三步：连词成句
1. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow White, and so on.
2. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living.
3. I got to know about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other people’s stories through their biographies.
4. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
When I was young, my parents bought me a lot of books.( 当我小的时候，我的父母给我买了很多书)这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.( 总之，阅读不仅能拓宽我的视野，让我快乐，而且还能帮助我放松。)这句话使用了not only…but also并列结构，而且将not only置于句首，使用了部分倒装结构。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如make friends with; give sb. a lot fun; release sb. from; know about; as well as; in short; not only…but also等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9． Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be engraved in my mind forever.
All senior 3 students visited an exhibition themed on “Achievements of China Aerospace”. First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. Then came the highlight, experiencing thrilling and funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I’ll apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生在博客上用英语写一篇博文，分享学校组织的参观市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”的活动。内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动内容（听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步）；3. 个人感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
旅行：trip→journey
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
令人兴奋的：thrilling→exciting
感动的：touched→moved
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be engraved in my mind forever.
拓展句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience, which will be engraved in my mind forever.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I’ll apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
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一、邀请信
1．（2021·河南安阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，在伦敦做交换生。你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1．接受邀请；
2．对演讲效果的期望；
3．商谈具体事宜。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Linda,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2021·河南安阳·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary给你送了一个生日礼物，你非常喜欢。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 对礼物的喜爱；
2. 对她的感激。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3．（2023·河南安阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，你班交换生Mark对河南的民俗文化很感兴趣，希望你给他推荐一个地方。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐地方并说明理由；
2．表示愿意帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
4．（2022·河南安阳·校联考模拟预测）高考结束后，每位同学都有书籍和文具要处理。请你以学校学生会的名义写一个告示，向高三同学们募集二手书籍和文具，内容包括：
1.募集活动原因和物品；
2.募集方式。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Dear Fellow Students,
Every year, the Students Union collects items to donate to worthy charities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We really hope you think about donating, and we appreciate your kindness in helping the children living in need get their much needed school supplies.
Sincerely,
The Students Union
5．（2022·河南安阳·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。请你根据以下要点，给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件分享此次活动。内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历；
2.分享个人收获；
3.希望保持联系。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2022·河南安阳·安阳市第二中学统考二模）你校英文报正在举办有奖征文活动，主题是“My Winter Vacation”，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.介绍你的寒假生活；
2.谈论你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Winter Vacation
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7．（2021·河南安阳·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校活动中心举行了一场新年音乐会。请给你校英语角写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 参演人员；
2. 音乐会介绍；
3. 活动的意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右，
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．（2020·河南安阳·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国网友Jack写信询问你为什么喜欢在闲暇时间读书。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你的读书经历；
2. 你从读书中获得的益处。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Write to tell me what you usually do in your spare time.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、开放性作文
9．（2022·河南安阳·统考模拟预测）上周日你校组织学生参观了市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请你在博客上用英语写一篇博文，分享此次活动。内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 活动内容（听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步）；
3. 个人感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：科技馆Science and Technology Museum
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
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参考答案：
1．Dear Linda,
I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation．
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it．
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．So we'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you．
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学生会主席Linda写一封邮件，内容是就你校学生会主席Linda想让你做一次关于中国传统文化的演讲做出答复。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．接受邀请；
2．对演讲效果的期望；
3．商谈具体事宜。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
give a speech；be delighted to do sth.；more than；be able to；want to do；had better do；have a discussion about；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I am honored for being invited to give a speech on Chinese traditional culture and I am delighted to accept your invitation．
2.It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．
3.I hope I will be able to promote the communication between our two countries by introducing Chinese traditional culture and helping English students understand it．
4.I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．
5.We'd better have a discussion about it when it is convenient for you．
6.Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表因果关系： So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It makes me happy to hear that there will be more than 500 participants to the meeting．（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
I need to know what specific information they want to know and I need some time to get prepared．（what引导宾语从句，they want to know为省略了that的定语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear Mary,
It was a privilege to receive such a beautiful bouquet that you sent me this morning. The gift brightened up my day. I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet. I simply love the white and pink lilies along with the carnations.
Thank you again for the gift and I feel honored to be remembered on my birthday with such bright and cheerful shades of flowers. It shows that you value the friendship between us. Thank you for remembering me and making my day so beautiful with these flowers.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Mary写一封邮件对她送的生日礼物表示喜爱，对她表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
使某人很开心：brighten up one's day=make one’s day
感谢：appreciate→thank
令人开心的：cheerful→pleasant
珍惜：value→cherish
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet.
拓展句：I appreciate it that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was a privilege to receive such a beautiful bouquet that you sent me this morning. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I appreciate the fact that you noticed my love for flowers and have sent the loveliest bouquet. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3．Dear Mark,
Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
The reasons are as follows. Shaolin Temple is probably the most famous temple in China, not only because of its long history and its role in Chinese Buddhism, Shaolin Temple Pagoda, but also because of its martial arts or Wushu.
Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Mark写封邮件，给他推荐一个了解河南民俗文化的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能：probably→possibly
著名的：famous→well-known
热衷于：be keen on→be enthusiastic about
亲自：in person→in the flesh
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
拓展句：I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou,as I know that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．Dear Fellow Students,
Every year, the Students Union collects items to donate to worthy charities. It aims to help children who do not have enough money to afford books and stationery products in poor regions. Through the event, lots of books and other materials can be collected to improve the poor conditions. That makes children can have more resources to get knowledge.
Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products sponsored by the Students Union. All of us can attend the event. The location of the event is in the schoolyard, hoping that you are actively involved in the donation activity. All the materials to be collected will be sent to the poor areas as soon as possible.
We really hope you can think about donating, and we appreciate your kindness in helping the children living in need get their much needed school supplies.
Sincerely,
The Students Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学校学生会的名义写一个告示，向高三同学们募集二手书籍和文具。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help →aid
足够的：enough →adequate
参加：attend →take part in
许多：lots of →a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products sponsored by the Students Union.
拓展句：Between 9:00 a.m. and 11:30 this Saturday, there will be a fundraising campaign of second-hand books and stationery products which is sponsored by the Students Union.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It aims to help children who do not have enough money to afford books and stationery products in poor regions. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The location of the event is in the schoolyard, , hoping that you are actively involved in the donation activity. (运用了现在分词作状语和宾语从句)
5．Dear Kevin,
How is everything going these days I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
To broaden their horizons and enrich school life, many a student in our school was involved in the activity entitled Annual Arts Festival. During the five days, all the works of calligraphy, photography and paintings created by the students and the teachers were on display. Handwork like the paper-cutting and kite-making attracted everyone deeply. Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot.
In short, I really had a good time during the activity. Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! Do you have similar activities in your school
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Kevin 写封邮件，介绍上周你参加了学校举办的“年度艺术节”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide →offer
展览：on display →exhibit
玩得愉快：have a good time →enjoy oneself
机会：opportunity →chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity held in our school last week.
拓展句：I’m eager to share with you the annual activity which was held in our school last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot. (运用了介词from +which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Undoubtedly, not only can this event make our school life more colorful, but it can offer me a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! (运用了部分倒装结构)
6． My Winter Vacation
This winter vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparents. Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework. After that, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age. What made all this more interesting and impressive was that we all communicated in English when skiing. All of us were in high spirits and tried to express ourselves clearly. From time to time, we would burst into laughter. We really had a good time. At the same time, our oral English got greatly improved. As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.” We all said we would speak English as much as possible in our daily life in the future.
It was really an unforgettable and meaningful holiday.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。你校英文报正在举办有奖征文活动，主题是“My Winter Vacation”，请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
回去：go back to→return
有趣的：interesting→amusing
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework. After that, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age.
拓展句：Every day, the first thing I did was do my homework, after which, I’d go skiing with some boys of my age.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What made all this more interesting and impressive was that we all communicated in English when skiing. (运用了主语从句)
[高分句型2] This winter vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparents. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
7．One possible version:
A Concert
In order to enrich the life of teachers and students, as well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival, our school held a concert in the performance center today. Outstanding students with musical talent were recommended by each class and they put on a wonderful performance. The atmosphere at the concert was warm and exciting. The performers played various musical instruments and sang sweet songs. The concert was warmly welcomed by teachers and students, providing them with a valuable opportunity to relax. It also made more students fall in love with music, which will probably make their school life more pleasant.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校英语角写一篇短文介绍你校活动中心举行的一场新年音乐会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
也：and →as well as
展示：show →put on
愉快：happy →pleasant
爱上：love = fall in love with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The concert was warmly welcomed by teachers and students, providing them with a valuable opportunity to relax.
拓展句：It’s the concert which provides them with a valuable opportunity to relax that was warmly welcomed by teachers and students,
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to enrich the life of teachers and students, as well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival, our school held a concert in the performance center today.这句话运用了不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型2]It also made more students fall in love with music, which will probably make their school life more pleasant.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear Jack,
Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time. When I was young, my parents bought me a lot of books. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow White, and so on. Ever since then, reading has become an important part of my life. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living. I got to know about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other people’s stories through their biographies. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.
Write to tell me what you usually do in your spare time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，对美国网友Jack提出的关于读书的问题作出回答，包括读书经历和读书的益处。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.读书经历描述（When I was young; Three Little Pigs, Snow White）
2.读书益处描述
1）带来乐趣和缓解压力（gives me a lot of fun; releases me from the pressures of modern living）
2）了解世界（know about other countries and their cultures and customs）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
make friends with; give sb. a lot fun; release sb. from; know about; as well as; in short; not only…but also
第三步：连词成句
1. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow White, and so on.
2. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living.
3. I got to know about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other people’s stories through their biographies.
4. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
When I was young, my parents bought me a lot of books.( 当我小的时候，我的父母给我买了很多书)这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax.( 总之，阅读不仅能拓宽我的视野，让我快乐，而且还能帮助我放松。)这句话使用了not only…but also并列结构，而且将not only置于句首，使用了部分倒装结构。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如make friends with; give sb. a lot fun; release sb. from; know about; as well as; in short; not only…but also等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9． Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be engraved in my mind forever.
All senior 3 students visited an exhibition themed on “Achievements of China Aerospace”. First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. Then came the highlight, experiencing thrilling and funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I’ll apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生在博客上用英语写一篇博文，分享学校组织的参观市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”的活动。内容包括：1. 参加人员；2. 活动内容（听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步）；3. 个人感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
旅行：trip→journey
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
令人兴奋的：thrilling→exciting
感动的：touched→moved
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be engraved in my mind forever.
拓展句：Today’s trip to the City Museum is really a memorable experience, which will be engraved in my mind forever.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I’ll apply myself to study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
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