黑龙江省大庆市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）

黑龙江省大庆市四年（2020-2023）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2020·黑龙江大庆·大庆实验中学校考三模）假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Terry将参加当地中国文化展志愿者的应聘，发邮件向你询问有关面试的注意事项，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.到达时间；
2.中式着装；
3.面试礼仪。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Terry,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．（2020·黑龙江大庆·大庆一中校考三模）假如你是李华,你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何保持身体健康,请你根据以下要点提示用英文给他回信。
要点提示：
1 对Jane表示关切；
2 提出合理建议；
3 期望Jane的不适状况早日好转。
字数：100词左右（可适当增加细节）。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
二、申请信
3．（2023·黑龙江大庆·统考一模）假定你是李华，你所在的城市即将举行一场国际马拉松比赛，主办方正在招募（recruit）志愿者。请你给外籍负责人Mr Smith写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1．陈述写信目的；
2．表明个人优势；
3．展示自己的决心。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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三、邀请信
4．（2021·黑龙江大庆·大庆实验中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校外教Mr. Smith将就“How to stay safe on line”进行一场英文讲座。请你以校英语俱乐部的名义，用英语写一则通知，邀请同学们踊跃参加。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Notice
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四、感谢信/祝贺信
5．（2022·黑龙江大庆·大庆中学校考二模）假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意；
2. 个人感受；
3. 表达信心。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi.
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五、告知信/通知
6．（2022·黑龙江大庆·统考模拟预测）你校英语俱乐部将于下周五举办英语演讲比赛。请你用英语代写一则通知，内容包括:
1.比赛的目的和奖励;
2.报名方式和截止日期；
3.鼓励大家参赛。注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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六、其他应用文
7．（2023·黑龙江大庆·统考二模）你校英文报将以“三月十二日中国植树节(National Tree Planting Day)”为主题，举行征文比赛。请写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍植树节；
2. 说明树木的重要性；
3. 呼吁履行植树义务。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Planting Trees for our Future
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8．（2022·黑龙江大庆·大庆实验中学校考模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华，你正在参加一个国际高中生论坛，大家邀请你就自己未来的职业规划发表演讲，内容包括：
1.未来希望从事的职业；
2.选择该职业的原因(从社会，个人等角度)；
3.打算为之做何准备。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone.
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Thanks for listening.
9．（2021·黑龙江大庆·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校决定下周日去附近的农村探望留守儿童。请你写封邮件给外教Mr.Smith，邀请他一同前往，内容包括：
1.出发时间和集合地点；
2.活动安排：做游戏，分发礼物等；
3.注意事项：自备水和食物。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．（2021·黑龙江大庆·统考二模）高考在即，你校学生会正在组织以“认识自我，发展自我”为主题的英语作文比赛。请以我的未来专业设想为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.专业方向；
2.选择理由；
3.如何准备。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
题目:My Future Major
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11．（2021·黑龙江大庆·大庆实验中学校考模拟预测）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jason来信询问你最喜欢的中国古代作家，请给他写一封回信。信的内容包括：
1.作家简介；
2.你喜爱他/她的原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．（2021·黑龙江大庆·大庆中学校考一模）假定你是李华，为了帮助贫困地区的学生，上周日你校举办了募集旧衣物的活动。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你的感悟。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Activity of Collecting Used Clothes
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13．（2021·黑龙江大庆·铁人中学校考一模）根据所给材料完成一篇120单词以内的英语作文：
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球/碰撞/争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因 1.遇事不够冷静
2.……
谈谈避免冲突的做法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)
14．（2021·黑龙江大庆·铁人中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了换书阅读活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动情况；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右：
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．（2021·黑龙江大庆·铁人中学校考三模）假定你是李华，正在给你的美国笔友Henry写邮件，向他介绍在母亲节那一天你帮妈妈做了些家务并亲自做了小礼物。同时，询问他是如何给他的妈妈庆祝母亲节的。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
16．（2021·黑龙江大庆·校联考二模）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友George来信，询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 正在认真备考；
2.学医学专业；
3.报考理由。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．（2021·黑龙江大庆·统考一模）十月末，你和同学一起参加了学校举办的金秋音乐会。请你为校英语报写一篇短文，介绍这次音乐会，内容包括：
1.基本情况；
2.演出过程；
3.个人感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
题目： A Wonderful Golden Autumn Concert
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18．（2020·黑龙江大庆·统考三模）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Peter给你发邮件，表示想了解有关中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)的知识及其学习方法。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验，口头传承)；
2. 中国谚语的特点(简短而富有意义)
3. 实用的学习方法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．（2020·黑龙江大庆·大庆实验中学校考一模）假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友Peter的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID-19 epidemic）期间线上教学的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 课程与时间；2. 你的学习状态；3. 你的期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days.
