河南省开封市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
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河南省开封市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·河南开封·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、推荐信
2．（2020·河南开封·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom所在的学校要举办中国美食文化周活动，他写信向你询问相关情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 整体介绍；
2. 推荐几种美食；
3. 其他信息。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、告知信/通知
3．（2022·河南开封·通许县第一高级中学校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Paul发邮件询问你高考后的暑假计划。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的计划；
2. 给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
4．（2023·河南开封·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为“How to be a better self”的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1. 对a better self的理解；
2. 具体做法。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·河南开封·统考三模）假定你校英语社团举办以"The way to protect the environment”为主题的演讲活动,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容主要包括：
1.保护环境的重要性；
2.保护环境的具体措施。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．（2020·河南开封·统考一模）上周六你校组织英语俱乐部成员去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展。请你用英语写一 篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和地点；
2.展览的内容；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．（2020·河南开封·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom打算在中国上学，请你帮他咨询入学要办的相关手续。他将于下周六上午10点到达北京大兴国际机场，询问你能否到机场接他。请你给他写一封回信。要点包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜（护照、租房证明、体检证明）；
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：体检证明 Health Certificate
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2020·河南开封·校考一模）假如你是李华。你校近期将举行“小视频大赛（Video Contest）”。请你写一封信给在美国的朋友Jim，遨请他参加，并告知相关信息，内容包括：
1. 作品反映校园生活、家庭生活和家乡的变化等。
2. 视频不超过8分钟。
3. 参赛方式和截止时间。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 书信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am writing with good news.
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
9．（2022·河南开封·统考一模）这两年，受疫情影响，越来越多的人在假期选择到周边地区进行短途旅行，微旅行成为一种趋势。 请你就此话题写一篇短文，谈一谈微旅行的优势。
注意：词数 100 左右。
参考词汇： 疫情 pandemic 微旅行 micro-tourism
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10．（2022·河南开封·统考三模）最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法，内容包括;
1.导致该现象的原因;
2.提出相应的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节。以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。
使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
2．Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to learn that your school will hold a Chinese Food Culture Week. It’s a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese food culture. Now, I will tell you something about Chinese food culture.
China is very famous for its food in the world. There are many kinds of food in China. They’re Cantonese food, Sichuan food, Shanghai food, Hunan food and so on. Generally speaking, Cantonese food is a bit light and Hunan dishes are very spicy, having a strong and hot taste. In the north of China, people eat a lot of noodles and dumplings. In the south of China, people eat a lot of rice and seafood. Chinese food is good in color, flavor and taste. So I like it very much.
I hope what I write is helpful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom 所在的学校要举办中国美食文化周活动，他写信向你询问相关情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.整体介绍；2.推荐几种美食；3.其他信息。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese Food Culture Week (中国美食文化周)，a good opportunity (一个好机会)，be famous for (因为……而著名)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I’m very glad to learn that your school will hold a Chinese Food Culture Week.非谓语动词Generally speaking, Cantonese food is a bit light and Hunan dishes are very spicy, having a strong and hot taste.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked about my plans for the summer holiday after the college entrance examination. And I’m willing to share them with you.
First of all, I decide to become one of the volunteers in my community, who play an important role in fighting against the pandemic. Besides, I plan to learn to cook some typical traditional Chinese foods so that I can prepare meals for my parents. More importantly, to enjoy a better college life, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses.
I hope I can spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰好友Paul回复邮件，告知对方自己高考后的暑假计划并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
此外：besides→what’s more
计划：plan→intend
以便于：so that→in order that
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：More importantly, to enjoy a better college life, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses.
拓展句：More importantly, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses, in order that I can enjoy a better college life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked about my plans for the summer holiday after the college entrance examination.（运用了in which引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Besides, I plan to learn to cook some typical traditional Chinese foods so that I can prepare meals for my parents.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
4． Good morning, everyone! I feel delighted to share some of my views here. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
To be a better self, we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses. Then, based on self recognition, we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures. It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为主题为“How to be a better self”的英语沙龙活动准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
观点：view→opinion
认识：recognize→know
增强：enhance→strengthen
重要的：essential→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To be a better self, we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.
拓展句：we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses,so that we can be a better self.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.(运用了动名词做主语)
【高分句型2】 It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.(运用了it做形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式)
5．With the development of our society, energy in the world becomes more and more limited, so it is quite important for us to save energy and to protect our environment. As a student, we should take the following measures to protect the environment.
