河南省郑州市四年(2020-2023)高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1.(2023·河南郑州·郑州外国语学校校考模拟预测)假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom来信说, 当他了解到人工智能(AI)围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后, 他迷上了下围棋(Go), 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。要点如下:1. 最好到中国参加培训班。2. 熟能生巧,尽量在网上对进行对弈练习。3.多观看网上的围棋大赛直播。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2.可加入适当细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2020·河南郑州·统考二模)假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Bella发电子邮件向你询问我国城市生活垃圾分类回收的情况,请根据以下要点用英语给她回复。
1.你对生活垃圾分类回收的理解;
2.你们城市生活垃圾分类回收的好做法;
3.你对实施生活垃圾分类回收的看法与建议。
参考词汇:生活垃圾domestic garbage;垃圾分类garbage sorting;可回收利用的 recyclable
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Bella,
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Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
3.(2021·河南郑州·郑州市第一〇六高级中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,为全面迎接开学你市将邀请钟南山院士参加有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。请写信通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
参考词汇:COVID-19新型冠状病毒;anti-epidemic防疫
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
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三、感谢信/祝贺信
4.(2020·河南郑州·郑州一中校考一模)假定你是李华,来自武汉光明中学。在新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间,你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助了你的城市,请你写封邮件表示感谢。内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.介绍情况;
3.你的期望。
注意词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已'为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19;疫情epidemic
Dear Andy,
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Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
5.(2023·河南郑州·郑州外国语学校校考模拟预测)由于疫情(Covid-19)原因,你所在国际学校原定下周举行的生命科学周(Life Sciences Week)将改为网上进行。你受学生会委托写一则英文通知。内容包括:
1.变更原因;2.具体活动;3.期待参与。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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五、其他应用文
6.(2022·河南郑州·郑州外国语学校校考模拟预测)你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程,包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 你喜爱的课程;
2. 你的心得体会;
3. 对课程的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Hands-on Course
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7.(2022·河南郑州·郑州十九中校考模拟预测)从媒体上你得知一个名叫琳琳的四川女孩,由于疫情家庭无力让琳琳继续上学,你决定资助琳琳上学。琳琳喜欢说英语,请你用英语给她写一封信。内容包括:
1. 介绍自己及爱好;
2. 鼓励她坚持学习。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Hello Linlin,
My name is Xiao Guang and I’m really pleased to help you stay at school.
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Yours sincerely,
Xiao Guang
8.(2021·河南郑州·统考模拟预测)假设你校国际部新招收了一批留学生,为了帮助他们尽快了解中国文化,学生会请你前去同他们交流,请根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.选择中国寄宿家庭;
2.多看中文电视节目;
3.多同中国学生交流;
4.参加校汉语学习班。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.(2021·河南郑州·统考三模)假定新西兰某高中访学团打算到你校进行文化交流,请你选择一种能代表中国文化特征的符号,根据下列提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.表示欢迎;
2.你选择的文化符号及其含义;
3.你选择这种文化符号的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.(2021·河南郑州·统考二模)假定你打算参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事”(Stories of China Retold in English)的比赛,请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。
1. 你对该活动的看法;
2. 你选择的故事的梗概;
3. 你选择该故事的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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11.(2020·河南郑州·统考三模)假设你校打算为留学生举办“穿汉服,学书法”的中国传统文化体验活动,请根据以下内容以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。
1.时间:6月10日下午3点;
2.地点:留学生服务中心;
3.内容:体验穿汉服、学写毛笔字、展示作品、交流体会、拍照留念等;
4.要求:6月6日前到学生会找李华报名,并告知自己的服装尺码。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.通知的格式已为你写好,不计人总词数。
参考词汇:汉服 Han-style clothes(Hanfu);书法,毛笔字 calligraphy
Notice
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Student Union
June 3
六、图表作文
12.(2023·河南郑州·郑州外国语学校校考模拟预测)下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制,图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩。假如你是该校学生,请你以“The New Grading System in Our School”为题用英语写一篇短文,给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿。
【内容要点】
简要描述图中信息;
谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。
【写作要求】
不要逐条翻译;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
词数150左右。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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Yours
Li Jin
七、开放性作文
13.(2023·河南郑州·统考一模)假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员,该俱乐部将举办主题为“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”的交流活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,届时与大家分享。
内容包括:
1.你是怎样过这个春节的;
2.你的感受或收获是什么。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
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Thanks for listening!