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
七、读后续写
20．（2023·黑龙江大庆·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I remember one Thanksgiving when our family had no money or food, and someone came knocking on our door. A man was standing there with a huge box of food and even some pans to cook it in. The stranger announced, “I’m here because a friend of yours knows you’re in need and that you wouldn’t accept direct help, so I’ve brought this for you. Have a great Thanksgiving.”
Obviously that experience had a great impact on my life. I promised myself that someday I would do well financially so that I could do the same thing. By the time I was 18, I had created my Thanksgiving routine. I would go out shopping and buy enough food for one or two families. Then I would dress like a delivery boy, go to the poorest neighborhood and just knock on a door. I have received more from this than I have from any amount of money I’ve ever earned.
Several years ago, I was in New York City with my wife during Thanksgiving. When I told her what I always do on Thanksgiving, she got excited. I said, “Let’s go someplace where we can really appreciate who we are. How about Harlem ” Some of my colleagues also joined us.
I suggested we start by getting a van (面包车) to drive us to Harlem. We tried waiting by the light, went over and knocked on the window and the driver would roll it down, and I’d say, “Today is Thanksgiving. Would you be willing to drive us to Harlem to feed some people ” Every time the driver would look away quickly and pull away without saying anything.
Eventually we got better at asking. We’d say, “Today is Thanksgiving. We’d like to help some less fortunate people, and we’re curious if you’d be willing to drive us to an area in our mind.” That seemed slightly more effective but still didn’t work. Then we started offering people $100 to drive us. That got us even closer, but when we told them to take us to Harlem, they said no and drove off.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We had talked to about two dozen people who all said no.
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We climbed into the perfect van with great joy.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Terry,
Knowing that you have decided to apply to be a volunteer for the local Chinese Culture Exhibition, I’m more than delighted to offer you some advice.
To begin with, according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness. What’s more, you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China. Additionally, when interviewed, you are supposed to be on your best behaviour, thus showing your good personal qualities and manners.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help for you. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，介绍有关中国文化展志愿者的面试的注意事项。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明可以提供一些建议
2. 明确面试的注意事项
1）到达时间；
2）中式着装；
3) 面试礼仪。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
decide to do; apply to be; the local Chinese Culture Exhibition; more than; To begin with; according to; What’s more; had better do; express; Additionally; interview; be supposed to do; personal qualities and manners; look forward to.
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you have decided to apply to be a volunteer for the local Chinese Culture Exhibition, I’m more than delighted to offer you some advice.
2. according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness.
3. you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China.
4. when interviewed, you are supposed to be on your best behaviour, thus showing your good personal qualities and manners.
5.Could you please give me a brief introduction of this dance
6. Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help for you.
7. Looking forward to your good news.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：you’d better wear traditional Chinese clothes through which you express your love for China.这句话运用了 介词+which引导的宾语从句。so that引导的目的状语从句To begin with, according to our tradition, it is recommended to arrive a little earlier than scheduled time so that you will impress the interviewers with your politeness. 使用了一些固定词组，如had better do，be supposed to do，look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Jane,
I'm delighted to hear from you, but sorry to have learned you aren't feeling well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you’d better keep a balanced diet. It can be beneficial to avoid eating food high in fat or with too much sugar. Instead, have more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps a lot to build up a strong body. As is known, regular exercise, such as jogging, is an essential approach to keeping fit. Finally, I wonder if you always stay up late at night. If so, please get rid of this habit, for never will we be healthy without enough sleep.
