河南省洛阳市三年(2020-2022)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、邀请信
1.(2021·河南洛阳·统考三模)假定你是李华,是红星高中的学生会主席。为让更多的人了解中国优秀传统文化,你校将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition),请给你的外教Mr. Green写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 时间、地点以及参加人员;
2. 文化展的宗旨;
3. 展出内容:相关书籍、照片、绘画、剪纸等。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2.(2020·河南洛阳·统考二模)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Alice用中文给你写信表示对中文和中国的喜爱。请写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 对来信的感谢。
2. 学中文的优势
3. 对未来的希望。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、推荐信
3.(2020·河南洛阳·统考三模)假定你是李华,你的英语外教Mn Black打算买一些中国特色的礼物带回国送给亲友,请你给他写信,推荐礼物。要点如下:
1. 写信目的;
2. 推荐的礼物;
3. 礼物的特色。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
4.(2022·河南洛阳·统考三模)印度博主Sam想到中国旅游,希望中国网友推荐合适的地方。请你用英语在他的社交账号评论区留言,内容包括:
1.推荐的地方;
2.推荐的理由;
3.出行方式。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头已为你写出,不计入总词数。
I’d like to recommend you a place in China.
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5.(2022·河南洛阳·新安县第一高级中学校考模拟预测)你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程,包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 你喜爱的课程;
2. 你的心得体会;
3. 对课程的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Hands-on Course
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6.(2022·河南洛阳·校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友John原本打算参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛(the Classical Poetry Competition)”,但是现在因为害怕失败而打算放弃。请你写封信劝说他参加这次活动,内容包括:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 参加比赛的理由;
3. 提供可能的帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.(2022·河南洛阳·统考一模)请以My dream major为题写一篇文章,为学校英文报Dream栏目投稿。内容包括:
1. 你的选择及原因;
2. 未来的计划。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 标题和开头已为你写好。
My dream major
There are many different majors in universities.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2021·河南洛阳·统考二模)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以发生在你身边的一件感人的事迹为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 事迹简介;
2. 感动的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
A Moving Story
Moving stories happen around us every day.
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9.(2020·河南洛阳·统考三模)假如你是高三学生李华,得知你的新西兰笔友Steven被我国北京大学汉语语言专业录取,请给他写一封信。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.专业简介;
3 .本人情况。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、开放性作文
10.(2022·河南洛阳·统考二模)你校正在组织英文作文比赛,请以“How to be an outstanding student”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.你心中优秀学生的标准;
2.如何成为优秀的学生。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
How to be an outstanding student
Every student wants to be outstanding.
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参考答案:
1.Dear Mr. Green,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of HongXing High School. I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m.
To enable more people to learn about the traditional Chinese culture, all the teachers, students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome to participate. At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.
If you’re interested, please come and appreciate it. I’ll be more than glad to offer any help.
Please reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Green写封邮件,邀请他参加中国传统文化展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
照片:picture→photo
提供:provide→offer
高兴的:happy→glad
参加:join in = take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m.
拓展句:The reason why I’m writing to you is that I would like to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m.
【点睛】[高分句型1] At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you’re interested, please come and appreciate it. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
2.【范文1】
Dear Alice,
How is it going Thank you for your letter in Chinese. It is amazing that you have learned so many Chinese words and in Chinese beautifully and clearly.
From your letter I know you take a great interest in Chinese characters and Chinese culture, which is beneficial to you. By learning Chinese, you can make more friends and learn more about China. Besides, Chinese is helpful for you to participate in cultural exchange activities and we can understand each other better.
I believe you will learn Chinese better and I hope you will come to China for a visit this summer vacation.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文2】
Dear Alice,
How is everything going Having received you letter in Chinese in which you show great passion for Chinese characters and Chinese Culture, I am more than thrilled and grateful.
From your letter I discover you have taken a huge leap forward in Chinese, which undoubtedly make you easier in daily communication in Chinese. Additionally, only by learning Chinese systematically can you gain deeper insight into connotation of Chinese culture. Last but not the least, it is helpful for you to participate in cultural exchange activities and promote communication between eastern and western cultures.
I have confidence that you will learn Chinese better. I hope you will come to China for a visit this summer vacation if it is convenient for you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Alice写信,给她讲述学习中文的优势和对未来的希望。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 对来信的感谢。
2. 学中文的优势
3. 对未来的希望。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be interested in/ make friends/ have a better understanding of/ broaden one’s horizon/ participate in/ pay a visit to/ make great progress/
第三步:连词成句
How is everything going
Thanks for your last letter.
Knowing that you have great passion for Chinese characters and Chinese Culture, I am more than thrilled and grateful.