First, walking to school is a good way to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant trees every spring to protect the soil from being washed away. Third, it’s also important to recycle everything useful. We should keep our school clean by picking up any litter. Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
In a word, only when we form the good habit of environmental protection can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇主题为"The way to protect the environment”的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important →vital→significant
采取措施：take measures→ take action→ take steps
最后：finally →in the end→ at last
总而言之：in a word→ in short→ in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
拓展句：Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when you leave the classroom.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] As a student, we should take the following measures to protect the environment.动词不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型2 ] In a word, only when we form the good habit of environmental protection can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.句中使用部分倒装。
6．A visit to City Museum
Last Saturday, the members of our School’s English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters. They’re all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries. All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
The visit was a great success. It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇新闻报道，介绍去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展这个活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.说明活动的时间和地点；
2.介绍展览的内容；
3.表达自己的感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
located in；a large number of；on show；make achievements；in the last few centuries；be amazed at；not only…but also…；enrich one’s life；help sb. do sth.；learn about
第三步：连词成句
1.Last Saturday, the members of our School’s English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.
2.During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters.
3.They’re all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme.
4.We watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries.
5.All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
6.The visit was a great success.
7.It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries.（we’ve made为省略了that的定语从句）
[高分句型3]
All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.（saying为现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）
7．Dear Tom,
How is everything going I'm glad to receive your letter.
Welcome to China. As for your going to the nearby school, I have sought advice from the school. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here. It's my pleasure to meet you at the airport. I'll be at Beijing Daxing International Airport at 9:50 next Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit. And I will be in a red jacket, so you won't miss me.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China and I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给打算在中国上学并请你帮忙咨询入学要办的相关手续的英国朋友Tom，告知他相关事宜和借机时间地点。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表示欢迎；
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜（护照、租房证明、体检证明）；
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
seek…from…；as long as；rent an apartment；Health Certificate；be welcome to do；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I have sought advice from the school.
2. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate.
3. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here.
4. I'm looking forward to your coming.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I hope that you can enjoy your stay in China这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如seek…from…，as long as，be welcome to do等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jim,
I am writing with good news. A video contest is going to be organized in our school soon, and knowing that you are such an expert in filming videos, I am wondering whether you would like to participate.
Topics like campus life, family life or the great changes that have taken place in your hometown ought to be covered in the video, which should not be longer than 8 minutes. The deadline is December 10th, 2017, and once you have created your video, you can just upload it to the school website.
It is a good chance to prove your talent in filming as well as an opportunity to share your works with more people. I believe you won’t regret doing it.
Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】根据题目要求你写一封信遨请美国的朋友Jim参加你校近期将举行“小视频大赛（Video Contest）”，题目中明确要求有：作品反映校园、家庭生活以及家乡变化；视频时长、参赛方式和截止日。
首先，同学们要点明写信目的；然后要明确地指出参赛的作品的内容、时长、截止日要求；最后向Jim强调参加大赛的益处等等。
同学们要能适当把握三个部分的内容，使文章内容相协调，使用恰当的连接词，使语义连贯，连接顺畅。
【点睛】范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：participate参加， take place发生 ，upload 上传， as well as除此之外，等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如宾语从句knowing that you are such an expert in filming videos……，定语从句ought to be covered in the video, which should not be longer than 8 minutes等等。
9．With the pandemic prevention and control measures making long-distance trips less convenient, an increasing number of people choose to take short trips to nearby destinations during their holidays. Micro-tourism has become a trend, which has its advantages.First, micro-tourism is less expensive compared with long-distance travelling, which eases the travelers’ financial burden. Besides, micro-tourism allows people to be more flexible, since it doesn’t require an elaborate plan or public transportation. Finally, micro-tourism provides new ways for people to experience their hometowns. Activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun. Travel doesn’t mean you need to go far away to find a resting place for your heart. That’s the mission of the micro-tourism.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就微旅行成为一种趋势这一话题写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choose→opt
趋势：trend→tendency
除此以外：besides→additionally
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun.
拓展句：There is no doubt that activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, micro-tourism is less expensive compared with long-distance travelling, which eases the travelers’ financial burden.（运用了which引导的非限制定语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, micro-tourism allows people to be more flexible, since it doesn’t require an elaborate plan or public transportation.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）
10．Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.
Why are teenagers unhappier For one thing, teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others for lack of time, which makes them feel lonely. For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed.
Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents need to listen to their children more, which can show respect and promote understanding. I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管：despite→in spite of
做某事有困难：have difficulty in doing sth.→have trouble in doing sth.
导致：cause→lead to
因此：therefore→hence
2.句式拓展
原句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed.