All these count a lot for keeping your body at a proper weight and staying healthy. I truly hope you will find my advice helpful and get well soon.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给笔友写信，就如何保持身体健康提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 寒暄关怀（caring about）
2. 提出建议（give advice）
1）饮食平衡（balanced diet）
2）锻炼身体（exercise）
3）作息规律（regular schedule）
4. 良好祝愿（best wishes）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
feel well；keep a balanced diet；be good for；build up；a way to；work out；as soon as possible；get better
第三步：连词成句
1. Sorry to have known you are feeling bad.
2. Let me share some advice about how to keep healthy.
3. You need to keep a balanced diet.
4. Exercise regularly is also very important.
5. Don’t forget having a regular schedule, which means going to bed and get up early.
6. Hope these can help you and wish you get better as soon as possible.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，内容完整，要点全面，并适当增加了细节，使行文更加饱满充实。作者在范文中使用了一些高级句式，如：If so, please get rid of this habit, for never will we be healthy without enough sleep这句话运用了倒装；Finally, I wonder if you always stay up late at night这句话运用了if引导的宾语从句。也使用了一些词组，如be delighted to，as is known，get rid of等。
3．One possible version:
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is Li Hua. I have heard that you’re recruiting some volunteers for the Marathon Race, so I’d like to recommend myself.
Above all, I’m good at English, especially spoken English. Thus, I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently, which is my first advantage. Next, I am warm—hearted, so I really like to help those in need. What’s more, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever will take part in the race.
If you can give me an opportunity, I won’t let you down. I’ll serve the event with all my heart and soul.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍负责人Mr Smith写一封自荐信，申请当你所在的城市即将举行的一场国际马拉松比赛的志愿者，内容包括：1．陈述写信目的；2．表明个人优势；3．展示自己的决心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：Thus→hence
提供：offer→provide
机会：opportunity→chance
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Next, I am warm—hearted, so I really like to help those in need.
拓展句：Next, I am warm—hearted, so I really like to help those who are in need of help.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thus, I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently, which is my first advantage. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I promise I will offer the best service to whoever will take part in the race. (运用了whoever引导的宾语从句)
4．Notice
As we all know, our life is becoming more and more dependent on the Internet and along with the trend some problems occur concerning online safety. To help students to deal with such issues better, a lecture called “How to stay safe online” is going to be delivered by Mr. Smith next Friday afternoon in the Great Hall. The lecture will start at 2 pm and will last for 45 minutes. If you have any questions about online safety, you can ask Mr. Smith when he finishes his speech. Anyone interested in this topic is welcome to attend the lecture.
The English Club
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校外教Mr. Smith将就“How to stay safe on line”进行一场英文讲座。要求考生以校英语俱乐部的名义，用英语写一则通知，邀请同学们踊跃参加。
【详解】词汇积累
依靠：become dependent on→ depend on/rely on
发生：occur→ happen/take place
处理：deal with→ handle
参加：attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Anyone interested in this topic is welcome to attend the lecture.
拓展句：Anyone who is interested in this topic is welcome to attend the lecture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help students to deal with such issues better, a lecture called “How to stay safe online” is going to be delivered by Mr. Smith next Friday afternoon in the Great Hall. (运用了不定式作目的状语和过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] If you have any questions about online safety, you can ask Mr. Smith when he finishes his speech. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
5．Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi. I’m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Coronavirus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
不顾一切地：desperately→profoundly
拯救：rescue→save
增强：build up→enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
拓展句：I firmly believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)
6．One possible version:
Notice
In order to improve students’ spoken English and arouse their interest in studying English, an English speech contest organized by the English Club of our school will be held next Friday. It is said that there will be lots of prizes for the winners, including notebooks, pens and dictionaries. If you are interested in the activity, please come to the English Club to sign up before next Thursday. You have to fill in a form and write down your name and the topic of your speech.
It's a good chance for you to show your talent and you will learn a lot. So don't be e to join in it.
The English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一则举办英语演讲比赛的通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多：lots of→plenty of
报名参加：sign up→enter
写下：write down→set down
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You have to fill in a form and write down your name and the topic of your speech.