From your letter I discover you have made great progress in Chinese, which undoubtedly make it easier for you to communicate in Chinese.
Only by learning Chinese systematically can you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
It is helpful for you to participate in cultural exchange activities and promote communication between eastern and western cultures.
I believe that you will learn Chinese better.
I hope you can pay a visit to China this summer vacation if it is convenient for you.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达,例如:Having received you letter in Chinese in which you show great passion for Chinese characters and Chinese Culture, I am more than thrilled and grateful.中使用了现在分词做状语,which引导定语从句;Additionally, only by learning Chinese systematically can you gain deeper insight into connotation of Chinese culture.中使用了部分倒装;I have confidence that you will learn Chinese better.中that引导同位语从句。这些表达的使用不仅让文章色彩纷呈,也显示了作者扎实的语言功底。
3.Dear Mr. Black!
I am Li Hua. In your last letter you asked me about some Chinese gifts. I am writing to recommend some gifts to you.
As is often the case, tea is your first choice because tea does good to health and there is a variety of tea for you to choose from. Another common gift is Chinese paintings, which have a long history and special beauty. In addition,you can choose some Chinese knots or some traditional Chinese food, like Beijing Roast Duck.
I think your friends and relatives will be excited with the gifts.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的英语外教Mr Black打算买一些中国特色的礼物带回国送给亲友,请你给他写信,推荐礼物。要点如下:写信目的;推荐的礼物和礼物的特色。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。书信体作文一般分为三个部分。第一部分叙述写作的目的。你的英语外教Mr Black打算买一些中国特色的礼物带回国送给亲友,请你给他写信,推荐礼物。第二部分主要叙述你要推荐的礼物及其特点。最后一段叙述你的祝愿。注意词数要100左右;可以适当增加细节,但要符合逻辑,以使行文连贯。句式要多样化,尽量运用种复句,以增加文章的档次。
【点睛】本文要点完整,结构合理。语言简洁明了,通俗易懂。本文中的句式相对较灵活,其中复杂句As is often the case, tea is your first choice because tea does good to health and there is a variety of tea for you to choose from中有一个由as引导的非限制性定语从句,一个由because引导的原因状语从句;由which引导的非限制性定语从句Another common gift is Chinese paintings, which have a long history and special beauty;宾语从句I think your friends and relatives will be excited with the gifts。
4.I’d like to recommend you a place in China.
I guess Beijing is the best choice. Firstly, Beijing is definitely the city to learn about China’s brilliant history and culture, where you can view most wonderful attractions and historic wonders, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. Beijing is a significant city to view Chinese development because economic growth has accelerated the pace and scale of change and outfitted the city with a sense of modernity. Secondly, this city offers an endless mixture of places for your entertainment. Thirdly, people here are very hospitable.
I recommend you travel by subway. For one thing, it’s convenient to travel by subway around Beijing. For another, you can avoid traffic jam and travel environment friendly.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语在印度博主Sam的社交账号评论区留言,向他推荐在中国合适旅游的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
极好的:wonderful →splendid
重要的:significant → important
娱乐:entertainment →amusement
地铁:subway → underground
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, this city offers an endless mixture of places for your entertainment.
拓展句:Secondly, this city offers an endless mixture of places where you can entertain yourself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, Beijing is definitely the city to learn about China’s brilliant history and culture, where you can view most wonderful attractions and historic wonders, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Beijing is a significant city to view Chinese development because economic growth has accelerated the pace and scale of change and outfitted the city with a sense of modernity.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
5.My Favorite Hands-on Course
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students’ well-designed works and display their creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的劳动实践课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程:lesson→course
获得:gain→obtain
影响:influence→effect
展示:show→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
拓展句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, which ranged from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.Dear John,
I am surprised to learn you want to give up participating in the Classical Poetry Competition to be held by our school.
After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry. Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you. Besides, I know you are interested in and have learned a lot about Chinese poetry and Chinese traditional culture. I believe you can get a good result. And I will provide help for you if you need.