14.(2022·河南郑州·郑州外国语学校校考三模)请以“one thing I’m proud of”为题,用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文,记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下:
1.记述这件事
2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示
注意:文章的标题已给出(不计词数).
One Thing I’m Proud of
15.(2022·河南郑州·统考三模)假设你校正在组织题为“Honesty(诚信)”的英语作文比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1.诚信的重要性;
2.如何做诚信的学生。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Honesty
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参考答案:
1.Dear Tom,
I am delighted to receive your letter, in which I’ve learned that you became a Go addict after knowing that Mater had defeated 60 world-class professional players and asked for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some tips for you.
To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as the proverb says, practice makes perfect. Therefore it is advisable that you play the game online as much as possible, preferably on a daily basis. Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you watch live broadcasts of international games online. Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.
I hope my advice proves useful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如考生是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom来信说, 当他了解到人工智能(AI)围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后, 他迷上了下围棋(Go), 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→ pleased
建议:advice→ suggestion
获得: acquire→ obtain
因此:therefore→ thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some tips for you.
拓展句:Here are some tips for you, which are beneficial to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.(部分倒装句)
2.Dear Bella,
Learning from your e-mail that you want to know something about domestic garbage sorting in our country, I’d like to share it with you.
Garbage sorting is not only beneficial to the environment, but can save lots of natural resources. In our city, measures have been taken. For example, various activities have been organized to stress the importance and there’re dustbins with signs for recyclable, harmful, kitchen and other waste so that citizens can know clearly where to put the garbage.
Since the measures are reasonable and favorable, we should stick to them. I hold the belief that our environment will be improved as long as we keep working together.
What’s your idea about garbage sorting Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向朋友回复有关我国城市生活垃圾分类回收的情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
要求:1.你对生活垃圾分类回收的理解;
2.你们城市生活垃圾分类回收的好做法;
3.你对实施生活垃圾分类回收的看法与建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
learn from; want to do; domestic; garbage sorting; share with; beneficial to; natural resources; take measures; various; stress; importance; dustbin; sign; recyclable; harmful; clearly; reasonable; favorable; stick to; hold the belief; improve; as long as; keep doing; one’s idea about
第三步:连词成句
1.Learning from your e-mail that you want to know something about domestic garbage sorting in our country, I’d like to share it with you.
2.Garbage sorting is not only beneficial to the environment, but can save lots of natural resources.
3.In our city, measures have been taken.
4.For example, various activities have been organized to stress the importance and there’re dustbins with signs for recyclable, harmful, kitchen and other waste so that citizens can know clearly where to put the garbage.
5.Since the measures are reasonable and favorable, we should stick to them.
6.I hold the belief that our environment will be improved as long as we keep working together.
7.What’s your idea about garbage sorting
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:Since the measures are reasonable and favorable, we should stick to them.这句话运用了since引导的原因状语从句。使用了一些固定词组,如learn from; share with; beneficial to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
3.Dear Johnny,
How are you doing these days In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. So I’m writing to tell you something about it.
As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.
I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生邀请目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加为全面迎接开学而举行的钟南山院士有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.主讲人简介;3.时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表在线演讲:give an online speech→deliver an online speech
实现:achieve→realize
鉴于、考虑到:in view of→in consideration of
当然:surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic.
拓展句:Our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic, whose purpose is to welcome the opening of the new semester.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe covid-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future. (运用了that(已省)引导宾语从句)
4.Dear Andy,
Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone. We can’t thank you too much!