拓展句：You have to fill in a form where you write down your name and the topic of your speech.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is said that there will be lots of prizes for the winners, including notebooks, pens and dictionaries.（that引导主语从句，it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】It's a good chance for you to show your talent and you will learn a lot.（运用了不定式作主语，it作形式主语）
7．One possible version 1:
Planting Trees for our Future
National Tree Planting Day is held on March 12 every year, when millions of volunteers, both young and old, plant trees in schools, parks, city gardens and the countryside.
As we all know, trees are very important not only to the environment but also to humans. From improving air quality to fighting against climate change, trees play a vital role. In addition, they provide habitats and food for many species of wildlife.
Therefore, we each should do our bit by participating in voluntary tree planting activity. With perseverance and accumulated efforts, we will be able to make the environment better.
One possible version 2:
Planting Trees for our Future
National Tree Planting Day takes place on March 12 every year, when millions of volunteers, both young and old, plant trees in schools, parks, city gardens and the countryside.
As is known to us, trees are very significant to the environment and humans. They play a vital role in enhancing air quality and battling against climate change. Besides, trees supply habitats and food for numerous species of wildlife.
Thus, we each should take an active part in voluntary tree planting activity to do our bit. With perseverance and joint efforts, we will be able to make the environment better.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“三月十二日中国植树节（National Tree Planting Day）”为主题，写一篇短文，内容包括：简要介绍植树节；说明树木的重要性； 呼吁履行植树义务。
【详解】1.词汇积累
至关重要的：vital→very important
此外：In addition→Besides
提供给某人某物：provide sth. for sb.→provide sb. with sth.
因此：Therefore→Thus
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With perseverance and accumulated efforts, we will be able to make the environment better.
拓展句：With perseverance and accumulated efforts, we will be able to make the environment better, benefiting ourselves and our generations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] National Tree Planting Day is held on March 12 every year, when millions of volunteers, both young and old, plant trees in schools, parks, city gardens and the countryside.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As we all know, trees are very important not only to the environment but also to humans. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．Hello everyone, it is my great honor and pleasure to share with you my ideas on future career plan. As we all know, our future career has a great effect on our life, which requires our deep consideration.
As for me, I am determined to be a computer scientist in the future. There are several reasons for my choice. Firstly, I have been interested in computer science since I was a little boy and have spent a lot of time on self-teaching. I can say for sure that I am highly expert at computer knowledge. More importantly, computer science is closely related to most fields of science and has a deciding role in one country’s overall development. I am willing to combine my career with our country’s development and make my contributions.
To conclude, I have already made up my minds to study it with all my efforts and make use of all my spare time to learn related knowledge to prepare for my university study.
Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲类作文。要求考生对于参加的国际高中生论坛，就自己未来的职业规划发表演讲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：honor→ privilege
影响：effect→ influence
最后：to conclude→ in conclusion
下定决心：make up one’s minds to→ be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：More importantly, computer science is closely related to most fields of science and has a deciding role in one country’s overall development.
拓展句：More importantly, computer science is closely related to most fields of science, which has a deciding role in one country’s overall development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, our future career has a great effect on our life, which requires our deep consideration. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, I have been interested in computer science since I was a little boy and have spent a lot of time on self-teaching. (运用了since引导的时间状语从句)
9．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith.
There will be an activity organized by our school and I want to invite you to join in it. We will go to a nearby village to visit some children whose parents have left them to earn money in cities. Gathering at the gate of our school, we will set out at 8 am next Sunday.
To my delight, we will have a chance to play games with the children and give away some gifts to them. We will stay there for a whole day, so it's necessary for you to bring some water and food. I believe it will be a meaningful activity, so please join us and help the children together.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写信，邀请他下周日一同去附近的农村探望留守儿童。
【详解】1.词汇积累
乡村：countryside→village
挣钱：make money→earn money
使某人高兴的是：to one's joy→to one's delight
机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To my delight, we will have a chance to play games with the children and give away some gifts to them.
