河南省平顶山市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含解析）
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河南省平顶山市三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、感谢信/祝贺信
1．（2020·河南平顶山·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信，询问你今年春节因新冠病毒肺炎( novel corona-virus)影响而延长的假期是如何度过的。请你给他回信。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的学习和生活(如上网课，锻炼等)；
3.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your,
Li Hua
二、推荐信
2．（2021·河南平顶山·统考三模）你的新西兰朋友Jack正在策划一档《走进中国》( Approaching China)栏目，请你写一封英语邮件，向他推荐一项具有代表性的中国元素一传统技艺，如剪纸、绘画等。内容包括:
1.技艺简介；
2.推荐原因。
注意:
1.格式已给出；
2.词数100左右。
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
3．（2020·河南平顶山·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom打算到北京大学学习。他对中国历史很感兴趣，但又觉得汉语言文学专业就业前景更好，向你求助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 对其到北大求学表示欢迎；
2. 推荐其中一个专业并陈述理由；
3. 期待见面。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考：汉语言文学 Chinese Language and Literature
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2021·河南平顶山·统考二模）2021年春节，中国人过地不同寻常。请你以Unusual Spring Festival为题目用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍。内容包括：
（1）就地过年；
（2）就近旅游；
（3）你如何过节。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎COVID-19
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·河南平顶山·统考一模）最近你参加了学校举行的“21天好习惯训练营”（21-day Habit Building Camp），请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你参加活动的情况。内容包括：
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动的内容（每天打篮球、跑步等并分享朋友圈）；
3. 你的收获。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：朋友圈Moments
6．（2020·河南平顶山·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Catherine听说中医(Traditional Chinese Medicine)在预防和治新冠肺炎(COVID-19)方面效果良好，想作更多了解。
请你给她写封邮件，简要介绍一下。内容包括：
1 .中医的历史
2 .中医的作用。
3. 你的看法
注意：1 词数100词左右
2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Catherine ，
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四、开放性作文
7．（2022·河南平顶山·统考二模）2022年冬奥会在北京如期举行。恰逢中国春节，来自世界各地的运动员们对中国的传统文化产生了很大的兴趣。假如你是志愿者，请选择一种文化讲给他们。内容包括：
1.介绍这种文化（比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等）；
2.这种文化特点；
3.你推荐的理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
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8．（2022·河南平顶山·宝丰县第一高级中学统考一模）某英文杂志Culture专栏准备刊登两只来自中国的大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”的照片，请你写篇短文，配发在照片旁。
内容包括：1.对大熊猫的介绍（如外貌特征、生活习性等）；
2.“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试卷第2页，共3页
试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
As we all know, the Spring Festival holiday this year was extended due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia.During the epidemic, our teachers organized online classes to minimize the loss caused by the delay.Because we are isolated at home, we use local materials and do proper indoor exercises to maintain a good mental state.
When faced with difficulties, don't be afraid to challenge yourself.I firmly believe that with the strong support of the government and the joint efforts of medical workers and people from all walks of life across the country, the epidemic will be overcome and work and study will resume as soon as possible.
Your,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信，询问你今年春节因新冠病毒肺炎( novel corona-virus)影响而延长的假期是如何度过的。请你给他回信。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.你的学习和生活(如上网课，锻炼等)；3.你的感想。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：appreciate your concern（感激你的关心）；due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（由于新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响）；organized online classes to minimize the loss caused by the delay（组织在线课程，最大限度地减少延误造成的损失）；with the strong support of the government（在政府的大力支持下）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。As we all know, the Spring Festival holiday this year was extended due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia.句中使用as引导的非限制性定语从句；the loss caused by the delay过去分词作后置定语；Because we are isolated at home, we use local materials and do proper indoor exercises to maintain a good mental state.句中because引导原因状语从句；When faced with difficulties, don't be afraid to challenge yourself.过去分词作时间状语。
2．Dear Jack,
I am very delighted to know that you are planning on a program Approaching China, which aims at introducing traditional Chinese art. I am writing to give you some advice on it.
From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy is a good choice. First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters. It is a representative of Chinese art. Besides, Chinese culture is extensive and profound, and it starts from the creation of Chinese characters, which is best reflected in various styles of calligraphy. Last but not least, Chinese culture is embedded in the spirit of calligraphy. By introducing calligraphy, you will open up the opportunity for your schoolmates and friends to learn more about Chinese culture.