Currently, everything is improving. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.
Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. I believe so!
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封感谢信,感谢你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助你的城市。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达感谢
2.介绍情况
3.你的期望
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
sums of;take measures t;do one’ parts;flood in;help sb. out
第三步:连词成句
1. Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city.
2. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness.
3. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.
4. We can’t thank you too much!
5. Currently, everything is improving.
6. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak.
7. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. 8. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.
9. Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. 10. I believe so!
11. Best wishes to you!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式,如:It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.这句话运用了强调句;使用了一些固定词组,如sums of;take measures t;do one’ parts;flood in;help sb. out等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
5.One possible version:
Notice
Due to the on-going concerns regarding COVID-19, we have decided to move our Life Sciences Week, scheduled for May 22-26, to a fully virtual experience.
Life Sciences Week is a five-day exploration of the natural world. Lectures to be delivered by distinguished professors will provide you with more insights into rare species of flora and fauna. Besides, you can watch documentaries to get a unique and intimate glimpse into the secretive lives of germs. There will also be a digital exhibition featuring students’ paintings and photographic works, where you will be awed by the beauty of our community.
The full list of events is now available at our school website. Please join us online for an exciting and rewarding experience!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则英文通知,通知原定下周举行的生命科学周(Life Sciences Week)将改为网上进行,说明变更原因,并介绍具体活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于:due to→because of
决定:decide→make up one’s mind
杰出的:distinguished→outstanding
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Due to the on-going concerns regarding COVID-19, we have decided to move our Life Sciences Week, scheduled for May 22-26, to a fully virtual experience.
拓展句:Due to the on-going concerns regarding COVID-19, we have decided to move our Life Sciences Week, which is scheduled for May 22-26, to a fully virtual experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Lectures to be delivered by distinguished professors will provide you with more insights into rare species of flora and fauna.(运用了不定式短语作后置定语)
【高分句型2】There will also be a digital exhibition featuring students’ paintings and photographic works, where you will be awed by the beauty of our community.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
6.My Favorite Hands-on Course
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students’ well-designed works and display their creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇短文,介绍自己最喜欢的劳动实践课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程:lesson→course
获得:gain→obtain
影响:influence→effect
展示:show→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
拓展句:In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school, which ranged from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sewing is one of my favorite courses, where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knitting a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience, which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.Hello Linlin,
My name is Xiao Guang and I’m really pleased to help you stay at school. I’ve heard that you love practising English so I’m also practising my English in this letter.
Let me tell you a bit about myself. I’m 16 years old and I go to No 19 Middle School in Zhengzhou. My favourite subjects at school are maths and science. I have a great group of friends that I play soccer with every lunchtime. In my spare time I like going to the movies and reading.
I hope you will keep on studying no matter how hard life is. Don’t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to stay with you. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Guang
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给一个名叫琳琳的需要资助的同时喜欢说英语的四川女孩写信介绍自己的情况同时对她进行鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最喜欢的:favourite→best-loved
高兴的:pleased→happy
继续:keep on→continue
随便,自由做:feel free to→be free to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my spare time I like going to the movies and reading.
拓展:I like going to the movies and reading when I have spare time .
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I hope you will keep on studying no matter how hard life is.(使用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句。)
【高分句型2】I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
8.One possible version:
Good afternoon, dear friends! Welcome to our school! I feel very honored to share with you how to learn about Chinese culture as soon as possible.
As is known to all, China has a long history and rich culture, so you can choose to stay with the host family to experience Chinese culture. Besides, it’s quite useful to watch Chinese TV programs, which will help to open your eyes. Meanwhile, the more you communicate with Chinese students, the more you’ll learn about China. Also, taking our Chinese classes is a good idea. Not only can your Chinese be improved, but you can enjoy a colorful life here. Hope these ideas will be helpful. Have great fun here! Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿,告诉新招收的一批留学生尽快了解中国文化的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose→select
此外:besides→what’s more
帮助:help→assist
提高:improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Also, taking our Chinese classes is a good idea.