拓展句：What delights me is that a chance will be provided for us to play games with the children and give away some gifts to them.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We will go to a nearby village to visit some children whose parents have left them to earn money in cities.（运用了whose引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I believe it will be a meaningful activity, so please join us and help the children together.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
10．One possible version:
My Future Major
With graduation approaching, I can’t help considering my college major. As a science student, I show a great interest in physics. Chances are that I will take it as my major.
As is known to all, physics plays an important part in the development of our country. Therefore, by majoring in physics, not only can I satisfy my personal interest but also contribute to the scientific and technological progress of China. Moreover, physics will help me have a deeper understanding of how the world works, fostering my creativity and critical thinking ability.
For now, to get fully prepared for my dream major, abundant basic knowledge is essential. Furthermore, I’ll try various ways to broaden my view in physics, for example, reading understandable physics journals.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以我的未来专业设想为题，写一篇短文参加学校组织的以“认识自我，发展自我”为主题作文比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
禁不住：can’t stand→can’t help
机会：opportunity→chance
此外：besides→moreover
帮助：assist→help
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As a science student, I show a great interest in physics. Chances are that I will take it as my major.
拓展句：As a science student, I show a great interest in physics, so chances are that I will take it as my major.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, physics plays an important part in the development of our country. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Moreover, physics will help me have a deeper understanding of how the world works, fostering my creativity and critical thinking ability.(运用了how引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作状语)
11．Dear Jason,
How have you been recently Seeing you showing interest in my favorite ancient Chinese writer in your last letter, I feel pleased to introduce the great novelist Cao Xueqin to you.
Cao is one of the most famous novelists and poets in the history of Chinese literature, who was born in a wealthy family. However, it was the suffering of his family in his later life that inspired him to write Dream of the Red Chamber, which, as for me, is unquestionably the most influential classical Chinese literary work. With the detailed description and appealing plot, this book has touched my soul again and again.
So would you share with me something about your favorite American writer
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，是提纲类作文。要求考生给美国朋友Jason写一封信，向他简单介绍自己最喜欢的中国古代作家，并说明喜欢这个作家的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→pleased
富裕的：rich→wealthy
鼓舞：encourage→inspire
有吸引力的：attractive →appealing
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Cao is one of the most famous novelists and poets in the history of Chinese literature. He was born in a wealthy family.
拓展句：Cao is one of the most famous novelists and poets in the history of Chinese literature, who was born in a wealthy family.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Seeing you showing interest in my favorite ancient Chinese writer in your last letter, I feel pleased to introduce the great novelist Cao Xueqin to you.（运用了非谓语动词seeing作状语）
[高分句型2] However, it was the suffering of his family in his later life that inspired him to write Dream of the Red Chamber, which, as for me, is unquestionably the most influential classical Chinese literary work.（运用了强调句结构，运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
12．An Activity of Collecting Used Clothes
Last weekend, our school held an activity of collecting students' used clothes with the purpose of helping the students in poor areas.
In order to organize it successfully, we made full preparations. First, we collected various used clothes which were still in good condition and sorted out the thick ones. Second, with enough clothes, the monitor in each class called the express company to send our parcels.
All the clothes we collected will play a role in helping the poor families against the cold weather. It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next chance of charity.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就为了帮助贫困地区的学生举办的募集旧衣物的活动写一篇短文，谈谈此活动的目的、过程和自己的感悟。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时、现在进行时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动的目的；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你的感悟。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
with the purpose of doing sth.; make full preparations; in good condition; sort out; play a role in doing sth.; look forward to sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. Last weekend, our school held an activity of collecting students' used clothes with the purpose of helping the students in poor areas.
2. In order to organize it successfully, we made full preparations.
3. First, we collected various used clothes which were still in good condition and sorted out the thick ones.
4. All the clothes we collected will play a role in helping the poor families against the cold weather.
5. It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next chance of charity.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second
2.表因果关系：such…that…
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, we collected various used clothes which were still in good condition and sorted out the thick ones.用了which引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next chance of charity. 用了such…that…（如此……以至于……）引导的结果状语从句。
13．Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文，就你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张问题向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
碰到：bump into→knock against
开始：start→begin
事实上：as a matter of fact→in fact
体贴的：considerate→thoughtful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
拓展句：Then they started shouting and yelling, which afterwards turned into a horrible quarrel.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
14．Book exchange on campus
A book-exchange activity was held last Friday afternoon on the playground with the aim of inspiring an interest in reading among students on campus.