I hope these suggestions will be beneficial to you.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正在策划一档《走进中国》( Approaching China)栏目的朋友Jack推荐一项具有代表性的中国传统技艺，简介推荐的技艺并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim at→ design to
观点：perspective→ point/opinion/view
独特的：unique→ distinctive
除此之外：besides→ in addition
有益的：beneficial→ useful/helpful
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy is a good choice. First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters.
拓展句：From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy which is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters is a good choice
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am very delighted to know that you are planning on a program Approaching China, which aims at introducing traditional Chinese art. (使用that引导宾语从句，which引导非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型2]Besides, Chinese culture is extensive and profound, and it starts from the creation of Chinese characters, which is best reflected in various styles of calligraphy. (使用which引导非限定性定语从句。)
3．Dear Tom,
Congratulations on your admission into Peking University. Having learnt you are puzzled about the major you’ll choose, I’d like to share my view.
There is no doubt that Chinese Language and Literature offers far wider job opportunities than History. And you must keep in mind that your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, it would be better to choose Chinese Language and Literature as your major. By the way, I can’t wait to meet you and it’s my pleasure to be your tour guide.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom打算到北京大学学习。他对中国历史很感兴趣，但又觉得汉语言文学专业就业前景更好，向你求助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 对其到北大求学表示欢迎；2. 推荐其中一个专业并陈述理由；3. 期待见面。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Peking University (北京大学)；share my view (分享我的观点)；Chinese Language and Literature (汉语言文学)；keep in mind (记住)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如There is no doubt that Chinese Language and Literature offers far wider job opportunities than History.运用同位语从句；And you must keep in mind that your university training is a preparation for your future career.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Unusual Spring Festival
In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, many people planned to live a healthy Spring Festival with friends. They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
I did my homework, played the zither, helped my mother do some housework, made dumplings and wrote the "Fu" character in winter vacation.
As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm. I believe we’ll beat COVID-19.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Unusual Spring Festival为题目用英语写一篇短文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
（1）就地过年；
（2）就近旅游；
（3）你如何过节。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
choose to; instead of; return to; plan to; pay a visit to; do one’s homework; As the saying goes
第三步：连词成句
1. In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.
2. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, many people planned to live a healthy Spring Festival with friends.
3. They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
4. I did my homework, played the zither, helped my mother do some housework, made dumplings and wrote the "Fu" character in winter vacation.
5. As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions. 这句话运用了不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型3] As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm. 这句话运用了谚语。
5． Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.
From December 1 to December 22, my school held an activity named 21-day Habit Building Camp. The activity was held on the school playground. This activity includes a lot of interesting content. First, each participant must choose a sport he likes, such as playing basketball, running and so on, and then he should insist on completing it every day, and finally he should share it in the Moments.
In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文，介绍你参加学校举行的“21天好习惯训练营”的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时，少量一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动的内容（每天打篮球、跑步等并分享朋友圈）；
3. 你的收获。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate in; hold on; and so on; insist on; develop a good exercise habit; a lot of interesting content; such as
第三步：连词成句
1.Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.
2.The activity was held on the school playground.
3.First, each participant must choose a sport he likes, such as playing basketball, running and so on, and then he should insist on completing it every day, and finally he should share it in the Moments.
4.In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.（过去分词短语作定语）
[高分句型2]In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.（表语从句的运用）
6．Dear Catherine,
I am glad to know that you would like to know about traditional Chinese medicine.Traditional Chinese medicine is extensive and profound.Now Let me tell you something about Traditional Chinese medicine.
Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) has a history of five thousand years. TCM originated in primitive society. By the Spring and Aut
umn period and warring States Period, TCM theory had been basically formed. TCM has been effective in preventing and treating COVID-19(COVID-19) during the anti-epidemic period in 2020. In my opinion, traditional Chinese medicine seems to take effect slowly, but with good effect and little harm to people's health.
The above is my simple talk about traditional Chinese medicine. I hope it will be helpful to you.