I hope you can consider my advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友John写信,劝说他参加学校组织的“古诗词比赛(the Classical Poetry Competition)。
【详解】1.词汇积累
惊奇的:surprised→astonished
参加:participate in→take part in
重要的:significant→be of significance
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:After all, taking part in the competition is very significant. First, it gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
拓展句:First,after all, taking part in the competition is very significant, which gives you a chance to recite more poems and learn the charm of Chinese poetry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, whatever the result is, you will make more friends who have the same interest as you.(运用了whatever引导状语从句,who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】And I will provide help for you if you need.(运用了if引导的状语从句)
7.There are many different majors in universities. Traditional Chinese Medicine is my dream major. TCM has benefited Chinese people for thousands of years. I come from a family of traditional Chinese medicine. As a TCM doctor, my grandfather has succeeded in curing many patients. Influenced by my grandfather, I have been interested in TCM since my childhood. I hope to follow his example in the future. But I will study TCM in a scientific way, combining TCM and western medicine. Only by acquiring a broad knowledge of both TCM and Western medicine can I further explore the treasure house of TCM and indeed discover more medicines beneficial to health care.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生为学校英文报Dream栏目投稿,谈一下自己的理想专业。
【详解】1.词汇积累
成功做某事:manage to do sth→succeed in doing sth
获得:obtain→ acquire
广博的:broad →extensive
对……感兴趣:show interest in→be interested in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Traditional Chinese Medicine is my dream major. TCM has benefited Chinese people for thousands of years.
拓展句:My dream major is Traditional Chinese Medicine, which has benefited Chinese people for thousands of years.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Influenced by my grandfather, I have been interested in TCM since my childhood. (运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】 But I will study TCM in a scientific way, combining TCM and western medicine.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型3】 Only by acquiring a broad knowledge of both TCM and Western medicine can I further explore the treasure house of TCM and indeed discover more medicines beneficial to health care.(运用了部分倒装)
8. A Moving Story
Moving stories happen around us every day. Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019, many people who took an active part in the battle against novel coronavirus left me a deep impression. Among all the heroic figures, I am deeply moved by the local postman called Yang Fei who fulfilled his responsibility even during this difficult time. He also made contributions by providing daily necessities to those who were in need. We must thank him for keeping us fully supplied during the pandemic, and I believe that he is also very admirable.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以发生在身边的一件感人的事迹为题,写一篇短文参加英语作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疾病:illness→disease
提供:offer→provide
艰难的:rough→difficult
积极参与:take an active part in = play an active part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Among all the heroic figures, I am deeply moved by the local postman called Yang Fei who fulfilled his responsibility even during this difficult time.
拓展句:Among all the heroic figures, it is the local postman called Yang Fei who fulfilled his responsibility even during this difficult time that I am deeply moved by.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019, many people who took an active part in the battle against novel coronavirus left me a deep impression. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He also made contributions by providing daily necessities to those who were in need. (运用了动名词作宾语)
9.Dear Steven,
I have received your letter and I am very glad to hear that you have been admitted to Beijing University. Congratulations on your success!
Beijing University is one of the top universities in the world. You really deserve it since you are always so excellent. Your major, the Chinese language, is one of the best majors in the university. As we know, the Chinese language is rich in culture with a long history. I am sure you will be a top student.
Now I am busy preparing for the final exam. I hope to enter a university just like you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Steven写信,向他介绍北京大学汉语语言专业和自己目前的情况。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1.写信目的;
2.专业简介;
3 .本人情况。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be glad to do sth./ be admitted to/ deserve/ major in/ be rich in/ enter/ be busy doing sth./ at present/ have a better understanding of
第三步:连词成句
1. Having received your letter, I am very glad to hear that you have been admitted to Beijing University.
2. Congratulations on your success!
3. Beijing University is one of the top universities in the world.
4. You really deserve it since you are always so excellent.
5. Your major, the Chinese language, is one of the best majors in the university.
6. As we know, the Chinese language is rich in culture with a long history.
7. I am sure you will have a better understanding of China through the course.
8. Now I am busy preparing for the final exam.
9. I hope to enter a university just like you.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:I have received your letter and I am very glad to hear that you have been admitted to Beijing University.中that引导宾语从句;As we know, the Chinese language is rich in culture with a long history.中as引导非限制性定语从句。
10.How to be an outstanding student
Every student wants to be outstanding. We students are the builders and masters of the country. It is important for us to know how to be an outstanding student. An outstanding student, I think, should be diligent in his studies. The harder he studies, the more he will increase his knowledge. Without enough knowledge, we cannot make great contributions to the modernization of our country.To take care of one’s own body is another important thing for outstanding students to do. Anyone, who hasn’t got a strong body, can do nothing for his country, even if he has much knowledge. Lastly, to cultivate one’s own virtue is most important. Virtue is the essence of a noble and good character. When learned people go astray, they do more harm than good to society. We should draw lessons from this.I believe you will be excellent students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to be an outstanding student”为题写一篇短文参加学校组织的英文作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主人:master→owner
重要的:important→ significant
认为:think→consider
照顾:take care of→ look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Lastly, to cultivate one’s own virtue is most important.
拓展句:Lastly, it is most important that an outstanding student cultivates his own virtue.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone, who hasn’t got a strong body, can do nothing for his country, even if he has much knowledge. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句,even if引导让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】When learned people go astray, they do more harm than good to society. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
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