More than 1,000 students took part in the activity. We brought our books along for exchanging with others. The books covered a wide variety of subjects and content, ranging from traditional Chinese tales to western classics. During the activity, we also exchanged ideas about the books to read and shared the feelings while reading.
We believed that we all benefited from the activity and it served as a stage for young people to find their books and meet new friends with the same interest.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就上周五你校举办的换书阅读活动，写一篇相关报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：aim→purpose
激励：inspire→encourage
参加：take part in = participate in
种类繁多的：a wide variety of = all kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A book-exchange activity was held last Friday afternoon on the playground with the aim of inspiring an interest in reading among students on campus.
拓展句：A book-exchange activity was held last Friday afternoon on the playground, whose aim is to inspire an interest in reading among students on campus.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The books covered a wide variety of subjects and content, ranging from traditional Chinese tales to western classics. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] We believed that we all benefited from the activity and it served as a stage for young people to find their books and meet new friends with the same interest. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
15．Dear Henry,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I spent Mother’s Day. Now I’m writing to tell you about it.
I gave my mom a big surprise on that day. Firstly, I bought a cook book last week so that I could learn how to cook the dishes. Luckily, my mother thought highly of the food I cooked. What’s more, I cleaned the room and washed the clothes. Last but not least, I made a small gift for my mom and she liked it very much.
Can you tell me how you celebrated Mother’s Day for your mother I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Henry写一封邮件，向他介绍你是如何给妈妈庆祝母亲节的，并询问他是如何给他的妈妈庆祝母亲节的。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时，少量一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 向笔友介绍你是如何给妈妈庆祝母亲节的；
2. 询问笔友是如何给他的妈妈庆祝母亲节的。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be glad to do sth.; tell sb. about sth.; think highly of…; clean the room; wash the clothes; look forward to…
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I spent Mother’s Day.
2. I bought a cook book last week so that I could learn how to cook the dishes.
3. Luckily, my mother thought highly of the food I cooked.
4. I made a small gift for my mom and she liked it very much.
5. Can you tell me how you celebrated Mother’s Day for your mother
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：firstly, last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：what’s more, and
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me how I spent Mother’s Day. （由“介词in+关系代词which”引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Firstly, I bought a cook book last week so that I could learn how to cook the dishes. （由so that引导的目的状语从句）
16．Dear George,
I hope you’re doing well. Receiving your letter is such a refresh since I’m fully engaged in preparing for the exam.
As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldn’t be taken lightly. But being able to cure people or even save people’s lives is so rewarding. Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health. Besides, doctors are highly respected in China and in great demand too, especially highly qualified professionals.
Sincerely hope my dream will come true soon. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华。你的英国朋友George来信，询问你的近况及上大学准备报考什么专业。 请你回复邮件介绍相关情况。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 正在认真备考；2.学医学专业；3.报考理由。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：receive your letter， be fully engaged in preparing for the exam， As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term
commitment and a decision that shouldn’t be taken lightly. Being able to cure people or even save people’s lives is so rewarding. be faced with much stress， passion about healthcare， be highly respected， in great demand ，highly qualified professionals， come true。可以使用的衔接词：(1)表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。(2)表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。(3)表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，at the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。(4)表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。(5)表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。(6)表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。(7)表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： As for my major, I will choose Medicine, which, I know, is a long-term commitment and a decision that shouldn’t be taken lightly. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；Though doctors are faced with much stress, my passion about healthcare and helping people tells me that I cannot go wrong with studying and working in Medicine and Health. 这句话运用了though引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：be fully engaged in， prepare for， as for， be faced with ，in great demand。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
17．Possible version:
A Wonderful Golden Autumn Concert
The golden autumn concert that we had been looking forward to was held in our school stadium on Saturday morning, October16th. It started at 8：30, lasting about three hours.