拓展句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, which causes them easier to be depressed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
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一、建议信
1．（2020·河南开封·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、推荐信
2．（2020·河南开封·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom所在的学校要举办中国美食文化周活动，他写信向你询问相关情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 整体介绍；
2. 推荐几种美食；
3. 其他信息。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、告知信/通知
3．（2022·河南开封·通许县第一高级中学校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰好友Paul发邮件询问你高考后的暑假计划。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的计划；
2. 给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、其他应用文
4．（2023·河南开封·统考二模）假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为“How to be a better self”的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1. 对a better self的理解；
2. 具体做法。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·河南开封·统考三模）假定你校英语社团举办以"The way to protect the environment”为主题的演讲活动,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容主要包括：
1.保护环境的重要性；
2.保护环境的具体措施。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．（2020·河南开封·统考一模）上周六你校组织英语俱乐部成员去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展。请你用英语写一 篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和地点；
2.展览的内容；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．（2020·河南开封·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom打算在中国上学，请你帮他咨询入学要办的相关手续。他将于下周六上午10点到达北京大兴国际机场，询问你能否到机场接他。请你给他写一封回信。要点包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜（护照、租房证明、体检证明）；
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：体检证明 Health Certificate
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2020·河南开封·校考一模）假如你是李华。你校近期将举行“小视频大赛（Video Contest）”。请你写一封信给在美国的朋友Jim，遨请他参加，并告知相关信息，内容包括：
1. 作品反映校园生活、家庭生活和家乡的变化等。
2. 视频不超过8分钟。
3. 参赛方式和截止时间。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 书信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am writing with good news.
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
9．（2022·河南开封·统考一模）这两年，受疫情影响，越来越多的人在假期选择到周边地区进行短途旅行，微旅行成为一种趋势。 请你就此话题写一篇短文，谈一谈微旅行的优势。
注意：词数 100 左右。
参考词汇： 疫情 pandemic 微旅行 micro-tourism
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10．（2022·河南开封·统考三模）最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法，内容包括;
1.导致该现象的原因;
2.提出相应的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节。以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that
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参考答案：
1．Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。
使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
2．Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to learn that your school will hold a Chinese Food Culture Week. It’s a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese food culture. Now, I will tell you something about Chinese food culture.
China is very famous for its food in the world. There are many kinds of food in China. They’re Cantonese food, Sichuan food, Shanghai food, Hunan food and so on. Generally speaking, Cantonese food is a bit light and Hunan dishes are very spicy, having a strong and hot taste. In the north of China, people eat a lot of noodles and dumplings. In the south of China, people eat a lot of rice and seafood. Chinese food is good in color, flavor and taste. So I like it very much.
I hope what I write is helpful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom 所在的学校要举办中国美食文化周活动，他写信向你询问相关情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.整体介绍；2.推荐几种美食；3.其他信息。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Chinese Food Culture Week (中国美食文化周)，a good opportunity (一个好机会)，be famous for (因为……而著名)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I’m very glad to learn that your school will hold a Chinese Food Culture Week.非谓语动词Generally speaking, Cantonese food is a bit light and Hunan dishes are very spicy, having a strong and hot taste.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked about my plans for the summer holiday after the college entrance examination. And I’m willing to share them with you.
First of all, I decide to become one of the volunteers in my community, who play an important role in fighting against the pandemic. Besides, I plan to learn to cook some typical traditional Chinese foods so that I can prepare meals for my parents. More importantly, to enjoy a better college life, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses.
I hope I can spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰好友Paul回复邮件，告知对方自己高考后的暑假计划并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
此外：besides→what’s more
计划：plan→intend
以便于：so that→in order that
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：More importantly, to enjoy a better college life, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses.
拓展句：More importantly, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several online courses, in order that I can enjoy a better college life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked about my plans for the summer holiday after the college entrance examination.（运用了in which引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Besides, I plan to learn to cook some typical traditional Chinese foods so that I can prepare meals for my parents.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
4． Good morning, everyone! I feel delighted to share some of my views here. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
To be a better self, we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses. Then, based on self recognition, we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures. It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为主题为“How to be a better self”的英语沙龙活动准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
观点：view→opinion
认识：recognize→know
增强：enhance→strengthen
重要的：essential→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To be a better self, we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.
拓展句：we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses,so that we can be a better self.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.(运用了动名词做主语)
【高分句型2】 It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.(运用了it做形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式)
5．With the development of our society, energy in the world becomes more and more limited, so it is quite important for us to save energy and to protect our environment. As a student, we should take the following measures to protect the environment.