Yours，
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Catherine听说中医(Traditional Chinese Medicine)在预防和治新冠肺炎(COVID-19)方面效果良好，想作更多了解。请你给她写封邮件，简要介绍一下。内容包括：1 .中医的历史；2 .中医的作用；3. 你的看法。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Traditional Chinese medicine（中医）；have a long history（历史悠久）；during the anti-epidemic period in 2020（2020年防疫期间）；take effect slowly（缓慢生效）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。that引导的宾语从句I am glad to know that you would like to know about traditional Chinese medicine.but引导的并列句In my opinion, traditional Chinese medicine seems to take effect slowly, but with good effect and little harm to people's health.
7．Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Hearing that you take great interest in Chinese traditional culture, I’m so honored to introduce you my favorite traditional Chinese festival — the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days. There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. All family members will return to their hometowns for a traditional family reunion. People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the next fifteen days, people pay a visit to relatives and friends, giving each other their best wishes.
The most amazing thing is that we are right in the Spring Festival now. That is why I’m recommending it to you and wish you an unforgettable stay in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自世界各地的运动员介绍一种传统文化（比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等）。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：significant → important
持续：last → run
各种各样的：a variety of → all kinds of
拜访：pay a visit to → visit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival.
拓展句：There are a variety of activities that take place during the Spring Festival.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
8． The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Yuanyuan. They are so lovely. They are fat and plump like bears. Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. They have a big belly and a short tail. Living in the south of China, the giant pandas like to eat bamboos. Their favorite activity is climbing trees.
The pandas have been sent to China Taiwan as a gift by Chinese mainland. Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给即将刊登中国大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”照片的英文杂志Culture专栏，写篇短文，配发在照片旁。内容包括：对大熊猫的介绍（如外貌特征、生活习性等）；“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可爱的：lovely→cute
圆胖的：plump→chubby
巨大的：giant→big
礼物：gift→present
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Yuanyuan. They are so lovely.
拓展句：The two pandas whose names are Tuantuan and Yuanyuan are very lovely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. (运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
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一、感谢信/祝贺信
1．（2020·河南平顶山·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信，询问你今年春节因新冠病毒肺炎( novel corona-virus)影响而延长的假期是如何度过的。请你给他回信。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的学习和生活(如上网课，锻炼等)；
3.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your,
Li Hua
二、推荐信
2．（2021·河南平顶山·统考三模）你的新西兰朋友Jack正在策划一档《走进中国》( Approaching China)栏目，请你写一封英语邮件，向他推荐一项具有代表性的中国元素一传统技艺，如剪纸、绘画等。内容包括:
1.技艺简介；
2.推荐原因。
注意:
1.格式已给出；
2.词数100左右。
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
3．（2020·河南平顶山·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom打算到北京大学学习。他对中国历史很感兴趣，但又觉得汉语言文学专业就业前景更好，向你求助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 对其到北大求学表示欢迎；
2. 推荐其中一个专业并陈述理由；
3. 期待见面。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考：汉语言文学 Chinese Language and Literature
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
三、其他应用文
4．（2021·河南平顶山·统考二模）2021年春节，中国人过地不同寻常。请你以Unusual Spring Festival为题目用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍。内容包括：
（1）就地过年；
（2）就近旅游；
（3）你如何过节。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎COVID-19
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．（2021·河南平顶山·统考一模）最近你参加了学校举行的“21天好习惯训练营”（21-day Habit Building Camp），请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你参加活动的情况。内容包括：
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动的内容（每天打篮球、跑步等并分享朋友圈）；
3. 你的收获。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：朋友圈Moments
6．（2020·河南平顶山·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Catherine听说中医(Traditional Chinese Medicine)在预防和治新冠肺炎(COVID-19)方面效果良好，想作更多了解。
请你给她写封邮件，简要介绍一下。内容包括：
1 .中医的历史
2 .中医的作用。
3. 你的看法
注意：1 词数100词左右
2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Catherine ，
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四、开放性作文
7．（2022·河南平顶山·统考二模）2022年冬奥会在北京如期举行。恰逢中国春节，来自世界各地的运动员们对中国的传统文化产生了很大的兴趣。假如你是志愿者，请选择一种文化讲给他们。内容包括：
1.介绍这种文化（比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等）；
2.这种文化特点；
3.你推荐的理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
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8．（2022·河南平顶山·宝丰县第一高级中学统考一模）某英文杂志Culture专栏准备刊登两只来自中国的大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”的照片，请你写篇短文，配发在照片旁。
内容包括：1.对大熊猫的介绍（如外貌特征、生活习性等）；
2.“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
As we all know, the Spring Festival holiday this year was extended due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia.During the epidemic, our teachers organized online classes to minimize the loss caused by the delay.Because we are isolated at home, we use local materials and do proper indoor exercises to maintain a good mental state.