At first, our headmaster gave the opening speech and then the hosts announced the performances began. All performances were given by our school students and teachers. There were Chinese classical music, western music, modern dance, popular songs and so on. Our monitor played a piece of classical Chinese music with the Guzheng, which won loud applause. The modern dance performed by the young teachers pushed the concert to the climax and the concert ended with applause and cheers.
After the concert, we felt excited. Not only did it offer us relief from study pressure but also lifted our spirits.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为学校英语报写一篇短文，介绍和同学一起参加的音乐会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍音乐会的基本情况；
2. 说明演出过程；
3. 描述个人感受。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
look forward to；give the opening speech；win loud applause；push the concert to the climax；end with applause and cheers；offer us relief from study pressure；lift our spirits
第三步：连词成句
1.The golden autumn concert that we had been looking forward to was held in our school stadium on Saturday morning, October16 th.
2.At first, our headmaster gave the opening speech and then the hosts announced the performances began.
3.Our monitor played a piece of classical Chinese music with the Guzheng, which won loud applause.
4.The modern dance performed by the young teachers pushed the concert to the climax and the concert ended with applause and cheers.
5.Not only did it offer us relief from study pressure but also lifted our spirits.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：At first
2.表并列补充关系：Not only…but (also）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]The golden autumn concert that we had been looking forward to was held in our school stadium on Saturday morning, October16th.（that引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Not only did it offer us relief from study pressure but also lifted our spirits.（部分倒装句）
18．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to have received your email. Knowing that want to learn about Chinese proverbs and their learning methods. I am writing to tell you something about them.
As part of the traditional Chinese culture. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience. They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by people and are passed on orally generation by generation. As for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I suggest that you find some relevant materials online, which may give you specific explanations. Additionally, it is beneficial to recite the proverbs every day, and you can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.
I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向外国朋友介绍有关中国谚语的知识和学习方法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 表明邮件意图
2. 介绍中国谚语
1）中国谚语的由来
2）中国谚语的特点
3. 介绍学习方法
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Chinese proverbs；learn about；learning method；traditional Chinese culture；wisdom and experience；pass on；orally；meaningful
第三步：连词成句
1. Glad to know you want to learn about Chinese proverbs.
2. Let me make an introduction of it and its learning method.
3. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience and they are part of traditional Chinese culture.
4. Chinese proverbs are brief but meaningful generally.
5. They are passed on orally generation by generation.
6. If you are looking for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I’d recommend you find some information on the Internet.
7. Hope these things that I say can help.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：As for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I suggest that you find some relevant materials online, which may give you specific explanations.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be beneficial to；pass on；apply to等。文中没有中式英语的句式，整体思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
19．Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days. Knowing that you are extremely concerned about how the online course works, I’m writing to tell you some detailed information.
As you know, with the COVID-19 epidemic breaking out in China, we are informed of taking online classes at home instead of going back to school. The online lessons begin at 7:00 am and end at 5:00 pm, with each lesson lasting 40 minutes. To avoid eye strain, we only have six lessons every day, leaving enough time for self-study. At the beginning, the online learning was totally fresh to me and I found it hard to concentrate on study. So I kept telling myself not to be anxious but to be disciplined and now I get used to it by continuously adjusting myself.
Although online teaching can offer us an effective and convenient way of learning, undoubtedly, I still hope the epidemic will end soon and that I can come back to enjoy my school life! Besides, I hope you can be safe and sound as well.
Best wishes，
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件，告知新冠疫情期间线上教学的情况。
【详解】第一步：
审题: 邮件 告知新冠疫情期间线上教学的情况
人称：第一、三人称
时态： 一般现在时
结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信原因，第二部分告知网络课程的具体安排，
第三部分表达你的期待和祝愿。
要点：
1. 说明写信原因：告知Peter在新冠疫情期间线上教学的详细情况。
2．网络课程的具体安排
①课程与时间：上午7:00 am ～ 下午5:00，每天六节课
②你的学习状态：刚开始感到新鲜，后来难以集中注意力，通过不断调整自己，很快适应了
3．表达你的期待和祝愿：希望疫情早点结束，祝愿Peter平安。
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
hear from；be concerned about；detailed information；break out；taking online classes；last；fresh；concentrate on；be disciplined；get used to；adjust oneself；offer an effective and convenient way；safe and sound
第三步：连词成句
(1) Knowing that you are extremely concerned about how the online course works, I’m writing to tell you some detailed information.