First, walking to school is a good way to reduce pollution. Second, we should plant trees every spring to protect the soil from being washed away. Third, it’s also important to recycle everything useful. We should keep our school clean by picking up any litter. Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
In a word, only when we form the good habit of environmental protection can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇主题为"The way to protect the environment”的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important →vital→significant
采取措施：take measures→ take action→ take steps
最后：finally →in the end→ at last
总而言之：in a word→ in short→ in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
拓展句：Finally, remember to turn off the water taps after finishing washing and turn off the lights when you leave the classroom.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] As a student, we should take the following measures to protect the environment.动词不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型2 ] In a word, only when we form the good habit of environmental protection can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.句中使用部分倒装。
6．A visit to City Museum
Last Saturday, the members of our School’s English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters. They’re all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme. Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries. All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
The visit was a great success. It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇新闻报道，介绍去市博物馆观看了中国绘画艺术展这个活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.说明活动的时间和地点；
2.介绍展览的内容；
3.表达自己的感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
located in；a large number of；on show；make achievements；in the last few centuries；be amazed at；not only…but also…；enrich one’s life；help sb. do sth.；learn about
第三步：连词成句
1.Last Saturday, the members of our School’s English club went to the City Museum, located in the downtown area of our city to appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture.
2.During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters.
3.They’re all typical Chinese paintings with nature as their main theme.
4.We watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries.
5.All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.
6.The visit was a great success.
7.It not only enriched our life, but also helped us learn more about Chinese painting culture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
During the visit, a large number of Chinese paintings are on show, all of which are the works of famous Chinese painters.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Besides, we watched a video about the achievements we’ve made in the last few centuries.（we’ve made为省略了that的定语从句）
[高分句型3]
All the students were all amazed at our colorful culture, saying that this visit was really a cultural feast.（saying为现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）
7．Dear Tom,
How is everything going I'm glad to receive your letter.
Welcome to China. As for your going to the nearby school, I have sought advice from the school. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here. It's my pleasure to meet you at the airport. I'll be at Beijing Daxing International Airport at 9:50 next Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit. And I will be in a red jacket, so you won't miss me.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China and I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给打算在中国上学并请你帮忙咨询入学要办的相关手续的英国朋友Tom，告知他相关事宜和借机时间地点。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表示欢迎；
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜（护照、租房证明、体检证明）；
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
seek…from…；as long as；rent an apartment；Health Certificate；be welcome to do；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I have sought advice from the school.
2. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate.
3. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here.
4. I'm looking forward to your coming.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I hope that you can enjoy your stay in China这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如seek…from…，as long as，be welcome to do等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jim,
I am writing with good news. A video contest is going to be organized in our school soon, and knowing that you are such an expert in filming videos, I am wondering whether you would like to participate.
Topics like campus life, family life or the great changes that have taken place in your hometown ought to be covered in the video, which should not be longer than 8 minutes. The deadline is December 10th, 2017, and once you have created your video, you can just upload it to the school website.
It is a good chance to prove your talent in filming as well as an opportunity to share your works with more people. I believe you won’t regret doing it.
Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】根据题目要求你写一封信遨请美国的朋友Jim参加你校近期将举行“小视频大赛（Video Contest）”，题目中明确要求有：作品反映校园、家庭生活以及家乡变化；视频时长、参赛方式和截止日。
首先，同学们要点明写信目的；然后要明确地指出参赛的作品的内容、时长、截止日要求；最后向Jim强调参加大赛的益处等等。
同学们要能适当把握三个部分的内容，使文章内容相协调，使用恰当的连接词，使语义连贯，连接顺畅。
【点睛】范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：participate参加， take place发生 ，upload 上传， as well as除此之外，等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如宾语从句knowing that you are such an expert in filming videos……，定语从句ought to be covered in the video, which should not be longer than 8 minutes等等。
9．With the pandemic prevention and control measures making long-distance trips less convenient, an increasing number of people choose to take short trips to nearby destinations during their holidays. Micro-tourism has become a trend, which has its advantages.First, micro-tourism is less expensive compared with long-distance travelling, which eases the travelers’ financial burden. Besides, micro-tourism allows people to be more flexible, since it doesn’t require an elaborate plan or public transportation. Finally, micro-tourism provides new ways for people to experience their hometowns. Activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun. Travel doesn’t mean you need to go far away to find a resting place for your heart. That’s the mission of the micro-tourism.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就微旅行成为一种趋势这一话题写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：choose→opt
趋势：trend→tendency
除此以外：besides→additionally
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun.
拓展句：There is no doubt that activities like exploring cultural heritage sites, experiencing rural life and going camping ease tensions of daily life and bring just as much fun.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, micro-tourism is less expensive compared with long-distance travelling, which eases the travelers’ financial burden.（运用了which引导的非限制定语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, micro-tourism allows people to be more flexible, since it doesn’t require an elaborate plan or public transportation.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）
10．Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.
Why are teenagers unhappier For one thing, teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others for lack of time, which makes them feel lonely. For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed.
Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents need to listen to their children more, which can show respect and promote understanding. I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放式作文。最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管：despite→in spite of
做某事有困难：have difficulty in doing sth.→have trouble in doing sth.
导致：cause→lead to
因此：therefore→hence
2.句式拓展
原句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed.
拓展句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, which causes them easier to be depressed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
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