When faced with difficulties, don't be afraid to challenge yourself.I firmly believe that with the strong support of the government and the joint efforts of medical workers and people from all walks of life across the country, the epidemic will be overcome and work and study will resume as soon as possible.
Your,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你写信，询问你今年春节因新冠病毒肺炎( novel corona-virus)影响而延长的假期是如何度过的。请你给他回信。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.你的学习和生活(如上网课，锻炼等)；3.你的感想。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：appreciate your concern（感激你的关心）；due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（由于新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响）；organized online classes to minimize the loss caused by the delay（组织在线课程，最大限度地减少延误造成的损失）；with the strong support of the government（在政府的大力支持下）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。As we all know, the Spring Festival holiday this year was extended due to the impact of the novel coronavirus pneumonia.句中使用as引导的非限制性定语从句；the loss caused by the delay过去分词作后置定语；Because we are isolated at home, we use local materials and do proper indoor exercises to maintain a good mental state.句中because引导原因状语从句；When faced with difficulties, don't be afraid to challenge yourself.过去分词作时间状语。
2．Dear Jack,
I am very delighted to know that you are planning on a program Approaching China, which aims at introducing traditional Chinese art. I am writing to give you some advice on it.
From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy is a good choice. First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters. It is a representative of Chinese art. Besides, Chinese culture is extensive and profound, and it starts from the creation of Chinese characters, which is best reflected in various styles of calligraphy. Last but not least, Chinese culture is embedded in the spirit of calligraphy. By introducing calligraphy, you will open up the opportunity for your schoolmates and friends to learn more about Chinese culture.
I hope these suggestions will be beneficial to you.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正在策划一档《走进中国》( Approaching China)栏目的朋友Jack推荐一项具有代表性的中国传统技艺，简介推荐的技艺并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：aim at→ design to
观点：perspective→ point/opinion/view
独特的：unique→ distinctive
除此之外：besides→ in addition
有益的：beneficial→ useful/helpful
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy is a good choice. First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters.
拓展句：From my perspective, introducing Chinese calligraphy which is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters is a good choice
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am very delighted to know that you are planning on a program Approaching China, which aims at introducing traditional Chinese art. (使用that引导宾语从句，which引导非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型2]Besides, Chinese culture is extensive and profound, and it starts from the creation of Chinese characters, which is best reflected in various styles of calligraphy. (使用which引导非限定性定语从句。)
3．Dear Tom,
Congratulations on your admission into Peking University. Having learnt you are puzzled about the major you’ll choose, I’d like to share my view.
There is no doubt that Chinese Language and Literature offers far wider job opportunities than History. And you must keep in mind that your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, it would be better to choose Chinese Language and Literature as your major. By the way, I can’t wait to meet you and it’s my pleasure to be your tour guide.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom打算到北京大学学习。他对中国历史很感兴趣，但又觉得汉语言文学专业就业前景更好，向你求助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 对其到北大求学表示欢迎；2. 推荐其中一个专业并陈述理由；3. 期待见面。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Peking University (北京大学)；share my view (分享我的观点)；Chinese Language and Literature (汉语言文学)；keep in mind (记住)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如There is no doubt that Chinese Language and Literature offers far wider job opportunities than History.运用同位语从句；And you must keep in mind that your university training is a preparation for your future career.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Unusual Spring Festival
In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, many people planned to live a healthy Spring Festival with friends. They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
I did my homework, played the zither, helped my mother do some housework, made dumplings and wrote the "Fu" character in winter vacation.
As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm. I believe we’ll beat COVID-19.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Unusual Spring Festival为题目用英语写一篇短文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
（1）就地过年；
（2）就近旅游；
（3）你如何过节。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
choose to; instead of; return to; plan to; pay a visit to; do one’s homework; As the saying goes
第三步：连词成句
1. In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.
2. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, many people planned to live a healthy Spring Festival with friends.
3. They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
4. I did my homework, played the zither, helped my mother do some housework, made dumplings and wrote the "Fu" character in winter vacation.