(2) The COVID-19 epidemic has broken out in China.
(3) We are to take online classes at home instead of going back to school.
(4) The online lessons begin at 7:00 am and end at 5:00 pm.
(5) Each lesson lasts 40 minutes.
(6) We only have six lessons every day.
(7) At first, I found it hard to concentrate on study.
( 8) I get used to it by continuously adjusting myself.
(9) Online teaching can offer us an effective and convenient way of learning.
(10) I hope the epidemic will end soon.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、复杂句式)
用“with的复合结构”连接下面两个句子
(2) The COVID-19 epidemic has broken out in China.
(3) We are to take online classes at home instead of going back to school.
→With the COVID-19 epidemic breaking out in China, we are to take online classes at home instead of going back to school.
用独立主格结构作状语，表达第二个句子
(4) The online lessons begin at 7:00 am and end at 5:00 pm.
(5) Each lesson lasts 40 minutes.
→ The online lessons begin at 7:00 am and end at 5:00 pm，each lesson lasting 40 minutes.
用 although引导的状语从句连接下面两个句子
(7) At first，I found it hard to concentrate on study.
( 8) I get used to it by continuously adjusting myself.
→ Although at first I found it hard to concentrate on study, I get used to it by continuously adjusting myself.
复杂句式的运用，提升语言档次。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 be concerned about；break out；taking online classes；last；concentrate on；be disciplined；get used to；adjust oneself；offer an effective and convenient way；safe and sound 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如“with的复合结构”的运用with the COVID-19 epidemic breaking out in China；现在分词作状语的运用we only have six lessons every day, leaving enough time for self-study；状语从句的运用Although online teaching can offer us an effective and convenient way of learning…等。
20．One possible version:
We had talked to about two dozen people who all said no. My partners were ready to give up, but I said optimistically, “Somebody is bound to say yes.” Sure enough, the perfect van drove up. It was perfect because it was extra big and would accommodate all of us. We went up, knocked on the window and asked the driver, “Could you take us to a disadvantaged area to help the less fortunate We’ll pay you 100 dollars.” The driver said, “You don’t have to pay me. I’d be delighted to take you anywhere.”
We climbed into the perfect van with great joy. The driver said, “I’m curious why you people want to do this. May I ask why ” I told him my story and that I wanted to show gratitude by providing something back. Upon arrival, we entered a store where we packed enough supplies for seven families for 30 days. Then we went out to start feeding people. We even encountered a case where half a dozen people lived in one room. It was both an astonishing realization that people lived this way and a truly fulfilling experience to make even a small difference.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候的一次感恩节，家里很穷没有食物，一个陌生人给他家送去一箱食物，这对作者产生了巨大影响，决定在自己经济好的时候也做这样的事情。18岁的时候，作者已经形成在感恩节给贫困的人送食物的习惯。几年前作者把这件事告诉了自己的妻子，并决定和妻子，朋友们在感恩节一起去Harlem给贫穷的人送食物，但是没有车辆愿意送他们去。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们和20多个人谈过，他们都说不。”可知，第一段可描写作者虽然在找车的时候遇到了困难，但仍然没有放弃，最终找到帮助他们的人。
②由第二段首句内容“我们满心欢喜地爬进了那辆完美的货车。”可知，第二段可描写作者和妻子朋友如何买东西帮助贫穷的人的过程。
2.续写线索：继续找车——终于找到——告诉司机自己的故事——打包食物——送给人们——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.放弃：give up/quit
②.帮助：help/ assist/do sb. a favor
③.有影响：make a difference / have an influence
情绪类
①.感谢：show gratitude / show one’s appreciation /be grateful
②.高兴的：delighted /with pleasure
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I told him my story and that I wanted to show gratitude by providing something back.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作told的宾语）
[高分句型2]. Upon arrival, we entered a store where we packed enough supplies for seven families for 30 days.（由关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句）
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