拓展句:Also, taking our Chinese classes is a good idea, which can help you a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As is known to all, China has a long history and rich culture, so you can choose to stay with the host family to experience Chinese culture.(as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Not only can your Chinese be improved, but you can enjoy a colorful life here.(not only置于句首,使用部分倒装)
9.Good morning, dear friends! Welcome to our school for a cultural exchange!
Today I’d like to introduce to you China’s tai chi. It’s a popular activity that contains Chinese culture about inner peace and harmony. If you walk through a park in the morning, you’ll see a series of beautiful movements performed in a slow, focused manner with deep breathing. I often practice tai chi after class and have benefited much from it. For me, it’s not just a sport to make me fit, but also a way of life that can make me peaceful.
I hope we’ll learn about each other and become friends through this cultural communication. Enjoy your stay here and have great fun! Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生选择一种能代表中国文化特征的符号写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
过得愉快:have great fun→enjoy oneself
获益:benefit→gain
健康的:fit→healthy
平静的:peaceful→calm
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Today I’d like to introduce to you China’s tai chi. It’s a popular activity that contains Chinese culture about inner peace and harmony.
拓展句:Today I’d like to introduce to you China’s tai chi, which is a popular activity that contains Chinese culture about inner peace and harmony.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a popular activity that contains Chinese culture about inner peace and harmony. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] For me, it’s not just a sport to make me fit, but also a way of life that can make me peaceful. (运用了“not just...but also...”固定句型)
10.I hear that our school holds a competition called “Stories of China Retold in English”. I’m very curious and looking forward to it.
Personally, this activity can kill two birds with one stone. It not only allows students to improve their English skills, but also learns many Chinese stories that they may not know. As far as I’m concerned, I intend to tell stories about Beijing Olympics, including the applying process and the final victory. The reason why I choose it is that it is a historical event with a sense of honor. Looking back on the enthusiasm and expectation of people at that time, the memory is a kind of great happiness.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生为参加学校组织的“用英语讲中国故事” 写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:promote→improve
打算做:plan to do→intend to do
胜利:success→victory
选择:select→choose
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As far as I’m concerned, I intend to tell stories about Beijing Olympics, including the applying process and the final victory
拓展句:As far as I’m concerned, I intend to tell stories about Beijing Olympics, which include the applying process and the final victory
【点睛】[高分句型1] It not only allows students to improve their English skills, but also learns many Chinese stories that they may not know. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The reason why I choose it is that it is a historical event with a sense of honor. (运用了why引导的定语从句;运用了that引导的表语从句)
11.Notice
To help overseas students experience traditional Chinese culture, our school is going to organize an activity called “Wearing Hanfu and Learning Calligraphy” at 3:00 p.m. on June 10th at the International Student Service Center.
During the activity, you can not only wear Han-style clothes, but also learn how to write calligraphy with a Chinese brush, and then, you have a chance to display your handwriting. What’s more, you can share your feelings with others and take photos for memory. If you’re fond of the activity, please sign up with Li Hua at the Student Union and tell your clothing size before June 6th.
Don’t miss such a good chance. You’re sure to benefit a lot from this activity.