5. As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] They went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions. 这句话运用了不定式作目的状语。
[高分句型3] As the saying goes, there must be a rainbow after a storm. 这句话运用了谚语。
5． Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.
From December 1 to December 22, my school held an activity named 21-day Habit Building Camp. The activity was held on the school playground. This activity includes a lot of interesting content. First, each participant must choose a sport he likes, such as playing basketball, running and so on, and then he should insist on completing it every day, and finally he should share it in the Moments.
In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文，介绍你参加学校举行的“21天好习惯训练营”的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时，少量一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动的时间、地点；
2. 活动的内容（每天打篮球、跑步等并分享朋友圈）；
3. 你的收获。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate in; hold on; and so on; insist on; develop a good exercise habit; a lot of interesting content; such as
第三步：连词成句
1.Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.
2.The activity was held on the school playground.
3.First, each participant must choose a sport he likes, such as playing basketball, running and so on, and then he should insist on completing it every day, and finally he should share it in the Moments.
4.In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Last month, I participated in an activity organized by the school.（过去分词短语作定语）
[高分句型2]In the past 21 days, my body has become stronger, I have made many good friends, and the most important thing is that I have developed a good exercise habit.（表语从句的运用）
6．Dear Catherine,
I am glad to know that you would like to know about traditional Chinese medicine.Traditional Chinese medicine is extensive and profound.Now Let me tell you something about Traditional Chinese medicine.
Traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) has a history of five thousand years. TCM originated in primitive society. By the Spring and Aut
umn period and warring States Period, TCM theory had been basically formed. TCM has been effective in preventing and treating COVID-19(COVID-19) during the anti-epidemic period in 2020. In my opinion, traditional Chinese medicine seems to take effect slowly, but with good effect and little harm to people's health.
The above is my simple talk about traditional Chinese medicine. I hope it will be helpful to you.
Yours，
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Catherine听说中医(Traditional Chinese Medicine)在预防和治新冠肺炎(COVID-19)方面效果良好，想作更多了解。请你给她写封邮件，简要介绍一下。内容包括：1 .中医的历史；2 .中医的作用；3. 你的看法。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Traditional Chinese medicine（中医）；have a long history（历史悠久）；during the anti-epidemic period in 2020（2020年防疫期间）；take effect slowly（缓慢生效）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。that引导的宾语从句I am glad to know that you would like to know about traditional Chinese medicine.but引导的并列句In my opinion, traditional Chinese medicine seems to take effect slowly, but with good effect and little harm to people's health.
7．Hello, everyone! Welcome to Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Hearing that you take great interest in Chinese traditional culture, I’m so honored to introduce you my favorite traditional Chinese festival — the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days. There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival. All family members will return to their hometowns for a traditional family reunion. People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the next fifteen days, people pay a visit to relatives and friends, giving each other their best wishes.
The most amazing thing is that we are right in the Spring Festival now. That is why I’m recommending it to you and wish you an unforgettable stay in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自世界各地的运动员介绍一种传统文化（比如节日、艺术、建筑、美食等）。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：significant → important
持续：last → run
各种各样的：a variety of → all kinds of
拜访：pay a visit to → visit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are a variety of activities taking place during the Spring Festival.
拓展句：There are a variety of activities that take place during the Spring Festival.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Spring Festival, which is the most significant traditional festivals in China, falls on the eve of the lunar New Year and lasts fifteen days.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] People also watch TV gala until the clock strikes 12 and then set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
8． The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Yuanyuan. They are so lovely. They are fat and plump like bears. Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. They have a big belly and a short tail. Living in the south of China, the giant pandas like to eat bamboos. Their favorite activity is climbing trees.
The pandas have been sent to China Taiwan as a gift by Chinese mainland. Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给即将刊登中国大熊猫“团团”和“圆圆”照片的英文杂志Culture专栏，写篇短文，配发在照片旁。内容包括：对大熊猫的介绍（如外貌特征、生活习性等）；“团团”和“圆圆”的名字寓意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可爱的：lovely→cute
圆胖的：plump→chubby
巨大的：giant→big
礼物：gift→present
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The two pandas are named Tuantuan and Yuanyuan. They are so lovely.
拓展句：The two pandas whose names are Tuantuan and Yuanyuan are very lovely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Look at their black eyes, as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses. (运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Their names have special meanings, which express Chinese people’s hope for the reunification of the mainland and Taiwan.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
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