Student Union
June 3
【分析】本篇书面表达是一则通知。假设你校打算为留学生举办“穿汉服,学书法”的中国传统文化体验活动,请根据以下内容以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点:1.时间:6月10日下午3点;2.地点:留学生服务中心;3.内容:体验穿汉服、学写毛笔字、展示作品、交流体会、拍照留念等;4.要求:6月6日前到学生会找李华报名,并告知自己的服装尺码。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有:help overseas students experience traditional Chinese culture,be going to organize an activity, not only wear Han-style clothes, but also learn how to write calligraphy,Chinese brush,have a chance to display your handwriting,share your feelings with others,take photos for memory,be fond of the activity,sign up with Li Hua at the Student Union,tell your clothing size,a good chance,be sure to,benefit a lot from this activity。可以使用的衔接词:1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词:either…or…,neither…nor,or,as well as…,both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词:therefore,so,as a result,as a result of …,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词:then,later,meanwhile,at the beginning,in the end,before long,as soon as,at first,for the first(second…)time,the minute,the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词:yet,but,while,on the contrary,on the other hand,however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词:that is,that is to say,in other words,such as,for instance,and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词:not only…but (also),what’s more,what’s worse,besides,in addition,worse still,moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词:in a word,on the whole,in short,briefly,in brief,to sum up,in all等。
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句: If you’re fond of the activity, please sign up with Li Hua at the Student Union and tell your clothing size before June 6th.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了一些固定词组,如:share sth with sb,be fond of,sign up, benefit from。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
12.The New Grading System in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.
Students’ test results, which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school, make up only 30% of his final score. Instead, how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%. Besides, teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.
I’m all for the new grading system, which evaluates us students in all fields. By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and can truly make preparations for our future life.
【详解】本文是图表类作文。提纲类作文是在题干中把作文要讨论的问题或者现象直接用文字表述出来。而图表作文是把问题或者现象用图表反映出来,要求我们把图表看懂,并用文字叙述出来,才能对这个问题或现象展开讨论。饼状图表多数用来表示各种事物在总数百分之一百中所占的各自比例。
【范文亮点】
首先,本文结构合理,语篇连贯,内容完整。本文借助于题目The New Grading System in Our School,可以看出图表呈现的是新的评分系统各项评分标准的权重。
本文的重点段落客观地解释了图表传递的信息,通过数据之间的对比分析Students’ test results…make up only 30% of his final score. … ,… how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%,得出结论:If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates。
最后一段表明自己的看法I’m all for the new grading system,并说明原因By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities…and can truly make preparations for our future life。
其次,本文语言运用熟练,用词准确,尤其是定语从句、主语从句、条件状语从句等复合句的穿插使用,使得文章长短错落有层次,增强了可读性。
13. Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
On New Year’s Eve, my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching the Spring Festival Gala. When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily. Additionally, I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills. After all, the Spring Festival is important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.
Thanks for listening!
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生以“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”为主题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
敲击:struck→hit
燃放:set off→let off
翻修:decorated→renovate
张贴:put up→post
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills.
拓展句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, during which I learned lots of life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
14.I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed by how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect.”
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生以“one thing I’m proud of”为题记述一件自己认为得意的事情。
【详解】词汇积累
惊奇:amazed→surprised
实现:realize→achieve
训练:practice→train
决心做:be determined to do = make up one's mind to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Amazed by how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.
拓展句:I was so amazed by how skillful they were that I was determined to be just as good.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句)
15.Honesty
Honesty, considered as a good virtue, is always admired. Honest people win respect while a liar is looked down upon because dishonesty results in distrust and even ruins his or her reputation. The saying, “Honesty is the best policy”, expresses the importance of honesty.
So how to be an honest student Firstly, don’t copy others’ homework or cheat in the exams. Besides, carry out your promise and try to do things well. More importantly, speak the truth and never tell lies. Only in this way can you make progress in your studies and make more friends.
If you’re honest with others, you’ll be treated the same way. I’m firmly convinced an honest student is bound to have a bright future.
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇题为“Honesty(诚信)”的英语作文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
认为…是…:consider…as→think of…as
看不起:look down upon→think poorly of
导致:result in→lead to
此外:Besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Honesty, considered as a good virtue, is always admired.
拓展句:Honesty, which is considered as a good virtue, is always admired.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Honest people win respect while a liar is looked down upon because dishonesty results in distrust and even ruins his or her reputation.(由because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can you make progress in your studies and make more friends.(由only+状语引导的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型3】If you’re honest with others, you’ll be treated the same way.(由if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型4】I’m firmly convinced an honest student is bound to have a bright future.(由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
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